天津高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

建议信

1．你校英语俱乐部正在举办主题为“A Shiny Summer for Graduation Season”的英文征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：

1. 毕业季暑期的意义；

2. 你的打算；

3. 对同学的建议。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

A Shiny Summer for Graduation Season

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2．学校新建图书馆前的空地即将绿化，现征求学生的建议。假如你是李华，请给校英语报Colorful Campus编辑Martin写封邮件，内容包括：

1.绿化布局；

2.设计理由。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Martin,

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Yours,

Li Hua

3．假定你是李华，为迎接4月22日世界地球日，请代表学生会为校英文报写一封倡议书，呼吁同学们从自身做起，共同创建“绿色”校园。内容包括：

1.建设绿色校园的必要性；

2.如何建设绿色校园。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80词左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear fellow students,

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The Student Union

4．假定你是李华，为迎接高考，学校英语社团将举办“我为学习献计策”的征文比赛活动，请你以How to keep positive under pressure为题写一篇短文参赛。内容如下：

1. 背景介绍；2. 提出建议；3. 鼓励前行。

注意：1. 词数应为100左右;

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

How to keep positive under pressure

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5．假如你是李华，最近收到你的美国笔友Tina的来信，信中说弟弟总是泄露自己的秘密，为此感到很苦恼，你打算给她写封回信。内容包括：

1 .给予安慰；

2 .提出建议；

3 .表达希望。

注意:1.写作词数为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Tina,

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Yours,

Li Hua

6．假如你是李华，目前已经被牛津大学录取。你的朋友 Chris 现就读于牛津大学一年级， 请你给他写封邮件，请教大学学习生活事宜。

1. 告知Chris 自己已被牛津大学录取。

2. 请教如何选课，住宿等有关事宜。

3. 表达感谢，期待相见。

注意：

1. 词数 80 左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Chris,

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Yours,

Li Hua

7．你校英文报正在向全校学生进行英文征稿，征稿主题是“劳动与学生成长”，请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：

1．你对劳动的认识；

2．你经常参加哪些劳动；

3．你的建议。

注意：

1．写作词数应为80左右；

2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Labor and Students’ Growth

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8．假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Noah在给你的邮件中说他对中国古代建筑很感兴趣，并打算利用暑假参观一下。请你给他回封邮件，内容包括：

1．推荐要参观的建筑；

2．约定参观的时间；

3．提出其他建议。

注意：

1．词数80左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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9．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据以下要点写回信。

1.参加中文学习班；2.看中文书刊、电视；3.学唱中文歌曲；4交中国朋友。

注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter

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Yours sincerely

Li Hua

10．假设你叫李华，你的朋友John沉迷于抖音不能自拔，写信向你寻求帮助，请你给他回一封电子邮件。内容包括：

1. 表示理解和关心；2. 沉迷抖音的影响；3. 提出具体建议。

要求：1. 词数100字左右；2. 可以适当增加细节；3. 开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear John,

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Yours,

Li Hua

1． Hello, everyone. Soon we will graduate from high school. Next we will have a very long summer holiday. And we have no homework and no exams this summer holiday. This means that we can do things that we couldn’t do or didn’t have time to do before because of the heavy pressure of high school. Read a book you’ve always wanted to read, learn to drive or take a trip.

 I plan to find a part-time job in summer vacation, and I will learn how to drive. After that, I will go hiking with a month’s salary.

 Let’s do it! After high school graduation, it means that we are adults, we should make good use of this summer vacation to explore the new world.

【导语】本文是一篇应用文写作。要求考生以主题为“A Shiny Summer for Graduation Season”写一篇短文投稿。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

毕业：graduate from high school→leave high school

假期：holiday→vacation

繁重的：heavy→rough

找到：find→gain

2. 句式拓展

同义句

原句：I plan to find a part-time job in summer vacation, and I will learn how to drive.

拓展句：I plan to find a part-time job during the summer,  learning how to drive.

【点睛】[高分句型1]This means that we can do things that we couldn’t do or didn’t have time to do before because of the heavy pressure of high school.(that引导的宾语从句)

[高分句型2]Read a book you’ve always wanted to read, learn to drive or take a trip.(省略that的定语从句)

2．One possible version:

Dear Martin,

Hearing our school is to green the empty space in front of the new library, I would like to share my suggestions.

Colorful flowers can be planted in the east part where students will enjoy the beauty of nature. Trees and benches can be arranged in the west section providing students with a place to study and relax. Besides, the central part can be covered with grass with a sculpture standing there, reflecting the culture of our school.

Thank you for considering my opinion. I hope our school will become more beautiful.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校英语报Colorful Campus编辑Martin写封邮件，对于学校新建图书馆前的空地如何进行绿化提出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：suggestion→advice

为某人提供某物：provide sb with sth→offer sb sth

此外：besides→what’s more

看法：opinion→idea

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Trees and benches can be arranged in the west section providing students with a place to study and relax.

拓展句：Trees and benches can be arranged in the west section which can provide students with a place to study and relax.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Colorful flowers can be planted in the east part where students will enjoy the beauty of nature.（运用了where引导的定语从句）

【高分句型2】Besides, the central part can be covered with grass with a sculpture standing there, reflecting the culture of our school.（运用了with的复合结构）

3．范文

Dear fellow students,

Generally speaking, the environment of our school is quite clean and tidy with green trees and fragrant flowers. Yet there still exist some aspects that need to get improved.

As to how to create a green campus, I’d like to put forward some suggestions as follows. On the one hand, students’ awareness of environmental protection should be further promoted. They are required to save energy on day-to-day basis by turning off the tap and electricity when necessary. On the other hand, garbage classification is of great significance. Not only can it cope with pollution issue effectively but also more energy will be saved.

I firmly believe that every small single action can make a big difference. With the joint effort of every individual, our campus can become a greener home.

The Student Union

【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文，假定你是李华，为迎接4月22日世界地球日，请代表学生会为校英文报写一封倡议书，呼吁同学们从自身做起，共同创建“绿色”校园。

【详解】1.词汇积累

重要性：significance→importance

提出：put forward→raise

建议：suggest→advice

处理：cope with→deal with

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：With the joint effort of every individual, our campus can become a greener home.

同义句：If every individual makes great effort, our campus can become a greener home.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Yet there still exist some aspects that need to get improved. (运用了that引导的定语从句)

[高分句型2] Not only can it cope with pollution issue effectively but also more energy will be saved. (运用了not only放句首的部分倒装句)

4．范文

How to keep positive under pressure

With the college entrance exam approaching, some senior 3 students are loaded with extra pressure. How to keep positive is crucial to improving learning efficiency. Here are some tips for that.

First of all, be confident in yourself. No matter what arises, believe you have the ability to deal with it. Second, focus your attention on performing the task at hand instead of worries, fears and doubts. What’s more, set short term goals and reward yourself when you have achieved each one, which will make you feel motivated to keep up with the good work. Keeping a healthy lifestyle such as balanced diets or regular exercise also matters in reducing pressure.

No pressure, no diamonds. So please choose to be positive even if you are facing pressure.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，为迎接高考，学校英语社团将举办“我为学习献计策”的征文比赛活动，请你以How to keep positive under pressure为题写一篇短文参赛。

【详解】1.词汇积累

首先：first of all→to begin with

集中：focus on→concentrate on

实现：achieve→realize

处理：deal with→handle

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：Keeping a healthy lifestyle such as balanced diets or regular exercise also matters in reducing pressure.

拓展句：It is keeping a healthy lifestyle such as balanced diets or regular exercise that matters in reducing pressure.

【点睛】[高分句型1] How to keep positive is crucial to improving learning efficiency. (运用了“特殊疑问词+不定式”结构)

[高分句型2] What’s more, set short term goals and reward yourself when you have achieved each one, which will make you feel motivated to keep up with the good work. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)

5．Dear Tina,

I am very glad to hear from you. Thank you for your trust and telling me your trouble.

Now I have known your problem clearly. I do think that the best way to stop it is to make a friendly talk with your brother as soon as possible. As a teenager, we have the right to keep something secret by ourselves. So you should tell him politely that you do not want him to let out your secret, even though he is your brother. I am sure he will keep your secret and you will be happy again.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国笔友Tina写一封回信，为她弟弟总是泄露她的秘密而感到很苦恼给予安慰并提出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：glad →delighted

收到来信：hear from →receive a letter from

即使：even though→even if

问题：trouble→problem

2.句式拓展

同义句

原句：So you should tell him politely that you do not want him to let out your secret, even though he is your brother.

拓展句：What you should do is to tell him politely that you do not want him to let out your secret again, even though he is your brother.

【点睛】【高分句型1】So you should tell him politely that you do not want him to let out your secret, even though he is your brother.（运用了even though引导的让步状语从句以及that引导的宾语从句）

【高分句型2】I am sure he will keep your secret and you will be happy again.（运用了省略that的宾语从句）

6．One possible version:

Dear Chris,

I can’t wait to tell you the good news that I have been admitted into Oxford University! I’m writing to ask for your advice on the campus life there.

Knowing that Oxford University offers a wide range of courses, I wonder if you could offer some guidance on how to choose the suitable ones, so that I can easily balance my major and my interest. Besides, when it comes to accommodation, I prefer to live in a host family rather than a dorm, yet my parents think otherwise. At length, are there other things I should be aware of?

Your suggestions will be highly appreciated and I am looking forward to meeting you on campus!

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，目前已经被牛津大学录取。你的朋友 Chris 现就读于牛津大学一年级， 请你给他写封邮件，请教大学学习生活事宜。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：advice/suggestion→tip

提供：offer→provide

合适的：suitable→appropriate

此外：besides→in addition

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：Besides, when it comes to accommodation, I prefer to live in a host family rather than a dorm, yet my parents think otherwise.

拓展句：Besides, when it comes to accommodation, although I prefer to live in a host family rather than a dorm, my parents think otherwise.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I can’t wait to tell you the good news that I have been admitted into Oxford University! (运用了同位语从句)

[高分句型2] Knowing that Oxford University offers a wide range of courses, I wonder if you could offer some guidance on how to choose the suitable ones, so that I can easily balance my major and my interest. (运用了宾语从句和目的状语从句)

7．One possible version

Labor and Students’ Growth

As is known to all, labor is a necessity for a student’s growth. At present, most students live in cities and rarely have opportunities to truly experience labor, resulting in lack of labor education. Through labor, students can cultivate correct labor viewpoint and develop labor habits, which will contribute to students’ overall development.

In my spare time, I’d like to help my parents do varieties of housework at home. Besides, I often volunteer to do some cleaning work for the elderly at nursing home.

In view of many benefits of labor to students, I suggest that we should regularly take part in a wide range of labor so that we can become well-rounded.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文投稿，主题是“劳动与学生成长”。

【详解】1.词汇积累

目前：at present →currently

机会：opportunity → chance

空余的：spare →free

此外：besides→ what’s more

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：At present, most students live in cities and rarely have opportunities to truly experience labor, resulting in lack of labor education.

拓展句：At present, most students live in cities and rarely have opportunities to truly experience labor, which resuls in lack of labor education.

【点睛】【高分句型1】As is known to all, labor is a necessity for a student’s growth.（运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】Through labor, students can cultivate correct labor viewpoint and develop labor habits, which will contribute to students’ overall development.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

8．参考范文：

Dear Noah,

I’m really glad that you take great interest in ancient Chinese architecture.

Millions of ancient buildings have survived in China’s history. However, there is no better place to visit than the Forbidden City in Beijing. It served as a royal palace for centuries. Summer is a good time for traveling, so shall we go there on August 1? I believe you’ll have a better experience if you know its history. You’d better do some research online.

Please let me know if you need further information.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给新西兰朋友Noah写一封信，他打算暑假参观中国古代建筑，请在信中给他一些建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

感兴趣：take interest in→be interested in

保存，幸存：survive→preverve

好时光：a good time→a great time

研究：research→investigation

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：You’d better do some research online.

拓展句：You’d better do some research online，which is beneficial.

【点睛】【高分句型1】

I believe you’ll have a better experience if you know its history. (运用了省略that的宾语从句，从句中运用了if引导的条件状语从句)

【高分句型2】

Please let me know if you need further information.(运用了祈使句结构和if引导的条件状语从句)

9．Dear Peter,

I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.

Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.

Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.

Try and write me in Chinese next time.

Best wishes.

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国朋友Peter回信，告诉他怎样学好中文。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：suggestion → tip

另外：besides→ in addition

记住：remember sth. → keep sth. in mind

询问某人的建议：ask for sb.’s advice→  turn to sb. for advice

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句。

原句：Here are a few suggestions.

拓展句：Here are a few suggestions which will help you improve your Chinese.

【点睛】【高分句型1】First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. （运用了as引导的原因状语从句）

【高分句型2】Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）

10．Dear John,

    Glad to receive your letter. I hear that you have been obsessed with TikTok recently, and I am sorry for that.

First of all, I can understand your mood. TikTok is the hottest short video platform at the moment. There are many interesting video records on it, and many people are using it. But on the other hand, the dangers of indulging in TikTok for a long time are obvious. If you don’t contain yourself and plan your time unreasonably, you will inevitably waste a lot of your time and make it difficult to concentrate and your learning will also be greatly affected.

     I suggest you balance your study and entertainment, and plan your time in a reasonable and balanced manner. Only in this way can we enjoy the fun of short videos without affecting our study and life.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给沉迷抖音不能自拔的好友John写信提供帮助。

【详解】1.词汇积累

沉迷于：be obsessed with→be addicted to

明显的：obvious→evident

不可避免地：inevitably→undeniably

影响：affect→influence

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：First of all, I can understand your mood. TikTok is the hottest short video platform at the moment.

拓展句：First of all, I can understand your mood, because TikTok is the hottest short video platform at the moment.

【点睛】[高分句型1]If you don’t contain yourself and plan your time unreasonably, you will inevitably waste a lot of your time and make it difficult to concentrate and your learn will also be greatly affected.(运用了if引导条件状语从句)

[高分句型2]Only in this way can we enjoy the fun of short videos without affecting our study and life.(运用了倒装结构)