浙江高考英语写作分类训练：感谢信

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感谢信/祝贺信1．你班将于下周五下午3:30举行主题为“感谢师恩，暖心行动”（Heartfelt Thanks, Warm Action）的班会活动。假如你是班长李华，请告知交换生Jack活动事项并请他提前作好准备。活动事项包括：1. 分享一件为老师做过的暖心之事；2. 交流听后启发和感受；3. 赠送感谢卡。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jack,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Li Hua2．假设你是李华，两周前你从网上订购了一套英语书虫系列读物（Bookworm Series），昨天才收到货，且包装破损、数量不足。请就此向网点客服写邮件投诉。要点如下：1．介绍购物情况；2．反映存在问题；3．提出解决方案。注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头语已为你写好，不计入总次数。To whom it may concern,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Li Hua3．假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的班长李华，你们班的外教Lisa已经结束本学期的教学工作回到美国，请代表你们班给她写一封邮件。邮件的内容包括：1. 询问她的近况；2. 回顾在外教课上的收获；3. 表达对她的感谢和祝福。注意：1. 词数不少于50；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Lisa,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua4．昨天，你的同班同学李越做了一件好事。请你根据事情的经过（买了束花去医院看朋友，但是护士不许带入监护病房，等电梯时看到一位伤心的医院工作人员，把花送给了她），用英语写个题目为Flowers For A Stranger （100-120个词）的博客。你的文章应包括下列要点：1.事情的经过；2.你的评论。注意：文章的标题和开头已给出（不计词数）。参考词汇：电梯elevator，医院工作人员hospital personnelFlowers For A StrangerYesterday Li Yue went to the hospital to visit a friend in the Intensive Care Unit. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5． 请以“One person I’m grateful to”为题，用英语写一篇100—120个词的短文，记述一个你认为值得感谢的人。要求如下：1. 内容必须结合生活中的一个事例;2. 简要说明值得感谢的原因或从中得到的启示；3. 文中不得透漏个人信息。注意：文章的标题已给出（不计词数）。One Person I’m Grateful to___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．调查显示，中国长江江豚（finless porpoise）受人类活动影响而濒临灭绝，目前总数不足1000只。假设你是李华，现请用英文给WWF(世界自然保护基金组织)写一封信，请他们关注这一情况并提供帮助。内容应包括：●说明写信目的●简述江豚现状●希望WWF如何帮助（比如：资助江豚保护项目等）●表示感谢并期待回复注意：1) 词数不少于80；2) 在答题卡上作答。3) 书信格式及开头均已给出（不计入总词数）。7．书面表达假如你是李明，你马上就要去英国留学。你的英国笔友George来信询问你在留学期间是住在学生公寓还是住在寄宿家庭，你现在回信告诉他，你打算住在寄宿家庭，并且说明你的至少三个理由。词数120字左右。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．母亲节快到了，学校将组织一次英语演讲比赛，请根据以下要点以“Mother’s Day”为题写一篇英语演讲稿。要点：1. 母亲节：1）起源于：古希腊2）时间：在5月的第二个星期日3）目的：感谢她们的辛勤劳动；使母亲愉快地过节4）活动：母亲盛装打扮；孩子们赠送礼物；对母亲说：“我爱你!”5）母亲的反应：感到自豪、满足。2. 你对母亲节的看法.注意：1. 词数100-120左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数2. 词汇：古希腊（ancient Greece）Good morning everybody! It's my honor to stand here and make a speech about “Mother’s Day”._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That's all. Thank you for your listening.9．我们能活在这美好、精彩的世界上，是因为有父母，老师，朋友。因此在每个人的生命之中应怀有一颗感恩之心，学会感恩他人。 请从以下几点展开写一篇题目为Learn to Be Grateful 的文章。1.感恩父母，因为父母给了我们全部的爱；2.感恩老师，因为老师传授了我们知识；3.感恩朋友，因为朋友给我们带来欢乐；4.你认为，我们应该为他们做些什么.提示：1、可加入一些细节， 使文章更加通顺合理。2、词数：100字左右（开头部分不计）Learn to Be GratefulWhenever and wherever we are, we should learn to be grateful to the people around us in this beautiful and wonderful world.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．第二节：书面表达假设你将作为新华中学高三毕业生代表，请根据以下要点在毕业晚会上用英文作一个告别演讲:1. 感谢家人，朋友和老师。特别举例感谢某个老师（不用真名，一律使用Mr. Zheng），并写出原因。2. 回顾高中三年的生活。列举出你印象深刻的活动。3. 展望未来。注意：开头与结尾已经给出，所写部分120字左右。Dear teachers, families and graduates, welcome and thank you for joining us tonight at Xnhua High School graduation ceremony for the Class of 2010! ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Finally, best wishes to the Class of 2010. Thank you very much.  1．Dear Jack,In order to show gratitude to our teachers, a class meeting themed“Heartfelt Thanks, Warm Action” is to be held in the classroom at 3:30 pm next Friday. The activities are scheduled as follows.First, we will share our experiences of doing something kind and touching for our teachers. Then, we will exchange our feelings and thoughts inspired by the stories. Finally, the class meeting will come to an end in the presentation of thank-you cards to the teachers.Please get prepared and attend it on time.Li Hua【详解】本题考查提纲类作文。首先要认真审题，你班将于下周五下午3:30举行主题为“感谢师恩，暖心行动”（Heartfelt Thanks, Warm Action）的班会活动。假如你是班长李华，请告知交换生Jack活动事项并请他提前作好准备。活动事项包括：1. 分享一件为老师做过的暖心之事；2. 交流听后启发和感受；3. 赠送感谢卡。其次要确定时态，表示将要发生的事情，所以这篇文章要使用一般将来时。然后要确定文章的结构，按照题目所给内容逐条翻译即可。在写作过程中，上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合题目所给出的信息，不要出现偏题问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有文采。正确使用写信的格式，词数控制在80左右。【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些高级句型。Then, we will exchange our feelings and thoughts inspired by the stories.这里含有一个过去分词作定语结构。2．To whom it may concern, I’m one of your customers. I ordered a set of Bookworm Series on your website two weeks ago, but I didn’t receive them until yesterday. And much to my disappointment, the books were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn. To make matters worse, it is not a complete set, as I found one book missing. I’m sorry to have received such poor service, and I believe I have every right to ask you to deal with this problem. I hope that you either return my money or deliver a new set of books to me. Besides, I’d like to be informed of the process of your dealing with my complaint.Looking forward to your reply.Li Hua【详解】本文是写一篇投诉信，内容是向网点客服投诉自己所购书籍包装破损、数量不足。在写此类信件的时候，除了要明确的表述自己的不满，更重要的是要让对方明白并尽快解决自己的问题。本文要点已经给出，成文时要注意以下几点：反映的问题的内容一定要明确而具体；实事求是地说明此问题给自己所带来的不便、比如时间或精神上的损失等等；同时明确提出解决或赔偿方案，注意所提出的要求要合理；在提出自己的希望，表示希望尽快解决自己的问题的同时，要礼貌的表示感谢。【范文亮点】And much to my disappointment, the books were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn.“so…that”结构。I believe I have every right to ask you to deal with this problem.宾语从句。I hope that you either return my money or deliver a new set of books to me.宾语从句。3．Dear Lisa, How have you been? You must be enjoying your life back at home. We still miss the days we spent together. In the last term, we all benefited a lot from your lessons. We improved our oral English and became more confident to express ourselves. In addition, we learned so much about western culture and tradition. On behalf of my class, I would like to thank you for teaching us English! We wish you joy and happiness in the new stage of life!Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给因为已经结束了本学期工作而回到了美国的外教Lisa写一封感谢信。【详解】1.词汇积累提高：improve→promote表达：express→convey除此之外：in addition→besides想要做某事：would like to do sth.→want to do sth.2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：We improved our oral English and became more confident to express ourselves. 拓展句：We improved our oral English, which made us become more confident to express ourselves.【点睛】【高分句型】We still miss the days we spent together.（运用了省略了引导词的定语从句）【高分句型2】On behalf of my class, I would like to thank you for teaching us English!（运用了固定短语on behalf of和动名词作宾语）4．Flowers For A StrangerYesterday Li Yue went to the hospital to visit a friend in the Intensive Care Unit. He stopped by the gift shop and got a bunch of flowers to take to him.The nurse told me he couldn't bring flowers into the ICU so he left them outside feeling really disappointed. After his visit he headed for the elevator. He saw a hospital personnel leaning up against the wall looking tired and stressed and as though she'd been crying. He asked if she was okay. They chatted for a minute. He handed the flowers to her, saying "I think you might need these more than I do right now." He patted her on the shoulder and told her to take care of herself. Her face positively lit up and tears came to her eyes as she thanked me.I'm so grateful that Li Yue gave that woman a listening ear and support when she needed it. He saw an opportunity for kindness and took action. He has inspired me.【详解】试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文，根据题目要求，可以分为3部分设计：1.交代故事发生的时间地点人物；2.讲述事情的具体经过；3.表达感谢。考生在审题的时候应该注意审要求、审文体、审人称、审时态。因为讲述已发生的事情，用一般过去时态描写。考生在写作时应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型，将要点逐条表达出来。表达时应该综合运用所掌握的知识，避开生僻的词汇，并克服母语的干扰，按照英语的习惯方式，用地道的英语表达出来，力求做到语言准确无误。【亮点说明】本文语言凝练，条理层次清晰。文章大量使用了非谓语动词形式，如：so he left them outside feeling really disappointed；He saw a hospital personnel leaning up against the wall looking tired；He handed the flowers to her, saying "I think you might need these more than I do right now."让步状语从句的使用as though she'd been crying；也有出色的短语light up;a listening ear;take actions等 考点：考查写人记事作文写作5．One possible version:We are supposed to be grateful to people who are always there with us because they are the charming gardeners who make our souls blossom.My English teacher is such a great soul, to whom I owe many thanks. During the previous study, my biggest flaw must come to carelessness, which worried me a lot. To make matters worse, I was too anxious to seek the fundamental reason for my failure. I just dedicated myself to huge amounts of practice, regardless of repeated mistakes. Fortunately, my teacher noticed it and offered to have a long talk with me. Having been persuaded to change my attitude, I finally got the right way to rid myself of carelessness and gained confidence as well.I am grateful to my English teacher for all the support he has given me, which has made me stronger and a better person.【详解】试题分析：这是一篇说明文写作，说明的对象是一个自己很感激的人。文章的主要内容提出中已经说明，记叙一个生活事例，说明感谢的原因和从中得到的启示。因此叙述的时间要内容真实，感情饱满真切。时态：用一般现在时。使用一些高级句型和词汇提升作文档次。【亮点说明】第一段第一句话We are supposed to be grateful to people who are always there with us使用who引导的定语从句；第二自然段第一句话My English teacher is such a great soul, to whom I owe many thanks.再次使用定语从句；第二句话my biggest flaw must come to carelessness, which worried me a lot.使用which引导的非限制性定语从句；最后自然段I am grateful to my English teacher for all the support he has given me, which has made me stronger and a better person使用which引导的非限制性定语从句。文章在短语运用上，灵活多变，To make matters worse使用动词不定式表示状语；regardless of repeated mistakes.介词短语表示状语；Having been persuaded to change my attitude使用现在分词短语表示状语；I was too anxious to seek the fundamental reason for my failure.，使用too．．．to．．．太．．．而不能．．．。I just dedicated myself to huge amounts of practice中，使用了dedicate myself to投身于．．．。在词汇运用上，选用一些高级词汇，提升文章的表达和魅力。第一自然段使用charming gardeners迷人的园丁，写出了教师职业的高尚，和老师灵魂的高尚，真实清晰地表达了作者对于老师的感激之情。make our souls blossom的表达分词生动，形象地说明了老师对我们心灵的培育，教导我们成长。考点：考查说明文写作6．Dear Sir or Madam,I’m a student from Chongqing, China. I am writing to you to tell you something about Yangtze Finless Porpoise. Due to lack of human protection, the number of Yangtze Finless Porpoise is becoming smaller and smaller, only less than 1000 left. Most of them are dying out. Therefore, it’s high time we took immediate measures to change the situation. So I hope WWF will do something to help Yangtze Finless Porpoise by setting up a special fund organization or drawing up some rules on how to protect it and so on.I am looking forward to your reply. Thank you!Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英文给WWF(世界自然保护基金组织)写一封信，请他们关注因受受人类活动影响而濒临灭绝的中国长江江豚（finless porpoise）。【详解】1.词汇积累由于：due to→because of灭绝：die out→become extinct立即的：immediate→instant建立：set up=found2.句式拓展原句：So I hope WWF will do something to help Yangtze Finless Porpoise by setting up a special fund organization or drawing up some rules on how to protect it and so on.拓展句：To help Yangtze Finless Porpoise, I hope WWF can set up a special fund organization or draw up some rules on how to protect it and so on.【点睛】[高分句型1] Therefore, it’s high time we took immediate measures to change the situation. (运用了虚拟语气)[高分句型2] So I hope WWF will do something to help Yangtze Finless Porpoise by setting up a special fund organization or drawing up some rules on how to protect it and so on.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)7．Dear George,I am glad to hear from you. In your last letter you asked me whether to live in students  accommodation or English family when I am in Britain. After careful consideration I choose to board with an English family. The following are my reasons.First, boarding with an English family will give me more chances to practice speaking English because if I want to communicate with them, I have to force myself to use English. Second, boarding with an English family, I can not only learn language but also experience their culture and this is the best way to adapt to a new culture. Last, when I feel lonely and miss my family, it is a great comfort to have a substitute family to be with.So I think it is better to stay with an English family. By the way will you please recommend one for me?  Thank you very much and I am looking forward to meeting you.Yours,Li Ming【详解】试题分析：假如你是李明，你马上就要去英国留学。你的英国笔友George来信询问你在留学期间是住在学生公寓还是住在寄宿家庭，你现在回信告诉他，你打算住在寄宿家庭，并且说明你的至少三个理由。要点是：1、自己的打算，2、自己的理由、3、自己的要求。这是一篇明显的提纲作文，就是把文章的情景和内容要求说出以进行写作。考生在审题的时候应该注意审要求、审文体、审人称、审时态。题文已经告知要求，那么文体应为书信文体，即介绍主要行程；又根据“你是李明” 写作时即用第一人称“我”，即李明；时态主要用一般将来时。考生在写作时应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型，将要点逐条表达出来。表达时应该综合运用所掌握的知识，避开生僻的词汇，并克服母语的干扰，按照英语的习惯方式，用地道的英语表达出来，力求做到语言准确无误。然后根据要点选词组句，然后按照篇章结构连句成篇。【亮点说明】本文语言凝练，论点鲜明，条理层次清晰。文章第一段表达自己的感谢之情决定；文章第二段就介绍自己这样选择的理由；第三段介绍自己的要求和表达感谢。文章使用了when引导的状语从句when I feel lonely and miss my family（我感到寂寞或想念家人时）和动词的ing形式做主语boarding with an English family will give me more chances to practice speaking English（寄宿在一英国人家里会给我很多练习说英语的机会）和because引导的状语从句，其中有包含if引导的条件状语从句because if I want to communicate with them, I have to force myself to use English（因为如果我想和他们一起交流，我就不得不强迫自己说英语）。高级短语和结构：by the way顺便说一声，adapt to适应。最后一句使用Thank you very much and I am looking forward to meeting you非常感谢，期待见到您，给文章一个完美的结束。【考点】考查提纲式话题作文写作8．Good morning everybody! It's my honor to stand here and make a speech about “Mother’s Day”.Mother’s Day has its origin in ancient Greece. It is an international festival which is celebrated on the second Sunday of May. In order to thank them for their years’ of hard work, people always try their best to make their mothers spend the festival happily. On the day, every mother will dress up. And children will offer gifts to their mothers, saying “I love you!” At the words, their mothers will feel very proud and satisfied.As far as I’m concerned, it is important to celebrate Mother’s Day. On the day, mothers will feel relaxed both mentally and physically. So the family should get together and have fun with each other.That's all. Thank you for your listening.【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，母亲节快到了，学校将组织一次英语演讲比赛，要求考生根据要点以“Mother’s Day”为题写一篇英语演讲稿。【详解】词汇积累为了：so as to→ in order to尽某人最大的努力：do one’s best→ try one’s best高兴地：gladly→ happily玩的高兴：have a good time→ have fun2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Mother’s Day has its origin in ancient Greece.拓展句：Mother’s Day is a great day which has its origin in ancient Greece.【点睛】[高分句型1] It is an international festival which is celebrated on the second Sunday of May.  (运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] In order to thank them for their years’ of hard work, people always try their best to make their mothers spend the festival happily. (运用了不定式作目的状语)9．Whenever and wherever we are, we should learn to be grateful to the people around us in this beautiful and wonderful world.First of all,i would like to express thanks to my parents who give their endless love to me.As we know ,parents do all they can to make their children's life better and better.Secondly,i am grateful to my teachers for their selfless work.Why i admire them is that they teach us not only knowledge but also all kinds of important skills.Finally, i want to thank my fellow friends who share happiness and sorrow with me. Because of you ,my life is filled with laughter and sunshine.they are so important in my life that we should learn to be grateful to them.try to remember to give our sincere wishes to them now and then.above all, we should try to work hard and live happily, which is a god pay for them.【详解】这是一篇议论文，从对父母老师朋友三个方面的感激展开。考生在写作时要注意思路清晰及条理清楚。题目已给定大致的观点，要注意汉译英的正确性以及不要遗漏观点，特别注意不要逐条翻译。文章开篇一句Whenever and wherever we are ,we should learn to be grateful to the peole around us in this beautiful and wonderful world.开篇即用了whenever wherever引导的让步状语从句，让人眼前一亮，考生扎实的语言功底可见一斑。be grateful to对。。。感激。第二段第一句First of all ,I would like to express my thanks to my parents who give endless love to me. express my thanks 表达我的感激之情；who give their endless love to me，定语从句修饰parents，再次展现了句式调用能力。express, endless，都属于高级词汇。第二段第二句As we know,parents do all they can to make their children’s life better and better，do all one can固定句式，此处应用准确，恰当；better and better，越来越好；整个句子紧凑凝练。第二段第四句，why I admire them is that they teach us not only knowledge but also skills.处处是经典，首先why引导的主语从句为亮点，此外，that 引导的宾语从句加上not only ,but also准确地把对老师的感谢分为两个层次，知识和技能；层次清晰。第二段第五句，share happiness and sorrow with me，与我分享快乐与悲伤，从固定搭配运用，到精准地描述朋友的特点都是非常精妙，学会多用。第二段最后一句，Because of you.my life is filled with laughter and sunshine。这样的句子，已经接近诗意般的美感了。第三段第一句，They are so important in my life that we should learn to be grateful to them点名文章主旨。最后一句，we should work hard and live happily,which is a good pay for them，洋溢着正能量。总结：基本格式为first of all,secondly,finally考点：考查议论文写作10．Dear teachers, families and graduates,Welcome and thank you for joining us tonight at Xinhua High School graduation ceremony for the Class of 2014! First, let me thank all our families and friends for their love and support on behalf of the graduates. I also want to thank our diligent teachers for guiding us through to this moment. My personal thanks to Mr Zheng, you got me through Math when I had given up hope. Graduation is a time to go over enjoyable memories which have been made over the past three years. Many events become so vivid in my mind at this moment, military training, soccer and basketball games.However, graduation is also a time to look forward to the future in front of us. No matter what you plan next, I hope you can go about it positively. Each of you will create your own unique path. Let’s remember the saying “Attitude determines altitude”. Please always keep a smile on your face.Finally, best wishes to the Class of 2014.Thank you very much.【详解】试题分析：本文要求以高三毕业生代表的身份来写一篇告别的演讲稿，内容包括1. 感谢家人，朋友和老师。特别举例感谢某个老师（不用真名，一律使用Mr.Zheng）,并写出原因； 2.回顾高中三年的生活。列举出你印象深刻的活动；3.展望未来。写作时要注意演讲稿的格式要首先写称呼语，然后开门见山，提出演讲的中心，为了生动引人注目可以用举例法，数据统计法等。最后要简明扼要得进行总结，或者提出倡议。正文部分要注意有条理性，要层次清晰，段落分明。此外，为了达到演讲的目的和效果，应该适当使用短句，感叹句等等。【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，语言通俗简练，符合演讲稿类文章的写作要求，是一篇较好的范文。在文中作者使用了较多的感叹句，增强了文章的感情色彩，能够引起听众的共鸣。作者还使用了定语从句，让步状语从句No matter what you plan next,，时间状语从句when I had given up hope. Without Mr. Zheng等。谚语格言“ Attitude determines altitude”.的使用也是文章的一个亮点。