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浙江高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

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这是一份浙江高考英语写作分类训练：建议信，共14页。

建议信

1．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Anderson写邮件向你倾诉他在中文学习过程中所遇见的困难，并寻求帮助。请你写一封回信，内容包括：

1. 表示安慰；

2. 具体建议；

3. 表达祝愿。

注意：

1. 词数 80 左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

2．假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Mike 最近写信告诉你，他申请了牛津大学（Oxford University）但未被录取，感到很沮丧。请你给他写封回信，内容包括：

1. 表示安慰；

2. 提出建议；

3. 美好祝福。

注意：1. 词数 80 左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3．假定你是李华，你的朋友李越刚进入高中，因为学习压力和没有朋友而感到很焦虑，不知如何排解，写信求助于你。请你用英语回一封信给他，提出一些合理建议，内容包括：

1. 转变心态......;

2. 听听歌曲......；

3. 多与...交流......；

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

4．假如你是李华，你学校的外教Joel在学习中文时觉得汉字的书写和发音很难，为此他给你发了一封求助信。请你回一封信给他，内容包括：

1. 表示理解；

2. 提出建议；

3. 给出理由。

注意：

1. 词数80左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

5．假设你是李华，你的笔友英国学生Tom所在的城市目前疫情比较严重，请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：

1. 表示问候；

2. 给出防护建议。

注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：新冠病毒COVID-19 传染infect v.

Dear Tom,

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

6．假如你是“Growing Pains”栏目专家Susan Luo，你收到了来自Troubled Girl的信。阅读下面的信件，然后请你回信给她一些建议。内容点包括：

1. 表示安慰；

2. 给予建议。

注意：1. 词数80左右

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Susan,

I am a girl who has just started senior high school. Recently, I am having some trouble with my classmates. I'm getting along well with a boy in my class. We often do schoolwork together and enjoy helping each other. We have become really good friends.

But our friendship are misunderstood. Other students have started gossiping (说长道短),saying that this boy and I have fallen in love. This has made me angry. I don't want to end the friendship, but I hate others gossiping. What should I do?

Troubled Girl

7．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Lucy在学习中国书法(Chinese calligraphy)时，因为太难学而打算放弃。请你发一封电子邮件鼓励她，内容包括：

1.中国书法的意义：2.鼓励她不要放弃：3.提出你的建议。

注意：

1.词数为100词左右：

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Lucy.

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

8．假定你是李华，你的笔友Jack在新学校因不善交际很难交到朋友，他感到非常孤独。请你写封邮件给他提一些建议。内容包括：

1.写信目的；

2.提出建议；

注意：1. 词数80左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

9．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom刚进入高中，但因不擅长与别人交流，暂时无法融入新的班级，请你根据以下要点给他写一封回信：

1. 表示理解并给予安慰；

2. 提出建议并给出理由；

3. 表达希望；

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。

Dear Tom,

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

10．假设你是李华, 你的朋友Tony去了美国上高中, 他写信告诉你他很不习惯美国的校园生活, 感到很孤独。请你根据要求用英语写一封信给他提建议：

1. 学好英语, 多交一些朋友, 从而增加和别人交流的机会；

2. 学会独立学习, 有困难向老师求助；

3. 积极参加各种活动, 使自己的生活更加丰富有趣；

4. 其他建议。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2. 信的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数；

3. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。

Dear Tony,

Yours,

Li Hua

1．One possible version:

Dear Anderson,

Hearing that you run into difficulties with your Chinese learning, I’m writing to express my concern and offer you some tips on how to learn it well.

Your problem is so common among foreign learners that you needn’t worry too much. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect! So it’s a good idea to practice Chinese daily. Besides, you can communicate with your Chinese teacher who knows how to study efficiently and effectively. Additionally, watching Chinese programs is a better choice, which can not only entertain you, but also improve your listening and pronunciation.

Stay focused and you will surely make it! Wish you all the best!

Yours sincerely,

LiHua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于建议信。要求考生给在中文学习过程中遇到困难并寻求帮助的美国朋友Anderson回信，表达安慰并提出具体建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

遇到困难：run into difficulties→meet difficulties

提供：offer→provide

建议：tip→suggestion

此外：besides→in addition

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：So it’s a good idea to practice Chinese daily.

拓展句：So it’s a good idea that you should practice Chinese daily.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Besides, you can communicate with your Chinese teacher who knows how to study efficiently and effectively. (运用了who引导的限定性定语从句)

[高分句型2] Additionally, watching Chinese programs is a better choice, which can not only entertain you, but also improve your listening and pronunciation. (运用了动名词做主语和which引导的非限定性定语从句)

2．Dear Mike,

I’m sorry to hear that you weren’t admitted to the Oxford University. I know how you feel.

Definitely, you’ve made great efforts and worked hard to get admitted. However, it’s a fierce competition with so many applicants from all over the world. To make yourself stand out among them, you are expected to polish your personal statement, presenting your strengths and personality clearly. After finishing it, you may submit your application a second time.

Take it easy! Wish you success in the application!

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。李华的英国朋友Mike 因未被牛津大学（Oxford University）大学录取而感到很沮丧，要求考生写信予以安慰。

【详解】1.词汇积累

肯定地：certainly →definitely

激烈的：intense→ fierce

优势：advantage→ strength

呈现：emerge→ present

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：After finishing it, you may submit your application a second time..

拓展句：After you finish it, you may submit your application a second time.

【点睛】【高分句型1】To make yourself stand out among them, you are expected to polish your personal statement, presenting your strengths and personality clearly.（运用了动词不定式to make作目的状语以及现在分词presenting作伴随状语）

【高分句型2】I’m sorry to hear that you weren’t admitted to the Oxford University.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）

3．Dear Li Yue,

You wrote that you are under great stress and have no friend at school. I understand quite well that you are anxious and lonely. As your best friend, I’d like to give you some suggestions.

First of all, I recommend that you have a positive attitude towards your study. After all, stress is only part of students’ life. Besides, I think you can listen to songs in your spare time, which can relieve your stress. Last but not least, why not try to communicate with your classmates and even make friends with them? Through the communication you can find support, which will encourage you to overcome difficulties in your study and life.

I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you. Believe in yourself and you will make it.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生给用英语回一封信给朋友李越，就他因为学习压力和没有朋友而感到很焦虑的问题提出一些合理建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

压力：stress→pressure

建议：suggestion→advice

此外：besides→in addition

困难：difficulty→hardship

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：After all, stress is only part of students’ life.

拓展句：After all, stress is only part of students’ life, which you don’t have to worry about.

【点睛】[高分句型1]

First of all, I recommend that you have a positive attitude towards your study.（that引导宾语从句）

[高分句型2]

Besides, I think you can listen to songs in your spare time, which can relieve your stress.（which引导非限制性定语从句）

4．Dear Joel,

Glad to know that you’re interested in learning Chinese. As a non-native speaker, such

problems are quite common. The following tips may be beneficial to you.

To write Chinese characters well, you might try a copybook for calligraphy to practice handwriting. This works for me. And for pronunciation, you’d better start with pinyin. Knowing pinyin well makes your Chinese pronunciation more native. Also, I recommend that you watch Chinese TV programs and repeat what you hear, which can further improve your pronunciation.

I do hope my suggestions could be taken into account and look forward to your progress.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给你学校的外教Joel写一封回信，就他在学习中文时觉得汉字的书写和发音很难给予建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：glad →happy

对……感兴趣：be interested in →show an interest in

以……开始：start with →begin with

建议：suggestion =advice

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：The following tips may be beneficial to you.

拓展句：I will give you the following tips which may be beneficial to you.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Also, I recommend that you watch Chinese TV programs and repeat what you hear, which can further improve your pronunciation. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] I do hope my suggestions could be taken into account and look forward to your progress. (运用了宾语从句)

5．Dear Tom,

Sorry to learn that the COVID-19 is getting worse in your city, I'm really worried about you and eager to provide you with some preventive measures.

Firstly, its highly recommended to have proper personal protection, so make sure you wear a mask in public places. Keeping a safe distance from others and avoiding going out/ going out as little as possible is also advisable. Last but not least, you’d better wash your hands frequently to keep clean, and do some exercise to keep fit, thus reducing the chances of getting sick/infected. Following the measures mentioned above, I'm sure you can win the battle against the virus.

Sincerely hope my suggestions will be of great help to you./ Wish you good health!

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Tom写一封电子邮件，对其表示问候同时针对疫情，提出防护建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

担心：be concerned about→ be worried about

提供：offer→provide

合适的：appropriate→proper

经常地、频繁地：regularly→frequently

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Following the measures mentioned above, I'm sure you can win the battle against the virus.

拓展句：If you follow the measures mentioned above, I'm sure you can win the battle against the virus.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Sorry to learn that the COVID-19 is getting worse in your city（运用了that引导的宾语从句）

【高分句型2】 Keeping a safe distance from others and avoiding going out/ going out as little as possible is also advisable.（运用了动名词作主语）

6．Troubled Girl,

I am sorry you are having trouble with your classmates. There is nothing wrong with you and this boy being friends and studying together. So don't be upset. Here is my advice about what you should do.

First, do what you think is right. A boy and a girl can be good friends, and ending your friendship would be a stupid thing to do. You will lose a good friend and someone to study with. Second, tell your classmates that what they see isn't real and gossiping about your friendship is completely ridiculous. Also, you can just ignore your classmates. That way you will show them that you are more grown-up than they are. Last, when in trouble, seeking help from your teachers is always a good choice. They are more experienced and helpful in dealing with such a problem.

Hope my advice will be helpful.

Best wish

Susan Luo

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Troubled Girl回信，针对她遇到的问题给她一些建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

沮丧的：upset→annoyed/sad/unhappy

此外：Also →Besides/What’s more

完全地：completely→thoroughly/totally

处理，解决deal with→cope with

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：You will lose a good friend and someone to study with.

拓展句：You will lose a good friend and someone who you can study with.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Here is my advice about what you should do.（运用了what引导的宾语从句）

【高分句型2】when in trouble, seeking help from your teachers is always a good choice.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句且省略了从句中的主语和be动词）

7．Dear Lucy.

I am more than delighted to know that you have learnt Chinese calligraphy. Calligraphy is the essence of Chinese culture, which has developed into a special high-level art apart from satisfying the needs of daily writing. It is rather valuable for it is like a window to better understand the Chinese culture. Thus, I advise that you shouldn't give it up.

I do believe you are such a hard-working girl that it will be easy for you to make it. Here are my sincere suggestions. To begin with, be patient. The more you practice, the more confident you will be. Moreover, calm down. It is no use being upset when meeting problems. Take a deep breath and go on, and everything will go smoothly in the future.

I do hope you can take my words into consideration. Wish you success in learning.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生发一封电子邮件鼓励英国笔友Lucy在学习中国书法(Chinese calligraphy) 不要放弃，并提出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

非常：more than→ very

除…之外...还有：apart from → besides

因此：Thus→ therefore

建议：suggestion→ advice

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Calligraphy is the essence of Chinese culture, and it has developed into a special high-level art apart from satisfying the needs of daily writing.

拓展句：Calligraphy is the essence of Chinese culture, which has developed into a special high-level art apart from satisfying the needs of daily writing.

【点睛】[高分句型1]I am more than delighted to know that you have learnt Chinese calligraphy.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）

[高分句型2]I do believe you are such a hard-working girl that it will be easy for you to make it.（运用了助动词do表强调，such…that…引导状语从句）

8．Dear Jack,

I’m sorry you are having trouble in making friends. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you.

First, why not go and talk to people standing on their own? I agree that this is difficult but that person may be lonely too. If you do this, I am sure you’ll soon have a new friend. Second, you can begin the conversation by asking about their likes and dislikes, which helps you find people with the same interests. Finally, you should try to join in a discussion. By doing this, you’re letting people know how friendly you are.

I hope you find these ideas useful.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给笔友Jack写封信，给他提一些关于交朋友的建议。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

建议：tip→suggestion

最后：finally→ultimately

有用的：useful→helpful

做某事有困难：have trouble in→have difficulty in

2. 句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：Finally, you should try to join in a discussion. By doing this, you’re letting people know how friendly you are.

拓展句：Finally, you should try to join in a discussion, which lets people know how friendly you are.

【点睛】[高分句型1]I agree that this is difficult but that person may be lonely too. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)

[高分句型2]Second, you can begin the conversation by asking about their likes and dislikes, which helps you find people with the same interests. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

9．Dear Tom,

Sorry to hear that you have some trouble in the new class. I understand well that you are worried and I’d like to offer you some suggestions.

I strongly recommend that you should often share hobbies with your classmates so that you can make more friends. Additionally, why not take an active part in some extra-curricular activities where you can exchange your ideas with them? Apart from these, it’s a good idea to ask teachers for help to solve problems.

I do hope you will find my suggestions helpful and your school life enjoyable.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定考生是李华，你的英国朋友Tom刚进入高中，但因不擅长与别人交流，暂时无法融入新的班级，请你根据以下要点给他写一封回信。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

担忧的：anxious→ worried

提供：provide→ offer

参加： participate in→ take part in