浙江高考英语写作分类训练：申请信

申请信

1．假定你是李华，从网上得知北京冬奥会正在招募英语志愿者。请你用英语向组委会写一封申请信，内容包括：

1. 表达意愿；

2. 个人优势；

3. 希望回复。

注意：1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：申请—— apply v.

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2．假定你是李华，你校将接待一批来自美国的高中生来学习汉语，目前校办公室正在为他们征寻为期两周的接待家庭。请用英语给学校写一封信提出申请，说明你的理由和条件。

内容要点：1.基本情况（姓名、性别、年龄、性格）

2.英语水平；

3.家庭条件；

4.相关经历；

注意：词数 80 参考词汇： host family 接待家庭

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3．假设你是红星中学高一学生李华，获悉美国某公益组织在北京的一家慈善基金会正在招聘实习生，主要负责翻译等工作。请写一封自荐信，申请成为该慈善基金会的实习生。信的内容包括：

1. 表达愿望

2. 提供自荐理由

3. 恳请获准

注意：1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：慈善基金会 charitable foundation; 实习生 intern

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m writing to apply for working as an intern at your charitable foundation.

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Sincerely,

Li Hua

4．假定你是高三学生李华，想申请就读多伦多大学（University of Toronto）。 请你写个电子邮件向该校的负责人咨询以下信息：

1.就读该大学的资历和要求；

2.就读该大学的费用和住宿条件。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.

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5．假定你是李华，你校交换生Jack 在校英文网站上发帖，想寻找一个寄宿家庭（host family），你对此很感兴趣。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，内容如下：

1. 写信目的； 2. 陈述优势； 3. 期望回复。

注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Jack,

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Yours truly,

LiHua

6．假定你是李华，在校报英语专栏看到“英语文化节”的一则招募启事。请阅读启事，并根据写作要点和要求写一封申请邮件。

Our annual English Festival, which will be held on Dec.15-17, 2019, is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show, Speech Contest, and English Debate. If you are interested, please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms. Chen at chenlaoshi@163.com.

写作要点：1. 表达写信意图；2. 陈述申请目的；3. 说明自身条件（性格、能力等）。

写作要求：1. 邮件词数80字左右；2. 开头结尾部分已写好，不计入总词数；3. 可根据情况增加细节，使行文连贯；4. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

Dear Ms. Chen,

I’m Li Hua, a student from Class 2 Grade 1.

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7．World Without Borders(义工组织) 正在招募前往斯里兰卡（Sri Lanka）支教的义工。假定你是高中生李华，请写一封申请信，申请（apply for）这份志愿者（volunteer）工作。内容包括：

1. 介绍自己，并表明写信目的。

2. 申请理由。

3. 希望得到这次机会。

注意：1. 词数80左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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8．假定你是李华，一名来自杭州的高中生，2022 年亚运会将在杭州举行，现正在招募志愿者。你希望成为其中一员，请根据以下要点给组委会写一封申请信。

1. 写信目的

2. 个人优势

3. 应聘目的

注意：

1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2. 词数:80词左右。

Dear Sir or Madam.

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9．假设你是李华。你申请接待美国友好学校来访学生，学校安排Tracy住到你家里两周时间。请你给Tracy写一封邮件，要求包括下面几项内容：

1. 所在城市介绍；

2. 家庭情况说明；

3. 询问有何需求。

注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节。

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10．假如你是高三学生李华，从互联网上得知某中小学培训机构要面向高中毕业生招聘暑期兼职英语教师，你很感兴趣，请写一封电子邮件申请该职位。

主要内容包括：

1．自我介绍；

2．希望获准。

注意：1．词数80左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．文中不得出现真实校名。

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1．Dear sir or madam,

My name is LiHua, and I am keen to do some voluntary work for the 2022 Winter Olympics. So I am writing to apply to be a part of you.

I am outgoing and active, which can be a great help for voluntary work. Besides, I am familiar with how to perform my duty. Most important of all, I have a good command of English. I would appreciate it if you give me a chance and I do hope I can be accepted as a member of volunteers.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

LiHua.

【分析】本篇考查申请信的写作，要求考生给北京冬奥会的组委会写一封希望成为英语志愿者的申请信。

【详解】体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主

结构：分总

要求：

1. 表达意愿

2. 个人优势（有志愿者工作经历；擅长英语；性格外向等）

3. 希望回复

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

be interested in/ apply for/ be familiar with/ have a good command of/ look forward to/ offer sb. sth.

第三步：连词成句

My name is LiHua, and I am eager to do some voluntary work for the 2022 Winter Olympics.

I am writing to apply to be a part of you.

I am outgoing and active, which can be a great help for voluntary work.

I have experience in voluntary work and know how to perform my duty.

I have a good command of English.

I would appreciate it if you give me a chance and I do hope I can be accepted as a member of volunteers.

Looking forward to your reply.

第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）

表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…

状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…

定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…

第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）

【高分句型1】

I have a good command of English, making me suitable for the work.我熟练掌握英语，这让我适合这项工作。句中使用了现在分词做状语。

【高分句型2】

The reason for my writing this letter is that I want to apply to be a part of you.我写信的原因是想申请成为你们的一员。句中用that引导表语从句。

2．Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m Li Hua. I have learned that you are looking for host families to entertain foreign students coming from America. I’m writing to apply to be one of them.

Firstly, as an eighteen-year-old girl, I’m friendly, enthusiastic, and outgoing. Besides, with a good command of oral English, I am capable of communicating with the foreign students. What’s more, there is an extra room in my family, and my parents are very hospitable, which will make the foreign students feel at home. Lastly, last summer, my English friend Tom once lived in my home for a month, which can help us get along better with American students.

I would appreciate it if you could consider my application.

Looking forward to your reply.

                                                                 Yours,

                                                                 Li Hua

【详解】本篇考查的作文类型是申请信。

【高分句型1】

You’d better read English newspapers to broaden your eyes, which can help improve your English. 你最好读英语报纸来开阔你的视野，这有助于提高你的英语水平。which引导非限制性定语从句。

【高分句型2】

She has a good command of the French language. 她精通法语。a good command of：精通，掌握。

3．Dear Sir or Madam，

I'm writing to apply for working as an intern at your charitable foundation.

I'm presently a student of Senior 1. I can speak English fluently and I'm often praised for my English writing as well. Besides, I'm an active and enthusiastic person who enjoys working with different people and can adapt well to new situations. Charity is a noble cause, and I always have a strong passion for it. I believe that being an intern at your foundation will be a wonderful practice for me. I'll be willing to send you any further information if you consider my request. Thank you for your time and consideration.

Looking forward to your reply．

Sincerely，

Li Hua

【分析】本篇考查申请信的写作。要求考生给北京的一家慈善基金会写信，申请称为他们的实习生。

【详解】体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主

结构：总分总

要求：

1. 表达愿望

2. 提供自荐理由

3. 恳请获准

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

apply for/ be interested in/ be fluent in/ be enthusiastic about/ enjoy doing/ adapt to/ be willing to do sth/ look forward to

第三步：连词成句

1. I am Li Hua, presently a student of Senior 1.

2. I am fluent in English, and often praised for my English writing as well.

3. I'm an active and enthusiastic person who enjoys working with different people and can adapt well to new situations.

4. Charity is a noble cause, and I always have a strong passion for it.

5. I believe that being an intern at your foundation will be a wonderful practice for me.

6. I'll be willing to send you any further information if you consider my request.

7. Thank you for your time and consideration.

8. Looking forward to your reply．

第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）

表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…

状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…

定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…

第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）

【高级句型一】I'm LiHua, presently.我是李华，目前是一个高一的学生。本句用a student of Senior 1作为LiHua的同位语。

【高级句型二】The reason why I want to be member of you is that I think charity is a noble cause, for which I always have a strong passion.我想成为你们一员的原因是，我认为慈善是一项崇高的事业，我一直对它有着强烈的热情。句中why引导定语从句，that引导表语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句。

4．Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m a student who will graduate from a high school. I’m writing to inquire about some information as follows:

To start with, what qualifications do I need to follow a course of study at your university? I’ve learnt English for 10 years and I can speak English fluently, but I wonder if there are any further requirements. Second, how much are the tuition fees? Although I intend to be self-supporting, I would be interested to hear if there are any scholarships available for international students. Third, what is the situation as regards accommodation?

I would appreciate it if you would be kind enough to provide me with the relevant information above. Look forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是询问信。要求考生给多伦多大学写信，向相关负责人咨询申请读该校的信息。

【详解】体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主

结构：总分

要求：

1.    表明写信目的

2.

1）就读该大学的资历和要求

2）就读该大学的费用和住宿条件

3. 期待早日收到回复

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

plan to do sth/ graduate from/ as follows/ be fluent in/ intend to do sth/ want to do sth/ provide sth for sb/ free of charge/ look forward to

第三步：连词成句

1.    I’m a student who will graduate from a high school.

2.    I am writing to inquire about some information as follows.

3.    What qualifications do I need if I want to attend your school?

4.    I have learnt English for 10 years, and I am fluent in spoken English.

5.    What about the tuition fees?

6.    Although I intend to be self-supporting, I would be interested to know if there are any scholarships offered?

7.    I also want to know the situation of accommodation?

8.    I’d appreciate it if you provide related information for me as early as possible.

第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）

表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…

状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…

定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…

第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）

【点睛】[高级句型一]

What interests me most is whether your school offer any scholarships to international students.使我最感兴趣的是你们学校是否给留学生提供奖学金。句中what引导主语从句，whether引导表语从句，offer sth to sb给某人提供某物

[高级句型二]

Having known about your university online, I’m writing to inquire about some information as follows.我在网上了解了贵校的情况，我写信的目的是想了解以下信息。句中使用了现在分词的完成式作状语。

5．Dear Jack,

I’ m Li Hua from Class One, Grade Two. Having learned that you are hoping to find a host family, I’m writing to recommend mine for the following reasons.

Firstly, I am good at both spoken and written English, so there will be no language barrier in our communication. Secondly, all my families are enthusiastic and warm-hearted. We are more than happy to introduce Chinese culture and some tasty food to you. Last but not least, my home is close to our school and a neighborhood center, which will be very convenient for you.

I sincerely hope you will choose my family and have a good time in China.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是申请信。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知, 假定你是李华，你校交换生Jack 在校英文网站上发帖，想寻找一个寄宿家庭（host family），你对此很感兴趣。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，内容如下：1. 写信目的； 2. 陈述优势； 3. 期望回复。

第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组）：host family（寄宿家庭）；recommend（推荐）；be good at（擅长）；language barrier（语言障碍）；enthusiastic and warm-hearted（热情和热心）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般将来时。

第4步：连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】[高分句型1]

I have learned that you are hoping to find a host family. 我听说你想找一个寄宿家庭。运用that引导的宾语从句。

[高分句型2]

The final reason you should choose my family is that my home is close to our school and a neighborhood center. 你应该选择我家的最后一个原因是我家离学校和社区中心很近。运用that引导的表语从句。

6．Dear Ms Chen,

I’m a student from Class 1, Grade 1. I’m writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.

I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because, by offering my service, I will be able to improve my organizational ability, communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.

As an outgoing girl, I get along well with my classmates. Besides, I have such a good command of English that I am elected as an assistant to my English teacher. Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.

I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I would appreciate it if you could take me into consideration.

Looking forward to your reply.

                                                                Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是申请信。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，在校报英语专栏看到“英语文化节”的一则招募启事。请阅读启事，并根据写作要点和要求写一封申请邮件。写作要点：1.表达写信意图：2.陈述申请目的；3.说明自身条件（性格、能力等）。

第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组）：apply for（申请）；obtain（获得）；precious opportunity（宝贵的机会）；be able to（能够）；organizational ability（组织能力）；get along well with（相处融洽）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。

第4步：连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】[高分句型一]

My English is so good that I am elected as an assistant to my English teacher. 我的英语很好，所以我被选为英语老师的助手。so...that...如此……以至于……，运用结果状语从句。

[高分句型二]

I have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates because I successfully lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class. 因为在班级的几次英语活动中，我成功地帮助了她，我得到了老师和同学们的赞赏。运用because引导的原因状语从句。

7．Dear Sir /Madam,

I am Li Hua, a senior school student from China. I’m writing to apply for a job as a volunteer teacher in Sri Lanka.

With abundant previous experience, I’m sure I’ll be fit for the job. More importantly, I have a good command of English and get on well with kids, which will enable me to be a qualified teacher.

I would be grateful if offered the chance.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本题考查的作文类型是申请信。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：四段式结构。第一段自我介绍，表述写信目的。第二段表述申请理由。第三段表述希望。第四段寒暄结束。

要求：1. 介绍自己，并表明写信目的。（apply for a job）

2. 申请理由。（fit for the job；have a good command of；get on well with kids）

3. 希望得到这次机会。（the chance）

4. 寒暄结束。（Looking forward to your early reply.）

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

apply for; be fit for; have a good command of; get on well with ; look forward to  

第三步：连词成句

1. I’m writing to apply for a job as a volunteer teacher in Sri Lanka.

2. With abundant previous experience, I’m sure I’ll be fit for the job.

3. More importantly, I have a good command of English and get on well with kids, which will enable me to be a qualified teacher.

4. Looking forward to your early reply.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改

【点睛】[高分句型1]

By taking the previous part-time jobs as a volunteer teacher, I have not only improved myself, but also gained much experience, which many students will never be able to get from the textbooks.（通过做志愿者教师，我不仅提高了自己，而且获得了很多经验，这是许多学生从课本上得不到的。）此句运用了not only…but also…并列结构作为连接，且which many students will never be able to get from the textbooks为非限制性定语从句。

8．Dear Sir or Madam,

I'm writing to apply for a volunteer for the 2022 Asian Games to be held in Hangzhou.

I think I can serve as an outstanding English volunteer for the games due to the fact that I used to be a volunteer in relevant games. Besides, I once won the first prize in the English speech competition in my school, which is an advantage over other applicants. I hope to make my contribution to our city。

I really hope to be one of you. Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇考察的作文类型是申请信。

【详解】根据所给提示可知，假定你是李华，一名来自杭州的高中生，2022年亚运会将在杭州举行，现正在招募志愿者。你希望成为其中一员，请根据以下要点给组委会写一封申请信。要点包括：1.写信目的；2.个人优势3.应聘目的。本文基本时态用一般现在时，注意不要漏掉要点，上下文句子要连贯，语意要明确，注意字母的大小写，要用适当的连词使句子过渡自然，注意分段表述，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【点睛】【高分句型1】Having learnt about the information that volunteers are needed for the 2022 Asian Games which is to be held in our city, I'm writing to apply for the post you are offering. 了解到我市2022年亚运会需要志愿者的信息后，我写信申请你们提供的职位。Having learnt现在分词做状语，that引导同位语从句，which引导定语从句。

【高分句型2】What sets me apart is my fluent English and enthusiasm for sports, which definitely prepares me to be the best applicant. 让我与众不同的是我流利的英语和对运动的热情，这让我成为了最好的申请者。what引导主语从句，which引导非限定性定语从句。

9．Dear Tracy，

I'm Li Hua， the student to host you when you visit my school in China． I'm writing to extend my cordial welcome to you．

My city， built 1，800 years ago， is famous for its traditional Chinese culture， which is influenced by Confucius's descendants' moving from Shandong to my hometown 800 years ago． Both my parents are warmhearted， preparing for your arrival now． We are sure to treat you well．

If you have any questions about your visit， please feel free to ask． We're more than willing to help you．

Best wishes．

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生写一封电子邮件给朋友介绍情况和询问需求。

【详解】第一步：应用文表达，开头结尾给出，注意格式规范，整篇文章使用一般现在时，符合应用文表达。

第二步：根据提纲依次列出要点，内容包括1.所在城市介绍；2. 家庭情况说明；3.询问有何需求。内容包含概括全面，关键词选用合理，如extend my cordial welcome，traditional Chinese culture, feel free to ask…等等。

第三步：连词成文，结构衔接得体，字数适当，结构清晰。

【点睛】这是李华给美国友好学校来访学生Tracy的一封信．内容包括1． 所在城市介绍；2． 家庭情况说明；3． 询问有何需求．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和第三人称，时态以一般现在时态为主．

高分句型：

1．My hometown, is a beautiful city, which is famous for its art and history, where there are many buildings, the air is fresh, there are many green trees and flowers, and birds are singing everywhere. 我的家乡，是一个美丽的城市，以其艺术和历史而闻名，那里有许多建筑，空气清新，有许多绿树和鲜花，到处是鸟儿。句中which和where引导非限制性定语从句，修饰先行词city，be famous for因为……而闻名。

2．Should you have any question, please feel free to let me know.

如果您有任何问题，请随时让我知道。

该句用的是带虚拟语气的条件句，而且省略了if。省略if后，should要前置。

还原以后如下：

If you should have any question, please feel free to let me know.

这里条件句里的should+动词原形，是用于对将来发生的情况的虚拟。feel free to do直接去做某事，不拘束做某事.

10．Dear Sir or Madam,

I'm writing to apply for the position of part-time English teacher advertised on the Internet. I am very much interested in the job and I think I'm fully qualified for it.

I'm a cheerful and easygoing senior three student and will graduate this June. With a good command of both written and spoken English, I am confident in communicating with others. Besides, I have volunteered as an English tutor for three years, which gained me loads of experience.

I would greatly appreciate it if you could take my application into favorable consideration.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

LiHua

【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是申请信。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一申请信；假如你是高三学生李华，从互联网上得知某中小学培训机构要面向高中毕业生招聘暑期兼职英语教师，你很感兴趣，请写一封电子邮件申请该职位。主要内容包括：1．自我介绍；2．希望获准。人称使用第一人称，时态以一般现在时态和一般将来时态为主。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：apply for（申请），part-time English teacher（兼职英语教师），be interested in（对……感兴趣）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，准确运用时态，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】【高分句型1】I happened to read the advertisement that you have posted on the Internet, employing Chinese students as part-time teacher of the English language. 我碰巧看到你们在网上登的招聘广告，招聘中国学生做兼职英语教师。that引导定语从句，现在分词employing做状语。

【高分句型2】In answer to your advertisement on the Internet, I'd like to apply for the position of part-time English teacher in your Training institutions.拜读贵公司在网上刊登的招聘广告，本人特此备函应征贵公司培训机构兼职英语教师一职。本句是使用介词短语in answer to作状语的复杂句式。