北京高考英语写作分类训练：邀请信

这是一份北京高考英语写作分类训练：邀请信，共17页。试卷主要包含了假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，假设你是红星中学高三”系列活动等内容，欢迎下载使用。
邀请信1．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。今年寒假你所在学校将举办书法冬令营，报名截止到一月底，请给你的留学生朋友Jim写封邮件邀请他参加，内容包括：1.告知报名的条件；2.介绍活动安排。注意：1. 词数不少于50；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。提示词：书法 calligraphyDear Jim,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua2．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim给你发邮件询问为什么北京能举 办2022年冬季奥运会。请根据下列要求，给他回复邮件，内容包括：1．北京可以举办冬季奥运会的条件；2．邀请他届时来北京。注意：1．词数不少于50；2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。提示词：冬奥会 Winter OlympicsDear Jim,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua3．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Tom在北京旅游，他很喜欢看展览。请给他写一封信，内容包括:1. 邀请他一起看一个展览2. 展览相关信息(时间、地点、内容等)3. 推荐该展览的理由注意:1. 词数不少于50。2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Tom,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua4．假设你是红星中学的高二学生李华，你校的交换生Tom对共享单车感到新奇，请你写一份邮件，邀请他去体验共享单车。内容包括：1. 现象2. 共享单车兴起的原因3. 约Tom周末骑共享单车__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．假设你是红星中学高三（1）班李华，你校将在下周五举办“校园文化节（Campus Culture Festival）”系列活动。请给你班留学生Jim写封邮件，邀请他参加，邮件的内容包括：1.介绍你选择的活动内容； 2.说明参加该活动的理由； 3.询问是否愿意参加该活动；注意：1.词数不少于50；2.邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua6．根据题目所提出的具体要求，在答题纸上写出一篇连贯完整的短文。词数不少于80。假如你是李华，你的澳大利亚笔友Jack对近期你在学校参加的社团活动很感兴趣。请写一封邮件做介绍，内容包括：1）社团名称； 2）至少三个社团活动；3）你的收获和感受。邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Jack,How’s everything going?I’m excited to tell you ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best regards,Li Hua7．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校将在下周举办校园书市活动。请给你校美国交换生Jim写封邮件，邀请他参加。邮件内容包括：1.书市活动的相关内容（时间、地点、活动等）；2.说明你自己要参加的活动和理由；3.询问他是否愿意参加。   注意： 1. 词数不少于50；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。提示词： 校园书市：campus book fairDear Jim，______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua8．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Peter想了解中国近四十年发生的变化以及人们对中国未来发展的期待。请你给他回邮件，内容包括四十年来人们：1. 居住环境的变化；2. 出行方式的变化；3. 对中国未来发展的期待。注意：1. 词数不少于50；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Peter,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua9．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华, 请给你校外教Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参加你校即将举办的校史展。邮件的内容包括：1. 介绍校史展的相关信息（时间、地点和主要内容等）;2. 说明邀请原因；3. 询问对方意向。注意：1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。提示词：展览 exhibitionDear Jim,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua10．假设你是李华，端午节即将来临，请给你的英国教师Jim写封信，邀请他来你家过端午节。内容包括：1、发出邀请；2、节日计划；3、希望他来。注意：1、词数不少于50；2、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear teacher,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Sincerely yours,Li Hua              1．Dear Jim,How is everything going? I know that you are interested in traditional Chinese culture, so I am writing to tell you that there will be a calligraphy camp held in our school this winter vacation.The camp will start at the beginning of February, so it is necessary for you to sign up before January 31st. This is a camp for calligraphy lovers and those who have no basis on calligraphy are also welcome. The camp will last for a week and campers should turn up on time for each class.As for the schedule of the winter camp, there will be two lectures about the origin and development of calligraphy. Besides, some basic techniques will be offered by well-known calligraphers. Students also have their own self-study time for practicing under the guidance of the instructors. On the day of the closing ceremony, students are expected to hand in their writing works for the calligraphy exhibition.What do you think of the program? If you would love to join it, just tell me and I will be with you through the camp.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求写一封邀请信。【详解】根据提示信息，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。今年寒假你所在学校将举办书法冬令营，报名截止到一月底，要求给你的留学生朋友Jim写封邮件邀请他参加。1.首先注意时态以将来时为主，其次人称使用第三人称。2.根据文章的写作要求，可以分为两部分;第一部分：告知报名的条件；第二部分：介绍活动安排3. 注意使用高级词汇和句式，为文章增添色彩；注意使用连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。【点睛】本文内容完整，语言表述流畅。文章使用了几个高分句型。1. I know that you are interested in traditional Chinese culture, so I am writing to tell you that there will be a calligraphy camp held in our school this winter vacation. 本句含that引导的宾语从句和so连接的并列句。 2. As for the schedule of the winter camp, there will be two lectures about the origin and development of calligraphy.  there will be 是there be句型的将来时句式。 3. If you would love to join it, just tell me and I will be with you through the camp. if引导的条件状语从句。2．Dear Jim,I’m glad to receive your email. As to why Beijing is the perfect city for the 2022 Winter Olympics, here are some reasons.Beijing has the favorable natural conditions for winter sports because the temperature remains below zero for most of January and February. Yanqing, the northwest suburban area, is a paradise for winter sports lovers. Moreover, as Beijing has hosted a variety of international games, it won’t be too difficult to hold another major sporting event here. As we speak, stadiums and facilities are being renovated so as to meet the required standards.As for people, there are many lovers of skiing and skating here. Every weekend, the ski resorts in the suburbs are full of people who enjoy themselves in the snow. What’s more, hospitable citizens and dedicated volunteers will surely make the Winter Olympics a success.You should definitely come and experience the special spirit that China will bring to the Winter Games. So do come in 2022 and give me a chance to show you the charm of Beijing in winter.Yours,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文。要求考生用英语回复邮件，告知为什么北京能举办2022年冬季奥运会。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：提纲类作文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时和一般现在时。结构：总分法要求：内容包含：1．北京可以举办冬季奥运会的条件；2．邀请他届时来北京。第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）receive；condition；Moreover；renovate；charm第三步：连词成句1. I’m glad to receive your email.2. As to why Beijing is the perfect city for the 2022 Winter Olympics, here are some reasons.3. Beijing has the favorable natural conditions for winter sports because the temperature remains below zero for most of January and February.4. Yanqing, the northwest suburban area, is a paradise for winter sports lovers.5. Moreover, as Beijing has hosted a variety of international games, it won’t be too difficult to hold another major sporting event here.6. As for people, there are many lovers of skiing and skating here.7. Every weekend, the ski resorts in the suburbs are full of people who enjoy themselves in the snow.8. What’s more, hospitable citizens and dedicated volunteers will surely make the Winter Olympics a success.9. You should definitely come and experience the special spirit that China will bring to the Winter Games.10. So do come in 2022 and give me a chance to show you the charm of Beijing in winter.第四步：连句成篇1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,3.表转折对比关系：while, meanwhile, However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。第五步：润色修改【点睛】文章结构合理，思路清晰，使用了恰当的连接词及词组使行文连贯，如“as，so，because”，也运用了一些高级词汇和表达，如“receive；condition；Moreover；renovate；charm”以及定语从句、状语从句等，增加了文章的亮点，体现了学生较高的英语学科素养。3．Dear Tom,I know you are fond of seeing an exhibition. Now you happen to be travelling in Beijing so I am writing to invite you to see an exhibition about Chinese culture.The exhibition of Chinese folk arts and crafts is now on at the Capital Museum and will last until April 30th with free admission. Artists from all over the country bring their masterpieces: Nianhua paintings from Tianjin, kites from Weifang, paper-cuts from Shaanxi, and so on.I strongly suggest you visit this exhibition, for it will totally immerse you in Chinese culture. You will have a great chance to watch the artists create their works up close. Moreover, there is even a hands-on area for you to make your own art.Does this exhibition appeal to you? If you are interested, we can go there together tomorrow. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达是一封邀请信，你打算邀请Tom去参加一个中国文化展。【详解】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。根据写作提要，你要写一封邀请信，邀请Tom去参加一个中国文化展。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语有：be fond of ;see an exhibition ; have a great chance to ; appeal to; be interested in; look forward to。可以使用的衔接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Above all。2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, as well as, not only…but (also) 。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句：I strongly suggest you visit this exhibition, for it will totally immerse you in Chinese culture.这句话运用了宾语从句。使用了一些固定词组，如：be fond of ; appeal to; look forward to。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。4．Dear Tom,How are you?You wrote in your last email that you felt it quite interesting to find there were many shared bikes at some designated public places in China.The shared bikes have become more and more popular because it is cheap and convenient to use one. It normally costs only RMB 0.5 within half an hour's ride and you can get to places where buses are not available.What's more, the shared bikes are energy-saving as they don't use oil or electricity, which is environmentally friendly. Would you like to try riding a shared bike? If yes, I will meet you at our school gate this Saturday, then we will ride shared bikes around the city.Awaiting your reply.Yours Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。【详解】第一步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件；假设你是红星中学的高二学生李华，你校的交换生Tom对共享单车感到新奇，请你写一份邮件，邀请他去体验共享单车。内容包括：1. 现象2. 共享单车兴起的原因3. 约Tom周末骑共享单车时态应为一般现在时，一般将来时，现在完成时，一般过去时。第二步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：shared bikes（共享单车），designated（指定的），public places（公共场所），convenient（方便的），energy-saving（节能的），environmentally friendly（环保的）等。第三步：根据提示或关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致、时态等问题。第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的过渡和衔接，使文章读起来自然流畅。书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面整洁美观。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和语法。例1：shared bikes，designated，public places，convenient，energy-saving，environmentally friendly等；例2：...you felt it quite interesting to find there were many shared bikes at some designated public places in China. 这个句子使用了宾语从句，“it”做形式宾语，真正宾语是“to find there were many shared bikes at some designated public places in China.”例3：What's more, the shared bikes are energy-saving as they don't use oil or electricity, which is environmentally friendly. 这个句子使用了定语从句，which做主语引导非限制性定语从句，先行词是前面句子“they don't use oil or electricity,”。从上述例子显示出作者很高的驾驭英语的能力。5．Dear Jim,I’m writing to invite you to the annual Campus Culture Festival to be held next Friday.This year the festival will provide various activities. As a lover of traditional culture, I’d like to choose kite flying. There will be pictures, poems and proverbs about kites when the time comes. We will also have the chance to learn how to make kites from folk artists. Besides, a competition for kite flying will be held. I’m sure we’ll develop our awareness of traditional culture and practical ability during this activity.If you are interested in it, please let me know. Hope to meet at the Campus Culture Festival.Yours,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知, 本篇为一封电子邮件；假设你是红星中学高三（1）班李华，你校将在下周五举办“校园文化节（Campus Culture Festival）”系列活动。请给你班留学生Jim写封邮件，邀请他参加，邮件的内容包括：1.介绍你选择的活动内容； 2.说明参加该活动的理由； 3.询问是否愿意参加该活动。第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组）, 如：Campus Culture Festival（校园艺术节）；various（各种各样的）；traditional culture（传统文化）；folk artists（民间艺术家）；practical ability（实践能力）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般将来时。第4步：连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整, 语言规范, 语篇连贯, 词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式, 如There will be pictures, poems and proverbs about kites when the time comes.运用了there be句型；If you are interested in it, please let me know.运用了条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式, 显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明, 上下句转换自然, 为文章增色添彩。6．Dear Jack,How’s everything going?I’m excited to tell you that I’ve joined a Chinese painting club in our school this term. Members of our club meet once a week. We have different activities and I enjoy all of them. We’ve invited some well-known painters to the club to talk about the history of Chinese painting, and to teach us the basic techniques of drawing. At the weekend, we go to visit art galleries, where we study the masterpieces of famous artists and discuss how we understand them. Of course, we practice painting whenever we can spare some time.I’m so proud of myself that now I understand Chinese painting a lot better, and I’ve learned how to draw. I love Chinese painting.Best regards,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：根据题目所提出的具体要求，在答题纸上写出一篇连贯完整的短文。词数不少于80。假如你是李华，你的澳大利亚笔友Jack对近期你在学校参加的社团活动很感兴趣。请写一封邮件做介绍，内容包括：1）社团名称； 2）至少三个社团活动；3）你的收获和感受。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：joined a Chinese painting club（加入一个中国绘画俱乐部）；have different activities（有不同的活动）；invited some well-known painters to the club to talk about the history of Chinese painting（邀请了一些著名的画家来俱乐部谈论中国画的历史）；the basic techniques of drawing（基本绘画技能）；等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态(一般现在时)问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。I’m excited to tell you that I’ve joined a Chinese painting club in our school this term.文中使用宾语从句；At the weekend, we go to visit art galleries, where we study the masterpieces of famous artists and discuss how we understand them.句中where引导定语从句；Of course, we practice painting whenever we can spare some time.句中whenever引导时间状语从句；I’m so proud of myself that now I understand Chinese painting a lot better, and I’ve learned how to draw.句中使用so---that引导的结果状语从句。7．How’s everything going? I’m writing to invite you to take part in our campus book fair. You are sure to have a memorable experience if you are available to join us.To provide us students with a good platform to exchange and make better use of our books, a campus book fair will be held next Friday at the Students’ Activity Center. At the book fair, students can sell their unwanted books or buy books they need.  As a regular visitor, I have found myself increasingly attracted by trading books with my schoolmates. You know, prices of books at the book fair are typically very low. More importantly, a wide variety of books can help broaden my horizons. Would you like to come? You will have a lot of fun there. Please let me know if you have made up your mind. Looking forward to your early reply!【分析】这是一篇应用写作。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知, 本篇为一封电子邮件；假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校将在下周举办校园书市活动。请给你校美国交换生Jim写封邮件，邀请他参加。邮件内容包括：1.书市活动的相关内容（时间、地点、活动等）；2.说明你自己要参加的活动和理由；3.询问他是否愿意参加。  第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组）, 如：take part in（参加）；campus book fair（校园书市）；have a memorable experience（一次难忘的经历）；platform（平台）；make better use of（好好利用）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整, 语言规范, 语篇连贯, 词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式, 如You are sure to have a memorable experience if you are available to join us.运用了条件状语从句；To provide us students with a good platform to exchange and make better use of our books, a campus book fair will be held next Friday at the Students’ Activity Center.运用了不定式做目的状语。全文中没有中国式英语的句式, 显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明, 上下句转换自然, 为文章增色添彩。8．Dear Peter,In your last e-mail you said you wanted to learn about changes of Chinese people’s life in the near 40 years. Since China opened its door to the world, life has become much more convenient.Let’s take living condition and transportation as examples. 40 years ago, most people in China lived in small houses where winter is cold and long. Now, people live in large houses equipped with heating systems. Bicycles used to be the main transportation.  Now private cars have become household items. In the future, Chinese people will keep pace with the latest science and technology development.I hope you can come and see what China is like in person some day.YoursLi Hua【分析】这是一篇提纲类书面表达。要求你给英国朋友Peter回邮件，介绍中国近四十年发生的变化以及人们对中国未来发展的期待。【详解】题目要求假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Peter想了解中国近四十年发生的变化以及人们对中国未来发展的期待。请你给他回邮件，内容包括四十年来人们：1. 居住环境的变化；2. 出行方式的变化；3. 对中国未来发展的期待。分析可知，应该以第一人称为主，一般过去时、一般现在时和一般将来时进行写作。要点已经给出，要求考生根据提纲自己发挥拓展，考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。文章分三个自然段进行写作：第一段说明自己此次写信的目的；第二段详细介绍中国近四十年发生的变化以及人们对中国未来发展的期待；第三段邀请他亲自来中国观看中国的变化。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。【点睛】这篇邮件的关键在于要点的拓展，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。In your last e-mail you said you wanted to learn about changes of Chinese people’s life in the near 40 years.宾语从句的运用；I hope you can come and see what China is like in person some day.宾语从句的运用。9．Dear Jim,I’m writing to tell you that an exhibition about our school’s history will take place at our school, and I am wondering if you can come and visit it.The exhibition, which will be held on the fourth floor in the main teaching building on May 8th, will cover many aspects of our school, including the big events that have happened in the school’s history, the various awards we have received during these years, and even the great accomplishments of some of our excellent graduates. The exhibition definitely reflects the development and the achievements of our school, and I believe that after your visit, it will hold a special place in your heart. If you are interested in attending the exhibition, please let me know and I’ll send you more information about it.Hope to meet you then.Yours,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知, 本篇为一封电子邮件；假设你是红星中学高三学生李华, 请给你校外教Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参加你校即将举办的校史展。邮件的内容包括：1. 介绍校史展的相关信息（时间、地点和主要内容等）;2. 说明邀请原因；3. 询问对方意向。第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组）, 如：exhibition（展览）；take place（举行；发生）；wonder（想知道）；aspect（方面）；various（各种各样的）；accomplishment（成就）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整, 语言规范, 语篇连贯, 词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式, 如I’m writing to tell you that an exhibition about our school’s history will take place at our school, and I am wondering if you can come and visit it.运用了宾语从句；The exhibition, which will be held on the fourth floor in the main teaching building on May 8th, will cover many aspects of our school, including the big events that have happened in the school’s history, the various awards we have received during these years, and even the great accomplishments of some of our excellent graduates.运用了定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式, 显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明, 上下句转换自然, 为文章增色添彩。10．Dear teacher,The Dragon Boat Festival is around the corner. I know you are keen on Chinese culture, so I'm writing to invite you to spend the festival together with our family on the fifth day of the fifth month of the Chinese calendar. If you are willing to come, my father and I will pick you up where you live at 9 o'clock that morning. We will make and enjoy Zong zi together. My mother will tell you more customs about the festival. I guess it will be a really nice opportunity for you to learn about this festival so we do hope you can come. We look forward to your coming.Sincerely yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封信，邀请老师吉姆到家里过端午节，并介绍节日的相关计划和安排。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时结构：分分总分分法是指先分别陈述，再作总结。要求：1.表明写信目的 2. 介绍节日计划和安排1）介绍端午节的相关情况，比如时间，意义，活动等2）介绍节日计划，比如包粽子，看赛龙舟等3.表达殷切盼望第二步：列提纲（重点词组）around the corner/be keen on/ spend …with/ be willing to/ pick up /look forward to/invite sb to do第三步：连词成句1.    The Dragon Boat Festival is around the corner. 2.    I know you are keen on Chinese culture.3.    I'm writing to invite you to spend the festival together with our family .4.    If you are willing to come, my father and I will pick you up.5.    We will make and enjoy Zong zi together. 6.    We look forward to your coming.第四步：连句成篇（添加衔接词或从句）1.    I know you are keen on Chinese culture, so I'm writing to invite you to spend the festival together with our family on the fifth day of the fifth month of the Chinese calendar. 2.    If you are willing to come, my father and I will pick you up where you live at 9 o’clock that morning. 3.    We will make and enjoy Zong zi together. My mother will tell you more customs about the festival. 4.    I guess it will be a really nice opportunity for you to learn about this festival so we do hope you can come. 5.    We look forward to your coming.第五步：润色【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：my father and I will pick you up where you live at 9 o’clock that morning.句中的where引导地点状语从句。也用了一些固定搭配，例如：around the corner/be keen on/ spend …with/ be willing to等。作者写作的条理很清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然。