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2023年新高三英语【暑假自学课】（课标全国卷）
第20讲 应用文写作（新高考） 解析版

1. 掌握新高考应用文写作高考考向。
2. 掌握新高考应用文写作高分句式。

一、选题特点：体裁和题材相对稳定。以应用文为主。选材内容均与学生学习、生活及社会热点相关。
二、命题形式：较为稳定。提纲类写作成为主流，提示内容较为简洁。
三、命题热点
1.关注用英语来解决学生生活和学习中的实际问题，体现英语作为交流工具的实用性。
2.与时俱进，弘扬中国优秀文化，立足家国情怀，体现文化自信。做中国文化的传播者和继承者，做好中国文化的代言人。
3.强化“五育”并举理念，加大对健康意识、审美情趣和劳动精神的考查。
4.借助英语的工具性，以国际视角，助推人类命运共同体国际文化交流。
5.备考话题：中国文化、环境保护、运动健康、团结互助、人类命运共同体等。
【三年高考发现】
1.近三年高考提纲类写作占了该题型的绝大多数；
2.文体多以应用文为主，实用类成为趋势；
3.题材贴近生活，内容灵活多变，开放性加大；
4.命题保持稳定性。写作越来越重视创设情境，让考生有更大的自由发挥空间，文体趋于多元化；
5.渗透中国元素，弘扬中华优秀传统文化，突出中华传统价值观。
【新高考动向】
新高考Ⅰ卷打破了常规，2020年的新闻报道(越野比赛)和2021年的个人生活(阅读报纸)和2022年的学校生活(邀请某人做一次访谈)都显示出了这一命题趋势。
【高考阅卷专家支招】
目前，对于很多同学来说，处于三档作文，好点的处于四档作文水平，从高考阅卷来看，这两个档次的考生人数也最多，短期内如何让你的作文由三级作文升级到五档作文呢？以下高招告诉你。
高招一——保证外观美
1.书写美观：卷面美观就是指字母的大小和字母之间的距离匀称，无涂改、增补现象。
2.分段合理：近几年的高考高分范文绝大多数为三自然段。将时间、空间或其他逻辑关系方面相关联的内容安排在相应的段落内，使文章主题突出、层次分明。
高招二——力求内在美
1.要点齐全：写作时要列出要点，避免遗漏。
2.用词得体：写作时需要考虑身份、语气、风格等因素。
3.避免错误：审题错误、词汇错误、语法错误和中式英语等都是妨碍考生得高分的绊脚石。
4.过渡自然：衔接词可以使文章结构紧凑、前后连贯，能很好地起到穿针引线的作用，使逻辑更严密。
5.词汇新颖：高级新颖词汇的使用能使阅卷者眼前一亮，使阅卷者相信考生具有较强的词汇功底和表达能力。
6.句式多样：考生要想使所写的文章凸显文采，可以通过增加修饰成分来打开思维，适当增加相关细节内容。
7.写出精彩之笔：考生应精心构思和设计开头和结尾，增加短文亮点，达到使阅卷者为之眼前一亮。

考点一： I am Li Hua,... 同位语，定语从句/非谓语。
【微解】该句式中同位语通常由名词或名词短语充当。
例1．【佳句】①I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students Association. [2022•新课标卷I应用文] 我是学生会主席李华。
②I'm writing to invite you to attend “Talk and Talk”, an English program founded by our school broadcasting station.[2022•新课标卷I应用文]我写信邀请您参加“访谈”节目,这是我们校广播电台创办的英语节目。

考点二：非谓语+主语+谓语等
【微解】该句式表同一个主语发出两个不同的动作，主要动作用谓语,次要动作用非谓语。
例2．【佳句】 ①Seeing this scene, I felt proud of him, my eyes filled with mist. [2022•新高考全国卷读后续写]看到这一幕,我为他感到骄傲,眼睛模糊了。
②Their father, seeing the mess in the kitchen, immediately understood what had happened. [2021•新高考I卷读后续写]他们的父亲看到厨房里一片狼藉,立刻明白发生了么事。
考点三：主语+谓语等，aiming to...(非谓语动词)……为了/the purpose of which is to do (非限制性定语从句)……为了……
【微解】如果表“我写信的目的是……”，不用该句式直接用不定式作状语即可。
例3．【佳句】①The radio program was founded in 2016, aiming to provide a good platform for the students to share their school life.[2022•新课标卷I应用文] 该广播节目成立于2016年,旨在为学生提供一个分享学校生活的良好平台。
②Last weekend our school organized a fruit-picking activity on a farm, the purpose of which is to stress the importance of hard work [2020•全国卷Ⅱ书面表达] 为了强调劳动的重要性，上周末我们学校组织了一次到农场的采摘活动。

考点四： It is+adj.+(for/ofsb.)to do/that从句.../It is+of+n.(+forsb)to do(对于某人/某人)是怎么样的
【微解】该句式中it是形式主语，of+n.中的名词有 importance, benefit, help, interest, use, value 等。
例4．【佳句】①It is wise for us to take a short break after learning for 30 minutes. [2021•全国乙卷] 对我们来说，学习30分钟后休息一会儿是明智的。
②It is of great benefit to participate in the activity, because it taught us the importance of working hard. [2020•全国卷Ⅱ] 参加这个活动很有益,因为它教会了我们劳动的重要性。

考点五：主语+谓语+it+adj.+(for sb./sth.)to do/that从句/主语+谓语+it+n.+to do/that 从句某人认为/发现/觉得做某事是怎么样的
【微解】该句式中it是形式宾语,常见的谓语有 believe, find ,consider, feel, make 和 think.
例5．【佳句】①I consider it convenient to learn online because we can learn anytime and anywhere. [2021•全国乙卷满分作文] 我认为在线学习很方便，因为我们可以随时随地学习。
②I found it of great use to visit the exhibition of the students Chinese painting.[2021•浙江高考] 我觉得去参观这次学生国画展览很有用。

考点六： It goes without saying that...毋庸置疑……
【微解】在该句式中，that句中的谓语动词的时态根据实际情况而定。
例6． 【佳句】It goes without saying that ocean plays an important role in many aspects. [2022•全国甲卷书面表达] 毋庸置疑，海洋在许多方面发挥着重要作用。

考点七： I'd appreciate it if..如果……我将感激不尽微解 该句式可改为I’d be grateful if...
例7．【佳句】I would appreciate it very much if you could take my invitation into account.[2022•北京卷应用文] 如果您能考虑我的邀请，我将不胜感激。

考点八： What 从句+be+ n./What 从句 is that ….
【微解】主语从句作主语,从句的谓语常是upset，delight, surprise, amaze, astonish, satisfy, worry impress，matter等表沮丧、高兴、惊讶、满意、担忧，使印象深刻、重要等的动词。
例8．【佳句】①First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions.[2022•全国甲卷书面表达]首先，我们能做的是重视我们的日常行为。
②What impressed me was the amazing works of those gifted student painters.[2021•浙江高考满分作文]令我印象深刻的是那些天才学生画家的惊人作品。

考点九： There is no doubt/There is no denying that...毫无疑问/不可否认……
【微解】在该句式中，that引导同位语从句。
例9．【佳句】There is no denying that the activity was an unforgettable experience. [2020•新高考I卷满分作文]不可否认，这次活动是一次难忘的经历。

考点十：主句，which/who等引导的非限制性定语从句
【微解】不能用that引导非限制性定语从句，如表“这一点”，应用关系代词which;指人，作主语用who
例10．【佳句】①I looked around and finally spotted David, who was standing by himself off to the side by a fence. [2022•新课标读后续写] 我环顾四周，终于发现了大卫，他独自站在栅栏旁。
②Whenever people around get into trouble, they are willing to go to her for help, which makes her respected by all our neighbors.[2020•全国卷I满分作文]每当周围的人遇到麻烦，他们都愿意去找她帮忙，这使她受到所有邻居的尊敬。

考点十一： As an old saying goes... 俗话说,……
【微解】在该句式中，as引导非限制性定语从句，指代主句的全部内容。
例11．【佳句】 As an old saying goes, “God helps those who help themselves.” [2020•全国卷I满分作文]俗话说，“天助自助者。”
考点十二：so that，in order that引导目的状语从句
【微解】该句式引导目的状语从句常与情态动词can could 等连用。
例12．【佳句】As far as I am concerned, students should do more listening and speaking so that/in order that they can develop their communication skills.[2022•全国乙卷书面表达]就我而言，学生应该多听多说，以便发展他们的沟通技巧。

考点十三：Not only+助动词/情态动词/系动词+主语+谓语+其他，but+主语+also+谓语+其他，不仅……而且……
【微解】 该句型中Not only…位于句首时，前一分句句子采用部分倒装语序（前倒后不倒）。
例13．【佳句】The activity was highly thought of, which was not only rewarding, but also raised our awareness of labor.[2020•全国卷满分作文] 这次活动得到了高度的评价，不仅有益，而且提高了我们的劳动意识。

考点十四：Only+时间副词/介词短语/(when/if引导的)状语从句+助动词/情态动词/系动词+主语+ VO,只有……才……
【微解】only后的状语从句中,主谓不倒装。
例14．【佳句】①Only by being smart online learners can we truly enjoy the benefits of modern technology. [2021•全国乙卷满分作文] 只有通过成为聪明的网络学习者，我们才能真正享受现代技术的好处。
② Only when I worked on the farm did I realize how hard it was to work in the fields. [2020•全国卷Ⅱ满分作文]只有当我在农场干活时，我才意识到在地里劳作是多么辛苦。

考点十五：在so/such…that，结构中，店同它所修饰的成分共同位于句首时，主句委用部分倒装。
【微解】so开头，后面是形容词或副词，形容词后是be动词，副词后是助动词，然后是主语和that句式部分。
例15．【佳句】①So many benefits does ocean bring to human beings that great importance can’t be attached enough to protect it.[2022•全国甲卷书面表达] 海洋给人类带来了如此多的好处，以至于越高度重视来保护它越好。
②So patiently did their father instruct them that the twins made the breakfast fast and well. [2021•新高考工卷读后续写] 父亲非常耐心地指导，因此双胞胎把早餐做得又快又好。

考点十六： It is/was+被强调成分+that+其他，就是……
【微解】强调句的be动词，要么是is，要么是was，不存在第三种情况;前后时态要保持一致。
例16．【佳句】①It’s oceans that offer us various resources, such as food, medicine and so on ensuring the sustainable development of human beings.[2022•全国甲卷书面表达]海洋为我们提供了各种资源，如食物、药物等，保证了人类的可持续发展。
②It was not until 8 o’clock that he realized he had spent the whole day on the Internet.
→Not until 8 o’clock did he realize he had spent the whole day on the Internet. 直到八点钟，他才意识到自己一整天都在上网。

考点十七：what/how感叹句
【微解】what引导的感叹句中，中心词是名词(可数/不可数/复数)，how引导的感叹句中的中心词是形容词或副词。
例17．【佳句】How delicious the breakfast was! [2021•新高考I卷读后续写]早餐多么美味病! 我们在农场摘苹果的时光多么美好啊!

考点十八： without/but for+名词，主语+couldn't have done 没有/要不是……，……就不会……
【微解】该句式可升级为:主句，without which +主语+ couldn't have done.
例18．【佳句】 ①But for his encouragement, I couldn't have made such great progress. [2020•全国卷满分作文]要不是他的鼓励，我不会取得这么大的进步。
②No words are strong enough to convey my thanks to your selfless assistance, without which I could not have made such great progress in English.[2020•浙江高考满分作文] 任何语言都不足以表达我对你无私帮助的谢意，没有你无私的帮助，我不可能在英语上取得如此大的进步。

考点十九：With+宾语+非谓语动词+主句
【微解】该句式中，非谓语动词形式有3种:doing(主动或进行)，done(被动或完成)，to do(将来的动作)。
例19．【佳句】①With the theme-based class meeting to hold, I'm writing to ask you for some advice on it. [2021•全国甲卷满分作文] 主题班会要开了，我写信征求您的建议。
②With so many fantastic works shown at the exhibition, it will surely arouse your interest in Chinese painting. [2021•浙江高考满分作文]这次展览展出了这么多精彩的作品，一定会引起您对中国通的兴趣。

考点二十：Nothing/Nobody/...+谓语+比较级……,没有比……更……的了
【微解】否定词和比较级连用，表最高级的含义，常用的否定词有 no，never，nothing, nobody，hardly 等。
例20．【佳句】①Their mother cried in an excited voice, “I have never enjoyed a more tasty breakfast.” [2021•新高考I卷读后续写]妈妈激动地喊道:“我从来没有吃过这么美味的早餐。”
②It can’t be better if you can share your experiences with others, thus helping them become familiar with
you as soon as possible. 如果你能与他人讲述你的经历，从而帮助他们尽快熟悉你,就再好不过了。


【2023▪新高考I&II卷】假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括；
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右：
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
首先：to begin with → first of all
提高：improve → progress
建议：suggestion → advice
选择：choose → select
2句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
拓展句：My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve.（运用了现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]
Besides, Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.（运用了省略句和who引导定语从句）

【2023▪浙江1月卷】上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：
1. 活动的过程；
2. 收获与感想。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Getting to Know the Plants Around US
Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union.
The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species. We then went on a natural walk to observe and collect samples of different plants. Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals. I also gained a greater appreciation for the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.
Overall, it was a valuable and enriching experience.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报写篇报道，介绍上周末校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
参与：participate in → attend
开始：begin → start
观察，调查：observe → survey
震惊：strike → astonish/surprise
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union.
拓展句： Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union, which benefited me a lot.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals.（运用了一般过去时的被动语态和定语从句）


【2023▪安徽省、云南省、吉林省、黑龙江省四省联考卷】你刚观看了你校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会。请在线上留言板上写一则评论，内容包括：
1. 音乐会特点；
2. 观看感受；
3. 意见建议。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
This online concert is absolutely fantastic.
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【满分作文一】
This online concert is absolutely fantastic.
The performers from the two schools have done their best in entertaining the audience with one song after another. Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one. I enjoyed every second of the concert and was particularly attracted when the boys and girls from Britain started to sing the traditional Chinese song “Liang Zhu”. They performed the song in a way that touched my heart and gave me a feeling of connection.
I hope there will be more opportunities in the future for us Chinese students and our international friends to learn about and from each other.

【满分作文二】
This online concert is absolutely fantastic. 
The joint performance organized by our school and a friendly school in the UK showcased a variety of musical styles from different cultures. As an audience member, I was deeply impressed by the talented musicians and singers who performed flawlessly. The concert created a sense of unity and connection among the viewers, despite the distance between us. However, I think it would have been better if there were subtitles or translations for the lyrics of the songs to make it more accessible for international viewers.
Overall, it was an amazing event, and I look forward to more such collaborations in the future.

【满分作文三】
This online concert is absolutely fantastic.
With top-quality sound and video production, it created an immersive and unforgettable viewing experience. What kept me utterly spellbound were the sheer brilliance of the performers and seamless transition between each song. It is not hard to see that each music piece was carefully selected and each performance was filled with extraordinary/remarkable passion and professionalism. The only drawback is that information about the performers and their backgrounds, particularly for those who are not familiar to the audience, is not provided enough.
It would be better to know more about their experiences and how they honed their musical skills to reach this level of excellence, enhancing the audience’s appreciation of their artistry.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放作文。要求考生就学校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会，在线上留言板上写一则评论。
【详解】1.词汇积累
确定无疑地：undoubtedly→without doubt
尤其地：particularly→ especially
感动：touch→ move
希望：hope→ expect
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句：Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one.
拓展句：There is no doubt that their performances are of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】I enjoyed every second of the concert and was particularly attracted when the boys and girls from Britain started to sing the traditional Chinese song “Liang Zhu”. （运用了when引导的时间状语从句）

【2023▪浙江1月卷】上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：
1. 活动的过程；
2. 收获与感想。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
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【答案】 Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union.
The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species. We then went on a natural walk to observe and collect samples of different plants. Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals. I also gained a greater appreciation for the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.
Overall, it was a valuable and enriching experience.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报写篇报道，介绍上周末校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
参与：participate in → attend
开始：begin → start
观察，调查：observe → survey
震惊：strike → astonish/surprise
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union.
拓展句： Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union, which benefited me a lot.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals.（运用了一般过去时的被动语态和定语从句）

【2022新高考I&II卷】假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：
1. 节目介绍；
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Caroline,
This is my first time that I have invited you to attend our program —Talk and Talk. It is ten years since Talk and Talk was established. This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students.
Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it. As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot. If you are available on this Sunday, I together with the whole Talk and Talk staff am waiting for your coming.
I’d appreciate it if you take my invitation into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是校广播站“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建立：establish→set up
了不起的：amazing→fabulous
帮助：aid→assistance
许多：plenty of→a lot of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot.
拓展句：You are our distinguished foreign language teacher, whose aid can help us a lot.
【点睛】[高分句型1]This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students.(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it.(运用了状语从句的省略)

【2021新高考I&II卷】你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 读报的经历；
2. 喜爱的栏目；
3. 期望和祝福。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Youth and Me




第一节 这是一篇针对报纸创刊10周年投稿的文章。通过审题，我们可以确定，本文主要以第一人称进行展开和叙述。文章可以用三段式的结构。第一段简明表示对报刊创办10周年的祝贺。第二段是文章的主体，主要阐述阅读报纸的经历和喜爱的栏目。第三段表达对报纸的期望和祝福。
Dear Editor-in-Chief，
Congratulations on the 10th anniversary of Youth.
I have been a devoted reader since I subscribed to the newspaper. Obsessed with it, I read each issue from cover to cover. It boasts a variety of columns, of which Chinese culture is my favorite. The series of contents not only introduces abundant cultural knowledge but also values the inheritance of brilliant culture and strengthens our cultural confidence.
As a fan of Youth. I recommend that it will be better if it carries some articles about the life of foreign teens and I hope that it will become even more popular.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
Dear editor,
My name is Li Hua, a senior 3 student. I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations on the 10th anniversary ceremony of YOUTH.
Since it was founded, YOUTH has been popular with many students including me, a regular reader of YOUTH. Thepaper’s broad content and rich knowledge have not only widened my horizons but also given me much enjoyment. I am fond of all its columns, but what impressed me most is culture, where I can read humorous stories, poems, fictions and so on to improve my oral English.
Please accept my sincere congratulations again and I best wish that YOUTH could achieve greater success and gain more popularity.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向学校英文报Youth表达自己的经历，并送上自己的祝福。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建立：found→establish
沮丧的：depressed→upset
此外：besides→what’s more
得到：receive→obtain
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon.
拓展句：Not only can these stories relieve my stress, but also they can broaden my horizon.
【点睛】[高分句型1] When feeling depressed, I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of imaginative stories. (运用了状语从句的省略和which引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] Refused as I was, I still received some great encouragement, which gives me confidence to be a writer. (运用了as引导的让步状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【2020年高考真题题组】假定你是李华, 上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道, 内容包括:
1. 参加人员；
2.跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下；
3. 活动反响。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Cross-Country Running Race
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【答案】
A Cross-Country Running Race
Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school.
The students selected from every class took part in the competition. The route measured five kilometers, from our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain. Every runner tried their best to finish the task, with their classmates along the way giving them necessarily help as well as encouragement. At last, all the runners managed to arrive the finish line, receiving cheers from all the directions.
The activity was highly spoken of, because not only did it provide chance for us to exercise, but also made us more cohesive.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生就上周日学校举行的5公里越野赛活动写一篇新闻报道。
【详解】体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示，时态应以一般过去时为主
结构:总分总
要求:
1. 参加人员
2. 跑步路线
3. 活动反响
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
attend/witness/ draw one’s attention/ manage to do sth./ measure/ speak highly of/ provide sth. for sb.
第三步:连词成句
1. Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school.
2. The students selected from every class took part in the competition.
3. The route measured five kilometers, from our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain.
4. Every runner tried their best to finish the task, with their classmates along the way giving them necessary help as well as encouragement.
5. At last, all the runners managed to arrive the finish line, receiving cheers from all the directions.
6. The activity is highly spoken of, because not only does it provide chance for us to exercise, but also makes us more cohesive.
第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)
表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些高分句型，例如:Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school. 中which引导非限制性定语从句；The activity is highly thought of, because not only does it provide chance for us to exercise, but also makes us more cohesive.中使用了部分倒装。


1．（2023·广东深圳·深圳市校考）假定你是李华。你校英文报正在开展以“How to Make Holidays Count”为题的讨论，就学生一般如何度过假期展开了调查。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.假期活动状况描述；
2.简单评论；
3.你的建议。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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【答案】 How to Make Holidays Count
As the form shows, students choose different ways to spend holidays.
Surprisingly, students who spend their holiday in learning account for 71%. 45% of students think the holiday is an occasion for them to relax themselves, going out to travel. To our delight, the percent of the students doing housework is 15%. And 8% of the students choose to do sports. The figures in the form show students attach great importance to study.
From my perspective, holidays should be a meaningful time for us students to enjoy ourselves or learn something beyond the classrooms. Taking part in some social activities is a good choice for us students to improve ourselves and make holidays count.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文，要求考生使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文向校英文报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
显示：show→indicate
高兴：delight→joy
重要性：importance→significance
参加：take part in→participate in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To our delight, the percent of the students doing housework is 15%.
拓展句：To our delight, the percent of the students who do housework is 15%.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As the form shows, students choose different ways to spend holidays. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Surprisingly, students who spend their holiday in learning account for 71%. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
2．（2023·广东·校联考三模）假定你是李华，你校英语角上个月举办了为期一个月的关于二十四节气(24 solar terms)的系列讲座。请你为校英文报写一篇短文报道此事，内容包括：
1．活动的目的；
2．活动的内容；
3．活动的反响。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Series of Lectures on the 24 Solar Terms
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【答案】                                                                  A Series of Lectures on the 24 Solar Terms
To make lovers of Chinese traditional culture have a deep understanding of the 24 solar terms, the English corner in our school hosted a series of lectures last month.
English teachers in our school gave eight splendid lectures from 4:00 pm to 5:00 pm every Thursday and Friday. The lectures covered a fund of knowledge, including their historical origins, climate changes and farming activities during each solar term and customs in different provinces.
Students thought highly of the lectures, from which they learned a lot. They realized Chinese traditional culture was attractive. They wish there will be more lectures about it.
【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生写一篇关于学校举办的为期一个月的关于二十四节气的系列讲座的报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累
深刻理解：have a deep understanding of→understand...deeply
举办：host→conduct
不同的：different→diverse
意识到：realize (that)→be aware that
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To make lovers of Chinese traditional culture have a deep understanding of the 24 solar terms, the English corner in our school hosted a series of lectures last month.
拓展句：The English corner in our school hosted a series of lectures last month, whose aim is to make lovers of Chinese traditional culture have a deep understanding of the 24 solar terms.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Students thought highly of the lectures, from which they learned a lot. (由介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】They realized Chinese traditional culture was attractive. (由省略连词that引导的宾语从句)
3．（2023春·湖北十堰·校联考阶段练习）上周日，你校组织学生到西山远足。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，介绍这次活动。内容包括：  
1. 时间和地点； 2. 远足过程；3. 你的感悟。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Hiking to Xishan
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【答案】In order to get students closer to nature, our school organized us to hike to Xishan Hill last Friday.
We gathered at the school gate at eight o’clock in the morning, and then we headed to Xishan. Along the way, we appreciated the beauty of spring and sang happily. Varieties of flowers were blooming and nature seemed to come alive again. The fresh air and beautiful scenery made us comfortable and relaxed.
The activity was highly spoken of and turned out to be a great success. Not only does it broaden our horizons but it also relieves our academic burden, which is helpful for us to be more concentrated in our study.
【导语】这是一篇报道。要求考生对上周日你校组织学生到西山远足的情况写一篇英文报道，介绍这次活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
清爽的：fresh→ refreshing
漂亮的：beautiful → magnificent
放松的：relaxed→ free and easy
有益的：be helpful→ be beneficial
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：We appreciated the beauty of spring and sang happily.
拓展句：Appreciating the beauty of spring, we sang happily.
【点睛】【高分句型1】In order to get students closer to nature, our school organized us to hike to Xishan Hill last Friday.（目的状语）
【高分句型2】Not only does it broaden our horizons but it also relieves our academic burden（Not only…but also倒装结构）
4．（2022秋·湖北·校联考阶段练习）学校在上周五举行了一次登山活动，地点是学校附近的云雾山（Yunwu Mountain）。请你为本校的英语报写一篇报道，介绍此次活动。内容包括：
1.时间与地点；
2.活动的过程；
3.活动的意义。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】In order to help us students to keep fit and build up character, our school organized a mountain-climbing activity last Friday and we received much fun and benefit.
It was a nice day and the sunlight was warm and soft. At around 9 a.m., we gathered at the foot of Yunwu Mountain in high spirits, well-equipped for the tough journey. Despite the hardships, we were singing and laughing all the way, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful views. When some students fell behind or got into trouble, others would come to their aid. At around 11 a.m., we all arrived at the summit of the mountain. Bathed in the sunshine, we jumped and cheered with great joy.
This outdoors activity is really impressive and beneficial. Not only does it get us closer to nature but also promotes the friendship among us.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生为学校在上周五举行的一次登山活动写一篇报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累
尽管：despite→in spite of
快乐：joy→happiness
山顶：summit→peak
聚集：gather→mass
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：At around 9 a.m., we gathered at the foot of Yunwu Mountain in high spirits, well-equipped for the tough journey.
拓展句：It was at around 9 a.m. that we gathered at the foot of Yunwu Mountain in high spirits, well-equipped for the tough journey.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Despite the hardships, we were singing and laughing all the way, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful views. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] Not only does it get us closer to nature but also promotes the friendship among us. (运用了部分倒装)
5．（2022春·湖北·校联考阶段练习）假设你是学生李华，你校计划于下周日上午主办题为“My Dream”的英语演讲比赛，你准备参加。请你根据以下要点写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
1.你对梦想的看法；
2.你的梦想；
3.你打算如何实现你的梦想。
注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Good morning, my dear friends!
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【答案】Good morning, my dear friends!
I’m very glad to stand here to give you a speech about dreams. A dream is like a light tower, showing the way when one is sailing on the sea, without which one may not know where he goes or even gets lost in life. Therefore, have a dream and that really matters!
As for my dream, I’ve decided to become a doctor to help relieve patients’ pain or even save their lives, which, I believe, is helpful and well worth doing. However, realizing it is really a big challenge for me. Anyhow, I will work hard and go all out for it, exposing myself to books especially on medicine so that I can go to my ideal university. I’m quite sure I can achieve my dream. As a saying goes: If you can dream it, you can do it.
Thank you!
【导语】本文是开放作文。假设你是学生李华，你校计划于下周日上午主办题为“My Dream”的英语演讲比赛，你准备参加。请你根据以下要点写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：你对梦想的看法；你的梦想；你打算如何实现你的梦想。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→happy/delighted
重要：matter→count/be important
决定做： decide to do→make a decision to do
有帮助的：helpful→of help
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：However, realizing it is really a big challenge for me
拓展句：However, it is really a big challenge for me to realize it.
【点睛】[高分句型1] A dream is like a light tower, showing the way when one is sailing on the sea, without which one may not know where he goes or even gets lost in life.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句和“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] As for my dream, I’ve decided to become a doctor to help relieve patients’ pain or even save their lives, which, I believe, is helpful and well worth doing.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3]Anyhow, I will work hard and go all out for it, exposing myself to books especially on medicine so that I can go to my ideal university.(运用了现在分词作伴随状语以及so that引导的目的状语从句)
6．（2023春·湖北宜昌·葛洲坝中学校考）4月23日是世界读书日，你校将以“阅读经典，体味生活”为主题举行英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1. 你读过的一本好书；
2. 阅读对你生活的影响。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为100词左右；
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
Reading Classics, Experiencing life
Every April 23rd is the World Book Day.
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【答案】
Reading Classics, Experiencing life
Every April 23rd is the World Book Day. It started in 1995. In order to encourage more people to read more books, all kinds of activities are held on April 23rd. I spend most of my free time reading famous books which affect me greatly. Of all the books, I like the Long March best. From the book I can know about our history better. Reading not only broadens my horizons, but also makes my life more colorful. With the company of books, I never feel lonely. I often share my happiness of reading books with my family and friends. I hope that you will enjoy reading as much as I do.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生在世界读书日来临之际，以“阅读经典，体味生活”为主题写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
开始：start→begin
各种各样的：all kinds of→a variety of
开阔视野：broaden my horizons→expand my horizons
快乐：happiness→pleasure
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Every April 23rd is the World Book Day. It started in 1995.
拓展句：Every April 23rd is the World Book Day, which started in 1995.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I spend most of my free time reading famous books which affect me greatly.（运用了which引导的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】I hope that you will enjoy reading as much as I do.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和as…as…引导的比较状语从句）
7．（2023·湖南常德·统考模拟预测）假如你是李华，上周末你校组织了一次“感恩父母行”的活动，请你为学校英文报写一篇短文，内容包括：
1.活动目的;
2.你的行动;
3.你的感受。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Gratitude to my parents
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【答案】参考范文
Gratitude to my parents
In order to arouse our awareness of being grateful to our parents, our school held an activity last weekend.
To show my thanks, I decided to do something for my parents. Getting up earlier than usual last Saturday, I spent much time preparing their breakfast and then I began to help do cleaning in our house, which made me tired and exhausted. When I saw my parents’ satisfied smiles, I felt that my labor was worthwhile.
Through this activity, I’ve learnt that it is not easy for my parents to work and take care of us at the same time. It is their selfless and unconditional love that l should appreciate.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为学校英文报写一篇短文，介绍上周末学校组织了一次“感恩父母行”的活动，内容包括活动的目的、行动和对活动的感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感激的：grateful →thankful
开始：begin →set out
筋疲力尽的：exhausted →worn out
值得的：worthwhile →rewarding
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In order to arouse our awareness of being grateful to our parents, our school held an activity last weekend.
拓展句：Our school held an activity last weekend, which is aimed at arousing our awareness of being grateful to our parents.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Getting up earlier than usual last Saturday, I spent much time preparing their breakfast and then I began to help do cleaning in our house, which made me tired and exhausted.（运用了现在分词作状语以及which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】It is their selfless and unconditional love that l should appreciate.（运用了强调句型强调句子宾语）
8．（2023春·湖南长沙·麓山国际实验学校校考）你校正在进行主题是“保护莫高窟文化遗产是否值得”的英语讨论活动，对此不同的人有不同的看法。请写一篇短文，简述正反双方的观点及理由，并发表自己的看法。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Whether it is Worthwhile to Protect the Mogao Caves
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【答案】One possible version:
Whether it is Worthwhile to Protect the Mogao Caves
Recently our class had a heated discussion about whether it is important to protect cultural heritage — the Mogao Caves.
About 80% of the students consider it important to protect the Mogao Caves. They think that the cultural heritage is a symbol of great ancient civilization. Most cultural heritage is related to great people, so protecting it shows respect for them. Cultural heritage is of great value and protecting it can make us feel proud of our nation.
However, the rest hold the opinion that it doesn’t matter whether the Mogao Caves is protected. They think it won’t promote the development of society, so it is a waste of time and money to protect it.
As far as I’m concerned, our country’s cultural heritage protection has made great progress, but many problems still exist and need to be solved. Therefore, we should keep our mind clear and take more effective steps to better protect cultural heritage. I think it is significant to protect the Mogao Caves.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于英语中的议论文写作。要求考生就“保护莫高窟文化遗产是否值得”阐述不同人的看法，简述正反双方的观点及理由，并发表自己的看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
与……相关：be related to → be linked to
对……感到自豪：be proud of → take pride in
在某人看来：As far as sb.be concerned→ in one’s opinion
重要的：significant→ important/essential
2.句式拓展
句式转换
原句：As far as I’m concerned, our country’s cultural heritage protection has made great progress, but many problems still exist and need to be solved.
拓展句：As far as I’m concerned, though our country’s cultural heritage protection has made great progress, many problems still exist and need to be solved.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Recently our class had a heated discussion about whether it is important to protect cultural heritage — the Mogao Caves.（运用了whether引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】They think it won’t promote the development of society, so it is a waste of time and money to protect it.（运用了省略that的宾语从句和so引导的并列句）
9．（2023春·湖南长沙·长沙一中校考）假定你是某国际学校校报的编辑。你们栏目准备创办主题为“Heroes Around Me”的征文活动，邀请同学们投稿讲述身边楷模的故事。请你用英文写一则征稿启事，内容包括：
1.活动目的；
2.稿件要求(内容、词数等)；
3.截止时间及交稿方式。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Contributions Wanted
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School English Newspaper
【答案】Contributions Wanted
In a bid to share inspiring stories about heroes and let the whole school learn from them, our school newspaper is expecting writings with the theme of “Heroes Around Me”. Here are some related details.
Everyone is welcome to write articles about a hero around you. Your article is required to include the hero’s name, his/her great spirit and heroic deeds that touch you and your article should be delivered before the deadline. What you write should be accurate and real. Besides, essays contributed are supposed to be limited within 300 words and written in English only. And remember to submit your essays to Englishcorner@126.com before May 30.
Looking forward to your active participation.
School English Newspaper
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇征稿，要求考生以某国际学校校报编辑的身份，向同学们征集主题为“Heroes Around Me”的征文。
【详解】1.词汇积累
讲述：share→ relate
文章：writings → essays
相关的：related→ relevant
创作：write→ compose
2.句式拓展
简单句变非谓语动词短语作状语
原句：Your article is required to include the hero’s name, his/her great spirit and heroic deeds that touch you and your article should be delivered before the deadline.
拓展句：Required to include the hero’s name, his/her great spirit and heroic deeds that touch you, your article should be delivered before the deadline.
【点睛】【高分句型1】What you write should be accurate and real.（主语从句）
【高分句型2】Besides, essays contributed are supposed to be limited within 300 words and written in English only.（非谓语动词作后置定语、被动语态）
10．（2023春·湖南·校联考期中）请阅读下面图画，按要求写一篇英语短文。

内容包括：
1. 简述图片内容；
2. 谈谈你的感想。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】One possible version:
As is described in the picture, the earth is suffering from high concentrations of carbon dioxide and is in urgent need of help. To help ease this situation, it is high time that we should live a low carbon life. To start with, we can choose walking or public transportation to help reduce carbon dioxide emission. In addition, reducing the use of tissues or replacing them with handkerchiefs is also of great help. The list goes on and on.
Take such environmentally friendly measures and we can make a difference to building a human community with a shared future.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于看图作文。要求考生根据图画内容写一篇英语短文，简述图片内容，谈谈个人感想。
【详解】1.词汇积累
描述/展示：describe→show/illustrate/indicate
减轻：ease→alleviate/reduce
首先：to start with→firstly/first of all
措施/行动：measure→action
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To start with, we can choose walking or public transportation to help reduce carbon dioxide emission.
拓展句：To start with, we can choose walking or public transportation, which helps reduce carbon dioxide emission.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As is described in the picture, the Earth is suffering from high concentrations of carbon dioxide and is in urgent need of help.（运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】To help ease this situation, it is high time that we should live a low carbon life.（运用了“it is high time that+主语+should+动词原形”的虚拟语气句式）