2024届高考英语一轮复习专题二读后续写第四节运用篇Type1惊险类课件
展开★典例辅导 (2022届辽宁沈阳第三十一中学阶段测试)Last year, I went t Ls Angeles fr a hliday after I wn the Vans US Open f Surfing Champinship. It was a sunny day, with a blue, cludless sky ver a calm sea. I went utside and climbed up nt the rf fr a break. I sat and watched peple swimming in the sea. But then, as I lked in the distance, I saw a series f three r fur big waves heading tward the shre. I’d seen these mini-tsunamis(海啸) many times befre. They were heading at speed twards the swimming area. Mst peple knew t lk ut fr them, but frm the screams that started cming frm the beach, I culd tell smene was in truble.
Withut thinking, I ran dwn int the street, grabbing my bdybard(冲浪板) n the way. I shuted at a stranger t call the lifeguard. My neighbur Tm had heard the screaming as well and was als utside with his bdybard, s tgether we rushed t the steps that led dwn t the beach.
When we gt dwn there, we discvered the waves had pulled tw bys int the pen sea.I knew that the nearest bat wuld take at least 30 minutes t reach us. I wasn’t used t this srt f emergency — I’d never been trained as a lifeguard — but I didn’t think twice abut trying t save them. I suppse in a way I wanted t impress everyne; at 19, a deal like that can seem like a gd pprtunity t shw ff.
Tm and I dived int the water. It tk us 10 minutes t lcate them.When we finally reached them, they were barely able t stay aflat(漂浮的), their heads bbbing up and dwn in the water. We culd tell they were still alive frm their small breaths but it was clear they wuldn’t have been able t stay there much lnger. Tm and I held the bys and pulled them ver ur bards.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。We began pushing them back t the shre, but the waves were getting strnger._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
When we arrived at the hspital, the tw kids were in better cnditin. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作提引】 本文以事件发展为线索展开。作者在一次海啸中,意外发现了有人遇到危险,于是和邻居一起前往救助。作者当时在某种程度上,是想给每个人留下深刻印象:19岁去海里救人,这似乎是一个很好的炫耀机会。段落续写:①由第一段内容“我们开始把他们推回岸边,但是海浪越来越大。”可知,应该是作者面对这种情况决定等待,因此要详细地描述作者他们等待的心情和当时海面的变化,以及最终获救。②由第二段内容“当我们到达医院的时候,两个孩子的情况都很好。”可知,本段应该描写“我”对这次营救别人的心理变化和感悟。文章最后提到帮助别人是无价的,每个人都应该成为一名救生员。
续写线索:救援遇险——等待援助——获得援助——事后感悟。词汇甄选:行为类:①来到:arrival/reach②求救:help/yelled ut fr help情绪类:①绝望:eagerly hpeless/helplessly②积极:merry/praise③内心活动:relief/shw ff/ashamed
【参考范文】We began pushing them back t the shre, but the waves were getting strnger. We had t wait. We eagerly hping fr the arrival f the saving bat. The wild wind blew and the freezing sea water clapped ur bdies cntinuusly. 30 minutes seemed much lnger as we just helplessly flated n the bundless sea. After a lng time, a light spt appeared in the distance! We waved ur hands and yelled ut fr help. The bat finally reached us and tk all f us back t the shre. The tw children were immediately sent t the nearest hspital.
When we arrived at the hspital, the tw kids were in better cnditin. Picturing what the merry scene wuld be, relief lay in my heart and happiness etched n my face. The next mrning, all the peple I met smiled t me and culd nt stp praising me. It seemed like a gd pprtunity t shw myself ff, but I didn’t mean t. In fact, I was ashamed I had thught abut it. It ccurred t me that helping thers was priceless and everyne shuld be a lifeguard.
★模拟专练♥Test 1(2022届江苏省南通期末测试)Ever since he was a kid, Clin had taken great interest in hiking. T celebrate his 40th birthday, he planned t climb Muntain Sunshine.The night befre his jurney, Clin filled his backpack with hiking ples, a hmemade hamburger, and sme ther necessities.He drve ff at 7:00 a.m. the next day, his muntain bike in the trunk(后备厢). When he was already n the way, he suddenly realized there was a pssibility f bear attack.
Abut an hur later,he arrived at a camp and checked in.“Is there anything yu need?” Vit, the camp manager,asked him.“Bear spray(驱熊喷雾),” said Clin.After finding a bttle, Vit ffered him a ride.They trucked alng a rad until the frest gt t thick. As Clin put his muntain bike against a bush s that he culd recver it n the way back, Vit said, “I’ll cme fr yu if yu’re nt back when the night falls.” “Nthing t wrry abut,” Clin replied in a cnfident vice.
With the bear spray in ne pcket, Clin started hiking. He marked his trail(踪迹) and made lts f nise t drive away any curius animals.Befre he knew it, it was getting dark. Nt wanting t get caught in the dark, and satisfied with what he’d finished that day, he started t climb dwn the muntain, and sn recvered his bike.As he passed a marker shwing 3 kilmeters away frm the camp, he suddenly stpped his bike—a bear std in the middle f the narrw rad, sme hundred meters away. Knwing it culd easily attack him if he sped up, Clin decided nt t anger the bear.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。The animal came in his directin, clser and clser. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________At that very mment, a truck stpped right in frnt f him. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】The animal came in his directin, clser and clser. Hands shaking, Clin grabbed the hamburger ut f his backpack, and threw it beside the bear, hping it wuld attract the animal. Hwever, the bear just tk ne smell, and then turned back, walking n.With the distance getting s clse, Clin tk ut the spray quickly and fired it at the bear. T his relief, it fell back, shaking its head.Seeing this, Clin rde tward the camp as quickly as he culd. Sadly, a mment later, he heard the bear raring and running after him.
At that very mment, a truck stpped right in frnt f him. “Get in!” Smene shuted. It was Vit!Withut any hesitatin, Clin jumped ff his bike and gt int the truck, shutting the dr just befre the bear caught him.S angry was the bear that it kept raring and pushing the truck vilently. After what seemed ages, it gave up, turned arund, and disappeared int the wds. With his heart still in his thrat, Clin hugged his life-saver and thanked him again and again. Perhaps, he wuld never frget the life-risking experience fr the rest f his life.
♥Test 2(2022届福建省德化一中月考)My husband and I gt t experience a ttal stranger’s kindness and genersity first-hand during a 10-day trip acrss the High Atlas Muntains and the Sahara Desert.On ur secnd-t-last day in Mrcc, we happily tk a trip t Essauira, an ld and beautiful seaside twn n the Atlantic. During the jurney there, we stpped at an Argan cperative(合作社), where we gt t taste sme Argan il and hney. After that, we headed where we stayed. We arrived at ur small guesthuse in Essauira at arund dinnertime, and n ur way t a lcal restaurant my husband started t feel unwell. He went back t ur guesthuse while I had dinner with sme friends.
When I gt back t ur guesthuse after dinner, I fund my husband sitting n the bathrm flr, lking very pale. He had been sick abut six times in an hur. He spent the rest f the night in the bathrm, getting very familiar with the huse’s pipe. Our main suspect was the Argan hney—it prbably didn’t agree with him.
At abut 6:00 a.m., my husband finally managed t leave the bathrm and crawl int bed. He was very weak and dehydrated(脱水的), s I went dwn t the receptin t buy a bttle f water. When I gt t the lbby(门厅), I fund a yung man behind the desk, wh didn’t lk lder than 18, and explained t him that my husband was sick and I needed t buy sme bttled water fr him. Our huse was very small and basic and didn’t have a restaurant r cafe. The yung man infrmed me that they didn’t sell any drinks at the huse, s I asked him where the nearest shp was.
I lked ut f the windw and my heart started t race. I didn’t fancy risking ging int the unfamiliar streets f the Medina in the dark, all by myself. In fact, I was afraid f it.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。Instead f giving me directins t the nearest shp, the yung man asked me t wait fr him there. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I handed him a 50-Dirham nte(abut 5 EUR) fr the water. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Instead f giving me directins t the nearest shp, the yung man asked me t wait fr him there. He ppped utside and disappeared in the dark quickly. I was wndering what he wuld d when he reappeared in abut fifteen minutes, ut f breath and carrying a large bttle f water. Yu can’t imagine the relief that washed ver me when I saw him. He gave me the bttle and asked me t give my husband sme water quickly.
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