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2024届高考英语一轮复习专题二读后续写第四节运用篇Type2励志类课件
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★典例辅导(2022届河北省邯郸期末测试)My knees started shaking, yet my bdy frze. It felt as thugh my sul departed my bdy and I had n cntrl ver it. Anxiusly, I lked thrugh the rster(名单) psted n the wall f the lcker rm. My heart was beating harder and harder as I slwly saw all my friends’ names n that list but culd nt find mine. At that mment, I frze. I just culd nt accept that all my friends were n the basketball team while I was nt.
I was s cnvinced there was a mistake that I went and fund the cach. “Hey cach, are yu sure that the rster yu psted is crrect?” I asked anxiusly, dreading(担心) his answer.“Yes, the names n the list are finalized. Srry if yu did nt make it this year, there is always next year,” the cach replied.
I culd feel the ht, bitter tears filling my eyes, and I ran ut f the rm as fast as I culd. Trying t frget abut the situatin, I headed ver t the cafeteria t buy sme fd. I felt dead inside, like nthing mattered. Walking was such a burden that it felt as if I had a 100-pund weight tied t my backpack. My mind was als blank fr the rest f the schl day. Everything my teachers said went in ne ear and ut the ther.
After schl, as I walked t the parking lt t get picked up, I saw all my friends gathered near the rear f the lt, celebrating and jking arund. I detured(绕道) arund the side f the schl t avid them, trying nt t think abut being the nly ne in ur friend grup failing t make the team.I saw my father’s car pull up near the schl lt, and I walked up t the car and gt in. He smiled at me, played the radi, and started driving hme.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。Nticing my bad md, he asked me what was wrng. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inspired by what my father said, I decided t wrk tward my gal. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作提引】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者满怀信心却没能进入校篮球队,作者感到非常难过,心不在焉地熬到放学后爸爸开车来接作者的故事。段落续写:①由第一段首句内容“注意到我情绪不好,他问我怎么了。”可知,第一段可描写作者向爸爸讲述事情的经过及爸爸鼓励作者;②由第二段首句内容“我被爸爸说的话所鼓舞,决定朝着我的目标努力。”可知,第二段可描写作者努力训练最终入选球队。
续写线索:告诉爸爸为什么难过——爸爸安慰鼓励——努力训练——被教练认可词汇甄选:行为类:①告诉:tell/infrm sb. f sth.②训练:practice/train③认可:recgnize/accept情绪类:①悲伤:srrw/grief②高兴:delight/happiness
【参考范文】Nticing my bad md, he asked me what was wrng. Full f srrw, I tld him tearfully, “I wanted t jin ur schl basketball team s much and I practised hard. But I didn’t make it.” Hearing what I said, my father cmfrted me, “I hpe that the unexpected failure will nt let yu dwn. Success is never an easy task, but needs painstaking effrts and patience. I believe yu can make it.”
Inspired by what my father said, I decided t wrk tward my gal. I made a much tighter schedule frm then n. I practised hard fr an hur every day t imprve the basic skills and strength. T my delight, I was finally recgnized by the cach, wh said that I shwed great talent in sprts.
★模拟专练♥Test 1(2022届汕头市金山中学期中测试)Mike tk the last bite f the chclate ice cream and jumped int the car with his parents. They headed ff t the Olympic-sized pl fr the big swim meet.When his race came up, Mike was cnfident. He was strng and swift and wn first place, making him the fastest by in his age grup.
“Cngratulatins,” said his father. His mther gave him a hug, even thugh he was wet.A week later, it was time fr anther swim meet and Mike decided t eat the same ice cream. He thught that it was his luck ice cream and that it might help him win again.He tk first place again in his race. Mike was feeling pretty gd. Since then, Mike has decided t have the same ice cream befre every swim meet and has always wn. Several mnths passed and Mike was feeling unbeatable. Althugh he wuldn’t admit it, all the ice cream was adding punds t his athletic swimmer’s build.
It didn’t take lng befre the luck ice cream had lst its magic.Mike started t slip t secnd place and then third place in his races. His scres kept wrsening and Mike felt really bad. He knew what was wrng. But he culdn’t admit it t himself and especially t his parents. He did nt want t disappint them.
One day, his mther sat dwn at the table with him and said, “Mike, we knw yu lve ice cream but maybe it’s nt healthy fr yur bdy t eat s much f it. Yur father and I think it is making yu gain weight. Is it OK fr us t quit the sweet treats fr a while, especially befre yu g fr the final cmpetitin? In rder t strengthen yur muscles, yur father will g running with yu three days a week. We think it will help yu feel better.”
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。It was the last meet f the seasn, and Mike wasn’t sure what t expect. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Finally came the end f the race. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】It was the last meet f the seasn, and Mike wasn’t sure what t expect. He’d been training hard with his dad and staying away frm the rich desserts he enjyed s much. He felt healthy again, but he didn’t knw if he still had any speed in the pl. As he dve int the water, he kicked his legs and stretched his arms as far as he culd. This race was alng with several laps. Therefre, Mike tried his best t keep his energy level up even thugh he began feeling tired.
Finally came the end f the race. Mike’s jaw drpped as he realized he had beaten his wn best time, and everyne else’s, t. Mike had wn his race, and he had als qualified fr the natinal champinships. The audience and his teammates cheered ludly, and his parents were grinning frm ear t ear. “Hey champ, let’s g and grab sme f yur favurite ice cream and celebrate!” said his father. “Thanks, Dad, but I’ll pass ff the ice cream; it’s nt such a lucky charm after all!”
♥Test 2(2022届广州市期末测试)Fr many years, I had a recurring(重复出现的) dream. I was a little girl again, rushing abut, trying t get ready fr schl.“Hurry, yu’ll be late fr schl,” my mther called t me.“I am hurrying, Mm! What did I d with my bks?”
Deep inside I knew where the dream came frm. It was abut sme unfinished business in my life. As a kid, I lved everything abut schl. I lved bks, teachers, tests and hmewrk. Mst f all I lnged t smeday march dwn the aisle t receive my diplma. That seemed mre appealing even than getting married.But at 15, I had t drp ut because my parents culdn’t affrd the tuitin. My hpe f getting a diplma was dead, r s I thught. Pretty sn, I married and had three children, and I thught,“There ges my diplma.”
Even s, I wanted my children t be educated. But Linda, ur yungest child, had juvenile arthritis in her hands and knees, which made it impssible fr her t functin in a nrmal classrm. I felt really srry fr her and I didn’t want her t live her life with regret. I didn’t give up hpe f her being back t schl in sme way. One day, I saw an ad in the newspaper fr evening curses. “That’s the answer,” I said t myself. Linda always feels better in the evening, s I’ll just sign her up fr night schl.
Linda was busy filling ut enrllment(入学) frms when the secretary said,“Mrs. Schantz, why dn’t yu cme back t schl?”I laughed, “There’s n way! I’m 55!” But he persisted, and befre I knew what I had dne, I was enrlled fr classes in English and crafts. “This is nly an experiment,” I warned him, but he just smiled. S, I tld myself t try fr just a semester and t see if it wuld wrk. Anyway, my dream was still there in my heart.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。It was exciting t g t schl again but it was n game. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Linda and I saw each ther thrugh all these years. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】It was exciting t g t schl again but it was n game. Sitting in a classrm full f kids was awkward, even if mst f them were respectful and encuraging. During the day, I was still a busy married wman having lads f husewrk t d. In the evening, I was a hardwrking student wrking n my curses. T my surprise, bth Linda and I did very well in night schl. I went back again the next semester, and my grades steadily imprved.
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