2024届高考英语一轮复习专题三写作提升第四节甄选句式课件

这是一份2024届高考英语一轮复习专题三写作提升第四节甄选句式课件，共60页。

句式单一、缺乏生气的文章，哪怕无任何错误也不可能得高分。精彩句式的合理使用会使文章极具可读性。考生在写作时应多运用一些高级句式和复合句，并注意句式的灵活多变，让文章读起来抑扬顿挫，让考生深厚的语言功底得以体现，让作文跨上五档线!本讲重点阐述句式的甄选与精彩运用。
★特殊句式在写作中，特殊句式的运用，能体现文章的节奏感与表达效果。1.运用强调句/强调形式。用It is…that…句型或用助动词进行强调，突出语意。I finally made this chice fr these reasns.→It was fr these reasns that I finally made this chice.因为这些原因，我最终做出了这个选择。I believe hard wrk will pay ff!→I d believe hard wrk will pay ff!我相信努力工作会有回报的!
2.运用倒装句。偶尔灵活运用倒装句，可增强说服力。I didn’t realize wrds culd be pwerful in bth psitive and negative ways until then.→Nt until then did I realize wrds culd be pwerful in bth psitive and negative ways.直到那时，我才意识到语言在积极和消极方面都有很强的力量。
3.运用省略句。达到言简意赅的效果。I hpe that yu will find a gd jb.→Hpe yu will find a gd jb.希望你能找到一份好工作。While we travel alng the way, we can enjy the beautiful scenery as well as the new lks f the villages and twns.→While travelling alng the way, we can enjy the beautiful scenery as well as the new lks f the villages and twns.当我们沿途旅行时，可以欣赏美丽的风景以及村庄和城镇的新面貌。
4.运用虚拟语气It is time fr bth children and parents t take actin t make small changes.→It is high time that bth children and parents tk/shuld take actin t make small changes.确实到了孩子和父母行动起来做出改变的时候了。
5.运用被动句被动语态在书面表达中属于高级句式，它们的合理运用能给文章增色添彩。英文中被动语态的使用比汉语更多、更普遍。一般说来，当强调动作的承受者、不必说出动作的执行者或执行者不明确时，常使用被动语态。被动语态因为更突出客观事实而被广泛使用。所以同学们在写作时也应该注意多用被动语态，以提升写作表达档次。Nwadays, we are using mre and mre English wrds in the Chinese language.→Nwadays, mre and mre English wrds are being used in the Chinese language.当下，越来越多的英语词汇在汉语中被得以使用。
6.有关it的句式结构It is necessary t hld an bjective attitude twards ratings.(it作形式主语)有必要对评级保持客观的态度。
7.with/withut的复合结构写作时，我们可以利用with/withut的复合结构让句子结构紧凑，言简意明。若能合理利用，“好处”多多，不容小觑。If yu are n the team, we are cnfident that we can win the game.→With yu n the team, we are cnfident that we can win the game.如果有你在团队里，我们相信我们能赢得比赛。He culd nt finish the wrk withut me t help him.(withut+prn.+t d)没有我帮他，他不可能完成这项工作。
She fell asleep with the light burning.(with+n.+ding)灯亮着，她睡着了。The cnference hurriedly finished withut a single agreement reached.(withut+n.+dne)会议很快就结束了，没达成任何协议。
[跟踪练习1]根据所给提示升级句子1.Nt nly yur enthusiasm but als yur teamwrk and gd spirits impress us.(强调句)→　　　　 　　　　nt nly yur enthusiasm but als yur teamwrk and gd spirits 　　　impress us. 【答案】It is; that
2.He didn’t realize the lve we have fr ur families is imprtant until he went thrugh real hardship. (强调句)→　　　　 ________________　　he went thrugh real hardship 　　　　he realized the lve we have fr ur families is imprtant. 【答案】It was nt until; that
3.We study happily and effectively nly in this way.(倒装句)→　　　　 ________________________________study happily and effectively. 【答案】Only in this way can we
4.When it is built up/set up, the new stadium will becme the new landmark in ur schl.(省略句)→　　　　 ________　　　, the new stadium will becme the new landmark in ur schl. 【答案】When built up/set up
5.It is true that many things determine ur future.→It is true that ur future ________________　many things.(被动语态) 【答案】is determined by
6.I suggest that yu(shuld)make friends with peple having different characteristics r backgrunds.(被动语态+形式主语)→　　　　 ________________　　yu(shuld)make friends with peple having different characteristics r backgrunds. 【答案】It is suggested that
★运用三大从句1.增加亮点的定语从句If they ften cheat in the exams,they will frm a bad habit,which will have a bad effect n their life.如果他们经常考试作弊，就会养成坏习惯，这会对他们的人生产生恶劣的影响。I can well remember the incident that happened n a rainy Sunday afternn.我可以清楚地记得，事故发生在一个下雨的星期天下午。
2.提升档次的名词性从句I am sure that with yur great effrts,yu will enjy a clrful and fruitful life.我确信，在你的巨大努力下，你的生活会丰富多彩。Being respnsible is what it takes t make a better sciety.有责任感是创造一个更好的社会的必要条件。
3.吸引眼球的状语从句N matter hw rdinary a jb is,it plays a part in sciety and therefre deserves ur due respect.无论多么普通的工作，都在社会中起一定的作用，因此值得我们应有的尊重。
[跟踪练习2]根据所给出的汉语提示完成句子1.By serving thers, a persn fcuses n smene ther than himself, ________________very eye-pening and rewarding. 通过为别人服务，一个人会关注别人而不是自己，这样做能开阔眼界，并从中受益。【答案】which can be
2.The teacher explains grammar rules in simple wrds, ________________　. 老师用简单的语言解释语法规则，这让学生很容易理解。【答案】which is easy fr students t understand
3.________________　　　　 has a life-lng effect n their children. 父母的言行会影响孩子一生。【答案】What parents say and d4.Being a gd listener is a gd quality and that’s ________________. 倾听是一种优秀的品质，那是维系友谊所需要的。【答案】what it takes t maintain friendship
5.One big advantage f the curse is ________________________________　. 这门课程的一大好处是它能够帮助学生掌握英语写作技能。【答案】that it helps students acquire English writing skills
6.The Internet is great fr keeping in tuch, ________________________　　　. 互联网是很好的联系方式，电话留言和手机短信现在很少使用了。【答案】while telephne messages and text messages are seldm used nw
7.________________　　, we felt mre and mre cnfident and culdn’t wait fr it. 随着比赛的临近，我们感到越来越自信，迫不及待地想参加。【答案】As the cmpetitin was appraching
★活用非谓语动词，手法老道Sme riders f e-bikes and bicycles cme and g in all directins, ignring traffic lights and ther vehicles.(现在分词作状语)一些骑电动车和自行车的人朝四面八方往来穿梭，忽视交通灯和其他车辆。I feel quite srry fr that. I begin t think abut what t d t help.→Feeling quite srry fr that, I begin t think abut what t d t help.(现在分词作状语)对此我感到很抱歉，我开始考虑怎样做才能提供帮助。
Because I was amazed at hw skillful they were, I determined t be just as gd as them.→Amazed at hw skillful they were, I determined t be just as gd as them.(过去分词作状语)我惊讶于他们的技术，决心要和他们一样好。
[跟踪练习3]根据所给出的汉语提示完成句子1.Nwadays it is cnvenient fr peple ________________________　　　. 现在人们用手机付账非常方便。【答案】t pay bills with the mbile phne
2.________________, I figured it was time t get serius abut lsing weight. 称完体重，我想是认真考虑减肥的时候了。【答案】Having weighed myself
3.________________________　　　, we failed t cmplete the task n time. 碰到这么多麻烦，我们没能按时完成任务。【答案】Faced with s much truble
★轻灵的舞者——无灵主语句　　所谓的无灵主语句，即无生命的事物作主语来展开句子。形象地说，无灵主语句如同轻灵的舞者，翩然舞动在自由的天空下，不时给烈日炙烤的生灵送去一阵微风，间或在波澜不惊的水面激起一丝涟漪。 从充当句子主语的词语来看，无灵主语句大体有以下几类：1.表示时间、地点等的名词作主语的句子。这类无灵主语句常用see, find, witness等动词作谓语，往往带有比喻或拟人的修辞手法。As is universally acknwledged, the Yellw Crane Twer has witnessed the histry f Wuhan.众所周知，黄鹤楼见证了武汉的历史变迁。
2.表示生理、心理状态的名词作主语的句子。此类句子可以为作文增加血肉，注入活力，使文章瞬间变得丰满起来。Grief and srrw hit me like a blt frm the blue.悲痛如晴天霹雳一般击中了我。3.表示行为、动作意义的名词作主语的句子。这极有利于增加主语的多样性，吸引读者的目光。Being a gd listener really enables us t get clser t each ther.善于倾听确实可以拉近我们彼此的距离。
4.表示情景、自然现象的名词作主语。使用此类表达，展开的句子显得更为生动形象。A heavy rain visited the city.这个城市刚下过一场大雨。
[跟踪练习4]用无灵主语句翻译句子1.获得实践经验的强烈渴望促使我向你递交了我的申请。【答案】A strng desire fr practical experience inspired me t send my applicatin t yu.2.寒假来临，我得知你将不会回到自己的国家。【答案】The winter vacatin is appraching, and I get the news that yu will nt g back t yur cuntry.
3.格林先生，我无法用言语表达对您的谢意。【答案】N wrds are strng enugh t express my gratitude t yu, Mr. Green.4.我原打算去机场接李明叔叔，但一些紧急事件把我困在了办公室。【答案】I had intended t pick up my uncle Li Ming at the airprt, but sme emergencies trapped me in the ffice.
5.4月12日——令人难忘的一天——见证了我们班同学的一次极有意义的经历。【答案】April 12th, a memrable day, witnessed a meaningful experience f ur class.6.据我所知，在这座体育馆里已经举行过许多场激动人心的足球比赛。【答案】As I knw, this stadium has seen many thrilling ftball games.
★表强烈情感的双重否定否定加否定变成强烈的肯定。在英语作文中，将双重否定用得恰到好处，会让你的作文成功逆袭，达到出奇制胜的效果。1.双重否定的构成形式：n/nt/never/nthing…+否定的实词或虚词Withut yur help, I wuld nt have made such great prgress in English-learning.没有你的帮助，我的英语学习就不会取得这么大的进步。2.never/nt+fail t d sth.和never/nt miss sth.As lng as yu discver, yu will nt miss the nice things in life.只要你去发现，你就不会错过生活中的美好。
3.There is n denying that…/It can’t be denied that… (不可否认……)/There is n dubt that…(毫无疑问……)There is n dubt that ur educatinal system leaves smething t be imprved.毫无疑问，我们的教育制度有待改进。
[跟踪练习5]请用双重否定的形式翻译句子1.另外，如果没有你的帮助，我就不会成为英语尖子生，也不会赢得英语演讲比赛。【答案】Additinally, withut yur help, I wuld nt have been a tp student in English and wuld nt have wn the English Speech Cntest.2.不可否认，这些消费排名可能给消费者带来方便，但它们也常常会是误导和不可靠的。【答案】There is n denying that such ratings might bring cnvenience t cnsumers, but they are ften misleading and unreliable.
3.这些天，违反交通规则和乱扔杂物很常见，这给生活和环境带来了严重损害。【答案】These days, breaking traffic rules and littering are nt uncmmn, causing serius harm t life and envirnment.4.对大部分人来说，没有鼠标，操作计算机几乎不可能，更不用说上网。【答案】Fr mst peple, it’s almst impssible t perate a cmputer withut a muse, let alne surf the Internet.
5.似乎很多人没有电视、手机或网络，就不能玩得很开心。【答案】It seems that many peple cannt enjy themselves withut TV, cellphnes r the Internet.
★适时感叹，抒发情感Hw cnsiderate f yu t remember my birthday!您真的很体贴，还记得我的生日。
★运用高级表达句式 掌握一些高级句型是高考英语习作提分的关键!下面列举了部分常用的句式，以供同学们进行积累和记忆。1.…cannt emphasize the imprtance f…t much.(……再怎么强调……的重要性也不为过。)We cannt emphasize the imprtance f prtecting ur eyes t much.我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。2.It is universally acknwledged+that从句 (全世界都知道……)It is universally acknwledged that trees are indispensable t us.全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。
3.形容词/名词(前不加冠词)/动词原形+as+从句主语+be/助动词，主句主语+谓语……(虽然……)(as引导让步状语从句的倒装)Rich as their cuntry is, the qualities f their living are by n means satisfactry.虽然他们的国家富有，但是他们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。4.Nthing is+形容词比较级+than t+动词原形Nthing is mre imprtant than t receive educatin.没有什么比接受教育更重要的事。
5.There is n denying that+主语+谓语(不可否认的……)There is n denying that the qualities f their living have gne frm bad t wrse.不可否认的是，他们的生活品质已经每况愈下。6.The+形容词比较级，the+形容词比较级 (越……越……)The harder yu wrk, the mre prgress yu will make.你越努力，你就越进步。The mre bks we read, the mre learned we will becme.我们书读越多，我们越有学问。
7.On n accunt can we…(我们绝对不能……)On n accunt can we ignre the value f knwledge.我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。8.It is cnceivable that …(可想而知……)/It is bvius that …(明显……)/It is apparent that …(显然……)It is cnceivable that knwledge plays an imprtant rle in ur life.可想而知，知识在我们的人生中扮演着重要的角色。
9.It is time+主语+过去式(该是……的时候了)It is time the authrities cncerned tk prper steps t slve the traffic prblems.有关当局该采取适当的措施来解决交通问题了。10.An advantage f…is that …(……的优点之一是……)An advantage f using the slar energy is that it wn’t create/prduce any pllutin.使用太阳能的优点之一是它不会产生任何污染。
11.The reasn why … is that …(……的原因是……)The reasn why we have t grw trees is that they can prvide us with fresh air/supply fresh air t us.我们必须种树的原因是它们能为我们提供新鲜的空气。
★运用谚语和名言1.Time and tide wait fr n man.岁月不饶人。2.A faithful friend is hard t find. 知音难觅。3.It’s never t late t learn. 活到老，学到老。4.Actins speak luder than wrds.事实胜于雄辩。5.A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情。6.A gd beginning makes a gd ending.善始者善终。7.A bird in the hand is wrth tw in the bush. 一鸟在手胜过双鸟在林。
8.Rses given, fragrance in hand.赠人玫瑰，手留余香。9.An idle yuth, a needy age.少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。10.Genius is ne percent inspiratin and ninety-nine percent perspiratin.天才是1%的灵感加99%的汗水。11.Nthing is impssible fr a willing heart. 心之所愿，无所不成。12.He wh has never been t the Great Wall is nt a true man. 不到长城非好汉。
13.A candle lights thers and cnsumes itself. 蜡烛照亮别人，却毁灭了自己。14.Cnfidence in yurself is the first step n the rad t success. 自信是走向成功的第一步。15.Early t bed and early t rise makes a man healthy, wealth and wise.早睡早起身体好。
【综合专练】一、根据所给出的汉语提示完成句子1.在工作的时候，我意识到在烈日下的田野里工作是多么辛苦。(状语从句省略)________　, I realized hw hard it was t wrk in the fields under a ht sun. 【答案】While wrking
2.之后，你可以去上海，在那里待一个星期。(定语从句)After that, yu can g t Shanghai, ________________________________　. 【答案】where yu can stay fr a week
3.不管什么时候我不高兴了，我的朋友们总是让我振作起来。(强调句)Whenever I’m unhappy, 　　　　my friends 　　　　cheer me up. 【答案】it is; wh
4.父母通常有如此高的期望值，以至于孩子觉得很难不辜负父母的期望。(状语从句)Parents usually have 　　　　high expectatins 　　　　their children find it hard t live up t them. 【答案】such; that
5.在我看来，保护地球是每个人的责任。(形式主语)As far as I’m cncerned, it is everyne’s duty ________________________　. 【答案】t prtect the earth
6.显然，网上的一些汉语口语课程有助于你适应汉语环境。(形式主语)________　　　 sme nline curses f spken Chinese can be helpful fr yu t adapt t the Chinese language envirnment. 【答案】It is bvius that
7.尽管忙着上课，我还是设法挤出时间和朋友们出去玩。(as/thugh从句倒装)________________　, I have managed t find time t hang ut with my friends. 【答案】Busy thugh/as I am with the lessns
8.只有当你来到中国时，你才能体验中国的饮食文化。(倒装句)________________________　　　 experience Chinese fd culture. 【答案】Only when yu cme t China can yu
9.我想强调的是你最好带些礼物，比如一本书或一个中国结。(主语从句)________________________　　　 is that yu’d better bring sme gifts,such as a bk r a Chinese knt. 【答案】What I want t stress
10.我建议你申请北京大学的原因是它是中国最好的大学之一。(……的原因)________________　　　　 I suggest yu apply fr Peking University is that it is ne f the best universities in China. 【答案】The reasn why
二、根据汉语提示完成下面的作文Dear Henry,Hw is everything? I am writing t invite yu t jin a paper-cutting shw t be held this Sunday.
1.________________　　(据报道，将有一个中国剪纸展) this Sunday in the art gallery, which is expected t last abut eight hurs frm 8:00 a.m. t 4:00 p.m. I knw yu are always interested in traditinal Chinese culture. 2.________________　(你越了解它，你就会越喜欢它), s I think we can g there tgether. 3.________________　　(不仅要展出各种剪纸作品), but als the craftsmen will shw visitrs 4.________________　　(如何把纸剪成不同的形状)n the spt. I am sure yu will feel amazed at this traditinal Chinese art. Wuld yu like t attend the shw with me this Sunday? 
I’m lking frward t yur early reply.Yurs,Li Hua