专题07 书面表达-备战2024年广东中考英语逆袭练（深圳专用）

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专题07 书面表达
一、材料作文
1．（2023·广东深圳·统考一模）假如你是深圳山河中学的学生义工社团负责人李华，你校将在“五四青年节”举办校园义卖活动为“扶贫公益基金”筹集善款，请根据以下提示撰写宣传海报的英文版内容。
提示：1.目的：弘扬“五四精神”，伸出援助之手；
2.时间：2023年5月4日下午15:00—17:30；
3.地点：学校操场；
4.内容：（1）准备义卖物品（旧书、文具、体育用品、玩具等）；
（2）制作义卖海报；
（3）进行义卖活动；
5.呼吁：……。
参考词汇：校园义卖charity sale
要求：1.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
4.标点正确，书面整洁。
In order to carry forward the spirit of the May 4th Movement ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Join in and give your helping hands!
【答案】例文
In order to carry forward the spirit of the May 4th Movement and extend a helping hand, I am writing to invite you to participate in the big charity sale, which will take place on the playground in our school. It will be held from 15:00 p.m. to 17:30 p.m. on May 4th, 2023.
The charity sale will be hosted by our monitor where we will sell stationery, used books, sports suits, lovely toys, handcrafts and so on, and all proceeds will benefit needy children in the countryside. We are going to make posters and have a charity sale. I know you have showed great interest and promise in our activity, so I hope you can come to take part in it. I think it will be a meaningful experience and let us see it together.
Join in and give your helping hands!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容对校园义卖活动进行介绍，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍活动的目的、地点和时间；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍活动的内容；
第三步，呼吁大家来参加。
[亮点词汇]
①invite sb to do sth邀请某人做某事
②take place举行
③and so on等等
④take part in参加
[高分句型]
①The charity sale will be hosted by our monitor where we will sell stationery, used books, sports suits, lovely toys, handcrafts and so on, and all proceeds will benefit needy children in the countryside.（where引导的定语从句）
②I know you have showed great interest and promise in our activity, so I hope you can come to take part in it.（省略that的宾语从句）
2．（2023·广东深圳·深圳中学校联考一模）深圳是一座有温度的城市。3月是学雷锋月，假如你是学生李华，是深圳市某国际学校的一名学生。下周你所在的学校将举行一系列“学雷锋”活动，请根据以下提示，写一个倡议书，介绍此次活动并号召学校的同学们积极参加，
要点：
1．目的：培养社会责任感，提高交流技巧，帮助有需要的人
2．内容：①看望敬老院老人 ②帮助照顾流浪动物 ③……（补充一点）
3．你的号召与倡议
要求：1.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；
参考词汇：social 社会的
Dear friends,
Shenzhen is a city which can bring people love and warmth. In March, there will be a great event called “Learning from Leifeng”.
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That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】例文
Dear friends,
Shenzhen is a city which can bring people love and warmth. In March, there will be a great event called “Learning from Leifeng”. The following is some detailed information about it.
This event will be held in order to develop students’ sense of social responsibility. At the same time, students can improve their communication skills and help people in need.
There are a series activities during the event. Firstly, we will go to old people’s homes and help them clean their rooms. Secondly, some of us will go to take care of homeless animals. We can feed them or play with them. Thirdly, we will hold a book fair to raise money for the poor. Each student need to bring some books that they don’t need any more.
I think this event will be really educational and meaningful. With every effort we make, we can make a big difference! Hope everyone can take part in it!
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇倡议书；
②时态：时态为“一般将来”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍活动的目的；
第二步，介绍活动的内容。
[亮点词汇]
①at the same time同时
②make a big difference有很大的影响
③take part in参加
[高分句型]
①This event will be held in order to develop students’ sense of social responsibility.（动词不定式作目的状语）
②I think this event will be really educational and meaningfuls.（省略that的宾语从句）
3．（2023·广东深圳·统考模拟预测）你的外国笔友Kathy听说深圳建设了许多绿道，写信来询问有关绿道的情况。请你按以下要点写一封回信，告知她相关细节。
长度
绿道总长度约2400千米
地点
一般修建在公园里，海边，山上
修建绿道的好处
1. 美化城市，完善基础设施；
2. ……
3. ……

提示词：绿道greenway n.    长度length n.    基础设施infrastructure n.
要求：1. 要点齐全，至少补充两个好处，并做适当发挥；2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，书写规范；
3. 字数80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Kathy,
You asked me about the greenways in Shenzhen last time. You know that Shenzhen has built a lot of greenways.
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Do you want to come here and have a look? I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【答案】参考范文：
Dear Kathy,
You asked me about the greenways in Shenzhen last time. You know that Shenzhen has built a lot of greenways. The total length of the greenways here is 2400 km. These greenways are often built in the parks, by the sea, or on the mountains.
Building greenways benefits us in a lot of ways. First, it makes our city more beautiful and improves the infrastructure. In addition, there are more places for citizens to exercise and relax themselves. They can take a walk or ride bikes on the greenways. What’s more, the greenways will attract more tourists to Shenzhen because they can enjoy beautiful scenery, get close to nature, and breathe fresh air along the greenways.
Do you want to come here and have a look? I hope to hear from you soon.
  Yours truly,
Li Hua
【详解】题干解读：题目要求给外国笔友Kathy写一封回信介绍深圳的绿道；要求包含表格中所有内容，并进行适当发挥。
写作指导：此作文时态用一般现在时，采用第三人称口吻。可采用3段落格式，第一段：开门见山，介绍绿道的长度和地点；第二段：描述修建绿道的好处；第三段：欢迎对方来深圳看一看。
二、电子邮件
4．（2023·广东深圳·统考一模）《湿地公约》第十四届缔约方大会在我国成功召开。深圳作为重要的湿地城市，也积极响应公约（Wetlands Convention）号召。假如你是学生李华，是学校环保俱乐部一员，你们俱乐部举行了“湿地保护节”（Wetland Protection Festival）。请根据以下提示给你的外国朋友Mike写一封邮件，介绍此次活动。
要点：1.目的：见证深圳湿地建设的成就；提升环保意识
2.内容：①前往深圳红树林生态公园观赏红树林和鸟类；②深圳湿地摄影展；③……
3.你的感受：①……②……
要求：1.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
4.标点正确，书面整节。
参考词汇：witness 见证；awareness 意识；mangrove forest红树林；Shenzhen Mangrove Ecological Park深圳红树林生态公园；
Dear Mike,
As an important wetland city, Shenzhen is making efforts to answer the call of the Wetlands Convention.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
As an important wetland city, Shenzhen is making efforts to answer the call of the Wetlands Convention.
The purpose of this activity is to witness the achievements of Shenzhen wetland construction and enhance environmental awareness. We went to Shenzhen Mangrove Ecological Park to watch mangrove forests and birds. We also visited the Shenzhen Wetland Photography Exhibition. We have also singed the Convention on the Protection of Wetlands. We are committed to maintaining wetlands. Through this activity, we learn that we live on the same planet and we need to protect wetlands.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍活动目的；
第二步，介绍活动内容；
第三步，介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①make efforts to do努力做某事
②the purpose of……的目的
③need to do sth需要做某事
[高分句型]
①The purpose of this activity is to witness the achievements of Shenzhen wetland construction and enhance environmental awareness.（动词不定式作表语）
②we learn that we live on the same planet and we need to protect wetlands.（that引导的宾语从句）
5．（2022·广东深圳·统考二模）为落实国家教育部提出的加强中小学劳动教育的实施意见，你们学校安排了丰富多彩的劳动教育课。假如你是李华，你的英国笔友 Linda 对你参加的课程很感兴趣，她发来邮件想了解有关情况。请你根据以下提示，给 Linda 回一封邮件。
要点:
1.劳动教育的目的：树立劳动光荣的观念、培养良好的劳动习惯等；
2.具体活动：学习传统手工制作、学做家务等；
3.你对学校开展的劳动教育课的看法。(至少给出两点)
要求:
1.80 词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内;
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校;
3.包含所有要点，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯;
4.条理清楚，语句通顺，标点正确，书面整洁。
参考词汇：劳动教育 the labor education 劳动课the labor lesson/course  手工课 the manual training lesson/course
Dear Linda,
I’m glad to hear from you. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Linda,
I’m glad to hear from you. You say you are interested in our labor course. I would like to share something about it with you.
As we know, the labor course is set to educate students to respect and honor hard work, and form good working habits. In our school, we are offered various Chinese traditional manual training courses, such as paper-cutting. We learn to do housework as well. Some teachers teach us to cook several kinds of simple dishes.
In my view, through the labor education, we students can acquire some life skills. Meanwhile, our school life will become more colorful and meaningful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意补充两点对劳动教育课的看法。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，和笔友分享关于劳动教育课的情况；
第二步，详细介绍开展劳动教育的目的以及具体的活动内容有哪些；
第三步，表达自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②share sth. with sb.和某人分享某物
③form good working habits养成良好的工作习惯
④teach sb. to do sth.教某人做某事
[高分句型]
You say you are interested in our labor course.（省略that的宾语从句）
6．（2023·广东深圳·统考一模）深圳是一座创新型城市，12月是深圳的“创意十二月”。假如你是学生李华，上周你所在的学校举行了“校园创意节”（Creative Campus Festival），请根据以下提示，给你的外国朋友Mike写一封邮件，介绍此次活动。
要点：
1. 目的：丰富校园生活，发展创新能力；
2. 内容：①创意写作大赛 ②机器人展 ③……
3. 你的感受：①……②……
要求：
1. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名：
3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
4. 标点正确，书面整洁。
参考词汇：innovative 创新的 enrich使……丰富
Dear Mike,
Shenzhen is an innovative city. A great event called “Creative December” is held here. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】参考例文
Dear Mike,
Shenzhen is an innovative city. A great event called “Creative December” is held here.
In order to enrich campus life and develop innovation ability, my school held the “Creative Campus Festival” last week. The content of this activity mainly includes creative writing contest, robot exhibition and personal programming design. Through this activity, I learned a lot of knowledge, and I also learned the wonderful ideas of my classmates. I also want to learn relevant knowledge and try to design my own home next time. I hope my dream can come true.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：信件开头结尾以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，不要遗漏提示中的“你的感受”这一要点，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接信件开头，介绍学校举办“校园创意节”的目的；
第二步，根据提示要点介绍活动内容，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，抒发自己在此次活动中的收获或感受并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①enrich campus life丰富校园生活
②develop innovation ability发展创新能力
[高分句型]
①I hope my dream can come true.（省略引导词that引导的宾语从句）
7．（2023·广东深圳·蛇口育才二中校考一模）假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Tony给你发来邮件抱怨他的周末时间都被父母给他安排的培训占据了，他向你了解你及其他中国孩子是否面临同样的问题，并希望了解你对此现象的看法。请你给Tony回复邮件。
写作要点：1.中国孩子周末的普遍情况。
2.你的周末安排。
3.你对父母安排周末培训的看法。
写作要求：1.80词以上，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Dear Tony,
I am sorry to know that you have to attend lots of classes at weekends. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I do hope you can have the freedom to choose what you like to do and enjoy your weekends.
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tony,
I am sorry to know that you have to attend lots of classes at weekends. We Chinese children also have many after-school clubs on weekends, such as music, art, music and so on. So we are busy on weekends too. I go to the Chinese club, math club, English club and basketball club every weekend. Of course, we still have a lot of homework at the weekend, so I’m also very busy. I think parents spend a lot of money to let us go to various clubs so that we can have a better future. So I take every class seriously.
I do hope you can have the freedom to choose what you like to do and enjoy your weekends.
Yours
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一封电子邮件。向朋友Tony介绍中国孩子的周末生活以及自己对此的看法。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时。文章开头和结尾已给出，中间分别介绍中国学生周末的安排以及自己的周末安排，并发表自己对此的看法。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。

三、讲稿
8．（2023·广东深圳·深圳市南山区华侨城中学校考一模）如果把初中三年的学习比作千米长跑的话，那么现在已经跑到了最后一个弯道。现在你班准备就“如何为中考做准备”开一个主题班会，请你根据以下内容写篇发言稿。
身心健康
1.不要熬夜，否则上课容易感觉困，不能认真听讲。
2.保持良好情绪，不要过于担心。
沟通交流
1.多与父母和同学交流。
2.与老师保持联系，不要忘记向老师求助。
学习活动
完成每一次练习，认真对待侮一次考试。
其它
可自由发挥

要求：
1. 词数80个左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 内容必须包括表中的要点，可适当发挥，使短文完整、语言流畅。
3. 可自由发挥一到两点自己的建议……Boys and girls, the senior high entrance examination is coining. What should we do in order to prepare well for the examination? Here are some suggestions._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
With these done, I believe we can be successful in the senior high entrance examination.
【答案】例文
Boys and girls, the senior high entrance examination is coining. What should we do in order to prepare well for the examination? Here are some suggestions.
First of all, don’t stay up, or you will feel sleepy easily and can’t listen carefully. Keep a good mood, don’t worry too much. You should have the courage to solve the problems. Second, you can spend more time communicating with your parents and classmates, and you can share the happiness and sadness with them. Keep in touch with your teachers, don’t forget to ask them for help. Third, read English aloud and keep writing in English. Finish every exercise, take every test seriously, because practice makes perfect. Correcting mistakes in time can help improve your study.
With these done, I believe we can be successful in the senior high entrance examination.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇发言稿。假定你是李平，按照表格中所给信息完成，开头和结尾已经给出，就“如何为中考做准备”补充剩余内容。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第二人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段点明主题，要给出准备中考的建议；第二段详细介绍了身心健康、沟通交流和学习活动方面的建议；第三段结尾，相信这些建议可以提供帮助。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

四、通知
9．（2023·广东深圳·统考一模）深圳正成为一座体育之城，健身文化浓厚。为增强学生们的锻炼意识，你所在的学校将举行“奥运冠军进校园”（Olympic Champions Entering Campus）活动。假定你是校英文报的编辑李华，请你代表校学生会写一则通知发布在校英文报上，预告此次活动。
要点：
1.时间地点：下周五下午，学校田径场；
2.活动内容：①冠军成长故事分享；②冠军体育课；
3.注意事项：①穿运动装；②……
提示词：
track-and-field ground田径场  sportswear运动装
要求：
1.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名；
3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
4.标点正确，书面整洁。
Notice
Shenzhen is becoming a sports city with a strong fitness culture. To enhance the students’ awareness of exercise, our school plans to
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The Students’ Union
【答案】例文
Notice
Shenzhen is becoming a sports city with a strong fitness culture. To enhance the students’ awareness of exercise, our school plans to organize an activity, Olympic Champions Entering Campus. Here are some details.
The activity is scheduled to be held next Friday afternoon on our school track-and-field ground, where three excellent athletes will share their inspiring growth stories, giving students some useful suggestions on how to deal with stress from daily life and study. What will be the most impressive and exciting part is the P. E lessons specially designed by the champions, which is a perfect opportunity for us students to have a close interaction with them.
For convenience and comfort, please make sure to wear sportswear. Besides, it is highly expected that we all interact with the champions actively to show our warmest welcome and respect.
The Students’ Union
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，是一篇通知；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点提示已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，同时注意适当补充和发挥注意事项，使用正确的词汇和句型，注意语法正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，以“这是一些细节”来引出后文；
第二步，具体介绍活动的时间和地点，并介绍活动内容，注意行文的连贯和逻辑性；
第三步，介绍并补充注意事项。
[亮点词汇]
①deal with处理
②a perfect opportunity一个完美的机会
[高分句型]
The activity is scheduled to be held next Friday afternoon on our school track-and-field ground.（被动语态）