2023年中考英语真题分类汇编——专题36 书面表达 考点4 叙事描写类（全国通用）

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专题15 书面表达 考点4 叙事描写类
（2023·湖北孝感·统考中考真题）
亲爱的同学，在你成长的过程中，也许会遇到一些“小烦恼”，自身的调节与朋友的建议可以帮助你成为更好的自己。近期，学校将举行一次相关主题的经验交流会，请你根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇发言稿。
要点提示：
1. 简要介绍你自己(如年龄、爱好……)；
2. 讲述你或你的朋友曾经遇到的问题及感受（如学习中的、同学间的、家庭里的……)；
3. 分享解决问题的方法(如多沟通、听音乐、参与活动……)。
写作要求：
1. 词数90左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 根据要点提示，可以适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
communicate v. 沟通
参考词汇：pressure n. 压力
Hello, everyone! I’m a student in Class 2, Grade 9.
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【答案】例文
Hello, everyone! I’m a student in Class 2, Grade 9. I am 15 years old. I like doing sports. But I used to hate doing sports. It was my mother who changed me.
Once I spent too much watching TV and playing computer games. So my grades were worse and worse. My mother noticed my changes. She had a long conversation with me. She said that spending too much on them was bad for my eyes. She advised me to relax by listening to music and doing sports. She asked me to run for an hour in the morning every day. A few days later, I found running could make me healthy and happy. I could do everything better.
In my opinion, when you meet some difficulties, you can share them with your parents or teachers. They will give you some useful advice.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的个人信息以及爱好；
第二步，分享自己曾经遇到的问题，以及解决的方法；
第三步，提出自己的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth过去常常做某事
②spend time doing sth花费时间做某事
③be bad for对……有坏处
[高分句型]
①She said that spending too much on them was bad for my eyes.（that引导宾语从句，动名词作主语）
② She asked me to run for an hour in the morning every day. （动词不定式作宾补）
（2023·重庆·统考中考真题）
团队协作是21世纪人才必备能力之一。信任、配合、包容、沟通、责任、倾听是团队协作中重要的品质。你校校刊英语专栏以“团队协作”为话题发起征文，请你讲述自己团队协作的经历，分享其中令你最受益的品质及你的感悟，以供他人借鉴和学习。
要求：
1. 80—120词；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息：

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【答案】例文
Working together is important for teenagers.
Last term, Liz, Anne and I entered a science competition. Our task was to create a poster board with information about spaceships. After discussion, each of us got a job. Liz and Anne went to the library to look for more information about spaceships. I searched for the pictures we needed on the internet. The next day, we organized the information and decided what we wanted to put on the board. After that, we spent three days making the poster board. Finally, we won second prize.
When working as a team, I learned how to work well with my partners. I listened to them carefully and I respectfully and confidently expressed my ideas. My communication skills have improved a lot.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“从这次经历中学到什么”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，指出团队合作很重要；
第二步，具体阐述最难忘的一次团队合作经历；
第三步，书写结语，总结这次经历中的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①look for寻找
②search for搜索
③work as a team团队合作
[高分句型]
①The next day, we organized the information and decided what we wanted to put on the board.（what引导的宾语从句）
②I searched for the pictures we needed on the internet.（省略that的定语从句）
（2023·陕西·统考中考真题）
假如你是李涛，你们学校英语社团正在开展以“感恩”为主题的征文活动。请你认真阅读以下通知，并按要求用英语写一篇短文，参加此次活动。
NoticeDear students,
Fathers play a very important role in our life. Today is Father’s Day. How will you thank him? Please write a short passage about your plan.
Here are some questions to help you.
●What do you want to say to him?
●What are you going to do for him?
●Why are you going to do that?
We are looking forward to your passage.
School English Club
参考词汇：
cook a meal, make a gift, take a walk with him, delicious, special,…
要求：
1. 短文必须包括所给要点，选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于70。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。）
Today is Father’s Day.
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【答案】例文
Today is Father’s Day. I want to do something meaningful for him.
First, I will cook a meal for him. My father is very busy but he often makes delicious food for me. So I want to thank him and let him have a rest. Also, I plan to make a special gift by myself. I think he will like it. Last, I am going to take a walk with him. I can tell him interesting stories to make him happy.
All in all, I really love my father. And I really want to say: “I love you, dad.”
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你想对父亲说什么；
第二步，介绍你打算为父亲做什么以及原因；
第三步，最后作小结。
[亮点词汇]
①want to do sth想要做某事
②have a rest休息
③by oneself独自
④all in all总而言之
[高分句型]
①My father is very busy but he often makes delicious food for me.（but连接转折句）
②I can tell him interesting stories to make him happy.（动词不定式作目的状语）
（2023·安徽·统考中考真题）
假定你是李辉，你制作的关于家乡变化的海报在某英文网站展示并获得好评。请结合下面图示信息，用英语写一篇短文向该网站浏览者简述你的制作经历。

注意：
1．短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2．文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
3．词数80～100（短文题目与首句已为你写好，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇： poster（n. 海报）； design（v. & n. 设计）
My Experience of Making a Poster
Last week, I made a poster of the great changes in my hometown.
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【答案】例文：
My Experience of Making a Poster
Last week, I made a poster of the great changes in my hometown. The purpose of making it is to show the rapid development of my hometown in recent years. Firstly, I asked my grandparents about their past living conditions. Then, I found some old photos online to compare the past and present of my hometown. Finally, I sorted the information that I had learned and designed a poster with relevant pictures attached.
This experience helps me know better about my hometown. With its development, people have led better lives and the environment has been improved. I am very happy to see these changes. As a member of this town, I will contribute my own efforts to its development.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“图示信息”中的各个要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接所给开头，介绍制作海报的目的；
第二步，具体阐述制作海报的过程；
第三步，表达从这次经历中学到的东西以及自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①rapid development快速发展
②living conditions生活条件
③sorted the information把信息分类
④lead a better life过上更好的生活
[高分句型]
①Finally, I sorted the information that I had learned and designed a poster with relevant pictures attached.（that引导的定语从句）
②With its development, people have led better lives and the environment has been improved.（现在完成时的被动语态）
（2023·浙江温州·统考中考真题）
请根据以下征文海报，结合所提示的六类英语作业，写一篇英语短文投稿，分享你最喜爱的一类作业及理由，并例举一次相关作业经历谈谈你从中得到的收获。
English homeworkhelps me LEVEL UP!

What kind of English homework do you like best?
Write and share!
Send it to hoppyhomework@learnEnglish.com
注意：
（1）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
（2）词数：110词左右；标题已给出，不计入总词数。
English Homework Helps Me Level Up
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【答案】例文：
English Homework Helps Me Level Up
My favourite kind of English homework is acting out a play. It can help improve my language skills and make me confident.
When I was in Grade 8, my teacher asked us to act out the play Romeo and Juliet in a group of six. It was a big challenge. Firstly, I read the play with group members and we shared our understanding of the play. Then, we chose our roles and practised the lines a lot. My spoken English has improved. In the end, we put on a great show and won praise. Now I’m interested in acting and feel brave enough to show myself in front of the public.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据海报中的内容讲述自己最喜欢的英语作业是什么，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，介绍自己最喜欢的英语作业是什么；
第二步，讲述自己做这项英语作业的示例；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①ask sb. to do sth.要求某人做某事
②in the end最后
③put on上演
[高分句型]
①When I was in Grade 8, my teacher asked us to act out the play Romeo and Juliet in a group of six.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②Now I’m interested in acting and feel brave enough to show myself in front of the public.(and连接的并列句)
（2023·四川凉山·统考中考真题）
在成长的过程中，你一定遇到过让你感到温暖的人。比如对你嘘寒问暖的亲人，带你遨游知识海洋的老师，伴你嬉戏畅玩的伙伴……为了表达对他（她）的感谢，请你以“Thanks, ________”为标题，根据下面思维导图提供的信息，写一篇英语短文，向校园广播站投稿。

要求：
1. 语言表达准确，文章连贯、通顺；
2. 文章应包括所给思维导图中的所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
4. 词数：80左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Thanks, ________
Everyone must meet a special person who makes you feel warm in life, your parent, your teacher or maybe your friend…
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【答案】例文
Thanks, Mom
Everyone must meet a special person who makes you feel warm in life, your parent, your teacher or maybe your friend. The person that I want to thank most is my mother.
She is 40 years old. She works in a hospital, and she works very hard. She is tall and thin. She is friendly, but strict with me. She always gives me the warmest love and takes care of me all the time. She is willing to do everything for me.
To express my love, I can buy presents for her, study hard and help her do something useful. I will remember her love and be thankful to her. I wish that she can stay healthy and feel happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以“Thanks, ________”为标题，结合思维导图进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明想感谢的是谁；
第二步，感谢的人的个人信息，想感谢他/她的原因；
第三步，介绍如何感谢以及美好的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①works very hard工作很努力
②takes care of照顾
③all the time一直
④be thankful to对……表示感激
[高分句型]
①The person that I want to thank most is my mother.（that引导的定语从句）
②I wish that she can stay healthy and feel happy.（that引导的宾语从句）
（2023·四川南充·统考中考真题）
你校英语报以“Where there is a will, there is a way（有志者事竟成）”为题向全校学生开展征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）你对该谚语的理解；
（2）你生活中的一个事例；
（3）你的感悟。
要求：1.必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4.词数100左右（短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数）。
Where there is a will, there is a way
Have you heard of the saying “Where there is a will, there is a way”? It means ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Where there is a will, there is a way
Have you heard of the saying “Where there is a will, there is a way”? It means if you are really determined to do something, however difficult it might be, you will eventually find a way to do it well. The important point is that you must have the will to achieve success.
Take me for example. Speaking English used to be difficult for me. In Grade 7, I couldn’t speak English clearly and my classmates always laughed at me. With my English teacher’s help, I made plans to improve it. I read English texts aloud for an hour every morning. I also made a foreign friend online. I talked to her twice a week. She helped me correct the way I spoke English. Day by day my spoken English improved a lot. Last month I won first prize in my school’s English Speech Contest.
This experience has taught me that nothing is too difficult as long as you make the decision to do it, just the saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way”.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给的要点提示，结合自身经历，谈谈你对“有志者，事竟成”的理解和感悟，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，并表达自己对该谚语的理解；
第二步，以自身经历为例来阐述；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①take me for example就拿我来说
②used to be过去常常是
③make plan to do制定计划做某事
④make the decision to do sth下决定做某事
[高分句型]
①The important point is that you must have the will to achieve success. (表语从句)
②This experience has taught me that nothing is too difficult as long as you make the decision to do it, just the saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way”.(as long as引导的条件状语从句)
（2023·浙江丽水·统考中考真题）
初中三年即将过去，回顾这段时光，你是否有许多难忘的回忆，也有很多感慨？假定你是李华，你校英文报向初三学生征集稿件，题为“写给自己的一封信”，请你结合下表内容写一份稿件投稿。
A Letter to Myself
内容要点
参考词汇
Memories

Feelings

注意： 1. 文中必须包含两项内容要点，可适当发挥（参考词汇仅供选择使用或参考）；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3. 词数：80~100；稿件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
A Letter to Myself
Dear myself,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to your junior high school life.
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Wish you all the best, my dear self.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
A Letter to Myself
Dear myself,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to your junior high school life.
Memories are still fresh that you were so shy and quiet when in Grade Seven. Sometimes you even lacked courage to ask the teachers problems about learning. But now, with the help of teachers and warm-hearted classmates, you become more confident and outgoing. Do you still remember the quarrel with your best friend? Sometimes silence causes misunderstandings. Try to open yourself up, and you will understand what friendship means to everybody.
May you always keep these ups and downs in mind. It is all of these unforgettable moments that help you grow into a better person.
Wish you all the best, my dear self.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据所给提示内容写给自己一封信。注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己三年来难忘的回忆。
第二步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①lack courage缺乏勇气
②with the help of在……帮助下
③quarrel with和……争吵
[高分句型]
①Try to open yourself up, and you will understand what friendship means to everybody. (祈使句+and/or+陈述句)
②It is all of these unforgettable moments that help you grow into a better person. (that引导定语从句)
（2023·山东烟台·统考中考真题）
假定你是李华，在外教Mr. Brown的指导下，你在学校组织的英语戏剧大赛（English Opera Competition）中获得了一等奖。请给Mr. Brown写一封感谢信，主要内容包括：
l. 对Mr. Brown表示感谢；
2. Mr. Brown的帮助、你取得的进步及比赛的结果；
3. 邀请Mr. Brown到家里做客。
要求：
1. 词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 须包含所有要点提示，并可适当补充，以使语句通顺，行文连贯；
3. 信中不得出现个人姓名、校名等真实信息。
Dear Mr. Brown,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am very excited to tell you something about the English Opera Competition I took part in last week in our school.
I got First Prize out of 40 competitors, which was totally beyond my imagination. When I heard the final result, I couldn’t believe my ears and jumped with joy.
It’s because of your efforts that I have made such rapid progress in my spoken English. Before the contest, whenever you had free time, you would help me practise my spoken English. Besides, you communicated with me as much as possible, and corrected my pronunciation and intonation. What’s more, you taught me some helpful speaking skills and made me full of confidence. Without your help, I wouldn’t have achieved such a good result. Also, I have benefited a lot from this competition. All in all, I really appreciated your help.
Thank you again for your advice and kind help. I sincerely invite you to my home for dinner and have a good time.
Yours,
Li Hua


【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示向外教表示感谢，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，告知他这个好消息以及比赛的结果；
第二步，详细介绍他对你的帮助以及你取得的进步；
第三步，再次表示感谢并邀请他到家里做客。
[亮点词汇]
①communicate with和某人交流
②full of充满
③all in all总的来说
[高分句型]
①I got First Prize out of 40 competitors, which was totally beyond my imagination.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②It’s because of your efforts that I have made such rapid progress in my spoken English.(强调句)
（2023·山西·统考中考真题）
青春期对于每个人来说都是最能彰显生命本色的特殊时期。为了引导同学们正确地认识自我，某校“阳光心理驿站”的老师们以“我发现自己真的很好”为主题，对1127名学生进行了问卷调查，下图是部分项目的统计结果。

假如你是该校的学生，请结合以上图表信息以“I Find Myself Really Good”为主题，用两段话写一篇短文。内容包括：
1. 简要说明图表内容；
2. 从图表中任选一项，结合自己的经历，谈谈它对你的生活产生了什么积极的影响。
要求：
1. 词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2·文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
I Find Myself Really Good
Our school did a survey among 1,127 students on the topic of “I Find Myself Really Good”. Here are the results.
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【答案】例文
I Find Myself Really Good
Our school did a survey among 1,127 students on the topic of “I Find Myself Really Good”. Here are the results. 86 percent of the students believe they can see the world with kind eyes, while 53 percent consider themselves positive. 47 percent think they don’t like to complain.
As for me, I find myself really positive. Last month, I was chosen to play a role in an English show. It was difficult for me to memorize the lines in a short time. However, I regarded it as a challenge, which was also a good chance to improve my English. So I made an effort to practice. Finally, I made it and received high praise. In fact, it is my positive attitude that brings out the best in me all the time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为图表作文；
②时态：时态综合使用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：要求以“I Find Myself Really Good”为主题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍调查结果；
第二步，结合自己的经历，谈谈它对你的生活产生了什么积极的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①As for至于
②play a role in扮演角色
③made an effort to尽力去做某事
④all the time一直
[高分句型]
①I regarded it as a challenge, which was also a good chance to improve my English.（which引导的定语从句）
②In fact, it is my positive attitude that brings out the best in me all the time.（强调句）
（2023·江苏苏州·统考中考真题）
Happy Home Club本期的主题是“How to make Suzhou more beautiful”，你打算以“Starting from me and now”为题向中外朋友介绍你的想法，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，内容包括：
1. 触动你的一件事情；
2. 这件事给你的启示；
3. 你的倡议。
注意：
1. 词数：100左右。
2. 内容完整（照抄阅读语篇不得分）
3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Starting from me and now
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【答案】例文
Starting from me and now
Last weekend, I went to the city park with my classmates. When we got there, we were amazed that there were different kinds of rubbish on the ground. We felt very sad about that. The city is our home, so we should try our best to keep the city clean.
First of all, we should protect our environment. Don’t throw rubbish around or spit anywhere. We’d better plant more trees to make the air clean. Second, we are supposed to be friendly and helpful to others. Third, we ought to obey the traffic rules. Don’t ride too fast or play on the street. Last but not least, remember to save energy. Turn off the lights and taps in time.
As long as we try our best and starting from me and now, I believe Suzhou will become more and more beautiful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：要求根据题干中的提示介绍如何让自己的家乡变得更美，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍触动你的一件事情以及这件事情给你的启示；
第二步，为了使苏州变得更美，介绍你的倡议；
第三步，书写结语。表达“希望家乡会更美丽”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of 各种各样的
②be supposed to do sth. 应该做某事
③remember to do sth. 记得做某事
④in time 及时
[高分句型]
①When we got there, we were amazed that there were different kinds of rubbish on the ground.（when引导时间状语从句）
②We’d better plant more trees to make the air clean. （“sb. had better do sth.”表建议的句型）
③I believe Suzhou will become more and more beautiful.（宾语从句）
（2023·天津·统考中考真题）
假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的笔友Peter用英文写一封邮件，向他讲述你班同学王亮的一个感人故事。
（1）一个下雨天，王亮在路上看到一群人聚在一起。
（2）他走过去，看到一位老妇人躺在地上。
（3）了解情况后，他蹲下为老人撑伞。
（4）救护车到达后，他悄悄地离开了。
（5）你认为……
参考词汇：蹲下     crouch down
救护车    ambulance
要求：
（1）词数：80~100个。
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Dear Peter,
How is everything going? I’d like to tell you a story about my classmate, Wang Liang.
On a rainy day,
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Do you have a story to share? Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Peter,
How is everything going? I’d like to tell you a story about my classmate, Wang Liang.
On a rainy day, Wang Liang saw a group of people gathering on the road. He went over and saw an old woman lying on the ground. Knowing the situation, he crouched down to hold an umbrella for the old man. When the ambulance arrived, he left quietly.
I think Wang Liang is a good student who helps others. We should learn from him.
Do you have a story to share? Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏给出的五个要点提示，写邮件向笔友Peter讲述同学王亮的感人故事。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，介绍同学王亮的故事；
第二步，具体讲述这个感人故事；
第三步，发表自己的感想；
第四步，期望收到对方回复。
[亮点词汇]
①tell sb. sth. 告诉某人某事
②go over 走过去
③see sb doing sth. 看到某人正在做某事
④learn from sb. 向某人学习
[高分句型]
①When the ambulance arrived, he left quietly.（when引导时间状语从句）
②I think Wang Liang is a good student who helps others.（省略that的宾语从句；who引导定语从句）
（2023·浙江金华·统考中考真题）
假设你叫李华，你的英国朋友Alex很难读懂中国诗句“山重水复疑无路，柳岸花明又一村”(For every cloud, there is a silver lining)，来信向你寻求帮助。请你根据表格信息，并结合自身例子给他回一封e-mail，谈谈你的理解。
内容要点
写作参考
About the sentence
written by Lu You
in English: For every cloud, there is a silver lining.
Your example
Any difficult situation that you experienced, and how did you get out?
Your understanding
never give up, find a way out, ...
注意：
1.文中必须包含所给的内容要点，可适当发挥；写作参考供选择使用；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3.词数：80~100；
4.正文首句和尾句已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Alex,
Glad to hear from you. It’s natural for a foreigner not to understand the sentence.
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I hope my reply will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Alex,
Glad to hear from you. It’s natural for a foreigner not to understand the sentence. It’s written by Lu You and similar to “For every cloud, there’s a silver lining” in English. You’re encouraged to keep trying when meeting difficulties. My example may help you better understand it.
Once, I entered our school’s photo competition but couldn’t find a proper subject. I felt worried and hopeless. One day, my friend May gave me a big smile. Suddenly, I was hit and touched, feeling something bright. An idea came to me that I could bring the warmth to others through photos. After many tries, I took the subject—A Warm Hug. Finally, I got the prize. So we should never give up and try to find a way out.
I hope my reply will be helpful to you,
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍关于“山重水复疑无路，柳岸花明又一村”的基本信息；
第二步，结合自身例子说明这个诗句的含义；
第三步，最后说明自己的理解。
[亮点词汇]
①keep doing sth一直做某事
②help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
③give up放弃
[高分句型]
You’re encouraged to keep trying when meeting difficulties.（when引导的时间状语从句）