牛津译林版 英语九年级上册 Unit 8 Detective stories. Period 7 同步课时练习 单元主题写作 （含答案）

第7课时　[Unit 8 单元主题写作]

话题分析

本单元的话题是“如何编写一则侦探小故事”。该话题内容丰富，学生们可以充分发挥想象力，并且他们对这类作文比较感兴趣，因此不难进行写作。现在，就让我们一起结合实例来看看此类文章的写作技巧吧！

常用表达

1．A murder took place…

2．The victim was…

3．The police checked the scene for more clues to the murder.

4．The police offered a reward of…for any important information.

5．A witness reported that he had seen someone…

6．At last/In the end, the police caught…

典型例题

请你根据下面表格中的信息，发挥自己的想象力，写一则英语侦探小故事。100词左右。

写法指导

遣词造句

1．上周六在月亮路308号发生了一起谋杀案。(take place)

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2．尸体在卧室里被发现。(find)

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3．在案发现场警方发现了一把刀和一个空酒瓶。(at the scene of)

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4．米莉的一个邻居举报说他看见米莉的男朋友安迪和她吵架。(see sb doing sth)

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5．最后，警方在公交车站抓获了犯罪嫌疑人。 (in the end)

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连句成篇

A murder took place at 308 Yueliang Road last Saturday. It happened between 9：00p.m. and 11：00 p．m. The body of a 20­year­old girl called Millie was found in the bedroom. The police found a knife and an empty wine bottle at the scene of the crime. One of Millie's neighbours reported that he had seen Millie's boyfriend Andy quarrelling with her. And Andy has a criminal record. The police checked the knife for the fingerprints. They were Andy's. In the end, the police caught the suspect at a bus stop.

请你根据以下内容提示，写一篇英语短文。90词左右。

内容提示：1.昨晚李先生到家时，惊讶地发现门开着；

2．他确定有人闯进了他家，他发现家里少了一些钱和一条金项链；

3．当他打电话报警时，有人开枪伤了他；

4．半小时后，他的妻子发现他躺在血泊中，然后把他送到了医院；

5．警方正在检查现场，查找线索。

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答案

【实例分析】

遣词造句

1．A murder took place at 308 Yueliang Road last Saturday.

2．The body was found in the bedroom.

3．The police found a knife and an empty wine bottle at the scene of the crime.

4．One of Millie's neighbours reported that he had seen Millie's boyfriend Andy quarrelling with her.

5．In the end, the police caught the suspect at a bus stop.

【自我展示】

One possible version：

When Mr Li arrived home last night, he was surprised to find his door wide open. He was sure that someone  had broken  into his house. He found some money and a gold necklace were missing. When he was calling the police, someone wounded him with a gun. Half an hour later, his wife found him lying in the blood. She sent him to the hospital. Now the police are checking the scene for more clues which can help solve the case.