19 动物世界中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）

19 动物世界

2024年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）

相关话题精彩范文引路

（一）

Dolphin

Have you ever seen dolphins? Are you fascinated by them?

The dolphins live in the ocean. And they are cute and beautiful. They not only swim fast, they are also smart, They are often in gray color. Besides, they are good at swimming and jumping in the ocean. They are also friendly animals. They look like fish, but they actually are mammals. Because they are able to learn things very quickly, dolphins can be trained by people. So now, we can often see the dolphin show in the aquarium,

They are so friendly. I love them very much.

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海豚

你见过海豚吗?你有没有被它们吸引呢?

海豚生活在海洋里。它们又可爱，又美丽。它们不仅游得快，而且很聪明。它们通常是灰色的。除此之外，它们擅长在海洋里游泳和跳跃。它们也是一一种友好的动物。 它们看起来像鱼，但它们是哺乳动物。因为它们学东西很快，人们可以训练海豚。 所以现在，我们可以经常在水族馆看到海豚表演。

它们非常友好。我非常喜欢它们。

亮点词汇

fascinate 使着迷;吸引

ocean大海;海洋

smart聪明的;机智的

mammal哺乳动物

aquarium 水族馆

出彩句型

Are you fascinated by them?你被它们吸引了吗?

They not only...，but also...他们不......而.....

They are often in.. color.它们通常......色。

They are good at... 它们擅长.....

They look lek...它们看起来像......

高分点评

本文描写的是海豚这一种动物， 主要抓住了它的活动方式进行展开，显示出了海豚可爱、可人的特点。文章的开头别具-格， 使用了两个问句，吸引读者注意力的同时，拉近了与读者的距离。其次，文章的逻辑承接较好，如"besides" "because”"so"等词的使用，将句与句之间的关系清楚地体现了出来。

（二）

Tortoise

Tortoise is a cute animal. It doesn't walk very fast, but it always attracts people' s attention.

It has a short tail, four short feet, a little head and a hard shell. They like to play in the water. When they are afraid of something, they would shrink their heads into the shells quickly. Their favorite food is fish. They have a good knack for catching fish.Firstly, they have a fake sleep. When the fish swim near their mouth, they catch the fish at once and bite the fish's head. In winter, they usually sleep in the sand.

I love the tortoise because of its cuteness.

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乌龟

乌龟是非常可爱的动物。它爬得不是很快，但是它总能吸引人们的注意。

它有一一条短尾巴、四条短腿、一个小脑袋和一一个硬壳。它们喜欢在水里玩。当它们害怕某样东西时，它们会迅速将脑袋缩进硬壳里。它们最喜欢的食物是鱼。它们非常擅长于抓鱼。首先，它们会假装睡觉。当鱼游近它们的嘴巴时，它们马上抓住鱼，并咬住鱼的脑袋。冬天的时候，它们通常会在沙子里睡觉。

我喜欢乌龟，因为它很可爱。

亮点词汇

shell壳;硬壳

shrink 缩;缩水

fake假装 伪造的

bite咬

出彩句型

It always attracts people' s attention.它总能吸引人们的注意。

They are afraid of...它们害.....

They have a good knack fr..它们擅长.....

They have a fake sleep.它们假装睡觉。

shell 亮，硬壳

高分点评

本文着重描写了乌龟的外形以及其抓鱼的经过，尤其是对其抓鱼过程的描述非常生动具体，刻画得入木三分。作者对乌龟的观察可谓细致入微，将其遇到危险时的举动描写得惟妙惟肖。除此以外，丰富的词组，贴切的运用，如“attract people's attention" "have a good knack for"等，无疑都为文章添加了不少闪光点。

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相关话题满分作文必背

（一）

I have a dog, it is lovely, it is called Mimi. Every time I go home from school, Mimi always cruising around me, I will go to the kitchen to get a piece of meat to it, it lay on the floor to eat. My legs and then jump to bark "Wang "called, so I picked up Mimi, it is the opportunity to lick my hand, making me laugh.

I like Mimi, like puppies.

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我有一条小狗，它很可爱，它叫咪咪。每当我放学回家时，咪咪总是围着我绕圈I我便去厨房拿一片肉给它，它就趴在地板上吃。然后跳到我腿上汪汪汪地叫，于是我抱起咪咪，它就乘机舔我的手，逗得我哈哈大笑。

我喜欢咪咪，喜欢小狗。

（二）

Dolphin is my favourite animal.

It is one of the most precious animals. Their bodies are very long, about one zhang (it).Dolphins live in the sea. They live on fish, shrimps and so on.

Dolphins are very friendly and peaceful. They never attack people. Instead, they have saved many people in danger in the past years. How helpful the dolphins are!

Dolphins are very clever. People often train them so that they can give a dolphin show which brings people a lot of happiness and joy.

Unluckily, the number of dolphins is getting smaller and smaller. Because of water pollution, there is less and less space for dolphins. Many people make money by hunting dolphins. 1f we don' t protect them, maybe we' I lose our good friends one day. As a student, I hope more and more people should take actions to protect dolphins.

海豚是我最喜欢的动物。

这是最珍贵的动物之一。他们的身体很长，约1张(丈)。海豚生活在海里。他们住在鱼、虾等。

海豚是很友好和和平。他们从不袭击人。相反,他们挽救了许多人的危险。多么有用的海豚!

海豚是非常聪明的。人们常常训练他们，这样他们就可以给海豚表演这让人们大量的幸福和快乐。

不巧的是，海豚的数量正变得越来越小。因为水污染,海豚有越来越少的空间。许多人通过捕猎海豚赚钱。如果我们不保护他们，也许有- -天我们就会失去我们的好朋友。作为一名学生，我希望越来越多的人应该采取措施来保护海豚。

(三）

My Favorite Animal

Last year, my father bought a lovely pet for me.

She has four white paws and a white and yellow tail. She has two small ears, two green eyes and eight whiskers on her face. Her name is Sally and she is one year old.

Do you know what it is? A cat? Yes, it is a cat. She has very short fur and she is quite small. She weighs about 2 kilograms. She is usually very friendly and quiet. We never frighten her or pull her tail or ears. She likes walking around me and playing with me.

If she is hungry, she will miaow. Usually, she eats food from a tin,but her favorite food is fish. She likes juice if it is not too cold. She likes to chase and catch mice and sometimes she plays with butterflies. Sally often plays with balls and pieces of string. She does not like dogs and she hates the rain. She likes sitting on the sofa and watching TV.

Sally is a very good friend, but she is quite lazy! She never worries because we take good care of her. She is always a happy cat.

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我最喜欢的动物

去年，我父亲给我买了一只可爱的宠物。

她有四只白爪子和一条白黄相间的尾巴。她有两只小耳朵，她脸上长有两只绿眼睛和八只胡须。她叫莎莉，今年一岁了。

你知道她是什么吗?一只猫?是的，它是一只猫。她的皮毛很短，她很小。她大约2公斤重。她通常非常友好、安静。我们从不吓她或者扯她的尾巴或耳朵。她喜欢在我周围走来走去，和我玩。

如果她饿了，她会喵喵叫。通常，她吃罐头食物，但是她最喜欢的食物是鱼。如果天气不太冷的话，她喜欢喝果汁。她喜欢追老鼠和捉老鼠有时她和蝴蝶一起玩耍。莎莉经常玩球和绳子。她不喜欢狗，她讨厌下雨。她喜欢坐在沙发上看电视。

莎莉是个很好的朋友，但她很懒!她从来不担心是因为我们照顾得很好。她是一只总是快乐的猫。