27 情感态度 素材储备与写作指导 中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）

27 情感态度 素材储备与写作指导

2024年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）

相关话题体裁解读

情感类的作文，大多围绕责任、同情、关爱、感恩、诚实等项目展开，或叙事以抒怀，或表明个人对该类情感情绪的观点看法。此类文章以说明文和叙事文明多，也可夹叙夹议。

在最新的中小学生英语课程标准中，初中阶段的内容与要求中所提到的基本素材，比如man and nature(人与自然)，social communication(社会交际)，social relationships(人际关系)等素材的写作会涉及到情感态度。

情感态度，往往通过叙事、写人和写物得以呈现，即以事记情、以人记情和以物记情。在写此类作文时，首先要明确文章所沙及的情感话题，然后再表达自己的体会成看法，最后进行总结升华。在谈看法和体会时，一般可以说说这 一情感态度的重要性、价值和意义，进面谈谈如何落实这一情感态度、 怎样达成这情感目标等等。写作时需注意，文章所传达的态度是积极向上的。

素材储备与写作指导

常用表达

1.常用词汇

nice极好的

 fantastic 奇异的，难以相信的

 amazed 吃惊的

annoyed 烦闷的

strict严肃的

 smart 时尚的，聪明的

cute 可爱的

polite有礼貌的

perfect完美的

energetic 精力旺盛的

be happy I sad I upset / nervous / lonely高兴/不安/紧张/孤独

 be pleased with对.....感到高兴

be worried about/ worry about担心，担

be/ get angry with sb.about sth.因某事生某人的气

be disappointed at sb.对某人感到失望

be confident of sth./in sb.对某事/某人有信心

show love and concern for sb.爱护和关心某人

2常用句型

We are proud of..我们....为骄傲。

A friend can not only... but also...朋友不仅能....而且能....

My parents are all busy doing..all day.我的父母整日忙于......

I love my school, because it's like a big family.我们我的学校，因为她就像个大家庭。

We are deeply grateful to you for your support.我们深深感谢你的支持。

It is a pity that we shall have to leave tomorrow.我们明天必须离开，真是遗憾。

A good relationship between teachers and students is of great importance for our studies.

良好的师生关系对我们的学习很重要。

To build a good relationship, we should trust in each other.要建立良好的关系，我们应该彼此信任。

They find it easy to communicate with their teachers.他们发觉很容易和老师沟通。

With the encouragement and support of my father, I have overcome many difficulties in our life.

在父亲的鼓励和支持下，我克服了生活中的许多困难。

二、万能模板

We need love. We also need to love....开门见山，陈述情感主题

She did a lot for me when1 was a child...以事为例，表达情感

When I grow up,I will do what I can do to make my mother happy....以将来的所作所为来感恩。

三、满分作文

题目

母爱情深，父爱无价，师恩无限，友情可贵。在生活中，有许多值得感恩的人，请以Love for...

为题，写一篇短文。(15分)

要求:

 1.请将题目补充完整。

2用80-120词写一篇完整的短文。描述你所感恩的人感恩的原因并列举感恩的事例:你将为他/她做些什么来表达你的感激之情

提示:

1.开头已给出，不计入总词数。

2短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名及其他相关真实信息。

3.凡照抄本试卷里的文章段落。 一律不得分。

Love for my mother

We need love. We also need to love others.                                                      

习作

Love for my mother

We need love. We also need to love others. The person I love most is my mother.My mother is 38 years old. She is of medium build with long black hair. She is kind2nd friendly. She is a worker in a shop. She likes dancing. She can cook delicious food.

She did a lot for me when I was a child. She bought whatever I needed for my study even though she didn't have much money. She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend. She cooked delicious and healthy food for me. Mom is the busiest person in my family but she is always happy to do everything for us.Mum, I love you!

When I grow up, I will do what I can to make my mother happy. I will find a good job after I graduate from college. I’ll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young. I'll take her to wonderful sights around China. Most importantly,I will stay with her when I have free time. That's what she wants most, I think.

相关话题满分作文解析

（一）

初中三年的学习生活让人难忘，毕业之际，你校将举行"感恩"为主题的英文演讲比赛，请你根据以下提示，写一篇英文演讲稿．

要点提示：

1．感谢父母，教我如何生活，……

2．感谢老师，教我许多知识，……

3．感谢同学，给我美好回忆，……

写作要求：

1．词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数）；

2．可适当增减词汇，使语句流畅、完整；

3．文中不能透露个人真实信息．

Good  morning， everyone． I'm glad to be here to speak in front of you． Here I'd like to thank everyone of you．

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

That' s all． Thank you．

【写作思路】

在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题．

【参考范文】

Good morning，everyone．I'm glad to be here to speak in front of you． Here I'd like to thank everyone of you．How time flies! We 'll graduate soon． I have so many words from my heart to say．At this moment，I want to say thanks to my parents，my teachers and my classmates．（开篇点题）

Dear dad and mom， you've taken good care of me in the past three years．When I was in trouble，you used to encourage me and cheer me up．You taught me how to get on well with my classmates．（感谢父母亲的关心，鼓励……）

Dear teachers，thank you for teaching me so well．I won't forget how interesting your lessons are and how friendly you are．I still remember when I failed in an exam， you encouraged me to keep trying． 【高分句型一】When I had trouble in life， you told me to be brave． Because of your help，I have made much progress．（感谢老师在学习上和生活上的帮助）

Dear classmates， you've helped me a lot in my studies since I came to this school．【高分句型二】 When I was in trouble，you used to encourage me and give me some advice．I never forget the days when we studied together．（感谢同学的帮助，鼓励，留下的美好回忆）

Words can't show my thanks to you!I'll remember all of you．

That' s all． Thank you．

【名师点评】

（1）高分句型一：

I still remember when I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．我还记得当我考试不及格时，你们鼓励我继续努力．

I still remember 后跟了宾语从句，宾语从句中包含了when引导的时间状语从句，encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事

（2）高分句型二：

Dear classmates， you've helped me a lot in my studies since I came to this school．亲爱的同学们，自从我来这里以来，你们在我的学习中帮了我很多忙．

 since自从，引导时间状语从句，主句用了现在完成进行时，从句用了一般过去时．

（二）

假如你叫李军，你家于2017年被列为“精准扶贫”的帮扶对象，在政府两年的帮扶下，你家变化巨大。时值学校校报举办“家的变化”主题征文活动，请你根据以下内容要点，用英语写一篇70词左右的短文，参加本次活动。

内容要点：

要求: 1. 词数:70词左右。短文开头语已给出，但不计入总词数。

2. 短文中必须包括所有要点，但不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥。

3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。

My name is Li Jun. Thanks to the government, my family has changed a lot in the last two years. __________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【参考范文】

My name is Li Jun． Thanks to the government， my family has changed a lot in the last two years． （点题）

My family used to be poor and we lived in a small and old house．【高分句型一】I don't have any new clothes．My grades dropped because my mother was sick and couldn't afford to see a doctor．Sometimes， I even want to leave school to support my family．（过去）Now， with the help of the government， great changes took place in our lives．【高分句型二】 We live in a new house．My mother is healthy．I can also set my mind on my study and make great progress in my study．Our life is improving day by day．（现在）

【名师点评】

【高分句型一】

My family used to be poor and we lived in a small and old house．

我家以前很穷，我们住在一个小和旧房子．used to do sth过去常常做某事．

【高分句型二】

Now， with the help of the government， great changes took place in our lives．

现在，在政府的帮助下，巨大的变化发生在我们的生活．with the help of 在…的帮助下．

相关话题满分作文必背

对父母心存感恩，因为他们给予我生命，让我健康成长;对老师心存感恩，因为他们给了我教诲，让我抛却愚昧;对朋友心存感恩，因为他们给了我友爱;对社会心存感恩，因为社会给了我智慧和力量。自从国家实施义务教育以来，书本免费，食宿免费，而且还有贫困助学金等。面对这些，我们应该心存感恩，感谢祖国对我们的厚望和期盼。让我们永远记住：感谢父母、感谢老师、感谢朋友、感谢全社会!请以“感恩”为话题写一篇80—100字的作文。

参考范文

What should we thank?

The thankful great universe provides the environment of existence for us and give us sunlight, air, water and everything in keeping with us existence of space, bring storm to let us accept to toughen for us, bring to us mysterious let us look for. 

The thankful parents give us the life, make us feel the merriment of the human life, feel the genuine feeling of the human life, feel the comity of the human life, feel happiness of the human life, also feel hardships and pain and sufferings of the human life! 

The thankful teacher works with diligence and without fatigue everyday of teach, give us knowledge ability, and put on the wing which flies toward the ideal for us. 

The thankful classmate and friend grow up with us and let us no longer stand alone in the itinerary of life. 

The thankful our country provides us with free books, dormitory and food. 

Whenever it is, we should keep a thankful heart towards everything existed. Only thus, can we become a useful man.