三年(2020-2022)中考英语真题分项汇编:专题49说明介绍类(含解析)
展开专题49 书面表达—说明介绍类
【2022年】
(一)(2022·广东广州·中考真题)
你校将兴建新图书馆,学校英文报以“My Green School Library”为题向学生征稿。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文投稿,介绍你所设计(design)的绿色图书馆。
注意:
1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2.词数80词左右(短文的开头已给出,不计入词数);
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
My Green School Library
I want to design a green school library.
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【答案】例文
My Green School Library
I want to design a green school library. It is green. It is built entirely from renewable resources. It is round. When you sit inside, you will feel very warm. It is composed of waste paper and solar panels. All its energy comes from the sun. You can read all kinds of books in it. You can also listen to music in it. If you are tired, you can also rest inside.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文主要以“My Green School Library”为题,并根据题干中的思维导图介绍你所设计的绿色图书馆,可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导:本文以一般现在时为主,人称以第二人称和第三人称为主。主要是根据思维导图中的提示描述自己设计的绿色图书馆,写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚,做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
(二)(2022·湖北宜昌·中考真题)
假如你学校的校园广播《英语之声》栏目以“I love ________”为主题征稿,请你投稿。
稿件内容:
◆热爱的主题
◆热爱的理由
◆适当的感悟
稿件要求:
(1)请补全标题;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
(3)词数80词左右。
I love ________
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【答案】例文
I love reading
I love reading very much. I remember it was five years ago that I became interested in reading. At that time, I joined a reading club online. I was glad to find there were so many books for me to read. My teacher encouraged me to read different kinds of books, and then share my feelings with other readers. I found great fun sharing ideas. Ever since then, reading has been my favorite hobby.
From reading books, I can not only learn a lot from them, but also open a new world for me. It makes me relaxed and brings me a lot of fun. I think more and more people will love reading in the future.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。以“我喜欢阅读”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导:本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时,人称以第一人称为主。分为两段式:第一段先引出自己喜爱的事情,接着描述自己喜爱它的原因和经历;第二段描述自己从中得到的感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
(三)(2022·河北·中考真题)
假如你是学校英文网站的主编,准备在网站设立Dialogue with Teachers专栏(column).
请根据下面的提示写一篇短文,谈一谈设立此专栏的目的。
提示:(1)Develop a good relationship(understand, become friends).
(2)Give some suggestions(on homework, after-school activities,…).
注意:(1)短文须包括提示中的两个要点,可适当发挥。
(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
We plan to have a new column—Dialogue with Teachers on the school English website. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
We plan to have a new column—Dialogue with Teachers on the school English website. We hope to help students and teachers understand each other and eventually become good friends through this column. If you have any questions, you can ask the teacher directly through the column, and the teacher will reply on time.
At the same time, some teachers will put forward some suggestions on how to work efficiently and solve problems. Of course, we will also make suggestions for after-school activities. When the exam comes, some teachers will give some suggestions on homework and how to review.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容,谈一谈设立此专栏的目的,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第二、第三人称来行文,时态用一般现在时和一般将来时。作文可分为两段,第一段介绍设立专栏的目的之一是为了发展良好的关系;第二段介绍设立专栏的目的之一是为了给一些建议 。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
(四)(2022·江苏扬州·中考真题)
最近,你校开展了“巧手制书签,书香满校园”主题活动,请你以“A DIY bookmark for my favourite book”为题,根据表格中的内容提示写一篇英语短文,向学校英文报的读书专栏投稿,介绍制作书签的目的和过程,并分享制作心得。
Why you made it
help enjoy reading your favourite book(name, type of book, what you like most)
How you made it
Materials & Tools
● card
● scissors, glue…
Steps
● cut the card into…
● draw a picture of…
● write(your favourite sentence from the book or a famous saying or…)
● …
How you felt
…
要求:(1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
(2)必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥;
(3)词数:100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。A DIY bookmark for my favourite book
Last week I took part in our school’s Reading & Bookmark-making activity. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
A DIY bookmark for my favourite book
Last week I took part in our school’s Reading & Bookmark-making activity. Its purpose was to help us enjoy reading our favourite book. My favorite book is the classic novel Journey to the West, one of the Four Great Classical Novels. I like Monkey King best because he helps the weak and never gives up.
In order to make a bookmark, I prepared a card, scissors, glue and so on. First, I cut the card into long strips. And then I drew a picture of a monkey on the left and wrote a famous saying “Nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.” on the right to encourage me not to give up when facing difficulties. At last, I glued it to a thin piece of wood.
Although I met some difficulties in this process, I never gave up and I am proud of myself.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文以“A DIY bookmark for my favourite book”为题,并结合表格中的内容,描述制作书签的目的和过程,可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导:本文以一般现在时和一般过去时为主;人称以第一人称为主。第一段介绍制作书签的目的,以及最喜欢的书的类型和最喜欢这本书的什么地方;第二段重点描述制作书签需要的材料和工具以及制作书签的过程;第三段描述自己的感想。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚,做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
(五)(2022·山东泰安·中考真题)
让青少年利用课余时间参加志愿者服务活动,对其成长具有重要意义,可以帮助他们学习新技能,增强沟通能力和社会责任感。暑假将至,请根据下面表格中的内容提示,以 “My Volunteer Work Plan” 为题写一篇英语短文,介绍你选择的活动项目及活动计划,并谈谈参加志愿者服务活动的意义。
Volunteer Work
◎Help in the city library ◎Clean up the city parks
◎Hold a charity bazaar(义卖) ◎Do volunteer work in a hospital
◎Visit the old people’s home ◎…
要求: 1. 可选择表格中的1-2个活动项目,也可自拟活动项目;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,词数80-100;
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、地名等与考生本人相关的信息。My Volunteer Work Plan
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【答案】例文
My Volunteer Work Plan
The summer holiday is coming. I am going to do some volunteer work. I will help to clean up the city park. Of course, I will ask more people to join me. I will call up my friends and ask them to come. We will pick up the litter, the plastic bags and other waste things. I hope our city will be more beautiful. Besides, I am going to visit sick kids in hospital. I love children and enjoy getting along with them. I will sing for the kids at the city hospital to cheer them up. I hope they can be better soon.
Not only do I feel good about helping other people, but also I get to spend time doing what I love to do. All in all, I will enjoy myself in the summer holiday.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。介绍自己的暑假期间的志愿者计划。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用一般将来时,人称采用第一人称为主。分为两段式:第一段介绍自己的志愿者计划以及打算做些什么事情;第二段表达自己做志愿者的感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
(六)(2022·四川达州·中考真题)
初中生活已近尾声,我们即将迎来崭新的高中生活。请以“My Plans for Senior High School Life”为题,从以下五个方面谈谈你的打算:
1.尽快适应新环境;
2.合理利用时间,保证充足睡眠;
3.认真对待学习,取得进步;
4.积极加入社团,交更多的朋友;
5.……
写作要求:
(1)内容包括提示信息并适当发挥,文中不得出现真实姓名和地名。
(2)全文字数不少于90词。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)卷面整洁,书写工整,条理清楚,句式规范,标点符号和大小写使用正确。
参考词汇:adjust to 适应
My Plans for Senior High School Life
My junior high school days are coming to an end. And now I am looking forward to my life in senior high school. To better prepare for it, I’ve made some plans.
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【答案】例文
My Plans for Senior High School Life
My junior high school days are coming to an end. And now I am looking forward to my life in senior high school. To better prepare for it, I’ve made some plans.
Firstly, I’m going to adapt to the new environment as soon as possible. Secondly, I plan to make good use of time and get enough sleep. Thirdly, I will take study seriously and make progress. Fourthly, I will join clubs actively and make more friends. Lastly, I’m ready to take up my hobby of playing basketball in my free time to not only keep healthy but also keep my mind clear by playing basketball.
All in all, my plans will not be achieved if I just talk, so I’ll put in more efforts to make them come true.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“My Plans for Senior High School Life”为题,结合提示内容进行写作,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称来行文,时态以一般将来时为主。作文可分为三段,第一段引出话题;第二段介绍自己详细的计划;第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
(七)(2022·四川德阳·中考真题)
假如你是李华。你校校刊征稿,请你以“Chinese Tea Culture”为题,用英语写一篇稿件,简单介绍中国的茶文化。
内容包括:1.茶是中国最受欢迎的饮料之一,有悠久的历史;
2.茶的种类多,许多地方产茶,如:四川、浙江;
3.茶有益身体健康;
4.一天中的任何时候都可以饮茶,朋友聚会时可以饮茶,一个人独处时也可以饮茶;
5.茶是中国传统文化,可以作为礼物送给亲朋好友。
注意:1.词数80词左右(标题已给出,不计入总词数);
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.不能出现自己的真实信息。
Chinese Tea Culture
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【答案】例文:
Chinese Tea Culture
Tea is one of the most popular drinks in China. It has a long history. There are different kinds of tea, such as green tea, Pu’er and Tieguanyin. Tea is produced in many places, such as Sichuan, Zhejiang and Anhui. Tea is good for people’s health. People drink tea in any time of the day. You can drink tea with your friends in the party, or enjoy it on your own. Tea is a symbol of traditional Chinese culture. People often offer it as a gift to friends and relatives.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:题目要求以“Chinese Tea Culture”为题,用英语写一篇稿件。在写作时应根据题目要求介绍中国的茶的种类,茶的好处,并讲述中国的茶文化等。
2.写作指导:本文时态以一般现在时为主,人称以第三人称为主,写作时要认真审题,根据提示的内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作;可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等;语言的表述要符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;层次要分明、条理要清晰。
(八)(2022·浙江湖州·中考真题)
假如你是李雷,上周参观了以“Working the Waste into Magic”为主题的环保作品展。请你根据以下信息,写一篇短文,在英语课上介绍相关展品并分享自己的想法与感受。
What were on show
What they are made of/from
What you think
➢clothes
➢chairs
➢model planes
➢ …
➢waste paper
➢plastic bottles
➢used wood and glass
➢ …
➢creative
➢save …
➢ …
注意:
(1)短文须介绍至少两项展品,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(3)词数:80—100。短文首句仅供参考,不计入总词数。Hello, everyone! I’d like to tell you something about the show “Working the Waste into Magic” . _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Possible version:
Hello, everyone! I’d like to tell you something about the show “Working the Waste into Magic”.
A number of creative works were on show, including clothes made from waste paper and model planes made of used wood and glass. Another fascinating work is a chair that is made of plastic bottles. They are glued together and painted in different colors.
I was most interested in a backpack for computers. It is made out of a pair of old jeans! With the zipper of jeans on the top, two pockets on two sides, the backpack looks both useful and fashionable. It even has a logo!
I felt amazed at how waste could be put to such good use. It really helps to save energy and build a greener future.
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读:题目要求根据提示要点,介绍“变废为宝”的环保作品展的情况,可以适当的发挥,写作时要运用正确的英语表达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导:写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来,本文应该用第一人称、第三人称来介绍内容;时态采用一般过去时;在介绍内容时,力求语言准确,内容完整,保证行文连贯,条理清晰。
(九)(2022·浙江丽水·中考真题)
假如你是李明,你的美国朋友David 向你了解暑假社会实践活动的计划,请结合下表内容写一封邮件向他介绍你的计划。
Social Practice Plan
What to do
Why to do so
●volunteer to do...
●make a survey about...
●have a graduation trip to...
●…
●be helpful...
●learn more about...
●open one’s eyes...
●…
注意:
1)文中必须包含至少两项活动的内容要点,可适当发挥;
2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3)词数:80~ 100;邮件的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear David,Glad to share my social practice plan with you.
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】例文:
Dear David,
Glad to share my social practice plan with you.
As it will be the last summer holiday in junior school, some classmates and I plan to go on a graduation trip to Hangzhou, the capital city of Zhejiang. By enjoying the beautiful scenery and colorful cultures there, we can open our eyes and bring some unforgettable memories. After the trip, I will volunteer to help in our city library, sorting out books, guiding readers to the right bookshelves, and of course, communicating with different people. I’m sure this experience can not only enrich my life but help me understand the true meaning of learning by doing.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一封邮件作文。向David介绍自己的暑假社会实践活动计划。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用一般将来时,人称以第一人称为主。分为三段式:第一段引出主题;第二段根据材料提示内容介绍自己的计划;最后一段表达期待对方的回信。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
(十)(2022·四川泸州·中考真题)
开展丰富多彩的课外活动对我们很有好处。请以“Free-time Activities”为题,用英语写一篇短文介绍你及朋友们的课外活动开展情况。
要点提示:
1. 内容:体育,如跑步;艺术,如唱歌绘画;劳动,如做家务、参加志愿者活动;其它,如阅读……。
2. 好处:休息放松,学习新知识,学会新技能,结交新朋友等。
3. 个人观点:……。
要求:
1. 词数110词左右(首句已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 要点提示均须涉及,可适当增加内容;
3. 不用真实姓名、校名、地名。
参考词语: volunteer, relax, knowledge, skill
Free-time Activities
Free-time activities are good for us teenagers.
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【答案】例文
Free-time Activities
Free-time activities are good for us teenagers.
My friends and I have a variety of free-time activities. First, we often run for an hour on weekends and we always play football after class because we all like playing it. If we have time, we will draw some beautiful pictures to decorate our school. What’s more, we often help our parents do the housework. Even some of us do some volunteer work, such as cleaning the park and visiting the old. And we also read some interesting books and share our ideas together.
Free-time activities are beneficial to us. We can not only relax, but also we can learn some knowledge that can’t be learnt in class. Besides, we can learn some skills that are important to our life. The most important is that we can make many friends who have the same interest.
In my opinion, we should spare some time to do free-time activities in order to grow up healthily.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文以“Free-time Activities”为题,并根据题干中的提示写一篇文章,可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导:本文以一般现在时和第一人称为主。第一段已给出;第二段从不同方面介绍自己和朋友的课外活动;第三段介绍课外活动的好处;最后一段发表自己的观点。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚,做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
(十一)(2022·四川眉山·中考真题)
本周日上午,一些外国学生将到三苏祠参观,现三苏祠急需招募十名志愿者。假定你是李华,请写一封电子邮件推荐自己。要点包括:
1. 自荐目的:成为志愿者;
2. 个人信息:身份,年龄,性格(外向、善于与人相处),本周日上午有空;
3. 个人优势:擅长英语,……;
4. 表达期望:获得机会并能做好,请本周五前回复。
注意:
1. 词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
参考词汇:三苏祠Sansu Temple
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am glad to see your notice Volunteers Wanted. Some foreign students…______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am glad to see your notice Volunteers Wanted. Some foreign students will visit Sansu Temple this Sunday morning. I’m willing to be a volunteer.
Let me introduce myself to you. I’m a middle school student aged 15. I’m an outgoing girl/boy who can always get on well with others. As for the time, I will be available this Sunday morning. My oral English is so excellent that I have no difficulty communicating with foreign friends. More importantly, I know a lot about Sansu culture. I’m sure I can help them have a better understanding of it.
I believe I can manage it if you give me a chance. Please reply to me by Friday!(103 words)
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据提示内容,写封邮件自荐成为三苏祠的志愿者,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称来介绍,时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍自荐的目的,自己的信息和优势,以及自己的期望。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
(十二)(2022·四川遂宁·中考真题)
向世界传递中国文化,让世界倾听中国声音。近期,我市将面向全体中小学生举办“用英语讲好中国故事”的爱国主义主题展示活动。假如你是李华,你想参加此次活动,请根据下面的提示信息,向负责本次活动的英语老师Mr. Yang写一封80词左右的自荐信。
要点提示:
1.个人信息:姓名、年龄、班级、性格等;
2.个人优势:
(1)读了很多关于中国历史的书,了解中国历史;
(2)知道很多历史故事,并且擅长用英语讲述它们;
(3) ……
3. 个人感想:
(1)可以培养英语学习兴趣,提高口语表达能力;
(2)让更多的人了解中国历史和文化,并为之感到自豪。
注意:
1.文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2.文章必须包含所给要点提示,要求语句通顺,行文连贯。
3.不可逐词翻译,可适当发挥。
4.文章中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Dear Mr. Yang,
I’m excited to hear that our school will hold the activity “telling Chinese stories in English”. I really want to take part in it.
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I expect that you can give me this chance to show myself and I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mr Yang,
I’ m excited to hear that our school will hold the activity “telling Chinese stories in English”. I really want to take part in it.
It’s my great honor to introduce myself. I’m a boy from Class One, Grade Eight. My name is Li Hua and I’m 14 years old. I’m an outgoing boy. I have many hobbies, especially reading. I have read lots of classics on Chinese history so I’m familiar with Chinese history and culture. And I know plenty of traditional folk stories, like How Yi Shoots the Suns, Yu Gong Moves a Mountain and so on. I can even tell them in English. And I can get a strong feeling of satisfaction when I see the look of joy on their faces while my classmates are listening to me.
In a word, this activity is meaningful. We can not only create an interest of learning English but also improve our spoken English through the activity. As a Chinese student, it’s our duty to make more people know about our history and culture! I’m proud of it! Only in this way can I make it!
I expect that you can give me this chance to show myself and I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文主要是写一封自荐信,根据题干中的提示内容进行写作,可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导:本文以一般现在时和第一人称为主。第一段和最后一段已给出;第二段主要介绍自己的个人信息和个人优势;第三段讲述自己的个人感想。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚,做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
【2021年】
A
(2021·四川乐山市·中考真题)
研学旅行是通过集体旅行来开展学习和体验相结合的校外教育活动, 深受学生的喜爱。为此, 请你给校报英语专栏写一篇短文, 介绍学校开展的研学活动并发表看法。内容包括:
1. 学习采茶、手工制作, 休验生活;
2.观察动、植物, 亲近自然;
3. 参观名胜古迹、博物馆, 了解历史文化;
4. 观看有意义的影视, 感受国家变化。
注意: 1. 词数80词左右;开头已给出, 不计入总词数;
2. 可适当增加细节, 使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校等信息。
4. 参考词汇: meaningful adj. 有意义的
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students.
Our school has also held many study trips. Here are my experiences.
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【答案】
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students.
Our school has also held many study trips. Here are my experiences.
Firstly, we went to pick tea in person and made things by hand to experience life. Secondly, we got close to nature and I learnt more knowledge by watching many plants and animals. Then, after we visited museums as well as places of interest, we understood Chinese history and culture more deeply. Finally, we saw some meaningful movies and felt the great changes of our country.
In my opinion, the study trip is very helpful for us and we will be able to have more chances to take part in these kinds of activities.
【详解】
1. 题干解读:题目要求根据提示词语和提示要点,写出自己学校的游学经历,可以适当的发挥,写作时要运用正确的英语表达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导:写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来,用第一人称和其他人称相结合来写作,时态以一般过去时为主,要做到要点齐全,无单词拼写和语法错误。
B
(2021·甘肃天水市·中考真题)
学习一门新的语言不是一件容易的事情,不过万事都有规律可循。请根据思维导图提示的语言学习经历和经验,以 “How can we become good language learners?”为题,写一篇英语短文。
要求:
1. 应包含思维导图提示中所有要点,可适当进行拓展;
2. 词数:80词左右;
3. 书写工整规范;
4. 标题、首末段已给出,不计入总词数,无需抄写在答题卡书面表达作答区域;
5. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
How can we become good language learners?
What makes a good language learner? There are some things that good language learners do and some things they don’t do._________________________________________________________________________________
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Don’t forget that it’s never too late to become a good language learner.
【答案】
How can we become good language learners?
What makes a good language learner? There are some things that good language learners do and some things they don’t do.
First, don’t be afraid of making mistakes. People often get things wrong. Good language learners notice their mistakes and learn from them. Then, do group activities. People use language to communicate with other people. Also, be sure to use a dictionary. Good language learners often use dictionaries to check the meaning of words they don’t know. What’s more, good language learners have fun with the language. Watch a film, listen to songs, play video games or read a book. At last, think in the language you’re learning outside the classroom.
Don’t forget that it’s never too late to become a good language learner.
【详解】
1.题干解读:题目要求根据思维导图的提示,写一篇题目为“How can we become good language learners?”的短文。
2.写作指导:本文时态为一般现在时为主,人称主要为第三人称。根据思维导图所给的要点提示进行写作,可适当发挥,注意表达清楚自己的观点,并给出合理的理由和建议来支撑观点,写作时注意语句通顺、语法正确、条理清晰。
C
(2021·河北中考真题)
初中生活已近尾声,同学们即将步入高一级学校。请你仔细阅读下表中的内容和所给提示,从下面两所学校中选择一所你喜欢的学校,并根据该校信息写一篇短文。
Names
Items(条目)
Purple School
Orange School
Schools
public, a long history
private, well-known
Teachers
hard-working
young and active
Students
less homework
colorful activities
提示:(1) Which school would you like to go to?
(2) Why do you choose it?
注意:1. 短文须包括表格中你所选学校的全部信息和提示中的两个要点,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
3. 词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)
I would like to go to_______________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
I would like to go to Orange School.
I like Orange School better because it is a private school and it is well-known in our city. There are a lot of new and modern teaching facilities. We can have access to the most advanced equipment and experience the best teaching effects. What’s more, the teachers in Orange School are young and active. I think it is important and helpful for us to develop a good relationship with teachers. And it is good for our study. Last but not least, students there have colorful activities and I hope the school life will be wonderful there.
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容,选择一所喜欢的学校进行写作。注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文,时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍学校的特点、学校老师和学生的情况等。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
D
(2021·湖南岳阳市·中考真题)
根据《中国美好生活大调查》结果,我们的家乡岳阳荣获“中国美好生活城市十大心仪之城”的称号,是湖南省唯一入选的地级市。家乡,一个你成长的地方,请你根据下面的图表信息,以“My Hometown—Yueyang”为题,写一篇英语短文向别人介绍你的家乡岳阳。
要求:
1.词数80〜100;
2.请根据以上提示信息,结合实际情况叙述,可适当发挥;
3.文稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名;
4.字迹工整,语言流畅,表达正确,逻辑清晰。
My Hometown — Yueyang
Yueyang is one of the top ten favorite cities in China._____________________________________________
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My Hometown — Yueyang
Yueyang is one of the top ten favorite cities in China. It is located in the northeast of Hunan, covering about 15,019 square kilometers. It has a population of about 5.77 million. Yueyang has a history of over 2,500 years. There are different seasons in Yueyang. Yueyang is a place with fresh air and clean water. There are also many places to visit, such as Dongting Lake and Yueyang Tower. Yueyang also has a lot of good things to eat. You can eat fish, rice, crayfish and so on.
Do you like my hometown? Welcome to visit my hometown.
【详解】
1.题干解读:题目要求根据思维导图内容介绍自己的家乡——岳阳,要包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第三人称和一般现在时来介绍岳阳,内容需包含位置、面积大小、人口、历史、天气、环境、名胜和美食等方面,可适当发挥。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
E
(2021·陕西中考真题)
人们常说:“服务他人,快乐自己。”你准备利用即将到来的暑假去社区做一些服务工作。请根据以下表格提示内容,给你们学校的英文报写一篇短文, 介绍你的计划。
Places
Activities
Community center
help the old, sing songs, tell stories, …
Community hospital( s)
handout the leaflets(宣传册)on COVID-19, …
Community park(s)
pick up rubbish, water flowers, …
…
…
要求:
1. 参考表格提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文章不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4. 词数:不少于70 词。(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。)
As we all know, “Serving others can bring us happiness.” Summer holiday is coming, I’ll ________________
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I’m sure I’ll have a meaningful holiday this summer.
【答案】
As we all know, “Serving others can bring us happiness.” Summer holiday is coming. I’ll do some service in my community to make it better. First, I’ll go to our community center to help and cheer up the old people. For example, I can sing songs or tell them some interesting stories. Second, I’m going to hand out the leaflets on COVID-19 at our community hospital or other places. Next, I’m also planning to pick up and sort rubbish with my friends in our community park. What’s more, I’ll help the kids with their lessons and look after them as well.
I’m sure I’ll have a meaningful holiday this summer.
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。介绍自己的暑假计划。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用一般将来时。根据所给的提示要点,介绍自己暑假即将要进行的一些社区服务工作。写作时保持主谓一致性,逻辑性要强,无语法和标点错误。
F
(2021·湖北武汉市·中考真题)
孔子学院(Confucius Institute)夏令营在汉招募志者。假如你是李华请用英文写自荐信。
内容要点如下:
1.性格外向,喜欢交朋友
2.能用英语讲中国故事和与人沟通;
3.了解中国历史和文化,会唱楚剧;
4.爱好广泛,擅长乒乓球;
5.补充两点有关信息或想法。
注意:
1.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
2.词数:60-80;
3.内容连贯,不要逐条翻译;
4.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇: Chu opera楚剧 culture文化 ping-pong乒乓球
Dear sir/madam,
I am Li Hua from Wuhan. May I have the honor to work as a volunteer at Confucius Institute?____________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear sir/madam,
I am Li Hua from Wuhan. May I have the honor to work as a volunteer at Confucius Institute? I’m good at Chinese and English. Chinese history and culture are my favorites. It’s easy for me to communicate and tell Chinese stories in both languages. I’ve got many hobbies, such as playing ping-pong and singing Chu opera. I’m healthy, hard-working and like to try new things. I’m outgoing. I love to meet different people and make friends with them. In my eyes, volunteer work is a good opportunity to learn something new.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容,写一封自荐信。注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称来介绍,时态用一般现在时。作文要介绍自己的性格、语言能力、兴趣爱好以及想做志愿者的目的。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
G
(2021·江苏扬州市·中考真题)
某英文报正在举行“家乡美”为主题的征文活动,你打算以“Spring in my hometown”为题写一篇英语短文投稿,请根据以下问题提示完成征文。
提示:
(1) What is spring like in your hometown?
(2) What do people in your hometown usually do in spring? (three points)
(3) How do you like your hometown in spring? (two points)
要求:
(1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
(2)必须包括提示中的所有信息,并适当发挥;
(3)词数:100 词左右;
(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Spring in my hometown
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【答案】
Spring in my hometown
When spring comes, everything comes back to life and the climate becomes warm. People feel more comfortable than in winter. The mountains which are very high in my hometown become more and more green. Most flowers blossom as the weather becomes warm. All of these scenes draw a beautiful picture.
People begin to climb mountains, have a picnic near rivers. They also fly kites in the parks. They try their best to be close to nature and enjoy the beauty of it. Famers start to sow and wait for a good harvest.
As far as I am concerned, spring in my hometown is full of life and power. It gives us energy and hope. I love the spring in my hometown.
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Spring in my hometown”为题,结合提示内容进行写作,介绍家乡的春天,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍,时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段,第一段介绍家乡的春天是什么样子的;第二段介绍家乡的人在春天通常做什么;第三段介绍自己对家乡的春天的感受。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
H
(2021·四川自贡市·中考真题)
假定你是李华,你校将为在自贡的英国交换生举办一次中国文化体验活动。请根据以下提示写封邮件给交换生负责人Peter,告知体验活动当天的相关安排,内容包括:
1. 统一集合,乘车前往;
2. 活动内容:参观恐龙博物馆;观看彩灯制作;欣赏二胡演奏等;
3. 注意事项。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
参考词汇:恐龙:dinosaur 化石:fossil 彩灯:colorful lantern
Dear Peter,
How’s everything going? I’m writing to tell you something about the Chinese cultural activity which our school will organize for your exchange students_____________________________________________________
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Hope you enjoy your trip.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Peter,
How’s everything going? I’m writing to tell you something about the Chinese cultural activity which our school will organize for your exchange students.
We are going to meet at the school gate. Then we’ll go to visit Museum of Dinosaur by coach. There you’ll see many different kinds of dinosaur fossil. After visiting the museum, we’re going to watch the colorful lantern production. You will learn how to make the colourful lanterns. If you want to have a try, you can make them by yourselves. In the afternoon, we will go to enjoy erhu playing. It’s very interesting. At five o’clock, we will come back to our school.
Hope you enjoy your trip.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题目解读:本文是一篇材料作文,要求介绍中国文化体验活动,包括活动安排和注意事项。注意要点齐全,层次清晰。
2.写作指导:文章开头结尾已给出,介绍活动用一段,第一人称和第二人称交替使用,时态是一般将来时。使用恰当的连词连接上下文。
I
(2021·山东菏泽市·中考真题)
假如你是李华, 你的英国笔友Lisa发来邮件, 询问你的暑假安排。请你根据图片提示, 用英语给她写封回信。
要求:
1. 语言规范, 语句通顺;
2. 应包括图片所有要点, 可适当发挥;
3. 字数:100词左右, 开头和结尾已经给出, 不计入总词数。
可能用到的词汇:the 1st National Congress of the CPC 中共一大;publicize 宣传;garbage classification 垃圾分类
Dear Lisa,
I’m glad to hear from you. Now let me tell you something about my holiday plan.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Lisa,
I’m glad to hear from you. Now let me tell you something about my holiday plan.
First, I will help my mother do chores at home, such as sweeping the floor and cleaning the windows. Next, I will do some volunteer jobs. I will publicize in my community how to do garbage classification. Then, I want to travel to learn more about Chinese culture. I will travel to Shanghai to visit the site of the 1st National Congress of CPC in Shanghai. And I will also visit the South Lake Red Boat in Jiaxing, Zhejiang. Last but not least, I will improve my spoken English by joining English clubs. What about your plan?
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读:题干要求根据图示提示向对方介绍自己的暑假安排。注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用一般将来时。根据图片的提示要点,进行一一介绍。从做家务,做志愿工作,旅行和学习英语等四个方面来介绍自己的计划。写作时保持主谓一致性,逻辑性要强,无语法和标点错误。
J
(2021·四川眉山市·中考真题)
假定你是李华,请用英语给你的朋友 John 写一封邮件,分享你的兴趣爱好,内容包括:
1.介绍爱好(打篮球);
2.喜欢的原因(增强体质,结交朋友);
3.打篮球经历(从小训练,加入校队);
4.个人的感受(学会合作,……)。
注意:
1.词数 100 左右;
2.可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
Dear John,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear John,
How’s everything going? It’s my pleasure to share my hobby with you.
I like sports, especially basketball. Here are some reasons. On one hand, playing basketball is a good way to make me stronger. On the other hand, I can make friends with people who share the same interest. I have been a fan of basketball since I was five years old. I almost practice playing basketball every day and I’m a member of our school team. By playing basketball, I learn how to work with others and try my best to realize my goals.
So, how about your hobby? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读:题目要求根据内容提示,写一封邮件,分享自己的兴趣,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称和一般现在时为主,介绍自己的兴趣时要包含所有提示要点,并做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
K
(2021·山东潍坊市·中考真题)
Teens Around the World是一个国际青少年网站,近日有人发帖,讨论“发现生活中的小欢喜”。假设你是李华,请结合自己的生活体会,用英语跟帖。
注意:
1. 不要出现考生本人信息;
2. 80词左右。
Teens Around the World
Subject: Discover the little happiness in daily life
Hey, guys! These days many teenagers say they nearly forget how to smile. In fact, little happiness is everywhere in our daily life. Try to think about one thing that makes you feel happy. What happened and what did you do at that moment? Please share your story with us.
Emily, England
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua, China
【答案】
Dear Emily,
I think you’re right. I have volunteered in Old People’s Home, and this experience made me happy.
Last term, our school held an activity to volunteer in Old People’s Home. I joined it. I helped old people there to clean their rooms, made their beds, told stories, sang and danced with them. We all enjoyed ourselves on that day. I got a lot of fun helping others. So I decide to take part in more volunteer activities.
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇书信作文。分享曾经让自己开心的生活点滴。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用一般现在时和一般过去时,描述过去的经历要用一般过去时。先引出主题;再分享自己的经历和感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性,逻辑性要强,无语法和标点错误。
L
(2021·浙江台州市·中考真题)
假如你是李华,请给你的外国好友Andrew写一封电子邮件,介绍你校美食文化节(food festival)的相关内容及举办目的, 并邀请他参加此次美食节。邮件内容包括:
Time
2: 00 p.m. Friday, June 25th
Place
the school playground
Activities
cook, have something delicious ...
Aims
experience Chinese food culture, raise money for charity.
注意:
(1)邮件必须包括表格中的所有信息,可适当发挥;
(2)邮件中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息;
(3)词数:80-100。邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
To: Andrew
From Li Hua
Hi, Andrew
How is it going?___________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Li Hua
【答案】
Hi Andrew,
How is it going? Knowing that you are fond of food. I’m writing to invite you to attend our school food festival.
The festival will begin at 2:00 on Friday afternoon, June 25th on the school playground. We are glad to have something delicious like dumplings and zongzi. We can also cook food and sell it to our schoolmates to raise money for charity. The festival will surely offer us a good chance to show and experience Chinese traditional food culture. Besides, it is a good time for us to share happiness, love and team spirit. It’s a great pleasure to have you here with us.
Looking forward to your reply.
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读:本题为电子邮件写作,写作时应注意电子邮件标准格式。根据题目所给提示,学生要在电子邮件中介绍学校美食节、其举办目的以及邀请Andrew参加该活动。
2.写作指导:写作时人称应用第一、三人称,时态应用现在时或将来时。表格所给要点要写全,切勿遗漏,还可适当进行拓展。拓展的内容应与全文内容紧密衔接,并能很好地串联起来。此外还应注意英语的表达问题,语句表达要符合英语表达习惯和语法,不要出现单词拼写及语法时态使用错误。
M
(2021·浙江金华市·中考真题)
假如你叫Daming,本周六你们班要去浙江大学开展研学活动(study tour)。请根据下列表格中的内容,给外籍教师Mike发一份邮件,告知你们的计划,并邀请他一同前往。
注意:
1. 文中必须包含所给的内容要点,可适当发挥;参考词汇供选择使用;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3. 词数:80~100;
4. 邮件的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
内容要点:
内容要点
参考词汇
When and where to go
Zhejiang University, this Saturday
How to go
by train
What to do
visit …, talk with …, learn about ..., …
What to take
passport, …
Others
meet at the school gate, 7: 30 a.m., …
Dear Mike,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Daming
【答案】
Dear Mike,
My classmates and I are going to Zhejiang University for a study tour this Saturday. It is one of the best universities in China and also my dream university. When we are there, we’ll go around the campus, visit the labs and libraries, and learn about its history. We will also talk with the teachers and students there.
Would you like to join us? If yes, please remember to take your passport because we’ll take the train. And we will meet at the school gate at 7:30 on Saturday morning.
Looking forward to seeing you!
Yours,
Daming
【详解】
1.题干解读:本题为电子邮件写作,要注意标准的电子邮件格式,要求根据题目要点提示写出关于浙江大学研学活动的计划,所给要点必须全部包括,并可适当进行拓展。
2.写作指导:写作时应用第一人称,时态应用现在时或将来时。写作时要点要齐全,不要遗漏,思路最好按照所给的要点顺序进行叙述,注意邮件的开头结束标准用语。
N
(2021·浙江丽水市·中考真题)
外教Steve爱好武术,喜欢运动。他想在任教期满前再体验一次中国文化。假设你是李华,请根据下面的要点,写一封邮件,邀请他到你家过周末。
内容要点
参考词汇
weekend plan/activities
sports (or music/drawing)
paint, play basketball, ….
experience of Chinese cultures
make jiaozi, write with a Chinese brush, …
注意:
(1)文中必须包含上表中的两个要点,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名等相关信息;
(3)词数:80~100;开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
To
Steve@mail.com
Subject
Weekend Plan
Hi, Steve!
I’m Li Hua. I hear you’d like to experience some more Chinese cultures before going back. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Hi, Steve!
I’m Li Hua. I hear you’d like to experience some more Chinese cultures before going back. So why not come to my home for the weekend? I have a good plan!
As both of us like sports, let’s play basketball in the gym around my home in the morning. After that, we can practice writing with a Chinese brush together. It’s not easy, but it makes us peaceful. You can also sense the beauty of the Chinese characters. To experience more, we are going to make jiaozi, one of the most traditional foods in China. It must be meaningful to have jiaozi made by yourself. I am sure you will have great fun.
Wait for your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据提示内容,写一封邮件,邀请Steve来家里过周末。注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍,时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段,第一段发出邀请;第二段介绍二人可以在周末做什么;第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
O
(2021·江西中考真题)
The Value of Negative Results
We all avoid failure(失败), and most of us fear it. However, without failure, progress would be impossible. What does success usually come after? Failure. It seems that one cannot exist(存在)without the other.
Accepting failure is not easy for many, though we are often unwilling to accept failure because our professional fame depends on success. ______ In the past ten years, for example, some scientific magazines have published reports of failed tests. It is believed that scientists can learn more “negative(负面的)” results and that this can finally lead to positive results.
_______ The ABN AMRO bank started an Institute (机构)of Brilliant Failures to learn more about what works and what doesn’t in banking. Eli Lilly and Company had failure parties to study the drugs(药物)that don’t work.
In fact, one of the business world’s most famous failures became one of its biggest successes, in part because the product’s makers learned from their mistakes. _____ The product, though unique(独特的)at the time, was expensive and heavy; besides, some of its most important features(特点)didn’t work properly. As a result, Apple’s CEO, Steve Jobs, believed in the product and he began to find out ways of improving it. In time, this led to the production of the iPhone and the iPad, two of the company’s most successful products.
______Not only should we try to learn from it if we want to succeed, we must also be persistent(执着的). Though Apple stopped selling the Newton in 1998, the first iPhone wasn’t available until 2007. It took a lot of research and hard work to go from the Apple Newton to iPhone but in the end, the effort became successful.
All in all, there is a lot we can learn by studying mistakes. Perhaps the most important lesson is that failure and success are two sides of the same coin. ______
A.One truly cannot exist without the other.
B.We are brave enough to face difficulties.
C.In the early 1990s, Apple created a phone called the Apple Newton.
D.The business world already understands the value of negative results.
E. The Apple Newton has won popularity with people all over the world.
F. However, things are slowly changing, especially in business and science.
G. The story of the Apple Newton can teach us an important lesson about failure.
20.书面表达
失败乃成功之母。本卷阅读理解B部分文章讨论了失败对于获取成功具有重要的价值请你根据下面提示,写一篇英语短文,谈谈你如何借鉴Apple的成功经验,采取有效行动,失败为成功。
写作要点:
1 What have you learned from Apple’s story?
2 Have you ever experienced a failure? What was it?
3 What will you do to turn it into a success?
要求:
1短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3词数不少于80。
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【答案】
Failure can lead to success. We should study it and learn why we make mistakes, then find ways to solve our problems. Also, we should never give up!
I once tried out for a speech competition. I practiced it many times. Unexpectedly, I failed. I’ve never spoken in front of the public ever since.
Apple’s story is quite an inspiration for me. What can I do to make it? First, be confident and try to speak in public places. Second, ask my teachers or friends for some advice and improve my language skills. Finally, be persistent and practice speeches over and over again.
I’m sure I will succeed some day.
【分析】
本文介绍了人们对待错误不同态度,过去的时候人们害怕错误,避免错误;现在人们正面错误,从错误中吸取教训,改进产品。
(1).题干解读:本文要求根据阅读理解B部分文章,谈谈如何借鉴Apple的成功经验,结合所给写作要点写一篇文章。内容包括从Apple的故事中学习到了什么,你的失败经历,要如何将失败变为成功。
(2).写作指导:本文主要采用第一人称写作,时态为一般现在时和一般过去时。第一部分介绍从Apple的成功中学习到了什么,时态为一般现在时;第二部分描写自己的失败经历,时态为一般过去时;第三部分为如何把失败变为成功,时态为一般现在时。写作时要行文连贯,条理清晰,语言准确。
P
(2021·山东枣庄市·中考真题)
Write a short passage about your parents’ changes in the past three years when they get along with you. (写一篇关于在过去三年里你的父母在与你相处过程中变化的短文。)(请根据下面的提示, 在答题卡第六节下面, 写出一篇90-120词的短文。
注意∶不要出现自己的信息∶诸如姓名、学校, 人名可以用英文名字。)
l. The title of your short passage. (你的短文的标题。)
2. First, write the general introduction about how your parents got along with you in the past;
(首先写关于你父母过去是如何和你相处的总体介绍。)
3. Second, write the most important change and how it happened.
(其次写最重要的一次变化以及是如何发生的, )
4. Third, write about how you feel about this change.
(最后写一下你对变化的感受。)
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
How my parents have changed!
My parents have changed a lot in the past three years. They used to be strict with me. On Sunday, they always let me stay at home and study. So I didn’t any friends.
Their biggest change is much gentler than before. Because I don’t have any friends, I’m very lonely. I’m not interested in my study, so my grades are worse and worse. Now my parents let me go out on Sunday. I have made many friends. We often help each other and get better grades.
Now I get on well with my parents. I love my parents very much.
【详解】
1.题干解读:该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时注意根据提示的内容,写出在过去三年里你的父母在与你相处过程中的变化:首先写父母过去是如何和你相处的总体介绍;其次写最重要的一次变化以及是如何发生的;最后写一下你对变化的感受。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第一人称和第三人称来进行写作;时态采用一般现在时为主,用一般过去式介绍过去;在介绍内容时,力求语言准确,内容全面,保证条理清晰。
Q
(2021·浙江温州市·中考真题)
在中国传统文化中, “家”是一个永恒的话题。家人相聚一堂,才是完整的家,温暖而有力量。请你结合下图,以 “Home”为题,写一篇约110词的英语短文。让外国朋友了解中国文化中的 “家”。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
Home
Home means a lot to every Chinese.
When our family members come back home for reunion, we sit around the table, sharing our achievements and happiness. Home becomes the warmest place.
It’s a place full of love. Love can be expressed by gift, family dinner and phone call. However, none is better than going back home and spending time with our families.
It’s also a place full of strength. Whenever we have difficulties, we can return home. Thanks to the encouragement and help from our families, we can rebuild our belief and confidence to keep moving forward.
So how long have you been away from home? Come back. Home is always waiting for you.
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇话题作文。以“家”为题来介绍中国文化中的“家”。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用一般现在时。第一段引出主题;第二段到第四段介绍了家究竟是一个什么样的地方;最后一段总结概括。写作时保持主谓一致性,逻辑性要强,无语法和标点错误。
R
(2021·四川泸州市·中考真题)
假如你是李华,已升入高一级学校,现应邀回校向同学们介绍英语学习方法。请根据下列要点提示,以“To Be a Successful English Learner”为题,写一篇英语演讲稿。
要点提示:
1.兴趣方面:听英语歌,看英语影片等;
2.习惯方面:用词典查生词,写英语日记等;
3.素养方面:提升听说读写能力,学习中外文化等;
4.意志方面:不畏困难,勇于挑战等;
5.个人观点:……
要求:
1.词数110词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2.要点提示均须涉及,可适当增加内容;
3.不用真实姓名、校名、地名。
参考词语:develop, improve, ability, culture, challenge
To Be a Successful English Learner
Dear schoolmates,
I’m Li Hua. I’m honored to be invited here to share my ideas about how to learn English well. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for your listening.
【答案】
To Be a Successful English Learner
Dear schoolmates,
I’m Li Hua. I’m honored to be invited here to share my ideas about how to learn English well.
To be a successful English learner, we should develop a good study habit and be good at thinking and solving problems. We can look up new words with the help of the dictionary. We can keep diaries every day to improve our English. We also should make full use of learning resources. Reading newspapers, listening to English songs and watching English movies.
We should improve our ability to read and learn Chinese and foreign cultures.
When you study English, it’s sure to meet all kinds of different problems. We shouldn’t feel afraid of them. We should do our best to solve these difficulties and challenge them.
In my opinion, we should read and write in English every day. To practice, we can also speak to our friends and classmates in English.
Thanks for your listening.
【详解】
1. 题干解读:题目要求根据提示词语和提示要点,写出如何成为一个成功的英语学习者,可以适当的发挥,从多方面入手,写作时要运用正确的英语表达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导:写作时要与已给出的开头和结尾融合起来,用第一人称来写作,时态以一般现在为主,多用情态动词should提出建议,要做到要点齐全,无单词拼写和语法错误。
【2020年】
2020年中考真题英语分项汇编
专题21 书面表达
考点2说明介绍类
(一)【2020 •贵州省黔西南州】
61. 假如你叫李华,你们学校刚刚开学,正在开展 “Happy Month”活动,请你以 “Learn to BeHappy”为题,给学校英语广播站写一篇广播稿,号召同学们返校后快乐生活。
内容包括:
1.新冠疫情使学校延迟开学;
2.通过上网课学习语文、数学和英语等课程;
3.“Happy, Month”活动和你的心情:
4.如何快乐生活(至少2点)。
写作要求:
1.结构完整,表达通顺,语言规范,书写清晰;
2.文中不得出现任何真实的人名和学校名称等信息;
3.词数80左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:新型冠状病毒COVID—19
Learn to Be Happy
Good morning, everyone! We’re very happy to be back to school.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope all of us can live happily in this school. Thank you for your listening!
【写作思路】
本文是一篇材料作文,假如你是李华,学校刚刚开学,正在开展 “Happy Month”活动,要求你以 “Learn to Be Happy”为题,题干内容提示,给学校英语广播站写一篇广播稿,号召同学们返校后快乐生活。首先要认真审题,根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作。
【参考范文】
Learn to Be Happy
Good morning ,everyone! I'm very happy to be back to school.
To prevent the Corid-19, our school has delayed (put off) the opening of this term. But we didn't stop studying. Our school gave us online courses such as Chinese, Math, English and so on. We were very happy.
Now our school is carrying out the plan“happy Month”. How to be happy? First, I think we should have life aims ,with life aims, we can live a happy and meaningful life. Then, we must keep healthy. What’s more, we should be ready to help others.
I hope all of us can live happily in this school. Thank you for your listening!
【名师点评】
1.例文点评:本例文结构严谨,层次分明。根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
2.高分亮点:
短语:put off,such as,so on,keep healthy,be ready to。
句型:I think we should have life aims. 我认为我们应该有生活目标。I think后接宾语从句。
What’s more, we should be ready to help others. 更重要的是,我们应该准备好帮助别人。be ready to do sth.准备好做某事。
(二)【2020 •黑龙江哈尔滨】
80.假如你是中学生李平,曾经在你们班学习的交换生Peter看了你发布的朋友圈,他对你们班上周举行的主题班会很感兴趣。请你根据以下信息给他写一封信,向他介绍班会的情况并和他交流一下中学生如何才能实现自己的理想。
写作要点:
1.班会的主题:我的理想
2.介绍你和几名同学的理想:
(1)赵勇:想成为一名勇敢的警察;
(2)张红:想做一名志愿者;
(3)你:想成为一名优秀的医生。
3.说说中学生如何才能实现(realize)自己的理想(ideal)。
写作要求:
1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4.至少80词。
Dear peter,
I'm writing to tell you something about the class meeting held last week. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
【写作思路】
这是一篇话题作文,介绍班会情况,班会的主题是谈论理想,通过分析可知,除了短文开头介绍上周班会情况,我们应该使用一般过去时态,其他内容可以使用一般现在时和一般将来时,注意谓语动词要随着时态和人称的变化而改变。
【参考范文】
Dear peter,
I'm writing to tell you something about the class meeting held last week. The theme of it was “My Ideal”. Our monitor hosted the meeting. During it, all of us took an active part in the discussion and shared our opinions with each other.
Zhao Yong is going to be a brave policeman. He hopes to help people in danger. Zhang Hong wants to be a volunteer, she will help people in need especially the disabled and the homeless. My dream is to be an excellent doctor, I think it’s a meaningful job, because I can save people’s lives and help them out of danger.
To realize our ideals, I have some opinions. Firstly, we must try to work harder from now on and learn as much knowledge as possible. Secondly, we should believe ourselves, because confidence is the key to success. Besides, it’s also important to find out how successfully people did it so that we can learn from them.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
【名师点评】
1.例文点评:例文采用分段式,文中衔接流畅,在写作的时候选择了一些相对高级的词汇,也运用多种句型,句式丰富多彩,避免单一化,增加了文章的亮点,润色了文章的内容。
2.高分亮点:
短语:host the meeting;take an active part in;in danger;a meaningful job;from now on;learn from。
句型:① I think it’s a meaningful job, because I can save people’s lives and help them out of danger.
②Secondly, we should believe ourselves, because confidence is the key to success.
③Besides, it’s also important to find out how successfully people did it so that we can learn from them.
(三)【2020 •黑龙江龙东地区】
81.为加强机场服务工作,现面向社会招募志愿者,若你具备以下条件,请致电:63688881。
1)身体健康;2)性格善良、有耐心;3)擅长与人沟通;4)会讲汉语和英语。
请根据以上信息,用5-6句话写一份招聘广告。
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【参考范文】
Volunteers wanted
We need volunteers at the airport. Are you in good health? Are you kind and patient? Are you good at communicating with people? Can you speak both Chinese and English? Please call us at 63688881.
(四)【2020 •黑龙江龙东地区】
83.仔细观察图片描述,展开合理想象,然后写一篇短文。
12 3.45.
提示词:mask(口罩);keep a certain distance(保持一定距离)
要求:1. 话题作文或图示作文任选其一。
2. 词数:80-100之间。
3. 字迹工整,语法正确,意思连贯,合乎逻辑,可适当发挥。
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【写作思路】
本题属于图画作文。要求观察图片,展开合理想象来写一篇作文。观察图片及提示词可知这里是五条关于预防新型冠状病毒肺炎的建议。写作时要紧扣图片内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时,再阅读一遍,减少语法错误,不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
【参考范文】
Novel coronavirus is spreading around the world and many countries are fighting against it. We should do something to avoid it.
Here is my advice for everyone. Firstly, if we have to go out, we must wear masks to protect ourselves. Secondly, we should always wash hands to keep germs away. Thirdly, we need to open the windows very often to let the fresh air in. Fouthly, we should take our temperature often and if we have a fever we should go to the doctor in time. Finally, keeping a certain distance with others is also very important.
【名师点评】
1. 例文点评:这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求,从图片内容延伸出5条预防新型冠状病毒肺炎的建议,用上了所给提示词并进行了适当发挥。例文简明扼要,结构清晰,语言表达到位。
2. 高分亮点:
单词和短语:spread;around the world;fight against;avoid;wear masks;keep germs away;take one's temperature;have a fever;in time;keep a certain distance。
句型:and连接的并列句;以here开头的倒装句;if引导的条件状语从句。
(五)【2020 •湖南省常德市】
61.假设你是Angelica的朋友Alan,请根据第二节(回答问题)材料并按照提示给Angelica回信:1. 恭喜乔迁并简单评述其新居。2. 回复能否参加聚会。3. 若能参加聚会,你会准备什么节目,对整个活动有什么建议等;若不能参会,说明原因,表达自己的心情等。注意:1. 80词以上,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;2. 不得出现人名和校名等真实信息。
Dear Angelica,
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Alan
【写作思路】
这是一篇书信作文。本文要求按照提示要点写一封回信,写作中注意要包含所有的提示要点,可适当发挥。时态以一般现在时为主,人称是第一人称。
【参考范文】
Dear Angelica,
I’m glad to receive your letter last time. First of all, congratulations on your settlement to the new house,which is so warm and comfortable that I’d like to have a look at once. The small independent garden is the best design in the house, and also a good place to relax. Secondly, I really appreciate your invitation of the housewarming party. I’d love to, but I can’t. As you know, the National Piano Grading Test is coming, my course schedule on these days is already full. I have to devote myself to the preparation until the end of the test. At last, it’s a great pity that I can’t come to your party. But I’ve prepared a gift for you and I hope you will like it.
May your party be a great success and enjoy yourself that day!
Yours,
Alan
【名师点评】
1.例文点评:本文采用两段式,第一段:(1)恭喜对方乔迁之喜;(2)告诉对方因为要准备钢琴等级考试无法参加聚会;(3)表示很遗憾并准备了礼物;第二段以祝福结尾。文章紧扣题目要点,内容完整,结构清晰,语言表达到位。
2.高分亮点:
短语:be glad to;so…that…;would like (love) to;have a look;at once;have to;devote myself to;prepare for;the end of;enjoy yourself。
句型:First of all…Secondly…At last…;which引导的非限制性定语从句;so…that…引导的结果状语从句;and并列句;but并列复合句;As you know…;it’s +名词+ that从句。
(六)【2020 •江苏省苏州市】
56.下周一些英国学生将来你校交流学习,他们想了解你校各个俱乐部的情况。假定你是林涛,是学校绿色星球俱乐部的负责人,请你根据你们俱乐部的海报内容,用英语写一篇发言稿来作介绍。
注意:
1.词数90左右。开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2.文中须包括所有要点,每个要点可适当发挥,使文章连贯、通顺;
3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
参考词汇: workshop n. 工作坊
Welcome to our school. I’m Lin Tao. I’m glad to introduce our Green Planet Club to you.
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Let’s work together for a green planet. Thank you!
【写作思路】
本题为材料作文,要求就所给提示介绍学校的绿色星球俱乐部,写一篇发言稿。文章时态用现在时,人称用第一人称。
【参考范文】
Welcome to our school. I’m Lin Tao. I’m glad to introduce our Green Planet Club to you.
All our club members meet every Friday afternoon to do something meaningful.
We have DIY workshops. Here, old clothes can be made into handbags. It’s also fun to use recycled bottles and used wood to make furniture like chairs and desks.
Working as volunteers is our task as well. We hand out leaflets and tell people the importance of living a green life. Sometimes, we teach people how to separate waste in communities and help clean up parks and streets. Besides, we look after flowers and trees in our school.
Let’s work together for a green planet. Thank you!
【名师点评】
1.例文点评:例文开头结尾都已给出,需要写作的部分只是画报上的关于俱乐部的简介。例文已包含题目所给全部要点,并进行了适当发挥,文章词句连贯、通顺,符合题目要求,是一篇合格的作文。
2.高分亮点:
短语:be made into,work as,hand out,clean up,look after。
句型:
(1)Here, old clothes can be made into handbags.(被动语态)
(2)It’s also fun to use recycled bottles and used wood to make furniture like chairs and desks.(it作形式主语)
(3)Working as volunteers is our task as well.(动名词作主语)
(七)【2020 •山东省滨州市】
71.假如你是李华, 你的朋友Clark将来滨州。到滨州后, 你计划带他去参观滨州市博物馆。请你根据以下提示给 Clark写一封电子邮件告知其相关信息。
1. 简介:建于2015年,馆藏丰富,可以品味当地文化与传统艺术。
2. 开放时间:周一全天闭馆周二至周日9: 00—17: 00
3. 入场:免费
4. 注意事项:
5. 博物馆网址:http://www. bzsbwg. com
要求:
1. 包含提示中所有信息,并适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名与校名;
3. 卷面整洁,书写美观,可适当加2-3分
4. 80词左右,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词∶
品味enjoy;展品exhibition;展览:on display
Dear Clark,
I am happy to know that you are coming to Binzhou! I’d like to take you to visit Binzhou Museum. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
该题目是书信类书面表达,根据题目内容完成电子邮件,短文的开头和结尾已经给出,补充剩余内容即可。
【参考范文】
Dear Clark,
I am happy to know that you are coming to Binzhou! I’d like to take you to visit Binzhou Museum.
Binzhou Museum was built in 2015. There are many kinds of exhibitions on display, so it’s a good place to enjoy the local culture and traditional art. We can go there from Tuesday to Sunday. It is open from 9 a. m. to 5 p. m. , but it is closed all day on Monday.
One great thing is that it is free to visit the museum! While visiting the museum we must follow some rules, such as being quiet, no smoking and no pets. Besides, we are not allowed to take photos in order to protect the exhibitions. If you want to get more information, please visit http:/www, bzsbwg. com.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
1.例文点评:例文采用四段式结构,第一段提出想要带克拉克参观滨州博物馆,第二段介绍了滨州博物馆的相关信息,第三段介绍了参观博物馆时的注意事项,第四段结尾,向对方表示祝愿;整篇文章内容完整,结构清晰条理;人称主要是第一人称和第三人称,时态主要是一般现在时。
2.高分亮点:
短语:be happy to do sth.;would like to do sth.;from…to…;follow rules;such as;take photos;in order to do sth.。
句型:Binzhou Museum was built in 2015. 一般过去时的被动语态was done;There are many kinds of exhibitions on display. there be句型。
(八)【2020 •山东省聊城市】
46.假如你叫张宁。你的外国明友Steve在信中问起你在校足球队训练的事。请你用英语给他回一封电子邮件,说明你的训练情况,其主要内容包括:
1. 星期六到学校训练,为的是备战下周与另外一支校足球队的比赛。
2. 因去年被击败,队员们训练起来比以往更加努力。
3. 对本次比赛以及对球迷的希望。
注意:
1. 邮件词数:80左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯,但邮件中不能出现真实的人名、地名。
3. 邮件的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Steve,
It's Saturday tomorrow, but ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Zhang Nin
【写作思路】
这是一篇书信作文。要求根据题目和提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺,语意连贯,紧扣要点,注意句子之间的连接与过渡,要注意涵盖所给提示。
【参考范文】
Dar Steve,
It's Saturday tomorrow, but I am going to school. I'm not going for lessons, but to play football. I am in our school team and we are going to play against another school team next week. The practice starts at 10 a.m. We will arrive as early as we can so that we will have time to warm up. We are training harder than usual because the other team beat us last year.
I hope we can beat them this year and I also hope we will have more fans to come to watch our matches.
Yours,
Zhmg Ning
【名师点评】
例文点评:例文采用两段式;时态综合使用一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时;将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中,适当发挥部分也很好地展示了对文章主题的理解,表达出自己的观点态度。
高分亮点:
短语:as early as we can;so that;warm up;than usual等。
句型:It's Saturday tomorrow, but I am going to school. I'm not going for lessons, but to play football.
I hope we can beat them this year and I also hope we will have more fans to come to watch our matches.
(九)【2020 •四川乐山市】
71.近年来,在一些学生中出现了不珍惜劳动成果、不想劳动、不会劳动的现象;为此,国家最近印发了《关于全面加强新时代大中小学劳动教育的意见》。请你结合自身的体会,就如何培养劳动精神,给校报英语专栏写一篇短文。内容包括:
1. 上劳动课,学习生活技能;
2. 参加实践活动,如:植树、种菜等;
3. 学做家务,如:整理房间、洗衣服等;
4. 养成良好的劳动习惯。
注意:
1. 词数:80词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3. 参考词汇:劳动课a hardworking spirit class。
A guideline on hardworking spirit education came out recently in order to help more students of different ages to get working spirit. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
这是一篇材料作文,要点已全部给出,学生按照逻辑将其连接起来即可。时态应用一般现在时,人称应以第一人称为主。
【参考范文】
A guideline on hardworking spirit education came out recently in order to help more students of different ages to get working spirit. As a middle school student, I welcome it warmly.
Firstly, we should have hardworking spirit classes to learn some basic life skills at school every week. Secondly, we can take part in out-of-class activities such as planting trees or growing vegetables to enrich our real-world work experience. Also, we need try to do some chores at home, like tidying rooms, washing clothes or cooking some dishes. Above all, we could form good working habits and value the importance of working hard through our experience.
In a word, the hardworking spirit education is necessary and it helps to build us up.
【名师点评】
1.例文点评:例文先是直奔主题,表明自己对培养劳动精神的热烈欢迎;然后从4个方面分别说明了如何培养劳动精神分别是上课、参加活动、做家务以及养成良好习惯;最后总结点题,表明培养劳动精神的重要性。语言流畅,要点齐全,无语法错误。
2.高分亮点:
take part in 参加
such as 例如
try to do sth. 尽力做某事
the importance of ……的重要性
In a word 简而言之
helps to do sth. 帮助做某事
Firstly, we should have hardworking spirit classes to learn some basic life skills at school every week. 不定式作目的状语
Above all, we could form good working habits and value the importance of working hard through our experience. 表示连接关系的并列句
(十)【2020 •浙江省嘉兴市】
71.假设你是 David,打算今年夏天去 Batsford Arboretum游玩。请给植物园写一封简短的邮件,询问你想了解的信息,如用餐、门票价格等。
注意:
(1)邮件中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
(2)词数:30-50。邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
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David
【写作思路】
本题为书信作文,要求给植物园写一份邮件进行咨询。时态应用现在时,人称可用第一、二人称。
【参考范文】
Dear Sir or Madam,
Hope everything goes well.
I am writing to you tell that I will visit Batsford Arboretum this summer. And I’d like to know whether I can have lunch there or not. If not, I will bring my own food there. How about the price of the ticket? Can I get a student discount on this ticket price?
I am looking forward to your reply. Thank you.
David
【名师点评】
1.例文点评:例文为标准书信格式,第一段和最后一段均为标准邮件开头、结尾用语。中间第二段则是按照题目所给提示,就植物园就餐和门票问题进行了提问。例文思路清晰,条理清楚,符合题目所列要求,是一篇合格的范文。
2.高分亮点:
短语:whether … or not,if not,be looking forward to,
句型:
(1)I am writing to you tell that I will visit Batsford Arboretum this summer.(宾语从句)
(2)How about the price of the ticket?(how about句型)
(十一)【2020 •四川省甘孜州】
71.假定你叫李华。你的笔友Peter发邮件说他打算暑假来四川旅游。请你用英语给他回复一封邮件, 内容包括:
1. 表示欢迎;
2. 询问到达时间;
3. 你的接待安排(如参观名胜古迹等)。
参考词汇:名胜古迹place of interest
注意:1. 内容必须包括所给信息;
2. 词数:80左右(邮件开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数);
3. 可适当增加细节,不得出现个人真实信息。
Dear Peter,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
本题属于书信作文,邮件的开头和结尾已给出。要求根据提示内容给笔友Peter回复邮件。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时,再阅读一遍,减少语法错误,不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to hear that you're planning to visit Sichuan during the summer vacation. I would be very happy if you could stay at my house.
Here is my plan for you. First, I have visited many places of interest in Sichuan, such as Mount Emei and the World-famous Jiuzhaigou Nature Reserve. So I will be the best guide for you. Second, there are many delicious Sichuan dishes for you to taste. Sichuan even boasts its own food museum. Besides, Sichuan Opera is a typical local opera in Sichuan Province. If time permits, we can go to watch it.
Please let us know when you are arriving. I’m looking forward to seeing you soon.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
1. 例文点评:这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求,先是对Peter的到来表示欢迎,紧接着写自己的接待安排,最后询问Peter到来的时间并表示自己的期待。例文简明扼要,结构清晰,语言表达到位。
2. 高分亮点:
单词和短语:during;place of interest;such as;besides;look forward to doing sth.。
句型:that引导的宾语从句;if引导的条件状语从句;so连接并列句;there be句型;祈使句;when引导的时间状语从句。
2020年中考真题英语分项汇编
专题22 书面表达
考点2说明介绍类
【2020 •海南省】
66.周末是我们生活中重要的一部分,合理利用周末时间对青少年至关重要。某校英语杂志社就“如何让周末生活更有意义”开展征文活动。请你根据下面的思维导图,以“How to Make Our weekends more meaningful”为题,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
要求:
1.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范。
2.所有提示须全部用上,并作适当发挥。
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名。
4.80词左右(文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
How to make Our Weekends More Meaningful
Life on weekends is an important part of our daily life. How can we make our weekends more meaningful? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
In short, let’s make good use of our weekends!
【写作思路】
该题目属于说明文写作,写作时要按说明文格式写。在写作时介绍周末的生活是我们日常生活的重要部分;第二段介绍我们如何让周末生活更有意义;最后一段总结要充分利用周末。
【参考范文】
How to Make Our Weekends More Meaningful
Life on weekends is an important part of our daily life. How can we make our weekends more meaningful? Here are some of my suggestions.
First of all, the weekend is a great time for family to get together. It's good to help our parents do some housework. That can help us understand each other better and show our love for them. Secondly, we should spend time developing our interests and hobbies at the weekend. For example, I would like to choose some books to read and communicate with others after reading Thirdly, we can take part in volunteering activities, like visiting the old people's home or doing some cleaning in public places. Last but not least, to make ourselves healthier, taking exercise is a good choice.
In short, let's make good use of our weekends
【名师点评】
例文点评:例文采用三段式;用第一、三人称来叙述内容;时态采用一般现在时为主,在介绍让周末生活更有意义的建议时,叙述完整且条理清晰。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。
高分亮点:
短语:first of all;spend time doing sth;for example;would like to;communicate with;take part in;make good use of。
句型:Here be句型;It's+形容词+to do sth。
【2020 •广州市】
64.今天的英语课上,班级进行了题为“我送过的一份珍贵礼物,”的主题分享。请你写一篇英语短文,汇报你们四人小组的分享内容,需包括以下要点。
From
Bob
Kate
Lily
You
To
parents
good friend
foreign teacher
(请补充)
What
soup
Photo album
Paper cutting
(请补充)
Why
thanks and love
friendship
culture
(请补充)
注意:1. 词数:80词左右(短文的开头己给出,不计入词数):
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
In today's English class, we had a discussion on “A valuable gift I gave”. Here is what we shared in ou group. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
这篇短文要求学生们根据题目中给出的图表,汇报一下你这个小组中四个人送过的珍贵的礼物。写作前,应仔细观察图表中的信息,浏览可知,短文中应介绍清楚这个礼物是谁送给谁的,是什么以及为什么送这个礼物。图表中给出的都是关键词语,学生写作时,应用完整的句子表达。并且对于最后一栏中自己送的礼物,学生需要发挥想象力,结合实际情况,进行补充。短文应以一般过去时态为主来叙述。
【参考范文】
In today’s English class.we had a discussion on “A valuable gift I gave”.Here is what we shared in our group.
A valuable gift given by Bob was a bowl of soup to his parents. In his opinion, he considered it as a good gift to express his thanks and love to them. Kate gave a photo album to one of her good friends because she wanted to cherish every moment with her/him, hoping that their friendship could last forever. In addition, Lily sent her foreign teacher a piece of paper cutting which can fully represent Chinese culture.
For me, what I gave to my grandparent was a smartphone. We don't live together and my parents are so busy that we can't meet each other often. However, we can have video chats by smartphone.
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文。首先文章内容完整,包括了图表中的所有信息,对最后一栏的内容进行了补充,并对细节进行了拓展,使文章的内容更加充实。短文有三段,第一段是题目中给出的开头;第二段中作者主要介绍了小组中其他三人送的礼物;最后一段介绍了自己送过的礼物。层次清晰,叙述有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,文章以一般过去时和一般现在时为主,符合表达需要,语法规范,用词准确。句式结构完整,有变化,增强了文章的表现力。
高分亮点:
短语:in one’s opinion;in addition;each other。
句型:过去分词作后置定语;动词不定式作目的状语;because引导原因状语从句;现在分词作伴随状语;which引导定语从句;what引导主语从句;so…that引导结果状语从句。
【2020 •遵义市】
第四部分 书面表达
61.2020年3月3日是联合国第七个"世界野生动植物日",我国提出了"维护全球生命共同体"的主题。我们的世界因这些生物而丰富多彩、妙趣横生。保护它们,就是守护我们的未来。下面,让我们一起来听听熊猫惜惜的倾诉吧!
假如你是熊猫惜惜,请根据以下信息给人类朋友写一封80词左右的书信。
要求:1.信中包含所给信息内容;2.适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
注意:1.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;2.书信的开头和结尾已为你写出,不计入总词数。
1.基本信息:13岁,来自四川,中国的象征;爱好(自主发挥)。
2.我的烦恼:朋友少,家园常常遭到破坏……
3.我的愿望或建议(自主发挥,至少两条)。
参考词汇:symbol (n. 象征) 、destroy (v. 破坏)
Dear friends,
My name is Xixi. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Xixi
【写作思路】
文章是一篇书信作文。主要是以熊猫惜惜的身份向人类写一封信。先是介绍自己,然后告诉自己的烦恼以及期待和愿望。要把题目中给出的要求都写进去,要注意人称之间的转换和时态的应用,还要注意语句之间的连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear friends,
My name is Xixi. I’m one of your favorite animals — Panda. I come from Sichuan, China. I am 13 years old. I am a national treasure of China and a symbol of China. I usually like to play with my friends. I also like climbing trees and sitting on the trees. I like bamboos best. It’s my favorite food.
But I’ve had some problems recently. My home is often broken and I don’t have much room to move around. My friends are fewer and fewer because some people have destroyed my home. There is no one to play with me and I am very lonely. My favorite food is getting less and less. I’m really sad.
I hope human friends can help me. I hope that people can protect the environment and give me more space for live. If you can cut down fewer trees, my friends and I will be very happy.
Yours,
Xixi
【名师点评】
例文点评:文章分三段描写。第一段是对自己简单的介绍;第二段介绍自己的一些烦恼和忧虑;第三段写自己的期望。整个文章结构完整思路清晰,语言表达准确,意思通俗易懂。
高分亮点:
短语:one of;come from;play with;like doing;move around;cut down。
句型:because引导的原因状语从句;I hope+宾语从句;if引导的条件状语从句。
【2020 •牡丹江、鸡西地区】
86.难忘的初中生活即将结束。你们班计划举行"告别初中生活"的主题班会。假如你是班长, 根据以下提示, 用英语写一则通知。要点如下:
1、时间:7月18日 下午3:00;
2、地点:班级;
3、活动内容:对老师用话语表达谢意, 同学交流、合影等等。
Boys and girls,
The wonderful middle school life will go to the end. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Don't be late! That's all. Thank you!
David
【写作思路】
该题目属于通知写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作,根据内容提示介绍主题班会的时间、地点以及活动的内容。
【参考范文】
Boys and girls,
The wonderful middle school life will go to the end. We are going to have a class meeting at 3:00 on the afternoon of July 18. The theme of the class meeting is saying goodbye to our middle school life. It will be held in our classroom. We should say a thankful word to our teachers. We can chat freely with our classmates and take some photos.
Don't be late! That's all. Thank you!
David
【名师点评】
例文点评:例文主要用第一人称进行写作,主要采用一般将来时态来写作。介绍班会的具体信息,叙述完整且条理清晰。
高分亮点:
短语:go to the end; have a class meeting; saying goodbye to; chat freely with; take some photos。
句型:we should do和we can do表示建议的句子;and表示并列的句子;Don't do…祈使句的否定形式。
(B)
87.假定你是王伟, 你的英国笔友David来信问及你们学校在暑假期间对学生的安全要求。请你根据以下要点给他回一封电子邮件。
家庭安全:小心用火用电, 外出时关好门窗;
游泳安全:不独自去游泳, 不去河、湖游泳;
交通安全:过马路要当心, 不在马路上玩耍。
提示词:electricity (n.电)
注意:
1、词数80左右;
2、请不要逐句翻译, 可适当发挥。
Dear David,
Glad to receive your e-mail. Our school has made safety rules for us to follow. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Wang Wei
【写作思路】
本文是一篇书信作文,假定你是王伟, 你的英国笔友David来信问及你们学校在暑假期间对学生的安全要求。要求根据要点提示,给他回一封电子邮件。首先要注意邮件的格式,然后认真审题,根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作。
【参考范文】
Dear David,
Glad to receive your e-mail. Our school has made safety rules for us to follow. Let me tell you something about them.
We are asked to be careful with electricity when we are using it. It is dangerous to play with fire, for it may cause terrible accidents. We should make sure doors and windows are shut before we leave. Besides, we are not allowed to swim alone, especially in deep rivers or lakes. If we really want to, we must go to the swimming pool with our parents or teachers. What's more, following traffic rules is also very important. Everyone should watch out when crossing the road. And our school warns us not to play on the road.
I think these rules are necessary because safety comes first.
Have a good summer holiday!
Yours,
Wang Wei
【名师点评】
例文点评:本文时态为一般现在时,人称主要为第一、第三人称。文章紧扣题目要点,内容完整,表述准确,语言的表述符合语法的结构,造句符合英语的表达习惯。
高分亮点:
短语:play with,make sure,what's more,watch out,warn sb(not)to do sth。
句型:It is dangerous to play with fire.玩火是危险的。It is+形容词+to do sth.去做某事是……的,固定句型。
I think these rules are necessary because safety comes first. 我认为这些规则是必要的,因为安全第一。I think后接宾语从句,because引导原因状语从句。
【2020 •无锡市】
63.今年“世界读书日”(World Book Day)的主题是“Read and Share”,为此你校英语俱乐部正开展征文活动,要求介绍你所读过的一本书。你草拟了写作流程图,请根据下图用英语写一篇短文参加活动。
Choose a book
"Alice in Wonderland"
"Gulliver's Travels"
...
↓
Describe the book
Who is it about?
What happened?
What kind of book?
↓
Tell the reason
Why do I like it?
...
注意事项:
1.短文须根据流程图自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2.提供的书名非限定性内容,仅供参考;
3.词数在90个左右,短文首尾已在答题卡上给出,不计入总词数;
4.短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本文是一篇材料作文,今年“世界读书日”(World Book Day)的主题是“Read and Share”,为此你校英语俱乐部正开展征文活动,要求根据草拟的写作流程图,介绍你所读过的一本书,用英语写一篇短文参加活动。首先要认真审题,根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作。
【参考范文】
The book I’d like to share with you is The Old Man and the Sea, written by an American writer Ernest Hemingway. This book tells about a fisherman who is lucky enough to catch a huge fish at sea, but finds it hard to take it home. On the way back, he has to fight against the shark and the sea.
What I like most about the book is that the fisherman never gives up when meeting with difficulties. I still remember the well-known sentence from the book. Man is not made for defeat.
【名师点评】
例文点评:本文时态为一般现在时,人称主要为第一、第三人称。文章紧扣题目要点,内容完整,表述准确,语言的表述符合语法的结构,造句符合英语的表达习惯。
高分亮点:
短语:share with,tell about,fight against,on the way back,give up。
句型:This book tells about a fisherman who is lucky enough to catch a huge fish at sea. 这本书讲述了一位渔夫的故事,他幸运地在海上捕到了一条大鱼。who在句中引导定语从句,修饰前面的a fisherman。
【2020 •盐城市】
六、书面表达
81.学校网站英语栏目将组织读书分享征文活动,请根据提示,写一篇短文投稿。
My favourite book
*What’s the name?
*What’s it about?
*Why do you like it?
…
注意事项:
(1)词数:100词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(2)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
(3)文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
My favourite book
Good books are valuable treasures. Among all the books I’ve read, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本题是一篇话题作文。主要以“My favourite book”展开描写。文章要写出题目中给出的所有的要点,同时也可以自行发挥,可以使用现在时描写,要注意语言的衔接要自然连贯。
【参考范文】
My favourite book
Good books are valuable treasures. Among all the books I’ve read, the Monkey King is my favourite book.
The Monkey King is the main character in the traditional Chinese book Journey to the West. He is not a normal monkey. In fact,he is brave enough to fight with any bad person and he can always win the fights. So I like to read it.
The book mainly talks about three things. First of all, it tells us why the monkey can make 72 changes and what different animals and objects he can change into. Secondly, the book shows us how the monkey uses his magic stick. Sometimes he can make the stick so small that he can keep it in his ear. Last but not least, the book tells us how the monkey fights with bad people. I like to read this part very much because the monkey always tries his best to win the fights.
The book teaches us to be brave when we are in trouble. And it also tells us to keep fighting to help the weak. Most importantly, it tells us to keep trying in our lives and never give up.
【名师点评】
例文点评:文章分四段描写。第一段开篇点题最喜欢的书是什么;第二段介绍书名的由来;第三段介绍整本书中的内容;第四段写为什么要读这本书,能够学到什么。整个文章结构完整思路清晰,语言表达准确,意思明确通俗易懂。
高分亮点:
短语:in fact;fight with;talk about;first of all;try one’s best to do;be in trouble;give up。
句型:how引导的宾语从句;because引导的原因状语从句;when引导的时间状语从句;so…that引导的结果状语从句。
【2020 •丹东市】
B.根据要求完成大作文
95.生活中我们有很多东西需要与人分享,比如:好书、美食、经验、快乐……,请你以“I'd like to share _______ with you.”为题写一篇短文。
要求:
1.请将题目补充完整;
2.介绍与该主题相关的个人经历,说明分享原因,谈谈个人感悟;
3.语言表达准确,语意通顺、连贯,书写工整、规范;
4.词数70左右;
5.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
这篇作文要求以I’d like to share…with you为题,写一篇作文。学生们首先应该将题目补充完整,想要分享什么,题目中也给出了一些提示,如好书、美食、经验、快乐等等。将题目补充完整后,学生再围绕这一主题,分享自己的经历,说明分享它的原因以及个人的感悟。这是话题作文,文章的内容需要学生们发挥自己的想象力,结合实际生活,写出具体的内容,这是写作中的一个难点。文章应根据表达需要确定时态,以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。
【参考范文】
I’d like to share a good book with you
As everybody knows, books are the ladder of human progress. I have read many books and I would like to share my favorite book the Adventures of Tom Sawyer with you. I have read it many times. The book is written by Mark Twain, a famous American writer. Tom who is the hero of the story is a lively and clever boy. He and his best friend Huck Finn ran away to an island. The most exciting part is when Tom and Huck start their adventures on the island. In my opinion, the story is so interesting and enjoyable that it is worth reading.
【名师点评】
例文点评:这是一篇优秀的作文,短文以I’d like to share a good book with you为题目,在文中分享了自己最喜欢的一本书,简单介绍了书的主要角色、内容以及自己喜欢它的原因。文中内容充实、完整,叙述条理,逻辑清晰。短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,谓语动词形式准确,语法规范。句式结构完整,符合英语的表达习惯。句式以简单句为主,并使用了并列句、状语从句、被动语态、非谓语动词等复杂结构,表达流畅,意思连贯。
高分亮点:
短语:run away;in my opinion。
句型:As everybody knows, books are the ladder of human progress.;Tom who is the hero of the story is a lively and clever boy.;The most exciting part is when Tom and Huck start their adventures on the island.;In my opinion, the story is so interesting and enjoyable that it is worth reading.。
【2020 •沈阳市】
65.为了鼓励学生积极参加体育活动,你的学校即将举办英文征文比赛假设你是李华,请你以Doing sports makes me ________为题,参与投稿。
要求:
1. 确定主题,说明原因;
2. 围绕主题,进行叙述或阐述;
3. 词数80-100。
注意:
1. 补全标题(参考词语: healthy,happy,relaxed,strong等);
2. 可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以阐述具体观点;
3. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
4. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;
5. 作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
Doing sports makes me ________
Recently, sports have been very popular with many people. In my opinion, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本文是一篇材料作文,为了鼓励学生积极参加体育活动,学校即将举办英文征文比赛。假设你是李华,要求你以Doing sports makes me ____为题,根据要点提示写一篇短文,参与投稿。首先要认真审题,根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作。
【参考范文】
Doing sports makes me strong
Recently, sports have been very popular with many people. In my opinion, doing sports makes me strong because it builds up my body and mind.
I was short and thin before, so my father always took me out for running. At first, I usually felt tired and wanted to give up. But my father encouraged me to stick with it. Half a year later, I grew taller and stronger. At the sports meeting this year, I even won the first prize in the 1, 500-metre race. Since then, I have been stronger and stronger and I don't fear any difficulty.
In a word, doing sports makes me strong.
【名师点评】
例文点评:本文主要采用第一人称复数展开叙述,文章构严谨,层次分明,紧扣主题。语言的表述符合语法的结构,造句符合英语的表达习惯。
高分亮点:
短语:in my opinion,build up,want to do sth,give up,encourage sb to do,stick with。
句型:But my father encouraged me to stick with it.但我父亲鼓励我坚持下去。encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事。
Since then, I have been stronger and stronger and I don't fear any difficulty. 从那时起,我变得越来越强壮,我不再害怕任何困难。stronger and stronger越来越强壮,比较级+and+比较级,表示越来越……。
【2020 •铁岭葫芦岛】
86.根据要求完成小作文。词数:30词左右。
为了方便孩子学习,现在许多家长在孩子就读的高中附近求租房子。假设你是一位家长,名叫杨辉,想求租房子。所需条件:①第二高中附近②有两个房间③租金每月800元。联系方式:1596876xxxx。请你根据以上信息写一则求租广告。
参考词:租货rent
An Ad for Renting
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【写作思路】
该题目属于应用文写作。在写作时应根据内容提示介绍租房的条件及自己的联系方式。
【参考范文】
An Ad for Renting
I want to rent a house with two rooms. It’s better to be near No. 2 High School. I hope the rent could be 800 yuan a month so that I can afford it. If you have one, please contact Yang Hui at 1596876xxxx.Thank you!
【名师点评】
例文点评:例文主要用第一人称进行写作,主要采用一般现在时态来写作。介绍租房的条件叙述完整且条理清晰。
高分亮点:
短语:want to; rent a house ; so that; contact sb. at。
句型:I hope…宾语从句;it做形式主语的句子;so that引导的目的状语从句。
87.根据要求完成大作文。词数:80-100词。
2020年是不平凡的一年,每个人都可能得到过社会的帮助。我们应该懂得感恩与回报。中考结束后,学校计划在7月25日组织一次"走进社区,做一天志愿者"活动。活动地点:新华社区(Xinhua Community);集合时间:上午8:30;集合地点:学校门口。
提示:clear out…, water…, hand out masks, give away…visit…, take food to…
请根据以上信息,以A One-day volunteer Job为题写一篇短文谈谈你们的活动安排。
要求:
①语意连贯,层次清楚,书写规范。
②用到所有提示信息并进行适当发挥。
③文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
④短文的题目、开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
A One-day volunteer Job
As middle school students, we should be thankful to people who helped us. After the exam, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope this activity will make us learn to give our love to everyone and society.
【写作思路】
本文是一篇话题作文。学校计划在7月25日组织一次"走进社区,做一天志愿者"活动,要求以“一天的志愿者工作”为题写一篇关于活动安排的文章。内容需包括活动时间、活动地点以及具体的活动内容,注意题干中提示的词汇需要全部运用,在此基础上可适当拓展。根据题目要求可知,本文时态为一般将来时,人称为第一人称,注意主谓一致问题。
【参考范文】
A One-day volunteer Job
As middle school students, we should be thankful to people who helped us. After the exam, our school plans to organize an activity of "going into the community and being a volunteer for one day". This activity will be held in Xinhua Community and we are going to meet at the school gate at 8:30 a.m. on July 25.
Firstly, we will help cleaners clean out the garbage to make sure the community tidy and beautiful. Secondly, we will arrange some students give away water and hand out masks to people who work under the burning sun. What’s more, we will visit the aged in the community and take food to them.
It’s necessary for us to take an active part in such volunteer activities. Through this activity, our life will be more meaningful.
I hope this activity will make us learn to give our love to everyone and society.
【名师点评】
例文点评:本文结构紧凑,逻辑清晰。首段开门见山,点明志愿活动的时间及地点;第二段介绍志愿活动的具体安排,如打扫卫生、分发口罩、看望老人等;第三段主要介绍活动的意义。该文要点齐全,语句通顺,让人一目了然。文章使用了正确的时态和人称,符合表达的需要。
高分亮点:
短语:plan to do sth;clean out;make sure;give away;hand out;take an active part in。
句型:who引导的定语从句;It’s+形容词+for sb to do sth。
【2020 •云南省】
56.提示:在课余生活中,你通常做些什么?有什么收获?请以“My After-school Life”为题,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你的课余生活。
要求:
1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于60个;
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计;
3. 请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。
My After-school Life
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时应根据内容提示讲述自己的课余生活及收获。
【参考范文】
My After-school Life
Though school life is very busy, my life after school is colourful and enjoyable.
First of all, I need to finish my homework, which is the first thing I need to do. Only when I finish my homework, will I go to play with my friends happily. Playing badminton is my favourite sport after school. In my opinion, sport contributes to my health which is important in daily life.
I am so satisfied with myself, because I not only study hard, but also enjoy myself after school. As a student, I need to study. At the same time, I need to enjoy my childhood.
【名师点评】
例文点评:例文主要用第一人称进行写作,主要采用一般现在时态来写作。讲述自己的课余生活及收获叙述完整且条理清晰。
高分亮点:
短语:first of all; need to; play with; in my opinion; contributes to; am satisfied with; at the same time。
句型:though引导的让步状语从句;Only when… will I…部分倒装结构;which引导的定语从句;because引导的原因状语从句;not only…but also…的结构。
【2020 •安徽省】
61.假定你是李华。某英文报“My Hometown”专栏面向中学生招募小记者,请你用英文给报社写封自荐信。要点如下:
1.熟悉家乡;
2.乐于交流;
3.擅长英语。
注意:1.词数80-100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇: journalist (n.记者);column (n.专栏)
Dear Sir/Madam,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
本题属于书信作文,信件的开头和结尾已给出。要求根据提示要点写一封自荐信介绍自己并申请成为小记者。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时,再阅读一遍,减少语法错误,不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
【参考范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I hear your newspaper needs journalists for the column My Hometown. I hope to be a member of the team.
First, I know a lot about my hometown, such as its history and culture. Besides, I used to work as a journalist for my school newspaper and I did a very good job. I'm easy-going and always ready to communicate with others. Moreover, I have a good knowledge of English, and I'm skillful at expressing myself clearly in English.
I'm sure to be the right person you are looking for. I'd be thankful if I could get this chance.
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
例文点评:这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求,先表达写信目的,然后根据要点提示介绍自己,最后再次点明确信自己是最合适的人。例文简明扼要,结构清晰,语言表达到位。
高分亮点:
单词和短语:hope to do sth.;a member of;such as;besides;used to do sth.;work as;do a very good job;be ready to do sth.;communicate with;moreover;have a good knowledge of;be skillful at;in English;look for。
句型:and连接并列句;省略that的定语从句;if引导的条件状语从句。
【2020 •福建省】
71. 假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友David对中医很感兴趣。请你结合以下图示,用英语写一封电子邮件,向他推荐即将在你校举办的“传统中医进校园”的宣传日活动,说明推荐理由,并请他关注线上相关信息。词数80左右。
注意事项:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Dear David,
I'm pleased to know that you're interested in Chinese medicine._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
本文是一篇书信作文。文中向朋友推荐即将举办的“传统中医进校园”的宣传日活动,并说明推荐理由。
【参考范文】
Dear David,
I'm pleased to know that you're interested in Chinese medicine. Now, I'd like to share with you some information about Traditional Chinese Medicine Day in our school, which is going to take place on July 31, 2020.
On that day, a famous doctor will give us a talk on Chinese medicine. And there will be a show about its development. Also, the film Li Shizhen will be on. I'm sure the activities would be very helpful to you. I hope you can visit www. intelschool. com and have a better understanding of traditional Chinese medicine.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
例文点评:本文主要以第一人称为主,时态主要采用一般将来时。准确运用时态,并保持主谓一致。逻辑性强,句子通顺。
高分亮点:
短语:share with sb about sth与某人分享某事;take place举行;be helpful to sb对某人有帮助。
句子:there will be a show about its development句中用的是there be句型;I'm sure the activities would be very helpful to you句中由that引导的宾语从句,引导词that已省略。
【2020 •黑龙江省牡丹江市】
86. (A) 假如你是Gina,今天早晨你在走廊捡到了一部手机,红色外壳(case),壳上面有星星图案。你推测它可能是位女老师的。请写一则招领启事让失主去广播室(broadcasting room)找李老师认领。
Found
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Gina
【写作思路】
这是一则给材料作文,由于是一则招领启事,写作时只要将材料提供的内容,介绍清楚物品的情况即可,同时要符合应用文体的格式。文章要用一般现在时。
【参考范文】
Found
I’m Gina. I found a smart phone in the school hallway. It has a red case and there are some stars in the case. I think it may be a woman teacher’s. I gave it to Mr. Li. If it is yours, please go to the broadcasting room and ask Mr. Li for it.
Gina
【名师点评】
例文点评:文章是一则启事,语言精悍,表达准确意思明确,通俗易懂,主要写出了这则启事的目的,物品描述清晰。
高分亮点:
短语:give sth to;go to sp;ask…for。
句型:I think+宾语从句;If引导的条件状语从句;There be句型。
【2020 •内蒙古包头市】
71. 假定你是李华,你校将举办校园音乐节(music festival)。请给你的好友Alan写一封电子邮件,介绍音乐节的相关内容和主要活动,并邀请他与你一起参加此次音乐节。邮件内容包括:
Time
10 a.m. next Sunday
Place
school sports field
Activities for students
sell tickets, work at food stands… (all of the money will go to charity)
play the violin, piano…
sing songs, dance to music…
…
注意:
l. 词数90左右,开头和结尾己经写好,不计入总词数;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
参考词汇:摊位 stand 慈善charity
Dear Alan,
How is it going?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
该题目属于书信写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作,根据内容提示介绍音乐节的相关内容和主要活动。
【参考范文】
Dear Alan,
How is it going? Our school will hold a music festival next Sunday on the school sports field. Knowing that you are fond of music, I'm writing to invite you to join us.
The festival will start at 10: 00 am and last about two hours. Students from my school will give fantastic performances, including playing the violin, piano, guitar and so on. Besides, we can sing songs and dance to music. Meanwhile, some of my classmates will sell tickets and I will work at a food stand. All of the money will go to charity.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
例文点评:例文主要用第一人称进行写作,主要采用一般将来时态来写作。介绍音乐节的相关内容和主要活动叙述完整且条理清晰。
高分亮点:
短语:hold a music festival;are fond of;and so on;sing songs and dance to music;at a food stand; look forward to。
句型:Knowing that…现在分词作状语的句子;and表示并列的句子;that引导的宾语从句。
【2020 •四川攀枝花】
71. 初中毕业了,我们又将进入高一级的学校学习,利用这个暑假,我们更应该制定合理的假期计划。请你根据以下要点提示,以"My Summer Vacation Plan"为题,用英语写一篇短文。
要点提示:
1. 放松自己:看电影,锻炼身体,和父母去旅行等;
2. 学习新技能:做饭、游泳、骑自行车等;
3. 努力学习:阅读书籍,复习知识,为以后学习做准备等。
要求:
1. 词数80~100,开头已给出,但不计入总词数;
2. 要点提示均须涉及,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
My Summer Vacation Plan
With the summer vacation coming, I will make a plan for it. First, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本题属于话题作文,题目的开头已给出。要求根据要点提示和要求写一篇题为“My Summer Vacation Plan”的短文,介绍自己的暑假安排。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时,再阅读一遍,减少语法错误,不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
【参考范文】
My Summer Vacation Plan
With the summer vacation coming, I will make a plan for it. First, I plan to relax myself, such as watching movies and traveling with my parents. I'll exercise every day, for it is good for our health to play sports. Then, I am going to spend some time learning cooking, swimming and bike riding. In my opinion, these skills will be useful and helpful in my future life. At the same time, I'll read some books to open up my eyes. I also plan to review knowledge to prepare for future study.
I think I'll have a meaningful summer vacation.
【名师点评】
例文点评:这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求,第一段介绍了自己打算如何放松自己、要学习哪些新技能及暑假期间的学习安排,第二段属于自主发挥,写出自己的感想。例文简明扼要,结构清晰,语言表达到位。
高分亮点:
单词和短语:make a plan;plan to do sth.;relax oneself;such as;be good for;spend some time doing sth.;in one's opinion;at the same time;open up one's eyes;prepare for。
句型:for连接的表示因果关系的并列句;省略that的宾语从句。
【2020•黄冈市】
62.习主席在全国教育大会上强调,中学生要做德智体美劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人。假如你是李华,请根据以下要点提示写一篇英语演讲稿,简单谈谈如何做一个新时代合格的中学生。
要点提示:
1.爱国爱家,诚实守信,善良感恩;
2.努力学习,做个有创造力的人;
3.多参 加体育锻炼,保持身心健康;
4.善于发现生活中的美,热爱大自然,守护家园;
5.积极参加校内外的各种劳动。
写作要求:
1.词数90左右 (开头已经给出,不计人总词数);
2.根据要点提示,可以适当发挥;
3.文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
参考词汇: keep one's promise 守信; be thankful to sb. 感恩某人; creative有创造力的; nature自然; protect保护; beauty美; activity活动
Boys and girls,
My name is Li Hua. Today I'm glad to share my ideas about how to be good students_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时应紧接文章开头继续写作,根据内容提示讲述一个新时代合格的中学生应该做的事情。
【参考范文】
Boys and girls,
My name is Li Hua. Today I'm glad to share my ideas about how to be good students.
First of all, we must love our country and home. We need to keep our promise. We should be kind and be thankful to our parents and friends. Second, we must work hard. It is necessary for us to be active and creative. Third, it is helpful to take exercise, and keep us healthy both physically and mentally. Also, we can find the beauty of the nature. It is important for us to love the nature and protect the environment. What’s more,we can take part in all kinds of activities in and out of school.
【名师点评】
例文主要用第一人称进行写作,主要采用一般现在时态来写作。讲述一个新时代合格的中学生应该做的事情分五个方面来写,叙述完整且条理清晰。
高分亮点:
短语:share my ideas;first of all;keep our promise;be thankful to;take exercise;keep us healthy;protect the environment;what’s more; take part in; all kinds of。
句型:how+动词不定式的结构;it 做形式主语的句子;and表示并列的句子。
【2020•湖北省咸宁市】
53.众志成城抗疫情,齐心向阳迎春天。随着新冠肺炎疫情的有效控制,各校已经陆续复学,久别的师生回到了熟悉的校园。复学后,王老师在班上将开展一个主题为“Share your life at home during the COVID-19”的演讲活动,让同学们分享疫情期间居家生活的经历和感受。假如你是李华,请从以下四个方面写一份演讲稿。
1
Study
have online classes (上网课), do homework …
2
Housework
clean the rooms, cook the dishes …
3
Leisure activities
do sports, watch TV …
4
Feeling
warm happy …
写作要求:
1. 文章中勿出现真实的姓名和校名。
2. 文章须包含所提供主要信息,可适当发挥;行文连贯,条理清晰。
3. 词数80~100个,文章的开头已经给出,不计入总字数。
Hello, everyone! Long time no see. It's my honor to share my life at home during the COVID-19 with you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
这是一篇材料作文,主要是介绍疫情期间居家生活的经历和感受,从学习、家务活、业余活动和感受四个方面来写,根据写作的内容应用第一人称和一般过去时。
【参考范文】
Hello, everyone! Long time no see. It's my honor to share my life at home during the COVID-19 with you. At home, I had online classes on the Internet. I could see my teacher through the computer or the cellphone. After having the class, I did my homework. Then, I used the cellphone to send the photos of homework to my teachers. In the spare time, I cleaned my rooms, learnt to cook the dishes for my parents, and so on. Besides, I watched TV, listened to music, or did sports at home. At that time, though we couldn't go out because of the COVID-19, we had a happy and warm family life. We should study hard from now on and treasure the present life.
【名师点评】
例文包含了所有要点,时态使用正确,表达有条理,语句通顺,意思连贯,使用了一些固定句式。
高分亮点:
短语:through the computer or the cellphone;use sth. to do;send sth. to sb.;in the spare time;listen to music;from now on。
句型:①时间状语从句 After having the class, I did my homework.
②让步状语从句 At that time, though we couldn't go out because of the COVID-19, we had a happy and warm family life.
【2020•荆门市】
61.青少年是祖国的未来。在创建全国文明城市的过程中,你市举办了“美德少年”评选活动。请根据以下提示,以“Be a Virtue Teenager”为题,用英语写一篇倡议书,号召大家积极争做“美德少年”。
要点:
1. 在学校:努力学习知识,养成良好的学习习惯,爱运动;
2. 在家里:经常与家人交流,感恩父母,分担家务,知错就改;
3. 在社会:遵守规则,在公共场合不要大声喧哗,注意安全;
4. 发表你的观点。
要求:
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名或地名;
2. 语言通顺,条理清楚,书写规范;
3. 要点齐全,内容可适当发挥;
4. 词数:80-100(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Be a Virtue Teenager
Teenagers are the future of our motherland, and also the symbol of our city. What should we do to become a virtue teenager of our city?
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【写作思路】本文是一篇话题作文,以“Be a Virtue Teenager”为题,用英语写一篇倡议书,号召大家积极争做“美德少年”,并从学校、家庭、社会三方面谈谈自己的观点和做法。结合所给材料,可知主要考查一般现在时态,人称主要为第一人称,注意主谓一致问题。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用,写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。
【参考范文】
Be a Virtue Teenager
Teenagers are the future of our motherland, and also the symbol of our city. What should we do to become a virtue teenager of our city?
At school, we should study hard and form good learning habits. In our spare time, we can do regular exercise to build up a good body. It's our duty to help parents do some housework at home and we should always be thankful for what our parents have done for us. Parents will be happier if we can communicate more with them. Sometimes, if we make mistakes, we'd better face and correct them timely. What's more, I suggest we obey the rules in public and don't speak loudly. Last but not least, keep in mind that safety is first.
In my opinion, we are supposed to do all of the above. I sincerely hope everyone can join us and try to be a virtue teenager.
【名师点评】
本文结构紧凑,逻辑顺畅。首段开门见山,直接点明文章“争做美德少年”的主旨,第二段从学校、家庭以及社会三方面浅谈自己作“美德少年”的方法,最后一段总结全文,升华文章立意。另外文章语言简练,运用简单的句式结构将题目主要内容完整表述。
高分亮点:
短语:in our spare time;build up;be thankful fo;make mistake;last but not least;be supposed to。
句型:It+be+名词+不定式(it作形式主语);if引导的条件状语从句。
【2020•湖北省恩施州】
61.红星中学面向全校学生选拔“恩施代言人”,宣传地方文化及土特产等。你被荣幸地选定,请你用英语简要为恩施代言。
要点提示:
1.恩施的地理位置(湖北西南);
2.主要特色(如:文化、土特产、风景名胜等),至少包含两个方面;
3.欢迎到恩施来。
写作要求:
1.文中必须包含所有提示要点,可适当发挥使行文连贯:
2.条理清晰,字迹工整,词数不少于80;
3.文章开头与结尾已给出,不计人总词数:
4.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。
参考词汇:农产品 agricultural products 硒 Se
Ladies and gentlemen,
I'm honored to have been elected as one of the spokespersons for Enshi._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for listening.
【参考范文】
Ladies and gentlemen,
I'm honored to have been elected as one of the spokespersons for Enshi.
Enshi lies in the southwest of Hubei. The population there is about 3500000 and the people there are friendly and helpful. Whenever you come, you will keep a big smile on your face. The weather there is comfortable and pleasant, the sky is blue and the air is fresh. Enshi is surrounded on three sides by mountains, there are lots of tourist attractions, such as the Great Canyon, the Tenglong Cave and so on. The scenery there is so attractive that you will lose yourselves in it. What's more, with the development of Enshi, the transportation there is becoming quicker and easier. The Hurongxi Superhighway and Yiwan Railway have been built up already. That's a good chance for Enshi to develop better.
In a word ,welcome to my beautiful hometown--Enshi!
Thanks for listening.
【2020•湖北省十堰市】
56.“人间烟火味,最抚凡人心”,2020年初,由于新冠肺炎的爆发,很多人都不得不待在家里,而不能外出打工谋生。"地摊"如雨后春笋在各大城市涌现。假如你是李华,在本周班会上将代表老师用英语通知学生参加一次摆地摊的体验活动。内容如下:
时间
周日晚上7:00—9:00
本周
地点人民广场
内容
1. 出售报纸,饮料。
2. 出售旧物:书,玩具,自行车等。
3. 出售自制的蛋糕、卡片等。
你的想法和建议
……
参考词汇:
roadside the standard 地摊 Renmin Square n. 人民广场
experience v.& n. 体验, 经历 meaningful adj. 有意义的
要求:
1. 必须包含所给的全部的要点及内容, 可适当发挥。
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名。
3. 词数80至100。开头已给出, 不计入总词数。
Fellow students,
This year due to the impact of COVID-19 outbreak, many people have to stay at home and can't go outside to work to earn a living. Roadside Stands have sprung up in many big cities. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
该题属于材料写作。要求以李华的身份,在班会上代表老师用英语通知学生参加一次摆地摊的体验活动。写作时注意问题信息要写齐全。
【参考范文】
Follow students,
This year, due to the inspact of COVID-19 outbreak, many people have to stay at home and can't go outside to work to earn a living. Roadside Stands have sprung up in many big cities. This Sunday evening our class plans to experience this activity. Here is the information you need to know.
The activity will last for two hours. We'd better arrive at Renmin Square at 7 p.m. We will sell different kinds of things such as newspapers and drinks. We can also sell some old things including books, toys and bikes. Besides, if you are good at DIY, I think cakes and cards made by hand will be popular.
As for the money we get, I suggest that we can give it away to the people in need. Hope you can take an active part in it. Through the activity, we can not only get some social experience but also spend a meaningful night.
【名师点评】
例文采用三段式,第一大段总体说班级要组织地摊体验活动;第二大段陈述组织地摊体验活动的时间及具体要求;第三大段陈述从这次活动中的收获及想法。本文结构清晰,段落分明。用第一人称来进行写作分析,时态主要以一般现在时为主。
高分亮点:
短语:stay at home,earn a living,had better do sth,different kinds of,be good at,give away,take an active part in,not only…but also…。
句型:1.现在完成时 Roadside Stands have sprung up in many big cities.
2. 条件状语从句 Besides, if you are good at DIY, I think cakes and cards made by hand will be popular.
3.宾语从句 I suggest that we can give it away to the people in need.
(2020 •湖南省张家界市)
41.请根据下面的提示为学校读书俱乐部写一篇招聘广告。
要求:
1.内容必须包含所提示信息,可适当发挥。
2.文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称。
3.不少于50词。
Book Lovers Wanted
Book Club
students
love reading
want to make friends
...
activities
read books together
share ideas about books
...
contact
Call at 929—3160
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【写作思路】
文章是一篇招聘广告,主要以“Book Lovers Wanted”为主题展开描写,根据题目中所给的表格信息写出具体的内容,突出这个俱乐部的优点优势,吸引人们能够加入,要注意语言表达要简洁通顺。
【参考范文】
Book Lovers Wanted
Welcome to our Book Club! Our club has just been established for several years. If you love reading or want to make new friends, you can join us. There will be a lot of book lovers like you. We have many activities in our club, such as reading books together and sharing ideas about books and so on. If you can join our club, we will be very happy. Our club has a lot of facilities that can provide a wide range of help when you need it.
Finally, I hope you can join us! Please call at 929—3160.
【名师点评】
文章分两段描写。第一段主要是描写俱乐部的一些具体的情况,亮出一些吸引人的优点;第二段期待对方的加入,以及给出联系方式。整个文章思路清晰,语言表达准确,意思明确易懂。
高分亮点:
短语:want to do;a lot of;such as;call at;and so on。
句型:if引导的条件状语从句;that引导的定语从句;when引导的时间状语从句;I hope+宾语从句。
(2020 •益阳市)
B)作文
51.益阳市正在为创建全国文明城市(national civilized city)招募志愿者。假设你是李华。想成为一名志愿者,请你用英文给志愿者协会写一封邮件,谈谈你能做的志愿者工作。
内容包括:打扫城市公园;到老人之家帮忙:分发传单、张贴通知……
要求:
1. 词数60-80,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 内容可适当发挥,使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校名称等信息。
参考词汇:volunteer clean up wash hand out put up
Dear madam,
My name is Li Hua. I am a student in No. 1 Middle School. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
本文是一篇书信作文。文中描述自己想申请成为一名志愿者,并介绍自己能做的事情。
【参考范文】
Dear madam,
My name is Li Hua. I am a student in No. 1 Middle School. I want to be a volunteer, because helping other people makes me feel good. It’s also a good chance for me to improve myself.
I can do many things. For example, I can help clean up the city parks. I am good at singing, so I can sing lots of songs and tell some stories for the old people at the Old People’s Home. At the same time, I can help the elderly wash their clothes. I can also hand out leaflets and put up notices. I sincerely hope I can work as a volunteer and do something helpful.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
本文采用的是第一人称,时态采用的是一般现在时。准确运用时态,并保持主谓一致。逻辑性强,句子通顺。
高分亮点:
短语:want to do sth想要做某事;for example例如;clean up打扫;be good at doing sth擅长做某事;hand out分发;put up张贴。
句子:I want to be a volunteer, because helping other people makes me feel good句中because引导原因状语从句;I sincerely hope I can work as a volunteer and do something helpful句中由that引导的宾语从句,引导词that已省略。
(2020 •常德市)
61.假设你是Angelica的朋友Alan,请根据第二节(回答问题)材料并按照提示给Angelica回信:1. 恭喜乔迁并简单评述其新居。2. 回复能否参加聚会。3. 若能参加聚会,你会准备什么节目,对整个活动有什么建议等;若不能参会,说明原因,表达自己的心情等。注意:1. 80词以上,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;2. 不得出现人名和校名等真实信息。
Dear Angelica,
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Alan
【写作思路】
这是一篇书信作文。本文要求按照提示要点写一封回信,写作中注意要包含所有的提示要点,可适当发挥。时态以一般现在时为主,人称是第一人称。
【参考范文】
Dear Angelica,
I’m glad to receive your letter last time. First of all, congratulations on your settlement to the new house,which is so warm and comfortable that I’d like to have a look at once. The small independent garden is the best design in the house, and also a good place to relax. Secondly, I really appreciate your invitation of the housewarming party. I’d love to, but I can’t. As you know, the National Piano Grading Test is coming, my course schedule on these days is already full. I have to devote myself to the preparation until the end of the test. At last, it’s a great pity that I can’t come to your party. But I’ve prepared a gift for you and I hope you will like it.
May your party be a great success and enjoy yourself that day!
Yours,
Alan
【名师点评】
本文采用两段式,第一段:(1)恭喜对方乔迁之喜;(2)告诉对方因为要准备钢琴等级考试无法参加聚会;(3)表示很遗憾并准备了礼物;第二段以祝福结尾。文章紧扣题目要点,内容完整,结构清晰,语言表达到位。
3.高分亮点:
短语:be glad to;so…that…;would like (love) to;have a look;at once;have to;devote myself to;prepare for;the end of;enjoy yourself。
句型:First of all…Secondly…At last…;which引导的非限制性定语从句;so…that…引导的结果状语从句;and并列句;but并列复合句;As you know…;it’s +名词+ that从句。
(2020 •湖南省邵阳市)
56. 今年, 新冠肺炎在全球爆发蔓延,很多人被感染、死亡。你的非洲网友Bob获知中国抗击新冠病毒取得了巨大成功,来信向你询问预防新冠肺炎感染的方法。假如你是李华,请根据下面要点提示给Bob写封回信。
要点提示:
要求:1. 语言表达准确,语句通顺,可适当发挥;
2. 80 词左右。开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:sneeze 打喷嚏
Dear Bob,
Learning that you want to know the ways to prevent Covid-19, I'm glad to share some good ideas with you.
Firsty,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
本文是一篇书信作文,要注意书信的基本格式。题目要求以李华的名义给非洲的网友Bob写一封回信,主要向其介绍预防新冠肺炎的方法。根据图中的要点提示进行回复,如戴口罩、勤洗手等,可适当拓展。另本文时态为一般现在时,人称以第二人称为主,注意主谓一致问题。
【参考范文】
Dear Bob,
Learning that you want to know the ways to prevent Covid-19, I'm glad to share some good ideas with you.
Firstly, you should wear a mask if you have to go out. Don't go to crowded places, like supermarkets. Secondly, you should wash your hands with running water or soap whenever you touch something. Remember to wash them slowly and carefully. And never fail to open the windows regularly to let in some fresh air and do keep your room clean. Besides, cover your nose and mouth when sneezing. If you don't feel well, go to see a doctor. Most important of all, you should form a good habit. Go to bed early and get up on time. Be sure to have enough sleep, and take more exercise!
I hope these ways are of some use to you, and I believe everything will be going well again soon!
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
本文格式正确,符合书信作文的基本格式。文章结构紧凑,层次清晰,根据图中的要点向Bob提出了合理的建议,如戴口罩、勤洗手、勤通风、养成好习惯等,文章要点齐全,符合文章表达的要求。使用了正确的时态和人称,符合表达的需要。文章还运用了状语从句、祈使句等句式结构,丰富了文章的内容。
高分亮点:
短语:be glad to;wear a mask;remember to do sth;form a good habit;go to bed early;get up on time。
句型:Do型祈使句;if引导的条件状语从句。
【2019年】
2019年中考真题英语分项汇编
专题21 书面表达
考点2说明介绍类
(一)【2019 •广东】
假如你是李华,英国某中学与你所在的学校是姐妹学校。该校校长读到以上这篇短文后,对广东文化产生兴趣,准备组织学生来你的校进行关于广东传统文化的研学交流。请你写一篇发言稿,在欢迎晚会上向他们介绍研学活动的相关安排。
内容包括:
1. 推荐晚会上的两种广东传统食物。
2. 介绍两项广东传统文化活动的安排。(包括活动的时间、地点和内容)
参考活动:欣赏粤剧(Cantonese opera),体验功夫(kung fu),参加广东历史讲座等。
作文要求:
1. 不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
2. 语句连贯,词数80左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数,也不必抄写在答题卡上。
Good evening, everyone. I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students Union. I am very pleased to welcome you to the party. _______________________________________________________________________________________
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I hope you'll enjoy your stay here!
【写作思路】
这是一篇要求向来你校进行关于广东传统文化的研学交流的学生介绍研学活动的相关安排。动笔前先要认真阅读要点,围绕要点组织材料,然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来,在此基础上亦可适当发挥,注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般将来时态,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
【参考范文】
Good evening, everyone. I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students Union. I am very pleased to welcome you to the party. In Guangdong, you can enjoy many traditional foods. Such as shrimp dumplings, beef or fish balls, chicken feet and so on. Especially fish balls and chicken feet are really very delicious.I think you will love them. Tomorrow, in the morning, we'll go to the biggest theatre in Guangzhou. You are going to enjoy Cantonese opera there. We will go to Zhongshan Park in the afternoon. You can experience Chinese Kung fu there. It is amazing. We will attend a lecture on history of Guangdong in the evening.
I hope you' ll enjoy your stay here!
(二)【2019 •深圳市】
假设你是李华,你的英国朋友 Tony 对“中国红”一词很感兴趣,想了解“中国红”在中国人日常生活中的体现,请你根据以下表格信息写一封回信帮助他了解。
地位
最受欢迎的颜色之一
代表
幸福,可以带来好运
使用场所
婚礼,春节等
表达方式
剪纸,中国结,红包,灯笼
提示词:婚礼 wedding,中国结 Chinese Knot,红包 red packet, 代表 stand for
Dear Tony,
It’s great to receive your letter. I’m writing to tell you something about Chinese red. ____________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Tony,
It’s great to receive your letter. I’m writing to tell you something about Chinese red. Chinese red, considered as the symbolic color of China, is extremely popular with Chinese people. It usually represents happiness, and we believe that it can bring us good luck.
People in our country attach such great importance to Chinese red that they use many red objects in some important events. For instance, in a wedding, you can see that the bride is in a red wedding dress and the wedding room is decorated with red. What’s more, the houses are also filled with red paper cuts, lanterns and Chinese Knots during the Spring Festival. Children will get red pockets for best wishes as well. Obviously, Chinese red plays a significant role and enjoys the highest popularity in China.
I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red.
Yours,
Li Hua
(三)【2019 •重庆市A卷】
你正在组织一项暑假期间到山区为期一周的游学和帮扶活动。作为发起人,请你写一篇发言稿,在你校“英语时光”广播中号召更多的同学参加。
要求:
1. 80—100词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息:
1. 活动缘由(孤独、帮扶、游学……)
2. 活动构想(时间、地点、内容……)
3. ……
Hello, everybody. I am planning a summer trip called “Be a Kid in the Mountain”. _____________________
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Thank you!
【写作思路】
这是一篇发言稿,也就是材料作文,根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下在暑假期间到山区为期一周的游学和帮扶活动的情况。目的是:号召更多的同学参加。主要从活动缘由(孤独、帮扶、游学……);活动构想(时间、地点、内容……)和其他方面来介绍。时态为一般现在时,人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息,并适当发挥。写作时,避免使用汉语式的英语,尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确,表达要符合英语习惯,注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系,表达具有条理性。
【参考范文】
Hello, everybody. I am planning a summer trip called "Be a kid in the Mountains". It will provide us with a meaningful week staying with the students in the mountains.
As many of their parents leave for the city to work, those students might feel lonely and some may even find it hard to go on studying. So we can bring them some school things like books and pens for their study, and prepare some interesting stories to share. In the daytime, we can go hiking and do some teamwork. In the evening, we can do such activities as popular games and group dance around the fire.
Isn't that exciting? Come and join us. Let's be "a kid in the mountains".I believe it will bring sunshine to the children in the mountains as well as more confidence to us.
Thank you!
【名师点评】
(1)高分句型一 As many of their parents leave for the city to work,those students might feel lonely and some may even find it hard to go on studying.由于很多父母都去城市工作,这些学生可能会感到孤独,有些人甚至觉得很难继续学习。it hard to go on studying.中的it是形式宾语。
(2)高分句型二 I believe it will bring sunshine to the children in the mountains as well as more confidence to us.我相信它会给山里的孩子们带来阳光,也会给我们带来更多的信心。句子it will bring sunshine to the children in the mountains as well as more confidence to us.是宾语从句。作believe的宾语。
(四)【2019 •江苏省宿迁市】
某软件公司为了开发一款适合中学生在课后学习英语的app,邀请你一起参与设计。请根据下文提示,用英语向该公司介绍你的构想。
名称
Happy English Learning
内容
英语类的新闻、电影、歌曲、游戏等。
好处
1. 便于和同学一起学学习;
2. 帮助学生扩大词汇量;
3. 有利于提高英语听力;
4. ……(自主发挥,至少一点)
其他方面
……(自主发挥,至少一点)
注意事项:
1. 词数90左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 内容要包括表中要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥,使短文连贯通畅;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名,校名、地名等。
Here is my design for the new app. ___________________________________________________________
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【参考范文】
Here is my design for the new app. It is named Happy English Learning. This app includes English news, English movies, English songs, English games and so on. It can make it easy for students to study together. It is true that vocabulary is very important in English study. Students can enlarge their English vocabulary by using this app. Their English listening skills can be greatly improved. They can also practise their spoken English by singing English songs and watching films. In a word, students can have fun learning English by using this app.
I think the new app should be suitable for students of different ages.
【名师点评】
这篇短文使用了不少的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如and so on,make it easy,in English study,watch films,in a word,have fun,be suitable for等。而固定句型It can make it easy for students to study together.和It is true that vocabulary is very important in English study./ I think the new app should be suitable for students of different ages.等复杂从句结构的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。
(五)【2019 •湖北省孝感市】
随着年龄的增长,你周围的事物也发生了很大变化。请根据以下提示,以“Great changes around me”为题,写一篇短文。
写作要点:
1. 过去,道路狭窄(narrow),房屋老旧,空气……河水……
2. 现在。路面洁净、宽阔, 交通便利;高楼林立;蓝天白云, 满城绿树鲜花, 小鸟歌唱;人们……
3. 感受……
写作要求:
1. 要点齐全,省略号处须作适当发挥,但不要逐句翻译;
2. 语句连贯,条理清晰,详略得当,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现任何宾实的信息(地名、校名和人名等);
4. 100词左右,短文的题目和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Great Changes around Me
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me. ___________________________________
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【参考范文】
Great Changes around Me
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me. The roads used to be narrow and crowded. The houses were old and small. The air wasn't fresh enough. Sometimes, there was terrible smell. The river was polluted badly and there was rubbish in it.
Nowadays, the roads are wide and clean. It's really convenient for people to go out. We can choose different kinds of transportation to go anywhere. Lots of tall buildings have been built in the city. Most of us have moved to big beautiful houses. The sky is blue and the cloud is white .The birds are singing happily. My hometown looks like a big garden with green trees, grass and colorful flowers.
Our country is rich and strong, we are living a happy life. I'm sure as time goes on, our life will become better and better!
【名师点评】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如take place,around me,used to be,convenient for,go out,different kinds of,lots of,most of us,look like,live a happy life,go on,become better and better等。而固定句型It's really convenient for people to go out.和固定句型The river was polluted badly and there was rubbish in it.以及I'm sure as time goes on, our life will become better and better!等复杂从句结构的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。
(六)【2019 •湖北省武汉市】
学校英语社团正在组织题为“My Family”的征文活动。假如你是李明,请根据以下内容提示用英语完成征文。
内容要点如下:
1. 三口之家,家庭幸福,邻里和睦;
2. 父母为教师,在校深受欢迎;
3. 分担家务,周末户外活动;
4. 相互陪伴,经常交流,良好家规助我成长;
5. 请补充说明一至两点与家庭相关的情况。
注意:
1.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
2.词数:60 – 80;
3.内容连贯,不要逐条翻译;
4.标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇: popular adj. 受欢迎的 activity n. 活动 rule n.规矩
My Family
I’m Li Ming. _____________________________________________________________________________
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【写作思路】
本文属于材料作文,介绍我的家庭。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起:
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求,抓住要点,词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲,我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的,而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥,因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪,就可以动笔写作了,在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词,使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外,还要检查语法结构是否合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,格式是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。
【参考范文】
My Family
I’m Li Ming. I have a happy family. There are three people in it. They are my father, my mother and me. My parents are teachers, they are popular among students. We get along well with our neighbors. At home, I try my best to do some housework. On weekends, we often go out for outdoor activities. We accompany with each other, communicate with each other. Good family rules help me grow up. I study hard, all the teachers and classmates like me. My home is a warm place.
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别使用一些亮点词句,如get along well with, try one’s best to do, accompany with, communicate with, help sb do以及grow up,增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。
(七)【2019 •浙江省温州市】
最近,用手机APP买菜的人多了。手机菜场菜品丰富、洗净配好、预约送菜上门……外国朋友对此也很感兴趣。
请你以A New Use of the Mobile Phone为题,写一篇110词左右的英语短文介绍手机买菜带来的便利,让外国朋友了解中国人民生活中的这个新变化。
【小词典】
acknowledge v.承认,认可 bone n. 骨骼 chest n. 胸部
cipher n. 标记 crowd n. 大众 elect v. 选举,推选
franc n. 法国法郎 invisible ad. 不可见的 muscle n. 肌肉
profound adj. 深刻的 radio telescope射电望远镜 reflect n. 反射
signal n. 信号 stimulate v. 刺激 toe n. 脚趾
A New Use of the Mobile Phone
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【写作思路】
这是一篇给材料作文。要求以A New Use of the Mobile Phone为题,写一篇英语短文介绍手机买菜带来的便利,让外国朋友了解中国人民生活中的这个新变化。首先认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;然后根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作。在写作时,注意连句成篇,保持文章的连贯性,要层次清楚,要点分明,中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,最好不要写太长的复合句;尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词,确保正确率;词汇、句式要丰富多样,可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查,确保正确无误。
【参考范文】
A New Use of the Mobile Phone
Preparing for meals is tiring. You may have to spend hours getting everything ready for cooking. Now in China, new mobile apps are here to help.
These apps provide you with meat, fish, and vegetables, almost everything you need for a meal. You, an order whenever you like and decide on the time for them to arrive. If you like. they can be washed, cut and packed for a certain dish. Some apps even guide you to cook step by step, making cooking easier.
Compared with the traditional way of going to the market, mobile apps save your time and energy. With such a new use of the mobile phone, you can enjoy a more relaxing life.
(八)【2019 •泰州市】
为丰富初三学生课余生活,上周末你校组织了一次社会实践活动。请根据以下内容提示,用英语写一篇短文,介绍此次活动,并谈谈自己的感想。
活动内容:
1.上午游览人民公园:欣赏美景、歌舞联欢、拍照留念;
2.下午参观市民广场:观看图片展,了解祖国和家乡70年巨变。
你的感想:
1.师生情深,感谢老师和同学的帮助;
2.倍受鼓舞,决心勤奋学习报效祖国;
3. ……(考生自己发挥)
要求:
1.词数100左右。开头已给出,不计人总词数。
2.所写内容必须包括内容提示中所提供的信息,并可作适当的发挥。
3.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
参考词汇:市民广场Civic Square
In order to enrich Junior 3 students' after-school life, our school organized a social practice activity last weekend. All the teachers and students of our grade took part in it. _______________________________________________
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【写作思路】
这是一篇材料作文,根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下上周末你校所组织的一次社会实践活动。所提供的材料中列举了活动内容和你的感想。主要从:1.上午游览人民公园:欣赏美景、歌舞联欢、拍照留念;2.下午参观市民广场:观看图片展,了解祖国和家乡70年巨变。以及表达师生情深,感谢老师和同学的帮助;倍受鼓舞,决心勤奋学习报效祖国;(自己在发挥一些)。这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般过去时,人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息,并适当发挥。写作时,避免使用汉语式的英语,尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确,表达要符合英语习惯,注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系,表达具有条理性。
【参考范文】
In order to enrich Junior 3 students' after-school life, our school organized a social practice activity last weekend. All the teachers and students of our grade took part in it. In the morning, we visited the People’s Park. In the park, we enjoyed the beautiful scenery, danced and sang, and took pictures. I would like to thank my teachers and classmates for their help. In the afternoon, we visited the Citizen’s Square. In People's Square, we watched the photo exhibition and learned about the great changes of our country and hometown in the past 70 years. After seeing these photo exhibitions, I was inspired and determined to study hard to serve my country.
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
I would like to thank my teachers and classmates for their help. 我要感谢我的老师和同学们的帮助。该句话用到了would like to do sth. 丰富了语言。
【高分句型二】
In People's Square, we watched the photo exhibition and learned about the great changes of our country and hometown in the past 70 years. 在人民广场,我们看了70年来的摄影展,了解了祖国和家乡的巨大变化。该句话的语言简练,层次分明,语意明确,用简单的句子表达了丰富的内涵。使人读起来朗朗上口。
(九)【2019 •湖北省随州市】
茶是中国传统饮食文化的组成部分,是生活中不可或缺的饮品。作为中学生,我们应了解茶并传播茶文化。请根据以下要点提示,写一篇英语短文。
要点提示:1. 历史悠久,约5000年前神农首次发现茶可以饮用;
2. 种植广泛,安溪和杭州尤以茶闻名:
3. 喝茶有很多好处:有利健康,醒脑提神等;
4. 世界各地许多人喜欢喝茶并收集茶具。
写作要求:1. 文章必须包括所有内容要点,可适当发挥以使行文连贯;
2. 词数:80词左右;(文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数)
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
China is famous for tea. ____________________________________________________________________
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【写作思路】
茶是中国传统饮食文化的组成部分,是生活中不可或缺的饮品。作为中学生,我们应了解茶并传播茶文化。请根据以下要点提示,写一篇英语短文。这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细,我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料,不可遗漏要点,并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态,主语是第三人称单数,注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中正确使用比较形式,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
【参考范文】
China is famous for tea. Chinese tea has a long history. It's said that Shen Nong was the first to discover tea as a drink about 5, 000 years ago. Tea is produced in many different areas Anxi and Hangzhou are widely known for their tea.
There are lots of advantages of drinking tea. It's good for health. A cup of ca can make you relaxed and fresh. It seems that many people all over the world love drinking tea and collecting tea scts.
As middle school students,we should know about tea culture and spread it around the world.
【名师点评】
这篇短文是一篇优秀的作文,文中用到了一些好的句型:There are lots of advantages of drinking tea.It's good for health. A cup of ca can make you relaxed and fresh. It seems that many people all over the world love drinking tea and collecting tea scts.这些给文章增色不少。
(十)【2019 •山西省】
阅读是同学们未来参与社会应具备的关键能力,无论你喜欢哪种阅读方式,它都能让你增长知识,开阔眼界。最近,某出版社在两万人中,针对人们喜欢的阅读方式做了一项调查,下图是相关的统计结果,其中包括电子阅读和纸质阅读的人数。
请你用两段话写一篇短文,第一段用百分比简要说明图表内容,第二段从图表中选出一项你喜欢的阅读方式,结合自己的经历,谈谈这种阅读方式的好处。
要求:
1. 词数不少于 80 词;
2. 首句已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇仅供参考;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
WORD BANK reading on mobile phones others books reading paper
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【写作思路】
这篇作文要求我们对一个人们喜欢的阅读方式的调查结果进行介绍,并结合实际,谈一谈自己喜欢的阅读方式。审题可知,短文应主要包括两部分内容:首先仔细观察图表,用百分比简要说明图表内容;然后选择其中一项你喜欢的阅读方式,结合自己的经历,谈一谈这种阅读方式的好处。短文应以一般现在时为主,根据表达需要选择适当的人称,第二部分内容应以第一人称为主叙述。写作时应注意:文章应包括题目中的所有内容,尤其注意仔细观察图表,将图表中的信息表达清楚、准确。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同,不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译。应从句子的整体结构考虑,选择适当的句型、短语和词汇,语句通顺,表达清楚。句式结构可以简单句为基础,穿插并列句和复合句,以及其他复杂结构,提升文章档次。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使上下文意连贯、自然。
【参考范文】
Recently, a survey was done among 20,000 people about the ways of reading. Here is what we have learned from it. 60% of the people like to read on mobile phones or e-readers, while only 38.4% choose to read paper books. So we can know that more and more people prefer to read e-books rather than paper books. However, whatever way of reading we choose, it can help increase our knowledge and open our eyes.
As for me, I am still used to reading paper books. Whenever I open a paper book, the smell of paper reminds me of the stories in the books from my mom when I was a little kid. Just because of this, I got into the habit of reading. So when I read paper books now, they always bring me the old feelings. On the other hand, compared with the electronic devices, reading paper books is good for eyes. So you see, I believe e-books won’t take the place of paper books in my heart.
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文,短文作者根据题目要求介绍了图表中的统计结果,并谈论了自己喜欢的阅读方式。短文有以下几个优点:首先文章内容完整,结构清晰,短文分两段,第一段介绍了图表中的调查结果;第二段结合自己的经历谈论了自己喜欢的阅读方式。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,语法规范,用词准确,表达清楚。句式结构文章,以简单句结构为主,也使用了宾语从句、状语从句、表语从句等复合句结构,长短句结合,调整了文章节奏,提升了作文档次。文章中较好的句型有:Here is what we have learned from it.、So we can know that more and more people prefer to read e-books rather than paper books. 、However, whatever way of reading we choose, it can help increase our knowledge and open our eyes.、Whenever I open a paper book, the smell of paper reminds me of the stories in the books from my mom when I was a little kid.、On the other hand, compared with the electronic devices, reading paper books is good for eyes.等。
(十一)【2019 •甘肃省兰州市】
假如你是李华,你校校报的英语专栏正在开展以“美丽的黄河风情线” (The Beautiful Yellow River Custom Tourist Line)为主题的英语征文活动,你打算参加。请根据以下内容要点用英语写一篇短文。
1. 风情线总览(the Yellow River, run through the city of Lanzhou, a famous road called Binhe Road, along the Yellow River);
2. 聚焦景观(Zhongshan Bridge, waterwheel(水车), many parks);
3. 休闲娱乐(fly kites, play chess);
4. 特色游览(go sightseeing, sheepskin raft(羊皮筏子),water bus)。
要求:1. 80词左右;
2. 条理清楚,行文连贯,书写规范;内容上可适度发挥。
注意:不得出现学校、姓名等个人信息(除所给身份外)。
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【写作思路】
这是一篇话题作文,根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下美丽的黄河风情线。主要从风情线总览、聚焦景观、休闲娱乐和特色游览四个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息,并适当发挥。写作时,避免使用汉语式的英语,尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确,表达要符合英语习惯,注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系,表达具有条理性。
【参考范文】
The Beautiful Yellow River Custom Tourist Line
The Yellow River is our mother river. Do you know what scenic spots the beautiful Yellow River has? Let me tell you! The Yellow River flows through Lanzhou. There is a famous highway called Binhe Road, which runs along the Yellow River. Along the Yellow River there are many parks, as well as the picturesque Zhongshan Bridge, beautiful waterwheel and so on. There are many places for leisure and entertainment, such as flying kites, playing chess and so on. There, you can enjoy special tours, such as sightseeing, sheepskin raft and water bus. The beautiful Yellow River is waiting for you!
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
There is a famous highway called Binhe Road, which runs along the Yellow River. 有一条著名的公路叫做滨河路,它沿着黄河行驶。句子which runs along the Yellow River.是由which引导的定语从句。
【高分句型二】
There are many places for leisure and entertainment, such as flying kites, playing chess and so on. 有很多休闲娱乐的地方,如放风筝、下棋等。该句话用there be结构来写。
(十二)【2019 •浙江省金华、义乌、丽水市】
某英文网站正在举办以“My School Life”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿。
内容要点
参考词汇
Subjects
English, Science,...
Teachers/Classmates
kind, helpful,...
Activities
sports, hobbies,...
注意:1. 文中必须包括表格中全部内容要点,可适当发挥,参考词汇仅供选择使用;
2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名;
3. 词数:80—100;
4. 短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My School Life
I’m Li Hua from Sunny Hill Middle School in China. I’d like to share my school life with you. ___________
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【写作思路】
这是一篇给材料作文。某英文网站正在举办以“My School Life”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿。首先认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;然后根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作。在写作时,注意连句成篇,保持文章的连贯性,要层次清楚,要点分明,中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,最好不要写太长的复合句;尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词,确保正确率;词汇、句式要丰富多样,可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查,确保正确无误。
【参考范文】
My School Life
I’m Li Hua from Sunny Hill Middle School in China. I’d like to share my school life with you.
We have many subjects at school such as Chinese, English and so on. I am focused more on Chinese, for I think it’s getting more and more widely used throughout the world. Our teachers are kind and helpful. Whenever I have problems, they are always ready to give me a hand.
School activities are rich and colorful. I often play basketball with my classmates, which brings me lots of fun. I like reading as well. So I often spend my free time reading in the school library.
My school life is wonderful and I enjoy it very much.
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
I often play basketball with my classmates,which brings me lots of fun.
我经常和我的同学打篮球,这给我带来了很多乐趣。which引导非限定性定语从句。
【高分句型二】
So I often spend my free time reading in the school library.
所以我经常花我的空闲时间在学校图书馆阅读。spend…doing sth花费……做某事。
(十三)【2019 •广州市】
广州某电台英文频道将设Welcome to Guang zhou栏目,目前面向全市中学生征集“微州”英文介绍。请你写一篇英语短文,向栏目投稿。短文需包括下图所有提示内容。
注意:1. 词数:80词左右(短文的开头与结尾已给出,不计入词数);
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Anyone coming to Guangzhou is sure to have a good time _________________________________________
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Guangzhou is waiting for you.
【写作思路】
这篇作文要求我们用英语介绍广州这座城市。题目中用图示展示了短文中应包括的内容:广州市的位置、历史、特色、气候特点以及广州的一个好去处,并阐述理由。学生们应根据这些提示进行写作,为时内容丰富、充实,应对每个话题进行拓展,详细地对广州进行介绍。短文应使用一般现在时,第一人称和第三人称为主来叙述。写作时应注意:首先短文中应包括题目中要求的所有内容,不要遗漏要点。各个内容应叙述清楚、内容具体。同时注意文章结构,要分清主次,合理安排各个写作内容。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同,不要根据汉语思维逐词翻译,应从句子的整体结构出发,可以简单句结构为主,穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式,提升作文档次。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使文意连贯,表达流畅。
【参考范文】
Anyone coming to Guangzhou is sure to have a good time. Located in the south of China,Guangzhou, with a history of more than two thousand years, plays a significant role in both economy and culture of China.With moderate as well as comfortable climate, Guangzhou is famous as a flower city for its distinctive food.
I strongly recommend Canton Tower-a badly well-known scenic spot. First of all, Canton Tower is so grand and beautiful especially in the evening that you can't help being fascinated by it. In addition, when you arrive at the top of Canton Tower, you have such a valuable chance to look down at the full view of Guangzhou. Last but not least, you can take a large number of nice photos in a setting of Canton Tower.
As far as I am concerned, there is no doubt that Guangzhou is good choice for you to visit. I am sure that you will enjoy yourself while making a visit in Guangzhou.
Guangzhou is waiting for you.
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文,短文作者根据题目要求介绍了广州这座城市。短文有以下几个优点:首先短文内容完整,包含来了题目中要求的所有信息,没有遗漏要点。作者从五个方面对广州进行了介绍:第一段中介绍了广州的位置、历史、气候和特色,简单的几句话包含了大量的信息;第二段是主体段,主要给读者推荐了一个好去处,并阐述了自己的理由;第三段和第四段是一个结尾,对自己的介绍进行总结。文章层次清晰,叙述条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,语法规范,用词准确。句式结构完整,符合英语的表达习惯,简单句与复合句结合,使文章富有节奏的变化。文章中使用了一些较好的短语和句型,如Located in the south of China,Guangzhou,with a history of more than two thousand years,plays a significant role in both economy and culture of China、I strongly recommend Canton Tower-a badly well-known scenic spot.、Last but not least. you can take a large number of nice photos in a setting of Canton Tower.、As far as I am concerned, there is no doubt that Guangzhou is good choice for you to visit. I am sure that you will enjoy yourself while making a visit in Guangzhou.等。
(十四)【2019 •广西北部湾经济区】
暑假将至,你校English Club 在社刊上发起了征文活动,题目为“My Plan for Summer Holiday”。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
写作要点:
1. 学习计划
2. 运动计划
3. 娱乐计划
4. 你的愿望
写作要求:
1. 内容必须包括所给要点,可适当发挥,使行文连贯;
2. 语篇完整,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
3. 文中不得出现人名、校名以及透露个人信息的地名,否则不予评分;
4. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Plan for Summer Holiday
Summer holiday is coming. _________________________________________________________________
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【写作思路】
这是一篇给材料作文。要求以“My Plan for Summer Holiday”为题,根据所给出的材料提示写一篇短文。本文时态主要为一般将来时和一般现在时,人称主要为第一人称辅以第三人称。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思要连贯,符合逻辑关系;要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,最好不要写太长的复合句;尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词,确保正确率;同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型,特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化,以便使文章更有档次。
【参考范文】
My Plan for Summer Holiday
Summer holiday is coming. I will make a plan for it. First, I will finish my homework. Then I'll read more good books. And I plan to read four great books to improve myself. Second, I will keeping exercising and learn to play table tennis. It's good for my health. Third, I'll go to Nanning for two weeks. Also, I plan to climb Nanshan tea sea. I hope I can be a volunteer. I want to visit the old people, give them gifts and sing for them.
I'm looking forward to having a good summer in the vacation.
(十五)【2019 •湖北省黄石市】
假如你是国际学校的学生李华,你的同学Tom写了一封邮件询问你暑假的安排,请给Tom回封邮件,告知你的计划,并邀请他来黄石游玩。
内容包括:1. 读几本好书;
2. 参加社会实践活动;
3. 帮父母做家务;
4. 和朋友一起锻炼;
5. 邀请Tom。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现与本人相关信息;
4. 开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
参考词忙:有意义的 meaningful 经典文学作品classic literature works
社会实践活动social practice activities
Dear Tom,
I'm very happy to hear from you. _____________________________________________________________
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【写作思路】
本文属于材料作文,写信告诉汤姆你的暑假计划并邀请汤姆来黄石玩。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。
【参考范文】
Dear Tom,
I'm very happy to hear from you. How are you going these days? Summer vacation is coming soon. Here I’d like to share my holiday plan with you. First of all, I am going to read some good books to open up my mind. What’s more, I’ll take part in some volunteer activities to raise awareness of serving the society and improve my social communication ability. Of course, exercise is must. I will run, play basketball, ride a bike and so on. Last but not least, I am about to invite you to visit my hometown, Huangshi and I really want to meet you.
How about yours? I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别使用一些亮点词句,如would like to do, share sth with, be going to, open up one's mind, take part in, awareness of serving the society, of course, and so on, be about to do, invite sb to do, look forward to doing以及first of all, what’s more和last but not least,增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。
2019年中考真题英语分项汇编
专题21 书面表达
考点2说明介绍类
(一)【2019 •浙江省杭州市】
假定你是李平,最近收到意大利朋友Linda的电子邮件。以下是邮件的一部分,请你阅读后回复,词数80左右。
Subject:
From: Linda
To: Li Ping
...
I’m really looking forward to meeting your brother when he comes to Rome in the summer. I can show him around the city! Please tell me something about him! How old is he? What does he look like? What kind of person is he and what’s he interested in?
Hope to hear from you soon.
Love,
Linda
Subject:
From: Li Ping
To: Linda
Dear Linda,
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Yours,
Li Ping
【写作思路】
这篇作文要求我们对Linda的电子邮件进行回复。写作前,应先阅读Linda的来信,了解信中她想知道的事情,然后有针对性地给她进行介绍。审题可知,Linda在信中提到她想要了解你哥哥的一些情况,她提出了三个问题,“他多大了”;“他是什么样子的”;“他是怎样的人以及他的兴趣”,回信中应对Linda的这些提问进行回答,并根据表达的需要,补充一些细节内容,使文章更加充实、丰富。短文应使用一般现在时、第三人称来叙述,注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意:首先内容应符合题目要求,并且叙述要注意层次和结构;其次应注意英语的表达问题,应符合英文句式的特点以及表达习惯,不能写汉语式的英语。可以简单句结构为主,穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式和结构,提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使文意连贯、自然。
【参考范文】
Dear Linda,
Thank you so much for agreeing to show my brother around Rome. Now let me tell you something about my brother. He is thirteen years old, easy-going and humorous-we get along really well. He loves different cultures. He is interested in museums and likes trying local food.
My brother is also cute. He’s of medium height with short straight black hair. He is good at Chinese kungfu, and usually wears T-shirts and jeans.
Thanks again for your help!
Yours,
Li Ping
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文,短文中作者以李平的身份给Linda写了回信,介绍了哥哥的一些情况。首先短文内容符合题目要求,按照Linda在来信中的提问,介绍了哥哥的年龄、外貌、兴趣爱好等信息。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称,文章以一般现在时、第三人称单数来叙述,符合题目要求,尤其注意了谓语动词第三人称单数形式的变化,这是学生们学习中的一个难点。句式结构完整,符合英语的表达习惯。短文中主要使用了简单句、并列句和复合句,还使用了非谓语动词,如动词不定式、现在分词等。文章中较好的句型和短语有:Thank you so much for agreeing to show my brother around Rome.、He is thirteen years old, easy-going and humorous-we get along really well. 、He is interested in museums and likes trying local food.、He’s of medium height with short straight black hair.、 He is good at Chinese kungfu, and usually wears T-shirts and jeans.等等。
(二)【2019 •甘肃省敦煌市】
我们生活学习在美丽的甘肃。假设你所在的学校正在组织一个“让世界了解甘肃、让走向世界"的活动,请根据以下思维导图的提示,以" The Introduction of Gansu Province"为题,写一篇介绍甘肃的英语短文。
要求:1. 文中需包含思维导图中的主要内容;
2. 句子及篇章结构准确、连贯,书写规范;
3. 可做适量拓展;
4. 词数:80词左右。(标题需抄写在答题卡对应作答区域,不计入总词数)
The Introduction of Gansu Province
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【写作思路】
本文属于材料作文,介绍甘肃省。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。
【参考范文】
The Introduction of Gansu Province
Gansu Province lies in the northwest of China. It covers an area of 425,900 square kilometers. There are 26 million people living there. Lanzhou is the capital city of Gansu Province. The weather in Gansu is different from place to place and the temperature is usually quite different from day to night. If you want to go travelling in Gansu,May to October is the best time. Mogao Grotto which is the world famous art palace and Jiayuguan Pass,the western end of the Great Wall,are two of the must-see places of interest in Gansu.
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文,很好地完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别使用一些亮点词句,如lie in, there be, the capital city of, be different from, end of, places of interest以及which引导的定语从句,增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。
(三)【2019 •湖南省郴州市】
在英语课上, 老师将组织以“说出你的烦恼”(Speak out your worries)为主题的交流活动。假如你是李华, 请根据以下表格中提供的信息, 用英语写一篇发言稿, 说出你的烦恼和愿望。
Worries
Wishes
too strict, too much homework …
little time for outdoor activities…
hard to communicate with…
….
less homework…
more chances …
get on well with …
…
要求:
1短文须包含表格中的所有信息, 并适当发挥;
2词数:80词左右(短文开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数);
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
Hello, everyone,
I am Li Hua. I'd like to speak out my worries and wishes. __________________________________________
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That's all. Thank you.
【写作思路】
考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题,确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。运用适当的短语表达中心思想,增加作文的可读性。完成提示词时也要符合事实。温馨提醒:考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【参考范文】
Hello, everyone,
I am Li Hua. I'd like to speak out my worries and wishes. My teachers are too strict. They have too much homework to do every day.And I feel stressed too much.I wish I can have less homework. I think my parents are too strict with me.They give us little time for outdoor activities. It's hard for me to communicate with their parents.I wish I can have more chances to play with my friends. I wish I can get on well with my parents.
That's all. Thank you.
【名师点评】
这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。
(四)【2019 •山东省滨州市】
即将毕业,请以“My favorite teacher”为题,写一篇英语短文,短文包括以下内容:
1. 老师的外貌、性格、所教科目等;
2. 以事例描述喜爱的原因;
3. 表达对这位老师的感激和祝福。
要求:
1. 要点齐全,并适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实 姓名与校名;
3. 卷面整洁,书写美观,课适当加2-3分;
4. 词数:80词左右,开头部分已给出,不计入总词数。
My favorite teacher
It’s time to graduate from junior high school. I’d like to write something about my favorite teacher. ________
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【参考范文】
My favorite teacher
It’s time to graduate from junior high school. I’d like to write something about my favorite teacher. Of all the teachers, I like my English teacher best. She is a lovely and outgoing girl who loves singing and reading. She is of medium height and has long straight hair.
When I was in Grade Seven, I was so shy that I was afraid to take part in the English competition. She encouraged me not to give up any chance to show myself to others. Thanks to her, I changed my attitude and won the first prize.
I will never forget the wonderful time we were together. Best wishes to her!
【名师点评】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如graduate from,of all the teachers,of medium height,so that,be afraid to do,take part in,give up,encourage sb. to do,at the weekends,thanks to sb.,the first prize等。而并列结构She is of medium height and has long straight hair./ I changed my attitude and won the first prize.和She is a lovely and outgoing girl who loves singing and reading./ When I was in Grade Seven, I was so shy that I was afraid to take part in the English competition./ I will never forget the wonderful time we were together.等复杂从句结构的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。
(五)【2019 •广西百色市】
假设李华是你的同班同学,请根据以下提示及要求,用英语写一篇题为" My Classmate"的短文。
提示:1. 他个子高,长相英俊,成绩优秀,擅长运动;
2. 他乐于助人(举一个例子);
3. 对他的评价。
要求:1. 文中不能出现真实的姓名及校名;
2. 词数80左右。
My Classmate
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【参考范文】
My Classmate
Li Hua is my classmate and my good friend.He is tall and handsome.His grades are excellent and he always does well in exams.He is also good at sports because he thinks health is very important.【高分句型一】(外貌和特长)He is ready to help others.He often helps me with my English. Last year he helped a ten﹣year﹣old boy who lost his way find his mother.(乐于助人)I think Li Hua is a kind person.Everybody in my class likes him very much. (对他的评价)I hope we will be good friends forever.【高分句型二】(愿望)
(六)【2019 •湖南省岳阳市】
假如下面是你们班教室里的照片墙,墙上记录了中考前学习和生活的点点滴滴,以及考前老师的温馨提示.忘不了备战中考时充实而快乐的时光,请你以"Preparation for High School Entrance Exam"(备战中考)为题,写一篇80﹣100词的短文.
要求:(1)请阐述图中信息,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
(3)字迹工整,语言流畅,表达正确.
学
习
区
Listen to the teacher
生
活
区
Eat healthy food
提
示
区
Avoid making mistakes
Take notes
Exercise
Learn to relax
Finish doing…
Have enough sleep
Be on time
...
...
...
Preparation for High School Entrance Exam
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【参考范文】
Preparation for High School Entrance Exam
Time flies,our junior high school life is coming to an end.I can't forget the time when I was preparing for the high school entrance examination.【高分句型一】(点题)On the photo wall of our classroom, we recorded the dribs and drabs of our study and life before the high school entrance examination.We listen to the teacher carefully in class and take notes carefully at the same time.We go to bed after finishing our homework every day.(学习区)We eat healthy food and exercise every day.Getting enough sleep is also important.【高分句型二】(生活区)The teacher often reminds us to avoid making mistakes.We must be on time for class.He also taught us to relax.(提示区)
(七)【2019 •浙江省台州市】
似如你是李华,一个英国游学团要来你们学校,学校需要一些志愿者,你想成为其中的一员。请读下面的招募启事,写一封应征邮件。
Volunteers Wanted
Some students from the UK will come to our school to have a study tour. They are interested in Chinese culture. We’ re looking for some volunteers to help us.
Can you introduce yourself(English ability and personality)?
Can you plan an activity about Chinese culture and explain your purpose?
If you are interested, please email us at Andrew@l63. com.
注意:(1)请回复招募启事中所提及的两个问题, 可适当发挥;
(2)应征邮件中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息;
(3)词数:80~100;
(4)邮件开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Andrew,
I’m Li Hua. ______________________________________________________________________________
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【参考范文】
Dear Sir,
My name is Li Hua. I'm a 17-year-old girl from Class 3, Grade 2. I would like to become a volunteer for the American students.(点明目的)My English is good and I can talk with foreigner fluently. In addition, I'm interested in sports, which is why I'm in good health.【高分句型一】When my friends get in trouble, I often help them actively. I'm good at taking up with others. Besides I like travelling a lot and I'm quite familiar with our city.(自我介绍)I plan to organize an activity about Chinese traditional culture so that British friends can understand China better.【高分句型二】(计划的活动)
I'm sure I can become friends with the English students. Looking forward to your answers.(愿望)
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
In addition,I'm interested in sports,which is why I'm in good health.此外,我对体育感兴趣,这就是为什么我健康状况良好.
which引导非限制性定语从句.
【高分句型二】
I plan to organize an activity about Chinese traditional culture, so that British friends can understand China better.我计划组织一次关于中国传统文化的活动,让英国朋友更好的了解中国.
plan to do sth计划做某事;so that 引导目的状语从句.
(八)【2019 •新疆维吾尔族自治区】
初中生活即将结束,请你想一下,谁是你最喜欢的老师?他、她长什么样子?你 为什么喜欢他、她?以 My favorite Teacher 为题,用英语写一篇短文,请根 据要点进行描述,可以结合具体事例,也可以适当增加自己想写的内容。
要点:
1. What does he/ she look like?
2. Why do you like him/her?
3. ……
注意:
1.词数 80~100;
2.可适当增加细节及要点以外的内容,要求行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
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【写作思路】
这是一篇给材料作文,本文所给要点是几个问题,故动笔前先要阅读要点,找出问题的答案。写作中,应注意描述的全面性,尽量将问题所涉及内容表达完整;结合材料内容,可知本文主要是第一人称,一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词,做到上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
【参考范文】
My favorite teacher is Ms. Wang. She is a 36-year-old woman. She is tall and has long straight hair.
And she often wears black pants and a white shirt. She teaches us English. We all like listening to her. Her classes are very interesting and creative, because she has different ways of teaching. But she is very strict with us in everything. She is warm-hearted. We all know she is always ready to help others. When we are in trouble, she can try her best to help us. We all like her, and she likes us, too.
【名师点评】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少。如:be strict with对……严格;be ready to do sth准备做某事;in trouble处于困难中;try one's best do to sth尽力做某事等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。
(九)【2019 •山东省德州市】
假如你是某市第三中学的一名学生,你的学校正在参加全市文明校园的评选.以下内容是学校根据《山东省中小学文明校园评比细则》列举的部分信息.请你根据表格内容,写一篇短文,向社会宣传自己的学校,并谈谈你能为创建文明校园所做的至少一件事,为母校评选文明校园尽一份力。
1. Teachers' team
(师资)
①experienced teachers
help us make progress
②friendly head teachers
grow as a person
2. School facilities
(设施)
①a big library
read books to learn more
②a playground
do sports
③some science labs
find something new
3. School environment
(环境)
①different kinds of trees and flowers
be clean and beautiful
②safety education classes
protect ourselves
4. ?
…
…
要求:(1)语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;
(3)80~100词,文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
I'm from No.3 Middle School. My school is making its effort to be a civilized school. Let me introduce it.
There are many experienced teachers in my school.They help us make progress in many ways.
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【写作思路】
这是一篇根据表格信息介绍自己学校的材料作文。根据题干要求可知,本篇文章主要使用一般现在时写作。内容包括:1. 师资情况:①有经验的老师帮助我们进步。②班主任和蔼可亲,与人为善。2. 学校设施:①一个大图书馆。②运动场。③一些科学实验室。3. 学校环境:①不同种类的树木和花卉。②安全教育课。4. 谈谈为创建文明校园所做的至少一件事。另外,写作时还需注意语句间的衔接,语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,适当使用连词,做到上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。常用的重点句型和短语有make progress,be friendly,as for,try one's best to do sth,make our school more beautiful。
【参考范文】
I'm from No.3 Middle School. My school is making its effort to be a civilized school. Let me introduce it.
There are many experienced teachers in my school. They help us make progress in many ways. And our head teacher is very friendly, too. For school facilities, we have a library, you can read books to learn more. You also can do sports in the playground. You can find something new in the science labs. As for our school environment, there are different kinds of trees and flowers. So our school is clean and beautiful. We also have safety education classes, these classes can protect ourselves. Finally, our students are polite, too. It will make our school full of civilization.
Let's try our best to make our school more beautiful and make it a civilized school.
(十)【2019 •荆门市】
为弘扬中华传统文化,你校举办了一次“戏曲进校园”展演活动。假定你是李华,请你将活动的相关情况写信告知你的英国笔友John。
要点:
1. 时间:5月16日下午2:30;
2. 地点:学校操场;
3. 内容:校长在开幕式上致辞;戏曲知识竞赛;师生戏曲表演等;
4. 感受:对传统文化有了进一步的了解……
要求:
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名或地名;
2. 语言通顺,条理清楚,书写规范;
3. 要点齐全,内容可适当发挥;
4. 词数:80—100 (开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:戏曲 opera (n.) 开幕式 opening ceremony ( n.)
表演 performance ( n.) 致辞 make a speech
Dear John,
How is everything going? I’m writing to share with you an activity called Opera Entering Campus in our school.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear John,
How is everything going? I’m writing to share with you an activity called Opera Entering Campus in our school.
The activity was held at 2:30 pm on May 16 on the playground. In the beginning, the headmaster made a speech at the opening ceremony, inspiring us students to learn more about Chinese culture. After that, there was an exciting competition about opera knowledge. In the end, we enjoyed wonderful opera performances put on by some teachers and students who are talented in opera.
Through this activity, we have a better understanding of opera and get closer to Chinese traditional culture. I hope you can have a chance to come to China and experience Chinese culture on your own.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如be hold,on the playground,in the beginning,make a speech,at the opening ceremony,after that,in the end,put on,have a chance等。而we enjoyed wonderful opera performances put on by some teachers and students who are talented in opera./ Through this activity, we have a better understanding of opera and get closer to Chinese traditional culture. /I hope you can have a chance to come to China and experience Chinese culture on your own.等复杂从句结构的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。
(十一)【2019 •四川省眉山市】
假如你是李华,打算邀请你们的外教Jack来你家共度端午佳节,并观看一年一度的龙舟赛。请根据以下要点,用英语给他写一封电子邮件。
要点:1. 端午节的时间(农历五月五日)、来由(纪念屈原);
2. 活动安排:学包粽子、观看龙舟赛(时间:下午两点;地点:东坡湖;赛况)。
参考词汇:农历 lunar calendar
注意:1. 所写内容必须包含所有要点,并作适当发挥;
2. 词数:80词左右(开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
Dear Jack,
The Dragon Boat Festival is coming in a few days. _______________________________________________
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
本文属于应用文体,介绍端午节并邀请你的外教杰克来你家共度端午佳节。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。
【参考范文】
Dear Jack,
The Dragon Boat Festival is coming in a few days. It’s a great honor for me to invite you to come to my home to celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival.
Dragon Boat Festival is one of the most important Chinese traditional festivals in China. It’s on May fifth in Chinese lunar calendar. Dragon Boat Festival has a long history, which is in honor of the great ancient Chinese poet Qu Yuan.
We will make zongzi and watch the dragon boat race at 2:00 p.m. at the Dongpo lake which is not very far from my home.
If you are interested in it, please don’t hesitate to contact me. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别使用一些亮点词句,如it is a great honor for me to do sth, one of the+形容词最高级+名词复数, a long history, far away from, hesitate to do以及which引导的定语从句,增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。
(十二)【2019 •广西柳州市】
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Jack想结交更多的中国朋友。请用英文写封邮件,将你的男同学陈东介绍给他。内容包括:
年龄与外表
16岁;高大健壮
兴趣与爱好
喜欢运动、阅读和听音乐;最喜欢的科目是英语
性格与为人
风趣幽默;乐于助人、容易相处
注意:
1. 词数70左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 邮件的开头和结尾部分已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。
参考词汇:
高大健壮tall and strong 运动do sports 听音乐listen to music
最喜欢的科目favorite subject 风趣幽默funny and humorous
乐于做某事be ready to do sth. 相处get on with
Dear Jack,
How is everything going? Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you.
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I'm sure you'd like to have such a person as your friend. With my best wishes
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Jack,
How is everything going?Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you. He is a 16-year-old boy. He has round face, black hair and bright eyes. He is tall and strong. He likes smiling very much.(高分句型一)(要点一,介绍男同学的外貌及特征)He likes doing sports, reading and listening to music. His favorite subject is English, because he thinks it is very interesting. He is humorous and funny. He is ready to help others and easy to get on with others. 【要点二,介绍同学的性格】 He likes doing sports, reading and listening to music. His favorite subject is English, because he thinks it is very interesting. He also spends much time taking part in after-school activities.(高分句型二) He likes winter very much, because he thinks winter is a season to do many fun things,such as skating, making snowman and so on.【要点三,介绍同学的喜好】 His dream is becoming an English teacher, because he wants his students to get good grades. 【要点四,介绍同学的理想】 I'm sure you'd like to have such a person as your friend.With my best wishes!(要点五,美好的祝愿)
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
He likes smiling very much.此句是一般现在时的陈述句.运用短语like doing sth "喜欢做某事",短语very much "非常,很".此句可翻译为"他很喜欢笑。"
注意like后加doing
【高分句型二】
He also spends much time taking part in after-school activities.此句是一般现在时的陈述句。运用短语spend some time (in)doing sth "花时间做某事"。短语take part in "参加",此句可翻译为"他还花大量时间参加课外活动。"
(十三)【2019 •广州市】
广州某电台英文频道将设Welcome to Guang zhou栏目,目前面向全市中学生征集“微州”英文介绍。请你写一篇英语短文,向栏目投稿。短文需包括下图所有提示内容。
注意:1. 词数:80词左右(短文的开头与结尾已给出,不计入词数);
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Anyone coming to Guangzhou is sure to have a good time _________________________________________
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Guangzhou is waiting for you.
【写作思路】
这篇作文要求我们用英语介绍广州这座城市。题目中用图示展示了短文中应包括的内容:广州市的位置、历史、特色、气候特点以及广州的一个好去处,并阐述理由。学生们应根据这些提示进行写作,为时内容丰富、充实,应对每个话题进行拓展,详细地对广州进行介绍。短文应使用一般现在时,第一人称和第三人称为主来叙述。写作时应注意:首先短文中应包括题目中要求的所有内容,不要遗漏要点。各个内容应叙述清楚、内容具体。同时注意文章结构,要分清主次,合理安排各个写作内容。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同,不要根据汉语思维逐词翻译,应从句子的整体结构出发,可以简单句结构为主,穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式,提升作文档次。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使文意连贯,表达流畅。
【参考范文】
Anyone coming to Guangzhou is sure to have a good time. Located in the south of China,Guangzhou, with a history of more than two thousand years, plays a significant role in both economy and culture of China.With moderate as well as comfortable climate, Guangzhou is famous as a flower city for its distinctive food.
I strongly recommend Canton Tower-a badly well-known scenic spot. First of all, Canton Tower is so grand and beautiful especially in the evening that you can't help being fascinated by it. In addition, when you arrive at the top of Canton Tower, you have such a valuable chance to look down at the full view of Guangzhou. Last but not least, you can take a large number of nice photos in a setting of Canton Tower.
As far as I am concerned, there is no doubt that Guangzhou is good choice for you to visit. I am sure that you will enjoy yourself while making a visit in Guangzhou.
Guangzhou is waiting for you.
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文,短文作者根据题目要求介绍了广州这座城市。短文有以下几个优点:首先短文内容完整,包含来了题目中要求的所有信息,没有遗漏要点。作者从五个方面对广州进行了介绍:第一段中介绍了广州的位置、历史、气候和特色,简单的几句话包含了大量的信息;第二段是主体段,主要给读者推荐了一个好去处,并阐述了自己的理由;第三段和第四段是一个结尾,对自己的介绍进行总结。文章层次清晰,叙述条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,语法规范,用词准确。句式结构完整,符合英语的表达习惯,简单句与复合句结合,使文章富有节奏的变化。文章中使用了一些较好的短语和句型,如Located in the south of China,Guangzhou,with a history of more than two thousand years,plays a significant role in both economy and culture of China、I strongly recommend Canton Tower-a badly well-known scenic spot.、Last but not least. you can take a large number of nice photos in a setting of Canton Tower.、As far as I am concerned, there is no doubt that Guangzhou is good choice for you to visit. I am sure that you will enjoy yourself while making a visit in Guangzhou.等。
(十四)【2019 •广西北部湾经济区】
暑假将至,你校English Club 在社刊上发起了征文活动,题目为“My Plan for Summer Holiday”。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
写作要点:
1. 学习计划
2. 运动计划
3. 娱乐计划
4. 你的愿望
写作要求:
1. 内容必须包括所给要点,可适当发挥,使行文连贯;
2. 语篇完整,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
3. 文中不得出现人名、校名以及透露个人信息的地名,否则不予评分;
4. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Plan for Summer Holiday
Summer holiday is coming. _________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
这是一篇给材料作文。要求以“My Plan for Summer Holiday”为题,根据所给出的材料提示写一篇短文。本文时态主要为一般将来时和一般现在时,人称主要为第一人称辅以第三人称。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思要连贯,符合逻辑关系;要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,最好不要写太长的复合句;尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词,确保正确率;同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型,特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化,以便使文章更有档次。
【参考范文】
My Plan for Summer Holiday
Summer holiday is coming. I will make a plan for it. First, I will finish my homework. Then I'll read more good books. And I plan to read four great books to improve myself. Second, I will keeping exercising and learn to play table tennis. It's good for my health. Third, I'll go to Nanning for two weeks. Also, I plan to climb Nanshan tea sea. I hope I can be a volunteer. I want to visit the old people, give them gifts and sing for them.
I'm looking forward to having a good summer in the vacation.
(十五)【2019 •湖北省黄石市】
假如你是国际学校的学生李华,你的同学Tom写了一封邮件询问你暑假的安排,请给Tom回封邮件,告知你的计划,并邀请他来黄石游玩。
内容包括:1. 读几本好书;
2. 参加社会实践活动;
3. 帮父母做家务;
4. 和朋友一起锻炼;
5. 邀请Tom。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现与本人相关信息;
4. 开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
参考词忙:有意义的 meaningful 经典文学作品classic literature works
社会实践活动social practice activities
Dear Tom,
I'm very happy to hear from you. _____________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本文属于材料作文,写信告诉汤姆你的暑假计划并邀请汤姆来黄石玩。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。
【参考范文】
Dear Tom,
I'm very happy to hear from you. How are you going these days? Summer vacation is coming soon. Here I’d like to share my holiday plan with you. First of all, I am going to read some good books to open up my mind. What’s more, I’ll take part in some volunteer activities to raise awareness of serving the society and improve my social communication ability. Of course, exercise is must. I will run, play basketball, ride a bike and so on. Last but not least, I am about to invite you to visit my hometown, Huangshi and I really want to meet you.
How about yours? I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别使用一些亮点词句,如would like to do, share sth with, be going to, open up one’s mind, take part in, awareness of serving the society, of course, and so on, be about to do, invite sb to do, look forward to doing以及first of all, what’s more和last but not least,增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。
(十六)【2019 •黑龙江省齐齐哈尔市】
(注意:文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名和老师名,否则不给分)
假如你叫Tom,和Jack是同学。请用英语写一则邀请函,邀请他于本周五晚上7点来你家参加你的生日聚会,并告诉他你家的地址(参看下图)。
提示:1. 聚会内容:唱歌、吃生日蛋糕、玩游戏;
2. 内容要涵盖提示中的信息,字数30-50词。
Dear Jack,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I think we will have a good time
Tom
【写作思路】
假如你叫Tom,和Jack是同学。请用英语写一则邀请函,邀请他于本周五晚上7点来你家参加你的生日聚会,并告诉他你家的地址(参看下图)。虽然主要内容已经列好,但是很多内容都需要我们自己去充实,让它变得完整、合理,内容丰富,这就需要花费我们的想象力,以及我们平时积累的知识。另外,写作时,还需注意语句间的衔接,使文意连贯,表达流畅。
【参考范文】
Dear Jack,
I’ll have a birthday party at 7:00 p. m. this Friday. I’d like to invite you to my home. Let me tell you the way to my home. Walk along Green Street and take the second crossing on the left/turn left at the second crossing. At the party, we can sing, eat a birthday cake and play games. I think we will have a good time.
Tom
【名师点评】
这是一篇比较不错的作文。文中需要发挥的内容写的不错,一些比较好的句型,如I’d like to invite you to my home. Let me tell you the way to my home. Walk along green Street and take the second crossing on the left/turn left at the second crossing等。
(十七)【2019 •四川省广元市】
假如你叫李军,你家于2017年被列为“精准扶贫”的帮扶对象,在政府两年的帮扶下,你家变化巨大。时值学校校报举办“家的变化”主题征文活动,请你根据以下内容要点,用英语写一篇70词左右的短文,参加本次活动。
内容要点:
过去
1. 家庭贫困,房屋破旧。
2. 母亲生病,为母担忧,成绩下滑。
现在
3. 住进新房,母亲康复,学习进步。
4. 生活日趋改善。
要求:1. 词数:70词左右。短文开头语已给出,但不计入总词数。
2. 短文中必须包括所有要点,但不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥。
3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
My name is Li Jun. Thanks to the government, my family has changed a lot in the last two years. __________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
My name is Li Jun. Thanks to the government, my family has changed a lot in the last two years.(点题)
My family used to be poor and we lived in a small and old house.【高分句型一】I don't have any new clothes. My grades dropped because my mother was sick and couldn't afford to see a doctor. Sometimes, I even want to leave school to support my family.(过去)Now, with the help of the government, great changes took place in our lives. 【高分句型二】 We live in a new house. My mother is healthy. I can also set my mind on my study and make great progress in my study. Our life is improving day by day.(现在)
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
My family used to be poor and we lived in a small and old house.
我家以前很穷,我们住在一个小和旧房子。used to do sth过去常常做某事。
【高分句型二】
Now, with the help of the government, great changes took place in our lives.
现在,在政府的帮助下,巨大的变化发生在我们的生活。with the help of 在……的帮助下。
2019年中考真题英语分项汇编
专题21 书面表达
考点2说明介绍类
(一)【2019 •广西北部湾经济区】
暑假将至,你校English Club 在社刊上发起了征文活动,题目为“My Plan for Summer Holiday”。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
写作要点:
1. 学习计划
2. 运动计划
3. 娱乐计划
4. 你的愿望
写作要求:
1. 内容必须包括所给要点,可适当发挥,使行文连贯;
2. 语篇完整,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
3. 文中不得出现人名、校名以及透露个人信息的地名,否则不予评分;
4. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Plan for Summer Holiday
Summer holiday is coming. _________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
这是一篇给材料作文。要求以“My Plan for Summer Holiday”为题,根据所给出的材料提示写一篇短文。本文时态主要为一般将来时和一般现在时,人称主要为第一人称辅以第三人称。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思要连贯,符合逻辑关系;要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,最好不要写太长的复合句;尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词,确保正确率;同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型,特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化,以便使文章更有档次。
【参考范文】
My Plan for Summer Holiday
Summer holiday is coming. I will make a plan for it. First, I will finish my homework. Then I'll read more good books. And I plan to read four great books to improve myself. Second, I will keeping exercising and learn to play table tennis. It's good for my health. Third, I'll go to Nanning for two weeks. Also, I plan to climb Nanshan tea sea. I hope I can be a volunteer. I want to visit the old people, give them gifts and sing for them.
I'm looking forward to having a good summer in the vacation.
(二)【2019 •大庆市】
文娱、体育、户外等丰富多彩的课外活动为我们的生活增添了生机和活力。请以“After-class Activities Make My Life Colorful”为题,为校园专栏写一篇英文稿件。
内容包括:
1. 简要描述你参加过的一项课外活动;
2. 该课外活动给你带来的收获及感受(交朋友;放松自我)。
写作要求:
1. 词数80词左右;开头已写好,不计入总词数;
2. 文章不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。
After-class Activities Make My Life Colorful
Nowadays after-class activities are becoming more and more important ______________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
这是一篇话题作文,让我们写一篇关于After-class Activities Make My Life Colorful的英文稿件,并鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动,这需要我们发挥英语思维,将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来。写作需要用第一人称,注意各种时态的交替运用。内容要点包括:简要描述你参加过的一项课外活动,时态用一般过去时;你参加过的课外活动给你带来的收获和感受,时态以一般现在时为主和一般将来时为主;最后总结自己的心得体会。
【参考范文】
After-class Activities Make My Life Colorful
Nowadays, after-school activities are becoming more and more important. There are many different kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. I joined a volleyball club last year. I am used to playing volleyball after school.
In the volleyball club, I've made lots of friends. We often play volleyball after school. Whether it is hot or cold, we never stop playing it. I feel happy while playing volleyball. And it is also a good way to relax myself. I think I will continue to play volleyball after school in the future.
All in all, after-school activities make my life more colorful and meaningful.
【名师点评】
高分句型一:I am used to playing volleyball after school. 我习惯放学后打排球。be used to doing sth.习惯于做某事。
高分句型二:And it is also a good way to relax myself. 这也是放松自己的好方法。动词不定式to relax myself用作后置定语。
高分句型三:All in all, after-school activities make my life more colorful and meaningful. 总之,课外活动使我的生活更加丰富多彩,更有意义。
more colorful and meaningful用作my life的宾语补足语。
(三)【2019 •广元】
假如你叫李军,你家于2017年被列为“精准扶贫”的帮扶对象。在政府两年时间的帮扶下,你家变化巨大。时值学校校报举办“家的变化”主题征文活动,请你根据以下内容要点,用英语写一篇70词左右的短文,参加本次活动。
内容要点:
过去
1. 家庭贫困,房屋破旧。
2. 母亲生病,为母担忧,成绩下滑。
现在
3. 住进新房,母亲康复,学习进步。
4. 生活日趋改善。
要求:1. 词数:70词左右。短文开头语已给出,但不计入总词数。
2. 短文中必须包括所有要点,但不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥。
3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
My name is Li Jun. Thanks to the government, my family has changed a lot in the last two years. __________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本题要求把过去的家乡和现在进行比较,得出现在变得更好的结论。描述过去的状况,要用一般过去时;描述现在的变化,要用现在完成时态。介绍自己家乡的变化,用第一人称。
【参考范文】
My name is Li Jun. Thanks to the government, my family has changed a lot in the last two years. My family used to be very poor and we lived in an old and broken house. What’s more, my mother wasn’t in good health and she often fell ill. I was worried about her all the time, so my grades dropped. However, with the help of the government, we have moved into a new house. To our joy, my mother has become better. As for me, I have made great progress at school because of my hard work. All in all, our life has gradually improved.
【名师点评】
短文第一句“My family used to be very poor and we lived in an old and broken house.”运用固定搭配“used to do”描述过去的家乡条件不好。下一句用短语“what’s more”(而且)表示语气递进;短语“fall ill”(生病),介绍过去健康状况不好。当比较现在时,用副词“however”(然而)。短语“to our joy”(令我高兴的是)和“as for me”(对我来说),作者结合亲身感受,介绍了身边的变化。最后用“all in all”(总而言之)进行总结,得出结论,即家乡的变化很大。
(四)【2019 •广州市】
广州某电台英文频道将开设 Welcome to Guang zhou栏目,目前面向全市中学生征集“微州”英文介绍。请你写一篇英语短文,向栏目投稿。短文需包括下图所有提示内容。
注意:1. 词数:80词左右(短文的开头与结尾已给出,不计入词数);
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Anyone coming to Guangzhou is sure to have a good time. ________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Guangzhou is waiting for you.
【写作思路】
这篇作文要求我们用英语介绍广州这座城市。题目中用图示展示了短文中应包括的内容:广州市的位置、历史、特色、气候特点以及广州的一个好去处,并阐述理由。学生们应根据这些提示进行写作,为时内容丰富、充实,应对每个话题进行拓展,详细地对广州进行介绍。短文应使用一般现在时,第一人称和第三人称为主来叙述。写作时应注意:首先短文中应包括题目中要求的所有内容,不要遗漏要点。各个内容应叙述清楚、内容具体。同时注意文章结构,要分清主次,合理安排各个写作内容。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同,不要根据汉语思维逐词翻译,应从句子的整体结构出发,可以简单句结构为主,穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式,提升作文档次。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使文意连贯,表达流畅。
【参考范文】
Anyone coming to Guangzhou is sure to have a good time. Located in the south of China,Guangzhou, with a history of more than two thousand years, plays a significant role in both economy and culture of China. With moderate as well as comfortable climate, Guangzhou is famous as a flower city for its distinctive food.
I strongly recommend Canton Tower-a badly well-known scenic spot. First of all, Canton Tower is so grand and beautiful especially in the evening that you can't help being fascinated by it. In addition, when you arrive at the top of Canton Tower, you have such a valuable chance to look down at the full view of Guangzhou. Last but not least, you can take a large number of nice photos in a setting of Canton Tower.
As far as I am concerned, there is no doubt that Guangzhou is good choice for you to visit. I am sure that you will enjoy yourself while making a visit in Guangzhou.
Guangzhou is waiting for you.
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文,短文作者根据题目要求介绍了广州这座城市。短文有以下几个优点:首先短文内容完整,包含来了题目中要求的所有信息,没有遗漏要点。作者从五个方面对广州进行了介绍:第一段中介绍了广州的位置、历史、气候和特色,简单的几句话包含了大量的信息;第二段是主体段,主要给读者推荐了一个好去处,并阐述了自己的理由;第三段和第四段是一个结尾,对自己的介绍进行总结。文章层次清晰,叙述条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,语法规范,用词准确。句式结构完整,符合英语的表达习惯,简单句与复合句结合,使文章富有节奏的变化。文章中使用了一些较好的短语和句型,如Located in the south of China,Guangzhou,with a history of more than two thousand years,plays a significant role in both economy and culture of China、I strongly recommend Canton Tower-a badly well-known scenic spot.、Last but not least. you can take a large number of nice photos in a setting of Canton Tower.、As far as I am concerned, there is no doubt that Guangzhou is good choice for you to visit. I am sure that you will enjoy yourself while making a visit in Guangzhou.等等。
(五)【2019 •湖北省黄石市】
假如你是国际学校的学生李华,你的同学Tom写了一封邮件询问你暑假的安排,请给
Tom回封邮件,告知你的计划,并邀请他来黄石游玩。
内容包括:1. 读几本好书;
2. 参加社会实践活动;
3. 帮父母做家务;
4. 和朋友一起锻炼;
5. 邀请Tom。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现与本人相关信息;
4. 开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
参考词忙:有意义的 meaningful 经典文学作品classic literature works
社会实践活动social practice activities
Dear Tom,
I'm very happy to hear from you. _____________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本文属于材料作文,写信告诉汤姆你的暑假计划并邀请汤姆来黄石玩。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。
【参考范文】
Dear Tom,
I'm very happy to hear from you. How are you going these days? Summer vacation is coming soon. Here I’d like to share my holiday plan with you. First of all, I am going to read some good books to open up my mind. What’s more, I’ll take part in some volunteer activities to raise awareness of serving the society and improve my social communication ability. Of course, exercise is must. I will run, play basketball, ride a bike and so on. Last but not least, I am about to invite you to visit my hometown, Huangshi and I really want to meet you.
How about yours? I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别使用一些亮点词句,如would like to do, share sth with, be going to, open up one’s mind, take part in, awareness of serving the society, of course, and so on, be about to do, invite sb to do, look forward to doing以及first of all, what’s more和last but not least,增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。
(六)【2019 •吉林】
假如你是李华,想参加China Daily 举办的以”梦想职业体验”为主题的2019年夏令营活动。请给主办人Mr. Smith写一封介绍个人情况的申请邮件。内容包括:1.个人信息与兴趣爱好2.梦想职业与个人计划
写作要求;1.词数90词左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 文中不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。
Dear Mr. Smith,
It's my pleasure to introduce myself to you. ____________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
本文属于申请信,给主办人史密斯先生写一封介绍个人情况的申请邮件,包含个人信息与兴趣爱好和梦想职业与个人计划。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。
【参考范文】
Dear Mr. Smith,
It's my pleasure to introduce myself to you.
My name is Li Hua.I like reading and writing.I spend lots of time reading in the library with my classmates after school.And I have a habit of keeping a dairy.I want to be a writer when I grow up.So After knowing your summer camp,I feel very excited because it's about dream job experience.If I have this kind of opportunity to experience my dream job,I will cherish this chance.After work,I will spend more time making a summary.
I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别使用一些亮点词句,如like doing, spend+时间+doing sth, keep a diary, grow up以及If I have this kind of opportunity to experience my dream job,I will cherish this chance中if引导的条件句用一般现在时,主句用一般将来时,增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。
(七)【2019 •山东省聊城市】
假如你叫陈伟,2019年6月22日和23日是你中考后的第一个周末,请你制定一个周末活动计划,并用英语给你的英国笔友Alan写一封电子邮件,说明你的活动安排。
主要活动内容包括:
1. 6月22日上午在家读书;下午与家人和朋友外出活动;
2. 6月23日到朋友家附近的公园捡垃圾;
3. 你对本次活动的期待。
注意:
1. 邮件字数:80词左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯,但邮件中不能出现真实的人名、地名。
3. 邮件的开头和结尾已经给击,不计入总词数。
Dear Alan,
I'm going to enjoy myself during the coming weekend. ___________________________________________
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Yours,
Chen Wei
【写作思路】
写作要求以电子邮件的形式介绍自己中考后的第一个周末活动计划。写作时要仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确要点:分别从时间和活动安排来介绍,根据表达的内容确定句子的时态,就本文而言应该用一般将来时态,会用到be going to结构,人称为第一人称。在时间的表达上注意介词的正确使用,在某一天的早晨、下午、晚上用介词on。写作时,还需注意语句间的衔接,使用恰当的连词,使文意连贯,表达流畅。
【参考范文】
Dear Alan,
I'm going to enjoy myself during the coming weekend. On the morning of 22nd June, I'm going to get up a little late and then read an interesting storybook. In the afternoon I'm going out with my family and friends. We're going to take a walk in the country near our home or go swimming in the lake. And on 23rd June we're going to collect liter in the park near my friend's house. I think it's going to be a great weekend-busy but good fun!
Yours,
Chen Wei
(八)【2019 •四川省内江市】
假设你叫李华,你校英语报正在以“我最喜欢的一天”为题,向中学生开展征文活动。请你根据如下内容提示,用英语写一篇短文,向该报社投稿。
1. 你最喜欢的是星期五;
2. 原因:
(1)这天有你最喜欢上的音乐课(从小就喜欢音乐,音乐老师和音乐课很有趣);
(2) ……
要求:
(1)所写内容必须包括以上要点和自行补充要点;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
(3)内容连贯并进行合理拓展;
(4)100词左右;题目已经写好,不计入总词数。
My Favorite Day
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【写作思路】
本文是一篇给材料作文。要求以“我最喜欢的一天”为题,根据所给出的内容提示写一篇英语短文。根据所给材料可知时态用一般现在时,人称主要用第一人称。写作中注意理顺要点,防止漏写,注意表达的条理性、连贯性;注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误;要使用自己有把握的句式、单词,词汇,句式要丰富多样,避免句式单一。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;最后要细心复核检查,确保正确无误。
【参考范文】
My Favorite Day
Everyone has their favorite day. My name is Li Hua.Now let me introduce my favorite day.My favorite day is Friday.Because it has my favorite music class.I have loved music since childhood.I also like my music teacher. Her music class is very interesting.There's a P.E. class on Fridays.I like playing football in PE class.I think it's good for my health.We can also develop friendship through sports.This is also a time which I can spend together with my parents.So I think this is the best day of the week and I love it best.
【点睛】
首先认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;然后根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作,在写作过程中,要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡,必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词,使文章过渡平稳,自然流畅。
(九)【2019 •黑龙江省齐齐哈尔市】
假如你叫Tom,和Jack是同学。请用英语写一则邀请函,邀请他于本周五晚上7点来你家参加你的生日聚会,并告诉他你家的地址(参看下图)。
提示:1. 聚会内容:唱歌、吃生日蛋糕、玩游戏;
2. 内容要涵盖提示中的信息,字数30-50词。
Dear Jack,
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I think we will have a good time
Tom
【写作思路】
假如你叫Tom,和Jack是同学。请用英语写一则邀请函,邀请他于本周五晚上7点来你家参加你的生日聚会,并告诉他你家的地址(参看下图)。虽然主要内容已经列好,但是很多内容都需要我们自己去充实,让它变得完整、合理,内容丰富,这就需要花费我们的想象力,以及我们平时积累的知识。另外,写作时,还需注意语句间的衔接,使文意连贯,表达流畅。
【参考范文】
Dear Jack,
I’ll have a birthday party at 7:00 p. m. this Friday. I’d like to invite you to my home. Let me tell you the way to my home. Walk along Green Street and take the second crossing on the left/turn left at the second crossing. At the party, we can sing, eat a birthday cake and play games.
I think we will have a good time.
Tom
【名师点评】
这是一篇比较不错的作文。文中需要发挥的内容写的不错,一些比较好的句型,如I’d like to invite you to my home. Let me tell you the way to my home. Walk along green Street and take the second crossing on the left/turn left at the second crossing等。
(十)【2019 •江苏省无锡市】
假设你叫李文,是无锡阳光中学(Wuxi Sunshine Middle School)的一名学生。今天暑期,你将代表你校赴瑞士参加“模拟联合国”会议并发言,此次会议的主题是A Green World。你草拟了发言流程图,请根据下图写一篇英文发言稿。
注意事项:
1. 发言稿须根据流程图自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2. 流程图中包括部分非限定性内容,仅供参考;
3. 词数在 90 个左右,发言稿的首尾已在答题卡上给出,不计入总数。
4. 发言稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。
5. 发言稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
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【写作思路】
这是一篇材料作文,根据李文的发言流程图写一篇英文发言稿。主题是A Green World。因为今天暑期,你将代表你校赴瑞士参加“模拟联合国”会议并发言,主要从介绍自己、中国为“绿色世界”已经做的和“我”是怎样做得。这三个方面去介绍。时态为一般将来时和现在完成时,人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息,并适当发挥。写作时,避免使用汉语式的英语,尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确,表达要符合英语习惯,注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系,表达具有条理性。
【参考范文】
Ladies and gentlemen!
My name is Li Wen. I’m a student of Wuxi Sunshine Middle School. This year, I am fifteen years old. China has made its own efforts for the green world. Many factories have met the discharge standards. We have made use of many new energy sources. For example: wind, solar and hydroelectric power. What should we do as middle school students? First of all, we should turn off the lights in time. Secondly, when we take a shower, we should save water. Third, when we go shopping, we should use cloth bags instead of plastic bags. If so, we have made our due efforts for environmental protection.
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
China has made its own efforts for the green world. 中国为绿色世界做出了自己的努力。
Many factories have met the discharge standards. 许多工厂的排污都达到了排放标准。
We have made use of many new energy sources. 我们利用了许多新能源。
这三句话,简短而有力量,体现了作者的语言功底深厚。
【高分句型二】
Third, when we go shopping, we should use cloth bags instead of plastic bags. 第三,我们去购物时,应该用布袋代替塑料袋。句子when we go shopping,是由when 引导的时间状语从句。
(十一)【2019 •岳阳市】
假如下面是你们班教室里的照片墙,墙上记录了中考前学习和生活的点点滴流,以及考前老师的温馨提示。忘不了备战中考时充实而快乐的时光,请你以“Preparation for High School Entrance Exam”(备战中考)为题,写一篇80-100词的短文。
1. 请阐述图中信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
3. 字迹工整,语言流畅,表达正确。
学习区
Listen to the teacher
生活区
Eat healthy food
提示区
Avoid making mistakes
Take notes
Exercise
Learn to relax
Finish doing…
Have enough sleep
Be on time
…
…
…
Preparation for High School Entrance Exam
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【写作思路】
这篇作文要求我们以Preparation for High School Entrance Exam为题,介绍备战中考的时光。题目中用照片墙的形式呈现了备战的具体内容,并给出了一些关键词,学生们应依据这些图片和关键词,展开合理的想象,充实细节内容,并用正确的英语表达出来。审题可知,这篇短文的主要内容应包括三个方面:分学习、生活和提示三个方面解析介绍,注意分清层次和结构,合理安排各个方面的信息,注意上下文的衔接、过渡应自然。短文应以第一人称为主来叙述,时态应为一般过去时,注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同,不要根据汉语思维逐词翻译,应从句子的整体结构出发,写完整的句子。可以简单句结构为主,清晰、准确地表达自己的意思。而为了提升作文档次,应在文中穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式和结构。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使文意连贯,表达流畅。
【参考范文】
Preparation for High School Entrance Exam
High School Entrance Exam is arriving. I still remember the days when our teachers and students worked together to prepare for it. In order to get a good grade, we all listened to the teachers carefully in class and took notes at the same time. After class, we finished our homework on time. If we had some difficult problems, our teachers would explain to us in details. All the teachers encouraged us not to give up and keep on studying. Besides, to study well, health comes first. Our teachers told us to eat healthy food, such as eggs, meat, vegetables and so on. We also did exercise every day and had enough sleep. The teachers told us not to feel stressful and learn to relax. We must be careful in the exam and avoid making mistakes. What’s more, we must be on time. We all felt tired and nervous, but what a full and happy time!
【名师点评】
这是一篇比较不错的作文,短文作者根据题目要求,回忆了自己和老师们一起备战中考的一段充实、快乐的时光。题目以照片墙的形式展示了备战的过程和内容,非常新颖独特,分析照片墙可知,文章应从三个方面进行介绍:学习、生活以及老师对学生的提示。这篇短文也正是按照这个思路进行展开叙述的。短文层次很清晰,叙述也很清楚。短文主要使用了一般过去时态,符合表达的需要,语法规范,注意了动词过去式的变化,尤其是不规则动词的过去式形式。语句通顺,句式结构完整,符合英语的表达习惯。句子以简单句为基础,也使用了宾语从句、状语从句等复合句句型,调整了文章的节奏。短文中使用了一些较好的短语和句型,如I still remember the days when our teachers and students worked together to prepare for it.、If we had some difficult problems, our teachers would explain to us in details.、Besides, to study well, health comes first. Our teachers told us to eat healthy food, such as eggs, meat, vegetables and so on.、We must be careful in the exam and avoid making mistakes.等等。
(十二)【2019 •贵州省遵义市】
假如你是遵义育才中学的大明,你们学校与上海阳光中学正在实施"山与海对话"( Dialogue Between Mountain And Sea)项目.今年暑假,你的"手拉手"活动伙伴小海将来遵义进行首次交流活动.请根据下列提示给他写一封80词左右的书信.内容包括:
自我介绍
年龄、性格、爱好……
校园生活介绍
社团活动……
家乡介绍
自然环境,名胜古迹……
你的建议
上网了解更多有关遵义的历史与文化……
注意:1.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3.书信的开头和结尾已为你写出,不计入总词数.
提示词:遵义海龙囤Zunyi Hailongtun Castle 遵义会址 Zunyi Conference Site
Dear Xiaohai,
I'm glad to hear that you are coming to Zunyi because of the project Dialogue Between Mountain And Sea. Now let me tell you something about me and my city.__________________________________________
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Welcome to my city! I'm looking forward to meeting you.
Yours sincerely,
Daming
【写作思路】
本题是一篇材料作文,也是书信作文。注意书信格式。本文人称主要是第一称,时态主要是一般现在时和一般将来时。认为阅读材料,认真审题,确定主题,提示要点就是本文的提纲要点,根据要点适当发挥,列出提纲。短文必须包含提示内容,条理清楚。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有连贯性。写完以后,注意再读一遍,看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误(时态、主谓一致等)。
【参考范文】
Dear Xiaohai,
I'm glad to hear that you are coming to Zunyi because of the project Dialogue Between Mountain And Sea. Now let me tell you something about me and my city.I am fourteen years old. I am outgoing and like making friends. I like sports, like playing balls and running. I also like collecting stamps. Our school life is very colorful. We can not only study very hard but also do all kinds of activities after class. After school, we often do some sports such as playing basketball, volleyball, Pingpong and so on. I join basketball club. I play basketball every Thursday afternoon after school.The natural environment in Zunyi is beautiful and there're many famous scenic spots and historical sites in Zunyi, like Zunyi Hailongtun Castle and Zunyi Conference Site. If you want to know more about Zunyi's history and culture, you can go online for it.
Welcome to my city! I'm looking forward to meeting you.
Yours sincerely,
Daming
【名师点评】
书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。语言要规范,时态运用要正确,叙述清楚条里,学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。注意书写的规范:大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。注意检查:单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。
写作六步法:
1.审题:文体,时态,人称。
2.抓住要点:要点是否齐全,适当补充。
3.扩充句子:通过增加状语,定语,连词,使句子意思饱满充实。
4.连句成文,合理使用连词。
5.改正错误:拼写是否错误,语法时态是否正确,连词是否恰当等。
6.誊写作文:注意书写工整美观整洁。
(十三)【2019 •广西柳州市】
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Jack想结交更多的中国朋友。请用英文写封邮件,将你的男同学陈东介绍给他。内容包括:
年龄与外表
16岁;高大健壮
兴趣与爱好
喜欢运动、阅读和听音乐;最喜欢的科目是英语
性格与为人
风趣幽默;乐于助人、容易相处
注意:
1. 词数70左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 邮件的开头和结尾部分已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。
参考词汇:
高大健壮tall and strong 运动do sports 听音乐listen to music
最喜欢的科目favourite subject 风趣幽默funny and humorous
乐于做某事be ready to do sth. 相处get on with
Dear Jack,
How is everything going? Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you.
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I'm sure you'd like to have such a person as your friend. With my best wishes
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
【参考范文】
Dear Jack,
How is everything going? Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you.
Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you.He is a 16-year-old boy.He has round face ,black hair and bright eyes.He is tall and strong.He likes smiling very much.(高分句型一)(要点一,介绍男同学的外貌及特征.)He likes doingh sports.reading and listening to music.His favourite subject is English .because he thinks it is very interesting.He is humorous and funny.He is ready to help others and easy to get on with others. 【要点二,介绍同学的性格.】He likes doing sports.reading and listening to music.His favourite subject is English.because he thinks it is very interesting.He also spends much time taking part in after-school activities.(高分句型二) He likes winter very much, because he thinks winter is a season to do many fun things,such as skating ,making snowman and so on.【要点三,介绍同学的喜好.】 His dream is becoming an English teacher,because he wants his students to get good grades.【要点四,介绍同学的理想.】 I'm sure you'd like to have such a person as your friend.With my best wishes!(要点五,美好的祝愿.)
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
高分句型一
He likes smiling very much.此句是一般现在时的陈述句.运用短语like doing sth "喜欢做某事",短语very much "非常,很".此句可翻译为"他很喜欢笑."
注意like后加doing
高分句型二
He also spends much time taking part in after-school activities.此句是一般现在时的陈述句.运用短语spend
some time (in)doing sth "花时间做某事".短语take part in "参加".此句可翻译为"他还花大量时间参加课外活动."
(十四)【2019 •广西玉林市】
每周星期一的升旗仪式( Flag﹣raising ceremony)是你们学校的常规活动,你的英国笔友Bob对你校的升旗仪式很感兴趣.假定你是张华,请你给Bob写一封电子邮件,介绍下你校升旗仪式的情况.
内容要点:
1.升旗的时间和地点;
2.参加升旗的人员;
3.升旗活动的意义;
4.你的感想;
参考词汇:(仅供参考)
要求:
1.包括所有内容要点,不要逐句翻译,可以适当发挥;
2.80词左右,语法正确.(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
3.文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、地点和所在的学校名称。
Dear Bob,
Hearing that you are interested in Flag﹣raising ceremony of our school ,I am glad to tell you something about it.
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Hope you can experience the Flag﹣raising ceremony of our school.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Bob,
Hearing that you are interested in Flag﹣raising ceremony of our school ,I am glad to tell you something about it.Every Monday morning at eight o'clock, we hold a flag﹣raising ceremony on the school playground. (升旗的时间和地点)All teachers and students must attend the ceremony. (参加升旗的人员)When the national flag is rising, we must sing the national anthem and salute it. 【高分句型一】
Raising the national flag is an important means of patriotism education and collectivism education.(升旗活动的意义)The national flag is the symbol of a country. At this moment, a sense of mission and responsibility appears in my mind.I'm proud of my motherland. I must work hard to make our country more and more beautiful.【高分句型二】(感想) Hope you can experience the Flag﹣raising ceremony of our school.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
(十五)【2019 •内蒙古呼和浩特市】
临近毕业,学校在学习小组内开展了初中阶段自评和组评活动,假设你是Rainbow小组的组长zhangHong,请你为你的组员Li Ming 进行综合素质的评价,写一份素质报告。
内容包括:1. 他的爱好;
2. 他的优点(两条);
3. 他的缺点或存在的问题;
4. 你对他的建议(两条)。
要求:1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2. 要点必须包括所有相关信息,并适当发挥,但不得出现真实班级、姓名等;
3. 词数:不少于80 词 (所给内容不计入总词数)。
Li Ming is a member of my team called Rainbow. _______________________________________________
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【参考范文】
Li Ming is a member of my team called Rainbow. Generally speaking, he is a warm- hearted and outgoing boy. He can also get on well with teachers and classmates. In his spare time, he likes reading books on history. So he knows a lot of knowledge about history.(他的爱好和优点)
But as a famous saying goes, "Every coin has two sides ",sometimes he doesn't work hard enough on his lessons.(他的缺点或存在的问题)
I advise him to spend more time on the subjects from now on.What's more, he had better answer questions in class actively so that he can make great progress.【高分句型一】(给他的建议)
I'm sure if he can try hard to improve himself who will be an excellent student soon.【高分句型二】(总结全文)
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
What's more, he had better answer questions in class actively so that he can make great progress.更重要的是,他最好在课堂上积极回答问题,这样他才能取得很大的进步.
had better do sth最好做某事;so that引导目的状语从句.
【高分句型二】
I'm sure if he can try hard to improve himself who will be an excellent student soon.我相信如果他能努力提高自己,他很快就会成为一名优秀的学生.
if引导条件状语从句.
(十六)【2019 •宁夏回族自治区】
第四届“丝绸之路”宁夏国际马拉松赛将于2020年5月举行。假定你叫李华,你想成为本届马拉松赛的一名志愿者。请用英语给组委会写一封申请信,内容包括:
1.个人优势:擅长英语,性格开朗,做事认真,爱好运动。(至少再补充两点)
2.个人承诺:尽力提供优质服务。
注意:
1.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:volunteer志愿者
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua. I'm very glad that the 4h"Silk Road” International Marathon will be held in Ningxia in May,2020. _________________________________________________________________________________
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I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours truly.
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua.I'm very glad that the 4h "Silk Road" International Marathon will be held in Ningxia in May,2020.I'd like to be a volunteer.
I'm a girl of 15,a middle school student.First of all,I do well in English.【高分句型一】I'm outgoing.I take everything seriously.Besides,I am interested in sports and I have been a volunteer before.【高分句型二】What's more,I'm always ready to help others and good at working with people.(个人优势)I promise I'll try to offer my best service during the race.I will be very happy if I can be chosen as a volunteer.(个人承诺)
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
First of all,I do well in English.首先,我的英语很好.
First of all首先
do well in在……某方面干得好
【高分句型二】
Besides,I am interested in sports and I have been a volunteer before.此外,我对体育感兴趣,我曾经是一名志愿者.
be interested in 对…有兴趣
(十七)【2019 •四川省广元市】
假如你叫李军,你家于2017年被列为“精准扶贫”的帮扶对象,在政府两年的帮扶下,你家变化巨大。时值学校校报举办“家的变化”主题征文活动,请你根据以下内容要点,用英语写一篇70词左右的短文,参加本次活动。
内容要点:
过去
1. 家庭贫困,房屋破旧。
2. 母亲生病,为母担忧,成绩下滑。
现在
3. 住进新房,母亲康复,学习进步。
4. 生活日趋改善。
要求: 1. 词数:70词左右。短文开头语已给出,但不计入总词数。
2. 短文中必须包括所有要点,但不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥。
3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
My name is Li Jun. Thanks to the government, my family has changed a lot in the last two years. __________
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【参考范文】
My name is Li Jun. Thanks to the government, my family has changed a lot in the last two years. (点题)
My family used to be poor and we lived in a small and old house.【高分句型一】I don't have any new clothes.My grades dropped because my mother was sick and couldn't afford to see a doctor.Sometimes, I even want to leave school to support my family.(过去)Now, with the help of the government, great changes took place in our lives.【高分句型二】 We live in a new house.My mother is healthy.I can also set my mind on my study and make great progress in my study.Our life is improving day by day.(现在)
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
My family used to be poor and we lived in a small and old house.
我家以前很穷,我们住在一个小和旧房子.used to do sth过去常常做某事.
【高分句型二】
Now, with the help of the government, great changes took place in our lives.
现在,在政府的帮助下,巨大的变化发生在我们的生活.with the help of 在…的帮助下.
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