三年(2020-2022)中考英语真题分项汇编：专题48观点看法类（含解析）

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专题48 书面表达—观点看法类

【2022年】

（一）（2022·湖北十堰·中考真题）
假设你叫李华，即将从初中毕业。请你根据下面表格中的信息给校长写一封信，谈谈你对学校的一些看法。
优点
不足
优秀的老师
课外活动少
友好的同学
休息时间短
美丽的校园
……
你的建议……

提示词：schoolyard校园
要求：1.短文应涵盖上述所有内容，可适当发挥。
2.行文连贯，条理清楚，语句通顺，书写规范。
3.不得在文中出现学校名称和人名。
4.词数80-100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数。
Dear Mr./Ms. Headmaster,I am writing to show my sincere gratitude to you for the progress I have made in the past three years. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mr./Ms. Headmaster,
I am writing to show my sincere gratitude to you for the progress I have made in the past three years. I am writing to tell you some things that have affected our school life.
There are many advantages in our school. We have excellent teachers and friendly classmates. Our schoolyard is beautiful and big. But there are still some problems. First of all, we are faced with endless homework every day. Some students have to stay up very late to deal with it, which makes us have less rest time. Secondly, as we all know, colorful out-of-class activities are of great importance to our healthy growth, but we can hardly spare time to participate in them.
In my opinion, we should have more free time to balance our study and life. We should have more colorful and meaningful activities.
Best wishes.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求根据提示内容，写信给校长谈谈学校的优点与不足，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为四段，首尾两端已给出；第二段介绍学校的优点与不足；第三段给出建议。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。




（二）（2022·湖南衡阳·中考真题）
随着“双减”政策的实施，同学们有更多的课余时间来培养自己的兴趣爱好，把生活过成自己喜欢的样子。亲爱的同学，你想做一个快乐的人吗？
请你以“How to Be a Happy Student”为题，写一篇英语短文。
要求：(1)根据右边的图文信息，选择至少两个方面的内容行文，可适当发挥；
(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名等个人信息；
(3)字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，条理清楚；
(4)词数不少于80。

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【答案】例文
How to Be a Happy Student
Everyone wants to be happy. As a student, what can we do to be happy? Here is my advice.
It’s necessary for us to have learning goals. The goals can make us be clear about what to do every day and live a busy and meaningful life. To be healthy is to be happy. So remember to have good life habits and do more exercise. We can do some sports, such as running or playing basketball. Also, we should be ready to help others. When we help those in trouble, we can get much happiness. Besides, the most important for us is to stay in a good mood. If we are in good spirits, we can study better. We should have a positive attitude and be ready to help others.
I believe if we do so, we can have a happy life.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“How to Be a Happy Student”为题，结合图文信息进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段从健康，爱好，情绪和习惯几方面进行阐述；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。



（三）（2022·湖南怀化·中考真题）
国家提出将“劳动教育（labor education）”纳入中小学国家课程方案，请结合自身的劳动经历，谈谈你对劳动教育的看法。内容包括：
1. 你对劳动教育的看法
be good for health;
relax from the hard study…
2. 你自身的劳动经历及感受
at home: do the dishes; sweep the floor…
at school: clean the classroom; water flowers…
3. 你对劳动教育课程的建议
offer different kinds of labor classes;
hold competitions about labor skills…

要求:
1. 文中请勿使用真实人名、校名和地名；
2. 包含以上表格内所有信息，可适当发挥；
3. 词数：80词左右；文章开头已给出，但不计入总词数。It’s reported that labor education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China. I think___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
It’s reported that labor education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China. I think it’s necessary. Because it is good for our health. We can relax from the hard study by doing labor.
I usually do labor at home such as doing the dishes, sweeping the floor and taking out the rubbish. At school I often clean the classroom and water flowers. I can not only keep healthy, but also develop good habits from it.
As for how to run the course in our school. I have some ideas. The school can offer different kinds of labor classes to teach us how to do the cleaning and grow plants. What’s more, the school can also hold competitions about the labor skills to see who is the best. Such activities make our school life more colorful and meaningful.
I am looking forward to taking the course in the new term. I believe I will do well in it.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“劳动教育”写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。分为三段式：第一段介绍劳动对我们的好处；第二段介绍自己在家里和在学校的劳动经历；最后一段提出对劳动教育课程的建议。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。


（四）（2022·湖南岳阳·中考真题）
某英语网站开展关于“How to Improve Myself”的征稿活动，倡导同学们提升自我，努力成为“终生运动者，责任担当者，问题解决者，优雅生活者”，请根据以下图示内容积极投稿。

要求：
1.词数80~100；
2.请根据以上提示信息，结合实际情况叙述，可适当发挥；
3.文稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名；
4.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。
How to Improve Myself
Life is really a long lesson, so I have to improve myself.
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【答案】例文：
How to Improve Myself
Life is really a long lesson, so I have to improve myself.
First, I need to exercise one hour every day. It is bad to stay at home and play games for a long time. Second, I should be responsible for myself and my family. I should be independent instead of depending on my parents too often. Third, in face of the problems, I have to take up the challenges and work them out rather than run away from them. Next, I will develop my interest in many things, such as playing basketball, and knitting, instead of being interested in nothing. Last but not least, I will communicate with others and be a good team player.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于议论文写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据题目要求讲述运动，责任担当，问题解决和兴趣爱好方面提升自己的方法。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主，讲述提升自己的方法，要叙述完整，条理清晰。


（五）（2022·江苏苏州·中考真题）
《苏州日报》英文专刊以“Practice makes perfect”为题向中学生开展征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 你对该谚语的理解；
2. 你生活中的一个事例（例如：运动、乐器、家务、学习等方面）；
3. 你的感悟，
注意：1. 词数100，短文开头已给出，不计人总词数；
2. 内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Practice makes perfect
Have you heard of the saying “practice makes perfect”? I mean ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Practice makes perfect
Have you heard of the saying “practice makes perfect”? I mean that we should practice unfamiliar things again and again. We’ll be able to perform it perfectly.
The practice of learning English is a good example. We are not living in an English speaking country. So, in order to learn it well, we need extra practice, such as reading English books, going to English corners, or communicating with foreigners. You can’t master English just by sitting at your desk. As another example, if we want to be skilled in using the computer, we also need to practice using it. Some children become little experts in computer, just because they play with it everyday. On the contrary, if we just stick to books, we will still feel confused when using computers. Judging from the evidence offered, we might safely draw the conclusion that practice makes perfect.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“熟能生巧”这句谚语展开描述。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称第一人称为主。分为两段式：第一段引出主题，介绍自己对这句谚语的理解；第二段从学习英语以及学习使用电脑这两个方面，解读这句谚语。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。


（六）（2022·江西·中考真题）
学校决定开展向航天女英雄王亚平学习的英文演讲活动，请你按下面表格要求写一篇演讲稿。先简单介绍王亚平的个人信息，再谈谈你从本卷完形填空B篇中感受到的她的优秀品质（personality），最后说说你打算如何向她学习。
写作要点
具体内容
1. Personal information
●Age: 42
●Birthplace: a small village in Shandong Province
●Hobby: sports
2. Personality
根据完形填空B篇概括（不得照搬原文）
3. Your plans
①________
②________
…

要求：
1.短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3.词数80—120，短文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Hello, everyone! It’s my honor to introduce an astronaut hero — Wang Yaping. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you!
【答案】例文：
Hello, everyone! It’s my honor to introduce an astronaut hero — Wang Yaping. Wang is a 2-year-old woman born in a small village in Shandong Province. She likes playing sports very much.
Wang Yaping is the first female astronaut who performed spacewalk by Shenzhou XIII. She deserves our highest respect for her persistence in hard training. She loves her work and never gives up.
To learn from Wang Yaping, I am going to reflect on our weak points and work hard to do better. I’m going to overcome the difficulties I meet just as Wang did. Hard work can pay off.
Thank you!

【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：题目要求介绍王亚平的个人信息并结合本卷完形填空B篇中的内容谈谈她的优秀品质，在最后讲打算如何向她学习。
2.写作指导：写作时要结合一、三人称，时态结合一般现在时与一般将来时。演讲稿可分为四段式：第一段介绍王亚平的个人信息；第二段谈其优秀品质；第三段讲自己的计划；最后一段收尾，感谢大家的聆听。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。


（七）（2022·山西·中考真题）
有效的课后作业能激发学生的学习兴趣，丰富学习经历，提升综合素养，并在知识与生活之间架起一座桥梁。某校为减轻学生的负担，改进作业布置的方式，针对“你最喜欢的一种英语课后作业类型”，对1267名学生进行了问卷调查，下图是相关的统计结果。
Students’ Favorite Kinds of English Homework

假如你是该校的学生，请你根据以上图表信息，用两段话写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1.简要说明图表内容；
2.从图表中选出一种你最喜欢的作业类型，结合自己的经历，谈谈这种作业的好处。
要求：
1.词数不少于80词，首句已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名；
3.参考词汇仅供参考。
WORD BANK
arouse interest       微发兴趣
enrich experiences       丰富经历
promote competence       提升素养

A possible version:A school did a survey among 1,267 students about their favorite kinds of English homework. Here are the results. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】A possible version:
A school did a survey among 1,267 students about their favorite kinds of English homework. Here are the results. 42% of the students like listening and speaking homework best, and 29% enjoy reading and writing. The percentage of the students who like the hands-on project is 22% and 7% choose other kinds of homework.
As for me, I like the hands-on project best because it connects what I’ve learnt with real life in an interesting way. Three weeks ago, we were asked to make an English poster about Dragon Boat Festival. Then I collected lots of information on the festival. Finally, not only did I finish the task perfectly, but also I got a deeper understanding of our colorful culture. In my opinion, it’s the hands-on project that arouses my interest in English and enriches my experiences in learning.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容，介绍问卷的调查结果，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为两段，第一段介绍调查结果；第二段介绍自己最喜欢的作业类型和这种作业的好处。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。



（八）（2022·陕西·中考真题）
学校是个大家庭，这里充满了欢声笑语、爱与温暖。你们学校即将举办以 “School Is a Big Family”为题的英语演讲比赛。请根据下列要求，从结构图的三个方面写一篇英文演讲稿。

参考词汇：
be patient (with), care about, encourage, share, help, understand, love, have fun, ...
要求：
1.可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；
4.词数：不少于70词。(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。)
Good afternoon, everyone!
I am glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is “School Is a Big Family”.
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Thank you for your time!
【答案】例文
Good afternoon, everyone!
I am glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is “School Is a Big Family”.
First, my math teacher is patient with me. She helps me to study math better. Second, my classmates help me a lot. I’m not good at sports. My friend Li Yun helped me with running and I ran faster. Also, I care about my teachers and classmates. One day my English teacher had a cold and I told her to drink more hot water. She felt warm and thanked me.
I believe if we understand and help each other, our school will be a better place.
Thank you for your time!
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文以“School Is a Big Family”为题，并结合提示内容写一篇演讲稿，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段重点描述同学和老师对我的帮助，以及我对他人的帮助；第三段进行总结。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。


（九）（2022·四川成都·中考真题）
越来越多的人将阅读作为一种生活习惯。假如你是李欣，你校校园电视台英语栏目正在征集以阅读为主题的视频，请根据以下图示撰写视频文稿。

1. ___ways___        2. ___family___
注意：
1. 请先在答题卡上填写图示中空格（一空一词）；
2. 须全面反映图文信息；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 词数80—100，开头已给出，且不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Xin. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Xin. More and more people have a reading habit. So do I. I like reading very much. Because I think it can open up a new world for me. I can also learn more from it.
I like reading books in the school library. There are different kinds of books in it. When travelling, I enjoy reading on the plane to kill time. Now we not only read paper books, but also read e-books. I prefer to read paper books. Because spending too much time on screen is bad for my eyes. Our family all like reading books, especially my grandfather. He likes reading books about travelling. Among the books, I like history books best. Because I can learn more about Chinese culture. I always read books at least half an hour before bedtime.
So if you like reading, take action from now on.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。围绕“阅读”写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用第一人称和第三人称，时态采用一般现在时。分为三段式：第一段讲述阅读的重要性；第二段介绍自己的阅读习惯；最后一段呼吁人们现在就开始阅读。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。


（十）（2022·四川广元·中考真题）
理想（ideal）是人生导航的灯塔，它指引我们成为对祖国和社会有用的人。近来，某英文报刊将举行以“如何做一名有理想的时代新人”为主题的征文活动。请你结合以下提示要点和自己的认识，写一篇英文稿件。
写作要点：
1. 你的理想是什么？
2. 为什么有这样的理想？（不少于两点理由）
3. 你打算怎样实现自己的理想？（不少于两点做法）
写作要求：
1. 文中须包含以上要点：
2. 文中不能提及本人的真实姓名、地名和校名：
3. 词数80左右，标题和开头语已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：ideal adj. & n. 理想的：理想
My Ideal
In the new times it’s very important for us to be a middle school student with an ideal. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】                                                                                                                         
My Ideal
In the new times it’s very important for us to be a middle school student with an ideal.
I wish to be an English teacher when I grow up. First, I like English. I want to use it often in my daily life. Secondly, I like working with students and enjoy being asked questions and answering them. Thirdly, I’m good at English. Now what I should do is to study hard and get high marks in English test, and try to practice speaking English as much as possible. Only in this way can I realize my dream of being an English teacher one day.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，根据写作要点提示，写一篇作文关于如何做一名有理想的时代新人。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时行文；人称以第一人称为主。写作时从三个方面，先介绍自己的理想，其次介绍原因，最后介绍如何实现自己的理想。文章要保持语句通顺，无单词语法错误。



（十一）（2022·云南昆明·中考真题）
Me after the “double reduction” policy
“双减”政策(the “double reduction” policy)实施之后，同学们有了更多可自由支配的时间。同时，大部分学校围绕文娱、体育、户外等主题开展了丰富多彩的活动，给大家的生活增添了生机与活力。某英文网站正面向全市中学生开展以”双减”为主题的征文活动，请用所给题目写一篇英语短文投稿，讲述一下”双减”后你的变化及感受。
要求：1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
3. 书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。
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【答案】例文：
Dear Editor,
I’m a middle school student. Since the “double reduction” policy was released, my life has changed a lot.
I used to do my homework till midnight and have no time for my hobbies. At the same time, I always attended many training courses at weekends. So I had less time for exercise and felt very tired all the time.
However, with the support of the “double reduction” policy, though I go home late, I have more interesting activities I like. I feel very excited when I join in these activities. Moreover, I can have more time to communicate with my parents because I have little homework after school. I have more time to develop my hobbies.
I think the “double reduction” policy is very good. I believe I can study happily and have fun at school because of the “double reduction” policy.
                                                                                                    Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。题目要求根据提示要点，介绍“双减”之后自己的变化及感受等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。



（十二）（2022·四川乐山·中考真题）
在中国共产主义青年团成立100周年之际，你校将开展“如何成为一名优秀学生”的征文活动。为此，请你给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，并倡议越来越多的同学入团。内容包括：
1.爱国爱家，了解团史；
2.与人和睦相处，乐于助人；
3.努力学习，养成良好习惯；
4.锻炼身体，保持健康。
注意：
1.词数80词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校等信息。
4.参考词汇：the Communist Youth League of China ( CYLC ) 中国共产主义青年团；anniversary n.周年纪念日
This year is the 100th anniversary of the founding of the Communist Youth League of China. Our school will hold an activity about how to be an excellent student. I think we should do the following things.
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【答案】参考范文
This year is the 100th anniversary of the founding of the Communist Youth League of China. Our school will hold an activity about how to be an excellent student. I think we should do the following things.
First of all, it’s important to love our country and family. Thanks to them, we can live a happy life. Learning about the history of the Communist Youth League of China is necessary for us. Secondly, we should get on well with our teachers and classmates. Especially, when people are in trouble, we should be ready to help them. In order to achieve our Chinese Dream, we should try our best to study hard and get good habits. Finally, we should keep healthy by exercising.
In a word, if we are strong, our country will be strong. So I hope more and more junior school students will join the Communist Youth League of China.
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读：题目要求写一篇短文，倡议同学加入中国共产主义青年团；要求包含所有提示内容。
2. 写作指导：此作文时态以一般现在时为主；采用第一人称口吻；可采用3段落格式，第一段：文章已给出；第二段：阐述从4个方面（团史、与人相处、学习以及健康）倡议同学们入团；第三段：总结全文。




【2021年】

A
（2021·青海中考真题）
假如你是李磊，你的笔友Anna给你发了电子邮件诉说她的烦恼，请根据邮件内容进行回复。
要求：
1.逻辑清晰，内容完整，书写规范。
2.词数100左右。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。
Dear Li Lei,
My sister practices playing the violin in an after-school class, so my parents asked me to go and learn it too. But I’m just not a music girl. You know, I’m interested in sports and I want to choose what I like. Now, I’m so upset. What should I do?
Anna
Dear Anna,
I understand your feeling. Here is what I think. __________________________________________________
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I hope what I said is helpful to you.
Li Lei
【答案】

Dear Anna,
I understand your feeling. Here is what I think. Maybe your parents won’t know how you feel if you don’t talk to them about it. Why not honestly and kindly let them know music and you are never a good match, but sports and you are made for each other? Meanwhile, you’d better tell them you have had a clear life goal and are old enough to make your own decisions. Further-more, try to get a proper chance to prove that you are talented in sports. Only then will they know you better and let you choose what you love to do. I’m sure your parents will be up for helping you explore different options.
I hope what I said is helpful to you.
Li Lei
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇对电子邮件的回复。根据Anna信中所提到的烦恼，进行回复。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时。在回信中针对Anna提到的烦恼，给出自己合理性的建议，让父母知道自己并不擅长音乐，明确告知父母自己的目标是什么，这样有效地沟通会让父母理解和支持的。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。
B
（2021·山西中考真题）

在我们成长的过程中，会遇到各种各样的选择，选择读一本喜欢的书；选择做感兴趣的事；选择与志趣相投的人交朋友……在选择面前，如何客观、理性，并且遵从自己内心的感受，这是我们应有的处事态度。
请根据以上内容，结合图片信息，写一篇英语短文。
内容包括：
1.从以上提示中选择某个方面，谈谈你对这个选择的观点；
2.围绕以上观点，描述你曾经历过的一件事；
3.这件事带给你的思考。要求：
4.词数不少于 80 词；
5.提示词会仅供参考；
6.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
Word BANK
objective adi.客观的
reasonable adj.理性的
attitude n.态度

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【答案】
There is no denying that it is important for us to make a reasonable choice in life. I am a volleyball fan so I choose to join the school volleyball club, which is beneficial to my growth.
In my childhood, I fell in love with volleyball. Then when I was in Grade 8, I was eager to be a member of the school volleyball club. However, my parents wanted me to focus time and energy on schoolwork. I had a long talk with them calmly. After that, I trained hard with persistence in the club and learned what the true meaning of the teamwork was. Meanwhile, I reviewed my schoolwork as long as I finished training. To my joy, I got a satisfying result in the test. All this showed that my choice was right.
Needless to say, no matter what the choice is, if it is reasonable, just make it to follow your heart. Only in this way can it bring out the best in you.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。描述一件自己感兴趣的事，是如何遵从自己内心的感受，并坚持下来的短文。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时和一般过去时。描述过去的事情要用一般过去时。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段描述自己的经历；第三段谈谈这件事带来的思考。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。
C
（2021·湖南长沙市·中考真题）
最近, 你班召开了一次以“What Are Good Parents Like?”为主题的班会。请你综合以下同学的观点，并发表你自己的看法，写一篇短文，向学校校刊投稿。
要求：
(1) 80词左右（标题和开头已给出, 不计入总词数）；
(2)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。

Sam
Good parents are understanding. They never push us too hard when we get poor grades.
My parents are supportive. They always bring out the best in me.

Bob

Amy
Good parents are like stars in the sky. Sometimes we can’t see them, but they are always there.
What Are Good Parents Like?
Recently we have had a lively discussion about what good parents are like. Different students have different ideas.________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
What Are Good Parents Like?
Recently we have had a lively discussion about what good parents are like. Different students have different ideas. Sam thinks good parents are understanding. They never push us too hard when we get poor grades. Bob says good parents always bring out the best in us. Amy agrees that good parents are like stars in the sky. Sometimes we can’t see them, but they are always there.
In my opinion, good parents should be good teachers as well as good friends of us. They should also set good examples for us.
【详解】
1.题干解读：文章要求以“What Are Good Parents Like?”为题写一篇作文，谈谈好父母是什么样的，综合已给出的同学们的观点并发表自己的观点，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称和第一人称相结合，使用一般现在时讲述大家的观点，要做到概括全面、语句通顺，无单词拼写和语法错误。
D
（2021·湖北随州市·中考真题）
繁重的课业负担不利于学生的身心健康与全面发展，为树立健康第一的教育理念，你校建议学生每天课后采取适当方式放松自己。假设你是九（1）班的一名学生，最近你对班上同学课后放松方式进行调查。请根据以下表格提供的信息和要求，用英文写一篇短文。
对象
九（1）班
放松方式
1. 看电视（20 人）
2. 玩电脑游戏或上网聊天（25 人）
3. 阅读各种书籍（15 人）
4. 进行体育锻炼（10 人）
5. 没有时间放松（11 人）
你的观点
哪一种（些）放松方式是适当的？为什么？
写作要求∶
1. 文章必须包括表格中所有内容要点， 可适当发挥以使行文连贯；
2. 词数∶80 词左右；（文章的开头已给出, 不计入总词数）
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
参考词汇∶聊天 chat
I’m a student of Class 1, Grade 9. Recently, I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class. ___________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
I’m a student of Class 1, Grade 9. Recently, I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class.
Different students have different ways to relax after class. Among them, twenty students like watching TV, twenty-five students often play computer games or chat online, fifteen students like reading all kinds of books, ten students often do sports and eleven students don’t have time to relax.
I think reading and doing sports are good for us， because we can improve ourselves by reading and doing sports can keep us healthy.
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目要求根据表格所提供的信息介绍一下学生课后所采取的放松方式，并发表自己的观点，可适当发挥让文章更加连贯。
2.写作指导：本文应采用第一人称和第三人称来书写，时态使用一般现在时，注意主谓一致。写作时，可根据表格内容依次介绍学生进行放松的方式，最后发表自己的观点，谈谈哪种方式是好的，以及原因。
E
（2021·浙江绍兴市·中考真题）
上个月，你们班为Children’s Home的孩子们组织了一次爱心义卖活动。请根据下表信息用英语写一篇短文，向某英语网站投稿，谈谈本次活动和你的体会。
Things you did
Things you’ve learned
hand out notices
make things like …
sell the things
give away the money
develop life skills
…
注意：
（1）短文必须包括上表所有信息，可适当增加细节；
（2）你的体会至少两条；
（3）词数：80—100；
（4）短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：义卖活动 charity sale
短文首句：Last month, our class had a charity sale.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
Last month, our class had a charity sale. Two days before the sale, we handed out notices to make our sale known by others. Then we made different things like food and toys. It was so much fun! When everything was ready, we started to sell the things. To our surprise, all the things were sold out in a short time! At last, we gave away the money we made to Children’s Home.
I think it was a meaningful experience. Making things helps develop our life skills. Meanwhile, we can learn how to communicate with others well. Last but not least, helping people makes us happy.
【详解】
1.题干解读：题目要求根据表格信息写短文，谈谈班上组织的爱心义卖活动及自己的感受。要包含所有要点，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主，以一般过去时介绍班上的爱心义卖活动，以一般现在时为主表达自己的感受。要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。
F
（2021·安徽中考真题）
假定你是李华，曾用攒下来的零花钱做了一件有意义的事并受到家人表扬。请你用英语写一篇短文向校英文报投稿。内容包括：
1.事情经过；
2.个人感悟。
注意：
1.词数80~100；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4.短文题目已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：pocket money (n.零花钱); meaningful (adj.有意义的)
Once I Was Praised
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Once I Was Praised
Once I was praised because I did something meaningful with my pocket money.
One day, I happened to know some students in a school were hungry for knowledge but they didn’t have enough books. I decided to offer my help. With all the pocket money I saved, I bought some books online, and gave them away to the school. My parents were very happy and praised me when they heard about it. They said I did a meaningful thing.
I believe that every little bit helps. I will continue to do what I can to help others.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Once I Was Praised”为题，结合提示进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态以一般过去时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍事情经过；第三段描述个人感悟。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
G
（2021·浙江湖州市·中考真题）
假定你是李雷。某英语杂志正在举办征文活动，请根据广告中的信息写一篇短文，用于投稿。文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；词数：80—100。
ARTICLES WANTED!
Being Healthy
Which do you think is more important, doing exercise or eating healthy food?
What do you do to stay healthy? Tell us what you think!

Write an article answering these questions and we will publish the best ones in our magazine.

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【答案】
People are paying more and more attention to staying healthy. Ways such as doing exercise, eating healthy food etc. help a lot. But I think doing exercise is more important.
For me, I used to sit at the desk for too long and seldom go outside doing some sports. As a result, I put on 5 kilos just in a year and I felt tired easily. But when I tried to take up running after school, I began to feel energetic and healthier.
Since then, I have kept the habit of taking exercise. And I find it does good to both the mind and the body.
例如2：
People may have different ways to keep healthy, such as doing exercise, eating healthy food, etc. I think eating healthily is more important.
At school, we have sports time every day, so I think we’ve got enough exercise. However, we usually have lunch hurriedly at school. So eating healthily at home is important for us. Luckily, we can enjoy delicious and healthy food cooked by our parents which also makes us feel good. As for me, I often make some vegetable salad for breakfast or even cook something I like at weekends.
I think I will eat healthily to stay strong and happy.
【详解】
1.题干解读：题目要求根据征文广告信息写短文，介绍做运动或吃健康的食物哪个更重要，告诉大家你的想法，及你如何保持健康。
2.写作指导：写作时要引出话题后先对做运动或吃健康食物中做出选择，给出自己的观点，可结合自身经历来写一些如何保持健康。人称以第一人称为主，时态根据具体的语境做出选择。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
H
（2021·四川南充市·中考真题）
某英语杂志社以“我劳动，我快乐”为主题向中学生开展征文活动。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
要点：
(1)分享你最难忘的劳动经历；
(2)谈谈你的劳动感受；
(3)表达你的观点并发出倡议。
要求：
1. 必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4. 词数100左右。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
Last weekend, I got up early and cooked noodles for my parents. First, I boiled some water. Then I put some noodles into the pot. About five or six minutes later, I placed them in the bowls and added some salt and oil. When my parents got up, they were surprised and praised me with a big smile.
It was the first time for me to cook for them. A little bit tired but happy, I felt proud of myself because I could take care of my parents. From this unforgettable experience, I’ve also got a deeper understanding of my parents.
I think it’s our duty to share some housework. Besides, doing some hard housework is a kind of physical exercise. As teenagers, we should take action to help around the house!
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“我劳动，我快乐”为主题，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态综合使用一般过去时和一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段分享最难忘的劳动经历；第二段谈谈劳动感受；第三段表达观点并发出倡议。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
I
（2021·四川成都市·中考真题）
你校英文校刊就“过度养育”（Overparenting）这一现象开辟专栏，展开讨论。请以“Overparenting: Yes or No”为题写一篇短文，向该栏目投稿。

要求：
1. 简述该现象；
2. 陈述图表中不同观点及理由；
3. 表述你的观点及两点理由（须与图中不同）。
注意：
1. 请先在答题卡上填写表中空格；
2. 须全面反映图表信息，但不能完全照抄；
3. 文中不能出现真实的学校和姓名；
4. 词数：100 左右。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
Overparenting: Yes or No
Overparenting is more and more popular nowadays. Some parents always do everything for their children because they think children are busy with their schoolwork. While other parents prefer letting their children do things by themselves and solve problems on their own.
As for children, some of them think parents’ help is good for them and they can get good results with parents’ help. But others think they also lose chances to challenge themselves.
In my opinion, I think parents should give their children more chances to challenge themselves and they should learn more knowledge not only in study but also in life to improve themselves. Then, they can take good care of themselves and have the courage and confidence to face the difficulties in the future.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Overparenting: Yes or No”为题，结合图片和提示要点进行写作。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第三和第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段介绍家长对于“过度养育”的观点；第二段介绍孩子对于“过度养育”的观点；第三段表明自己的观点。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
J
（2021·四川遂宁市·中考真题）
今年3月全国政协会议期间，江苏锡山唐江澎校长的一席话发人深思∶教育应该培养终身运动者、责任担当者、问题解决者和优雅生活者。某英文网站以“How to Be a Better Person”为话题开展征文活动，请从中学生的角度写一篇80词左右的短文谈谈你的做法。
要点提示∶
1.健康生活（食物、运动、睡眠……）；
2.不怕挑战（尽力解决学习、生活中的问题……）；
3.对人友善（乐于助人、与人和睦相处……）；
4.牢记责任（照顾父母，帮助弱者……）。
注意∶
1.文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2.文章必须包含所给要点提示，要求语句通顺，行文连贯。
3.不可逐词翻译，可适当发挥。
4.文章中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
提示词∶ responsibility 职责
How to Be a Better Person
As a middle school student. I quite agree with Mr. Tang’s opinions. To be a better person. I think I should do the following things____________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
How to Be a Better Person
As a middle school student, I quite agree with Mr. Tang’s opinions. To be a better person, I think I should do the following things.
First of all, we should have a healthy life. We should eat well, take more exercise and have enough sleep. Second, we should not be afraid of challenges. We must try our best to solve the problems in our study and life. Third, we should be kind and be ready to help others. We should get on well with others. Finally, we should keep the responsibilities in mind. We should take care of parents and help the weak.
【详解】
1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语和提示要点，从不同的方面描写，写出具体应该如何做，才能成为更好的人，可以适当的发挥。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，用第一人称和其他人称相结合来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语；提出建议多用情态动词should，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。
K
（2021·天津中考真题）
假如你是某中学学生李华, 最近你班发生了一件令人感动的事情。请根据以下提示, 给你的英国好友 Tom 写一封信, 与他分享你的感动。
（1）两周前同学王红伤了左腿。
（2）王红上下楼很困难, 但想来。
（3）校长知道后, 决定将你班从四楼搬到一楼。
（4）你们帮助王红（如买午饭等）。
（5）你认为……
要求：
（1）词数： 80~100 个。
（2）开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全, 行文连贯, 可适当发挥。
Dear Tom,
How are you? I have a moving story to tell you. __________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Please tell me something interesting about you and your classmates.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Tom,
How are you? I have a moving story to tell you.
Wang Hong is my classmate. She hurt her left leg in an accident two weeks ago. It was difficult for Wang Hong to go up and down the stairs, but she wanted to come to school. The headmaster decided to move my classroom from the fourth floor to the first floor after he knew it. Wang Hong is very grateful to the headmaster. As her classmates, we should also help her. Some helped her buy lunch, others helped him to clean up. She is happy. I think students should help each other and make progress together.
Please tell me something interesting about you and your classmates.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，要求根据所给的汉语提示，以李华的名义想Tom写一封信谈谈最近你班发生的令人感动的事情，注意要点齐全，写作时要按信的格式来写。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第三和第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时；在写作时应承接短文开头，根据汉语提示的内容，叙述王红同学受伤后，校长和同学对她的帮助，并写作自己的感受。在叙述内容时，力求语言正确，内容完整，保证行文连贯。
L
（2021·四川德阳市·中考真题）
团队合作（teamwork）很重要，请用英语写一篇关于团队合作的演讲稿，在班会上发言。
内容包括：1.团队合作非常重要，利于更好更快地完成工作；
2.团队合作既能节约时间和精力，又能相互学习；
3.学习时，进行合作，如：小组合作完成任务；
4.运动时，合作不可少，如：打篮球、踢足球等；
5.多合作，我们班就会更好。
注意：1. 词数80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连续；
3. 不能出现自己的真实信息。
参考词汇：与……合作cooperate with...
Good morning, everyone! My topic today is “Teamwork” __________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for your listening!
【答案】
Good morning, everyone! My topic today is “Teamwork”.
Teamwork is important for everyone. It has many advantages. It can help us finish work better and faster. It can not only save a lot of time and energy, but also learn from each other. When we study, we can cooperate with each other, such as finishing tasks in a group. When we do sports, teamwork is necessary, such as playing basketball and playing football. More cooperation, our class will be better.
Let’s do it right now. Thanks for your listening!
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。围绕“团队合作”来写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时。根据所给的提示要点，一一进行介绍。第一段引出主题；第二段讲述团队合作的重要性；第三段呼吁同学们现在行动起来。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。
M
（2021·云南中考真题）
Doing Housework Makes Me __________
提示：家务是生活中的一部分，我们作为一名家庭成员，应该学会分担家务。请以“Doing Housework Makes Me __________ ”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一次你做家务的经历，并谈谈你的体会。
要求：
1. 请先将题目补全后，再作答；
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
4. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Doing Housework Makes Me Happy
Doing housework is part of our life. It’s necessary to share housework with other family members. I’d like to tell you about one of my experiences.
Last Mother’s Day I made a special dinner for my mom. It didn’t work as well as I thought. I hurt my fingers while cutting carrots, and I forgot to put salt into the dishes. When my mom came back home, she was happy to taste them. Then she hugged me and said, “Good girl!”
From this experience, I’ve learned doing housework can not only help me grow up but also bring happiness to my family.
【详解】
1.题目解读：本文是一篇话题作文，要求补全标题，叙述一次做家务的经历，谈谈体会。注意叙述的合理性。
2.写作指导：本文采用第一人称书写，介绍经历时，用一般过去时。可分为三段，第一段大体介绍做家务的影响；第二段介绍做家务的经历，第三段介绍体会。注意上下文的衔接通顺，注意连词和从句的使用。

【2020年】
2020年中考真题英语分项汇编
专题21 书面表达
考点1 观点看法类
（一）【2020 •北京市】

40.“不积跬步，无以至千里。”积累，有助于我们达成目标，实现梦想。
某英文网站正在开展以“积累”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你在积累知识方面做过什么，有什么收获。
提示词语：accumulate（积累）, read, keep, make progress
提示问题：●What did you do to accumulate knowledge?
●What have you learned from doing so?
Without accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本题属于材料作文，题目的开头已给出。要求根据提示词语和提示问题来写一篇短文，谈谈你在积累知识方面做过什么，有什么收获。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
【参考范文】
Without accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything. As for me, I have taken lots of measures to accumulate knowledge. First of all, I attentively listened to the teachers, parents, and the others who could provide me with much knowledge, considering that it was one of the most effective ways to enrich myself. In the second place, I used to observe something carefully and took note at the same time so that I would not miss anything important. Last but not least, when having spare time, I chose to read various books and reviewed what I had gained regularly.
In a word, I have learned a lot during the process of accumulating knowledge. Just as an old saying goes, Rome was not built in one day. That is to say, one cannot succeed without persistent accumulation. So I have learned that only by gaining knowledge step by step can we achieve our goal and realize our dream. In the future, I will continue to keep accumulating knowledge and make greater progress.
【名师点评】
1.例文点评：这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，用上了所给提示词并回答了“你是如何积累知识的？”和“你从中学到了什么？”这两个问题。例文简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。
2. 高分亮点：
单词和短语：as for；take lots of measures to do sth.；first of all；provide sb. with sth.；used to do sth.；at the same time；last but not least；in a word；step by step；make progress。
句型：who引导的限制性定语从句；that引导的宾语从句；so that引导的目的状语从句；when引导的时间状语从句；what引导的宾语从句；以only开头的倒装句。
（二）【2020 •贵州省安顺市】
81.某英语网站正在开展关于良好生活习惯的征文大赛，请以“Good Living Habits Make Me ________”为题，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文参加此次大赛。
要求如下：
1.补全标题；
2.征文应包含第一节所有信息（1. What’s your favorite food? 2. How often do you exercise? 3. How many hours do you sleep every night? 4. How do you relax yourself in your daily life? 5. What do you think of your living habits?）；
3.重点谈谈良好的生活习惯对你的积极影响和作用；
4.征文中不得出现考生真实的个人信息。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本题为话题作文，要求补充完题目“Good Living Habits Make Me ________”后写一篇短文。文章时态用现在时或过去时，人称用第一人称。
【参考范文】
Good Living Habits Make Me Healthier
Good living habits are important in our lives. They influence us in many ways. I think good living habits make me healthier.
I used to prefer meat to fruit or vegetables. But now I try all kinds of food. What’s more, I like sports, and I exercise for 30 minutes every day. Everyone needs sleep. I have eight to ten hours’ sleep at night. With enough sleep at night, I can be ready for school activities. In spare time I’d like to do some reading. It makes me feel relaxed.
I think my living habits are pretty healthy. Developing good living habits was quite difficult for me at the beginning, but now I am used to it and enjoy it. I look much stronger than before. I think it is good living habits that make me healthier and healthier.
【名师点评】
1.例文点评：例文分三段，第一段用于引出Good Living Habits Make Me Healthier这一话题，第二段则根据第一节的五个要点对自己的良好生活习惯进行了描述，第三段则对自己的生活习惯进行了评价并肯定了健康生活习惯给自己带来的积极影响。例文层次分明，思路清晰，叙述流畅，文中用了许多高分句型及短语，为文章增色不少。
2.高分亮点：
短语：used to do，prefer … to …，all kinds of，what’s more，be ready for，at the beginning。
句型：
（1）What’s more, I like sports, and I exercise for 30 minutes every day.（and连接的并列句）
（2）I think good living habits make me healthier.（宾语从句）
（3）Developing good living habits was quite difficult for me at the beginning, but now I am used to it and enjoy it.（动名词作主语）

（三）【2020 •贵州省黔东南州】
86.请将文章用0. 5 毫米黑色签字笔写在答题卡相应的位置上。
安全对于每个人来说都很重要。作为中学生, 我们可能遇到哪些安全问题?该怎样处理呢?校团委决定组织一次安全教育主题班会, 请根据以下要点提示, 以How to Keep Safe为题写一篇英文发言稿。
中学生安全问题及对策
一、交通安全:遵守交通规则。
二、食品安全:注意饮食安全。
三、活动安全:上下楼梯靠右行;体育锻炼要小心:不允许私自下河游泳。
四、交友安全:注意网络交友安全。
遇险建议
遇到危险要保持冷静, 保证自身安全, 然后及时报警或向家长、老师求助。

写作要求:
1. 结构完整, 要点齐全, 可适当发挥;
2. 表达通顺, 语言规范, 书写清晰;
3. 文中不能出现任何真实的人名、校名等信息;
4. 词数80左右。文章的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
How to Keep Safe
Hello, everyone. Safety is very important for us. We should learn to protect ourselves. Here are some suggestions about how to keep safe. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
In a word, as students, we must always keep safety in mind and value our lives.
【写作思路】
本文是一篇话题作文。以“如何保持安全”为题展开描述，文中阐述中学生的安全问题及对策，以及遇险的建议。
【参考范文】

How to Keep Safe
Hello, everyone. Safety is very important for us. We should learn to protect ourselves. Here are some suggestions about how to keep safe.
Firstly, we must follow the traffic rules. Secondly, we should pay attention to the food safety. Be sure not to eat too much junk food. Thirdly, when we go upstairs or downstairs, we should keep to the right. Be careful while doing sports. Remember not to swim in the river alone. What's more, we'd better not make friends online. We must stay away from dangerous people around.
If we get into trouble, we must keep calm and safe first and then call the police, the teachers or parents for help.
In a word, as students, we must always keep safety in mind and value our lives.
【名师点评】
1.例文点评：本文采用的是第一人称，时态采用的一般现在时。准确运用事态，并保持主谓一致。句子通顺，逻辑性强。
2.高分亮点：
短语：pay attention to注意；too much太多；what’s more而且；had better(not) do sth最好（不）做某事；in a word总之。
句子：Here are some suggestions about how to keep safe用的是倒装句；Be sure not to eat too much junk food用的是祈使句；when we go upstairs or downstairs, we should keep to the right中when引导的是时间状语从句。
（四）【2020 •贵州省铜仁市】

101.全球新冠疫情依然严峻，而我国的疫情防控成就令人瞩目，全国万众一心，团结抗疫的画面令我们永生难忘。你的美国笔友Michael想了解你对此的所见所闻和所思所想。请你根据下面的提示内容，回一封邮件。
提示：
（所见所闻）我们政府采取了很多措施，执行（carry out）隔离（quarantine）治疗（ reatment）的政策（policy）；兴建（build）许多特殊的（special）医院；许多优秀的（excellent）医护人员自愿（volunteer）去帮助灾区（disaster areas）.
（所思所想）作学生，我们要保护好自己，比如……（至少两点）；希望全世界人民……。（ work together； save more lives）
要求：
1. 80词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 句子通顺，语意连贯，符合逻辑；
3. 必须包含所有提示内容，但不要逐字逐句翻译，可适当发挥；
4. 务必书写正确规范，卷面整洁。
Dear Michael,
I’m glad to receive your e—mail. Now I’d like to share my opinions with you. Since COVID—19 broke out, our government has taken many measures. First______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
【写作思路】
对于写作题考生需认真审题，全面了解写作要求，理清思路，确定短文体裁、框架结构和写作内容。本文要求就新冠疫情向美国笔友Michael写信介绍自己的所见所闻和所思所想，属于书信类写作。写作时需要注意格式正确，用第一人称进行叙述。
【参考范文】
Dear Michael,
I’m glad to receive your e-mail. Now I’d like to share my opinions with you. Since COVID-19 broke out, our government has taken many measures. First, we have carried out quarantine treatment policy. Second, many special hospitals have been built. Third, many excellent doctors and nurses volunteered to help the people who lived in the disaster areas. As students, we must protect ourselves. For example, keep our home clean and often open the window to keep the fresh air. Try to avoid going outside or going to places where there are many people. Wash your hands as often as possible, especially before meals and after returning from public places. What’s more, we should wear a mask when going out. I
I hope the people all over the world will work together to save more lives.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming

【名师点评】
1.例文点评：本文首先直入主题I’d like to share my opinions with you，然后分别介绍政府的三点防疫举措和个人的防护措施，最后表达希望I hope the people all over the world will work together to save more lives。本文是“总分总”结构，以第一人称为主，用一般现在时、一般过去时和现在完成时三种时态展开陈述；内容充实，结构完整，方法合理，表达流畅，条理清晰，是一篇优秀的习作。
2.高分亮点：
高分短语：would like to do share sth. with sb., as students, stay at home, go out, carry out, volunteer to do, live in, for example, try to do , avoid doing, as often as possible, what’s more, all over the world.
高分句型：
1). Third, many excellent doctors and nurses volunteered to help the people who lived in the disaster areas.（定语从句）
2). For example, keep our home clean and often open the window to keep the fresh air.（并列祈使句结构）
3). I hope the people all over the world will work together to save more lives.（宾语从句）
【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。例文中，First, Second, Third, What’s more等词的运用，增强了本文的条理性。
（五）【2020 •黑龙江龙东地区】
82.本学期，我省中小学采取网上授课的教学方式。有些同学取得很大进步，也有些同学成绩下滑。对此，你有什么看法呢？ 请以“What do you think of learning online? ”为题，谈谈你的切身感受。
提示信息：
1）网络直播课是学校避免疾病传播的一种教学方式：（spread 传播 v.）
2）作业形式丰富多样：（all kinds of）
3）课后可以观看回放：（playback 回放n.）
4）一些同学对自己要求不严格、不认真听讲、不按时完成作业；
5）Wi-Fi不好，导致网课不能顺利进行：（go on well）
……
注意：文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
What do you think of learning online?
At the beginning of this term, we started having online lessons. Some students made great progress, while others found themselves far behind their classmates.
As for me, I think…__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本文要求根据所给信息，以“What do you think of learning online? ”为题，谈谈你的切身感受。首先认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；我们需要用正确的英语把所给出的要点表达出来，然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。

【参考范文】
What do you think of learning online?
At the beginning of this term, we started having online lessons. Some students made great progress, while others found themselves far behind their classmates.
As for me, I think learning online is a teaching method to avoid the spread of disease in schools, and the homework is of various forms. We can record videos and share them with our classmates online.
One of the advantages of online teaching is that the video lesson can be played back after class. It means you can re-read what you don't understand, which is of course very beneficial to students.
However, every coin has two sides. Some students are not strict with themselves. They do not listen carefully or finish their homework on time. If a student is managed by a teacher in class, of course he may be more serious. But if teaching online, the teacher can't see what they are doing, the probability of a student wandering is probably much higher than before.
What’s more, If Wi-Fi is not good, it will cause the online lessons not to go on well.
I think students should communicate with teachers on the network teaching platform. Through communication, students can get answers to questions. Teachers can also understand the students and encourage students to learn.
【名师点评】
1.例文点评：文章在介绍的时候时态用一般现在时，人称用第三人称，文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
2.高分亮点：
短语：share… with；the advantages of；What’s more；communicate with；encourage students to learn.
句型：which引导非限制性定语从句。It means you can re-read what you don't understand, which is of course very beneficial to students.
宾语从句I think students should communicate with teachers on the network teaching platform.
（六）【2020 •山东省德州市】

51.少年智则国智,少年强则国强。根据下图提示写一篇英语短文, 描述作为青少年的你们将如何成长，并说明原因或目的。除了提示中的内容，请你至少再补充一条。
build up our bodies by…;
keep strong and healthy

develop some interests;
for example,…;
make ourselves fully developed
do housework; such as…;
help parents; learn to be independent (独立的)
?


要求：
1、语言通顺, 要点齐全, 意思连贯, 条理清楚, 书写规范;
2、文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;
3、80~100词, 文章开头已给出, 不计入总词数。
As teenagers, we are the future of our homeland. We should develop ourselves fully. But how? Here is my opinion.
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【写作思路】
这篇作文要求我们根据提示并至少再补充一条，写一篇英语短文, 描述青少年将如何成长，并说明原因或目的。在写作时，我们可以列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，根据需要将这些信息进行重新整理和安排，使文章的意思更自然。可以使用一些好的句型和连词，使文章上下文意思连贯。
【参考范文】
As teenagers, we are the future of our homeland. We should develop ourselves fully. But how? Here is my opinion.
Basically, we should build up our bodies by taking some exercise, doing some sports, such as running, swimming, playing basketball and so on. In this way, we can keep ourselves strong and healthy/we will grow up strong and healthy.
What's more, developing some interests is a good way to make ourselves fully developed. We can learn to play the piano, sing songs, dance, collect stamps, draw pictures and so on. As a saying says. "You can never learn too much."
In addition. I think it's our duty to do some housework at home. We should help do some cleaning, water the flowers or walk the dog. Then our parents can live an easier life. Also, by doing this, we can learn to be independent and get ourselves well prepared for the future life.
If we do these things well, we will be able to grow up as a fully developed person.
【名师点评】
1.例文点评：本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
2.高分亮点：
短语：build up；in this way；keep ourselves strong；what's more；in addition；live an easier life。
句型：宾语从句I think it's our duty to do some housework at home.
条件状语从句If we do these things well, we will be able to grow up as a fully developed person.

（七）【2020 •新疆维吾尔自治区(建设兵团)】
76.良好的习惯让人受益终身。如何培养良好的习惯?请根据以下内容提示,以“How To Develop A Good Habit"为题,用英语写一篇短文,可以适当发挥。
要点:
(1)坚持锻炼,不要熬夜,睡眠充足;
(2)多吃水果蔬菜,少吃垃圾食品:
(3)努力学习,广泛阅读:
(4)体貼父母,多做家务;
......
注意:
(1)要点齐全,条理清晰,语句通顺,不需逐条翻译;
(2)文中不得出现姓名、校名等真实信息:
(3)短文不少于80 词。
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【写作思路】
文章是一篇话题作文，主要以“How to develop a good habit”为话题展开讨论，要根据题目中所给出的要点描写，把每一个要点写清楚写具体即可，要注意语言的表达要清楚。
【参考范文】

How to develop a good habit
It’s very important for us to develop good habits. As teenagers, what should we do?
In my opinion, we should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes if they are necessary for us. It is a good habit to finish the schoolwork on time every day. In spare time, we had better read some books to get more knowledge. Also, we should eat more fresh fruit and vegetables and less junk food. It’s necessary for us to take exercise for three or four times a week. What’s more, to get enough sleep, we should go to bed early and shouldn’t stay up late. Always remember to wash our hands before meals to keep clean. Exercise is fun and relaxing. It’s healthy for the mind and body. Healthy lifestyle helps us get good grades and live happily. Last but not least, when we have time, we should help our parents do some housework. We should be considerate of our parents because they work hard every day.
Good habits will make our study twice the result with half the effort. Let’s form good habits together!
【名师点评】
1. 例文点评：文章采取三段描写。第一段总体指出好习惯的重要性并提出该如何做；第二段分别从几个方面具体描写要养成好习惯；第三段总体概括好习惯会事半功倍。整个文章结构完整思路清晰，语言表达准确流畅，意思明确易懂。
2. 高分亮点：
短语：in my opinion；listen to；take notes；on time；had better do sth；take exercise；What’s more；last but not least。
句型：if引导的条件状语从句；It’s adj for sb to do sth；when引导的时间状语从句；动词原形开头的祈使句。

（八）【2020 •浙江省嘉兴市】
72.在你校"劳动教育月"期间,校英语报发起了"A Helper at Home"主题征文活动。请结合自身情况,用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你经常做的两项家务以及你的收获。内容要点提示如下:
What you often do at home
What you have learned
◆ water flowers ◆ cook meals
◆ wash the dishes ◆ look after pets
◆take out the rubbish ◆……
◆life skills
◆ responsibility（责任）
◆……

注意:
(1)表格中的内容要点仅供选择使用,可适当发挥。
(2)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
(3)词数:80~100。短文首句仅供参考,不计入总词数。
短文首句:I have always been a good helper at home.
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【写作思路】
本文是一篇材料作文，在你校“劳动教育月”期间,校英语报发起了“A Helper at Home”主题征文活动。要求结合自身情况，根据提示内容，用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈自己经常做的两项家务以及收获。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
【参考范文】

A Helper at Home
I have always been a good helper at home. As we all know, it’s important to help parents do housework during our daily life. I often help them to do housework. Last Sunday，after breakfast，I began to help my parents wash clothes. Though washing clothes isn’t difficult, it took me a long time. After that, I tried to tidy my bedroom. I first made the bed and then put away my clothes and school things. Looking at the tidy room, I felt tired but satisfied because I not only share the housework for my parents, but also learn life skills.
I think it can make my parents feel more enjoyable after work. In a word, the more housework I do, the happier my parents will be.
【名师点评】
1.例文点评：本文按照题目的要求，介绍了自己所做的两项家务，结构清晰，要点全面；文中的语言合乎英语的表达规范，而且还使用了一些较好的句式，增强了文章的连贯性。
2.高分亮点：
短语：help sb to do sth，try to do，put away，not only…but also…。
句型：I think it can make my parents feel more enjoyable after work. 我认为能让我的父母工作后感到开心。I think后加省略了that的宾语从句。
In a word, the more housework I do, the happier my parents will be. 总之，我的家务活做的越多，我的父母就会越快乐。the+比较级，the+比较级：越……就越……。

（九）【2020 •浙江省金华市】
61.假如你是李明，某英语网站正在举办以“感恩父母”为主题的征文活动。请根据表格中的内容，写一篇题为“A Letter to My Parents”的短文，用于投稿。
注意：1. 文中必须包含三个方面的内容要点，可适当发挥；参考词汇供选择使用；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3. 词数:80～100；
4. 文章的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
内容要点
参考词汇
Parents’ care
cook food, take…to and from school, look after…
Parents’ love
trust, advise, encourage…
My thanks
…


A Letter to My Parents
Dear Mum and Dad.
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Love from
Li Ming
【写作思路】
这是一篇话题作文。要求根据题目“A Letter to My Parents”和提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。
【参考范文】
A Letter to My Parents
Dear Mum and Dad,
I'm writing to express my thanks for all your care and love.
All these years, you have done so much. Almost every day, Mum cooks delicious food for me and Dad takes me to and from school. When I'm sick, you look after me carefully and patiently.
Both of you always trust me and care a lot about my school life and personal feelings. The many talks we have had and the advice you have given me help me grow. The encouragement from you helps me fear no difficulties and troubles.
Thanks again for everything you have done for me.
Love from
Li Ming
【名师点评】

例文点评：例文采用四段式；时态以一般现在时为主；将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中，适当发挥部分也很好地展示了对文章主题的理解，表达出自己的观点态度。
高分亮点：
短语：express one’s thanks for…；take…to…；look after；Both of等。
句型：When I'm sick, you look after me carefully and patiently.
The many talks we have had and the advice you have given me help me grow
（十）【2020 •四川省成都市】

83.假设复课后你将在英语课上交流新冠肺炎(COVID-19)的防护措施、居家隔离期间的生活方式和抗击疫情给你的启示（至少两点)，请根据以下两幅图示写一篇英语演讲稿。
Follow WOMEN & MEN to prevent COVID-19

W - Wash hands with soap
O - Obey social distancing (1-2 meters apart)
M - Mask to be used properly
M - Mouth
E - Exercise
N - Never touch MEN with dirty hands

要求：
1. 请先在答题卡上填写表中空格；
2. 写作内容需包含两幅图示中的主要信息。
注意：
1. 文中不能出现真实校名和姓名；
2. 词数:100左右。
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【写作思路】
该题目要求完成英语演讲稿，根据题目中的信息并结合图示内容完成即可。
【参考范文】

Hello everyone. I’m Li Hua and I’m very glad to make a speech here.
In order to fight against the COVID-19, I spent a long time staying at home. I must be patient at home, or I will be a patient. I had to wash my hands frequently with soap to make my hands clean. When I had to go outside, I must wear a mask and obey social distancing, which helped to prevent the spread of the virus. Besides, I exercised a lot to keep healthy.
In my opinion, for our health, we shouldn’t touch our mouths, eyes or noses with dirty hands. What’s more, we should do some sports to improve our health.
Thanks for your listening.
【名师点评】
1.例文点评：短文采用四段式结构，第一段是问候，表明作者很高兴做演讲；第二段讲述了作者在疫情期间的防护措施和生活方式；第三段讲述了作者的启示；第四段结尾，向听众表示感谢。整篇文章内容完整，结构清晰条理；人称主要是第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时和一般过去时。
2.高分亮点：
短语：be glad to do sth.；in order to do sth.；sb. spend time doing sth.；keep healthy；in one’s opinion；what’s more；do some sports。
句型：I must wear a mask and obey social distancing, which helped to prevent the spread of the virus. which引导的非限制性定语从句；In my opinion, for our health, we shouldn’t touch our mouths, eyes or noses with dirty hands. 情态动词should的否定形式shouldn’t，表示提建议。
2020年中考真题英语分项汇编
专题22 书面表达
考点1 观点看法类
【2020 •甘肃武威市】

IX. 书面表达
71.父母是我们最亲的人，但我们有时会在与父母沟通时遇到困难。请根据所给思维导图的提示，以"How to Communicate with Our Parents"为题用英语写一篇短文，谈谈与父母沟通的技巧和做法。
要求：
1.文中需包含思维导图中的主要内容；
2.句子及篇章结构准确、连贯、书写规范；
3.需做适量拓展；
4.词数：80词左右。(标题和第一段已给出，不计入总词数；无需抄写在答题卡对应作答区域)

How to Communicate with Our Parents
Communication with parents is one of the first things we have done since we were born. As we grow older, we'll find it's not easy to communicate with our parents openly and effectively. So what should we do when communicating with them? Here are some of my ideas.
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【写作思路】
这篇作文要求以How to Communicate with Our Parents“怎样和我们的父母交流”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈与父母沟通的技巧和做法。题目中给出了一个思维导图，学生们写作前，应先仔细观察思维导图，明确图中展示的内容以及文章的结构，然后组织语言，并对细节进行适当拓展，用正确的英语表达出来。审题可知，这篇短文应用一般现在时态、第一人称叙述。
【参考范文】
How to Communicate with Our Parents
Communication with parents is one of the first things we have done since we were borm. As we grow older, we'll find it's not easy to communicate with our parents openly and effectively. So what should we do when communicating with them? Here are some of my ideas.
Firstly, we can make a list of things our parents and we disagree about most. Try to find out the reason why we disagree with each other. Accept each other's ideas little by little. If we still have disagreements, we'd better not get too angry. Secondly, we should talk with them more! Sharing ideas can make us closer. Besides, we should also learn how to really listen. Listening is a skill that must be learned and practiced. Finally, be sure to be polite. We are a family in which everyone is loved and cared for.
【名师点评】
例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点。结构清晰，短文第一段是题目中给出的，然后作者写了一段，这一段中用了比较好的词体现文章的层次，如Firstly, Secondly, Besides和Finally，条理清晰，而且上下文衔接比较紧密。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确。句式结构完整，符合英语表达习惯。除简单句外，短文中还使用了状语从句、定语从句等复合句以及非谓语动词、祈使句等结构。整篇文章表达流畅，意思连贯。
高分亮点：
短语：make a list of；find out；disagree with；little by little；be sure；care for。
句型：why引导的定语从句；If引导的条件状语从句；动名词作主语；that引导定语从句；in which引导定语从句；祈使句；一般现在时的被动语态。
【2020 •广东省】
B. 书面表达
51.请根据要求完成短文写作，并将作文写在答题卡指定的位置。
为了鼓励人们积极向他人传递关爱，某青少年英文网站“The Link of Love”（爱的链接）专栏开展征文活动。请你给该专栏投稿。
内容包括：
（1）你想向谁表达你的关爱？为什么？
（2）你打算做些什么来表达你的关爱？
作文要求：
（1）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。
（2）语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头己经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。
We are growing up in love and care from people around. It is important to love and care for others._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本题为材料作文，要求根据题目所给要点提示表达对某个人或群体的爱。时态可用过去、现在、将来时，人称用第一人称。
【参考范文】
We are growing up in love and care from people around. It is important to love and care for others. I love my mum. She gave me life, and taught me a lot.
Next Sunday will be Mother’s Day, in order to show my love for my mum, I decide to do something for her. First, I will book a singing room for my mother. I know she likes singing and dancing. Second, I will buy a beautiful gift for her. It will make her very happy. Third, I will do the housework that day and let her have a good rest.
I really hope she will have a good time on that day!
【名师点评】
例文点评：例文分三段，第一段用于开篇点题，引出“表达对某个人或群体的爱”这一文章主题，第二段则是叙述了母亲对自己的爱，以及自己准备如何在母亲节这一天回报母亲的爱。第三段以对母亲的美好祝愿做文章结尾。例文思路清晰，层次分明，句与句之间衔接自然流畅，感情真挚，是一篇优秀的范文。
高分亮点：
短语：in order to，buy sth. for sb.，make sb. adj.，do the housework，have a good rest，have a good time。
句型：
（1）I know she likes singing and dancing.（宾语从句）
（2）It will make her very happy.（make作使役动词）
（3）Third, I will do the housework that day and let her have a good rest.（and连接的并列句）
【2020 •黔南州】
X. 书面表达。
61.
一场新冠病毒疫情在全世界蔓延，对各行各业影响很大，使人们对未来的工作选择有了新的认识和思考。请你以"What is my dream job?"为题，用英语写一篇短文，发表在学校英语手抄报上，谈谈你对未来职业选择的想法。
内容：
1. 疫情前的职业梦想和原因（2点）；
2. 疫情后的梦想职业和原因（2点）；
3. 现阶段应该怎么做（2点）。
要求：
1. 结构完整，表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰；
2. 文中不得出现任何真实的人名、学校名等信息；
3. 词数80左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：scientist, engineer, policeman/policewoman, teacher, doctor
What is my dream job?
I have many
dreams.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I will be a good
student.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
这篇短文要求以What is my dream job?为题，介绍一下自己理想的工作。审题可知，文章中应包括以下内容：首先介绍疫情之前自己理想的工作以及原因；然后介绍发生疫情之后，自己理想的工作发生了变化以及原因；最后简述一下现阶段应该怎样做来实现自己的理想。短文应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主叙述，人称是第一人称或第三人称。
【参考范文】
What is my dream job?
I have many dreams. I wanted to be a scientist because scientists can invent many high-tech products to make our life more convenient. I also wanted to be a teacher because I like to get along with children and it is a respectable job. But at the beginning of 2020, COVID-19 broke out suddenly and my dream has changed since then. Now I want to be a doctor because I want to help people in need. When our country and people are in trouble, doctors and nurses devote themselves to saving people’s lives. They are heroes.
I will be a good student in order to make my dream come true. I will study hard from now on and go to a medical college. I hope I can realize my dream one day.
【名师点评】
例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，结构清晰。文章采用了两段式结构，第一段介绍了疫情前后自己的理想工作以及原因；第二段介绍了现阶段自己如何努力实现自己的理想。短文叙述清晰、条理，理由充分、合理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。短文中用到了简单句、状语从句、宾语从句、非谓语动词等句式或结构，表达流畅，意思连贯。
高分亮点：
短语：get along with；at the beginning of；since then；in need；in trouble；come true；from now on。
句型：because引导原因状语从句；when引导时间状语从句；动词不定式作宾语、目的状语；hope后跟宾语从句；动名词作宾语。
【2020 •江苏省淮安市】
VII. 书面表达
76.2020年6月23日上午，淮安市首届以 “龙舟竞渡迎端午” 为主题的大运河龙舟公开赛在淮安清江浦区隆重开幕。这项活动的开展不仅弘扬了中国传统文化，也给人们带来了生活的乐趣。
请围绕 “端午节” 这话题写一篇短文，内容包括以下要点：
1. 叙述你今年如何度过端午小长假（包括时间、地点、人物、经过）；
2. 你对这些活动的感悟（活动的意义，……）；
3. 今后，你将如何弘扬祖国传统文化（经常参加有关传统文化的活动，……）
参考词汇：
聚餐have big dinner； 看龙舟赛watch the dragon boat race；
包粽子make rice dumplings；讲屈原的故事tell the story of Qu Yuan.
注意：
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
2. 词数在80-100之间, 已给出的文字不计入总词数。
The Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional festival in our country.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
这是一篇材料作文，写一篇短文介绍一下今年如何度过端午小长假，对这些活动的感悟以及将如何弘扬祖国传统文化，叙述如何度过端午小长假时用一般过去时，表达感悟时可用一般现在时和一般将来时，人称上主要用第一人称和第三人称。
【参考范文】
The Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional festival in our country. I’ll never forget this year’s Dragon Boat Festival. I had a good time on vacation. I did a lot of interesting things. I helped my mother make rice dumplings. It was difficult but fun. Then I had a big dinner with my family. It was a happy time to be with my family. My parents told me the story of Qu Yuan. I learned a lot about Chinese history and culture. One of the most exciting things was watching the dragon boat races. People did these activities in order to let the people old and young remember poet Qu Yuan. These activities not only carry forward the traditional Chinese culture, but also bring people the joy of life.
In my opinion, I think we should hold more activities to celebrate the Chinese traditional festival. Festivals play an important part in Chinese culture. It is our duty to respect the traditions and make Chinese culture known to the world.
【名师点评】
例文点评：例文包含了所有要点，时态使用正确，表达有条理，语句通顺，意思连贯，使用了一些固定句式。
高分亮点：
短语： have a good time；help sb. do sth.；one of the most exciting things；in order to ；bring people the joy of life；play an important part in。
句型：①动词不定式表目的 People did these activities in order to let the people old and young remember poet Qu Yuan.
②形式主语 It is our duty to respect the traditions and make Chinese culture known to the world.
③宾语从句 In my opinion, I think we should hold more activities to celebrate the Chinese traditional festival.
【2020 •南通市】
八、书面表达
81.阳光中学的英语社团下周将举行一次座谈会，主题为“幸福都是奋斗出来的”。假如你是魏华，将参与座谈。请根据以下图片提示，联系自身实际，从德、智、体、美、劳等方面中选取至少三个方面写一篇英语发言稿，谈谈自己将如何努力奋斗。


注意：1. 词数90左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Good morning, everyone!
I’m Wei Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. I’m happy to be here to share my ideas. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
【写作思路】
题目要求以“幸福都是奋斗出来的”为主题，结合图片提示，完成英语发言稿，开头和结尾已经给出，补充剩余内容即可。
【参考范文】
Good morning, everyone!
I’m Wei Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. I’m happy to be here to share my ideas. I think happiness is achieved through hard work.
Firstly, helping others will make us feel happy. For example, we should give our seats to the elderly when we take a bus. After we see their smiling faces, we must be happier too.Secondly, healthy bodies can bring us happiness. Health is important to everyone. Only when we keep healthy, we can work and study happily. So we should keep doing exercise every day. Thirdly, knowledge makes our life colorful and interesting. In our free time, we are willing to learn different kinds of skills (like computer and art) so that we can serve the society better. Finally, the beautiful environment gives us a comfortable feeling. We should plant more trees to protect the environment. We also work as volunteers and clean up the parks.
That’s all. Thank you!
【名师点评】
例文点评：例文采用三段式结构，第一段点明“幸福都是奋斗出来的”这一主题，第二段结合自身实际，从不同的方面讲述了自己该如何奋斗，第三段是结束语；整篇文章内容完整，结构清晰条理；人称主要是第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时。
高分亮点：
短语：make sb. do sth.；give one’s seat to sb.；for example；keep doing sth.；in one’s free time；be willing to do sth.；different kinds of。
句型：so that引导的目的状语从句；when引导的时间状语从句。
【2020 •镇江市】
七、书面表达
66.技术进步带来学习方式的变化。假如你是李华，参与某英语报组织的关于两种学习方式的讨论。请根据报纸上提供的信息，谈谈你喜欢的其中一种学习方式及理由，并对这种学习方式提出你认为的不足。
Traditional learning in a classroom
● fixed timetable
a plan made by a school
● face-to-face communication
● colorful class activities
● team spirit

Modern learning on the Internet
● flexible(灵活的) timetable
a plan made by oneself
● online communication
● rich learning resources
● any place with the Internet

要求：
1. 所写内容必须包括一种学习方式的所有信息；
2. 对你喜欢的学习方式说明理由，并提出你认为的不足；
3. 文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
5. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
With the development of modern technology, the way of leaning is changing. I think____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本文是一篇材料作文，题目要求以李华名义就“学习方式”写一篇文章。题目列出了两种学习方式，一是传统的在教室学习，二是现代化的网上学习，要求选择其中一种自己喜欢的学习方式进行分析，谈谈这种学习方式特点、自己喜欢的理由以及存在的不足等，以上要点缺一不可。根据题目要求可知，本文时态为一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主，注意主谓一致问题。
【参考范文】
With the development of modern technology, the way of learning is changing. I think I still prefer the traditional learning in a classroom. First, there is a fixed timetable. A clear plan is often made by a school, so I don't need to think about how to arrange when to learn different subjects. Second, we can have the face-to-face communication with both teachers and classmates. Third, there are colorful activities in class. In this way, I can learn the new knowledge happily. What's more, learning in the classroom can help me develop a sense of team spirit, so I can learn how to get along with others.
However, when I study in the classroom, sometimes I can't follow my teacher. And learning in the classroom can't provide enough resources for me to choose from.
【名师点评】
例文点评：本文结构紧凑，层次清晰。第一段介绍了自己喜欢的学习方式以及自己为什么喜欢的理由；第二段介绍了传统学习方式的不足。文章要点齐全，逻辑清晰，使读者一目了然。另本文使用了正确的时态和人称，符合表达的需要。
高分亮点：
短语：with the development of；think about；in this way；what's more；get along with。
句型：there be句型；疑问词+动词不定式；when引导的时间状语从句。
【2020 •江西省】
59.为了帮助学生迎接中考，在中考前几个月，老师一般都会进行复习教学。一家英语教学研究中心(English Teaching Research Center)正在对中考英语复习教学现状进行调查。请你根据下面提示，写一篇英语短文，向他们介绍你们班的英语复习课的情况，谈谈你对英语复习课的感受及看法，并提出建议。
写作要点：
1. Your feelings about your English revision classes.
2. Class activities: a. What did your English teacher usually do in class?
b. What did you usually do in class?
3. Your advice on English revision classes to your English teacher.
要求：
1.短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3.词数不少于80，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I think my English revision classes were ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本文是一篇材料类作文，要求写一篇关于中考英语复习教学现状的文章，谈谈你对英语复习课的感受及看法、复习课上老师及同学开展的一些活动、个人对于英语复习课的一些建议，以上写作要点缺一不可。根据题目要求可知，本文时态以为一般过去时为主，人称为第一人称和第三人称，注意主谓一致问题。
【参考范文】
I think my English revision classes were useful but tiring. In class, my English teacher organized different kinds of activities to help us review what we had learnt. Sometimes she explained how to use the key words and sentence patterns. We took notes and made sentences. With the teacher's help, we practiced listening, reading and writing in class. But we often did exercises and had exams, which made me stressed out.
I hope English revision classes can be more enjoyable. We can play games and role—play conversations. It’s a good idea to have discussions with my partners in English. What’s more, I like teachers who are always with a smile.
【名师点评】
例文点评：本文结构紧凑，要点齐全。首段介绍了自己对英语复习课的感受以及老师在课堂上的教学活动和学生的学习情况；第二段介绍了个人对英语复习课的改进意见。文章使用了正确的人称和时态，符合表达的需要。
3.高分亮点：
短语：take notes；make sentences；practice doing sth；stressed out；what’s more。
句型：疑问词+动词不定式；which引导的定语从句；it作形式主语。
【2020 •锦州市】
（B）根据要求完成提示性作文，并将答案写在答题卡的相应位置。
72.高尔基说：“书籍是人类进步的阶梯。”为了激发同学们的阅读兴趣，请你以“我读书，我受益”为主题， 根据下列要点提示，代表Reading Club向全校学生发出一封倡议书。
内容提示：
1.feel the beauty of the words
2. open your eyes
3. increase your knowledge
4. develop a good reading habit
5. enjoy the happiness
要求：
1.不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息；
2.请包含所有英文提示内容，可以适当发挥；
3.内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑、书写整齐;
4.词数：80-100词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear students,
Reading can not only help you make progress but also make you grow well. Here are some advantages of reading. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hope all of you can enjoy reading. Let’s take action together now!
Reading Club
July 15. 2020
【写作思路】
本次书面表达是一篇书信作文。写作时，围绕“我读书，我受益”的主题展开，为全校学生发出一封倡议书。本文已经给出了写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。作文的开头、结尾已给出，写作中，应承接短文的开头，注意描述的全面性，将提示的内容全部利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是用一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。
【参考范文】
Dear students,
Reading can not only help you make progress but also make you grow well. Here are some advantages of reading.
First, when you are reading, you can feel the beauty of the words. Second, reading can open your eyes and help you to know about the world. Third, reading is also the best way to increase your knowledge. Fourth, you can improve your writing skills by reading. What’s more, when you spend most of your spare time reading, you will be able to develop a good reading habit. There is so much knowledge and so many interesting things in different kinds of books. You can enjoy the happiness that the books bring to you at the same time.
Hope all of you can enjoy reading. Let’s take action together now!
Reading Club
July 15. 2020
【名师点评】
例文点评：这是一篇优秀的例文。本文采用三段式，第一段开篇点题读书使人进步；第二段详细阐述了读书的益处；第三段呼吁大家一起读书。整篇例文要点齐全，内容完整，文中“First”、“Second”、“Third”、“Fourth”、“What’s more”等词的使用让本文看起来更加条理清楚，词组，短语等运用灵活，多种句式交替运用，给文章增色不少。
高分亮点：
短语：not only…but also…；help sb. (to) do sth.；make progress；the best way to do sth.；writing skills；spend time doing sth.；spare time；develop a good reading habit；different kinds of；at the same time；take action。
句型：Here倒装句；First…Second…Third…Fourth…What’s more…；when引导的时间状语从句；There be句型；and并列句；that引导的定语从句；祈使句。
【2020 •青海省】
61.人生的每一次经历都是一种学习和提升。2019年新型冠状病毒在中国和全球蔓延，我们见证了全国人民居家隔离，医务人员驰援武汉，学生停课不停学等战“疫”行动，这些都带给我们许多思考和启发。请以“A Life Lesson I Learned"为题，用英语写一篇短文。
要求：1.观点明确，内容完整，逻辑清晰，书写规范；
2.词数100左右。
A Life Lesson I Learned
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本题属于话题作文。要求以“A Life Lesson I Learned”为题，结合新型冠状病毒肺炎在中国和全球的蔓延这一事件，写一篇短文谈谈自己的思考和启发。写作时要紧扣题目要求并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
【参考范文】
A Life Lesson I Learned
All of us joined together to fight against the disease when COVID-19 hit the whole world in a sudden early this year.
It was a big challenge to everyone, but no one held back. Many people devoted themselves to fighting against it. The government advised us to stay at home and avoid going to the public places if possible. Doctors and nurses tried their best to treat the patients and take good care of them though they were at the risk of getting infected. People who were willing to help others worked as volunteers. They did a lot and were not afraid of the danger they faced.
The outbreak has caused so many deaths that it gives me a life lesson: We should cherish every moment with our loved ones.
【名师点评】
例文点评：这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，开头点出大家一起参与抗疫，第二段讲述新冠肺炎给大家带来了挑战，各方一起与病毒作斗争，最后提到疫情爆发带来众多死亡，使自己懂得要珍惜与所爱的人在一起的每一刻。例文简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。
高分亮点：
短语：join together；fight against；in a sudden；devote oneself to doing sth.；advise sb. to do sth.；avoid doing sth.；try one's best to do sth.；take good care of；at the risk of；be willing to do sth.；be afraid of；give sb. a life lesson。
句型：when引导的时间状语从句；but连接的表转折关系的并列句；though引导的让步状语从句；who引导的定语从句；so ... that引导的结果状语从句。
【2020 •青岛市】
VI. 书面表达
61.请你以谚语"Time and tide wait for no man (时光不等人)"为题，写一篇英语演讲稿。
内容包括：
1、你对这条谚语理解；
2、能体现谚语含义的个人经历或经验；
3、你的个人感悟。
要求：
1、词数80-100 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
2、文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等相关信息。
Time and Tide Wait for No Man
Good morning, everyone!
It's my great honor to have a chance to make a speech here. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That's all. Thanks for your listening.
【写作思路】
本文是一篇演讲稿，要求以“时光不等人”为题写一篇演讲稿，需要注意演讲稿的格式，包括开头、正文和结语等。演讲稿内容需包括对谚语的理解、体现谚语含义的个人经历以及个人感悟，三个要点缺一不可。另根据题目要求可知，本文时态为一般现在时和一般过去时为主，人称为第一人称，注意主谓一致问题。
【参考范文】
Time and Tide Wait for No Man
Good morning, everyone!
It's my great honor to have a chance to make a speech here. The topic of my speech today is “Time and Tide Wait for No Man”.
In my understanding the proverb means that if we allow the invaluable time to waste, it never comes back to you. As a Senior Three student, time is limited for study, so none can afford to waste time.
I still remember the golden time in playing two years ago, as a consequence of which I fell far behind others. Realizing that opportunity seldom knocks twice, I seized every moment to study. Gradually I made great progress and was awarded the honorable title of “Star of Progress”. Dear fellows, with Gaokao drawing near, we should not be content with what we have done. Value your time from now on and it will bring you benefits.
That's all. Thanks for your listening.
【名师点评】
例文点评：本文结构紧凑，层次分明。首段开门见山，点明演讲的主题；第二段浅谈自己对“时光不等人”这句谚语的理解；第三段讲述自己的学习经历，借以阐述自己对谚语的感悟；最后一段为礼貌用语。文章要点齐全，运用了正确的人称和时态，符合表达的需要。
高分亮点：
短语：come back；afford to do sth；as a consequence；be limited for sth；make great progress。
句型：it作形式主语；that引导的定语从句；which引导的定语从句；祈使句。
【2020 •威海市】

六、书面表达 请将答案填写在答题卡指定位置。
61.阅读理解B篇材料中，Mary Chan经常听爷爷讲起他难忘的老师Mr. Tan。再读本篇材料，假如你是Mary，请以“I have been wondering…”为题，简要介绍Mr. Tan，写写你对Mr. Tan严厉教育行为的看法，以及如果你也遇到了这样严厉的老师，你的想法或做法。
要求：（1）词数100左右，题目与开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可适当归纳引用文中对Mr. Tan的描述，但要以自己的感想为主；
（3）文中不得出现任何与考生相关的真实信息。
I have been wondering…
When I was little， my grandfather often told me about his teachers. He said he would never forget Mr. Tan, a strict teacher I have been wondering about it. ...
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【写作思路】
该题目属于议论文写作。在写作时应根据内容提示简要介绍谭先生，发表对谭先生的严厉教育行为的看法，以及如果自己也遇到了这样严厉的老师，你会有什么想法或做法。
【参考范文】
I have been wondering...
When I was little, my grandfather often told me about his teachers. He said he would never forget Mr. Tan, a strict teacher. I have been wondering about it. Mr. Tan never smiled at school. And he beat or kicked the students, or asked them to run around the school. In my opinion, Mr. Tan wasn't a good teacher.
Now I am going to finish my middle school. I have experienced many teachers. Gradually I understand my grandfather. I have realized that strict teachers are also good teachers. Sometimes teachers punish students just because they want to make them full of energy, to urge them to do better, and to help them get into good habits. That is what responsible teachers often do.
In our school life, we often have teachers like Mr. Tan. We should try to understand them. And as students, listening carefully in class is responsible for ourselves. But, of course, such kind of teachers should control their own temper and action. They should find more good methods to deal with the affairs with the students. And if we really can't get on well with such strict teachers, maybe we can talk with them, and tell them what we think.
【名师点评】
例文点评：例文以第一人称为主，主要采用一般现在时来写作。本文讲述了自己遇到的老师的行为以及自己的观点和想法，叙述完整且条理清晰。
高分亮点：
短语：tell about；in my opinion； is responsible for; full of; urge them to do; get into good habits; get on well with。
句型：what引导的宾语从句；if引导的条件状语从句；and连接的并列句；when引导的时间状语从句。
【2020 •潍坊市】
五、写作
46.Teens Around the World是一个国际青少年网站，近日有人发帖，询问有关网课的事情。假设你是李华，请结合自己上网课的体会，用英语回帖。
注意：
1.不要出现考生本人信息；
2.80词左右。
Teens Around the World
Hey, guys! You've had online learning for some time. What do you think of this new way? Any advantages or disadvantages? Looking forward to your replies.
Leo, Italy


Hi Leo,
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Li Hua,
China
【写作思路】
该题目属于议论文写作。在写作时应根据贴的内容提示讲述网课的优势和劣势并发表自己的看法。
【参考范文】
Hi Leo,
Students in our school have taken two-month online learning because of novel coronavirus. The serious disease has a great influence on both our life and our study. We have no choice but to adapt ourselves to online learning.
Actually, online learning has its own advantages. First of all, we have a comfortable learning environment while learning online at home. Secondly, there are lots of free courses online so we can choose what we like to learn. Thirdly, it is convenient for us to go over our lessons because we can replay them.
However, online learning also has some disadvantages. For example, spending too much time learning online is bad for our eyes. What’s more, we are easy to be influenced by computer games while learning online. In addition, if the network is poor, we can’t communicate with teachers fluently.
In my opinion online learning is a new way of learning. We should make use of its advantages and try to make great progress during such a special period.
Li Hua,
China
【名师点评】
例文点评：例文主要用第三人称进行写作，主要采用一般现在时态来写作。介绍网课的优势和劣势叙述完整且条理清晰。
高分亮点：
短语：because of；has a great influence on；have no choice；adapt ourselves to；first of all；go over；is bad for；be influenced by；in addition；communicate with；in my opinion; make use of; make great progress。
句型：there be+名词的句型；it做形式主语的句子；because引导的原因状语从句；if引导的条件状语从句。
【2020 •山西省】
十、书面表达 请将短文写在答题卡相应的位置上。
60.

教育就是善意的干预。在我们的成长过程中时常会面对来自父母或老师的提醒与批评，有的同学不理解，有的甚至会有过激的反应。如何客观、冷静地对待这种问题，需要我们认真、理性地思考，并做出合理应对，这正是教育要达到的目的。
请针对以上现象，结合生活中的经历，写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1. Your opinion about this phenomenon (现象)
2. An experience you had/heard/saw
3. What you have learned from it
要求：
1. 词数不少于80词；
2. 参考词汇仅供参考；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
remind v.提醒 criticize v.批评 objective adj.客观的 calm adj.冷静的 reasonable adj.理性的


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【写作思路】
这是一篇材料作文。要求针对我们成长过程中，面对来自父母或老师的提醒与批评，有的同学不理解，有的甚至会有过激的反应这一现象，结合生活中的经历，写一篇短文，短文要求包含对这一现象的感想，自己所看或所听到的事情，从中学到的道理。
【参考范文】
As far as I'm concerned, it is of great importance to stay calm and reasonable when our parents and teachers blame or criticize us, which is beneficial for our lifelong development.
I still remember the day that I had an English class. Seeing Li Ming falling asleep, our teacher, Miss Hu, woke him up and reminded him to listen to her carefully. To my surprise, Li Ming rushed out of the classroom without permission. It was so impolite and rude to do so. Later, I talked with him and he realized that the teacher expected to help him develop a good habit and he wasn't so calm at that time. Therefore, he picked up his courage and said sorry to Miss Hu in front of the whole class.
It's a good idea to keep calm and think about it for a moment whenever being blamed or criticized. Sometimes a small change of yourself may lead to a big difference to your life.
【名师点评】
例文点评：例文包含了所有要点，主要以第一、三人称为主，用一般现在时和一般过去时来写，在讲述自己所见所闻的事情时用一般过去时；内容包含三部分：第一部分开篇点题，谈出了自己对这一现象的看法；第二部分讲述自己所见所闻的事情；第三部分讲了自己从中学到了什么。本文时态使用正确，表达有条理，语句通顺，意思连贯，使用了一些固定句式。
高分亮点：
短语：of great importance；be beneficial for；fall asleep；wake sb up；to one’s surprise；without permission；develop a good habit；pick up one’s courage；say sorry to sb；in front of；the whole class；lead to。
句型：①方式状语从句、时间状语从句 As far as I'm concerned, it is of great importance to stay calm and reasonable when our parents and teachers blame or criticize us.
②定语从句 I still remember the day that I had an English class.
③宾语从句 he realized that the teacher expected to help him develop a good habit.
【2020 •黑龙江省牡丹江市】
87． (B)2020年是不同寻常的一年。“新冠疫情”的爆发使我们的学习和生活发生了很大的变化，同时也引发了人们的思考。请你根据思维导图谈谈“新冠疫情”带给我们的影响以及我们从中得到的启示。要求：不少于90词，可适当发挥。

The outbreak of COVID-19 has made a big difference to our life. We have to ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本题为材料作文，要求就COVID-19的爆发以及其带来的影响写一篇文章。文章时态应用现在时或过去时，人称用第一人称。
【参考范文】
The outbreak of COVID-19 has made a big difference to our life. We have to stay at home instead of going out during the Spring Festival. It made us feel quite bored. Since we took online classes at home, there were no teachers or classmates around. We missed our teachers and classmates very much. All of us had to wear masks to protect ourselves from COVID-19 when going out.
What can we learn from the outbreak of COVID-19? First, we should develop healthy living habits to ensure us a healthy body and a good mood. Second, we should help others in need. Third, we should cherish every moment with our loved ones.
【名师点评】
例文点评：例文分两段，第一段写了COVID-19的爆发给我们生活带来的影响，第二段则写了疫情的爆发给我们带来的启示。例文思路清晰，叙述流畅，包含了所有题目所给要点，符合要求，是一篇合格的范文。
高分亮点：
短语：instead of，all of，protect sb. from，learn from。
句型：
（1）Since we took online classes at home, there were no teachers or classmates around.（since引导时间状语从句，there be句型）
（2）All of us had to wear masks to protect ourselves from COVID-19 when going out.（when引导的时间状语从句的省略形式）
【2020 •内蒙古通辽市】
41． 英语有句俗语：“Ten thousand lines can pull a boat.”从这句话中我们深刻体会到团队协作(teamwork)的重要性，请你分享一次团队协作的经历，如：体育运动，小组合作学习，团队游戏等，并谈谈你对团队协作的看法。
要求：
1.思路清晰，语句通顺，书写规范。
2.文中不得出现与考生本人相关的校名和姓名等真实信息。
3.词数:80词左右的短文。
Teamwork
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【写作思路】
该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应根据内容提示讲述自己团队合作的一次经历并发表对团队合作的看法。
【参考范文】
Teamwork
It is said that “Ten thousand lines can pull a boat.” Teamwork plays an important part in our daily life.
I still remember when I was in Grade 8, my physics was very poor. I had a really hard time with it. Once in class, I studied with some classmates together. I was very relaxed and asked my classmates a lot of questions about physics. I didn't feel stressed out at all. At last, I finished my homework by myself for the first time. How excited I was! Because of studying in groups, I am not worried about physics any more. I get more confidence with my classmates' help.  It also gives me more chances to improve myself in many ways.
In my opinion, working in a team provides a chance for us to communicate with each other. It is a way to broaden our horizon and to establish our friendship with others. To sum up, to learn to work in a team is really necessary and important and we should try to enjoy it.
【名师点评】
例文点评：例文主要用第一人称进行写作，讲述经历主要采用一般过去时态来写作。讲述自己团队合作的一次经历叙述完整且条理清晰。
高分亮点：
短语：plays an important part in；had a really hard time with；feel stressed out；at last；by myself; because of; am worried about; in my opinion; communicate with; broaden our horizon; to sum up。
句型：it做形式主义主语的句子；it is said that…句型；how引导的感叹句；and表示并列的句子；when引导的时间状语从句。
【2020 •上海市】
94．Write at least 60 words on the given situation（根据以下情况填写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
雕刻家Willard的成长经历告诉我们：人无完人，但每个人都有自己的独特之处，在Willard的主页上有一个留言区，每位浏览者都可以写下自己的故事和感想．
请以"Everyone can be special （天生我才）"为题，在留言区分享你的经历或见闻．
（注意： 1．短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分．
2．照抄阅读语篇不得分．）
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【写作思路】
该题属于话题写作。写作时要注意文章的要求分享经历或见闻。
【参考范文】
Everyone can be special
No one is perfect，but everyone is unique in their own way．
I saw a film yesterday．The main character of the film is an unusual boy．When he was born，he grew four times as fast as a normal person，which means that when he is 10，he looks 40．The other children always laughs at him，so he is very sad and feels lonely．One day，his mother said gently to him that no one was perfect，but everyone was unique in their own way．From then on，he and his classmates became good friends．
Everyone can be special as long as you don't give up yourself．
【名师点评】
例文点评：例文采用三段式，第一大段人无完人，但是又是特别的；第二大段陈述自己的经历；第三大段呼吁大家不要放弃成为特别的人，结构清晰，段落分明。用第三人称来进行写作分析；时态采用一般过去时为主。
高分亮点：
短语：laugh at, as long as, be born, give up.
句型：when引导的时间状语从句，that引导的宾语从句，定语从句。
【点睛】
能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
【2020 •四川省遂宁市】
76． 2020年初，新冠肺炎疫情爆发，给我们的日常生活造成了很多的麻烦，我们应该怎样做才能远离这种疾病呢?请以此为话题写一篇80词左右的短文。
要点提示：
1.勤洗手，勤开窗，保持空气流通
2.每天测体温，勤锻炼，保持健康的饮食习惯
3.少乘坐公交车，少去人多的地方
4.在公共场所戴口罩（mask），尽量避免面对面交谈
5.如发烧、咳嗽等，不必恐慌，立即就医
注意：
1.文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2.文章必须包含所给要点提示，要求语句通顺，行文连贯。
3.不可逐词翻译，可适当发挥。
4.文章中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
At the beginning of the year 2020, COVID-19 broke out and caused much trouble for our daily life. Many people felt scared. In order to stay away from it, you need to do the following things. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本次书面表达是一篇材料作文。写作时，围绕“远离新冠肺炎”的话题展开，本文已经给出了写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。作文的开头已给出，写作中，应承接短文的开头，注意描述的全面性，将提示的内容全部利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是用一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。
【参考范文】
At the beginning of the year 2020, COVID-19 broke out and caused much trouble for our daily life. Many people felt scared. In order to stay away from it, you need to do the following things.
First, wash your hands frequently with soap or hand sanitizer and running water, and wipe hands with disposable tissue or clean towel.Regularly open windows and ventilate at home. Second, take your temperature every day, exercise regularly, and keep a healthy diet to improve physical fitness. Third, try not to go out. If you have to, take fewer buses and go to less crowded places. Fourth, wear a mask in public and try to avoid face-to-face conversation. Fifth, don't be panic if you have a fever or cough and so on, seek medical advice in time and wear medical masks.
We must protect ourselves. In this way, we are not only responsible for ourselves but also for others, so as to reduce the spread of the epidemic.
【名师点评】
例文点评：本文采用三段式，第一段开篇点题要远离这种疾病；第二段详细列出了如何预防的建议；第三段呼吁大家保护自己，预防传播就是对他人负责。整篇例文要点齐全，内容完整，文中“First”“Second”“Third”“Fourth”“Fifth”等词的使用让本文看起来更加条理清楚，词组、短语等运用灵活，多种句式交替运用，给文章增色不少。
高分亮点：
短语：at the beginning of；break out；in order to；stay away from；need to do；at home；take one's temperature； keep a healthy diet；try（not） to do；have a fever；in this way；not only...but also...；be responsible for；so as to。
句型：祈使句；First…Second…Third…Fourth…Fifth…；and并列句；if引导的条件状语从句；not only...but also...并列句。
【2020•湖北省宜昌市】
61.一场疫情悄然改变着我们的生活习惯。假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike想了解你们目前的用餐情况及你的看法，请你写一封电子邮件回复他。
提示词：公筷 serving/public chopsticks；病毒 viruses；减少传染 reduce infections; safe
要求：
（1）内容应包含所给提示词：
（2）内容应包括餐前、餐中、餐后的情况介绍及你的看法；
（3）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；词数80~100。 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
How’s everything going? I’d like to tell you our lives have changed a lot because of the COVID-19. For dining habits,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Look forward to hearing from you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
这是一篇书信作文。要求根据题目提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。

【参考范文1】
Dear Mike,
How’s everything going? I’d like to tell you our lives have changed a lot because of the COVID-19. For dining habits, public chopsticks and spoons are offered in many restaurants and homes before meals. And many people get food with public chopsticks and spoons instead of using their own when they eat together. People don’t go to crowded places any more after meals.
In my opinion, we should use public chopsticks and spoons more. Because it helps protect us from viruses and reduce infections. It can keep us safer and healthier. If all of us do it, we will have healthier dining habits.（82词）
Look forward to hearing from you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文2】
Dear Mike,
How’s everything going? I’d like to tell you our lives have changed a lot because of the COVID-19. For dining habits, most people wash their hands carefully before meals. They use serving chopsticks instead of their own when they get food. They keep a safe distance when they eat together. And they don’t talk loudly any more. After meals， they often wear masks and take a walk.
In my opinion, these changes are good for us, especially using serving chopsticks. We should use them in order to reduce infections. It can protect us from catching viruses. So we can live a safer and healthier life. And I think it will become a daily habit that everybody should follow.（97词）
Look forward to hearing from you!
Your,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
以第一篇例文为例，例文一采用三段式；时态以一般现在时为主；将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中，适当发挥部分也很好地展示了对文章主题的理解，表达出自己的观点态度。
高分亮点：
短语：instead of；not…any more；In my opinion；protect…from…等。
句型：And many people get food with public chopsticks and spoons instead of using their own when they eat together. 使用and连接的并列句和when引导的时间状语从句。
Because it helps protect us from viruses and reduce infections. 使用because引导的原因状语从句。
【2020•武汉市】

61.
Topic Today
ABC English校园版邀你投稿！
My English Study Plan

假如你是李明，打算向ABC English投稿，谈你的英语学习计划。请根据以下内容提示用英语完成稿件。
内容要点如下：
1.时常阅读，培养良好语感；
2.看英文影片，了解西方文化；
3.坚持写英文日记，提高写作技巧；
4.向他人学习，改进学习方法；
5.补充一两点个人想法。
注意：
1.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
2.词数：60-80；
3.内容连贯，不要逐条翻译；
4.标题和开头己给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：develop v.培养 sense n.感觉 Western a.西方的
My English Study Plan
I will put more time and energy into English study._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】本题为材料作文，要求根据所给要点叙述自己的英语学习计划。文章时态为现在时或将来时，人称用第一人称。
【参考范文】

My English Study Plan
I will put more time and energy into English study. I have made an English Study Plan.
First, in order to cultivate a good sense of language, I will do some reading as frequently as possible. Second, I will keep watching English movies and it is considered to be the best way to learn about Western culture. Third, I think keeping a diary in English is one of the effective ways to improve my English writing ability. Fourth, I will learn from others and try my best to improve learning methods. What’s more, I will often practice my oral English and communicate with classmates in English.
This is my English Study Plan, and I hope my English will be better.
【名师点评】
例文分三段，第一段开门见山，点出自己制定了一个英语学习计划。第二段则根据要点叙述了自己计划内容，第三段作为结尾，表达了自己希望学好英语的愿望。例文思路清晰，包含所有要点并进了适当拓展，符合题目要求，是一篇合格的例文。
3.高分亮点：
短语：in order to，do some reading，as … as possible，the best way to，learn about，learn from，try one’s best to，what’s more，communicate with。
句型：
（1）Second, I will keep watching English movies and it is considered to be the best way to learn about Western culture.（被动语态）
（2）Third, I think keeping a diary in English is one of the effective ways to improve my English writing ability.（宾语从句）
【2020•随州市】
81.2020年初，一场突如其来的新型冠状病毒疫情开启了我们“停课不停学”的居家时光。某英文网站正在开展以“疫情下的我们”为主题的征文活动。假如你是张鸣，请你根据以下要点提示用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你在疫情期间的学习、生活情况及感受。
要点提示：1. 认真上网课，按时完成作业；
2. 广泛阅读，增长知识；
3. 看英语电影，听英文歌曲，放松自己；
4. 坚持锻炼，保证睡眠，保持健康；
5. 与父母交流，增进了解，分担家务；
6. 你的感受（1-2点）。
写作要求：1. 文章必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥以使行文连贯；
2. 词数：80词左右；（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
To prevent COVID-19 from spreading, I had to stay at home.
During the hard time, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本文是一篇材料作文，要求以“疫情下的我们”为主题并根据题目中的要点提示写一篇文章，浅谈自己在疫情期间的学习、生活情况及感受。根据题目要求可知，本文时态为一般过去时，人称以第一人称为主，要注意文章的逻辑顺序，确保语句通顺流畅。
【参考范文】
To prevent COVID-19 from spreading, I had to stay at home.
During the hard time. I had online classes carefully and finished my homework on time. I also read a lot of books to increase my knowledge. Sometimes I watched English movies and listened to English songs to relax myself. In order to keep healthy, I kept on exercising and got enough sleep. What's more, I spent time talking with my parents. In this way, we understood each other better. In my spare time, I tried to help them with some housework.
All in all, I think it is an unforgettable experience in my life.
【名师点评】
本文结构紧凑，首段开门见山，直接点题；第二段按照题目的要点总结自己在疫情期间的学习、生活情况及感受；最后一段总结全文。文章运用了正确的时态和人称，符合表达的需要，且大多为简单的句式结构，清楚地表达了自己的情况及感受。
高分亮点：
短语：have to；on time；listen to；in order to；keep on doing；what's more；spend time doing sth；all in all。
句型：动词不定式作目的状语；think引导的宾语从句。
【2020•鄂州市】
58.你的偶像是谁？你崇拜谁？下表是腾飞中学一些学生的回答，假如你是该校的一位学生，请根据下表的文字提示，谈谈你校同学的偶像观，并适当发表自己的观点。写一篇英语短文。
过去的偶像：歌星、影视明星
1.明星有酷的发型和服饰，他们很时尚;
2.他们有天赋，会表演有趣的节目;
3.他们的表演让人放松，让我们的生活丰富多彩。
如今的偶像：科学家、医护人员等
1.科学家发明高科技产品来保卫国家安全，提高人们的生活水平;
2.医生和护士拯救人们的生命，帮助人们摆脱痛苦，恢复健康;
3.当国家和人民处于困境时，他们用智慧，勇气、辛勤的工作来帮助人们。
你的观点
那些在危难中帮助我们的人们更值得我们尊重和崇拜，作为学生的我们……

要求：1.80-100词。（开头的首句已给出，不计算在词数内）
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其它相关信息，否则，不予评分。
参考词汇：idol 偶像 fashionable时尚的 wisdom 智慧 respect 尊重
Last week, our school did a survey about “Who is your idol?”. Here are our answers. In the past, we_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
这篇短文要求学生们根据题目中给出的表格，谈一谈学生们的偶像观，并发表自己的看法。审题可知，这篇短文的主要内容应包括三个方面：首先是同学们过去所崇拜的偶像；然后介绍现在同学们的偶像；最后发表自己的看法。表格中有非常详细的内容提示，这些也是学生们组织文章内容的依据和提纲，注意要将表格中所有内容都包括在内，可以适当拓展，补充一些细节，但不能遗漏要点。短文应以第一人称、一般现在时和一般过去时为主来叙述。
【参考范文】
Last week, our school did a survey about “Who is your idol?”. Here are our answers.
In the past, we thought singers and movie stars were our idols. They always have cool hairs and clothes. They are fashionable. Also, they are talented and can put on funny shows. Their performances are so relaxing that it makes our life colorful. But now we think scientists and medical workers are our idols. Scientists invent high-tech products to protect national security and improve people’s living standard. Doctors and nurses save people’s lives and help them get out of pain and back to health. When our country and people are in trouble, they help people with wisdom, courage and hard work.
In my opinion, those who help us when we are in need deserve our respect and admiration. As students, we should learn from them and study hard to be a useful person to the country and society.
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容丰富、完整，结构清晰。短文采取三段式结构，每段的主题都非常明确。理由充分、合理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。短文中用到了简单句、并列句、状语从句、定语从句、非谓语动词等多种句式和结构，表达流畅，意思连贯。
高分亮点：
短语：put on；get out of；in trouble；in need；in my opinion。
句型：Their performances are so relaxing that it makes our life colorful.；Scientists invent high-tech products to protect national security and improve people’s living standard.；When our country and people are in trouble, they help people with wisdom, courage and hard work.；In my opinion, those who help us when we are in need deserve our respect and admiration.。
【2020•湖北省天门、仙桃、潜江、江汉油田】
你的睡眠习惯是怎样的？是早睡早起的morning people，还是晚睡晚起的evening people?请以“A Morning or Evening People?”为题，根据所给表格提示，写一篇短文，谈谈你对养成良好睡眠习惯，保持身体健康的认识。文中不得出现真实的人名和地名，词数不得少于80个词。
A Morning or Evening People?
写作提示
提示词
Beginning

sleeping habits
Body Part
your parents’ sleeping habits; your seeping habit
go to bed; get up; seeping hours
different ideas
reasons
Ending

enough sleep; healthy body

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【写作思路】
本文是一篇话题作文，题目要求以“早睡早起的人还是晚睡晚起的人”为题写一篇文章，谈谈你对养成良好睡眠习惯，保持身体健康的认识。根据题目要求可知，本文时态为一般现在时，人称以第一和第三人称为主，注意主谓一致问题。
【参考范文】
A Morning or Evening People?
Different people have different sleeping habits. Some are morning people, some are evening people.
My parents are morning people. They go to bed early and get up early. They say there’s not much sleep for them at their ages. As for me, I never stay up late. I often go to bed before 9:00 pm, and get up early for school the next morning.
I think everyone should have good sleeping habits. They can help our bodies relax and rest well. Many studies show that it’s much healthier to go to bed early and get up early. I prefer to be a healthy morning people.
【名师点评】
本文结构紧凑，层次清晰。首段开门见山，点明文章主旨，即“早睡早起还是晚睡晚起”；第二段介绍父母的作息以及自己的作息习惯，通过对比突出良好作息的重要性；第三段浅谈自己对于养成良好睡眠习惯、保持身体健康的认识。文章要点齐全，逻辑清晰，简单明了的点明了自己的观点。另文章运用了正确的时态和人称，符合表达的需要。
高分亮点：
短语：go to bed；get up；stay up；prefer to do sth；help sb relax and rest well。
句型：that引导的宾语从句；it作形式主语；there be句型。
（2020 •长沙市）
55.在日常学习和生活中,我们经常需要与人合作（ cooperate）。假设你是李华,请你就如何成为一名优秀的合作伙伴写一篇英语演讲稿。内容包括：
（1）合作的技巧（如耐心倾听,礼貌建议……）；
（2）合作的意义（如相互学习……）。
要求：
（1）80词左右（标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数）；
（2）可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；
（3）文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Be a Great Partner
Hello, everyone!
As we all know, cooperation is of great importance in our daily life. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
该书面表达主要围绕如何成为一名优秀的合作伙伴写一篇英语演讲稿。本文已经给出了写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。作文的开头已给出，写作中，应承接短文的开头，注意描述的全面性，将提示的内容全部利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是用一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。

【参考范文】

Be a Great Partner
Hello, everyone!
As we all know, cooperation is of great importance in our daily life. Those who can cooperate with others well are called great partners, so the question remains: how can we be a great partner? 
There are certain techniques we can learn to help to be better. First of all, we should always listen to others patiently and carefully. Only by listening can we understand our team members and be more effective. In the meantime, we should always be polite when we give advice. That’s how we show respect and it’s the only way we can make progress.
By cooperating with other people, we can improve our communication skills. By cooperating with other people, we can learn about new perspectives towards things. By cooperating with other people, we can make progress in both the project and self-improvement.
Thank you for your listening.
【名师点评】
本文采用四段式，第一段开篇引出如何成为优秀的合作者；第二段是合作的技巧；第三段是合作的意义；第四段以感谢结尾。整篇例文要点齐全，内容完整，条例清晰。多种句式交替使用，使文章增色不少。
高分亮点：
短语：as we all know；be of great importance；cooperate with；first of all；listen to sb.；in the meantime；make progress；learn about；both…and…；thank sb. for sth.。
句型：as引导的非限制性定语从句；who引导的限制性定语从句；how特殊疑问句；that（可省略）引导的限制性定语从句；only位于句首的倒装句；when引导的时间状语从句；By cooperating with other people…排比句。
（2020 •娄底市）
56.“生命在于运动。”“运动兴，民族兴。”全民运动在中国蔚然兴起。假如你是一名初三学生，你们学校的英语社团正在举办题为“Sports”的征文比赛。请根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文参赛。
1.要点：

2.要求：
（1）文中不能出现真实的校名和姓名等；
（2）语言要通顺，表达要正确；
（3）要求包含所有要点提示，为了行文需要，可适当拓展和增加要点；
（4）词数不少于60个英语单词，开头己给出，不计入总词数。
3.正文：
Life lies in movement. Nowadays, doing sports is becoming more and more popular in China._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本题为话题作文，要求以“Sports”为题写一篇文章。文章用现在时，人称用第一人称。
【参考范文】
Life lies in movement. Nowadays, doing sports is becoming more and more popular in China.
As for me, I like taking part in different kinds of sports, like football, basketball, walking, swimming and so on. And I also like to watch sports matches. My favorite sport is swimming. I look like a lovely fish in the swimming pool. I enjoy swimming because it can make me strong and healthy. It can also bring me a lot of happiness.
As we all know sports can keep us healthy, so now we students are encouraged to do sports. Doing sports can make us look good and feel good. And doing sports regularly can even help us sleep better at night.
【名师点评】
例文分三段，首段用于引出话题，点出国内运动变得越来越受欢迎的事实。第二段作者提到了自己参加过的运动以及最喜欢的运动。第三段则提到了做运动对学生的好处，建议学生多做运动。例文思路清晰，叙述流畅，包含题目所给要点，并进行了适当拓展，符合题目要求，是一篇合格的例文。
高分亮点：
短语：as for，take part in，different kinds of，and so on，look like，a lot of，as we all know。
句型：
（1）I enjoy swimming because it can make me strong and healthy.（because引导原因状语从句、make作使役动词）
（2）Doing sports can make us look good and feel good.（动名词短语作主语）
（2020 •湖南省衡阳市）
51． 法国作家雨果曾说“进步，才是人应该有的现象”。回首三年的初中时光，你在学习和生活中一定取得了不少的进步，比如学科知识、生活技能、人际交往、体育锻炼、良好习惯等方面。请结合自身的亲身经历谈一谈自己的进步。
要求：
1.选取至少两个方面；
2.结合自身亲身经历谈一谈过去与现在的不同；
3.如何取得这些进步的；
4.书写工整，语句通顺，连贯，词数不少于80。
注意：便文中不得出现真实人名、校名地名及其他相关信息。
参考词汇：used to do/be... , try one’s best to do…,make progress in( doing....)
I have made progress
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【写作思路】
该题目是话题类书面表达，要结合题目所给信息，谈一谈自己的进步。
【参考范文】

I have made progress
I used to be a shy girl who was afraid of speaking in front of the people. As a result, I made few friends and often felt lonely. Finally, I made up my mind to be active and outgoing. At first, it was difficult for me to join in after-school activities. Luckily, with the help of my friends, I managed to express my thoughts and helped others with their problems in my spare time. Now, I’m not a shy girl any more. I have made much progress.
I used to be poor at English, especially in reading and writing. The biggest problem was that after reading a passage, I couldn’t fully understand it. This made me very sad and stressed. However, I didn’t give up. I kept on remembering new words , listening to English songs, reading English articles and writing English diaries whenever I had a chance. Little by little, I made much progress in English and also I became more and more confident.
What great progress I have made!
【名师点评】
例文采用三段式结构，第一段讲述了作者性格内向，几乎没有朋友，后来经过自己的努力和朋友的帮助，不再害羞，在人际交往方面取得了很大进步；第二段讲述了作者起初不擅长英语，后来经过自己的努力，改变了自己的学习习惯，在英语学习方面取得了很大进步，自己也变得很自信；第三段感叹自己取得了如此大的进步；整篇文章内容完整，结构清晰条理；人称主要是第一人称，时态主要是一般过去时。
高分亮点：
短语：used to be；in front of；be afraid of doing sth.；as a result；make up one’s mind；help sb with sth.；give up；keep on doing sth.。
句型：At first, it was difficult for me to join in after-school activities. it’s adj. for sb. to do sth.，it作形式主语，动词不定式to do作真正主语；I used to be a shy girl who was afraid of speaking in front of the people. who引导的限制性定语从句。
（2020 •永州市）
55． 假如你是李华，即将进入高中学习，请你写一封电子邮件给英国的笔友Linda，谈谈你对高中生活的向往和担忧，并请她给出建议。
参考词汇：
Expectation(向往)
meet new classmates and teachers
make decisions by myself
choose favorite subjects
…
Worry
have no time
after-school activities
fall behind
be difficult to study
…

注意：
1）信中不得出现真实人名，校名和地名；
2）80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
3）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Linda,
How's it going? I'll study in senior high school. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
本题属于书信作文，题目的开头和结尾已给出。要求根据参考词汇写给笔友Linda写一封电子邮件，谈谈你对高中生活的向往和担忧。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
【参考范文】
Dear Linda,
How's it going? I'll study in senior high school. I'm so happy because I will meet new classmates and teachers. I'll also be allowed to make more decisions by myself and choose my favorite subjects. Besides, I expect there is a library where I can read.
However, I also have some worries. First, I'm afraid I'll have no time for after-school activities. Second, perhaps I'll fall behind others in some subjects. It's always difficult to study maths well. At last, I'm afraid the food in the new school won't agree with me. What can I do with these problems?
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，用一般现在时和一般将来时分段谈了自己对高中生活的向往和担忧，运用了题干中所给的参考词汇，并进行了适当发挥。例文简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。
高分亮点：
单词和短语：be allowed to do sth.；make decisions；besides；however；after-school activities；perhaps；fall behind；at last；agree with；do with；look forward to。
句型：特殊疑问句；because引导的原因状语从句；宾语从句；there be句型；where引导的定语从句；it固定句型。
（2020 •怀化市）

第四节 情景作文
61.文明礼貌表现的不仅是个人形象、城市形象、市民素质，也在一定程度上反映了社会的文明程度。为配合我市开展"创建文明城市"（build a civilized city）活动，学校号召学生在校内校外做一个文明的中学生，特举办"How to behave well"为主题的英文征文比赛。请根据以下提示，写一篇短文。
1. be on time and honest; be polite and friendly to others; help others
2. respect parents and teachers; help parents do housework
3. follow the traffic rules; not make noise in public
4. protect the environment; take care of flowers and trees; not throw litter everywhere
5. ……


注意：
1.文中请勿使用真实人名、校名和地名；
2.内容应包含表格中的要点并适当发挥；
3.词数：80词左右；
4.文章的开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
How to behave well
To be a civilized student is very important for a student. Here is what we should do and shouldn't be allowed to do.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本题要求我们根据所给的信息，以"How to behave well"为主题写篇英语短文，在写作时，我们可以根据需要将这些信息进行重新整理和安排，使文章的意思更自然。可以使用一些好的句型和连词，使文章上下文意思连贯，更出彩。
【参考范文】
How to Behave Well
To be a civilized student is very important for a student. Here is what we should do and shouldn't be allowed to do.
As a middle school student, I think it's very important to keep our environment clean and tidy and take care of flowers and trees. Don't throw litter everywhere. And we should respect parents and teachers and help parents do housework.
We are supposed to do everything on time and keep promises. Never lie to others or say dirty words. We should be polite to others and ready to help others in need. And remember to obey the traffic rules, family rules and school rules. We'd better not talk or laugh loudly in public.
If everyone behaves well, our city and school will become more and more beautiful.
【名师点评】
本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
高分亮点：
短语：be supposed to，be polite to，remember to do，in need，obey the traffic rules。
句型：宾语从句I think…；祈使句Don't…；if引导条件状语从句；it做形式主语It's very important to do…。
【2019年】
2019年中考真题英语分项汇编
专题21 书面表达
考点1 观点看法类
（一）【2019 •福建】
假定你是李华，收到英国笔友 Harry 的邮件，获悉他在机器人制作比赛中获奖。请根据邮件内容给他回复。词数 80 左右。
From: Harry@hotmail.com
To: Lihua 2019@163.com
Dear Li Hua,
I’m glad to tell you that I’ve just won the first place in a robot-making competition. I love robots! They bring me great fun.
What do you think of robots? Do you want to have your own robot? Why? Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Harry

参考词汇：congratulation
祝贺注意事项：
1. 回复邮件时可适当发挥，邮件格式已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
Dear Harry,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
此类观点表达和原因说明类的作文，在我们三轮的中考复习中进行过系统的训练。 学生可根据日常所授的写作模板，对全文内容及结构进行合理安排。
（1）结构：开头表示祝贺，使用所给提示词；
（2）正文要点：表达兴趣并说明原因，至少两点（如热点科技，对科技创新的兴趣，对生活的改变，对医疗、救援 的帮助等）；
写作时从单词拼写到句子结构，从时态到语态，都应该注意统一。在打草稿时把需要用到的关键词、高级句式、关键结构甚至注意事项等简单地写在题目旁边，以尽量规避错误。
【参考范文】
Dear Harry,
Congratulations！How glad I am to share your good news!
I think robots are helpful in many ways. And in the future, they will play more important roles in our daily life. Plus, I am dying to have a robot of my own. I can have it take care of my grandparents when we are not at home. You see, my grandparents are old and cannot move easily. It can help them do some housework such as cooking, cleaning the house and so on.
Hoping you will make greater progress.
Yours,
Li Hua
（二）【2019 •浙江省绍兴市】
学校是否有必要设立“无作业日”？对此，你在班中进行了调查。请你根据下表内容写一篇短文在英语课上交流，并阐述你的观点和理由。

Opinions
Reasons
most students
Yes
◆have free time
◆feel relaxed
some students
No
◆waste time
◆get bad grades
I
…
…
注意：①短文必须包括表中所有内容，可适当增加细节；
②词数：80-100；
③短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：无作业日 Homework-free Day
短文首句：I've done a survey about whether it is necessary to have Homework-free Day. Here are the results.
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【写作思路】
这是一篇材料类作文。着重通过调查对“无作业日"学生的看法：赞成与反对及理由。主要以第三人称和一般现在时。写作中应适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻切关系。
【参考范文】
I've done a survey about whether it is necessary to have Homework-free Day. Here are the results. Most students think it necessary to have Homework-free Day so that they will have more free time to do what they like, such as reading their favorite books, going swimming and so on. They will also feel relaxed and join their friends in playing different games.
Some students, however, don't like it. They're afraid that they may waste time or even get bad grades. They prefer to do homework as usual.
In my view, Homework-free Day will certainly help a lot. I can choose to watch some interesting English programs, which will help improve my listening and speaking skills.
【名师点评】
文章中使用了非常好的短语或句子会给文章增色。such as ，例如； Homework-free Day ，无作业日；prefer to do sth.更喜欢做某事。I've done a survey about whether it is necessary to have Homework-free Day. （介词后接宾语从句）；Most students think it necessary to have Homework-free Day so that they will have more free time to do what they like.（宾语从句；不定式做主语和结果状语从句）；I can choose to watch some interesting English programs, which will help improve my listening and speaking skills. （非限制性定语从句）。 还运用了or， however 等使上下文衔接的更好。
（三）【2019 •鄂州市】
现在越来越多的学生使用“作业帮”这个APP 来搜查他们不会做的题目。对此，不同的人有不同的看法。请根据以下文字的提示，并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。
优点
1. 及时帮助学生解决在学习中遇到的困难；
2. 在家就能学习，简单，方便；
3. 可以选择自己喜欢的老师，学习兴趣更浓。
缺点
1. 有的学生假装学习，事实上在玩游戏；
2. 有的学生不想独立思考，直接照抄答案，他们根本不关心自己的学习，只是虚度光阴。
你的建议
联系实际，给出自己合理的建议。
要求：
1. 80－100 词。（开头的首句已给出，不计算在词数内）
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其他相关信息，否则，不予评分。
参考词汇：convenient方便的，便利的 pretend to do...假装做…… think independently独立思考
Today, more and more students are using the App zuoyebang. However, different people have different ideas about it. Some people think _____________________________________________________________________
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【写作思路】
这篇作文要求我们对介绍不同人对“作业帮”这个应用软件的看法，并联系实际，发表自己的观点。题目中利用表格的形式，列出了写作的主要内容，审题可知，短文应包括以下几个部分：作业帮的优点、缺点以及个人观点。可以分为三段分别进行叙述，各自的理由在表格中都已呈现，学生们需要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。最后一部分内容则需要学生们联系自己的实际生活，发挥想象力，自己来补充适当的内容。文章应以一般现在时、第三人称和第一人称为主来叙述。写作时应注意：首先要将题目中要求的所有内容都包括在作文中，不能遗漏要点。可以根据表达需要适当发挥，使文章内容更加充实、完整，但需要注意合理性，要紧贴题目要求和文章主旨。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能逐词翻译表格内容，写汉语式的英语。应从句子的整体结构出发，以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复合结构的使用，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使行文连贯、自然。
【参考范文】
Today, more and more students are using the APP zuoyebang. Different people have different ideas about it. Some people think it’s useful. The APP zuoyebang can help students to solve difficulties in their studying in time. It’s easy and convenient for them.
They can study at home. They can choose their own teachers they like, and they will be more interested in studying. However, others don’t think so. They think some students just pretend to study, in fact they play games. They don’t want to think independently, but only copy the answers. They don’t care about their studying at all. It’s a waste of time.
I think it’s good for students who are hard-working. They can study better. But for students who don’t want to study, it’s very bad.
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀是作文，短文作者根据题目要求，把人们对“作业帮”这个应用软件的不同看法进行了介绍，并在最后发表了自己的观点。短文有以下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点。各部分内容之间层次清晰，叙述有条理，三段式的作文，一目了然，每一段的主题也很明确。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，语言得体。句子结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。除简单句结构外，短文里还使用了and连接的并列句、宾语从句、状语从句、定语从句等复合句，以及动词不定式、动名词等非谓语动词结构。短文中较好的句型有The APP zuoyebang can help students to solve difficulties in their studying in time.、They can choose their own teachers they like, and they will be more interested in studying.、They think some students just pretend to study, in fact they play games.、I think it’s good for students who are hard-working等。
（四）【2019 •河北省】
礼貌从我做起，从现在开始，从点滴小事做起。请根据下面的提示和要求，以 “When to Say Thank You”为题，写一篇短文。
提示：1) When should we say “thank you” at home?
2) When are we supposed to say “thank you” at school?
3) ...
要求：1) 短文须包括提示中的两个要点和一个补充要点，可适当发挥。
2) 短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
3) 词数80个左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数)
参考词汇：wash, encourage, open
When to Say Thank You
It’s polite to say “thank you” when others help us or say something kind to us. _________________________
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【写作思路】
这是一篇要求介绍我们在家和在学校怎么做个有礼貌的人。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
重点短语和句型：say"thank you"to sb 对某人说"谢谢"，it's+形容词+for sb to do sth 做某事对某人来说怎么样，help sb do sth帮助某人做某事，as often as possible尽可能经常的。
【参考范文】
When to Say Thank You
It's polite to say "thank you" when others help us or say something kind to us. Being polite is a good tradition in our country. Nobody likes a person who is impolite. It's important for us to be polite. We should say "thank you" to parents when they cook for us. We should say "thank you" when they wash clothes for us. We should also be polite at school. When the teachers help us work out questions, we should say "thank you" to them. When we get bad grades and the teachers and classmates encourage us, we should say "thank you". When someone opens the door for us, we should say "thank you". We should say "thank you"as often as possible. If everyone is polite to others, the world will be more and more beautiful.
【名师点评】
如果想在写作方面拿到高分，请大家关注以下几个方面：
1. 务必保持卷面整洁，书写清晰，阅卷老师的第一印象极为重要。
2. 认真审题（确定体裁，格式，人称，时态）-列出提纲（把所要表达的内容按一定顺序列成若干条。）-打草稿-修改-定稿的写作流程。
3. 学会用英语思维表达，适当使用增强连贯性的连接词，好词、好句的积累，扩句练习和改错练习，学以致用。
4. 加强练习，多写多练，学会升级词汇，不用重复句型，注重从句的使用，使句子在写对的基础上，再写好、写优美。
（五）【2019 •山东省枣庄市】
Write a review（评论） of the following story in about 120 words． The review has to include the following points．（阅读下面的故事，请根据下面的提示，写出一篇约120词的评论）．
（1）The title of your review．（你撰写的评论的标题．）
（2）Your idea（s）， examples and the reason（s） for unhappiness and happiness in the story．（你归纳的关于故事中幸福和不幸福的观点，举例子并说明原因．）
（3）Your idea（s） of happiness， examples for happiness in your daily life．（归纳你在日常生活中关于幸福的观点，并举例说明．）
（4）Your conclusion about happiness．（关于幸福的结论．）
（5）The words you may use．（你可能用到的词） be satisfied with（对……满意） desire n．欲望 contentment 知足 the key（关键） to happiness．
A long time ago， in a rich and beautiful country， there lived an unhappy king． He slept badly and didn't feel like eating． He often cried for no reason． This made the queen and his people worried． So they called a doctor to examine him．But he found nothing wrong with his body．He said what the king needed was the shirt of a happy person to wear．That would make him happy．
The prime minister was called to the palace． But when they explained the king's situation to him， he said，"Although I have a lot of power， it doesn't make me happy． I'm always worried about losing my power．"
Then the king's banker came to say， I'm afraid I'm not happy either． I have a lot of wealth， but I'm always worried about losing money． Someone tries to steal my money． Next， the palace singer was called to say， "I'm famous but I'm not happy because I'm worried about being followed by others． I can't be free．"
Finally， the top general was told to go out to find a happy man． He searched and searched but couldn't find anyone． Everyone seemed to have their own problems， and no one was truly happy． Just as he wanted to give up． he saw a poor man on the street． He was eating with his hands and singing happily to himself． The general went to him and said，"What makes you so happy？ You have no power， money， or fame．" The man said，"I have everything I want． and I don't want what I can't have． So I'm happy， and my song comes from the happiness in my heart． ""Can you give your shirt to me， I need it， "said the general．"What shirt？ I don' t have any shirts．"answered the man．
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【写作思路】
这是一篇要求写评论的文章，根据下面的故事中的相关信息写出一篇约120词的评论。所提供的材料中列举了撰写的评论的标题。主要从：（1）归纳的关于故事中幸福和不幸福的观点，举例子并说明原因。（2）归纳你在日常生活中关于幸福的观点，并举例说明；（3）关于幸福的结论。这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意评论中必须包含材料上的故事情节，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【参考范文】
My Thoughts about Happiness
Power, wealth, and fame can't always make people happy. For example, the rich people were unhappy, because they are afraid of losing money, while the poor people was truly happy because he was satisfied with what he could have.
What can always make me happy？Happiness is always in my heart and is easy to find if I pay more attention to what I have. For instance, enjoying the beautiful sunshine after a cloudy day, getting a glass of water from mother when I am studying, getting help from my friends when I am in trouble and so on. These are the moments when I am happy.
All in all, don't think about what you can't have. Contentment is the key to happiness.
【名师点评】
（1）高分句型一 For example，the rich people were unhappy, because they are afraid of losing money, while the poor people was truly happy because he was satisfied with what he could have.例如，富人不快乐，因为他们害怕失去钱，而穷人真正快乐是因为他对自己所拥有的感到满足。句子because they are afraid of losing money是由because引导的原因状语从句。
（2）高分句型二 All in all, don’t think about what you can't have. 总之，不要想你不能拥有的东西。句子what you can't have.作think about的宾语。
（六）【2019 •四川省南充市】
近年来，学生意外伤害事故频发，给许多家庭带来永久的伤痛。作为中学生，我们该如何有效的自我保护，免受伤害呢? 我市正在举行以“How to Keep Safe”为题的中学生安全知识英语征文比赛，请你根据下表提示，写一篇短文参赛吧。
How to Keep Safe
Traffic
traffic lights, electric bikes（电动车）…
Swimming
rivers, swimming pool…
Internet
ID number, code(密码）, unhealthy websites…
……
……
要求：
1.短文必须包含提示中所有内容，并适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4. 词数：80-100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
How to Keep Safe
Do you know that many dangerous things will happen if we are not careful enough? As a student, how to keep safe is very important.
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After all, life is very important. We should learn something about self-protection so that we can protect ourselves well.
【写作思路】
近年来，学生意外伤害事故频发，给许多家庭带来永久的伤痛。作为中学生，我们该如何有效的自我保护，免受伤害呢? 我市正在举行以“How to Keep Safe”为题的中学生安全知识英语征文比赛，给出的材料比较全面，我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
【参考范文】
How to Keep Safe
Do you know that many dangerous things will happen if we are not careful enough? As a student, how to keep safe is very important.
First, we should obey the traffic rules. When the lights are red, we shouldn't cross the road. And we shouldn't ride the electric bicycles. Second, we shouldn't swim in the river because it's dangerous. We can go swimming with our parents in a swimming pool. Third, we shouldn't tell strangers our ID number or code when we are surfing the Internet. We shouldn't surf unhealthy websites. What's more, we shouldn't go out with friends without our parents' permission. If we are in danger, we can ask for help from our parents or teachers, even police.
After all, life is very important. We should learn something about self-protection so that we can protect ourselves well.
【名师点评】
文中用到了非常好的句型：we should obey the traffic rules. When the lights are red, we shouldn't cross the road.；Third, we shouldn't tell strangers our ID number or code when we are surfing the Internet.这些给文章增色不少。
（七）【2019 •江苏省连云港市】
减负之后，同学们有了更多的课余时间。某校英语角就“如何让课余生活更有意义？”展开了讨论，大家各抒己见。请你根据下图提示，以“How To Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?”为题，用英语写一篇短文。

注意：(1) 短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
(2) 词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
(3) 短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息；
(4) 参考词汇：提升素养promote literacy。
How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?
Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful?
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【写作思路】
本文属于材料作文，要表达如何让课外生活更有意义。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
【参考范文】
How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?
Nowadays we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful?
My schoolmates give the following suggestions. First it's good to help our parents do some housework to show our love for them. Second, we will know more about the world by reading. Third, it is a good chance for us to get close to nature and relax ourselves.
In my opinion, we can do some sports to make us stronger and healthier. What's more, we can take an active part in some social activities as volunteers to help those in need.
In a word, let's make full use of our spare time and promote our literacy.
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如a good chance to do, get close to, in my opinion, what’s more, take an active part in, in a word, make full use of, spare time以及“比较级and比较级”等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
（八）【2019 •乐山】
为了让学生吃到更加营养、安全的食品，政府出台了陪餐制，要求从 4 月 1 日起，学校领导陪同学生用餐。请你根据以下要点，给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，谈谈自己的看法。
1. 学生吃得健康、安全；
2. 及时发现就餐问题；
3. 食堂提供食品多样；
4. 父母更加放心。
注意：1.词数 80 词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 参考词汇:规定 regulation (n.)；食堂 cafeteria (n.)；营养的 nutritious (adj.)
A new food safety regulation was put into use on April 1 to improve nutrition and food safety in schools. It asks the school managers to eat with students in their cafeterias.
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【写作思路】
本文属于材料作文，就政府出台的“陪餐制度”谈谈你的看法。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如thanks to, take place, be able to, provide sth for sb, in other words, worry about, not...at all, carry on, first, second以及also，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【参考范文】
A new food safety regulation was put into use on April 1 to improve nutrition and food safety in schools. It asks the school managers to eat with students in their cafeterias.
Thanks to the regulation, something great has taken place in our school. First, we eat healthier and safer than before. Second, if there is any problem about food safety or other, our school leaders are able to know and solve it quickly. Also, the cafeteria workers are trying to provide different kinds of food for us. In other words, our parents needn’t worry about our diet any more.
We teenagers are still young and need to grow healthy, so I think the new regulation is really good and necessary. I hope it will be carried on forever.
（九）【2019 •江西省】
文章讨论了许多年轻人很在意自己外貌的问题，文章的最后指出：“We need to judge people by what they do, not what they look like.” 你同意文章最后提出的观点吗？对此观点你有何看法？请根据下面提示写一篇英语短文谈谈你的看法，阐述理由，并举例说明。
写作要点：
I. Your opinion (agree/ disagree /…)；
2. Reasons (looks, personality品性， ability...)；
3. An example (yourself/ a person around you/ a famous person/…).
要求：
1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 如举自己或身边的人作为例子，不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数不少于80。
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【写作思路】
这是一篇要求根据文章中许多年轻人很在意自己外貌的问题，文章最后提出判断一个人应该根据他做了什么，而不是根据一个人的外貌来判断，对这一观点提出自己的看法。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
【参考范文】
范文1
I agree with the opinion. Compared with looks, personality and ability are more important. Because we can’t change our looks easily, but we can decide and control what we do. Thnaks to the kind and hard-working people, our society is becoming better and better.
For example, Ma Yun, a well-known businessman, doesn’t look handsome, but he created Alibaba which has changed our lifestyle and made our life more convenient. He has been doing so much for our society that we all admire him. Because of his contribution to our society, we even think he looks so cool.
So let’s try our best to do more useful things for our society and pay less attentionto our looks.
范文2
In my opinion, I think we need to judge people by both what they do and what they look like.
A person's personality and ability are very important, but for some jobs, looks are also important, such as an actor or an actress, a waiter or a waitress, or even a teacher. Because it's enjoyable to see a good-looking person.
For example, my teachers in my class all teach very well, and they are kind and helpful. All of us like them. But the most popular teacher is my English teacher, because she looks really beautiful. She dresses herself up every day and always has a smile on her face.
So let's try our best to improve our ability, personality and looks.
2019年中考真题英语分项汇编
专题21 书面表达
考点1 观点看法类
（一）【2019 •北京市】
根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假如你是李华，你们学校正在开展“安全月”宣传活动，倡议大家制作关于安全教育的主题海报，你们班交换生Peter给你发邮件询问相关事情。请用英语回复一封邮件，告诉他海报上交的时间，并分享你设计海报的一些想法。
提示词语：design，safety rule，careful，protect，picture
提示问题：When should you hand in the poster?
What would you like to share with Peter about designing the poster?
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your email _______________________________________________________________
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If there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给Peter写一封邮件，告诉他关于制作关于安全教育的主题海报的相关事宜。由题目中给出的提示问题可知，短文中应包括以下内容：首先告诉Peter海报上交的时间；然后和他分享一些设计海报的想法。第二个内容应该是短文的主体。题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，学生们应联系自己的实际生活，展开合理的想象，将这些内容补充完整后，用正确的英语表达出来，这是写作中的一个难点。短文应以一般现在时为主、第一、二人称来叙述。写作时应注意：首先要合理安排短文内容，叙述应有层次、有条理。可以使用一些表示先后顺序的词或短语，如First, Second, Last but not least等等。题目中给出的提示词应该在短文中用上。其次应注意文章的表达，英语句式的结构与汉语是不同的，因此不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应该从句式的整体考虑，先确定主干结构，然后添加修饰成分。为提升作文档次，应注意使用一些高级词汇、短语以及复合句、非谓语动词等复杂结构。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意上下连贯，表达流畅。
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your email. As it is required，you are supposed to hand in the poster before next Friday.
Being your close friend，I am extremely willing to share some ideas about designing the poster with you. First and foremost，the basic safety rules are of great importance，which should be included in your poster. In the second place，following the safety rules is so meaningful and crucial that you had better remind your readers of its significance and advise them to be careful both in and out of school. Last but by no means least，if I were you，I would add a few suggestions about safety awareness，considering that better safe than sorry. In addition，it is a good idea for you to draw a few pictures on your poster so as to make it more lively and acceptable.
If there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，给Peter写邮件，告诉他制作主题海报的一些事情。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，结构清晰，符合题目要求。除题目中给出的开头和结尾，短文主要包括两个内容：第一段用一句话告诉Peter上交海报的时间；文章的中心和重点是放在了第二段上，这一段中作者和Peter分享了一些制作海报的想法。主要从四个方面进行阐述，内容非常详实，并使用了First and foremost, In the second place, Last but by no means least, In addition等短语，分清了这一段的层次，叙述非常有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，并使用了较复杂的句式结构，表现了作者较强的语言运用能力。短文中较好的句型有：Being your close friend，I am extremely willing to share some ideas about designing the poster with you.、In the second place，following the safety rules is so meaningful and crucial that you had better remind your readers of its significance and advise them to be careful both in and out of school、In addition，it is a good idea for you to draw a few pictures on your poster so as to make it more lively and acceptable.等。
（二）【2019 •福建省】
假定你是李华，收到英国笔友 Harry 的邮件，获悉他在机器人制作比赛中获奖。请根据邮件内容给他From: Harry@hotmail.com
回复。词数 80 左右。
Dear Li Hua,
I’m glad to tell you that I’ve just won the the first place in a robot- making competition. I love robots! They bring me great fun.
What do yo think of robots? Do you want to have your own robot? Why? Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Harry
To: Lihua 2019@163.com

参考词汇：congratulation 祝贺注意事项：
1. 回复邮件时可适当发挥，邮件格式已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
Dear Harry,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
此类观点表达和原因说明类的作文，在我们三轮的中考复习中进行过系统的训练。学生可根据日常所授的写作模板，对全文内容及结构进行合理安排。
（1）结构：开头表示祝贺，使用所给提示词；
（2）正文要点：表达兴趣并说明原因，至少两点（如热点科技，对科技创新的兴趣，对生活的改变，对医疗、救援的帮助等）；
写作时从单词拼写到句子结构，从时态到语态，都应该注意统一。在打草稿时把需要用到的关键词、高级句式、关键结构甚至注意事项等简单地写在题目旁边，以尽量规避错误。
【参考范文】
Dear Harry,
Congratulations！How glad I am to share your good news!
I think robots are helpful in many ways. And in the future, they will play more important roles in our daily life. Plus, I am dying to have a robot of my own. I can have it take care of my grandparents when we are not at home. You see, my grandparents are old and cannot move easily. It can help them do some housework such as cooking, cleaning the house and so on.
Hoping you will make greater progress.
Yours,
Li Hua
（三）【2019 •陕西省】
即将毕业的你，将如何处理初中阶段的各种书籍和笔记呢?假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给学校英文报写一封电子邮件，分享你处理这些书籍和笔记的计划与理由。

要求：
1. 参考表格内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文章不得出现任何真实信息（姓名，校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于70个词，（开头已经给出，但不计入总词数）。
Dear Editor,
My name is Li Hua. I'm going to graduate soon. I'd like to share some ideas about how to deal with my books and notebooks.
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There are my ideas. I hope they can help.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
本篇作文为应用文，要求写一封电子邮件，写作时应注意以下几点内容：
1. 审题：不需要写题目，开头结尾已给出，只需要按照给出的提示写出自己如何处理笔记和书籍的计划和理由，给的提示短语需要全部列出。
2. 列提纲：
第一段：开头已给出，引入主题，第二段：详细列出自己处理笔记和书籍的计划和理由第三段：结尾已给出，进行情感的升华。
3. 人称及时态：第一人“我”为主，时态应选用一般将来时和一般现在时。
【参考范文】
Dear Editor,
My name is Li Hua. I'm going to graduate soon. I'd like to share some ideas about how to deal with my books and notebooks.
First of all, I will put all my books into different kinds. Secondly, I am going to give my textbooks to my younger cousins. In this way, they can study at home during the coming summer vacation. Besides, I want to have a book sale so that children can buy the picture books at low prices. What's more, I decide to keep the notebooks for myself. They bring me lots of sweet memories. Finally the used paper will be taken to the waste center.
There are my ideas. I hope they can help.
Yours,
Li Hua
（四）【2019 •四川凉山州】
每个人的生命只有一次，一定要珍爱自己的生命。该怎样安全自救？请根据以下提示，以How to Protect Ourselves为标题写一篇发言稿。
安全对每个人都很重要
交通：外出时遵守交通规则
食品：吃健康食物，少吃垃圾食品
活动：体育锻炼时，不要弄伤自己
不私自下河游泳
自救是重要的技能之一
交友需谨慎
远离危险之人
遇到危险保持冷静
然后要及时报警或向老师、家长求助
尽可能避免受伤害
保证自己的安全
要求：1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯、通顺。
2. 短文应包括所有内容，可适当发挥，不要逐句翻译。
3. 词数80左右。文章开头部分已给出，不计人总词数。
参考词汇：safety,traffic rules, hurt oneself, without permission, self-protection, stay away from…, be careful, be in danger, keep calm, call…for help, be hurt.

Dear friends,
Everyone has only one life, we should treasure our lives. But how can we protect ourselves?
Here are some suggestions. _____________________________________________________________________
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In a word, we should try our best to protect ourselves and value our lives.
That’s all. Thank you!
【写作思路】
本文是根据材料提示写作，所以分析所给材料之后，首先要在头脑中确定文章的整体结构，然后逐步细化．就像盖房子一样，先有整体框架，然后是房间，最后是室内装修．
【参考范文】
Dear friends，
Everyone has only one life， we should treasure our lives． But how can we protect ourselves？
Here are some suggestions．
　 On the one hand， we should realize the importantce of safety and know what to do． First，when we go out， we must follow traffic rules． If we walk，we must use sidewalks and mustn't run a red light；If we ride bikes，we must ride along the right side and shouldn't carry others；Second， we should develop a healthy eating habits． Eat regular meals every day and try not to eat junk food or eat less．When food smells bad， don't eat it．Third，when we play sports or games， be careful not to hurt ourselves．Fourth，we mustn't swim in rivers without our parents or other adults around．
　On the other hand， we should learn to protect ousrselves， which is one of the most important living skills． We must be careful when making friends especially online．Some person online are not honest．They are dangerous， so we must keep away from them． If we happen to have trouble， we should keep calm and remember to ask our parents， teachers or police for help so that we can protect ourselvs from danger or being hurt．
　 In a word， we should try our best to protect ourselves and value our lives．
That's all． Thank you !
【名师点评】
高分句型一： we should realize the importance of safety and know what to do. 我们应该意识到安全的重要性，并且知道如何去做。短语the importance of，what to do结构；
高分句型二：when we go out，we must follow traffic rules. 当我们外出时，必须遵守交通规则。状语从句，情态动词；
高分句型三：we should learn to protect ourselves，which is one of the most important living skills．我们应该学会保护自己，这是最重要的生存能力之一。定语从句；
高分句型四：we must keep away from them．我们必须远离他们。keep away from 短语
高分句型五： we should keep calm and remember to ask our parents，teachers or police for help so that we can protect ourselves from danger or being hurt．
我们应该保持冷静，并且记住及时向家长，老师或警察求助。以便于保护自己远离危险，避免受伤害。remember to do结构，ask...for help，in time短语；so that引导的目的状语从句，protect.. from...短语。
（五）【2019 •贵州省安顺市】
请你根据上面五个问题的内容及你的回答，结合以下提示，以“How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?”为题，写一篇80-100词的英语短文。文中不得出现真实校名和人名。
提示：
1. 谨慎交友。
2. 不参与打架斗殴。
3. 面对校园欺凌怎样自我保护。
参考词汇：1. self-protection（自我保护） 2. bully(n./v.欺凌）
3. personal safety（人身安全）4. have violent behaviors(打架斗殴）
How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?
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【写作思路】
这是一篇话题作文，以“How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?”为题，写一篇80-100词的英语短文。本文人称主要第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时。仔细阅读所给材料，认真审题，确定主题，确定要点，根据要点适当发挥，列出提纲。短文必须包含提示内容。字数80-100词。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。
【参考范文】
How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?
School bullies happen in almost every school. In my school, we sometimes have bullies and some students are hurt, so it is really bad for us to bully others or be bullied at school.
We are supposed to stop any school bully when we are in the trouble of it. For example, we should stay calm before a bullying behavior happens. We should always be friendly and helpful when making friends with others. Here are some of my ideas about stopping school bullies. Firstly, we will learn how to have a self-protection because our personal safety is the most important. Secondly, we should be peaceful with others at all times and can't have any violent behavior. Finally, obeying school rules is also a way to avoid school bullies.
I'm hoping that no school bullies will happen at school in the future, do you think so?
（六）【2019 •襄阳市】
据了解，为了进一步引导中学生积极参加体育锻炼，提高身体素质，襄阳市教育主管部门正在研究制定有关“中考”体育考试的改革方案( the plan)，考虑在原有项目的基础上增加篮球、排球或足球，总分(the score)也由30分增加至50分。作为一名参加过体育“中考”的学生，你对这样的改革持什么样的态度。请根据写作要点提示，用英语写一篇短文表述你的观点。
1．要点提示：
(l)观点明确（要么赞成，要么反对）：
(2)理由充分（可针对增加考试的项目和调整的分值，也可只选其一。限三条理由）；
(3)给出建议（围绕你的观点提出一条合理化建议）。
2．注意事项：
(l)字数：90词左右：
(2)行文应连贯流畅；
(3)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
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【写作思路】
这是一篇给材料作文。襄阳市教育主管部门正在研究制定有关“中考”体育考试的改革方案，考虑在原有项目的基础上增加篮球、排球或足球，总分(the score)也由30分增加至50分。作为一名参加过体育“中考”的学生，你对这样的改革持什么样的态度。要求根据写作要点提示，用英语写一篇短文表述自己的观点。文章时态主要用一般现在时，人称主要用第一、第三人称。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。
【参考范文】
In my opinion, I agree with the reform plan of “high school entrance examination” physical education examination.
It is reported that most young people are getting unhealthy. Without regular exercise, students are getting weaker and weaker. If the total score of "high school entrance examination" sports is increased, Both teachers and students will undoubtedly attach great importance to physical education, and it’s easy to imagine the phenomenon that PE is always taken away will never be seen. Students will be healthier and more energetic in their study. It is helpful to improve students' comprehensive ability and quality.
I think every school should make a plan to cultivate students' interest in sports so as to improve students' physical quality.
2019年中考真题英语分项汇编
专题21 书面表达
考点1 观点看法类
（一）【2019 •贵州省毕节市】
每年的 6 月 6 日是我国的“爱眼日”，可见保护中小学生的视力非常重要，为此，学校将在英语文化节期间举行一场“爱眼日”英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇英语演讲稿，谈谈你对保护视力重要性的认识和建议。
内容如下：
1. 保护视力的重要性（请写 1 点）；
2. 对保护视力的建议：（1）阅读时注意用眼卫生；（2）少用电子产品；（3）常看绿色植物；（4）做眼保健操；（5）多做户外运动。
要求如下：
1. 结构完整，表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰；
2. 文中不得出现任何真实的人名，学校名等信息；
3. 词数 80 左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：
Sight Day 爱眼日；electronic products 电子产品；eye-protecting exercises 眼保健操
Dear friends,
June 6 is our country’s Sight Day. ____________________________________________________________
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Thank you!
【写作思路】
本文属于话题作文，谈谈你对保护视力重要性的认识和建议。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
【参考范文】
Dear friends,
June 6 is our country’s Sight Day. As we all know, eyes are windows of the soul. Everyone understands the importance of the eyes. But now more and more students are getting near sighted. So how to protect eyes still remains a question. Here is some advice on how to protect your eyesight.
You should not keep your eyes working for two long when reading, you should keep the book about a foot away from you. After reading for an hour or two, you’d better have a rest by working in the distance or looking at the green plants to make your eye relax. You ought to remember not to read in dim light or in the sun. Don’t read in a moving bus or in bed. Besides, try to use less electric products. What’s more, doing eye-protecting exercises will help you keep good eye sight. Last but not least, we can also try to do more exercise in our spare time.
Only by doing these simple things can we keep good eyesight.
【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关 写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
（二）【2019 •广西河池市】
“人生没有彩排，生命没有重来”，你平安、健康、快乐地成长是父母最大的心愿。今年6月下旬学校将举办一场以“Keep away from the danger!” 为主题的英文演讲比赛。假如你是王雷同学，大家推选你参加这次比赛。请跟进以下思维导图提示，写一篇英文演讲稿。
写作提示：
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实姓名和学校名；
2. 所有的提示词都须用上，包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯：
3. 字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚：
4. 词数100词左右。(演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。)

Keep away from the danger!
Hello! Everyone, I’m Wang Lei. The danger is around us. So we must learn how to keep away from the danger, First, we mustn’t go swimming without our parents’ or teachers’ permission.
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In a word, we must try our best to keep away from the danger!
That’s all. Thank you for listening!
【写作思路】
这篇作文要求我们以Keep away from the danger为题，写一篇演讲稿。审题可知，题目中利用思维导图的形式，列举了这篇文章中应该包括的几个要点。观察这个思维导图可知，短文应该从游泳、交通、交友、饮食、学校安全以及毒品等六个方面进行叙述，每个方面都给出了一些提示词，学生们可以利用这些提示词来组织语言，用完整的句子表达出来。文章应使用一般现在时、第一人称为主来叙述。写作时应注意：首先题目中给出的所有提示词以及要点都应包括在内，不要有所遗漏。可以根据表达需要进行拓展，使文章内容更加充实。但应注意拓展内容应与文章主题紧密相连，不要写没有用的东西。其次应注意英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不要根据汉语思维逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句式的正确结构出发，选择适当的单词、短语和句型。句式结构可以简单句为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂结构，提升文章档次。同时语句之间应使用一些衔接成分，注意叙述的层次性，条理清楚，行为连贯。
【参考范文】
Keep away from the danger!
Hello! Everyone, I’m Wang Lei. The danger is around us. So we must learn how to keep away from the danger. First, we mustn’t go swimming without our parents’ or teachers’ permission. When we go swimming, we must wear life jackets. Second, we must obey the traffic rules. We should walk on the pavement. When we cross the street, we mustn’t look at the mobile phones. Third, we may have some friends on line, but we mustn’t believe whatever they say. Besides, don’t meet online friends alone. Fourth, we must wash our hands before having meals. Don’t eat food that goes bad because it is bad for our health. Fifth, when we are in school, we can’t run on the hallways. You should get on well with your classmates and don’t fight with them. If someone threatens you, call for help. Last but not the least, never try drugs. If you see someone selling drugs, call 110 at once.
In a word, we must try our best to keep away from the danger!
That’s all. Thank you for listening!
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，给我们介绍了生活中应如何远离危险，保证我们的安全。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有内容，提示词都使用上了。文章中从六个方面进行了具体的介绍，每个方面前都有表示顺序的词First, Second… Last but not least等，使文章的结构非常清晰，叙述有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。文章中使用了简单句、宾语从句、状语从句、定语从句、祈使句等结构，句式多变，表达准确、清楚。文章中使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如When we cross the street, we mustn't look at the mobile phones、Third, we may have some friends on line, but we mustn't believe whatever they say、Fourth, we must wash our hands before having meals.、You should get on well with your classmates and don't fight with them.、If someone threatens you, call for help.、Last but not the least, never try drugs. If you see someone selling drugs, call 110 at once.等。
（三）【2019 •黑龙江省齐齐哈尔市】
初中生活，精彩纷呈。回首过去你是否感到充实和快乐，展望未来你是否对高中生活充满期待，请结合以下提示谈谈你的感悟。
提示：1. 初中阶段你有哪些收获；
2. 初中阶段你有哪些遗憾或未实现的愿望；
3. 你对未来的高中生活有哪些计划或打算。
要求：1. 80-100词，首句已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰。
The life of my junior high school is coming to an end. ____________________________________________
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【写作思路】
这是一篇提纲类作文，初中生活，精彩纷呈。回首过去你是否感到充实和快乐，展望未来你是否对高中生活充满期待，请结合以下提示谈谈你的感悟，动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在时态，这方面需要注意的问题比较少。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词
【参考范文】
The life of my junior high school is coming to an end. Since I came to the junior high school, I’ve gained confidence and happiness. With the help of our teachers, I’ve learned how to be a good person as well as plenty of knowledge. I’ve also made some good friends.
However, there is still something that I feel sorry about. Because I was busy with my schoolwork, I couldn’t keep on reading. Once in a while, I felt so upset and anxious that I quarreled with my parents.
In the future, I’ll try to make good use of time and spend more free time reading books. Meanwhile, I’ll get on well with my parents. I believe I’ll have a happy and colorful life.
【名师点评】
这篇短文不使用了大量的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如With the help of our teachers, I’ve learned how to be a good person as well as plenty of knowledge. I’ve also made some good friends.等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。
（四）【2019 •泰安】
习近平总书记在全国教育大会上提出了“立德树人”的人才培养根本任务，作为初中毕业生，你有什么人生规划？请根据以下提示，写一篇英语演讲稿。
提示：
1. 作为中国人而自豪：过去，我国优秀的传统文化影响了世界：今天，祖国在全国人民的努力下越来越强大，许多科技世界领先；…
2. 为实现“中国梦”而奋斗：学会做一个懂感恩、守规矩、善良诚信的人；不畏难，努力学习知识、提高能力，将来成为一名…
要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，可根据提示适当发挥，不要逐句翻译；演讲中不得提及生个人身份的相关信息，如人名、校名或地名等；词数80—100，开头结尾已给出（不计入词数）。
Hello, everyone! __________________________________________________________________________
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That's all. Thank you!
【写作思路】
本文属于材料作文，谈论祖国的伟大强盛以及为实现中国梦我们应该做的努力。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
【参考范文】
Hello, everyone! As a Chinese, I am so proud of it. In the past, our great traditional culture made a difference to the world, such as sailing, communicating and so on. Nowadays, our country is becoming stronger and stronger by working hard of all Chinese. A lot of science and technology lead the world, such as high speed, Chang’e 4 and Hong Kong-Zhuhai-Macau Bridge and so on.
As a teenager, we should do as follows to achieve our Chinese dream. First of all, we are supposed to thank all the people who devote themselves to making our country wonderful. What’s more, we need follow the rules. In school we should obey the school rules. Only by doing these dimple things can we become a person that the country needs. In addition, we’d better not lie and be a honest man in order that all people can trust us. Last but not least, we should try our best to work hard and when face difficulties, we never give up. I am going to be a scientists. If I am a scientist, I will do more researches and let other countries admire us.
That's all. Thank you!
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如be proud of, make a difference to, such as, and so on, 比较级and比较级, devote oneself to doing, in order that, try one’s best以及first of all, what’s more, in addition和last but not least等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
（五）【2019 •湖南省湘西州】
湘西自治州正在进行“美丽湘西”建设，我们要积极参与“美丽湘西”建设活动，从小事做起，让我们家乡变得更美。作为学生，请以“Start out small”为题，用英语写一篇倡议书。
要点提示：1.多种植树木和花草，不乱砍伐树木。
2.购物时重复使用袋子。
3.不乱扔垃圾，保持河流等干净。
4.遵守公共秩序，做文明学生。
要求：1.80词以上。文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文章须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文意思通顺、语气连贯、过渡自然。不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
参考词汇：protect the environment；reuse bags；plant；cut down；throw；wait in line；be wise；obey public rules
Start out small
Hello, everyone. We should try our best to make our hometown Xiangxi more beautiful and comfortable. What can we do for our hometown? ___________________________________________________________________
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【写作思路】
这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下如何才能为“美丽湘西”建设做出贡献。所提供的材料中列举了我们要积极参与“美丽湘西”建设活动，从小事做起，让我们的家乡变得更美。主要从1. 多种植树木和花草，不乱砍伐树木。2. 购物时重复使用袋子。3. 不乱扔垃圾，保持河流等干净。4. 遵守公共秩序，做文明学生。这四个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【参考范文】
Start out small
Hello, everyone. We should try our best to make our hometown Xiangxi more beautiful and comfortable. What can we do for our hometown？In order to make our hometown more beautiful， as students, I think we should start from small things. First of all, we should know the importance of protecting the environment. We should plant more trees and flowers and not cut down trees randomly. Second, we had better reuse the bag when shopping. We can't throw rubbish about, and we should keep the rivers clean and so on. In addition, we must obey public rules and be civilized students. When we got on the bus, we should wait in line.
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
I think we should start from small things. 我认为我们应该从小事做起。we should start from small things.做think的宾语。
【高分句型二】
When we got on the bus, we should wait in line. 我们应该排队等候上车。
句子When we got on the bus是由when引导的时间状语从句。
（六）【2019 •镇江市】
假如你是阳光中学的李华，每周五下午你校开设校本必修课(required course)与选修课(elective course),请介绍必修课Travel of Science, 根据个人情况选择一门选修课并说明理由；同时，对你的选择的课程提出建议。
Required course
Elective Course
Subject
Travel of science
l introducing scientists and inventions
Subject
Photography
l taking photos
Gardening
l growing flowers
Teacher
a professor
Teacher
a young reporter
4:00 p.m.-4:45 p.m.
School’s garden
Time & Place
l 2:30 p .m.- 3:15 p.m.
l school hall
Time & Place
l 4:00 p.m.-4:45 p.m.
l City Park
An old gardener
Tip
take notebooks and pens
Tip
Take cameras
tools offered by school
要求：
1. 所写内容必须包括必修课及一门选修课的所有信息；
2. 对你所选择的一门选修课说明理由，并对其提出建议；
3. 文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
5. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
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【写作思路】
这篇作文要求我们对学校周五下午安排的必修课和选修课程进行介绍。审题可知，短文应使用一般现在时，第一人称为主来叙述。内容应包括以下几个方面：首先介绍必修课程Travel of science，题目中利用表格的形式展示了这个课程的主要内容、老师、上课的时间、地点以及小提示，学生们根据表格用正确的英语表达出来即可；接下来应根据个人情况，从表格中提供的两门选修课中选择一个，阐述自己的理由，并对该课程提出一些建议。这一部分需要学生们展开想象，结合自己的实际生活，补充具体的内容，再用英语表达出来。写作时应注意：首先短文应包括题目中要求的所有内容，不能遗漏要点，而且注意分清层次和结构，使叙述清晰、完整、有条理。合理安排各部分内容，主次分明。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。可以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式和结构，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、表达自然。
【参考范文】
Every Friday afternoon, our school offers required and elective courses. Travel of science is a required course. We can learn about some scientists and their inventions. I think it will be interesting. The course is given by a professor, who is well-known for his lecture. So you mustn't miss it. The course is from 2:30 p.m. to 3:15 p.m. in the school hall. You'd better take notebooks and pens so that you can write down the main points. There are two elective courses, Photography and Gardening. I would like to choose the former because I like taking photos. I think I can learn more skills in the class. The teacher who gives this course is a young reporter. So I think we may have similar thoughts and easy to get along with each other. I want the course to add more chances for us to take photos outdoors.
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，介绍了学校开设的校本必修课程，并从两个选修课中选择了自己喜欢的一个，介绍了自己选择这门课程的原因，并对该课程提出了自己的建议。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，符合题目要求，没有遗漏要点。叙述清晰、有条理，理由充分、合情理。提出的建议也比较中肯，符合该情景。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，句式结构符合英语的表达习惯，短文中用到了简单句、宾语从句、状语从句、定语从句、非谓语动词、被动语态等多种句式和结构，增强了文章的表现力。文中较好的短语和句式有We can learn about some scientists and their inventions.、The course is given by a professor, who is well-known for his lecture.、You'd better take notebooks and pens so that you can write down the main points、The teacher who gives this course is a young reporter.、 So I think we may have similar thoughts and easy to get along with each other.、 I want the course to add more chances for us to take photos outdoors.等等。
（七）【2019 •甘肃省天水市】
"你养我长大，我陪你变老．"父母亲一直在为我们的成长默默付出，成长要学会感受爱、回报爱．今天你即将毕业是向父母表达感激的好机会．请根据以下所给要点，写一篇英语短文．
要点：
（1）给我生命，一直照顾我成长；
（2）努力工作，为我提供良好的生活和教育条件；
（3）拥有爱心，教我学会……；
（4）今天，我要为你们……（自主发挥，至少两点）．
注意事项：
（1）词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息．
You bring me up. I will be with you in your life. You are important persons in the process of my growth. __
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【写作思路】

【参考范文】
You bring me up. I will be with you in your life. You are important persons in the process of my growth．You give me life and take care of me all the time．（给我生命，一直照顾我成长） When I have problems with my study and life，you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me． 【高分句型一】 In order to let me live a pleasant life and receive good education，you always work hard from morning till night． （努力工作，为我提供良好的生活和教育条件）Everyone knows you are the persons full of love．You are ready to help people in need．It is you who teach me to be a kind person．【高分句型二】（拥有爱心，教我做慈爱的人）
Dad and mum，today I'll cook dinner for you．I'll go for a walk with you after dinner．（今天要为父母做的两件事）I hope you will be happy and healthy forever!
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
When I have problems with my study and life，you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me．当我的学习和生活有问题时，你总是耐心地帮助我，鼓励我．
when当……时候，引导时间状语从句，adj +enough +to do sth 足够地……可以做某事，
【高分句型二】
It is you who teach me to be a kind person．是你教会我做一个善良的人．
本句使用了强调句It is +被强调部分+that/who …
（八）【2019 •湖南省湘潭市】
哈佛大学的一项研究表明，爱做家务的孩子更容易体验到幸福感，更有前途．请你以"Help with Some Housework"为题写一篇8o词左右的英语短文，描述你平时所做的家务以及你对做家务的看法．
参考词汇：
Chores
take out the rubbish sweep the floor
wash the clothes do the dishes
water the flowers cook breakfast/lunch …
…
Opinions
Pros：develop our independence take care of ourselves
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Cons：a waste of time no need to …
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注意：文中不得出现真实的校名和人名．
Help with Some Housework
It is reported that children who love doing chores have a better future and are easy to feel happy． As for me， I ___________________________________________________________________________________________
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Help with Some Housework
It is reported that children who love doing chores have a better future and are easy to feel happy． As for me， I often help them do housework． I take out the rubbish away and sweep the floor in the morning． I help my mother cook the lunch．I always wash clothes and do the dishes
for my family． My parents are very happy． Besides， Watering the flowers is also my duty． I like them very much and take good care of them． After supper， I always wash dishes．（平时所作家务）
I think it can develop our independence and take good care of ourselves．【高分句型一】 In a word， the more housework I do， the happier my parents will be．（家务的看法）【高分句型二】
（九）【2019 •辽宁省本溪市】
每年十月份，越来越多的游客来本溪赏枫叶．请你根据以下提示，说说如何给游客可留下"景美人更美"的好印象，从自身做起，做文明本溪人！
提示词：beautiful views美丽的景色
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1．语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范．
2．文中不得出现真实姓名与校名．
3． 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数．

How to be a polite citizen
Benxi is a good place to watch maple leaves （枫叶） in October．________________________________
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How to be a polite citizen
Benxi is a good place to watch maple leaves （枫叶） in October．Let's leave the visitors a good impression not only for the beautiful views ，but also as a Benxi citizen．How to be a polite citizen？（开篇点明题意）
First， We must be friendly．Use"please，OK，welcome" with smile when you talk with visitors． Besides， we should be ready to help others（高分句型一）．Try to be a helpful person． If visitors need us，we should help them．What's more， we should follow the rules． For example，we mustn't step on the grass or pick flowers． We mustn't drop litter carelessly．At last ，we also need to behave well in public．We stand for our city Benxi in public．So it needs our good manners．（从四个方面展开对成为文明市民的论述）
Why not do as above points？Let's try our best to be a polite citizen（高分句型二）．（结尾倡议大家成为文明市民）