2020年中考英语真题分项汇编：专题21 书面表达 考点3 咨询建议类（含解析）

专题21 书面表达

考点3 咨询建议类

（一）【•山东省泰安市】

52.新冠肺炎疫情期间，很多年轻人喜欢上了网上点餐服务。这种订餐方式使人们的生活更加方便快捷，丰富多彩，但同时也存在着不少的弊端。请根据以下思维导图及要求写一篇英语短文，谈谈网上点餐的利与弊，并阐述你的看法和建议。

要求：

（1）语句通顺，意思连贯，可根据提示适当发挥；

（2）词数：80~100（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

（3）文中不得出现学校姓名、地名等与考生本人相关的任何信息。

参考词汇：网上点餐order food online；减少外出reduce going out；规避风险avoid risks；塑料包装plastic packages

With the outbreak of COVID-19, many young people prefer ordering food online.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【写作思路】

本文是一篇材料作文，新冠肺炎疫情期间，很多年轻人喜欢上了网上点餐服务。这种订餐方式使人们的生活更加方便快捷，丰富多彩，但同时也存在着不少的弊端。要求根据所给出思维导图及要求写一篇英语短文，谈谈网上点餐的利与弊，并阐述自己的看法和建议。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。

【参考范文】

With the outbreak of COVID-19, many young people prefer ordering food online.

It’s true that ordering food online has many advantages. First of all, it is convenient and can save time. Besides, we can get all kinds of delicious food by shopping online. We can reduce going out. The most important thing is that the food online is always cheaper. However, there are some problems with ordering food online. The quality of the food seems not as good as it is promised. The plastic packages will pollute the environment. In the way, eating habits are not healthy. In addition, it is not good to improve our independence.

In my opinion, ordering food online should only be used when needed. That’s to say, you may buy things you can’t find in local markets. Besides, people should never rely too much on the Internet.

【名师点评】

1.例文点评：本文紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。而且还使用了一些较好的句式，为文章增添了不少色彩。

2.高分亮点：

短语：First of all，all kinds of，not as…as，in local，too much，on the Internet。

句型：It’s true that ordering food online has many advantages. 的确，网上订餐有很多优势。that引导宾语从句。

      The quality of the food seems not as good as it is promised. 这食物的质量似乎没有它所承诺的那么好。not as…as…不如……，是原级比较。

（二）【•四川省达州市】

76.

近年来，全球自然灾害频发，极端天气频频出现，年新冠肺炎几乎在全球爆发，环境恶化给全球带来的危害正日益凸显。尽管我国政府出台了一系列环境保护方面的政策，采取了很多措施，成效也很显著，但是，我们还需要付出更多的努力。地球是人类共同的家园，时代的一粒灰， 落在个人头上就是一座山，没有人能独善其身。假如你叫李华，作为达州的学生，应该为环境保护做出哪些贡献呢?请以 “Let’s try our best to protect the environment”为题，向达州的学生发出倡议，呼吁大家从小事做起，尽最大的努力保护环境!

写作要点:

（1）了解并让更多的人知道环境保护的重要性；

（2）在日常生活中节约用水，节约能源；

（3）为了减少空气污染，最好乘坐公交车、骑自行车或步行上学；

（4）学会垃圾分类:少用塑料袋。

（5）保护野生动物，不食用野生动物。

写作要求:

（1）要点齐全并适当发挥。

（2）全文字数不少于90词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）条理清楚，句式规范，标点符号和大小写使用正确。

（4）卷面整洁。

参考词汇；（1） reduce  v.减少  （2） sort garbage  垃圾分类  （3） four categories  （四类垃圾）: recyclable, harmful ,dry and wet waste （4） No business, no killing.没有买卖就没有杀害。

Let’s try our best to protect the environment

Dear friends,

I’ m a student of Grade 9 in Dazhou. My name is Li Hua. As we know, we have only one earth. But in recent years, many disasters happened on the earth and unusual weather appeared very often. Even worse, the novel corona-virus broke out nearly all over the world this year. All these bad things were caused by the terrible environment, but the terrible environment was caused by humans. Although our government has made some policies and taken many useful measures to protect the environment in the past few years, there are still many things to do. As students in Dazhou, what should we do?

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If we all keep doing these things, I believe the environment will be better and better. Let’s try our best!

                          A student worrying about the environment

【写作思路】

这是一篇话题作文。要求根据题目“Let’s try our best to protect the environment”和提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。

【参考范文】

Let’s try our best to protect the environment

Dear friends,

I’m a student of Grade 9 in Dazhou. My name is Li Hua. As we know, we have only one earth. But in recent years, many disasters happened on the earth and unusual weather appeared very often. Even worse, the novel corona-virus broke out nearly all over the world this year. All these bad things were caused by the terrible environment, but the terrible environment was caused by humans. Although our government has made some policies and taken many useful measures to protect the environment in the past few years, there are still many things to do. As students in Dazhou, what should we do?

First, we should know and let more people know the importance of environmental protection. Second, we should save water and energy in our daily life. Third, in order to reduce air pollution, it is better to go to school by bus, by bike, on foot or other public transportation instead of using private cars. Fourth, there are four categories of waste: recyclable, harmful, dry and wet waste. We should learn how to sort garbage and use few plastic bags. Fifth, we should protect wild animals and do not eat them.

If we all keep doing these things, I believe the environment will be better and better. Let’s try our best!

A student worrying about the environment

【名师点评】

例文点评：例文采用三段式；时态选用一般现在时；将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中，适当发挥部分也很好地展示了对文章主题的理解，表达出自己的观点态度。

高分亮点：

短语：all over the world；in our daily life；instead of；better and better等。

句型：First, we should know and let more people know the importance of environmental protection.

Third, in order to reduce air pollution, it is better to go to school by bus, by bike, on foot or other public transportation instead of using private cars.

（三）【•四川凉山州】

81.年，COVID-19在全球肆虐，生活因此变得有些艰难。请你根据所提供的信息，以Live in a Healthier Way为题写一篇英语短文，谈一谈怎样以更健康的生活方式度过这段特殊时期。

要求：1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯、通顺。

2. 短文应包括所有内容，可适当发挥，不要逐句翻译。

3. 词数80左右。文章开头和结尾部分已给出，不计人总词数。

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In , people around the world suffer from a kind of serious illness named COVID-19. We have to face more difficulties in our life because of it. ________________________________________________________________

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Thanks to the special period, we have learned that if we live in a healthier way, we can win.

【写作思路】

阅读题干可知是结合年，COVID-19在全球肆虐，生活因此变得有些艰难的情况。以Live in a Healthier Way为题写一篇英语短文，谈一谈怎样以更健康的生活方式度过这段特殊时期。这是一篇建议类作文，写作内容应该包括日常生活方式和生活态度等等。

【参考范文】

Live in a Healthier Way

In , people around the world suffer from a kind of serious illness named COVID-19. We have to face more difficulties in our life because of it.

As we all know, health is importance to us. Only when we are healthy can we study well and enjoy life. So how should we spend this special period in a healthier lifestyle? Keep exercising and drink more water can make us healthier. In order to stay away from disease, we should wash our hands frequently, wear masks and do not get together. It is also important to have a good attitude towards life. No matter how difficult life is, we should face it with a smile. We can develop hobbies, share joys and sorrows with friends and family, and learn to care about others. The better you do, the happier your life will be.

Thanks to the special period, we have learned that if we live in a healthier way, we can win.

【名师点评】

例文点评：这是一篇优秀的例文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确的运用的时态，例文中运用的是一般现在时为主，人称是第一人称为主，主谓一致。例文采取三段式的写作手法，第一段是题干给出的，点明了目前的情况；第二段开始强调健康的重要性，引出话题保持健康的重要性及一些保持健康的方法，从生活方式和生活态度两方面出发；最后一段也是题干给出，表达了积极的态度。例文同时使用一些亮点词句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

高分亮点：

短语：As we all know众所周知；healthy lifestyle健康生活方式；keep doing sth一直做某事；In order to为了；get together一起；have a good attitude towards对……有良好的态度。

句型：（1）Only when we are healthy can we study well and enjoy life. 只有当我们身体健康时，我们才能好好学习，享受生活。Only位于句首的倒装句。

（2）The better you do, the happier your life will be. 你做得越好，你的生活就会越幸福。The+比较级…，the+比较级… 越……,就越……。

（四）【•浙江省湖州市】

53.假定你是李雷，请你对英国朋友Bruce的邮件进行同复。你可以根据邮件内容作适当发挥；邮件中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；词数：80-100；短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。

【写作思路】

这是一篇书信作文。要求根据提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。

【参考范文】

Hi, Bruce!

Thanks for your email. I'm looking forward to the exchange too!

You really don't have to worry a lot about the school rules here. But there are a few things you need to know.

We usually wear uniforms on school days, but you can wear what is suitable. And it'll be kind of cold when you are here so you'd better bring some warm clothes.

We are not allowed to use mobile phones at school. Besides, if we bring food to school, we must eat it outside during the break.

Hope this helps. Tell me if there's anything else you want to know.

Love,

Li Lei

【名师点评】

例文点评：例文采用五段式；时态以一般现在时为主；将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中，适当发挥部分也很好地展示了对文章主题的理解，表达出自己的观点态度。

高分亮点：

短语：look forward to；worry about；need to do sth；kind of；be allowed to do sth等。

句型：And it'll be kind of cold when you are here so you'd better bring some warm clothes.

Besides, if we bring food to school, we must eat it outside during the break.

（五）【•重庆市B卷】

62.某中学对高一新生进行了英语口语能力问卷调查, 以下是其中两个问题的调查数据。假如你是该校高一新生, 请结合下图数据和自身口语情况, 给你的英语老师写一篇短文。

要求∶

1. 80-120词, 开头已给出, 不计入总词数;

2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

参考信息:

1. 描述问卷调查结果（频率、方法）;

2. 介绍自身口语情况（水平、打算·…）;

3. ….

The results of the survey show that 17% of the students hardly ever practise speaking English. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【写作思路】

这是一个看图作文，图中列出了某中学对学生进行的英语口语能力的调查问卷，包括两个问题，一个是“你多久练习说一次英语”；另一个是“你怎样练习说英语”。学生们应仔细观察图表中的信息，将这两个问题的调查结果表达出来。短文中还应包括另外一个内容，即介绍自己口语的情况，并对如何提高口语能力，提出自己的建议。短文应以一般现在时态为主，根据表达需要选择适当的人称。

【参考范文】

The results of the survey show that 17% of the students hardly ever practise speaking English. 45% of the students usually practice speaking English, and 38% of the students practise speaking English sometimes. How do you practise speaking English? Most students speak more only in class. Some of the students talk with friends in English. Some students practise speking English in other ways.

In my opinion, we should talk with our partners in English as much as we can. Also, we should often listen to English stories in order to improve our understanding about English. Never be afraid of speaking English in front of others! This is quite important. Over and above, we should learn more English words. Only in this way, can we be good English speaker!

【名师点评】

例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，叙述条理，结构清晰。文章采取两段式结构，第一段主要介绍该问卷调查的结果，包含了图表中的所有信息，没有遗漏要点，且各部分内容安排合理，有层次；第二段是自己的口语情况，以及对如何提高口语能力的建议。其次短文语法正确，用词准确，句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。短文以简单句结构为基础，还使用了祈使句、宾语从句、非谓语动词等结构，表达流畅，意思连贯。

高分亮点：

短语：talk with；in other ways；in one’s opinion；be afraid of；in this way。

句型：45% of the students usually practice speaking English, and 38% of the students practise speaking English sometimes.；In my opinion, we should talk with our partners in English as much as we can.；Never be afraid of speaking English in front of others!；Only in this way, can we be good English speaker!

（六）【•重庆市A卷】

62.国家提出了将劳动教育(Labor Education)纳入中小学国家课程的方案。为此，你校校报英语栏目English World就开展劳动教育的意义，以及如何在校园内开展劳动教育，发起征文。请你以 "Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School" 为题，写一篇短文参赛。

要求:

1. 80-120词，开头已给出，不计人总词数；

2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

参考信息：

1. 劳动教育的意义(学习生活技能、养成良好习惯……)；

2. 校内劳动教育建议(开设种植课、组织做蛋糕比赛……)；

3. ……

Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School

It's reported that Labor Education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【写作思路】

本文是一篇材料作文，国家提出了将劳动教育(Labor Education)纳入中小学国家课程的方案。为此，学校校报英语栏目English World就开展劳动教育的意义，以及如何在校园内开展劳动教育，发起征文。要求以 "Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School" 为题，写一篇短文参赛。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。

【参考范文】

Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School

It's reported that Labor Education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China. I think it's important. We can learn some life skills and form good habits. Both will help us a lot in the future.

As for how to run the course in our school, I have some ideas. The school can offer classes to teach us how to do the cleaning and grow plants. What's more, the school can set up some clubs, such as cooking club and paper-cutting club. The school can also hold competitions to see who is the best in making cakes. Such activities will make our school life more colorful and meaningful.

I am looking forward to taking the course in the new term. I believe I will do well in it.

【解析】

【名师点评】

1.例文点评：本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第一、第三人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。

2.高分亮点：

短语：a lot，in the future，what's more，set up，such as，look forward to，do well in。

句型：I am looking forward to taking the course in the new term. 我期待着在新学期上这门课。look forward to doing sth期待做某事，固定搭配。

  I believe I will do well in it. 我相信我会做得很好。I believe后接宾语从句；do well in在……方面做得好。