中考英语一轮复习考点过关练习考点56 书面表达之观点看法类（含解析）

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考点五十六 书面表达之观点看法类

一般来说，观点看法类文章的内在逻辑关系十分清晰，它除了考查考生的英文基础，还考查考生的逻辑能力。具体来说就是上下文的衔接过渡和文章层次的体现。文章段落之间的逻辑关系主要由过渡性的词和短语来完成，在修辞中称为＂启、承、转、合＂。＂启＂就是开头，＂承＂就是承接，＂转＂是转折，＂合＂是综合或总结。
1. 用于表示＂启＂的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落或文章的开头。此类过渡性的词和短语有first, first of all, at first, in the first place, firstly, to begin with, to start with, recently, now, at present, in recent years, in general, generally speaking, lately等。
2. 用于表示＂承＂的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落中的第一个扩展句中。此类过渡性的词和短语有second, in addition, besides, then, moreover, what’s more, what’s worse, for example, certainly, obviously, in other words, still, at the same time, no doubt等。
3. 用于表示＂转＂的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落中的第二个扩展句中。此类过渡性的词和短语有but, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, otherwise, while, despite, in spite of等。
4. 用于＂合＂的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落的结论句或文章的结论段中。过渡性词和短语有in a word, in short, above all, after all, finally, therefore, as a result, on the whole, in summary等。
总之，要做好书面表达，需要大家把握以下几个原则：细读提示，抓要点：选择句型，准表达；确定线索，巧组合；适当发挥，保完整；规范书写，争高分；细查全文，除笔误。
一、写作方法——十句作文法
第一段为开头，包括两句。第一句为主题句，提出问题并通过问题点明全文主题；第二句为扩展句，进一步说明和支持主题句。另外，也可调整两句的顺序，由第一句说明情况，第二句提出问题。
第二段为正文，共七句。第一句为主题句，提出本段的主题，它应与第一段的主题相一致。第二句至第七句为扩展句，说明和支持本段的主题。句与句之间要注意运用好过渡词，以使行文流畅。
第三段为结尾，简化为一句，是对全文的总结，并说明作者自己的观点。
三段之间的衔接要灵活运用＂启、承、转、合＂的过渡手段。
二、应急百宝箱
遇到要点不会表达怎么办？词数不达标怎么办？不要急，＂一代，五加，一扩＂帮你轻松解决问题。＂一代，五加，一扩＂具体说来就是：
1. 以实代虚——写实
2. 增加限定语——定语、状语等
3. 增加例子——for example, such as
4. 增加原因——进一步说明
5. 加套语（词块）
6. 加格言、谚语等——进一步说明
7. 扩充建议——自主发挥，点到即可
三、注意事项
1. 观点鲜明，文章一定有一个明确的中心论点——主题。
2. 层次分明，一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持，层次要分明，过渡要自然。
3. 最后一段一般要总结全文，得出一个符合逻辑的结论，突出中心思想。
4. 通常采用一般现在时。
5. 语言简洁有力，一般不采用口语。

一、开头句型
As far as ...is concerned
It goes without saying that...
It can be said with certainty that...
As the proverb says ...
It has to be noticed that...
It’s generally recognized that...
It’s likely that ...
It’s hardly too much to say that...
What calls for special attention is that... 需要特别注意的是
There’s no denying the fact that... 毫无疑问，无可否认
Nothing is more important than the fact that...
What’s far more important is that...
二、衔接句型
A case in point is ... As is often the case...
As stated in the previous paragraph 如前段所述
But the problem is not so simple. Therefore... 然而问题并非如此简单，所以……
But it’s a pity that...
For all that...In spite of the fact that... Further, we hold opinion that...
However, the difficulties in...
Similarly, we should pay attention to... not (that)...but (that)... 不是……而是……
In view of the present station... 鉴于目前形势
As has been mentioned above... 综上所述
In this respect, we many as well (say)... 从这个角度上我们可以说……
However, we have to look at the other side of the coin, that is... 然而我们还得看到事物的另一方面，即……
三、结尾句型
I will conclude by saying... Therefore, we have the reason to believe that... All things considered 总而言之
It may be safely said that...
Therefore, in my opinion, it’s more advisable...
It can be concluded from the discussion that... 从中我们可以得出这样的结论
From my point of view, it would be better if... 在我看来……也许更好
四、万能句型
Let’s take...to illustrate this. 试举例以兹证明
Let’s take the above chart as an example to illustrate this.
It remains to be further studied... There’s question is how...
观点看法类作文的整体结构有一定的模式可循，可以先写对比的一方面，再写另外一方面；也可以将对比的两个方面的不同点——比较着写。
对比观点看法类作文的写作摸板
The topic of 主题 is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favourite. They hold their view for the reason of 理由一 . What’s more, 理由二 . Moreover, 理由三 . While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. First, 理由一 . Second(Besides), 理由二 . Third(Finally), 理由三 .
From my point of view, I think 我的观点 . The reason is that 原因 . As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former (later) is surely a wise choice.


（一）
随着手机功能日益增多，越来越多的年轻人沉迷于手机娱乐活动，成为＂手机控＂一族。假定你是某校学生，请根据以下提示写一篇短文，向某英文报社投稿，谈谈你对该现象的看法和建议。
＂手机控＂的表现
沉迷于手机娱乐活动(聊天、看电影等)，与朋友和家人的交流减少，离开手机会有焦虑症等异常情绪表现……
＂手机控＂的危害
对健康不利，影响学习……
你的建议
……
参考词汇：手机控a phone freak；焦虑anxious(adj.)；沉迷于be addicted to
注意：1. 内容须包括所提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 80词左右。
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（二）
学校最近以＂学生做作业时是否应该在网上找答案？＂为题做了一个调查。调查发现一些学生赞成，但许多学生反对。请根据调查情况和下列表格中的要点提示，以＂Think before you search online＂为题用英语写一篇作文。

赞成者
反对者
你自己
观点
1.做题
2.别人
3.时间
1.于提升能力
2.于思维发展
（至少2点）
注意：1. 内容须包括所提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Think before you search online
Some students now have a new use for the Internet — helping them with their homework. But different people have different ideas about it.
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（三）
亲爱的同学，你生活中有烦恼、学习有压力吗？那我们应该如何正确面对烦恼，有效缓解心理压力呢？请根据提示以＂How to solve our stress＂为题写一篇英语短文。
提示：1. 积极参加体育锻炼，有一个健康的身体。
2. 多与老师、家长和朋友交谈， 说出自己的烦恼。
3. 多听听音乐，多看看书。
4. 尽自己最大努力学习，勇敢面对自己的成绩。
5. 如果经常压力太大，可以去看医生。
要求：1. 内容包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译；
2. 不得透露考生姓名、学校等信息。
3. 80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
How to solve our stress
We all have some problems and in our lives. How should we solve them? _____________________________
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题组一
（一）【2019 •贵州省毕节市】
每年的 6 月 6 日是我国的“爱眼日”，可见保护中小学生的视力非常重要，为此，学校将在英语文化节期间举行一场“爱眼日”英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇英语演讲稿，谈谈你对保护视力重要性的认识和建议。
内容如下：
1. 保护视力的重要性（请写 1 点）；
2. 对保护视力的建议：（1）阅读时注意用眼卫生；（2）少用电子产品；（3）常看绿色植物；（4）做眼保健操；（5）多做户外运动。
要求如下：
1. 结构完整，表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰；
2. 文中不得出现任何真实的人名，学校名等信息；
3. 词数 80 左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：
Sight Day 爱眼日；electronic products 电子产品；eye-protecting exercises 眼保健操
Dear friends,
June 6 is our country’s Sight Day. ____________________________________________________________
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Thank you!
（二）【2019 •广西河池市】
“人生没有彩排，生命没有重来”，你平安、健康、快乐地成长是父母最大的心愿。今年6月下旬学校将举办一场以“Keep away from the danger!” 为主题的英文演讲比赛。假如你是王雷同学，大家推选你参加这次比赛。请跟进以下思维导图提示，写一篇英文演讲稿。
写作提示：
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实姓名和学校名；
2. 所有的提示词都须用上，包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯：
3. 字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚：
4. 词数100词左右。(演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。)

Keep away from the danger!
Hello! Everyone, I’m Wang Lei. The danger is around us. So we must learn how to keep away from the danger, First, we mustn’t go swimming without our parents’ or teachers’ permission.
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In a word, we must try our best to keep away from the danger!
That’s all. Thank you for listening!
（三）【2019 •黑龙江省齐齐哈尔市】
初中生活，精彩纷呈。回首过去你是否感到充实和快乐，展望未来你是否对高中生活充满期待，请结合以下提示谈谈你的感悟。
提示：1. 初中阶段你有哪些收获；
2. 初中阶段你有哪些遗憾或未实现的愿望；
3. 你对未来的高中生活有哪些计划或打算。
要求：1. 80-100词，首句已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰。
The life of my junior high school is coming to an end. ____________________________________________
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（四）【2019 •泰安】
习近平总书记在全国教育大会上提出了“立德树人”的人才培养根本任务，作为初中毕业生，你有什么人生规划？请根据以下提示，写一篇英语演讲稿。
提示：
1. 作为中国人而自豪：过去，我国优秀的传统文化影响了世界：今天，祖国在全国人民的努力下越来越强大，许多科技世界领先；…
2. 为实现“中国梦”而奋斗：学会做一个懂感恩、守规矩、善良诚信的人；不畏难，努力学习知识、提高能力，将来成为一名…
要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，可根据提示适当发挥，不要逐句翻译；演讲中不得提及生个人身份的相关信息，如人名、校名或地名等；词数80—100，开头结尾已给出（不计入词数）。
Hello, everyone! __________________________________________________________________________
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That's all. Thank you!
（五）【2019 •湖南省湘西州】
湘西自治州正在进行“美丽湘西”建设，我们要积极参与“美丽湘西”建设活动，从小事做起，让我们家乡变得更美。作为学生，请以“Start out small”为题，用英语写一篇倡议书。
要点提示：1.多种植树木和花草，不乱砍伐树木。
2.购物时重复使用袋子。
3.不乱扔垃圾，保持河流等干净。
4.遵守公共秩序，做文明学生。
要求：1.80词以上。文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文章须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文意思通顺、语气连贯、过渡自然。不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
参考词汇：protect the environment；reuse bags；plant；cut down；throw；wait in line；be wise；obey public rules
Start out small
Hello, everyone. We should try our best to make our hometown Xiangxi more beautiful and comfortable. What can we do for our hometown? ___________________________________________________________________
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（六）【2019 •镇江市】
假如你是阳光中学的李华，每周五下午你校开设校本必修课(required course)与选修课(elective course),请介绍必修课Travel of Science, 根据个人情况选择一门选修课并说明理由；同时，对你的选择的课程提出建议。
Required course
Elective Course
Subject
Travel of science
l introducing scientists and inventions
Subject
Photography
l taking photos
Gardening
l growing flowers
Teacher
a professor
Teacher
a young reporter
4:00 p.m.-4:45 p.m.
School’s garden
Time & Place
l 2:30 p .m.- 3:15 p.m.
l school hall
Time & Place
l 4:00 p.m.-4:45 p.m.
l City Park
An old gardener
Tip
take notebooks and pens
Tip
Take cameras
tools offered by school
要求：
1. 所写内容必须包括必修课及一门选修课的所有信息；
2. 对你所选择的一门选修课说明理由，并对其提出建议；
3. 文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
5. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
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题组二
（一）（2018 • 山东青岛）
现在，中学生在校内能保证一定时间的运动量，但在校外普遍缺少运动甚至不运动。请就此现象写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法。内容包括：
1. 缺少运动甚至不运动的原因；
2. 缺少运动甚至不运动对学生的影响；
3. 针对这种现象提出合理的改善建议。
要求：1. 词数：80—100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
参考词汇：be short of 缺少
Many students are short of exercise in their spare time now ___________________________________________
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（二）
（2017﹒山东泰安）如今，很多城市出现了一种绿色出行方式――共享单车（bike-sharing），它因环保、便捷而备受青睐，但同时也引发了一些问题。请你根据提示以＂Bike-sharing＂为题写一篇英语短文，表达自己的看法和建议。
要点提示：
Advantages
Be convenient, less pollution, reduce the traffic pressure（减缓交通压力）
Take exercise…
Problems
Throw away, damage（毁损）, be stolen…
Advice
Civilized（文明的）, follow the rules, take good care of…
注意：
1. 短文应包括以上要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名；
3. 词数：80—100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Bike-sharing
Today, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（三）
（2017﹒浙江绍兴）某英语教育网站正在开展主题为＂How can a teenager have a successful life?＂的讨论，为此你采访了一些同学（结果见下表）。请用英语写一篇短文参与讨论，并阐述你的观点。
同学主要观点
你的观点
l 努力学习
l 尊重父母
l 服务社会
l 计划未来
……（至少两条）
注意：（1）短文必须包括表中所有内容，可适当增加细节；
（2）你的观点至少两条；
（3）词数：80—100；
（4）短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：尊重respect
I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.
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（四）
（2017﹒江苏南京）KIDS HAVE AN OPINION TOO!
Hi! I’m Sigmund Friend, the editor (编辑) of a new magazine KIDVOICE.
We like hearing from kids. We know you’ve got things to say.
We want to hear from you.
Here is a topic you might have an opinion about...
注意：
1. 对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥。
2. 词数80左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

Kids and Learning
All kids want to be good at learning. __________________________________________________________
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（一）
（河南省郑州一中汝州实验中学2018届九年级模拟）请根据提示写一篇题为＂The Population Problem＂ 的短文。（80 词左右）
提示：1.人口问题是当今世界上最大的问题之一；
2.中国是世界上人口最多的国家；
3.如果人口增长过快，将会带来许多严重问题（请举例说明） ；
4.我们应继续执行计划生育政策，以控制人口增长。
要求：文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
The Population Problem
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（二）
（重庆市南川三校联盟2018届九年级期中）好的环境能使我们高兴和舒适，改善了环境就意味着改善我们的生活。平时我们应该多种花草和树，别乱扔垃圾，看见垃圾应该把它扔进垃圾箱；别随地吐痰，购物时最好用布袋代替塑料袋，应该记住3Rs，尽自己所能去保护环境，成为一个环保者。
根据以上信息，以＂How to Protect the Environment ＂为题写一篇80词左右的短文。
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（三）
（云南民族大学附属中学2018届九年级期中）＂无规矩不成方圆＂，我们学校有很多规章制度，如课堂规则、食堂就餐规则、宿舍晚就寝规则等，请以＂My School Rules＂为题写一篇文章，介绍一下我们学校的规则，并谈谈你对这些规则的看法。
要求：
1. 注意紧扣主题，意思连贯，语言通顺，书写规范；
2. 不得使用真实姓名和校名，如需使用名字，请用Mike，Gina等英文名字，校名统一用Guangming Middle School；
3. 词数不少于60。
My School Rules
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跟踪训练
（一）
【思路导航】
这是一篇图表作文，要求对当前随着手机功能日益增多，越来越多的年轻人沉迷于手机娱乐活动，成为＂手机控＂一族的现象写一篇文章，说说自己的观点。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
【参考范文】
Today，many people，especially young people，are phone freaks. They are addicted to playing mobile phones. They often use phones to chat with others, watch movies, play games, listen to music or take photos and so on. In fact, they will be anxious without phones.
However, it does harm to their study. Because they spend too much time playing with phones. They can’t have a good rest. They don’t have time to do their homework. They can’t get good grades.
In my opinion, we must use it in a right way. If we take it to school, we mustn’t use it during the class. And remember that study is our first work.
（二）
【思路导航】
本文是一篇话题作文，题目是Think before you search online。主要根据调查情况写一篇调查报告，并写出自己观点。考生首先要认真阅读提示,认真审题，根据提示，确定文章的中心。注意人称和时态。尽量使用熟悉句型，使用简单句式，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性，提示词需用上。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【参考范文】
Think before you search online
Some students now have a new use for the Internet — helping them with their homework. But different people have different ideas about it.
Some students agree with it. They sometimes don’t know the answers to the problems, so they have to turn to the Internet, They think they can learn from other people. At the same time, it’s easy and it saves time. However, not all the students welcome this. Many students think simply copying the answers won’t improve their abilities and it may make students stop thinking.
I think students should first think over the problems by themselves. If we use the Internet properly, it could be a good way to study.
【亮点说明】
这是一篇优秀的作文。上下文意思连贯，用词准确、句子通顺，注意人称和时态。文中使用so，at the same time, however等连词，使文章表达更有条理性。写作内容包括表格中所有提示词和提示内容。这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，语句通顺，意思连贯，是一篇不错的文章。
（三）
【思路导航】
1. 这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当的发挥，说出自己的观点。
2. 动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。
3. 根据材料内容可知用一般现在时来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。
4. 写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文紧密联系，符合逻辑关系。
5. 要注意使用情态动词should 和could，为文章增色。
【参考范文】
How to solve our stress
We all have some problems and stress in our lives. How should we solve them?
Firstly, we should take more part in exercise. Sports can help us to have a healthier body and study better. Secondly, we need to talk with our teachers, parents and friends, try to tell them our trouble. They may give us some useful advice. Thirdly, we can also listen to music and read books. It’s a good way to relax ourselves. Fourthly, we should try our best to study hard and learn to face our grades bravely. Fifthly, if we have too much stress, we’d better see a doctor.
真题再现
题组一
（一）
【写作思路】
本文属于话题作文，谈谈你对保护视力重要性的认识和建议。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
【参考范文】
Dear friends,
June 6 is our country’s Sight Day. As we all know, eyes are windows of the soul. Everyone understands the importance of the eyes. But now more and more students are getting near sighted. So how to protect eyes still remains a question. Here is some advice on how to protect your eyesight.
You should not keep your eyes working for two long when reading, you should keep the book about a foot away from you. After reading for an hour or two, you’d better have a rest by working in the distance or looking at the green plants to make your eye relax. You ought to remember not to read in dim light or in the sun. Don’t read in a moving bus or in bed. Besides, try to use less electric products. What’s more, doing eye-protecting exercises will help you keep good eye sight. Last but not least, we can also try to do more exercise in our spare time.
Only by doing these simple things can we keep good eyesight.
【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关 写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
（二）
【写作思路】
这篇作文要求我们以Keep away from the danger为题，写一篇演讲稿。审题可知，题目中利用思维导图的形式，列举了这篇文章中应该包括的几个要点。观察这个思维导图可知，短文应该从游泳、交通、交友、饮食、学校安全以及毒品等六个方面进行叙述，每个方面都给出了一些提示词，学生们可以利用这些提示词来组织语言，用完整的句子表达出来。文章应使用一般现在时、第一人称为主来叙述。写作时应注意：首先题目中给出的所有提示词以及要点都应包括在内，不要有所遗漏。可以根据表达需要进行拓展，使文章内容更加充实。但应注意拓展内容应与文章主题紧密相连，不要写没有用的东西。其次应注意英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不要根据汉语思维逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句式的正确结构出发，选择适当的单词、短语和句型。句式结构可以简单句为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂结构，提升文章档次。同时语句之间应使用一些衔接成分，注意叙述的层次性，条理清楚，行为连贯。
【参考范文】
Keep away from the danger!
Hello! Everyone, I’m Wang Lei. The danger is around us. So we must learn how to keep away from the danger. First, we mustn’t go swimming without our parents’ or teachers’ permission. When we go swimming, we must wear life jackets. Second, we must obey the traffic rules. We should walk on the pavement. When we cross the street, we mustn’t look at the mobile phones. Third, we may have some friends on line, but we mustn’t believe whatever they say. Besides, don’t meet online friends alone. Fourth, we must wash our hands before having meals. Don’t eat food that goes bad because it is bad for our health. Fifth, when we are in school, we can’t run on the hallways. You should get on well with your classmates and don’t fight with them. If someone threatens you, call for help. Last but not the least, never try drugs. If you see someone selling drugs, call 110 at once.
In a word, we must try our best to keep away from the danger!
That’s all. Thank you for listening!
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，给我们介绍了生活中应如何远离危险，保证我们的安全。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有内容，提示词都使用上了。文章中从六个方面进行了具体的介绍，每个方面前都有表示顺序的词First, Second… Last but not least等，使文章的结构非常清晰，叙述有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。文章中使用了简单句、宾语从句、状语从句、定语从句、祈使句等结构，句式多变，表达准确、清楚。文章中使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如When we cross the street, we mustn't look at the mobile phones、Third, we may have some friends on line, but we mustn't believe whatever they say、Fourth, we must wash our hands before having meals.、You should get on well with your classmates and don't fight with them.、If someone threatens you, call for help.、Last but not the least, never try drugs. If you see someone selling drugs, call 110 at once.等。
（三）
【写作思路】
这是一篇提纲类作文，初中生活，精彩纷呈。回首过去你是否感到充实和快乐，展望未来你是否对高中生活充满期待，请结合以下提示谈谈你的感悟，动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在时态，这方面需要注意的问题比较少。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词
【参考范文】
The life of my junior high school is coming to an end. Since I came to the junior high school, I’ve gained confidence and happiness. With the help of our teachers, I’ve learned how to be a good person as well as plenty of knowledge. I’ve also made some good friends.
However, there is still something that I feel sorry about. Because I was busy with my schoolwork, I couldn’t keep on reading. Once in a while, I felt so upset and anxious that I quarreled with my parents.
In the future, I’ll try to make good use of time and spend more free time reading books. Meanwhile, I’ll get on well with my parents. I believe I’ll have a happy and colorful life.
【名师点评】
这篇短文不使用了大量的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如With the help of our teachers, I’ve learned how to be a good person as well as plenty of knowledge. I’ve also made some good friends.等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。
正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
（四）
【写作思路】
本文属于材料作文，谈论祖国的伟大强盛以及为实现中国梦我们应该做的努力。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
【参考范文】
Hello, everyone! As a Chinese, I am so proud of it. In the past, our great traditional culture made a difference to the world, such as sailing, communicating and so on. Nowadays, our country is becoming stronger and stronger by working hard of all Chinese. A lot of science and technology lead the world, such as high speed, Chang’e 4 and Hong Kong-Zhuhai-Macau Bridge and so on.
As a teenager, we should do as follows to achieve our Chinese dream. First of all, we are supposed to thank all the people who devote themselves to making our country wonderful. What’s more, we need follow the rules. In school we should obey the school rules. Only by doing these dimple things can we become a person that the country needs. In addition, we’d better not lie and be a honest man in order that all people can trust us. Last but not least, we should try our best to work hard and when face difficulties, we never give up. I am going to be a scientists. If I am a scientist, I will do more researches and let other countries admire us.
That's all. Thank you!
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如be proud of, make a difference to, such as, and so on, 比较级and比较级, devote oneself to doing, in order that, try one’s best以及first of all, what’s more, in addition和last but not least等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
（五）
【写作思路】
这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下如何才能为“美丽湘西”建设做出贡献。所提供的材料中列举了我们要积极参与“美丽湘西”建设活动，从小事做起，让我们的家乡变得更美。主要从1. 多种植树木和花草，不乱砍伐树木。2. 购物时重复使用袋子。3. 不乱扔垃圾，保持河流等干净。4. 遵守公共秩序，做文明学生。这四个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。
【参考范文】
Start out small
Hello, everyone. We should try our best to make our hometown Xiangxi more beautiful and comfortable. What can we do for our hometown？In order to make our hometown more beautiful， as students, I think we should start from small things. First of all, we should know the importance of protecting the environment. We should plant more trees and flowers and not cut down trees randomly. Second, we had better reuse the bag when shopping. We can't throw rubbish about, and we should keep the rivers clean and so on. In addition, we must obey public rules and be civilized students. When we got on the bus, we should wait in line.
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
I think we should start from small things. 我认为我们应该从小事做起。we should start from small things.做think的宾语。
【高分句型二】
When we got on the bus, we should wait in line. 我们应该排队等候上车。
句子When we got on the bus是由when引导的时间状语从句。
（六）
【写作思路】
这篇作文要求我们对学校周五下午安排的必修课和选修课程进行介绍。审题可知，短文应使用一般现在时，第一人称为主来叙述。内容应包括以下几个方面：首先介绍必修课程Travel of science，题目中利用表格的形式展示了这个课程的主要内容、老师、上课的时间、地点以及小提示，学生们根据表格用正确的英语表达出来即可；接下来应根据个人情况，从表格中提供的两门选修课中选择一个，阐述自己的理由，并对该课程提出一些建议。这一部分需要学生们展开想象，结合自己的实际生活，补充具体的内容，再用英语表达出来。写作时应注意：首先短文应包括题目中要求的所有内容，不能遗漏要点，而且注意分清层次和结构，使叙述清晰、完整、有条理。合理安排各部分内容，主次分明。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。可以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式和结构，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、表达自然。
【参考范文】
Every Friday afternoon, our school offers required and elective courses. Travel of science is a required course. We can learn about some scientists and their inventions. I think it will be interesting. The course is given by a professor, who is well-known for his lecture. So you mustn't miss it. The course is from 2:30 p.m. to 3:15 p.m. in the school hall. You'd better take notebooks and pens so that you can write down the main points. There are two elective courses, Photography and Gardening. I would like to choose the former because I like taking photos. I think I can learn more skills in the class. The teacher who gives this course is a young reporter. So I think we may have similar thoughts and easy to get along with each other. I want the course to add more chances for us to take photos outdoors.
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，介绍了学校开设的校本必修课程，并从两个选修课中选择了自己喜欢的一个，介绍了自己选择这门课程的原因，并对该课程提出了自己的建议。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，符合题目要求，没有遗漏要点。叙述清晰、有条理，理由充分、合情理。提出的建议也比较中肯，符合该情景。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，句式结构符合英语的表达习惯，短文中用到了简单句、宾语从句、状语从句、定语从句、非谓语动词、被动语态等多种句式和结构，增强了文章的表现力。文中较好的短语和句式有We can learn about some scientists and their inventions.、The course is given by a professor, who is well-known for his lecture.、You'd better take notebooks and pens so that you can write down the main points、The teacher who gives this course is a young reporter.、 So I think we may have similar thoughts and easy to get along with each other.、 I want the course to add more chances for us to take photos outdoors.等等。
题组二
（一）
Many students are short of exercise in their spare time now. They think doing exercise can affect their studies. Therefore they have less time to study. Doing sports is good for their health. A person who takes exercises regularly will keep fit. In the school, students are forced to take exercise in the PE class, they need to join certain activities. In this way, students live in a healthy lifestyle, they won’t get sick easily. But after they leaving school, no one forces them to do so, so they are lazy to take exercise so that their bodies get weaker.
I think students should take exercise every day outside the school. In a word, exercise is helpful, important and absolutely necessary.
【名师点评】话题作文写出的句子要达意，完整，语法正确，合乎习惯，特别是句式，谓语动词形式要有根有据，选用比较有把握的词汇，用恰当的句型写出确切反映内容要求的句子。英语作文要注意人称和时态，注意提供的观点、材料，要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词的正确形式，句子之间的衔接和过渡。英语作文，要忠实于材料，不必扩展，注意用好连词，多用非谓语，慎用较难的句型，一定不能写错句。
（二）
【思路导航】
本文要求以＂Bike-sharing＂为题，根据表格的内容提示，写一篇短文，表达自己对共享单车的看法和建议。写作时，考生要紧密贴合表格中的三个要点：首先，阐述共享单车的优点；其次，列举共享单车带来的问题；最后，根据问题给出个人建议。
【参考范文】
Today, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities. It’s known that it has many advantages. So it’s enjoyed by lots of people.
First of all, it’s very convenient for people to go somewhere. Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bike-sharing. Besides, bike-sharing helps people take more exercise. In this way, it’s helpful to people’s health.
However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen.
In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better, and our environment will be more beautiful.
【亮点说明】
这篇短文内容丰富，表达了所有要点，语言表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在短文中使用了大量的复合句，固定句式，连词及固定短语，为文章增色，如：It’s known that it has many advantages.，First of all, it’s very convenient for people to go somewhere.，In this way, However, it also brings some problems. For example, In my opinion,等。
（三）
【思路导航】
英语教育网站开展主题为＂How can a teenager have a successful life?＂的讨论，采访了一些同学参与讨论，写出他们的观点及自己的观点。因为是叙述同学的现在的观点，所以句子应该用一般现在时，叙述同学的观点用第三人称，叙述自己的观点用第一人称。注意不要遗漏要点，所写的句子应该符合英语语法，不能是汉语式的句子，要使用一些高级词汇及句式。
【参考范文】
I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.
Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. After all, study plays a key role in their life. They also agree they should respect their parents, who look after them every day. Besides, they’re ready to serve the society and in their opinion it’s really meaningful. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.
From my point of view, we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other. Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life.
【亮点说明】
短文用了一些短语和句式，如：do a survey about sth关于某事做调查；respect their parents尊敬他们的父母；look after照顾；make a good plan for sth为某事做一个好的计划；make some good friends交一些好朋友；keep healthy保持健康。用了宾语从句，如：Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.用了because引导的原因状语从句，如：Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life.增加了文章的亮点，也是提分的经典句子。
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本文属于图画作文，主要写一篇关于孩子和学习的作文。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
【参考范文】
Kids and Learning
All kids want to be good at learning. Some children are good at learning，but some children are good at playing，and they are not good at learning，why？This is because some children know how to balance learning and studying.
First，just as the saying goes ＂All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy＂，a good learner should know to play properly，if he or she plays happily，he will try to learning well. Besides，all learning decrease the interest of study. Second，students should make a proper time list，and try to follow the list. Last，parents and teachers should give tips to the students so that students can have a good knowledge of the study. All in all，only when we balance the relation between playing and learning，can we be good at learning.
As a middle school student. I think we should read more books. Reading is good for our physical and mental health. 　
Let’s be active readers and enjoy reading.
【亮点说明】
这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如be good at, this is because, as the saying goes, All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy, properly, follow, tip, knowledge, besides以及all in all等。增强了文章的逻辑关系，上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺。
【名师点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
模拟检测
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本文是材料作文，题目为＂The Population Problem＂。考生首先要认真阅读提示内容：1.人口问题是当今世界上最大的问题之一；2.中国是世界上人口最多的国家； 3.如果人口增长过快，将会带来许多严重问题（请举例说明）；4.我们应继续执行计划生育政策，以控制人口增长。认真审题，根据提示，确定文章的中心。本文主要时态是一般现在时，注意主谓一致。提示要点不要遗漏，不要仅仅翻译汉语内容，可适当发挥，词数约80，不要太少。尽量使用熟悉句型，使用简单句式，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【参考范文】
The Population Problem
The population is one of the biggest problems in the world today. China has the largest population with 1.3 billion. It’s about one fifth of the world’s population. A large population causes many difficulties, not only for every family, but also for the whole nation. It has become a serious problem. In many less developed areas, some parents prefer boys to girls. As a result, many girls can’t go to school. I think we should do something to control the population. One answer is known as the one-child policy. It has worked well in controlling China’s population.
【亮点说明】
这是一篇优秀的作文。上下文意思连贯，用词准确、句子通顺，注意人称和时态，使用一般现在时和现在完成时。覆盖了所有信息，无拼写错误及标点误用，词数符合要求。
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这是一篇材料作文。根据提示内容可知用一般现在时，按照提示内容逐条进行回答，同时还应注意写作中要有适当性的发挥。
【参考范文】
How to Protect the Environment
Good environment can make people feel happy and comfortable. If we improve our environment, that will mean we can improve our living conditions. So the environment is important for all of us. I think we should do something we can to make our environment better. For example, we mustn’t throw rubbish here and there. If we find rubbish, we should pick it up and throw it into the dustbin. We should also plant more trees to make our planet green. What’s more, we mustn’t spit everywhere. While shopping, we’d better use cloth bags instead of plastic ones. We should remember 3Rs: Reduce, Reuse, Recycle and try our best to protect the environment to become a environmentalist. In this way, we can have a better and greener earth to live in.
【亮点说明】
这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如be important for all of us，make our environment better，for example，here and there，pick it up，instead of，try our best，in this way等。而If we improve our environment, that will mean we can improve our living conditions. / I think we should do something we can to make our environment better./ If we find rubbish, we should pick it up and throw it into the dustbin.等多种从句的运用更是为文章增色不少，是本篇习作的亮点。
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这是一篇话题作文，话题是＂My School Rules＂，介绍自己学校的规则，并谈谈你对这些规则的看法。本文介绍规则，应使用must，have to，should，shouldn’t，be（not）allowed to等表示允许或禁止的词语；本文时态是一般现在时。注意：1. 注意紧扣主题，意思连贯，语言通顺，书写规范；2. 不得使用真实姓名和校名，如需使用名字，请用Mike，Gina等英文名字，校名统一用Guangming Middle School；3. 词数不少于60。写出的句子要达意，完整，语法正确，合乎习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。尽量避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【参考范文】
My School Rules
My school has many school rules for the students to follow. First, in class, when having a lesson, we can’t make any noise and should listen to the teacher carefully. We can’t chat or eat something in class. We shouldn’t be late for class. Second, for eating meals, we should go to the school canteen and wait in line while buying. We shouldn’t jump the line and spit in public. Third, in dormitory, we are not allowed to be absent for the whole night. We must turn off the lights on time and go to sleep instead of talking so much, which can affect others.
I think all the rules are good for us to have a good order in school. They can make us study our lessons better. We should obey the school rules.
【亮点说明】
这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章，特别是表示顺序的词（First, Second, Third）的使用，使文章表达更具有条理性。