中考英语一轮复习随堂练习考点44 书面表达之观点看法类 (含解析)
展开考点44 书面表达之观点看法类
一般来说,观点看法类文章的内在逻辑关系十分清晰,它除了考查考生的英文基础,还考查考生的逻辑能力。具体来说就是上下文的衔接过渡和文章层次的体现。文章段落之间的逻辑关系主要由过渡性的词和短语来完成,在修辞中称为"启、承、转、合"。"启"就是开头,"承"就是承接,"转"是转折,"合"是综合或总结。
1. 用于表示"启"的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落或文章的开头。此类过渡性的词和短语有first, first of all, at first, in the first place, firstly, to begin with, to start with, recently, now, at present, in recent years, in general, generally speaking, lately等。
2. 用于表示"承"的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落中的第一个扩展句中。此类过渡性的词和短语有second, in addition, besides, then, moreover, what’s more, what’s worse, for example, certainly, obviously, in other words, still, at the same time, no doubt等。
3. 用于表示"转"的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落中的第二个扩展句中。此类过渡性的词和短语有but, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, otherwise, while, despite, in spite of等。
4. 用于"合"的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落的结论句或文章的结论段中。过渡性词和短语有in a word, in short, above all, after all, finally, therefore, as a result, on the whole, in summary等。
总之,要做好书面表达,需要大家把握以下几个原则:细读提示,抓要点:选择句型,准表达;确定线索,巧组合;适当发挥,保完整;规范书写,争高分;细查全文,除笔误。
一、写作方法——十句作文法
第一段为开头,包括两句。第一句为主题句,提出问题并通过问题点明全文主题;第二句为扩展句,进一步说明和支持主题句。另外,也可调整两句的顺序,由第一句说明情况,第二句提出问题。
第二段为正文,共七句。第一句为主题句,提出本段的主题,它应与第一段的主题相一致。第二句至第七句为扩展句,说明和支持本段的主题。句与句之间要注意运用好过渡词,以使行文流畅。
第三段为结尾,简化为一句,是对全文的总结,并说明作者自己的观点。
三段之间的衔接要灵活运用"启、承、转、合"的过渡手段。
二、应急百宝箱
遇到要点不会表达怎么办?词数不达标怎么办?不要急,"一代,五加,一扩"帮你轻松解决问题。"一代,五加,一扩"具体说来就是:
1. 以实代虚——写实
2. 增加限定语——定语、状语等
3. 增加例子——for example, such as
4. 增加原因——进一步说明
5. 加套语(词块)
6. 加格言、谚语等——进一步说明
7. 扩充建议——自主发挥,点到即可
三、注意事项
1. 观点鲜明,文章一定有一个明确的中心论点——主题。
2. 层次分明,一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持,层次要分明,过渡要自然。
3. 最后一段一般要总结全文,得出一个符合逻辑的结论,突出中心思想。
4. 通常采用一般现在时。
5. 语言简洁有力,一般不采用口语。
一、开头句型
As far as ...is concerned
It goes without saying that...
It can be said with certainty that...
As the proverb says ...
It has to be noticed that...
It’s generally recognized that...
It’s likely that ...
It’s hardly too much to say that...
What calls for special attention is that... 需要特别注意的是
There’s no denying the fact that... 毫无疑问,无可否认
Nothing is more important than the fact that...
What’s far more important is that...
二、衔接句型
A case in point is ... As is often the case...
As stated in the previous paragraph 如前段所述
But the problem is not so simple. Therefore... 然而问题并非如此简单,所以……
But it’s a pity that...
For all that...In spite of the fact that... Further, we hold opinion that...
However, the difficulties in...
Similarly, we should pay attention to... not (that)...but (that)... 不是……而是……
In view of the present station... 鉴于目前形势
As has been mentioned above... 综上所述
In this respect, we many as well (say)... 从这个角度上我们可以说……
However, we have to look at the other side of the coin, that is... 然而我们还得看到事物的另一方面,即……
三、结尾句型
I will conclude by saying... Therefore, we have the reason to believe that... All things considered 总而言之
It may be safely said that...
Therefore, in my opinion, it’s more advisable...
It can be concluded from the discussion that... 从中我们可以得出这样的结论
From my point of view, it would be better if... 在我看来……也许更好
四、万能句型
Let’s take...to illustrate this. 试举例以兹证明
Let’s take the above chart as an example to illustrate this.
It remains to be further studied... There’s question is how...
观点看法类作文的整体结构有一定的模式可循,可以先写对比的一方面,再写另外一方面;也可以将对比的两个方面的不同点——比较着写。
对比观点看法类作文的写作摸板
The topic of 主题 is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favourite. They hold their view for the reason of 理由一 . What’s more, 理由二 . Moreover, 理由三 . While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. First, 理由一 . Second(Besides), 理由二 . Third(Finally), 理由三 .
From my point of view, I think 我的观点 . The reason is that 原因 . As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former (later) is surely a wise choice.
A
在本学期居家学习期间,你是如何开展学习的?有什么收获?请结合你的学习经历和体验谈一谈。(除诗歌外文体不限。)
Expressions for references:
take online courses, watch video lectures, organize Wechat groups, share the experience
follow the advice, the self-learning ability
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【答案】During this term, we mainly study at home because of the epidemic. We take online courses and watch video lectures to gain the knowledge. Besides, our teachers organize Wechat groups to help us discuss the problems and answer our questions. Through the way, we students can share the experience and follow the advice. I think this is very hard for me because it requires a strong self-learning ability which I desperately lack. So it is also an opportunity for me to improve myself.
B
学校英文校刊就音乐和美术是否应该纳入初中毕业学业考试展开了调研,同学们各抒己见。请你根据下表内容,用英文写一篇作文,讨论调研结果,并谈谈你的看法。
赞成的人
1、更多学习音乐和美术的机会
2、提高我们的技能
反对的人
更多学科,更大压力
你的观点
...
要求:1、短文应包含上述信息。开头已给出。
2、短文应结构完整,语句通顺,衔接自然。
3、文中不能出现个人真实信息。
4、词数:80词左右。
Last week, we made a survey about whether music and art should be included in the entrance examination for the high school. Students have different opinions.
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【答案】参考范文:
Last week, we made a survey about whether music and art should be included in the entrance examination for the high school. Students have different opinions.
Some students think that it offers us more chance to study music and art. Therefore, we will pay more attention to them, which can improve our art skills.
However, a few students disagree with it. If music and art are in the exam, there will be more subjects to prepare for, and it needs more time and energy. So students will be under too much pressure.
In my opinion, music and art should be in the entrance examination for high school. As we all know, art and music play an important role in our life, which can help us develop our interests and make our life more colorful. The most important thing is that we can relax ourselves by art and music in Grade 9.
C
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Henry想了解你们"停课不停学"期间在线学习(e-learming)的情况。请你根据表格内容提示,用英语给他写一封电子邮件,谈谈自己的感受与看法。词数80左右。
Advantages
◆save time
◆comfortable
Disadvantages
◆sore eyes
◆…
Your opinion
…
参考词汇:self-disciplined adj.自律的
注意事项:
1、必须包含所提示的信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2、意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3、请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。
Dear Henry,
I'm glad that you are ineresed in our e-learning. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Harry,
I'm glad that you are interested in our e-learning. It's quite different from studying at school.
At first, lots of time was saved because we didn't have to travel to and from school. I felt so excited to sit comfortably before the computer. But later on, my parents were stricter with me. I was very nervous. What's worse, I had sore eyes for spending too much time online per day.
In my opinion, e-learning is suitable for those who are self-disciplined. It's better for most students to study with their classmates and with the direct help of their teachers.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
D
2020年的新型冠状病毒(Novel coronavirus)为人类带来了灾难。因为疫情的原因,开学推迟了很长一段时间,学生只能在网上学习。请你以Online learning为题,用英文写一篇短文,谈谈网络学习的利与弊。
要点如下:
1. 网络学习的好处:
1) 方便,不用去学校。2)不懂可以看录像重新学习。3)养成良好的学习习惯。
2. 网络学习的弊处:
1) 对眼睛不好。2)不容易集中注意力。3)不能小组学习,有问题不能及时解决…
3. 个人观点:…….
要求:
1. 词数110词左右(短文的首句已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 要点提示均须涉及,可适当增加内容;
3. 字迹工整,卷面整洁,文意连贯,语言流畅;
4. 不用真实姓名、校名、地名。
参考词语:advantage; convenient; video; develop; pay attention to; group; solve…
Online learning
Nowadays we have to study online because of the NCP.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Online learning
Nowadays we have to study online because of the NCP. As we all know, everything has two sides, so does online learning.
On the one hand, online learning has many advantages. First of all, it is convenient for us to study. We can have classes at home instead of going to school. And after class we can find the videos which we didn’t understand and then study again. Secondly, it can help us develop the ability of self-learning. Besides, online learning can make us form a good learning habit.
On the other hand, online learning also has disadvantages, too. Studying online for a long time is bad for our health, especially for our eyes. Meanwhile, it’s hard for us to pay attention to listening to the lessons without the teachers’ supervision. What’s more, we can’t solve the problems in time by asking the teacher for help or studying in groups.
In my opinion, I don’t like online learning at all. I look forward to studying in the classroom.
E
Nick的班级上周在英语课上举行了关于是否缩短寒暑假并增加春秋假的讨论,假如你是Nick,请你根据下表中的讨论记录,结合你对此事的看法,用英语写一篇短文。
赞成
1.目前学期长而枯燥,学生无法充分休息;(或自拟内容)
2.春秋两季风景优美,可以感受自然之美。(或自拟内容)
反对
1.一年分成四个学期,影响学习效果;(或自拟内容)
2.作业可能因此变多,加重学习压力。(或自拟内容)
你的观点
……(请自拟至少一点内容)
注意:1.词数90左右,文章的开头已经写好,不计入总词数;
2.文章必须包含所给要点,具体内容可以适当发挥,不要简单翻译;
3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
We held a discussion about whether to shorten( 缩短) the summer and winter holidays and add the spring and autumn holidays last week. Opinions are different.
Some students think____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
We held a discussion about whether to shorten(缩短)the summer and winter holidays and add the spring and autumn holidays last week. Opinions are different.
Some students think that the terms are long and boring at present and students can't get enough rest. Spring and autumn have beautiful views. If the spring and autumn holidays are added, students will have more chances to feel the beauty of the nature.
Some students think if we add the spring and autumn holidays, a year will be divided into four terms and it will have a bad effect on teaching and learning. If so, students may have more homework to do and get more pressure to face.
I don't think we need to add the spring and autumn holidays, but we need more holidays without too much homework. It will be better for students to have more time for their hobbies.
A【2020 •甘肃武威市】
IX. 书面表达
71.父母是我们最亲的人,但我们有时会在与父母沟通时遇到困难。请根据所给思维导图的提示,以"How to Communicate with Our Parents"为题用英语写一篇短文,谈谈与父母沟通的技巧和做法。
要求:
1.文中需包含思维导图中的主要内容;
2.句子及篇章结构准确、连贯、书写规范;
3.需做适量拓展;
4.词数:80词左右。(标题和第一段已给出,不计入总词数;无需抄写在答题卡对应作答区域)
How to Communicate with Our Parents
Communication with parents is one of the first things we have done since we were born. As we grow older, we'll find it's not easy to communicate with our parents openly and effectively. So what should we do when communicating with them? Here are some of my ideas.
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【写作思路】
这篇作文要求以How to Communicate with Our Parents“怎样和我们的父母交流”为题,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈与父母沟通的技巧和做法。题目中给出了一个思维导图,学生们写作前,应先仔细观察思维导图,明确图中展示的内容以及文章的结构,然后组织语言,并对细节进行适当拓展,用正确的英语表达出来。审题可知,这篇短文应用一般现在时态、第一人称叙述。
【参考范文】
How to Communicate with Our Parents
Communication with parents is one of the first things we have done since we were borm. As we grow older, we'll find it's not easy to communicate with our parents openly and effectively. So what should we do when communicating with them? Here are some of my ideas.
Firstly, we can make a list of things our parents and we disagree about most. Try to find out the reason why we disagree with each other. Accept each other's ideas little by little. If we still have disagreements, we'd better not get too angry. Secondly, we should talk with them more! Sharing ideas can make us closer. Besides, we should also learn how to really listen. Listening is a skill that must be learned and practiced. Finally, be sure to be polite. We are a family in which everyone is loved and cared for.
B【2020 •江苏省淮安市】
VII. 书面表达
76.2020年6月23日上午,淮安市首届以 “龙舟竞渡迎端午” 为主题的大运河龙舟公开赛在淮安清江浦区隆重开幕。这项活动的开展不仅弘扬了中国传统文化,也给人们带来了生活的乐趣。
请围绕 “端午节” 这话题写一篇短文,内容包括以下要点:
1. 叙述你今年如何度过端午小长假(包括时间、地点、人物、经过);
2. 你对这些活动的感悟(活动的意义,……);
3. 今后,你将如何弘扬祖国传统文化(经常参加有关传统文化的活动,……)
参考词汇:
聚餐have big dinner; 看龙舟赛watch the dragon boat race;
包粽子make rice dumplings;讲屈原的故事tell the story of Qu Yuan.
注意:
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
2. 词数在80-100之间, 已给出的文字不计入总词数。
The Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional festival in our country.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
这是一篇材料作文,写一篇短文介绍一下今年如何度过端午小长假,对这些活动的感悟以及将如何弘扬祖国传统文化,叙述如何度过端午小长假时用一般过去时,表达感悟时可用一般现在时和一般将来时,人称上主要用第一人称和第三人称。
【参考范文】
The Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional festival in our country. I’ll never forget this year’s Dragon Boat Festival. I had a good time on vacation. I did a lot of interesting things. I helped my mother make rice dumplings. It was difficult but fun. Then I had a big dinner with my family. It was a happy time to be with my family. My parents told me the story of Qu Yuan. I learned a lot about Chinese history and culture. One of the most exciting things was watching the dragon boat races. People did these activities in order to let the people old and young remember poet Qu Yuan. These activities not only carry forward the traditional Chinese culture, but also bring people the joy of life.
In my opinion, I think we should hold more activities to celebrate the Chinese traditional festival. Festivals play an important part in Chinese culture. It is our duty to respect the traditions and make Chinese culture known to the world.
C【2020 •镇江市】
七、书面表达
66.技术进步带来学习方式的变化。假如你是李华,参与某英语报组织的关于两种学习方式的讨论。请根据报纸上提供的信息,谈谈你喜欢的其中一种学习方式及理由,并对这种学习方式提出你认为的不足。
Traditional learning in a classroom
● fixed timetable
a plan made by a school
● face-to-face communication
● colorful class activities
● team spirit
Modern learning on the Internet
● flexible(灵活的) timetable
a plan made by oneself
● online communication
● rich learning resources
● any place with the Internet
要求:
1. 所写内容必须包括一种学习方式的所有信息;
2. 对你喜欢的学习方式说明理由,并提出你认为的不足;
3. 文章不少于90词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 语意通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
5. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
With the development of modern technology, the way of leaning is changing. I think____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本文是一篇材料作文,题目要求以李华名义就“学习方式”写一篇文章。题目列出了两种学习方式,一是传统的在教室学习,二是现代化的网上学习,要求选择其中一种自己喜欢的学习方式进行分析,谈谈这种学习方式特点、自己喜欢的理由以及存在的不足等,以上要点缺一不可。根据题目要求可知,本文时态为一般现在时,人称以第一人称为主,注意主谓一致问题。
【参考范文】
With the development of modern technology, the way of learning is changing. I think I still prefer the traditional learning in a classroom. First, there is a fixed timetable. A clear plan is often made by a school, so I don't need to think about how to arrange when to learn different subjects. Second, we can have the face-to-face communication with both teachers and classmates. Third, there are colorful activities in class. In this way, I can learn the new knowledge happily. What's more, learning in the classroom can help me develop a sense of team spirit, so I can learn how to get along with others.
However, when I study in the classroom, sometimes I can't follow my teacher. And learning in the classroom can't provide enough resources for me to choose from.
D【2020 •潍坊市】
五、写作
46.Teens Around the World是一个国际青少年网站,近日有人发帖,询问有关网课的事情。假设你是李华,请结合自己上网课的体会,用英语回帖。
注意:
1.不要出现考生本人信息;
2.80词左右。
Teens Around the World
Hey, guys! You've had online learning for some time. What do you think of this new way? Any advantages or disadvantages? Looking forward to your replies.
Leo, Italy
Hi Leo,
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Li Hua,
China
【写作思路】
该题目属于议论文写作。在写作时应根据贴的内容提示讲述网课的优势和劣势并发表自己的看法。
【参考范文】
Hi Leo,
Students in our school have taken two-month online learning because of novel coronavirus. The serious disease has a great influence on both our life and our study. We have no choice but to adapt ourselves to online learning.
Actually, online learning has its own advantages. First of all, we have a comfortable learning environment while learning online at home. Secondly, there are lots of free courses online so we can choose what we like to learn. Thirdly, it is convenient for us to go over our lessons because we can replay them.
However, online learning also has some disadvantages. For example, spending too much time learning online is bad for our eyes. What’s more, we are easy to be influenced by computer games while learning online. In addition, if the network is poor, we can’t communicate with teachers fluently.
In my opinion online learning is a new way of learning. We should make use of its advantages and try to make great progress during such a special period.
Li Hua,
China
E【2020 •山西省】
十、书面表达 请将短文写在答题卡相应的位置上。
60.
教育就是善意的干预。在我们的成长过程中时常会面对来自父母或老师的提醒与批评,有的同学不理解,有的甚至会有过激的反应。如何客观、冷静地对待这种问题,需要我们认真、理性地思考,并做出合理应对,这正是教育要达到的目的。
请针对以上现象,结合生活中的经历,写一篇短文。
内容包括:
1. Your opinion about this phenomenon (现象)
2. An experience you had/heard/saw
3. What you have learned from it
要求:
1. 词数不少于80词;
2. 参考词汇仅供参考;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
remind v.提醒 criticize v.批评 objective adj.客观的 calm adj.冷静的 reasonable adj.理性的
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【写作思路】
这是一篇材料作文。要求针对我们成长过程中,面对来自父母或老师的提醒与批评,有的同学不理解,有的甚至会有过激的反应这一现象,结合生活中的经历,写一篇短文,短文要求包含对这一现象的感想,自己所看或所听到的事情,从中学到的道理。
【参考范文】
As far as I'm concerned, it is of great importance to stay calm and reasonable when our parents and teachers blame or criticize us, which is beneficial for our lifelong development.
I still remember the day that I had an English class. Seeing Li Ming falling asleep, our teacher, Miss Hu, woke him up and reminded him to listen to her carefully. To my surprise, Li Ming rushed out of the classroom without permission. It was so impolite and rude to do so. Later, I talked with him and he realized that the teacher expected to help him develop a good habit and he wasn't so calm at that time. Therefore, he picked up his courage and said sorry to Miss Hu in front of the whole class.
It's a good idea to keep calm and think about it for a moment whenever being blamed or criticized. Sometimes a small change of yourself may lead to a big difference to your life.
F【2020 •黑龙江省牡丹江市】
87. (B)2020年是不同寻常的一年。“新冠疫情”的爆发使我们的学习和生活发生了很大的变化,同时也引发了人们的思考。请你根据思维导图谈谈“新冠疫情”带给我们的影响以及我们从中得到的启示。要求:不少于90词,可适当发挥。
The outbreak of COVID-19 has made a big difference to our life. We have to ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本题为材料作文,要求就COVID-19的爆发以及其带来的影响写一篇文章。文章时态应用现在时或过去时,人称用第一人称。
【参考范文】
The outbreak of COVID-19 has made a big difference to our life. We have to stay at home instead of going out during the Spring Festival. It made us feel quite bored. Since we took online classes at home, there were no teachers or classmates around. We missed our teachers and classmates very much. All of us had to wear masks to protect ourselves from COVID-19 when going out.
What can we learn from the outbreak of COVID-19? First, we should develop healthy living habits to ensure us a healthy body and a good mood. Second, we should help others in need. Third, we should cherish every moment with our loved ones.
G【2020 •内蒙古通辽市】
41. 英语有句俗语:“Ten thousand lines can pull a boat.”从这句话中我们深刻体会到团队协作(teamwork)的重要性,请你分享一次团队协作的经历,如:体育运动,小组合作学习,团队游戏等,并谈谈你对团队协作的看法。
要求:
1.思路清晰,语句通顺,书写规范。
2.文中不得出现与考生本人相关的校名和姓名等真实信息。
3.词数:80词左右的短文。
Teamwork
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【写作思路】
该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应根据内容提示讲述自己团队合作的一次经历并发表对团队合作的看法。
【参考范文】
Teamwork
It is said that “Ten thousand lines can pull a boat.” Teamwork plays an important part in our daily life.
I still remember when I was in Grade 8, my physics was very poor. I had a really hard time with it. Once in class, I studied with some classmates together. I was very relaxed and asked my classmates a lot of questions about physics. I didn't feel stressed out at all. At last, I finished my homework by myself for the first time. How excited I was! Because of studying in groups, I am not worried about physics any more. I get more confidence with my classmates' help. It also gives me more chances to improve myself in many ways.
In my opinion, working in a team provides a chance for us to communicate with each other. It is a way to broaden our horizon and to establish our friendship with others. To sum up, to learn to work in a team is really necessary and important and we should try to enjoy it.
H【2020•鄂州市】
58.你的偶像是谁?你崇拜谁?下表是腾飞中学一些学生的回答,假如你是该校的一位学生,请根据下表的文字提示,谈谈你校同学的偶像观,并适当发表自己的观点。写一篇英语短文。
过去的偶像:歌星、影视明星
1.明星有酷的发型和服饰,他们很时尚;
2.他们有天赋,会表演有趣的节目;
3.他们的表演让人放松,让我们的生活丰富多彩。
如今的偶像:科学家、医护人员等
1.科学家发明高科技产品来保卫国家安全,提高人们的生活水平;
2.医生和护士拯救人们的生命,帮助人们摆脱痛苦,恢复健康;
3.当国家和人民处于困境时,他们用智慧,勇气、辛勤的工作来帮助人们。
你的观点
那些在危难中帮助我们的人们更值得我们尊重和崇拜,作为学生的我们……
要求:1.80-100词。(开头的首句已给出,不计算在词数内)
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其它相关信息,否则,不予评分。
参考词汇:idol 偶像 fashionable时尚的 wisdom 智慧 respect 尊重
Last week, our school did a survey about “Who is your idol?”. Here are our answers. In the past, we_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
这篇短文要求学生们根据题目中给出的表格,谈一谈学生们的偶像观,并发表自己的看法。审题可知,这篇短文的主要内容应包括三个方面:首先是同学们过去所崇拜的偶像;然后介绍现在同学们的偶像;最后发表自己的看法。表格中有非常详细的内容提示,这些也是学生们组织文章内容的依据和提纲,注意要将表格中所有内容都包括在内,可以适当拓展,补充一些细节,但不能遗漏要点。短文应以第一人称、一般现在时和一般过去时为主来叙述。
【参考范文】
Last week, our school did a survey about “Who is your idol?”. Here are our answers.
In the past, we thought singers and movie stars were our idols. They always have cool hairs and clothes. They are fashionable. Also, they are talented and can put on funny shows. Their performances are so relaxing that it makes our life colorful. But now we think scientists and medical workers are our idols. Scientists invent high-tech products to protect national security and improve people’s living standard. Doctors and nurses save people’s lives and help them get out of pain and back to health. When our country and people are in trouble, they help people with wisdom, courage and hard work.
In my opinion, those who help us when we are in need deserve our respect and admiration. As students, we should learn from them and study hard to be a useful person to the country and society.
A(2020河北省九年级中考摸底)
某英语论坛发起主题为“How to get on well with classmates”的讨论,呼吁大家关注同学关系,友好相处,建设和谐校园。假如你是李华,请你就这一主题发表自己的看法。
提示:(1)Do you think it is important to get on well with classmates? Why or why not?
(2)Give some advice on getting on well with classmates.(At least 3 pieces)
要求:(1)短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
(3)词数80个左右。
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【答案】例文:
My name is Li Hua, a 15-year-old middle school student. As for getting on well with classmates, I think it is really important to every student. One of the main reasons is that no one can live alone in the world. Besides, if you get on well with others, you will feel happier and your school life will be more colorful.
However, how to get on well with others is really a problem puzzling most of us. In my opinion, the most important is respect, you should respect other people like respect yourself, or they won’t respect you. Toleration is necessary, sometimes other people may hurt you inadvertently, don’t be mad, just forgive them. In addition, if you can help other people with pleasure and show your consideration for them, everybody will like to be with you anyway, remember the point: treat everyone as you want to be treated.
B(2020山东省泰安市泰山区中考一模)
今年春节后肆虐全国的新冠肺炎考验着每一个中国人。面对疫情,英雄的中华儿女 众志成城:除夕夜“最美的逆行者”…..白衣天使奔赴抗击一线,让我们倍感鼓舞;坚守一线的工作者与志愿者,让我们钦佩不己;全国人民对湖北及武汉的无私援助,更让我们热血沸腾。在抗击疫情的日子你做了些什么?疫情过后你又有什么感想和打算呢?
疫情中的我
1. 居家隔离,讲究卫生,坚持锻炼。
2. 帮助做家务,坚持读书与学习。
3. …
我的感想
1. 对医务工作者的感谢。
2. 对钟南山、李兰娟想说…
3. …
我的打算
1. 努力学习,争取考入理想的高中。
2. …
要求:
1. 字数80—100
2. 文中不要出现真实的校名和人名。
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【答案】例文:
Because of the outbreak of COVID-19, Chinese had a special Spring Festival. During this special period, I stayed at home and did some housework to keep my house clean and tidy. I also kept doing sports every day to keep me stronger and healthier. At the same time, I kept on learning online, listening to our teachers and finishing all the homework. I also read some books and magazines.
Now I’d like to show my gratitude to all the doctors and nurses, especially Zhong Nanshan and Li Lanjuan. I want to say "Thanks. You are our heroes." I think they risked their lives to protect the people.
I plan to study harder to get good grades so that I can enter my ideal high school. And I want to be a doctor in the future to save more people.
C(2020上海市普陀区中考二模)
Write at least 60 words on the topic “My harvest in spring” 【以“春天的收获”为题,写一篇不少于60词的短文,标点符号不占格】
提示:前段时间,大家在家学习,不少同学在这段时间内不仅培养了自主学习能力还学习了不少其他本领,收获颇丰。请结合具体事例谈谈自己某方面的收获以及从中获得的感悟。
(注意:短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分)
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【答案】例文:
My harvest in spring
A period of time ago, each student learnt at home because of the disease. Many of students not only developed the ability to learn alone but also learnt other skills.
As for me, I often spent some time learning to cook food after I finished my homework. In this way, I can offer help to my parents, which allows them to have more time to relax. I think that the skills I have learnt will help me improve myself.
D(2020吉林省长春市宽城区中考一模)
犯错误是我们生活中的一部分。很多时候如果没有犯错,我们就不可能找到合适和正确的方法,然而,很多人害怕犯错误。请你用英语写一篇文章讲述一件你曾经亲身经历过的犯错误的事情,并表达你对犯错误的观点。
要求:1.条理清晰,内容完整,语句通顺,书写工整;2. 文中请勿提及你的真实姓名和学校;3.不少于80字。
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【答案】例文:
It is common that everyone may make mistakes. Some people are afraid of making mistakes. But it is helpful to us. I tell you my experience.
I met with some problems about how to make sentences with some words. I tried them some times, but I still made wrong sentences. When my teacher told us the correct sentences, I had a good understanding of the uses of the words immediately. What’s more, I remember the sentences till now.
So some mistakes can have a great effect on you. It is a good sign that you can try new things and grasp it better.
E(2020北京市昌平区中考二模)
“只有身体好才能学习好、工作好, 才能均衡地发展”—周恩来。
此次新冠疫情爆发(coronavirus outbreak)虽然限制了我们的活动范围, 但是我们还要坚持日常锻炼的习惯。请你谈谈在疫情影响下锻炼身体的重要性, 以及我们在家如何进行锻炼。
提示词语: keep healthy, fight against, gymnastics, push-up, sit-up.
提示问题:
●Why do we need to do exercises during the coronavirus outbreak?
●How do we do exercises at home?
Without enough exercises, we can't have a happy life. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Without enough exercises, we can't have a happy life. Doing exercises during the outbreak of coronavirus is especially important, because it's a good way to keep us healthy in order to fight against the coronavirus.
There're various ways of doing exercise at home and you should choose what suits you best. It's a good idea to download the videos of gymnastics, and do it regularly. We can also do some simple exercises, such as push-ups and sit-ups. Having a match with our parents will make the exercises interesting and exciting.
Only by doing enough exercises can we stay fit and win the war with coronavirus.
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