高中英语2024届高考复习读后续写素材（情绪描写+转折思维）
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情绪描写句
一、表示“流泪”
1.Tears blurred one’s eyes./One’s eyes got misty./One’s eyes misted/dimmed with tears.泪眼模糊
2....be close to tears几乎要哭了
3.tears (roll down one’s eyes/cheeks/face)泪水落下
【例句】
1)当得知我被重点大学录取时，我妈差点儿就哭了。My mother was close to tears when she heard I was admitted to a key university.
2)他站在一个角落里，泪流满面。He stood in a corner with tears rolling down his face.
二、表示“因……颤抖”
tremble/shiver/shake (with fear, panic excitement, rage...)
【例句】
1)她双唇颤抖着，泪珠顺着面颊滚落下来。Her lips shivered and big tears rolled down her cheeks.
2)他握紧拳头，气得发抖。He clenched his fists, trembling with rage.
3)他躺在那里很长时间，害怕得发抖。He lay there for a long time, shivering with fear.
三、表示“好像……”
1.It was like doing sth.好像……
2.It seemed as if/ that...好像……
【例句】
1)我似乎觉得所有的希望都破灭了。It seemed to me that all hope faded/died.
2)我们聊呀聊呀，就像遇到了久别的朋友一样。We talked and talked, and it was like meeting a long-lost friend.
3)好像进入了另一个世界。It was like entering another world.
4)我丢了工作，感觉我的世界崩溃了。I lost my job and it was like my world collapsed./I lost my job and it seemed as if the world was at an end.
四、表示“不知道做……”
1.sb.did sth., wondering what to do next.
2. sb.did sth., not knowing what to do next.
3.sb.did sth., unsure of what to do next.
4.sb.was at a loss what to do.手足无措
5.sb.was in a dilemma about whether to do or not.感到难以决定……
【例句】
1)他吃惊地站在那里，不知道接下来做什么。He stood there in shock, unsure what to do next.
2)老师突然出现，他不知所措。The teacher suddenly appeared, and he was at a loss what to do.
五、表示“某人想到/明白……；有了主意”
1.It suddenly occurred to sb.that从句=It hit sb.that从句=It struck sb.that从句=It dawned on sb.that从句
2.(idea, thought...) occurred/came to sb.=...came/flashed into one’s mind=...crowded in one’s mind
3.one’s mind began to race 头脑开始快速转动
【例句】
1)我突然意识到我并不需要这些东西来让自己快乐。It suddenly dawned on me that I didn’t really need these things to be happy.
2)突然他想到一个好主意。Suddenly a brilliant idea flashed into his mind.
3)他的头脑开始快速转动，试图想出办法。 His mind began to race, trying to think of a way out.
4)我突然想到我没有锁门。It struck me that I had left the door unlocked.
六、表示“直到……才意识到……”
1.倒装句：Not until时间状语did sb.realize/notice that从句
2.强调句：It was only时间状语that sb.realized that从句
【例句】
1)直到那时他才意识到有什么不对劲。 Not until then did he realize that something was wrong.It was only then that he realized that something was wrong.
2)他这才恍然大悟，他哥哥想为他买圣诞礼物。Not until then did he realize that his elder brother wanted to buy a present for him.It was only then that he realized that his elder brother wanted to buy a present for him.
3)直到那一刻，他才注意到包里什么也没留下。Not until at that moment did he notice that there was nothing left in his bag.
4)直到那时她才感觉到她的肚子在咕咕叫。It was only then that she felt that her stomach was growling.
七、表示“迫不及待做……；毫不犹豫”
1.sb.could hardly wait to do sth.
2.without a second thought 不假思索；毫不犹豫地
3.without even thinking
4.without delay 立即；毫不迟延地
5.without hesitation毫不犹豫
【例句】
1)他迫不及待地要赶回家将一切告诉他的父母。He could hardly wait to get back home and tell his parents everything.
2)水冰冷冰冷，可那个年轻人想也没想就跳了进去。The water was freezing cold, but without a second thought the young man jumped in.
3)她迫不及待地想见Colin，把早上的一切都告诉她。She couldn’t wait to see Colin and told everything about her morning.
4)他毫不迟疑地迅速爬上树去摘树叶。 Without delay, he climbed up the tree quickly to reach for the leaf.
八、表示“一……，就……”
1.Upon (doing) sth., …
2.The moment/instant从句, …
3.Hardly had sb.done …, when…did…
【例句】
1)听了这个滑稽的故事，大家都哈哈大笑。Upon hearing the funny story, everybody burst into laughter.
2)我一看见他, 就知道他就是那个曾经帮我搬过箱子的警察。The instant I saw him, I knew he was the policeman who had helped me carry the box.
3)我刚走进房间就听见了巨大的声音。Hardly had I entered the room when I heard loud noise.
4)一听到“救命”的喊声，他冲出了房子。Upon hearing shouts of “help”, he dashed out of the house.
九、表示“发出……（声音）”
1.There were loud shouts and cheers (from…) when…从……传来喊叫与欢呼声。
2.let out a cry/scream (of horror/fear/terror/shock/surprise/pain…)
3.let out a howl/growl/yell/sigh/yelp发出……的声音
【例句】
1)当他登上讲台时, 现场传来了雷鸣般的掌声。 There was a storm of applause when he went on the platform.A stormy applause broke out in the hall when he went on the platform.
2)她看见他时吓得大叫一声。When she saw him, she let out a cry of horror.
十、表示“转折”
1.But bad luck for sb., …但是某人真不走运
2.To one’s surprise (delight)/Strangely enough, it turned out that从句
3.…,but in vain
4.…, but without success
5.…, but no use
6.But on second thoughts, …但是转而一想，……
7.But what happened next was pure magic.接下来发生的非常奇妙
【例句】
1)使我们高兴的是，结果所有的人都收到了礼物。To our delight, it turned out that every one of us received a gift.
2) Jack真不走运，他绊了一脚，摔在地上。But bad luck for Jack, he tripped and fell to the ground
3)她朋友想劝她和他一起回家可只是白费唇舌。 Her friend tried to persuade her to go back home with him, but in vain.
高考英语读后续写素材
转折思维句
读后续写的情节设计中，如何融入“转折”？总体而言，这种“转折”主要分为两种：由“负”变“正”型；由“正”变“负”型。
当然最多的是第一种：由“负”变“正”型。原因很简单，读后续写最终需要正能量的结局，总体的走向就是：由“负”变“正”型。
【例一】
主人公“我”是一名教师，之前工作上犯了一个错误。此时领导递给“我”一封信。“我”会是什么反应呢？请看下面的描写：
My boss handed me an envelope, which definitely added to my anxiety at that moment.（我的老板递给我一个信封，这确实使我当时更加焦虑。）However , when I opened it and read the letter, my eyes went wide open.（然而，当我打开它读信时，我的眼睛睁开了）It was not an unemployment letter .On the letter were several suggestions about my teaching.（这不是一封关于失业问题的信。信上有几个关于我的教学内容的建议。）
这个例子属于“负”变“正”的模式。由以为要被辞退的“焦虑”变成，得知真相后的“感动”。
【例二】
如果你要描写一个小男孩，需要在全班背诗，你会怎么写呢？有些同学可能会非常平淡的写：他是如何克服紧张，最终成功的背出诗歌。请看下面的描写：
He stepped onto the stage and was about to speak up when the boys burst into laughter.（他走上舞台，正要开口说话，这时孩子们突然大笑起来。）They thought he would undoubtedly fail in the recitation.（他们认为，他肯定背不出来。）However, it turned out that Tom did not miss a single word and recited the poem perfectly.（然而，原来汤姆一个字也没漏掉，于是就完美地背诵了这首诗。）
这个例子属于“负”变“正”的模式。由同学们的“嘲笑怀疑”变成背诵成功。
【例三】
主人公是位老人，想重新回到学校学习认字。这时候他走进了学校。如果你来写，会怎么写呢？有些同学可能会非常平淡的写：“我”激动地走进教室，然后非常认真学习起来。当然这样写没有错，但是少了“起伏”。我们先来看下面的范文：
The moment I stepped into the school gate, I was overwhelmed with excitement.However, I was soon trapped in self-doubt: Am I too old to learn?我一走进学校，就兴奋了。然而，我很快就陷入了自我怀疑之中：我是不是太老了，学不懂怎么办？
看到了吗？这段话有转折！这个例子属于“正”变“负”的模式。先走进学校“兴奋”，然后转折，陷入到“自我怀疑”之中。如果继续往下写，主人公会受到某种鼓励，消除自我怀疑，最后“自信”地学习。
【例四】
本故事中费尔法克斯先生深夜开车回家，途中又累又困，于是违章停车，想休息一下，结果被警察逮住，接下来怎么写呢？请看范文：
Mr.Fairfax lowered his head with a sigh, ready for a ticket.（费尔法克斯先生叹了口气，低下头，准备接受罚款。） Unexpectedly, the police added, “But I ‘ll figure out some place for you have a good rest though.”（出乎意料的是，警方补充说，“不过我想找个地方好好休息。”）Wild with joy, Farifax accepted his offer without hesitation., following him to drive his car to somewhere warm.（法里法克斯毫不犹豫地接受了他的提议。跟着他开车到温暖的地方。）
这个例子属于“负”变“正”的模式。主人公由开始的“焦虑”，原以为会被警察罚款，最后变“感动”：警察帮他找到温暖的地方。
【例五】
哥哥Ali通过比赛为妹妹赢得了一双新鞋子。当妹妹看到新鞋子后，会是什么反应呢？大部分同学都会写妹妹看到鞋子很开心。请看下面的例子：
When a pair of shinning new shoes came into her sight, she bounced up and let out a yell of joy.（当一双闪亮的新鞋子来到她眼前时，她跳了起来，高兴地叫了一声）
However, at sight of the bruise on Ali’s knee, her smile froze with tears welling up in her eyes.。（然而，一看到阿里膝盖上的伤痕，她的微笑冻结了，泪水涌入眼睛。）
这个例子属于“正”变“负”的模式。由看到鞋子时候的“高兴”，转变为妹妹看到伤痕时的“伤心落泪”。
【例六】
故事中我们迷路了，正在想办法如何脱离困境。
Suddenly it occurred to us that we could keep to the track to guide us back.（突然我们想到我们可以坚持小路引导我们回去。）But it was getting darker and darker, thus making it increasingly difficult for us to make out the road.（但天色越来越暗，使我们走道路越来越困难。）
这个例子属于“正”变“负”的模式。迷路后，想到了办法，属于“正向”，但是外在环境不允许：天色太晚。属于“负向”。
【例七】
故事中，主人公的戒指被清洁工捡到后，物归原主，想要感谢这位好心人。请看下面的描写：
I expressed my gratitude and promised him a well-prepared gift for thanks.（我表达了我的感激之情，并答应给他一份精心准备的礼物，以表示感谢。）However, he immediately refused and hung up the phone.（然而，他立刻拒绝了，挂断了电话。）
这个例子属于“正”变“负”的模式。想要感谢清洁工，属于正向，但是对方拒绝了，变成了“负向”。
