高考英语二轮复习阅读理解读后续写精读精炼（十四）（含解析）

高考英语阅读理解读后续写精读精炼（十四）

一：原文重现

Bales left the pavement of Base Road and stepped onto snow-covered Jewell Trail. She planned a six-hour hike through New Hampshire’s Mount Washington State Park. She had packed for almost every emergency and intended to walk alone.

She’d checked the weather forecast posted by the Mount Washington Observatory before she left. Based on her experience, Bales knew that her hike was realistic. Besides, she had two emergency plans and extra layers of clothing to better adjust her body temperature as conditions changed.

The hike up the lower part of Jewell Trail was pleasant. Bales felt excited as she walked up into snowy paths. The sun shone through the trees and cast a shadow over her smiling face. Less than an hour later, loads of dark clouds had replaced the sunshine, and snow covered the surrounding trees.

She still smiled. However, the weather was showing its teeth. Bales added even more layers to shelter herself from the cold winds and thick fog. She made her way across the snow-covered ridge (山脊toward Mount Washington and began to think about calling it a day. Suddenly, she noticed something: a single set of footprints in the snow ahead of her, which had been made by a pair of sneakers-typically not the type for hiking.

Meanwhile, Bales was getting colder, even though she was moving fast and generating some body heat. With strong gusts of wind screaming and attacking her back and left side, she decided to abandon her plan. The only thing, however, kept her on the trail was the sneaker tracks in the snow.

Paragraph 1:

Bales faced a dilemma about whether to follow the tracks or not.

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Paragraph 2:

Her searching now turned into rescuing the man.

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

二：文本解析

【详解】1.认真读懂所给提供的材料：通过文章描述可知，Bales是一个很有经验的远足者。她计划在新罕布什尔州的华盛顿山州立公园徒步旅行6个小时。当她穿过白雪覆盖的山脊向华盛顿山走去时，突然，她注意到一件事：她前面的雪地上有一串脚印，是一双运动鞋留下的——通常不适合徒步旅行。狂风呼啸着袭击她的背部和左侧，她决定放弃她的计划。然而，唯一能让她坚持下去的是雪地上的运动鞋留下的痕迹。

2.续写部分和前面的文章要衔接得当，并且与原文情节发展和人物性格相一致，故事情节的向后延续发展要合乎情理。

3.根据第一段首句Bales faced a dilemma about whether to follow the tracks or not.( Bales面临着是否跟随这些足迹的两难境地)及第二段首句Her searching now turned into rescuing the man.(她的搜寻现在变成了营救那个人)，第一段可以描写Bales面临两难境地时的思想斗争和最终确定去搜寻那个人。第二段则可以描述Bales搜寻到了那个人，那个人应该身处困境，所以她对他展开了营救。

4.续写的语言要尽可能与原文的语言保持风格上的一致。文章时态以一般过去时为主。应使用自己熟悉的句型和短语进行写作，考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。作文要层次清晰，要点全面，表达流畅，切合题干要求，句子结构准确，适当补充信息，使篇章结构连贯。

三：续写单句训练

1. Bales面临着一个两难的问题，是否遵循轨道。

2. 如果她选择沿着走，她会增加徒步旅行增加时间和风险。

3. 但前面的轨道表明有人可能有危险。她不能放弃这一切。

4. 她在冰冻的雾中喊道：“外面有人吗？”你需要帮助吗？强风把她的声音带走了。

5. 然后，她小心翼翼地朝铁轨的方向走去。

6. 她绕过一个角落，发现一个男人一动不动地坐着。

7. 她的搜寻现在变成了救了那个人。

8. 她立刻走近他，发现他的脚被冻伤了。

9. 她毫不犹豫地用暖和的衣服盖住他的身体，然后给他倒了一些含糖饮料。

10. 风呼啸而过，如果他们不离开，他们很快就会死去。

11. 她扶着那个人，沿着小路蜿蜒前进。

12. 经过巨大的努力，Bales设法救了这个人的命。

13. 她筋疲力尽了，她觉得这一切都是值得的。

四：佳作展现

Bales faced a dilemma about whether to follow the tracks or not.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________   Paragraph 2:

Her searching now turned into rescuing the man.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________   

五：课后练笔

I was doing a big clean-up recently and my kids were helping when my son,Freddo,came across a knotted handkerchief with an old dark brown coin inside.“Mum,can I have this?Can I play with this coin?” he asked.I took one look and was immediately transported to another time.In 1991,here was a time when my friend and I worked in a backward African country,Niger,hit by sandstorms and burning heat.There were many things I found difficult about this place—the climate and beggars were my biggest headaches.So after finishing five months of nursing work there,we moved on to work at a health clinic in the neighboring country,Burkina Faso.“It’s much greener in Burkina.Even the Coke tastes better,” the locals assured us.

Yet the fact was quite the opposite.Arriving by taxi at our destination in Burkina,we began to unload.I was reaching for my larger piece of luggage when,out of the darkness,a motorbike with two men approached slowly.Without warning,one of the men grabbed my daypack as the motorbike swept close by.Within seconds,the pair were out of sight,swallowed up by the night.

With my passport,money,traveler’s cheques all in the bag,I was in deep trouble.How frustrating!

All I wanted was to leave this hellhole!Then,walking through Burkina’s streets one day,I was stopped by an old woman who thrust her hand in my face.“Cadeau(‘gift’ in French)!Cadeau!” she cried.I’d had enough!I was extremely tired of the country:its poverty,its thieves,the heat,the dust and...everything!I told her angrily and firmly in French,“I have no ‘cadeau’.I have no money.A thief stole all my money two weeks ago and now I can’t get out of your country.I cannot give you anything.NOTHING!” The beggar woman listened attentively.To my great surprise,after hearing my words,she gave me a broad smile.

Paragraph 1:

She reached into the pocket of her dress. 

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

Paragraph 2:

There was a slight touch on my hand;looking down,I saw my son looking at me,curious. 

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

六：单句训练

1．她把手伸进衣服口袋，“那我给你一个硬币，”她说。

2．幸好，她把一枚深棕色的旧硬币放在我手里。

3．我惊讶地看着硬币，然后又看了看那个女人。

4．这时，我对老妇人的可怕态度感到相当羞愧。

5．尽管她很贫穷，但她还是能给我一些无价的东西。

6．我理所当然地认为乞丐只会从别人那里得到一些东西，但布基那那个女乞丐的硬币确实改变了我对他们的看法，她的微笑深深地打动了我的心。

7．我的手轻轻碰了一下，我低头一看，看见儿子好奇地看着我。

8．“妈妈，我能得到这个吗？”我能玩这枚硬币吗？他重复道。

9．“你不能玩，亲爱的，”我碰了碰儿子的头，慢慢地说，“这个很特别。”

10．这对我来说是一段令人难忘的珍贵的记忆。

11．来吧，让我给你讲一个故事吧。”

参考答案

三：单句训练

1)         Bales faced a dilemma about whether to follow the tracks or not.

2)         If she chose to follow the tracks, she’d add time and risk to her hiking.

3)         But the tracks ahead suggested someone might be in danger.

4)         She couldn’t let this go. She called out into the frozen fog, “Is anybody out there? Do you need help?” The strong winds carried her voice away.

5)         Then she walked cautiously in the direction of the tracks.

6)         She rounded a corner and spotted a man sitting motionlessly.

7)         Her searching now turned into rescuing the man.

8)         She approached him instantly and found he was suffering from frostbite on his feet.

9)         Without any hesitation, she covered his body with warm clothes, and then poured him some sugary drink.

10)     The wind roared over and they would die soon if they didn’t get out of there.

11)     She supported the man and inched along the trail.

12)     With great efforts, Bales managed to save the man’s life.

13)     Exhausted, she felt that it was all worth it.

六：单句训练

1．She reached into the pocket of her dress.“Then I will give you a cadeau,” she announced.

2．Kindly,she placed an old dark brown coin in my hand.

3．In surprise,I looked at the coin,and then at the woman.

4．At that moment,I felt rather ashamed,ashamed of my terrible attitude towards the old woman.

5．In spite of her poverty,she was able to give me something priceless.

6．I had taken it for granted that beggars would only receive something from others,yet the coin from the beggar woman in Burkina truly changed my view towards them,and her smile hit the deepest of my heart.

7．There was a slight touch on my hand;looking down,I saw my son looking at me,curious.

8．“Mum,can I have this?Can I play with this coin?” he repeated.

9．“You can’t play with it,honey,” I touched my son on the head and said slowly,

10．“This one is special.It is an unforgettable precious memory to me.

11．Come and let me tell you a story.”

四：佳作展现

（一）

Bales faced a dilemma about whether to follow the tracks or not. If she chose to follow the tracks, she’d add time and risk to her hiking. But the tracks ahead suggested someone might be in danger. She couldn’t let this go. She called out into the frozen fog, “Is anybody out there? Do you need help?” The strong winds carried her voice away. Then she walked cautiously in the direction of the tracks. She rounded a corner and spotted a man sitting motionlessly.

Her searching now turned into rescuing the man. She approached him instantly and found he was suffering from frostbite on his feet. Without any hesitation, she covered his body with warm clothes, and then poured him some sugary drink. The wind roared over and they would die soon if they didn’t get out of there. She supported the man and inched along the trail. With great efforts, Bales managed to save the man’s life. Exhausted, she felt that it was all worth it.

（二）

She reached into the pocket of her dress.“Then I will give you a cadeau,” she announced.Kindly,she placed an old dark brown coin in my hand.In surprise,I looked at the coin,and then at the woman.At that moment,I felt rather ashamed,ashamed of my terrible attitude towards the old woman.In spite of her poverty,she was able to give me something priceless.I had taken it for granted that beggars would only receive something from others,yet the coin from the beggar woman in Burkina truly changed my view towards them,and her smile hit the deepest of my heart.

There was a slight touch on my hand;looking down,I saw my son looking at me,curious.“Mum,can I have this?Can I play with this coin?” he repeated.“You can’t play with it,honey,” I touched my son on the head and said slowly,“This one is special.It is an unforgettable precious memory to me.Come and let me tell you a story.”