新高考英语二轮复习课时练第3部分书面表达与短文改错专题6第2 解题技法指导 (含解析)

这是一份新高考英语二轮复习课时练第3部分书面表达与短文改错专题6第2 解题技法指导 (含解析)，共12页。试卷主要包含了海洋的重要性；，保护海洋的倡议，我们不能把垃圾扔进海洋，保护海洋就是保护我们自己等内容，欢迎下载使用。
(2022·全国甲)
你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1．海洋的重要性；
2．保护海洋的倡议。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
Our Oceans，Our Respnsibility
June 8th was fficially named by the UN in 2009 as Wrld Oceans Day.

第一步 审题立意 布局谋篇
第二步 核心内容 逐一盘点
第一段——提出话题
1．当说到海洋时，它的污染正变得越来越严重。
When it cmes t the cean，its pllutin is becming mre and mre serius.
第二段——海洋的重要性和保护海洋的倡议
2．海洋在世界上起着关键性的作用。
The cean plays a key rle in ur wrld.
3．海洋向我们提供充足的食物并维持着自然的平衡。
The cean ffers us sufficient fd and maintains the balance f nature.
4．我们不能把垃圾扔进海洋。
We can’t thrw garbage int the cean.
5．我们也可以分发传单来号召更多的人保护海洋。
We can als hand ut leaflets t call n mre peple t prtect the cean.
6．如果更多的人参与，海洋环境就会更好了。
If mre peple are invlved，the cean envirnment will be better.
第三段——发出倡议
7．早该到了我们致力于保护海洋的时候了。
It is high time that we devted/shuld devte urselves t prtecting the cean.
8．保护海洋就是保护我们自己。
T prtect the cean is t prtect urselves.
第三步 斟词酌句 润色升级
1．用nt als...改写第3句话。
Nt nly des the cean ffer us sufficient fd，but it als maintains the balance f nature.
2．把第4句话改为被动语态。
Garbage can’t be thrwn int the cean.
3．把第6句话改为“the mre...，the mre...”结构。
The mre peple are invlved，the better the cean envirnment is.
第四步 巧妙衔接 完美成篇
Our Oceans，Our Respnsibility
June 8th was fficially named by the UN in 2009 as Wrld Oceans Day.When it cmes t the cean，its pllutin is becming mre and mre serius.Wrld Oceans Day is aimed at raising awareness f cean cnservatin.
The cean plays a key rle in ur wrld.Nt nly des the cean ffer us sufficient fd，but it als maintains the balance f nature.Thus，it is imperative t prtect the cean.First f all，what we can d is place imprtance n ur daily actins.Fr example，garbage can’t be thrwn int the cean.What’s mre，we can als hand ut leaflets t call n mre peple t prtect the cean.The mre peple are invlved，the better the cean envirnment is.
All in all，it is high time that we devted urselves t prtecting the cean.T prtect the cean is t prtect urselves.
技法二 规避常见的五种错误
技法三 亮化词汇三原则
根据高考书面表达的评分标准，应用词汇的丰富性和准确性是作文能否取得高分的一条重要的标准。所以，在词汇的亮化上应遵循以下三个原则：
原则1 求新求变
同样意义的词语，要根据语境使用最新学过的而不是小学初中学过的词汇。如果同样的意义重复出现，要使用不同的表达方式。如：
1．Nt nly des the cean ffer us enugh fd，but it als maintains the balance f nature.Thus，it is very imprtant t prtect the cean.(2022·全国甲)
→Nt nly des the cean ffer us sufficient fd，but it als maintains the balance f nature.Thus，it is imperative t prtect the cean.
2．When feeling sad，I ften chse t enjy the nvel part which includes a lt f gd stries.(2021·新高考全国Ⅰ)
→When feeling depressed，I ften chse t enjy the nvel part which includes a lt f imaginative stries.
3．With the wide spread f the Internet，mre and mre peple becme nline learners.(2021·全国乙)
→With the wide spread f the Internet，an increasing number f peple becme nline learners.
4．I am writing t ask yu t help us with a play we adapted accrding t the text.(2020·全国Ⅲ)
→I am writing in sincerity t ask yu a favur regarding a play we adapted accrding t the text.
5．Fr anther，China has a lng histry and rich culture.It has always attracted peple wh lve anything abut China.(2020·江苏)
→Fr anther，China enjys a lng histry and rich culture.It has always been an attractin fr thse wh are keen n anything that is Chinese.
原则2 求准求精
写作时不一定每一句都要有复杂句式，有时准确使用一个单词就会让整个句子增色。
1．It can easily be seen that the percentage f students wh chse listening t English sngs and watching English mvies is partly 65% and 50%.(2022·全国乙)
→It can easily be seen that the percentage f students wh chse listening t English sngs and watching English mvies is respectively 65% and 50%.
2．In cnclusin，we shuld find a way t study nline better.(2021·全国乙)
→In cnclusin，we shuld find a way t study nline mre efficiently.
3．His wrds f encuragement can still be remembered.(2020·全国Ⅰ)
→His wrds f encuragement still ring in my ears.
4．I am waiting fr yur early reply.(2021·全国甲)
→I am waiting fr yur early reply eagerly.
原则3 短语优先
恰当使用短语代替单词，不但可以增加词数，还有助于绕开不会表达的单词，使得行文更加流畅。
1．I wuld appreciate it if yu culd cnsider my invitatin.(2022·新高考全国Ⅰ)
→I wuld appreciate it if yu culd take my invitatin int accunt.
2．In cnclusin，we shuld knw its advantages and disadvantages and find a prper way t make ur study mre efficient.(2021·全国乙)
→In cnclusin，we shuld have a gd understanding f its advantages and disadvantages and find a prper way t make ur study mre efficient.
3．In rder t get mre clicks，yu’d better tell me which Chinese culture attracts westerners mst.(2021·全国甲)
→In rder t get mre clicks，yu’d better tell me which Chinese culture hlds the mst attractin fr westerners.
4．The majrity f peple wh were surveyed supprted this idea.
→The majrity f peple wh were surveyed were in favur f this idea.
技法四 美化句式四诀窍
诀窍1 三大从句各一
从句是丰富内容的有效手段。每一篇优秀作文，句式都应该多样。 所以在写作中，要注意打造三种从句。
1．定语从句：It was at that festival that yu shared s many interesting things abut yur cuntry，thrugh which I learned a lt abut yur fd，culture and histry.(2022·浙江1月)
2．状语从句：It has been 10 years since Yuth was funded and I began t read the newspaper when I was still a junir ne student.(2021·新高考全国Ⅰ)
3．名词性从句：What’s far mre imprtant is that we became gd friends then.(2022·浙江1月)
诀窍2 非谓语若干
非谓语的正确使用能体现出学生的语法功底，相比于从句，非谓语更加生动简洁。
(2020·全国Ⅱ)
Last weekend，my classmates and I tk part in a farm picking(现在分词作定语) activity.
Surrunded(过去分词作状语) by green trees，the farm is lcated at the ft f the hill near ur schl.There is a small river flwing(现在分词作定语) thrugh the farm.While enjying being(动名词作宾语) clse t nature，we began t help pick peaches cvering(现在分词作定语) every tree.We wrked in pairs，ne picking peaches and the ther carefully putting them int a big bx(独立主格结构)．
Thrugh participating(动名词作宾语) in this picking activity，I have becme aware f the significance f wrk.I am determined t study hard，t be a useful persn t the cuntry and t cntribute t the imprvement f peple’s lives(不定式作宾语)．
诀窍3 倒装强调可出现
特殊句型如倒装句、强调句和感叹句等可以使整篇文章句式更加丰富。
1．It is ur daily actins that make a difference t prtecting the cean frm being plluted.(2022·全国甲)
2．S easily addicted t chatting nline r playing games are they that they will frget t learn English using them.(2022·全国乙)
3．Frm this activity，nt nly did we realize that building up ur bdy is f great imprtance，but we als learned mre abut “persistence leads t success”．(2020·新高考全国Ⅰ)
4．On the way，exhausted as the participants were，they kept running until the finishing line.(2020·新高考全国Ⅰ)
5．Such is my understanding abut grwing up.(2020·天津)
诀窍4 被动露露面
如果一篇文章全都是主动句而且主语一致，文章就会显得单调，适当使用被动句能够避免这种情况。
1．First f all，what we can d is place imprtance n ur daily actins.Fr example，we can’t thrw garbage int the cean.(2022·全国甲)
→First f all，what we can d is place imprtance n ur daily actins.Fr example，garbage can’t be thrwn int the cean.
2．Because we will present this activity n the English website，I sincerely want yu t ffer me sme advice.(2021·全国甲)
→Because this activity will be presented n the English website，I sincerely want yu t ffer me sme advice.
3．I wnder if yu wuld like t give us sme advice.We need t adjust the vcabulary and grammar f the plt，and we als need yur guidance n ur perfrmance.(2020·全国Ⅲ)
→I wnder if yu wuld like t give us sme advice.The vcabulary and grammar f the plt need t be adjusted，and we als need yur guidance n ur perfrmance.
技法五 衔接过渡四类型
衔接过渡词可以分为“启、承、转、合”四类。
1．用于“启”的过渡词语：as yu knw，as is shwn in the...，first f all，fr ne thing，abve all，n the ne hand，in a sense，t start with等。
①As far as I knw，this exhibitin will last fr half a mnth in the schl art gallery.(2021·浙江)
②First f all，what we can d is place imprtance n ur daily actins.(2022·全国甲)
③Fr ne thing，the verall develpment ver the past decades has been s striking that they feel eager t familiarize themselves with what is ging n in China.(2020·江苏)
④First and fremst，the cmpetitin t be held in ur schl stadium will begin at 2 pm and last fr rughly 3 hurs.(2019·全国Ⅱ)
2．用于“承”的过渡词语：secndly，als，in additin，fr anther thing，fr this purpse，furthermre，what is mre，fr example，in ther wrds，in fact，at the same time，as a result，therefre等。
①What’s mre，if I want t decrate my website with sme Chinese elements，what shuld I d？(2021·全国甲)
②Therefre，I strngly recmmend that all the students in ur schl shuld make use f their spare time t enjy these wnderful wrks carefully.(2021·新高考全国Ⅰ)
③Fr anther，China enjys a lng histry and rich culture.(2020·江苏)
④Besides，the tpic is abut hw t imprve ur spken English.(2022·新高考全国Ⅰ)
⑤Furthermre，it is necessary fr yu t take a gd rest，which will prvide enugh energy fr yu.(2019·全国Ⅱ)
⑥Meanwhile，I’m als interested t learn sme flk dances frm yu in yur lecture，which will help me imprve my dancing.(2019·天津)
3．用于“转”的过渡词语：after all，but，hwever，n the cntrary，in cntrast，therwise，while，thugh，despite，in spite f，all the same，as a matter f fact等。
①Hwever，thse chsing reading English bks and visiting English learning websites nly accunt fr 18% and 12%.(2022·全国乙)
②On the way，althugh sme students fell behind，they kept running until the finishing line.(2020·新高考全国Ⅰ)
4．用于“合”的过渡词语：in a wrd，generally speaking，at last，in shrt，in the end，in cnclusin，n the whle，in summary，t sum up等。
①Finally，yu are welcme at any time t my huse and be my guest.Cngratulatins again!
②T sum up，I wish yu culd live up t the expectatins f ur schl.(2019·全国Ⅱ)
③In cnclusin，the schl unifrms are a better chice than the traditinal Chinese dress fr such an ccasin.(2019·江苏)
④All in all，it is high time that we devted urselves t prtecting the cean.T prtect the cean is t prtect urselves.(2022·全国甲)
Ⅰ.升级句中加黑词汇
1．With the develpment f technlgy，mre and mre peple are fnd f nline payment.
With the develpment f technlgy，an increasing number f peple are fnd f nline payment.
2．Traditinal cultures are very imprtant in ur cuntry.
Traditinal cultures are f great imprtance in ur cuntry.
3．As fr me，I like schl unifrms better than casual clthes.
As fr me，I prefer schl unifrms t casual clthes.
4．Qingda lies in the east f Shandng Prvince.
Qingda is situated/lcated in the east f Shandng Prvince.
5．Everyne must have experienced a mving mment，and I’d like t share mine with yu.
Everyne must have experienced a tuching mment，and I’d like t share mine with yu.
6．I am writing t say thanks t yu fr yur help.
I am writing t express my gratitude t yu fr yur help.
7．Here is sme advice，which I hpe will be gd fr yu.
Here is sme advice，which I hpe will be beneficial t yu.
8．I am very happy t hear that yu are cming t ur city fr a visit.
I am extremely delighted t hear that yu are cming t ur city fr a visit.
Ⅱ.升级句式练习
1．The ceremny was scheduled t be held frm 8∶00 am t 11∶00 am n June 8，and during that time we reviewed the past events and watched sme vides abut the heric deeds f ur schlmates in the battle against COVID-19.(用定语从句改写)
→The ceremny was scheduled t be held frm 8∶00 am t 11∶00 am n June 8，during which we reviewed the past events and watched sme vides abut the heric deeds f ur schlmates in the battle against COVID-19.
2．An English ral cmpetitin was held this Mnday and ur class wn the first prize in it.(用定语从句改写)
→Our class wn the first prize in the English ral cmpetitin that/which was held this Mnday.
3．Des yur summer curse ffer accmmdatin？(用宾语从句改写)
→I wnder if/whether yur summer curse ffers accmmdatin.
4．The students interested in the cntest are required t sign up fr it befre July 3.(用主语从句改写)
→It is required that the students interested in the cntest (shuld) sign up fr it befre July 3.
5．Yu greet thers actively，and yu are mre likely t make friends.(用状语从句改写)
→If yu greet thers actively，yu are mre likely t make friends.
6．We became exhausted halfway，but we managed t get t the finishing line.(用状语从句改写)
→Althugh/Thugh/While we became exhausted halfway，we managed t get t the finishing line.
7．Whenever I meet with difficulty，my Chinese teacher gives me encuragement in time.(用强调句改写)
→ It is my Chinese teacher that/wh gives me encuragement whenever I meet with difficulty.
8．I am s anxius that I can’t sleep well befre exams.(用倒装句改写)
→S anxius am I that I can’t sleep well befre exams.
9．The fruit farm lies at the ft f the Munt Yuhuangshan.(用倒装句改写)
→At the ft f the Munt Yuhuangshan lies the fruit farm.
10．We will hld the exhibitin in the gallery hall f ur schl n Saturday afternn.(用被动语态改写)
→The exhibitin will be held in the gallery hall f ur schl n Saturday afternn.
Ⅲ.用适当的过渡词汇填空
A
Li Jiang and Su Hua are discussing what t wear when receiving the British students next mnth.Li recmmends the traditinal Chinese dress 1.while Su prefers the schl unifrms.
2．As fr me/In my pinin，I wuld be happy t wear the traditinal Chinese dress at the welcme ne thing/First f all，this is precisely what the British visitrs are expecting.They cme t learn abut Chinese culture with their wn ，their Chinese peers in the typical Chinese dress wuld be highly impressive.The schl unifrms are fine；5.hwever，they are nt special enugh t give a unique Chinese anther/Secndly/Besides，the incnvenience is nt a prblem if ur purpse is t share Chinese culture.It is just the s-called incnvenience that displays the richness，delicacy and great fascinatin f Chinese culture with a histry f thusands f years.
7．In cnclusin/All in all/In shrt/In brief，the traditinal Chinese dress will make the ccasin attractive t the British guests.
B
Dear Sir/Madam，
I am Li Hua，a student frm Guangming Middle Schl.I am writing t ask sme questins abut the summer curse.
8．First f all，I wnder when the curse will begin and hw lng it will ，I want t knw whether yur schl will ffer accmmdatin fr the ’s mre/In additin，hw much will yu charge fr it？11.Last but nt least，hw many students will be there in ne class?
12．All in all，I wuld appreciate it if yu culd reply t me as sn as pssible.
Yurs，
Li Hua
强化练(三十八) 书面表达(2)

Ⅰ.作文升档
假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件，介绍相关情况，内容包括：
1．成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事迹录像等)；
2．对活动的感受；
3．对自己未来的展望。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：成人礼the cming-f-age ceremny；新冠肺炎COVID-19
Dear Chris，
I’m s glad t hear frm yu.


Yurs，
Li Jin
学生习作
Dear Chris，
I’m s glad t hear frm yu. ①In yur last letter，I’ve learned that yu want t knw abut the cming-f-age ceremny f ur schl.②The fllwing is a shrt intrductin t the ceremny.
③The ceremny was held n June 8，and during it we reviewed the past events and watched sme vides abut the brave deeds f ur schlmates in the battle against COVID-19.④We were deeply mved by their deeds.⑤We decided t fllw the examples f ur excellent schlmates and make urselves useful t the whle sciety.⑥Thrugh the ceremny，we realize that the sense f respnsibility always accmpanies the prcess f ur grwth.⑦Such is my understanding abut grwing up.⑧What abut yurs?
⑨Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs，
Li Jin
我来提升档次
作文升档第一步 让词汇高级亮丽
利用高级词汇升级文中黑体词汇
1．want t knw→are curius t knw
2．shrt→brief
3．was held→was scheduled t be held
4．brave→heric
5．decided t→were determined t
作文升档第二步 让句式丰富多变
按要求升级句式并将黑体词汇替换为升级后的词汇
1．用非限制性定语从句升级句③。
The ceremny was scheduled t be held n June 8，during which we reviewed the past events and watched sme vides abut the heric deeds f ur schlmates in the battle against COVID-19.
2．用过去分词作状语合并句④和句⑤。
Deeply mved by their deeds，we were determined t fllw the examples f ur excellent schlmates and make urselves useful t the whle sciety.
作文升档第三步 过渡衔接更巧妙
利用适当的过渡词汇衔接升级后的作文并誊写
Dear Chris，
I’m s glad t hear frm yu.In yur last letter，I’ve learned that yu are curius t knw abut the cming-f-age ceremny f ur schl.The fllwing is a brief intrductin t the ceremny.
The ceremny was scheduled t be held n June 8，during which we reviewed the past events and watched sme vides abut the heric deeds f ur schlmates in the battle against COVID-19.Deeply mved by their deeds，we were determined t fllw the examples f ur excellent schlmates and make urselves useful t the whle sciety.Thrugh the ceremny，we realize that the sense f respnsibility always accmpanies the prcess f ur grwth.Such is my understanding abut grwing up.What abut yurs?
Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs，
Li Jin
Ⅱ.写作演练
(2022·吉林延边质检)
假设你是李华。2022年北京冬奥会取得圆满成功，你的美国朋友Jenny发来邮件表示祝贺，并询问中国做了哪些措施使得本届冬奥会受到世界各国的赞誉。请你写邮件告知，内容包括：
1．表示感谢；
2．列举措施(至少两项)；
3．表达祝愿。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文
Dear Jenny，
I am mre than delighted t hear frm yu.Thank yu fr yur attentin t the Beijing 2022 Olympic Winter Games.China had been striving t hld a safe and high-tech Winter Games.
Firstly，many anti-epidemic technlgies made a cntributin t the wrld-class sprting event.Fr example，rbts were prgrammed t lcate a persn wh was nt wearing a mask and advise him t wear ne.Besides，several advanced technlgies played an imprtant part in making athletes’ daily life mre cnvenient.One f them is the digital wallet which makes payment easy.
I hpe the infrmatin can help.And I wish yur new schl life smth.
Yurs，
Li Hua体裁
投稿短文
时态
一般现在时
人称
第三人称
结构
三段
要点
1.开头提出话题。
2.中间写海洋的重要性和如何保护海洋。
3.最后发出倡议。
典例示范
常见错误
错误句子
改错
句子成分残缺或多余
(缺)There are many students supprt it.
There are many students wh/that supprt it.
(多)We reached t schl at 6∶00 am.
We reached schl at 6∶ 00 am.
主谓不一致
The children was very happy.
The children were very happy.
Yu can read the bks which is n the shelf.
Yu can read the bks which are n the shelf.
时态、语态错误
The exhibitin will hld next weekend.
The exhibitin will be held next weekend.
Yesterday I witness an accident.
Yesterday I witnessed an accident.
词性不分
Hnest is the best plicy.
Hnesty is the best plicy.
Paper cutting is a traditin Chinese art.
Paper cutting is a traditinal Chinese art.
I finally thrugh the exam after several attempts.
I finally gt thrugh the exam after several attempts.
中式英语
I very like his classes.
I like his classes very much.
My father bught me a M Yan writing bk.
My father bught me a bk written by M Yan.
The trees very tall.
The trees are very tall.