【英语思想方法系列】 写作提分法4招 小学五年级英语上册 （最新PEP版）
展开小学五年级上册英语思想方法分册
——写作提分法
第1招 “三不四要素法”写人物介绍作文
一、方法指导
“三步”指按照开头（引出话题）、具体描述、写结束语三个步骤写作，“四要素”指具体从人物身份、外貌或性格特征、喜好、能力等四个方面描写。
二、写作模板
开头（引出话题） Do you know...?
身份：He/She is a/an
外貌或性格特征：He/She is../He/She has..
喜好：He/She likes..His/Her favourite.
能力：He/She can..He/She can't.
结尾 He/She is a.../I like...
三、经典词句
| 必备词汇 | 必备句型 |
介绍身份 | Chinese teacher,head teacher... | She is a Chinese teacher. |
介绍外貌 或性格特征 | kind,old,young,strong,strict, clever,hard-working... | She is tall and thin She has long black hair. |
介绍喜好 | ice cream,sandwich,hamburger, salad,tea... | My favourite food is ice cream. Ice cream is my favourite food. |
描述能力 | Draw cartoons,sing songs,swim, cook,do kung fu,play the pipa... | I can do kung fu. I can't play the pipa. |
四、范文赏析
Do you know Mr John? He is a teacher.He teaches maths at our school.
开头 身份
He is tall and thin.He has short black hair.He always wears a pair of glasses.
外貌及性格特征
He is so funny.His favourite food is vegetables.They're fresh and healthy.
喜好
He can play the erhu and play ping-pong.But he can't play football.We all like him.Because we like funny teachers!
能力 结尾
五、对点练习
请至主书第11页用此招写作第九题。
第2招 “三不四要素法”写日常活动类作文
一、方法指导
“三步”指按照开头（引出话题）、具体描述、写结束语三个步骤写作，“三要素”指按照时间顺序分别介绍自己某一日上午、下午、晚上的活动。
二、写作模板
开头（引出话题） Today is Saturday.
上午活动：I often.in the morning
下午活动：In the afternoon,.
I often..with my friends..
晚上活动：In the evening,I.Sometimes I..
结尾 I'm very busy on...But I like...very much.What about you?
三、经典词句
| 必备词汇 | 必备句型 |
活动类短语 | wash my clothes,read books， watch TV,do homework,play football,play the pipa... | I often do my homework andclean my room in the morning. In the afternoon,I often watch TV and play football with my friends. Sometimes I read books inthe study. |
时间类短语 | in the morning,in the afternoon,in the evening | |
频度副词 | often,sometimes |
四、范文赏析
Today is Saturday.I often do my homework and clean my room in the
开头 上午的活动
morning.In the afternoon,I often watch TV and play football with my friends.
下午的活动
In the evening,I listen to music in my bedroom.Sometimes I read books in the
晚上的活动
study.I'm very busy on Saturdays.But I like Saturdays very much.What
结尾
about you?
五、对点练习
请至主书第22页用此招写作第八题。
第3招“三步两要素法”写介绍房间类作文
一、方法指导
“三步”指按照开头（引出话题）、具体描述、写结束语三个步骤写作，“两要素”指整体介绍和局部介绍（房间设施）。
二、写作模板
开头（引出话题） Welcome to my home.
整体介绍：This is my..It's..
局部介绍（房间设施）：There is/.are.
结尾 I like/love...Do you like my...
三、经典词句
| 必备词汇 | 必备句型 |
房间名称 | Living room,study,bedroom... | This is my living room. There is a TV in the living room. There are some books on the desk. I like my room very much. |
房间设施 | bed,TV,fridge,table,sofa,desk,chair, plant,water bottle,clock... | |
方位词 | beside,on,in,under,near,behind,above between,in front of... |
四、范文赏析
My bed room
Welcome to my home.This is my bed room It's small but nice
开头 整体介绍
There is a small bed in my room.There is a photo on the wall.There is a desk
局部介绍（房间设施）》
beside the window.There is a chair near the desk.There is a computer and many
books on the desk.There are two plants in front of the window.I love my
结束语
bedroom very much.
五、对点练习
请至主书第57页用此招写作第八题。
第4招“三步两要素法”写自然景观类作文
一、方法指导
“三步”指按照开头（引出话题）、具体描述、写结束语三个步骤写作，“两要素”指具体从有哪些自然景观及对应活动两个方面描写。
二、写作模板
开头（引出话题） Look at the picture..This is my../book!
This is a picture of...
自然景物：There is/are.It's.
对应活动：We can..We often.
结尾 I like/love...Do you like my...
三、经典词句
| 必备词汇 | 必备句型 |
形容词 | nice,big,clean,beautiful... | Look at the picture.This is my village. There is a river in front of my village. There are trees and flowers everywhere. We can swim in the river. |
自然景物 | river,lake,bridge,tree,hill,mountain,forest.… | |
活动类词 | swim,skate,go fishing,go hiking... |
四、范文赏析
My village
Look!This is a picture of my village.It's very beautiful.There are many
开头 自然景物
small houses.There is a river in front of our village.The water is clean.There
are many fish in the river.In summer,we often swim in the river.There is green
对应活动 自然景物
grass and many trees.We can run on the grass.I love my village
对应活动 结束语
五、对点练习
请至主书第68页用此招写作第九题。
