2024年高考英语一轮复习考点精讲精练(全国通用)第42讲道歉信、感谢信、邀请信(Word版附解析)
展开第42讲 道歉信、感谢信、邀请信(核心考点精讲精练)
1. 三年真题应用文考点细目表
试卷
年份
体裁
话题
题材内容
新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷
2023
建议信
学校生活
给外教提建议
全国甲卷
2023
投稿
历史文化
介绍中国历史人物
全国乙卷
2023
投稿
生活学习
假期习得新技能
全国卷Ⅰ/
全国乙卷
2022
投稿
调查结果
学习英语的状况
2021
演讲稿
社会科技
明智的在线学习者
2020
记叙文
身边的人
值得尊敬和爱戴的人
2019
申请信
社会实践
当志愿者
全国卷Ⅱ/
全国甲卷
2022
投稿
世界海洋日
保护海洋
2021
求助信
文化习俗
外国朋友感兴趣的中国传统文化
2020
记叙文
文体活动
介绍采摘活动
2019
电子邮件
文体活动
排球比赛安排
全国卷Ⅲ
2020
求助信
文体活动
请外教指导短剧改编
2019
邀请信
文体活动
校园音乐节
2. 命题规律及备考策略
【命题规律】
近3年命题规律:
1. 内容上选材贴近考生实际生活。所写内容都是学生熟悉内容,让学生有话可说,利于学生表达;
2. 体裁上有:提纲作文;开放性作文;图表作文;看图作文
【备考策略】
1. 熟练掌握各种应用文的基本构架;
2. 积累基本词汇和句式,尤其是简单基本句式,写好简单句;
3. 背诵优美的段落和范文,模仿高级句式和表达;
4. 加强审题(主题、时态)训练;
5. 练习书写,达到整洁美观的程度。
【命题预测】
预测2024年应用文考查仍然贴近考生实际生活,以电子邮件和投稿为主,考查考生的解决问题能力。
题型总览 道歉信
【写作佳句】
make up 和解
keep promise 信守诺言
be absent/present from 缺席/出席
apologize to sb.for sth. 因某事向某人道歉
show an apology to sb.for sth.因某事向某人道歉
make an apology to sb.for sth. 因某事向某人道歉
say sorry to sb. 对某人说抱歉
beg your forgiveness for 恳求你的原谅
cause inconvenience 造成不便
miss/cancel the appointment错过/取消约会
make up for.…弥补
express my regret表达我的道歉
be considerate of 体谅
accept my apology接受我的道歉
conflict with... 与……冲突
have no choice/option but to do sth.除了做某事别无选择
make a choice选择
1. 道歉信中开头段常用句式和套话
I am writing this letter to express my regret…
我写这封信是想表达我的遗憾……
I am writing to apologize for…
我写信是为……道歉。
I would like to give you my apology for…
我想……向你道歉。
I am very sorry to say that…
我很抱歉……
I must apologize about (not) doing sth…
对于做了/没做……,我必须道歉。
Please accept my sincere apology for…
请接受我对于^的真诚道歉。
I am writing to say sorry for…
我写信是想对……说抱歉。
I am terribly sorry, but…
我很抱歉,但是……
2.中间段:陈述理由+补救措施
陈述理由:
理由:I should have been able to attend your lecture, but due to the fact that something urgent happened, I'll have to take the place of my mother to pick my aunt up at the airport, whose flight happens to arrive on Saturday night. And it's the first time that my aunt has returned to my hometown since she studied abroad several years ago. So I have no choice/option but to cancel the appointment with you.
我本应该参加你的讲座,但由于发生了紧急的事情,我要代替母亲到机场接我阿姨,她的航班在周六晚抵达,这是阿姨自从几年前去留学第一次回国。我别无选择只好取消和你的约会。
补救措施:
1.I want you to know how bad we feel about it and to assure you that it will happen again.
我想让你知道我们有多难过,我向你保证这不会再发生了。
2.I hope that this does not cause you too much inconvenience.
我希望这不会给你带来太多的不便。
3.It would be very kind( considerate)of you to give me another chance to do sth. I promise it will never happen again.
你太好了,再给我一次机会做某事。我保证不会再发生这种事情。
4.If it is convenient for you, let's have another appointment to do sth.
如果方便的话,我们再约去做某事。
5.Would you mind if I change the appointment time?
你会介意我改变约会的时间吗?
6.By the way, can we have dinner together some time next week?
顺便说一下,我们在下周的某个时间一起吃晚饭好吗?
7.ls it possible that I make up for the loss by doing sth.?
可能让我做某事来弥补损失吗?
3.道歉信中结尾段常用句式和套话
Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.
我对于所造成的任何不便再次道歉。
Please allow me to say sorry again.
请允许我再一次说抱歉。
Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
希望你们能够接受我的道歉,理解我的处境。
I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies.
我真诚的希望你能够站在我的位置想一想,并且接受我的道歉。
I want to let you know how regretful I am feeling now.
我想让你知道我现在感觉多么的遗憾。
I am sorry that I can’t… but trust that you will be able to understand.
很抱歉我不能……,但我相信,你会理解的。
【写作模板】
模板①
Dear ________(对象),
I am truly sorry that ___________________________________(道歉的原因).
The reason is that ______________________________________(介绍原因).
Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my appologies and understand my situation.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Ming
模板②
Dear ________,
I am excessively sorry to say/tell you that ①______________ (直接表达自己不能实现先前的愿望或约定). ②Now, I am writing you this letter of apology to show my deep regret__________ (表达歉意). ③Please accept my sincere apology__________(诚恳希望对方能接受道歉). ④I fear you are displeased at _________(表达出自己的心情,并请求对方原谅).⑤I hope you will understand me and excuse me for__________(过渡句). ⑥Let me explain(开始介绍道歉的原因). ⑦The reason for my delay/absence was that _________(阐述自己当时的处境和情况). ⑧I had no way out because ___________ (总结自己道歉的原因). ⑨Therefore it’s not in my power to ___________(希望下次再次实现愿望). ⑩Naturally, I want to suggest ____________. I shall be glad if you will kindly write and tell me when and where you____________(约定下次约会的时间和地点)
We may meet again and I hope to see you soon.
Sincerely Yours, Li Hua
(2023年贵州·统考一模)
假如你是李华,你和你的外籍好友Andrew约好了本周末去图书馆,但是你因为临时要参加学校组织的“垃圾分类,全民行动”志愿活动而不能赴约。请根据以下要点给他写一份道歉信。内容要点:
1.表达歉意;2.简要介绍活动内容和意义;3.另约时间。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear Andrew,
I have signed up for a voluntary activity themed “Trash Sorting, All Involved” and won’t be able to accompany you to the library this weekend as planned. I feel terribly sorry and want to express my deepest apology.
As you know, we students should spare no efforts in implementing the policy of garbage classification. So, I seized this opportunity without hesitation. On that day, we will go to communities to publicize the significance as well as methods of trash sorting and direct the residents to accurately distinguish different kinds of rubbish, which will take a whole day. Considering that, I’m afraid I can’t keep my word. Shall we put it off till next Sunday?
I am sorry for any inconvenience caused and hope you can accept my heartfelt apology.
Yours,
Li Hua
1. (2022年江苏扬州高三统考)
假如你是李华,与朋友Smith约好了本周末去高邮市博物馆,因故不能赴约,请给他写封道歉信,内容包括:
1.表示歉意;
2.说明原因;
3.另约时间。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Smith,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Smith,
I’m writing to sincerely apologize for not being able to accompany you to Gaoyou Museum this weekend.
My headmaster informed me that we would participate in a voluntary activity to help create a civilized city, which is so important that I don’t want to miss it. That is the reason why I won’t be available at that time. If it’s convenient for you, we can make it next weekend, or let me know what time suits you best.
Please allow me to say sorry again.
Yours,
Li Hua
题型总览 感谢信
感谢信是重要的礼仪文书,是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体或个人表示感谢的书信,有感谢和表扬双重意思。其结构通常为:
必备句式
第一段:表达感谢之情并说明原因;
常用句式
I am writing this letter to thank you for …
I am writing to express my sincere thanks for...
I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt(adj. 衷心的) thanks to you for…
With deepest gratitude I write you this letter to express…
I am writing this letter because I am indebted to you for …
I am obliged(adj.感激的) to you for/I owe you a great deal for ...…
I haven't seen you for a long time since we parted last time and I miss you very much. Thank you very much for...
第二段:细述并赞赏对方给与的帮助;
常用句式
It was nice/kind/thoughtful (adj. 考虑周到的) of you to..
Thank you very much for your kind hospitality (n. 好客, 热情招待) and the honor you showed me during my visit…
It was your kind help that … (强调句型)
If it had not been for your (help/guidance/ assistance), I wouldn’t have (won the prize)(虚拟语气)
=But for/Without your help, I wouldn't have done…
第三段:再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望。
常用句式
Thanks again for your generous help.
I appreciate it more than I can say.
My true gratitude is beyond the word’s description.
I feel deeply indebted to you and I really do not know how to thank you enough for your help.
Please accept my sincere thanks for your help, which I will never forget.
Nothing could ever return the favor you gave me.
写作模板
模板一
Dear ________(对象),
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for________________________________(感谢的原因). If it had not been for your assistance in________________________________(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been________________________________(没有对方帮助会产生的后果).
Everyone agrees that it was you who ________________________________(给出细节). Again, I would like to express my sincere thanks to you. Please accept my sincere thanks.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
模板二
Dear ______,
How about your life/ study/ work? I’m writing to express my thanks for your _____(感谢的原因). If it had not been your assistance in _____(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been_____ (没有对方帮助时的后果).
During the ______, you gave me generous help and continuous guidance by _____. First, you _____.What’s more, you ______. There is still one thing that I can’t forget. That is _______. (原因)
Thanks a lot for your kindness again. (再次致谢)
Give my best regards to ______. (祝愿)
Yours sincerely
_______
(2021年天津高考真题)
假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家,他母亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业,并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。请你用英语回复,内容包括:
(1) 表示感谢并问候;
(2) 计划与家人一起做的事情;
(3) 你决定选择哪个专业,为学好该专业做何准备。
注意:
(1) 词数不少于100;
(2) 可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3) 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Nancy,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
【答案】
Dear Nancy,
I am very glad to receive your E-mail. I am very grateful to you and your family for taking care of me during my study tour in the UK. And wish you all the best.
Now that I have finished my high school studies, my parents and I are going to travel to Beijing. I'm going toTian 'anmen to see the flag raising and climb the Great Wall. In addition, I want to go to Qinghua Garden to enjoy the elegant demeanor of famous universities. I have decided to register for the computer major. With the rapid development of the Internet industry, the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide. Before choosing, consult people engaged in this major or go to training institutions for consultation. Only with a clear goal, we will have targeted learning in the future, which will be more efficient.
Yours,
Li Jin
(2019·浙江卷)假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示感谢;
2.回顾Alex对你的帮助;
3.临别祝愿。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
[参考范文]
Dear Alex,
I'm sorry to hear that you are going to return to your country very soon and I'm writing this email to express my gratitude for your help.
First of all,thank you for helping me learn English.Without your help,I would not have made so great progress in learning English.Besides,what you told me about your country broadened my horizons and aroused my interest in foreign culture.
I wish you all the best in the future and have a good journey.
Yours,
Li Hua
题型总览 邀请信
必备词汇
1. 邀请 invite/ invitation
2. 做演讲 make/deliver a speech
3. 评委 judge
4. 感激 appreciate (vi. )/ be grateful
5. 荣幸 honor (v./n.)
6. 欢迎 welcome (v./n./adj.)
7. 接受邀请 accept sb’s invitation
8.代表学校 on behalf of our school
9. 我想邀请你做... I’d like to invite you to...
10. 举办活动的目的是... The purpose of the activity is to
11. 活动的细节有... Here are some details about the activity...
12.如果……我将感到荣幸 It’s my honor if...
13.欢迎你参加 You are welcome to...
必备句型
【篇首句】介绍自己,简要说明活动,并邀请对方。
1. I’m Wang Ming from YuWen School,the president of the Student Union.
我是来自育文学校的王明,学生会主席。
2. An English speaking contest of our school will be held on August 6.
我们学校有一场英语演讲比赛将在8月6号举行。学科&网
3. There will be a party in my garden on Sunday.
周日,在我的花园里会举行一场聚会。
4. I’d like to invite you to judge it.
我想邀请你做它的裁判。
5. I’m writing to invite you to...
我写信是邀请你……
6. I wonder if you can come to...
我想知道你是否能来……
7. We sincerely hope you can attend it.
我们真诚希望你能够参加。
8. It’s my pleasure/a great honour for me to invite you to...
我很荣幸的邀请你……
9. It’s a pity that you have to go back to America soon. So a farewell party for you will be held in the Sun Club this Saturday evening. Could you come at 6:00 pm?
很遗憾你不久就要回美国了。所以,这周六,在阳光俱乐部我们会为你举行一个欢送会。下午六点你能来吗?
【篇中句】介绍活动具体内容,并说明受邀人参加理由。
1. It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches.
它将于下午两点钟开始,四点钟结束,在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。
2. We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00.
我们将会在上午八点出发,九点到达那里。
3. During the afternoon, we’ll...together.
下午,我们会一起……
4. Remember to take water and lunch with you.
记得带上水和午餐。
5. By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 in front of your apartment and it will take you directly to the club.
顺便说一下,你可以乘坐你家公寓前的322路公交车,它会直接把你带到俱乐部。
6. I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite you to be part of the contest.
我知道你的母语是英语,还是一个英语老师。我,代表我们学校,真诚的邀请你来比赛现场。
7. Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance.
既然你如此渴望提高英语,这会是一个很好的机会。
8. I’m sure that you will enjoy yourself there.
我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。
【篇尾句】期待对方接受邀请,并期待对方尽快回复。
1. Will you be available during that time? Please contact me at 1234567 at your earliest convenience.
那期间你有空吗?请方便时尽快给我打电话1234567。
2. Would you please let me know as soon as possible if you can accept my invitation?
请尽快告诉我你能否接受我的邀请好吗?
3. We will feel much honored if you could come.如果你能来,我们会非常荣幸。
4. We are looking forward to your coming.我们期待着你的到来。
5. I am longing to see you soon.我期待着尽早见到你。
二、写作模板
模板①
Dear________,
________(开门见山地点、活动),It would be pleasant to have you here(表达邀请愿望). Will you give me the pleasure of your company(正式发出邀请)?
During the party/conference, we will have a lots of activities you will be interested in (开始介绍活动内容). First, __________(介绍举行的活动一). Second, _________(介绍举行的活动二). I know/believe you be very interested in _________(引出受邀请人参加的理由). First/For one thing________(希望受邀人参加的理由一),Second/For another__________(希望受邀人参加的理由二)。 The party/conference would not be complete without you(总结受邀人参加的必要性).
The party/conference will begin at ________(提出活动的地点). It is possible for us to meet at ________(提出具体约定时间). We do hope you can come ________(再次发出邀请).
Yours
Li Hua
模板②
Dear________,
There will be a________(内容) at/in________(地点) on________(时间). We would be honored to have you there with us.
The occasion will start at________________(具体时间). This will be followed by a________(进一步的安排). At ________________(时间), we will have ________________________(另一个安排).
I really hope you can make it. RSVP before_________________________(通知你的最后期限).
Yours Sincerely,
2022·新高考·高考真题)假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:
1. 节目介绍;
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Caroline,
This is my first time that I have invited you to attend our program —Talk and Talk. It is ten years since Talk and Talk was established. This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students. Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it. As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot. If you are available on this Sunday, I together with the whole Talk and Talk staff am waiting for your coming. I’d appreciate it if you take my invitation into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.(2022·浙江·统考高考真题)假定你是李华,你校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”,请你给你的留学生同学Michael写一封信,邀请他一同体验,内容包括:
1.位置与开放时间; 2.室内设施和功能。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Michael,
Good news ! Recently, a newly-furnished section, consisting of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open to us students in our school library.
Located on the third floor beside the online reading rooms, it can be accessible from 8 am till 9 pm throughout the weekdays. Those rooms are equipped with modern electronic facilities, all of which are linked to the Internet. It’s really convenient for us to do some group projects. Why not ask our group members to go and experience it?
Early reply and we can reserve one room for our project.
Yours,
Li Hua
过关检测
1.(2023·全国·一模)假定你是学生会主席李华,你校将举行主题为“My Youth,My Dream”的英语演讲比赛,请你给外教Lisa写一封邮件,邀请她担任评委。内容包括:
1.比赛目的;
2.时间和地点;
3.期待参与。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;’
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Lisa,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Lisa,
I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union. I’m writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest.
The English speech contest is entitled “My Youth, My Dream”, which is aimed to make us senior students firm in our ideals and determined to strive. It will be held at 8:00 am on February 23th in the lecture hall in our school. As you are an expert in life planning, your attendance means so much to us.
It would be our great honor if you could accept our invitation and get you time spared. Looking forward to your timely reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外教Lisa写一封电子邮件,邀请她担任“My Youth,My Dream”为主题的英语演讲比赛的评委。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛:contest→competition
命名:entitle→name
旨在与:be aimed to→be intended to/be designed to
因为:as→because/since
2.句式拓展简单句变复合句
原句:I’m writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest.
拓展句:I’m writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest, which will be held in our lecture hall February 23th.
【点睛】[高分句型1]The English speech contest is entitled “My Youth, My Dream”, which is aimed to make us senior students firm in our ideals and determined to strive. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]It would be our great honor if you could accept our invitation and get you time spared. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
2.(2023·全国·一模)假定你是李华。你校开设了乒乓球培训班,请给来自加拿大的交换生Jeff写封邮件邀请他一起参加,内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 课程安排;
3. 报名方式。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jeff,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jeff,
To enrich our school life, a table tennis training class is opened in our school. I’m more than delighted to invite you to come and join us.
As scheduled, the class will last a semester, starting from March 3. There will be one class at 4 pm every Friday with a period of 45 minutes. Besides, the class is suitable for students of different levels. Anyone who is interested in it can sign up in Room 304 before Feb. 25. So don’t miss the deadline!
I do hope you can come and enjoy the charm of playing table tennis. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用写一封邀请信,邀请交换生Jeff参加乒乓球培训班,内容包括:写信目的、课程安排和报名方式。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:delighted → pleased
此外:besides → what’s more
学期:semester→term
不同的:different→ various
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I do hope you can come and enjoy the charm of playing table tennis.
拓展句:I do hope you can attend the class where you will enjoy the charm of playing table tennis.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Anyone who is interested in it can sign up in Room 304 before Feb. 25.(运用了who引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】As scheduled, the class will last a semester, starting from March 3. (运用了省略句和非谓语动词作状语)
3.(2023·全国·一模)假定你是李华,你校今年7月10日举行“一带一路” 沿线国家英语学习研讨会,你作为负责人给各国参会代表发电子邮件。内容包括:
1.会议内容;
2.接待安排。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear representatives,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear representatives,
I’m Li Hua, a student leader in charge of the English Learning Conference scheduled to be held in our school on July 10th . With the intention of promoting interpersonal and cross-cultural communication, a lecture will be delivered in the morning, after which we’ll have a discussion about ways to sharpen English skills. In the afternoon, a visit to the art museum will expose you to traditional Chinese culture.
On July 9th, we will arrange for the school bus to pick you up at the airport exit, where you can follow the signs to find us. We have made full preparations for your arrival including the accommodations.
If you have any question, don’t hesitate to contact me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是一篇应用文写作。要求考生作为“一带一路” 沿线国家英语学习研讨会的负责人给各国参会代表发电子邮件,邀请他们参加研讨会。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
目的:intention→purpose
演讲:lecture→speech
提高:sharpen→improve
显露:expose→show
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:We have made full preparations for your arrival including the accommodations.
拓展句:We have made full preparations for your arrival, which include the accommodations.
【点睛】[高分句型1]With the intention of promoting interpersonal and cross-cultural communication, a lecture will be delivered in the morning, after which we’ll have a discussion about ways to sharpen English skills.(after which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]On July 9th, we will arrange for the school bus to pick you up at the airport exit, where you can follow the signs to find us.(where引导的非限制性定语从句)
4.(2023·全国·模拟预测)假定你是学生会主席李华,学生会举办的英语演讲比赛(English Speech Contest)得到了外教Pam的大力帮助。活动已圆满结束,请你给她写一封感谢信。内容包括:
1. 表达感谢;
2. 外教的帮助;
3. 同学的收获。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Pam,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Pam,
I am writing this letter to express my heartfelt gratitude for your invaluable support and guidance during the English speech contest. Your unwavering commitment and encouragement have helped us achieve a lot in the competition.
You have invested so much time and effort in preparing us for the contest that we all have learned a lot more about English speech. Your excellent teaching skills, patience, and dedication have been instrumental in improving our English language skills. What’s more, your constructive feedback and suggestions have helped us refine our pronunciation, style and presentation, which were crucial in delivering an impressive speech.
We all feel blessed to have had such a precious opportunity to learn from you. Your contribution has greatly enriched our English learning experience, and we will always cherish the memories of the time spent with you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生给外教写一封感谢信,对她在英语演讲比赛中的帮助表达感谢,回忆她提供的帮助,并分享同学们的收获。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
真诚的:heartfelt→genuine, sincere, unfeigned, earnest
宝贵的:invaluable→precious, priceless, inestimable
坚定的:unwavering→steady, unhesitating, tireless
投入:invest→spend, devote, contribute
有助于:be instrumental in→be helpful in, be useful in
提高:improve→sharpen, refine, better
此外:what’s more→in addition, additionally, moreover, furthermore, besides
重要的:crucial→essential, crucial, significant, vital
好运的:blessed→favored, fortunate, lucky, privileged, blissful
珍爱:cherish→treasure, value highly
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:I am writing this letter to express my heartfelt gratitude for your invaluable support and guidance during the English speech contest. Your unwavering commitment and encouragement have helped us achieve a lot in the competition.
拓展句:I am writing this letter to express my heartfelt gratitude for your invaluable support and guidance during the English speech contest because your unwavering commitment and encouragement have helped us achieve a lot in the competition.
【点睛】【高分句型1】You have invested so much time and effort in preparing us for the contest that we all have learned a lot more about English speech.(运用了so… that…引导的结果状语从句)
【高分句型2】What’s more, your constructive feedback and suggestions have helped us refine our pronunciation, style and presentation, which were crucial in delivering an impressive speech.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
5.(2023·全国·模拟预测)邻里之间互相帮助是和谐社区的体现。假如你叫李华,在过去的几年里,邻居们为你家提供了很多的帮助。请你写一封感谢信,表达对邻居们的谢意。内容包括:
(1)表达对邻居们的感谢;
(2)以后要像他们一样帮助别人。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear neighbours,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version
Dear neighbours,
I’m writing to express my sincere thanks for your help in the past few years, especially during the COVID-19 epidemic. I’m so lucky to live in a friendly community. When I had a fever, you bought medicine for me. Desperate, my family once ran out of food. Again, you lent a hand and supplied enough vegetables for us, which helped us go through the hardest time.
I repeat my thanks for you all. No words can exactly express my gratitude. I will help others like you in the future.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给邻居写一封感谢信,表达对邻居们的谢意。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达:express→convey
真诚的:sincere→genuine
幸运的:lucky→fortunate
感激:gratitude→thankfulness
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m writing to express my sincere thanks for your help in the past few years, especially during the COVID-19 epidemic.
拓展句:I’m writing to express my sincere thanks for the help you offered to me in the past few years, especially during the COVID-19 epidemic.
【点睛】[高分句型1] When I had a fever, you bought medicine for me. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] Again, you lent a hand and supplied enough vegetables for us, which helped us go through the hardest time. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
6.(2023·全国·一模)假定你是红星中学高三学生李华。近期,你校外教Steve做了一场关于读后续写的在线讲座(A Lecture on Continuation Writing)。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 表达感谢并简述你的收获;
2. 说明你在读后续写中的困惑并寻求帮助。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Steve,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】参考范文
Dear Steve,
Thank you very much indeed for the wonderful lecture you gave on continuation writing. I’ve learnt really a lot, because you helped me overcome the bottleneck—how to increase the reading and writing speed.
However, I am still puzzled by some difficulties in it. For example, I find it hard to grasp the gist of the passages, and I also feel it hard to continue when confronted with new words. What can I do? Would you please give me some advice? I would be really grateful if you could help me out.
Thank you very much again. Your earliest reply would be appreciated.
Yours,
Li hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外教Steve写封电子邮件,对他为学生做的读后续写的在线讲座表达感谢并简述你的收获,说明你在读后续写中的困惑并寻求帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
然而:however→nevertheless
困惑的:puzzled→confused
困难的:hard→difficult
感激的:grateful→thankful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Your earliest reply would be appreciated.
拓展句:I’d appreciate it if you can give me your earliest reply.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Thank you very much indeed for the wonderful lecture you gave on continuation writing. (运用了that/which引导的限制性定语从句,省略了that/which)
[高分句型2] I’ve learnt really a lot, because you helped me overcome the bottleneck—how to increase the reading and writing speed. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
7.(2023·全国·一模)假设你是李华,你的南非朋友Martin给你发来一封邮件, 告诉你他在外国人汉字书法大赛(Chinese Calligraphy Contest For Foreigners)中获得一等奖。请你用英语给他回一封邮件。内容包括:
1.对他表示祝贺;
2.肯定他的付出;
3.了解参赛经验。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Martin,
Learning that you’ve won the first prize in Chinese Calligraphy Contest For Foreigners, I’m writing to offer my congratulations to you.
Success favors the mind that is prepared. Not only have you referred to calligraphy books, but also you have consulted some masters. It is your hard work and talent that make you succeed in winning the championship.
I’d like to know some experience about taking part in the contest. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给南非朋友Martin写信祝贺他在外国人汉字书法大赛中获得一等奖,同时肯定他的付出并了解参赛经验。
【详解】1.词汇积累
天赋:talent→ gift
知道:learn→ know
获得一等奖:win the first prize→ win the championship
参加:take part in→ join in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’d like to know some experience about taking part in the contest.
拓展句:I’d like to know some experience which is about taking part in the contest.
【高分句型1】Success favors the mind that is prepared.(运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Not only have you referred to calligraphy books, but also you have consulted some masters.(运用了not only…but also…引导的部分倒装句)
8.(2023·全国·一模)假定你是校学生会主席李华,你校外教布朗先生在学校英语文化节中应邀给学生做了一场讲座。请你代表学生会给他写一封信,内容包括:
1.表达感谢;
2.告知讲座反响。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr Brown,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Brown,
First of all, on behalf of the Student Union, I am honored to express our most sincere thanks to you.
We benefited a lot from the lecture that you gave us during this year’s English Cultural Festival. The lecture left a deep impression on every student present. They showed great interest in the content of the lecture and enjoyed it very much. In the past few days, we have received a flood of emails from the audience telling us how your lecture has helped them correct the mistaken belief that English is only a tool.
It would be great if there were more lectures like this in the future! Finally, thank you again for your wonderful lecture!
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你校外教布朗先生在学校英语文化节中应邀给学生做了一场讲座。请你代表学生会给他写一封信表达感谢,并告知讲座反响。
【详解】1.词汇积累
代表:on behalf of→ represent
荣幸的:honored →privileged
最后:Finally→ At last
喜欢:enjoy→ be fond of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:They showed great interest in the content of the lecture and enjoyed it very much.
拓展句:They showed great interest in the content of the lecture so that they enjoyed it very much.
【点睛】【高分句型1】We benefited a lot from the lecture that you gave us during this year’s English Cultural Festival.(运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】It would be great if there were more lectures like this in the future!(运用了if引导的条件状语从句。)
9.(2023秋·四川遂宁·高二四川省蓬溪中学校校考开学考试)假如你是李华,你给你的英国朋友Chris写一封道歉信,内容包括:
1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游;
2.由于脚部受伤,你无法按原计划前往;
3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。
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【答案】Dear Chris,
I’m glad that you enjoy traveling as much as I do. You can’t imagine how excited I was when you agreed to travel to Yunnan with me in July. However, something unexpected happened, and I’m writing to inform you of the change.
I accidentally hurt my foot during a basketball match. As a result, I can’t go to Yunnan with you as planned. I am terribly sorry about the change of the plan.
In addition, can we put the travel off until August? My injury will by no means be a matter by then! I sincerely hope that the time is convenient for you. If you have made a decision, don’t hesitate to let me know.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
LiHua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华,你给你的英国朋友Chris写一封道歉信,内容包括:1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游;2.由于脚部受伤,你无法按原计划前往;3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。
【详解】词汇积累
高兴的:glad→delighted
然而:however→nevertheless
结果:as a result→as a consequence
此外:in addition→besides
句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:I accidentally hurt my foot during a basketball match. As a result, I can’t go to Yunnan with you as planned.
拓展句:I accidentally hurt my foot during a basketball match, as a result of which I can’t go to Yunnan with you as planned.
【点睛】【高分句型1】You can’t imagine how excited I was when you agreed to travel to Yunnan with me in July. (运用了how引导宾语从家,when引导状语从句)
【高分句型2】 If you have made a decision, don’t hesitate to let me know.(运用了if引导状语从句)
10.(2023秋·江西抚州·高二临川一中校考开学考试)假定你是李华,你在英国学习,昨天你有一次不愉快的就餐经历,你对餐厅服务员的态度非常不满意,于是请你给该餐厅老板写信投诉。内容包括:
1. 问题:牛肉面(beef noodles)里有苍蝇 (fly),服务员态度恶劣;
2. 要求:餐厅赔礼道歉;
3. 希望能改进服务。
注意:写作词数应为 80 左右。
参考词汇:complain 投诉
make a formal apology to sb 正式向某人道歉
Dear Sir or Madam,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m LiHua, one of your customers. I am writing to complain about the poor service of your waiters and express my dissatisfaction with their rude attitude to us.
Yesterday I went to your restaurant to have lunch but I had an awful experience. I was having beef noodles when suddenly I found two flies in them, which made me disgusted. What’s worse, I asked the waiter to change for another dish, only to be completely ignored by him. Therefore, I’d like you to investigate the matter seriously and make a formal apology to me. Personally, it’s time that your service should be improved to live up to the customers’ expectations.
I’d appreciate it if you could give due attention to the matter.
Yours,
LiHua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的投诉信。要求考生向一家餐厅老板写信投诉,告知其自己就餐时的不愉快经历,阐明具体问题并要求餐厅赔礼道歉。
【详解】1.词汇积累
糟糕的:awful → terrible/unpleasant
更糟的是:what’s worse→ worse still
道歉:make an apology → apologize
就我个人而言:personally→ for my part/in my opinion
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m LiHua, one of your customers.
拓展句:I’m LiHua, who is one of your customers.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I was having beef noodles when suddenly I found two flies in them, which made me disgusted.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句和which引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】Personally, it’s time that your service should be improved to live up to the customers’ expectations.(运用了that引导的定语从句和虚拟语气)
11.(2023秋·湖南·高三湖南师大附中校考阶段练习)假定你是李华,你的外教老师 David 与你约定每周六晚上一次口语课,但是你身体有不适的症状,按照规定要居家隔离,因此,请你给 David写一封道歉信,
内容包括:
1.表达歉意;
2.说明理由;
3.提出补救方案。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】Dear David,
I’m indeed sorry to tell you that I won’t be able to attend the oral class this Saturday as scheduled.
Recently, I’m not feeling well and required to stay at home according to the rules. However, I am very fond of your classes and would like to make up for the lost lessons. So I’m wondering whether it’s possible for the lesson to be recorded and if so, I may have the chance to learn and review through the video.
Please allow me to say sorry again. I sincerely hope that you will be able to understand my situation and accept my apology.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教老师David写一封道歉信,因自己身体不适需要居家隔离而不能按照原定计划上口语课进行道歉,并提出补救方案。
【详解】1.词汇积累
确实、非常:indeed→terribly
喜欢:be fond of→be keen on
弥补:make up for→compensate for
机会:chance→opportunity
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:However, I am very fond of your classes and would like to make up for the lost lessons. So I’m wondering whether it’s possible for the lesson to be recorded and if so, I may have the chance to learn and review through the video.
拓展句:However, because I am very fond of your classes and would like to make up for the lost lessons, I’m wondering whether it’s possible for the lesson to be recorded and if so, I may have the chance to learn and review through the video.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m indeed sorry to tell you that I won’t be able to attend the oral class this Saturday as scheduled.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】So I’m wondering whether it’s possible for the lesson to be recorded and if so, I may have the chance to learn and review through the video.(运用了whether引导的宾语从句和if so结构的省略句)
12.(2023·江苏南京·南京市第一中学校考模拟预测)假定你是李华。你的英国笔友Chris对中国民族传统节日很感兴趣,请写信邀请他暑假来中国和你一起去内蒙古旅游,体验当地7月21日到23日举办的那达慕大会,内容包括:
1. 那达慕大会简介;
2. 旅游的基本计划。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇:
1. the Naadam Festival那达慕大会
2. Inner Mongolia内蒙古
Dear Chris,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Chris,
I hope this letter finds you well. Learning your enthusiasm about Chinese ethnic festival, I’m writing to invite you to join me in experiencing the Naadam Festival in Inner Mongolia this summer vacation.
The Naadam festival, which is scheduled to take place from July 21st to 23rd, will give you a look into the unique Mongolian culture. It features a variety of fascinating activities, ranging from horse racing, archery to wrestling competitions. I am sure the festival will be a true feast for the eyes.
As for our travel plan, a five-day day trip may be proper. Apart from viewing those thrilling matches, we can explore the vast grasslands dotted with sheep and cattle, tasting some local Mongolian cuisine. I believe this trip will be an unforgettable experience for both of us.
Look forward to your rely!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生写信邀请笔友Chris暑假来中国与自己去内蒙古旅游,体验当地举办的那达慕大会,需简单介绍那达慕大会,并说明旅游的基本计划。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
热情:enthusiasm→eagerness, keenness
各种各样的:a variety of→various, a range of, different kinds of
吸引人的:fascinating→attractive, appealing, charming
至于:as for→as to, as regards, in the matter of
合适的:proper→appropriate, suitable
令人兴奋的:thrilling→exhilarating, exciting
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Learning your enthusiasm about Chinese ethnic festival, I’m writing to invite you to join me in experiencing the Naadam Festival in Inner Mongolia this summer vacation.
拓展句:Learning that you’re enthusiastic about Chinese ethnic festival, I’m writing to invite you to join me in experiencing the Naadam Festival in Inner Mongolia this summer vacation.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Learning your enthusiasm about Chinese ethnic festival, I’m writing to invite you to join me in experiencing the Naadam Festival in Inner Mongolia this summer vacation. (运用了现在分词短语Learning…作状语、动名词短语experiencing…作介词in的宾语)
[高分句型2] The Naadam festival, which is scheduled to take place from July 21st to 23rd, will give you a look into the unique Mongolian culture. (运用了关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3] I believe this trip will be an unforgettable experience for both of us. (运用了连接词that引导名词性从句作believe的宾语并省略了that)
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