高中考试英语01.应用文之建议信

这是一份高中考试英语01.应用文之建议信，共9页。试卷主要包含了 你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由等内容，欢迎下载使用。

Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese.
学校英语报正在酝酿改版，拟从现有的三个栏目(健康、娱乐、文化)中去除一个，并从三个备选栏目(时尚、职业规划、读者反馈)中挑选一个纳入该报。假设你是该校学生程飞，给校报编辑写一封电子邮件，表达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容：
1. 你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由；
2. 你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由。
【答案】
Dear Editr,
I’ve learned that ur English Pst is being refrmed and ne f the three clumns is t be replaced by a new ne. I’m writing this e-mail t share with yu my pinins.
Needless t say, the clumns will definitely be designed accrding t students’ interest and have psitive effects n their study and life.
Cmpared t the entertainment , I hld the view that the value f the clumns cncerning health and culture is mre imprtant . The main factr is that it is f great significance t keep healthy while lss f health means kissing gdbye t life. Cnsequently, mre knwledge f hw t keep fit can imprve the quality f life. In additin, the prgress in acquiring cultures cntributes t bradening ne’s hrizns, which in turn is beneficial t ne’s study and the establishment f philsphy f life.
Furthermre, the career planning shuld be taken int accunt in the schl English Pst . On the ne hand, it cvers ne’s career develpment a great deal .On the ther hand, it makes a great difference t ne’s career success in the future.
What has been mentined abve is my persnal ideas. Here I am in the hpe that my advice will add a brilliant tuch t the imprved versin f ur schl English Pst.
Yurs sincerely,
Cheng Fei
【解析】这篇书面表达属于提纲类范畴，这篇作文要求就校英语报改版的事情给校报编辑写一封电子邮件，表达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容： 1.你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由；2.你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由，根据自己的建议选定栏目的设置并以邮件方式表达自己的观点。考生在写作过程中要确定切题且符合英语写作逻辑的篇章结构。确立邮件文体之后，要弄清要点，围绕要点展开，条理要清晰，理由要充分，关键的是在写作的过程中，要注意人称，时态语态和常见的语法问题，文章尽量简洁，在文章中尽可能多地使用高大上的词汇，遵循短语优先原则在配以特殊句型和复合句的应用，让文章更上档次。
【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，运用了一些词组，如：share with 和…分享，Needless t say不必说， accrding t 根据， have psitive effects n对…有积极的影响，in turn反之，take… int accunt将…考虑在内，make a great difference t对…有很大的影响，in the hpe that希望，句式上体现出多变的特点，如：Cmpared t the entertainment ,I hld the view that the value f the clumns cncerning health and culture is mre imprtant . 这句话用了过去分词和同位语从句，The main factr is that it is f great significance t keep healthy while lss f health means kissing gdbye t life. 这句话用了表语从句和while表示对比的用法， the prgress in acquiring cultures cntributes t bradening ne’s hrizns, which in turn is beneficial t ne’s study and the establishment f philsphy f life.这句话使用了非限制性定语从句， What has been mentined abve is my persnal ideas. 这句话用了主语从句，还有范文还使用了 In additin, Furthermre, On the ne hand, On the ther hand,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。
第一部分：说明写信的目的
套语：
1. I'm srry t hear that yu are having truble fitting in yur new schl. Such prblems are quite nrmal. Perhaps the fllwing suggestins are helpful.
很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
2. I have received yur letter saying yu plan t play a visit t China fr ten days next mnth. Perhaps the fllwing suggestins are helpful t yu.
我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。
3. I'm writing t yu t present what I think n the further imprvement f ur htel s as t attract mre clients(顾客).
我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。
4. Yu have asked me fr my advice with regard t hw t learn Chinese , and I will try t make sme suggestins here.
你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。
5. I'm very glad t receive yur letter asking fr my advice n hw t fit in the new schl life. Here are a few suggestins.
很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。
6. I'm very glad t have received yur e-mail. Nw I'm writing t give yu sme advice n hw t learn English well in high schl.
很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在高中学好英语，我写信给你一些建议。
第二部分：介绍详情、说明原因
套语：
(1) 它将于下午两点钟开始，四点钟结束，在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。
It will begin at 2:00 pm and last tw hurs, during which time 15 well-prepared cntestants will deliver their speeches.
(2) 我们将会在上午八点出发，九点到达那里。
We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00.
(3) 下午，我们会一起……
During the afternn, we’
(4) 记得带上水和午餐。
Remember t take water and lunch with yu.
(5) 顺便说一下，你可以乘坐322路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部。
By the way, yu may take Bus N. 322 and it will take yu directly t the club.
(6) 我知道你的母语是英语，还是一名英语老师。我代表我们学校真诚地邀请你来比赛现场。
I knw yu are a native speaker f English and an English teacher, and I, n behalf f ur schl, sincerely invite yu t be part f the cntest.
(7) 既然你如此渴望提高英语，这会是一个很好的机会。
Since yu are s eager t imprve yur English, it will prve t be a great chance.
(8) 我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。
I’m sure that yu will enjy yurself there.
第三部分：提出建议
套语：
我建议……
I’d like t suggest that…
May I suggest that…?
In my pinin…
I wuld like t make a recmmendatin that…
I am writing t advise…
If I were yu, I wuld…
第四部分：希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复
套语：
1. I hpe these suggestins will be f use t yu. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成).
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。
2. I hpe these suggestins will be f use t yu. Remember: The man wh has made up his mind t win will never say “impssible”(一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”).
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”。
3. Best wishes!
(给你)最美好的祝愿！
4. I hpe that my suggestins are helpful fr yu anyway. I wuld be mre than happy t see imprvement.
无论如何，我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。
5. I believe that yu will take my suggestins int serius accunt. Whatever yu decide t d, gd luck with yur studies/wrk！
我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，祝你学习/工作好运。
6. I sincerely hpe my advice will be sme help fr yu. If there is mre I can d t help, please let me knw.
我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。
必背模板
模板①
Dear________,
Yu have asked me fr my advice with regard t________________, and I will try t make sme cnducive suggestins here.
In my pinin, yu wuld be wise t take the fllwing actins: ________________(建议的内容).
I hpe yu will find these prpsals useful, and I wuld be ready t discuss this matter with yu t further details.
Gd luck with yur________________(祝愿).
Yurs Sincerely,
Li Hua
模板②
Dear_______,
I’m glad t receive yur letter asking fr my advice n hw t _________________(引出对方需要建议的主题).
Here are a few suggestin(引出作者的建议). First , It is imprtant t ______________. Then, it als helps t ___________. Besides, it shuld be a gd idea t __________. Yu can als ___________.
(可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议，如下)
As t __________, I suggest _____________(需要具体到某一方面). In additin, _________(其他的建议). I’m sure ______________(预测可能的结果， 给对方以行为的信心和决心).
I hpe ____________(表达愿望)。
Yurs Sincerely,
Li Hua
思路点金
1. 建议信写作注意事项
建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告，不是投诉信。观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。
2. 写作方法
① 首段：
a. 简介自己，不要罗嗦；
b. 说明目的，注意语气。
② 主体：
a. 提出具体建议；
b. 首先肯定优点，再写改进内容，否则会变成投诉信；
c. 经常进行交流，注意对方感受，时时提到你和我，否则容易跑题写成议论文。
= 3 \* GB3 ③尾段：总结建议，注意礼貌，使对方易于接受。
3. 写作流程图
必背范文
假定你是李华，你校在学生中征集意见，询问学生是否赞成开设iPad课堂(iPad classrms)。你支持开设iPad课堂；请给校长写一封建议信，要点如下：
1.资源丰富；
2.促进交流；
3.利于环保；
4.其他理由。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头语已为你写好。
Dear Headmaster,
We have been asked abut ur pinins n pening iPad classrms.__________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
说明写信目的
介绍详情、说明原因
提出建议
提出希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复
【范文】
Dear Headmaster,
We have been asked abut ur pinins n pening iPad classrms. I am in favr f this plan fr the fllwing reasns. T begin with, everyne learns differently. Students can custmize their iPad with materials that fit their level and learning style, and thus tailr it t different needs. Mrever, when cnnected t the Internet, students can interact with teachers and classmates abut what they learn mre cnveniently. Fr the sake f envirnmental prtectin, pening iPad classrms is a gd way t save trees that we have been cutting dwn fr paper. Mst imprtantly, I believe students will develp their interests in the subjects by enjying a new way f learning.
I hpe yu wuld take my ideas int cnsideratin and we lk frward t attending an iPad class.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua