高中考试英语05.应用文之求助信
展开假定你是李华,乘坐FL753航班抵达伦教后发现钱包遗失。请给航空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括:
1. 行程信息;
2. 钱包特征;
3. 联系方式。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing t reprt the lss f my wallet. On 1st Nvember, 2018 I flew business class n yur flight 753 frm China t Lndn.
I clearly remember it was with me immediately I barded the plane. Hwever, n arrival in Lndn Heathrw Airprt, I fund it gne. I guess it must have slipped ut f my pcket during the flight. It is a black leather ne with arund 200 dllars, my ID card, and 2 credit cards in it. Alng with the items mentined abve, the wallet cntains a family pht, my precius memry. As yu can imagine, these matter a lt t me.
Has anybdy happened t find it? Please email me at xxx@gglemail.cm
Thank yu fr yur time and supprt.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇考查的写作类型是求助信
【详解】
第一步:根据提示可知,本文是一封求助信。李华乘坐FL753航班抵达伦教后发现钱包遗失,要求给航空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括:1.行程信息;2. 钱包特征;3. 联系方式。
第二步:根据写作要求确定关键词(组),如:I am writing t reprt the lss f my wallet. barded the plane, n arrival…, I fund it gne. it must have……Has anybdy happened t find it? Thank yu fr yur time and supprt.
第三步:根据提示和关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。时态以一般现在时为主,一般过去时为辅。
第四步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
What’s wrse, my cash, ID card, and 2 credit cards were in it. 更糟的是,里面有我的现金,身份证和两张信用卡。What’s wrse意为“更糟糕的是”,连接并列两个坏的东西,且后面一个更严重。
【高分句型2】
I’d appreciate it if yu culd help me t get it back. 如果你能帮我把它拿回来,我会很感激的。I’d appreciate it if…如果……我会很感激的。
首段:请求帮助
1.Nw I am writing t ask yu t give me a hand/d me a favr/lend me a hand.
现在我写信请你帮我一个忙。
2.Iam writing in the hpe that yu will be kind enugh t d me a favr.
我希望你能帮我一个忙。
3.I wnder if yu culd d me a fvur, this is the first time that my uncle visits us.
我想知道你是否能帮我一个忙,这是我叔叔第一次来访,所以我希望你能到机场接他。
4.Iwnder if yu sme Chinese knts fr me. I made them myself with red silk threads, clth and therbmaterials.
我想知道你是否能帮我出售一些中国结,这是我自己用 红丝线、布等材料做的
5.Wuld yu like t d me a favr t have my draft plished?
你愿意帮我润色草稿吗?
中间段:描述具体困难
1.1am encuntering three prblems which truble me a lt. T begin with,… What’s mre, … What trubles me mst is …
我遇到的三个间题很困扰我,首先 ……另外……最困扰我的是……
2.Unfrtunately,I find/feel it quite/extremely difficult/hard t d with(使用形式宾语)
不幸的是,我觉得做某事十分/非常难。
3.lt is difficult/challenging fr me t d sth.
做某事是困难的/有挑战性的。
4.Thave truble/difficulty/prblems (in)ding sth.
我做某事有困难。
5.Dmg sth.is anther terrible headache fr me.(使用动名词做主语)
做某事是另一件让我很头痛的事。
6.I find myself struggling with sth.(使用find复合结构)
我发现自己做某事有困难。
7.Faced with the abve prblems,I am anxius t get yur help. Wuld yu please ffer me sme advice
面对上述问题,我渴望得到你的帮助。请你给我一些建议。
结尾段:希望得到帮助:
1.Iwnder if can help me with these difficulties. I really appreciate it if yu culd help me ?
我想知道你能不能帮我解决这些困难。如果你能帮助我,我真的很感激。
2.I wuld appreciate it very much if yu can ffer me sme necessary/timely help(give/lend me sme practical/valuable advice)
如果你能给我一些必要的帮助/及时的帮助(给我一些实用的/有价值的建议)。我会很感激。
常见困难:
【生活方面】
与人相处
get alng well with my classmates/ the new teacher / my parents.
和我的同学/新老师/父母相处
把握时间
arrange and make gd use f my everyday time fr valuable things.
安排和利用每天的时间去做有意义的事情
明确目标
knw the purpse f my life and the destinatin f my future in rder t passinately live a purpse-driven life everyday.
知道我生命的目的和未来的目标,以便每天充满激情地过着“目标驱动”的生活
【学习方面】
不懂语法
have truble in mastering the advanced grammar rules and put them int use in my speaking and writing.
进步太慢
find myself making prgress nt as fast as befre, which has been annying me fr a lng time.
精力有限
can’t be passinate and energetic all day lng s as t make every mment meaningful and splendid.
必背模板
模板①
Dear ______ ,
I am writing t frmally request t ______(请求的内容).The reasn fr _____________is that_____________(给出原因). I___________ , s I _____________(给出细节).I wuld als like t request ___________(提出进一步的要求). I am srry fr any incnvenience I have caused. Thank yu fr yur attentin t these requests. If yu have any questins, d nt hesitate t cntact me at __________(电话号码).
I lk frward t a favrable reply.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Ming
模板②
Dear________,
My name is _______________(自我介绍). I’m writing a letter t yu t ask fr sme help. I have met difficulty in _______________(求助内容). First, I find ___________(困难1). Besides, ________(困难2). What’s mre, __________(困难3).
Faced with s much difficulty, I have t ask yu fr sme help. Wuld yu like t ____________(委婉提出请求)?In the meanwhile, I beg yu t (请求内容) s that ___________(请求目的). Als, I wuld like yu t (请求内容).
I’m sure that I can make great prgress in _____________(表达期待).
Yurs,
Li Hua
思路点金
求助信是当个人遇到一些自己无法解决的问题或困难时向别人请求帮助的一种书信。
首段:表明写信目的,请求帮助;
中间段:要清晰陈述请求帮助的具体内容;
结尾段:希望得到帮助。
注意:语气委婉、真诚,并要向收信人表示感谢。
必背范文
假如你是李华。最近,你与父母之间关系紧张, 甚至发生争吵。你决定给外国的笔友Charlie写一封信,向他求助。内容包括:
1.谈谈你目前遇到的问题;
2.针对如何改善与父母的关系向他求助。
注意:
1.词数100左右, 开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Charlie,
Hw are yu getting alng?
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I am lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
Dear Charlie,
Hw are yu getting alng? Recently I have quarreled with my parents, which makes me very annyed. I am writing t ask yu fr help.
Yu knw, my parents dn’t allw me t g ut and play with my friends at weekends. They think I shuld make full use f every minute t wrk n my lessns. Hwever, I think I need t play with my friends s that I can relax myself after a week’s hard wrk at schl and it is a gd way fr me t keep in tuch with my friends. I knw it is wrng t quarrel with them, but I dn’t knw what t d t persuade them t change their mind and develp a gd relatinship with them. Wuld yu please ffer me sme advice?
I am lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
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