统考版2024届高考英语二轮专项分层特训卷35分写作规范练五（附解析）

这是一份统考版2024届高考英语二轮专项分层特训卷35分写作规范练五（附解析），共3页。试卷主要包含了每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；，只允许修改10处，多者不计分，提出你的看法等内容，欢迎下载使用。

第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
[2023·哈尔滨市高三大联考]
A recent survey has shwn that are the hbbies f the 1，500 students in ur schl.
The result shwed that ver 40% f them are fnd f playing musical instruments because they can imprve their life quality. Abut 35% enjy surf the Internet, which helps them knw abut wrld affair. T ur surprise, a number f the students paying much attentin t reading is small. It nly takes up fr 12%, if reading is the best way t gain knwledge.
Therefre, mre students are strngly advised take up reading. Plus, they shuld take an active part in sprts and develp ther hbbies prper besides entertainment.
第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
[2023·皖江名校高三摸底考试]
假定你是李华。志愿者们最近对你校学生的周末时间分配进行了调查。请你结合下表内容，给校报英语专栏编辑Mr. Jhnsn写封信，反映这次调查的结果。内容要求：
1．描述图表内容；
2．分析所反映的问题；
3．提出你的看法。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．信的开头和结尾已为你写出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Jhnsn，
Recently vlunteers have cnducted a survey abut hw the students spend their weekends.








Yurs，
Li Hua
35分写作规范练（五）
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DearMr. Jhnsn，
Recentlyvlunteershavecnductedasurveyabuthwthestudentsspendtheirweekends.
As can be seen frm the pie, amng the surveyed students, abut 51% f their time is spent n hmewrk while nline activities accunt fr nearly 35%. Meanwhile, ding physical exercise takes up abut 7% f their time, sharing the same percentage with reading bks.
The survey certainly leaves me deep in thught. T much hmewrk leaves the students n time fr physical exercise r reading, affecting their health and further develpment. Even wrse, many f the surveyed waste much time nline, sme even addicted t cmputer games.
S mre attentin shuld be given t this case. Students shuld have mre freedm t smething mre meaningful, rather than just ding bring repetitive exercises. Otherwise, it may have a negative effect n ur future.
Yurs，
LiHua