高中英语2024届高考复习建议信写作讲解与练习

这是一份高中英语2024届高考复习建议信写作讲解与练习，共5页。试卷主要包含了写作框架，背满分模板，建议信语言表达分点练习，写作练笔等内容，欢迎下载使用。

二、背满分模板
Dear Tm,
(写信的缘由和目的)Learning yur grades have been slipping dwn because f yur pride and laziness, I feel srry.(说明对方遇到的困难或问题) As fr hw t get higher grades,I?dliketgiveyusmeadvice.
(给出具体的建议,也可给出建议的理由)Firstfall,yu?dbetter keep wrking hard rather than be prud.Never frget why yu started, and yur missin can be accmplished.(建议一)Besides,it?sagdideatreview the cntent that yu have missed studying recently.(建议二)What?smre,Isuggestyu make a prper study plan which yu can keep up.(建议三)
(表示期待)I hpe my suggestins can help yu.
Yurs,
Li Hua
三、建议信语言表达分点练习
首段：呈现问题,表明写作目的:
1.我写信表达关于我对….的观点
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2.你问我关于…的建议，我会尽力给一些建议
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3.回复你在信中告诉我你希望….我有一些建议给你
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4.很抱歉听到你在….方面有困难。我非常愿意帮助你，我的建议如下。
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5.你向我征求关于如何学好汉语的建议,我给你一些实用的建议。
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6.我很高兴收到你的来信,你在信中向我征求如何专心上网课的建议。
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7.关于如何提高书法,我想给你一些建议。
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8.我愿意帮助你并按你的要求提一些实用的建议。
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中段：介绍建议的内容并说明建议的好处:
1.我认为对你最合适的…是….,以至于….
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2.你最好…/做….是好的,那样的话, ….
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3.为什么不…?/ 做….怎么样？/强烈的建议你应该…,这样，…
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4.如果我是你的话，我将…./做…/通过做….将是一个更好的选择，
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5.就我个人的意见，你做…什么将是明智的/更有帮助的。
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6.在我看来,除非必要,待在家里避免出门是明智的。
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7.为什么不参加志愿者俱乐部?如果你这样做的话,你不仅能帮助他人也会交到朋友。
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8.此外,我强烈建议你准时或早一点到。
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9.另一个建议是,戴上防护口罩,以防外出时被感染。_________________________________________________________
10.如果我是你,我会经常锻炼以保持健康。_______________________________________________________
11.你最好经常锻炼,这是帮你远离感染的最重要的方法。
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尾段：希望建议有用或被接受:
1.我希望我的建议能够对你有作用。
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2.如果你能考虑我的建议，我将不胜感激。
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3.我相信你将会考虑我的建议的。
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4.我希望你将发现这些建议是有用的/有帮助的/实际的
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5.希望我的建议对你有所帮助/有益。
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6.我认为,如果你采纳我的建议并相信自己的话会有益处的。
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四、写作练笔
（1）假定你是李华。你的外国朋友David 最近选修了中文课程。他来信向你咨询学好中文的方法。请你写一封回信,内容包括:
1.提出建议;
2.表达祝愿。
注意:1.写作词数应为 80 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
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（2）假定你是李华,你的澳大利亚的朋友Jim所居住的地区最近出现了新冠病毒患者,他感到很害怕,向你征求建议。请你给他提出建议,内容包括:
1.你的建议和理由;
2.表达祝愿。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
好词
①at this particular time 在这个特殊时期
②strengthen immune system 增强免疫力
③stay away frm 远离
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（3）假如你是李华,为丰富校园英语广播节目内容,校英语广播电台向全体同学征求建议。请你向负责管理英语广播电台的老师Jhn提出三点建议,使校园英语广播内容丰富起来。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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（4）假定你是李华,你校英语广播电台将对播出时段、时长、栏目等做调整,正在向听众征求意见。请你写封邮件,内容包括:
1.你的建议;
2.你的理由。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【参考答案】
二、祝贺信语言表达分点练习
首段：呈现问题,表明写作目的:
1.I am writing t express my views cncerning/cnvey my cncern abut…
2.Yu have asked fr my advice abut…and I will try t make sme suggestins.
3.In respnse t yur letter telling me yu hpe t…, I have sme ideas fr yu.
4.I’m srry t hear yu’re having difficulty/truble in…; I’m nly t willing t help yu and my tips are as fllws.
5.Yuhaveaskedmefradviceregarding hw t learn Chinese well,andI?mfferingsmepracticalsuggestins.
6.I?mdelightedtreceiveyurletter,inwhichyuaskedmefradvicen hw t fcus n nline curses.
7.Asfrhwt imprve calligraphy,I?dliketfferyusmeadvice.
8.I?mwillingtgiveyuahandandffersmepracticalsuggestinsatyurrequest.
中段：介绍建议的内容并说明建议的好处:
1.I think the mst suitable…fr yu is…, s that…
2.Yu’d better…/It’s better t…In that way,…
3.Why nt d…?/What abut ding…?/It’s strngly advised/suggested that yu shuld…Thus,…
4.If I were yu, I wuld…/It wuld be a gd chice t…By ding that,…
5.In my persnal pinin, it wuld be wise f yu/mre helpful t d…
6.Persnally/AsfarasI?mcncerned,itwuldbeawisechiceif yu stay at hme and avid ging utdrs unless necessary.
7.Whynt jin a vlunteer club? If yu d this, yu can nt nly help thers but make friends.
8.Inadditin,Istrnglysuggest/advise yu arrive n time r a little earlier.
9.Anthersuggestinisthatyushuld wear prtective mask t prevent yurself frm getting infected if yu g utdrs.
10.IfIwereyu/WereIyu,Iwuld wrk ut regularly in rder t keep healthy.
11.Yu?dbetter exercise regularly, which is the mst imprtant way t help yu stay away frm any infectins.
尾段：希望建议有用或被接受:
1.I hpe my suggestins can make a difference t yu.
2.I wuld appreciate it if yu culd cnsider my suggestins.
3.I believe yu will take my advice int accunt/cnsideratin.
4.I hpe yu will find these prpsals/suggestins practical/useful/helpful.
5.Hpemysuggestinswillbefsmehelp/benefittyu.
6.Persnally,itwuldbebeneficialifyufllwmyadvice and have faith in yurself.
四、写作练笔
（1）假定你是李华。你的外国朋友David 最近选修了中文课程。他来信向你咨询学好中文的方法。请你写一封回信,内容包括:
1.提出建议;
2.表达祝愿。
注意:1.写作词数应为 80 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
I’m delighted t learn that yu’ve started learning Chinese! Knwing that yu wuld like t have a better cmmand f Chinese, I’m writing tshare with yu sme practical suggestins.
With prper guidance and enugh practice, yu’rebund t learn Chinese well.T begin with, it is advisable that yu regularly watch sme Chinese learning prgrammes, which will expse yu t an authentic learning atmsphere and will help yu develp a better understanding f Chinese culture.Besides, yu’d better make sme Chinese friends and cmmunicate with them as much as pssible.With frequent cmmunicatin in real life, yu’ll eventually imprve yur ral Chinese and feel mre cnfident.
Hpefully my tips abve can be f sme help.Wish yu success.
Yurs,
Li Hua
（2）假定你是李华,你的澳大利亚的朋友Jim所居住的地区最近出现了新冠病毒患者,他感到很害怕,向你征求建议。请你给他提出建议,内容包括:
1.你的建议和理由;
2.表达祝愿。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
好词
①at this particular time 在这个特殊时期
②strengthen immune system 增强免疫力
③stay away frm 远离
Dear Jim,
(写信意图) As fr yur letter asking abut hw t avid being infected at this particular time,I?dliketfferyusmepracticalsuggestins.(具体的建议及理由) Furthermre, handsfrequentlyandprperly.What?s mre,strengthen yur immune system and exercise regularly,
(表达祝愿)Ihpemyadvicewillbefsmehelptyu.
Yurs,
Li Hua
（3）假如你是李华,为丰富校园英语广播节目内容,校英语广播电台向全体同学征求建议。请你向负责管理英语广播电台的老师Jhn提出三点建议,使校园英语广播内容丰富起来。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jhn,
Hearing that the English radi statin f ur schl is asking fr suggestins n hw t enrich the prgramme, I sincerely want t express my ideas.
T begin with, I strngly suggest that English news shuld be added, thrugh which we students can learn the latest news at hme and abrad.In additin, it is advisable t invite rdinary students t the bradcasting rm t d a talent shw, which will becme a hit f ur schl.Lastly, many students dn’t have gd learning methds, s if yu can invite the utstanding students t share their learning experience, yur prgramme will cme t the attentin f students.
I hpe my advice will be f help.Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
4）假定你是李华,你校英语广播电台将对播出时段、时长、栏目等做调整,正在向听众征求意见。请你写封邮件,内容包括:
1.你的建议;
2.你的理由。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear English radi statin,
Knwing that yu will adjust the bradcast time, length and clumn, I am writing t give my suggestins.
First f all, I think a 20-minute news summary can be played befre the mrning reading class, which will help students understand natinal events and stimulate their listening ability.Secndly, English pp sngs can be played fr ten minutes after schl at nn, which can relieve students’ study pressure all mrning.Finally, during the afternn break, sme excellent sample essays published by students can be played.
Hping my suggestins can be helpful.
Yurs,
Li Hua