中考英语作文高分模板课件

这是一份中考英语作文高分模板课件，共11页。
书面表达高分作文“十字诀”一、结构：三段式：观点-要点-总结二、要点：全，围绕中心三、逻辑：逻辑词递进：first, second, third, finally; first of all, in addition/what’s more/ more over(都是另外的意思), in a word/all in all(表示总结); last but not least(最后但同样重要的是)转折：but, yet, however等因果：because, because of, since, as, for, now that, thanks to, due to, so, thus, therefore, as a result, so that, so/such...that...总结：in a word, in general, in short, above all, after all, generally speaking, to sum up, finally, in conclusion, in summary四、语法：硬性要求，如人称、时态、语态、从句、单复数等问题五、亮点：高级词汇和加分句型1. 表达不同观点看法的句型 = 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ① Different people have different ideas/opinions on this problem. 关于这个问题，不同的人有不同的观点  = 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ② Some people think that it is adj. to do sth. 一些人认为做某事是....的 = 3 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ③ Some of them are against the idea that it is.... 他们中有些人反对....的想法 = 4 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ④ As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that......(观点一或二). It is not only because......, but also because.... All in all, the more..., the more...2. 解决问题的句型 = 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ① In recent days, we have to face a problem--______, which is becoming more and more serious. 最近，我们不得不面临一个问题：_______, 这个问题变得越来越严重； = 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ② Faced with..., we should take a series of effective measures to deal with the situation. For one thing, ........(解决方法一). For another, ......(解决方法二). Finally, .......(解决方法三). = 3 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ③ I am sure if everyone can make a contribution to …, the … will become better and better. 我相信如果每个人都能对....做出贡献，这个...将会变得越来越好。3. 说明原因句型 = 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ① The reason for this are as follows. 这一点的几种原因如下 = 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ② For one reason is that ....... For another reason is that ..... 一个原因是...., 另一个原因是.... = 3 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ③ On the one hand, .......; On the other hand,....... 一方面.....，另一方面.....4. 说明利弊型句型 = 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ① Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over .......(作文题目). In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in...(题目议题).  = 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ② Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. 通常来说，人们相信有如下几点优势。 = 3 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ③ Just as a popular saying goes, “Every coin has two sides.” It still has negative aspects. To begin with, 缺点一；In addition, 缺点二.  = 4 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ④ To sum up, we should try to make full use of the advantages and reduce the disadvantages at the same time. In that case, we will make a better use of ..... 总之，我们应该尽力充分利用其优势，同时减少缺点。如果那样的话，我们将能更好的利用....5. 正反观点式句型 = 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ① Recently we have had a discussion about whether we should..... Our opinions are divided on this topic. (导入，观点有分歧) = 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ② Most of the students are in favor of it. (正方观点) Here are the reasons why they support it. (列出2-3个理由) However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点). Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more...In addition...(列出2-3个反对理由) = 3 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ③ Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more benefits than harms, so I support it. (个人观点)6. 个人观点论述句型 = 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ① As a student, I am strongly in favor of the decision. The reasons for this are as follows. (亮明自己的观点） = 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ② First of all..... Secondly.....Besides..... (列出2-3个赞成或反对的理由) = 3 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ③ In conclusion, I believe that...... (总结，构成总分总结构)7. 提出建议类句型 = 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ① I’m so glad to hear that you show a deep interest in ...... in you last last letter(背景介绍). As far as I am concerned, it would be wise to take the following suggestions. (导入下文) = 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ② I am sorry to hear that you are troubled by something. And I am glad to give you some advice on the problem you are faced with. = 3 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ③ To begin with, I’d like to suggest that you should ..... Because it can ....... In addition, if I were you, I would ....... This is a good way of ...... What’s more, you are supposed to....... Only then you will.....(列举建议内容以及理由) = 4 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ④ I hope my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement. (表达愿望)8. 表达活动邀请类句型 = 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ① I know that you are interested in.... And I am writing to invite you to take part in..... (背景介绍，提出邀请) = 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ② There is an activity about.......(活动名称), which will be held .......(活动地点). It will begin at 2:00 p.m. on July 1st(时间) and all the teachers and students will attend. On that day, .....will be put on. (活动内容).  = 3 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ③ Come and join us! I think we’ll have a great time. (再次提出邀请) = 4 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ④ I am looking forward to your early reply. (期待早日收到回信)9. 表达求助类句型 = 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ① ......(背景介绍). I find it is quite hard to ..... (提出问题). Therefore, I am writing this letter to ask you to do me a favor/ give me a hand. (表达目的) = 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ② I’m faced with some problems which trouble me a lot. To begin with....... What’s more..... What troubles me most is that it is difficult for me to ......  = 3 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ③ Faced with the above problems, I am anxious to get your help. I wonder if you can help me with these difficulties. I really appreciate it if you could help me.10. 表达感谢类句型 = 1 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ① Thanks to /Due to/Owing to + n./V-ing（由于，多亏……） Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream.  = 2 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ② Without your help, it’s impossible for me to…. (没有你的帮助，……对我来视说是不可能的) Without your help, it’s impossible for me to get such good grades.  = 3 \* GB3 \* MERGEFORMAT ③ Your help makes it possible for sb. to do sth.(你的帮助使得我做某事成为可能。)Your help makes it possible for me to change myself. 2021年中考英语作文范文必备1. 【低碳生活-环保】现在我们周围的环境污染越来越严重。作为一个中学生，我们应节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起，做一个“低碳生活”的中学生。请以“My Low--carbon Life”为题，写一篇短文描述自己的“低碳生活”。My Low-carbon LifeThe environmental pollution is worse and worse today. Many trees are cut down, and water and air are polluted. As a student I try to have a low-carbon life to save energy and reduce pollution.　　Firstly, I often walk to school. It can reduce air pollution. Secondly, I always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Thirdly, I always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water.I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more beautiful. 2. 【朋友-社交】每当朋友之间即将分手的时候，耳边常常会响起这首歌“朋友啊朋友!你可曾想起了我，如果你正享受幸福，请你忘记我……”。请你以Friends为题，写一篇90词左右的短文，可以围绕主题适当展开，阐述交友的重要性和好处。FriendsWhat are friends? We often talk about the topic with others. I think friends are those people who can help you when you are in trouble. Don’t forget the saying, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” Friends can tell you your mistakes, though what they say is hard for you to listen to. You can share your happiness, trouble and worry with friends. Someone also says, “You can’t walk any step without a friend.” So I think friends are very important to us. I would like to make as many friends as possible.3. 【是否应该帮助陌生人-社会现象】最近，你们班就“是否应该帮助陌生人”展开了讨论，同学们就这一话题意见不一，你的看法如何?根据所提供的信息，以“Should We Help Strangers?”为题，写一篇短文。Should We Help Strangers?Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers. Different students have different opinions.　　Some think we should try to help strangers. Helping others is a virtue, and helping others is helping ourselves.We may come across some trouble and need others' help some day.If everyone isn't willing to help us just because we are strangers to them, it's hard to imagine what our world will be like.　　However, some are afraid that helping others can sometimes bring us trouble.Sometimes we are just misunderstood and even have to pay the cost of kindness.In my opinion, we should try our best to help others when they are in need of help, but we should also protect ourselves from getting into trouble.If everyone tries a little kindness, our world will be full of love.4.【对我影响最深的人-人物介绍】 学校英语社团在举办征文比赛，请你根据以下提示内容，写一篇题为“The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most”的英语文章。内容要点：1. 对我影响最大的人是我的妈妈，她四十几岁;2. 她总是耐心倾听我的问题，并建议我如何解决它们;3. 作为一名医生，她常说再怎么仔细也不为过。她总是加班，把她的大部分时间都奉献给了工作;4. 所以，我认为她不仅是位好妈妈，也是名好医生。5. 我希望 ……The Person Who Has Influenced Me MostMy mother is the person who has influenced me most.She is in her forties. She always listens to my problems patiently. And she advises me how to solve them. As a doctor, she often says she can’t be too careful. She often works extra hours. She has devoted most of her time to her work. So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor.I hope I can be a person like her. I also hope she will pay more attention to her own health. She’d better have more time to relax herself.5.【如何与父母保持良好的关系-家庭教育】某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为“How to keep a good relationship with parents”的征文活动。请你根据以下要点, 写一篇80个词左右的英语短文参加此次活动:1. 父母规矩太多, 过于强调学习成绩, 不理解自己等问题;2. 你对这些问题的看法;3. 你与父母保持良好关系的做法。How to keep a good relationship with parents　　In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my parents don’t quite understand me.　　However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much pressure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard, listen to them, talk to them as friends, tell them my troubles, and help them do more housework.6.【安全演讲】为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，某校开展了以”安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿。1.慎重交友 2.遇险报警 3.安全饮食 4. 其他(1-2点)How to keep safe?　　As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions.　　First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also,we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Last but not least, summer is coming, and we must remember it's dangerous to swim in the river.In short, safety must come first !7.【关于阅读】你喜欢阅读吗?请你以 “Reading---A good Habit” 为题写一篇有关阅读的短文。内容包括：1. 你的阅读习惯(喜欢的书籍、阅读的时间地点、购书方式等等)。2. 阅读带给你什么益处(至少两点)。3. 号召大家都读书。Reading---A good Habit　　Reading is a very good habit. I like reading very much. In my eyes, I think that forming a good reading habit is necessary for us. It can not only improve our knowledge but also make us to think over more different things efficiently.　　Besides, we can do some reading every time when we are free. For example, I often read some of my favorite books in my spare time both at home or in the library. What I like most are story books because most of them are quite interesting. Now I often buy my favorite books on line for its big discount.Finally, I like to share my favorite books with our family or my classmates. Since reading can benefits us a lot, it’s time for us to have our good reading habit now!8.【养成良好的生活和学习习惯】养成良好的生活习惯和学习习惯，对于我们每一位学生成长很有帮助。请根据提示要点用英语写一篇词数80-100左右的短文，发表在学校网站上。A Good Habit, a Successful School LifeA habit is something that you do often or regularly almost without thinking, especially something that is hard to stop doing.In our daily life, we ought to keep a healthy diet.Also, it’s necessary for us to exercise a lot.And we should learn to make good use of our time.In our school life, we should prepare well for each lesson.In class, we must listen to the teacher carefully.Besides, it’s important for us to do our homework on our own.In a word, good habits can help us learn things better and improve our skills.We can learn to control ourselves if we have good habits.　　I think good habits are really good for our mind and body.9.【文明行为】为了使同学们与人交往时举止更加文雅，你校学生会正在举办以“How to behave well?”为主题的英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文。(以上背景内容无需表述)短文要点如下：1.学生应该守时、守信、不撒谎、不说脏话;2.礼貌待人，热心助人;3.遵守交通规则;不在公共场所喧哗;不乱扔垃圾;4.请你就此话题再补充一至两点个人看法。How to behave well　　Behaving well is the secret of getting on well with others.　　As a student, I think it’s very important to do everything on time and keep promises. Never lie to others or say dirty words. We should be polite to others and ready to help people in need. We’d better not talk loudly in public. Don’t throw litter or spit about. And remember to obey traffic rules.Finally，learn to work with others. We need good teamwork in our life.10.【关于梦想】每一个人,每一个国家，都拥有梦想。“中国梦”是目前最热的话题。作为中学生，你是如何理解中国梦的?你的中国梦是什么呢?为实现你的梦想，你将怎么做呢?假设你叫李红(Li Hong),请以“My Dream”为题，写一篇不少于100词的英语短文。My DreamEveryone has his dreams. As young students, we have many kinds of dreams. These dreams are our China dreams. The dreams can be very big, and they can also be small. In fact ,a big dream is made up of many small dreams.My name’s Li Hong. I also have a dream. I dream of becoming a great scientist. From now on, I have to study hard to achieve my dream. I must learn as much as I can. When I meet any difficulty, I won’t give it up , I must get it over .I’m sure it’s very important to dream,. Some dreams are more realistic, others are not. No matter what our dreams are, we should hold on to them, they can just come true one day.11.【与他人相处】当今社会，与人交往越来越成为一种不可或缺的能力，作为中学生，学会如何与人相处尤为重要。假如上周你们班对“如何与人相处”展开了讨论，请根据以下的讨论结果，以“How to get on well with others?”为题，写一篇英语短文。How to get on well with others　　As we all know, students should learn how to get on well with others. But in what ways?　　First of all, we should respect others. Everyone has their own way to do things, so we should understand each other. Besides, it is important for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness. What’s more, we should be kind to others and offer necessary help to those who are in trouble.In my opinion, we should treat others in an honest way. Only in this way can we get along well with each other and feel happy.12.【饮食文化】在不同的地方有不同的风俗习惯，饮食文化很重要。中国的饮食文化不同于西方。请你谈谈中国的三餐，以“when you in China, do as the Chinese do!” 为题写一篇短文。When in China, do as the Chinese doMeals in China are different in some ways from meals in the West.In China, lunch is usually served around 12 o’clock.As for dinner, Chinese people eat it much earlier than people in the West.Chopsticks are used to eat most food.Generally, for dinner, there will be lots of different dishes, not just three courses.Besides, Chinese people like to talk about food, so it’s a good topic during a meal.The golden rule is: when you’re in China, watch the Chinese and do as they do!13.【传统节日-春节】近年来我国的发展世人瞩目，中国的传统文化正越来越受到各国朋友的关注。请根据提示，以“The Spring Festival”为题写一篇短文，向外国朋友介绍我国的春节。The Spring FestivalThe Spring Festival is one of the most important and traditional festivals in China. It is on the first day of the lunar year.People usually start preparing for the festival one month before it comes. They prepare delicious food, and clean and decorate their homes. On Chinese New Year’s Eve, the family all get together for a big dinner. They stay up till midnight, and then play fireworks and crackers for good luck. On the first day of the lunar New Year, children put on their new clothes and greet their parents. They are very happy to get lucky money from them.14.【谈论ipad使用利弊】假如你是李华,是一名初中生。随着科技的发展,iPad已成为中学生的新宠。用iPad既可以听音乐,阅读纯文本电子书,又可以玩电子游戏。请你用英语给某英语报社写一篇短文,谈谈中学生使用iPad的利弊。短文内容必须包括以下几点:1. 使用iPad对学习的好处;2. 对课堂纪律和学习可能产生的负面影响;3. 提出自己的建议并说明理由。Is iPad good or bad for middle school studentsI’m a junior high school student named Li Hua. Now many students have iPads and they think it’s a fashion to use them. Using an iPad, we can listen to music, download a lot of learning materials and read them on the screen. Apparently, it’s helpful to our study, especially to our English listening.Some students, however, bring their iPads to the classroom and listen to music without earphones, which makes the teacher and other students greatly annoyed. Some of them even waste precious time in class playing video games.In my opinion, as students, we should make good use of iPads to help achieve academic success. The classroom is a place for students to study, and therefore concentration is awfully needed for us to learn our lessons. Furthermore, the school should make a rule to guide the students to use iPads in a proper way.15.【感谢】三年的初中生活即将结束,静坐在考场中的你,一定会思绪万千。三年来,你在学习、生活等方面取得了优异的成绩,这些成绩的背后有老师的辛勤教诲、家长的次次鼓励,还有……现在想来你很感谢他们。请以“Thank you,my...”为题写一篇英语短文。Thank you,My English teacherI should say “thank you”to my English teacher.He’s a tall man with thick glasses. He likes sports and often plays football and basketball with us. He’s humorous and always makes his classes lively and interesting. He’s kind but strict with us. He never allows us to pretend that we know what we don’t know. He often tells us that it’s no use memorizing new words without understanding. My English has greatly improved with his help.I think he is the best in my mind.I will remember him forever.16.【关于网购】随着网络的发展，人们消费观念转变，购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。“网购”成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也正加入到网购群体中。请你根据以下表格的提示，写一篇网上购物的文章。优点：1. 足不出户；节约时间；避免拥挤、劳累。2. 价格通常比较便宜。3. 可供选择的范围广，品种多。缺点：1. 只能看到图片，看不到商品本身。2. 容易购买大量不太需要的东西，造成浪费。With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.Shopping online has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On the one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money.All in all, I love shopping online.17.【保护野生动物】2020年，一种新型冠状病毒 (novel coronavirus ) 在全球蔓延。据传，这种病毒是从野生动物传染给人类。假定你是李华，今天你班召开了“敬畏自然，保护野生动物”的主题班会，此次活动让你认识到保护野生动物的重要性。班会后，你打算写一份英文倡议书投给你校英文校报，以此号召全校同学行动起来，为保护野生动物而努力。Wild animals are our friends. We live on the same earth. So protecting them is protecting ourselves.However,many wild animals have already died out and hundreds of others are becoming endangered. So it is necessary to protect wild animals. If nothing is done, we may find ourselves alone on the earth.Wild animals are endangered for many reasons. Firstly, the forests where wild animals live are being destroyed. As a result, a lot of animals are losing their habitats. Secondly, many animals are dying out because of pollution. Besides, too much hunting also causes the disappearance of certain species of wild animals.In my opinion, the government should keep people from destroying forests and shut down the factories which pollute rivers and air. And more wildlife centers should also be set up.18.【做客礼仪】刚到中国来学习不久的John应汉语老师的邀请去他家里做客，因此John 向Bob请教相关礼仪。假设你是Bob，请你给John回一封电子邮件，告诉他一些注意事项。Dear John，I know that you will visit your Chinese teacher’s home. If you do the following, I don’t think you will feel uncomfortable.First, you should arrive a little earlier. Being late is impolite. Second, it’s also good to bring a gift such as some flowers or fruit. Third, you will probably use chopsticks to have dinner. Remember not to stick your chopsticks into your food. You’d better say that the food is delicious while you are eating. Finally, after dinner, showing thanks is also necessary. And you are not supposed to stay long after dinner. Good luck!　　 Yours,　　 Bob2021年中考英语作文热点预测1.【讨论课外培训的利弊】如今，课外补习再一次登上热搜。假设你是李华，上周你班开了一次以“是否应该上辅导班”为主题的班会，请根据以下提示，写一篇不少于80词的短文。Whether We Should Take After-school ClassesLast week, we had a discussion about whether we should take after-school classes. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2. 【减负】许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力，为了更好的发现及解决同学们心中存在的心理压力问题，你们班特意开展了一次以“Less Pressure, Better Life”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你准备发言稿，谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法，与同学分享。内容包括：1. 同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么？2. 我的压力是什么？3. 我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。Less Pressure, Better LifeHello, boys and girls!Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________赞成帮助他人是美德；帮助他人就是帮助自己反对怕陷入麻烦；怕被误解讨论结果1.尊重他人；2.学会沟通；3.乐于助人；4......我的建议......支持1. 查漏补缺；2. 提升成绩；反对1. 增加负担；2. 占用休息时间；你的观点........