高中英语2024届高考复习祝贺信写作讲解与练习

这是一份高中英语2024届高考复习祝贺信写作讲解与练习，共4页。

（一）文体概述
祝贺信是指在日常生活中，得知同学或朋友竞赛获奖、考上大学、过新年或重大节日等，给对方祝贺的信件。书写时应做到真诚、自然、亲切动人。
（二）基本结构：
【首 段】简要说明祝贺事由，表达激动和祝贺；
【中间段】对方取得成绩、过去努力和优点；评论事件；
【尾 段】展望未来，表达愿望和祝福。
二、祝贺信的写作模板及常用写作句式
（一）写作模板
Dear ,
(首段祝贺) Cngratulatins n yur _______ .It was delightful fr me t hear that ______________ .I knw hw hard yu have been wrking and I am very prud f yu fr yur achievement.Please accept my sincere cngratulatins n yur ___________.
(评论事件) I have been watching yur prgress with admiratin all the years, and I understand fr sure that it is yur hard wrk / yur excellent ability that leads yu t the current success.Nw yu prve t me a mature and well-runded（全面的）________in every respect.
(展望未来，再次祝愿) Judging frm yur current success / achievement, I am cnfident that in the future ___________ .Again, I wuld like t extend t yu my utmst cngratulatins n ______.May all the years ahead fulfill yur dreams!
Yurs
（二）祝贺信首段、中间段、尾段常用写作句式（必背，灵活应用）
1.常用篇首段：问好+背景+激动
(1) I'm writing t cngratulate yu with all my heart n...
(2) I am writing t ffer yu _______________(我最真诚的祝贺）n yur winning the prize.
(3) Hearing the news that yu…, I was unable t ______________（控制我的激动）
keys:
(2)my sincerest;
(3)cntain my excitement
2.篇中段：展开评论事件+赞扬收信人
(1) There is ___________(不可否认） that yur success partly lies in yur talent fr tennis.
(2) It was ____________(你的兴趣和天赋） that pushed yu hard (t train every day).
(3) What distinguished yu frm thers was yur effrt, which ___________(最终得到回报）.
(4) N ne can deny yur effrt in the past days, which made it pssible fr yu t …
(5) It was persistence and determinatin that led yu,__________(一步步）, t yur success.
(6) Yu deserved the prize / t win the cmpetitin due t_________________(你展示出的信念，努力和勇气）.
(7) It is quite inspiring, as n ne frm ur schl ___________(曾经赢得）the cntest befre.Undubtedly, yur success is a great hnr fr bth yu and ur schl.We are prud f yu.
(8)Yu culdn’t have made such remarkable achievements ____________________(没有你坚持的努力）.
keys:
(1) n denying
(2)yur interest and talent
(3)paid ff eventually
(5)step by step
(6)the faith, effrt and curage yu shwed/demnstrated
(7)has ever wn
(8)withut yur cntinuus effrt
3.结尾段：再次祝贺+祝愿
(1) Again, I’d like t take this pprtunity t express my heartfelt cngratulatins and best wishes t yu.I wish yu ______________(更伟大的成功） in the future.
(2) Best wishes fr yur even better prgress in the future.
(3) Please __________(接受）ur sincerest cngratulatins and very best wishes fr all the gd future.
(4) Cngratulatins again and I’m lking frward t yur _______________(更长远的成就）.
keys:
(1) greater success
(3) accept
(4)further achievements
三．典例实例及练习
（一）典例实例：
假定你是李华, 得知你的外国笔友Peter获得了“汉语桥”中文演讲比赛一等奖。你为他感到骄傲, 并给他写一封祝贺信, 要点如下:
1.天天练习讲汉语, 从不会到流利, 终于成功;
2.继续努力, 有机会来中国留学;
3.希望见面和交流。
参考词汇: “汉语桥”中文演讲比赛“Chinese Bridge” Chinese speech cntest
【写作步骤】
Step 1: 精准审题 谋篇布局
Step 2头脑风暴 字字珠玉
(1)美词: express my sincerest cngratulatins; champin;
(2)佳句: ①谚语：As the saying ges, “Everything cmes t him wh waits”.
②非谓语：Ging n studying Chinese harder, yu will have the pprtunity t study in China.
Step 3: 斟酌词句 妙笔生花
要点1: 正如谚语所说: “成功属于有准备的人”。
一般表达: There is a saying ging like this, “Everything cmes t him wh waits”.
句式升级(定语从句): As the saying ges, “Everything cmes t him wh waits”.
要点2: 如果你继续努力学习汉语, 你就会有机会来中国学习。
一般表达: If yu g n studying Chinese harder, yu will have the pprtunity t study in China.
句式升级(分词短语作状语):Ging n studying Chinese harder, yu will have the pprtunity t study in China.
Step 4: 衔接过渡 斐然成篇
Dear Peter,
I wuld like t express my cngratulatins t yu n yur receiving the first prize f “Chinese Bridge” Chinese speech cntest.
I knw that yu were nt gd at Chinese at first.Hwever, yu practiced speaking Chinese every day.As the saying ges, “Everything cmes t him wh waits”.Finally, yu succeeded! In my mind, this match is very difficult fr a freign student.S I’m s surprised that yu becme champin f this cmpetitin.Ging n studying Chinese harder, yu will have the pprtunity t study in China.At last, I hpe t see yu and cmmunicate with yu.
Sincere cngratulatins t yu again!
【典例示例2】祝贺笔友被大学录取
假如你是高三学生李华，得知你的美国笔友Peter被Harvard(哈佛大学)录取，请你给他写一封电子邮件。要点如下：
1.表示祝贺并备受鼓舞；
2.介绍自己目前的学习情况；
3.请教学习方法。
Dear Peter，
I am very excited and inspired by the gd news that____________________________(你已经被哈佛大学录取）.First，I’d like t ________________________(表达我的祝贺） t yu n yur great success and I als hpe t enter a famus university just like yu.
Nw I want t tell yu smething abut myself.As yu knw, I’m busy preparing fr____________(高考）.Day after day, I wrk very hard and have t stay up late ding __________________(成堆的试卷）.Hwever, I’m always feeling stressed ut because my effrts dn’t seem t pay ff，which makes me ______________________(挫败和疲惫）.Will yu be kind enugh t give me sme advice?
I wuld appreciate it if yu culd write back t me _________________(尽快）.
Yurs，
Li Hua
keys:
yu have been admitted int
extend/express my cngratulatins
the Cllege Entrance Examinatin
piles f papers
frustrated and exhausted
as sn as pssible
写作练习：
假定你是李华，你的新西兰外教Jhn因为对教学所做的贡献而获得了嘉奖，请你用英语给他写一封祝贺信，内容包括: 1.祝贺获奖；2.感谢付出；3.表达祝愿。
范文一：
Dear Jhn,I am writing t ffer my sincere cngratulatins t yu n yur winning the award (表达祝贺).As yur student, I just want yu t knw hw glad I am at yur achievement (表达高兴). Fr these years, yu’ve shwn great passin in teaching and kept n imprving ur English ability.It is yur humrus and instructive teaching that makes English learning an entertaining and eye-pening experience fr us(教学方式).Withut yur selfless devtin, we culdn’t have made such great prgress (虚拟句).Thank yu fr yur cmpany(感谢陪伴). I really hpe that yu can enjy yur stay here and make mre achievements(表达祝愿).
范文二：
Dear Jhn,
I’m writing t express my sincere cngratulatins n yur winning the award in recgnitin f yur cntributin t teaching in ur schl(表达祝贺).We are lucky t have yu with us (富有人情味).
These years, we have benefited a lt frm yur devtin (概述句).It is yu wh have made every effrt t guide us in English learning, develping ur interest in the language and imprving ur ral English (兴趣+语言，角度).It is yu wh have helped t bridge the tw cultures, paving the way fr ur mutual understanding and further develpment (文化角度).
Cngratulatins again and wish yur stay here enjyable and memrable(祝贺+祝愿).
人称
第一人称 (I),
第二人称(yu)
时态
一般现在时; 一般过去时；一般将来时
段落布局:
开头点题: 表达祝贺
主体段落: 成功的原因并进行鼓励
结尾: 再次表达祝愿和希望