初中英语2024届中考复习热点话题作文练习与讲解系列0120（共五篇）

这是一份初中英语2024届中考复习热点话题作文练习与讲解系列0120（共五篇），共9页。试卷主要包含了确定体裁、时态和人称等内容，欢迎下载使用。

元宵节到了，妈妈给玲玲讲起了自己儿时的元宵节。假如你是玲玲，请你根据下面的提示，写一篇英语日记，将你所听到的有关元宵节的风俗活动写下来。
要求：1.包含提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥；2.条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺、语法正确；3.80左右（日记的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
【审题】
1.找关键词：元宵节；风俗活动
2.确定体裁、时态和人称：日记；一般过去时；第一人称和第三人称
【提炼句型】
1.During the festival, they did smething fun …
2.… is ne f the traditinal festivals in China.
3.There’re a lt f interesting traditins in...
4.Mum always enjyed setting ff fi recrackers...
5.… was ne f her favurite activities.
6.Mum smetimes did the yangk dance with...
7.Mum was gd at guessing lantern riddles…
8.Last but nt least, Mum liked t watch...
9.…was/were the greatest part(s) f the festival.
10.Mum was excited t watch...
【列举关键词】
★Christmas 圣诞节
★Easter 复活节
★Thanksgiving Day 感恩节
★Hallween 万圣节前夕
★the Spring Festival 春节
★the Mid-Autumn Festival 中秋节
★Mther’s Day 母亲节
★Father’s Day 父亲节
★Teachers’ Day 教师节
★May Day 五一劳动节
★Dragn Bat Festival 端午节
★Tmb-sweeping Day 清明节
【完成写作框架 (关键词)】
【参考范文】
Friday February 26 Sunny
Tday is the Lantern Festival.Mum tld me hw she spent the festival when she was a little girl.It was very interesting.
Mum always did smething interesting with her friends.First, she lved t set ff fi recrackers and it was ne f her favurite activities.Secnd, yangk was ppular in the nrth f China.Mum and her friends smetimes did the yangk dance.Third, in the evening, Mum went t guess lantern riddles.She was gd at guessing riddles and she culd always get a lt f little gifts.Last but nt least, Mum liked t watch the dragn dance and the lin dance, which were the greatest parts f the festival.Mum was always excited t see the perfrmances.
I was happy t listen t my mther’s stry.Althugh her life was hard, she had a happy childhd.
2.Hw t prtect neself
during an earthquake
为了让同学们了解有关地震的知识，做到防患于未然，某国际中学成立了“地震自救知识”社团。假如你是社团的一名成员，请根据下列提示内容写一篇英语稿件，向同学们宣传地震自救知识，做好自我保护。
要求：1.包含提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥；2.条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺、语法正确；3.80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
【审题】
1.找关键词：介绍地震自救知识 （室内、室外）2.确定体裁、时态：说明文；一般现在时
【提炼句型】
1.Dn’t jump ut f ’s dangerus.
2.When yu’re staying inside, dn’t jump ut f ...
3.If yu are indrs, quickly mve t a safe place.
4.Stay away/Mve away frm windws, big furniture...
5.When the grund stps shaking, yu’d better leave...
6.Leave … when the earthquake stps and dn’t use the lift.
7.Mve away frm …when yu’re staying utside.
8.Please be careful f falling rcks.
9.Be careful f the falling rcks when yu’re in the muntains.
10.Run away frm the sea and g t higher grund as sn as pssible.
11.It’s imprtant fr yu t keep calm.
12.Fllw the rules yu learnt at schl.
13.Check arund yu and help the peple in truble.
14.Save yurself and help save thers.
【列举关键词】
名词：
★building ★light ★muntain
★furniture ★table ★grund
★windw ★lift ★pwer
★beach ★rck
动词短语：
★jump ut f ★mve away frm
★keep clear f ★run away frm
★stay away frm ★pay attentin t
★be careful f ★be brave
★keep calm
【完成写作框架 (关键词)】
【参考范文】
Hey, friends! We dn’t knw when earthquakes will happen but we need t knw what t d during an earthquake.Here’s my advice:
When we’re inside the building, dn’t jump ut f the building.Stay away frm windws and big furniture.Hide under a strng bed r table.
When the earthquake stps, leave the building quickly.Remember nt t use the lift.When we’re utside the building, stay away frm high buildings, street lights, pwer lines, bridges and trees.If we’re in the muntains, pay attentin t falling rcks.If we’re n the beach, run away frm the sea and g t higher grund.
The mst imprtant thing is t keep calm.Fllw the rules we learnt and then we can be safe and help thers.
3.Describing a wnder f the wrld
假如你是李华，来自湖南张家界，就读于某外国语学校。为了让更多的国外学生了解你的家乡，你打算向大家介绍张家界大峡谷的人工奇迹 —— 张家界玻璃桥。请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文，发表在你校英文网站上。
参考词汇：Zhangjiajie Grand Canyn 张家界大峡谷
写作要求：1.须包含提示中的所有内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.条理清楚，语言流畅，语句通顺，标点正确；3.100词左右。
【思路点拨】
第一步：审题
1.找关键词：介绍张家界玻璃桥；
2.确定以下几个内容：
体裁：说明文
时态：一般现在时和一般过去时
人称：第三人称单数
第二步：介绍景点类文章常用的词汇
● 表示方位：lie in / be lcated in, clse t, near, n the left/right, ppsite t, acrss frm, abve, belw, in (t, n) the suth/nrth/east/west f …, stand in frnt f / at the ft f …
● 表示形状：big, small, lng, high, shrt, wide …
● 表示特点：great, beautiful, fantastic, famus/well-knwn, natural, man-made, interesting, crwded, wnderful, special …
● 其他词汇：rule, sign, view, character (特点), symbl, pening hurs, ticket price, ticket ffice, transprtatin (交通) …
第三步：提炼介绍景点类文章的句型（功能句）
● I’m glad t / I’d like t intrduce … t yu.
● Have yu heard f/been t/visited …?
● It is famus/well-knwn as/fr …
● … is the lngest/highest …
● It is … metres high/wide/lng.
● It is a fantastic natural/man-made wnder with a histry f … years.
● When yu get there, yu will be greatly impressed by its …
● It is s wnderful and special that it attracts millins f turists frm all ver the wrld every year.
● The wrld is a bk and thse wh d nt travel read nly ne page.
● Travel is a great surce f real knwledge.
● In my pinin, it is really wrth visiting.
● It is a must-see place f interest fr visitrs t China.
第四步：完成写作框架
【参考范文】
Zhangjiajie is famus fr its amazing glass bridge.The bridge is ne f the greatest man-made wnders f the wrld.
Lcated in Zhangjiajie Grand Canyn, Zhangjiajie Glass Bridge pened t the public in 2016.With a length f 430 metres, it was the lngest f its kind in the wrld at that time.Being 6 metres wide and abut 300 metres abve the grund, it can hld 800 visitrs at a time.The bridge cnnects tw cliffs and yu can enjy the beauty f Zhangjiajie Grand Canyn thrugh the clear glass.If yu want smething even mre exciting, it’s a gd idea t try bungee jumping there.
In my pinin, the glass bridge is certainly wrth a visit.Cme fr a visit.I’m sure yu wn’t regret it.
4.Intrducing a her
每个人都有自己心目中的英雄，每个人都可以成为英雄。假如某中学生英语杂志社正在开展以My her为题的有奖征文活动。请你根据下面的要点提示，写一篇征文稿。
要点提示：(1) Wh is yur her? (2) What makes him/her a her?
写作要求：1.须包含提示中的所有内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.条理清楚，语言流畅，语句通顺，标点正确；3.100词左右。
【思路点拨】
第一步：审题
1.找关键词：心目中的英雄
2.确定以下几个内容
体裁：记叙文
时态：一般现在时、一般过去时为主
人称：第一人称、第三人称
第二步：列出写作提纲
开头部分：引出心目中的英雄
主体部分：他或她的故事
结尾部分：总结、概括
第三步：选词组句
1.与人的优秀品质有关的词
形容词：
brave 勇敢的；calm 镇静的；cnfident 有信心的；determined 意志坚决的；devted 投入的；generus 宽宏大量的；hard-wrking 努力工作的；heric 英勇的；hnest 诚实的；kind-hearted 热心的；ptimistic 乐观的；selfless 无私的；strng-willed 意志坚强的；talented 有才干的
名词：
bravery 勇敢；cnfidence 信心；curage 勇气；diligence 刻苦；greatness 伟大；kindness 善良；selflessness 无私；talent 才能
2.其他相关的词
● be brn in … (place) n/in … (date), at the age f, be brn int a … family, live a … life
● attend, graduate frm …, g t … fr further studies
● have a talent fr …, serve as …, make up ne’s mind t …, wrk hard at …
● manage t d / succeed in ding sth., be famus fr, be well-knwn at hme and abrad, help make great prgress in, win first prize / place, set a gdexample t sb., receive respect and lve frm…
● in the face f …, regard … as …, take risks t d
3.提炼可能用到的句型
开头部分：
● Wh is yur her? Let me tell yu abut mine.
● Everyne has a her, smene they lk up t r admire.S d I.
● Maybe yur her is a famus singer, a mvie star r a great man.But my her seems s rdinary(平凡的).
● A her t me is smebdy wh …
● I thught abut this questin when I started t write it: Wh is my her? Well, my her wuld have t be …
主体部分：
● My her is … / … is my her.
● I admire … greatly because ...
● I admire … fr his/her …
● Althugh he/she …, he/she has a very strng will.
● Whatever he/she des, he/she never gives up easily.
● He/She always believes in himself/herself.
● He/She always wrks hard.
● He/She always thinks f thers first.
● He/She always searches fr a way t help thers.
● He/She has a heart f gld.
结尾部分：
(1) I learn frm him/her that ...
(2) He/She is a true her in my heart.
(3) He/She is simply the best in my heart!
(4) He/She sets a gd example t all f us / yung peple t fllw.
(5) He/She will always be alive in my heart.
(6) He/She has always been my her and will cntinue t remain s.
(7) He/She is the pride f China.We shuld learn frm him/her.
(8) We can als make ur dreams cme true if we wrk hard like him.
(9) His/Her success made a big difference t ur life.
第四步：连句成篇
根据写作提纲连句成篇，力求文章内容准确生动、条理清楚。在这一过程中要注意选择恰当的表示并列、递进、因果或转折意义的过渡词，把所有要点、句子连接起来，使句与句之间意思连贯，结构衔接。
【参考范文】
A her t me is smebdy wh has dne great cntributins (贡献) t ur sciety.He/She cares abut ther peple.He/She can face any difficulty withut fear and even take risks t help thers.Zhng Nanshan is such a persn.
As we all knw, Zhng Nanshan risked his life t g t Wuhan and wrk there t fight against COVID-19 as sn as it brke ut.He was 84 years ld then.Althugh the new virus was knwn t be mre dangerus t the ld, he didn’t think abut his wn safety.He entered hspitals t visit patients in persn.With mnths f hard wrk, China succeeded in cntrlling the disease.
Zhng was awarded the Medal f the Republic fr his utstanding cntributins t fighting against COVID-19.As the pride f China, he is brave and calm.I learn frm him that we shuld never give up, n matter what difficulties we face.
5.Describing an experience f being hme alne
英语课上，某班同学分享各自独自在家的经历，假如你是该班同学，请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文，讲述父母出差时你第一次独自在家的经历，与大家分享。
写作要求：1.须包含提示中的所有内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.条理清楚，语言流畅，语句通顺，标点正确；3.100词左右。
【思路点拨】
第一步：审题
1.找关键词：独自在家的经历2.确定以下几个内容体裁：记叙文时态：一般过去时为主人称：第一人称
第二步：列出写作提纲
开头部分：引出主题主体部分：描述此次经历的过程结尾部分：谈谈自己的感受
第三步：选词组句
1.描述经历常用的词汇
● 表示感受：excited, happy, glad, relaxed, interested, bred, angry, unhappy, sad, upset, necessary,imprtant, difficult, easy, hard, simple, expect, hpe,lk frward t, enjy, like, lve, hate, can’t wait
● 表示家务：d the chres (做家务), d the dishes, d the laundry (洗熨衣物), sweep the flr, clean the windws, fld (叠) the clthes, make thebed, d the cking / washing
2.记叙文中常用的一些连接词
● 表示时间：when, as, while, after, befre, fr the first time, until, at the same time, as sn as, at first, at last, at the end f, first, then, next, after that, at that time, finally, in the end
● 表示原因：because / because f, since, as, fr, fr this reasn, thanks t (多亏)
● 表示结果：s, s … that …, therefre, as a result
● 表示转折：but, hwever, still, while, t ne’s surprise, t tell the truth, t be hnest, in fact
● 表示让步：thugh, even thugh, althugh, in spite f, whatever, hwever, whever
● 表示目的：in rder t, s that, fr this purpse, s as t
3.提炼可能用到的句型开头部分：
● As teenagers, we have all had the experience f being hme alne.
● What d yu like best r least abut being hme alne?
● D yu knw hw t enjy being hme alne?
● Can yu manage / cmplete basic tasks like cking r washing clthes?
● Staying hme alne can be a psitive (积极的) experience fr us teenagers.
● I lve being hme alne when my parents g ut.
● Being hme alne helps us gain cnfidence and independence.
● Here I’d like t share ne f my experiences f being hme alne.
主体部分：
● When I was … years ld, my parents were away fr sme days, s I had t be hme alne.
● I stayed hme alne fr a day when my parents went t …
● Last week, my parents went t … n business, and I stayed hme all by myself.
● I finished all f my hmewrk first.
● I began t watch TV / play cmputer games.
● I planned t spend abut three hurs reading.
● I enjyed myself listening t music all mrning.
● At first, I thught I wuld have fun staying hme alne.
● Everything wasn’t s easy as I had thught.
● I realised it was s difficult fr me t / It was really hard fr me t / I didn’t knw hw t …
● I had t call … fr help with the …
结尾部分：
● I have learnt a lt frm this experience f being hme alne.
● The experience f being hme alne has made a big difference t me.
● I will never frget the experience thugh it happened s lng ag.
● All in all / In a wrd / T sum up, it was a really amazing / exciting / interesting / painful / pleasant /valuable experience that I will always remember.
● Frm the experience, I learned a valuable lessn in life: …
● The experience taught me a valuable lessn in life: …
● The failure (失败) was a gd experience t me.
● I think I will never frget this experience / always remember this experience / remember this experience fr ever because …
第四步：连句成篇
根据写作提纲连句成篇，力求文章内容准确生动、条理清楚。在这一过程中要注意选择恰当的表示并列、递进、因果或转折意义的过渡词，把所有要点、句子连接起来，使句与句之间意思连贯，结构衔接。
【参考范文】
Hme alne
As teenagers, we have all had the experience f being hme alne.Is life as easy as when yur parents are arund? Here I’d like t share my first experience f being hme alne.When I was 12, my parents bth went t Shenzhen n business, and I had t be hme all by myself fr 24 hurs.At first, I was a little afraid because I had never been hme alne befre.But sn I frgt abut it because I threw myself int an interesting bk.I spent the whle mrning reading it.At nn, I tk the fd ut f the fridge and heated it.Mum had cked sme dishes befre she left.In rder t prve that I culd take gd care f myself, I washed my clthes in the afternn.In the evening, I finished my hmewrk.At night, after watching a mvie n TV, I went t bed at 10:30.Being hme alne was nt as difficult as I had thught.I really felt prud f myself.This experience f being hme alne has made a big difference t me.I have becme mre and mre cnfident and independent.