新教材2024高考英语二轮专题复习专题通关必测40分写作规范练四

这是一份新教材2024高考英语二轮专题复习专题通关必测40分写作规范练四，共3页。

1．描述过程；
2．你的体会；
3．建议她去长城旅游。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Lucy，
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Yurs，
Li Hua
第二节 读后续写(满分25分)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
[2023·浙江省高三5月模拟卷]It was summer, and my dad wanted t treat me t a vacatin like never befre. He decided t take me n a trip t the Wild West.
We tk a plane t Albuquerque, a big city in the state f New Mexic. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternn. Uncle Paul, my dad's friend, picked us up frm the airprt and drve us up t his farm in Pecs.
His wife Tina cked us a delicius dinner and we gt t knw his sns Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestrm f the farm huse listening t the frgs and water rlling dwn the river nearby. Very early in the mrning, Uncle Paul wke us up t have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn n my farm，” he said. After breakfast, I went t help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul t take the sheep ut t graze (吃草). I was impressed t see my dad and Uncle Paul riding hrses. They lked really cl.
In the afternn, I asked Uncle Paul if I culd take a hrse ride, and he said yes, as lng as my dad went with me. I wasn't ging t take a hrse ride by myself anyway. S, my dad and I put n ur new cwby hats, gt n ur hrses, and headed slwly twards the muntains. “Dn't be late fr supper，” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep t the track s that yu dn't get lst！”“OK！” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm huse were ut f sight. It was s peaceful and quiet and the clrs f the brwn rcks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternn sun mixed t create a magic scene. It lked like a beautiful wven (编织的) blanket spread ut upn the grund just fr us.
注意： 1.续写词数应为 150 左右；
2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse.________________________________________________________________________
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40分写作规范练(四)
第一节
DearLucy，
Hwareyuding? Last mnth, I went n a trip t the Great Wall with my parents.
There were a lt f turists, amng whm were sme freigners. I climbed fr a few hurs with perseverance and eventually reached the desired destinatin. I was struck by the height and glry f the Great Wall. I was full f admiratin fr the ancient peple f China because they made a lt f effrts t build it.
I knw yu are eager t visit the Great Wall, s I recmmend yu enjy its beauty in the near future. I'm cnvinced that it will bring yu a different travel experience. Best wishes !
Yurs,
LiHua
第二节
【语篇解读】 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活，见父亲和叔叔骑马，儿子也很想骑，于是亲身上马体验的经历。
解析：1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“突然，一只小兔子跳到了我的马前。”可知，第一段可描写兔子出现后带来的反应扩展开，可以写马的反应，也可以写人的反应，但要注意与第二段首句相呼应。②由第二段首句内容“我们不知道自己在哪里，天黑了。”可知，第二段可呼应前文保罗叔叔的叮嘱——不要延误吃晚饭，可从如何寻路返回农场去写。
2．续写线索：兔子出现——马受惊——迷路——天黑——被叔叔找到——到达农舍
答案：
Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedutinfrntfmyhrse. Its abrupt appearance scared my hrse, making it run ff the track wildly. I spared n effrts t hld n as hard as I culd and my dad was trying t keep up, extremely wrried abut my safety. Frtunately, minutes later, the hrse stpped befre a river, ut f breath. Relieved, we lked arund trying t find the track. Hwever, it was nwhere t be fund. S aimlessly did the frightened hrse run that we gt lst uncnsciusly.
Wehadnideawherewewereanditgtdark. Nthing in sight was familiar and neither did we knw where the farm huse was. Just at the pint f desperatin, frm the distance came a faint vice. “It must be Uncle Paul，” I exclaimed excitedly. That we didn't cme back fr dinner made him realize smething unusual might have happened. S my uncle went ut t lk fr us. Finally, we reached ur uncle's farm huse safe and sund.