新教材2023版高中英语Unit4JourneyAcrossaVastLandSectionⅣWriting__关于旅行经历的电子邮件课件新人教版选择性必修第二册

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Section Ⅳ　Writing——关于旅行经历的电子邮件文体感知写一封关于旅行的邮件， 也就是对一次出行、游览、参观等的记录。在介绍游览经历时， 一般按游览的先后顺序， 依次记述游览过程中所见到的景物；另外， 要选取印象最深刻的或最有特色的景物， 进行较为详细的描写；最后可以加上游玩的感受， 做到既有所见所闻， 又有所思所感， 深化写作主题。增分佳句一、夺人眼球开头句1．I am glad to hear that you are going to China for a holiday.听说你要来中国度假， 我很高兴。2．I'd like to share one of the most fascinating experiences with you.我想和你分享一次最有趣的经历。二、亮点出彩篇中句1．There are many tourist attractions in China.中国有很多旅游胜地。2．Every tourist attraction has beautiful scenery and is very attractive.每个景点都风景秀丽， 十分迷人。3．Jinzhai county, in western Anhui, is one of the places I'd like to introduce you to.安徽西部的金寨县是我最想给你介绍的地方之一。4．It's very convenient to travel to the centre of New York by subway.乘地铁去纽约市中心非常方便。5．During the Chinese “Red Culture”， you can visit some museums.在体验中国的“红色文化”期间， 你可以参观一些博物馆。6．Standing on the top of the mountain, the building has witnessed many changes in this area.坐落在山顶的建筑物见证了这个地区的许多变化。三、韵味无穷结尾句1．I am looking forward to your coming and it is certain that you won't regret for the trip.我期待着你的到来，你一定会不虚此行。2．It is a place you have to visit and the extraordinary view will make you unwilling to leave.这是一个你必须参观的地方，非凡的景色会让你流连忘返。3．It has been a great trip, filling us with so many happy memories.这是一次很棒的旅行，给我们留下了很多美好的回忆。典题演练假设你是李华，你的英国笔友汤姆(Tom)写信询问你的一次难忘的旅游经历。请你用英语给他回一封电子邮件，要点包括：1．旅游过程；2．你的感受。注意：1.词数80左右；2．开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。参考词汇：大佛(the Giant Stone Buddha)Dear Tom, I'm glad to share a fascinating travel experience with you._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua第一步　布局谋篇第二步　遣词造句1．七月七日， 我乘车去了乐山， 它以大佛而闻名。On July 7, I took a bus to Leshan, ________________ the Giant Stone Buddha.2．当我抬头看到巨大的佛头， 低头看到巨大的佛脚时， 我感受到了自己的渺小。_________________________ and down at the large feet, I felt I was so small.3．第二天， 我登上了峨眉山山顶， 山上的美景让我惊叹。The next day, I climbed to the peak of Mount Emei. The beautiful scenery on the mountain _________________．which is famous forWhen I looked up at the large headtook my breath away4．在黄昏时刻， 我们返程。________， we made our way back.5．虽然我们都非常累， 但是我们去乐山的旅程真的既难忘又使人愉快。___________， our trip to Leshan was really unforgettable and pleasant.6．如果再给我一次机会， 我一定会再来游览乐山。Given another chance, _____________________ Leshan again.At duskThough tiredI am bound to pay a visit to第三步　句式升级1．用现在分词短语作状语改写第二步中的句2___________________________________________________________2．用关系副词引导的定语从句改写第二步中的句3______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Looking up at the large head and down at the large feet, I felt I was so small.The next day, I climbed to the peak of Mount Emei, where the beautiful scenery took my breath away.第四步　完美成篇用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。Dear Tom, I'm glad to share a fascinating travel experience with you.On July 7, I took a bus to Leshan, which is famous for the Giant Stone Buddha. Looking up at the large head and down at the large feet, I felt I was so small. The next day, I climbed to the peak of Mount Emei, where the beautiful scenery took my breath away. At dusk, we made our way back. Though tired, our trip to Leshan was really unforgettable and pleasant. Given another chance, I am bound to pay a visit to Leshan again.I'm looking forward to going to Leshan with you next time.Yours, Li Hua