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这是一份最新高考英语一轮复习【讲通练透】 第04讲 读后续写之“脱险类”主题（讲通），共9页。试卷主要包含了抓基础，抓课堂，抓自习，抓阅读等内容，欢迎下载使用。
2、抓课堂、重效率、要求学生紧跟老师的节奏。一轮复习是将重点知识提炼，容量大，速度快。所以，学生的思路必须时时刻刻跟随着老师的思路，要快速地用脑思，用心听、用嘴说，用手写，才能达到高效。
3、抓自习、重过程、增强得分的意识。学案都是在规定的时间内完成，重视规范的做题步骤，重视思考过程。更重要的是，做完题后要对做过的题目进行反思、整理。
4、抓阅读、重反思、全面提高成绩。得阅读者得天下。阅读是强化英语思维的最佳途径之一。一轮复习，重视基础知识的同时，要坚持阅读训练，促进英语成绩的整体提高。
5、抓时间，重效果，扎实做好每个复习环节。一轮复习时间紧，任务重，需要同学们充分抢抓时间，利用时间，紧跟复习进度。英语的进步并非一蹴而就，需要每天坚持把每件事情做扎实。做到这一点，成功只是早晚的事！
►第04讲 脱险类（讲义）
目录
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读后续写中会遇到描写森林迷路、地震、水灾、火灾等内容的故事，如果涉及到对生命造成一定威胁的情节，我们就把这类文章归为“脱险型”。在近年高考真题中，如2023年浙江卷1月蜂鸟脱困；2020年浙江卷1月遇到北极熊；2018年浙江卷6月森林遇险。
如何续写好此类文章呢？清代袁枚《随园诗话》中说过，“文似看山不喜平”，就提出过写文章好比观赏山峰那样，不喜欢平坦，喜欢起伏。而读后续写中，情节的跌宕起伏就是一种极好的提升文章整体水平的手法。这种转折即由“负”变“正”；或由“正”变“负”。最终体现正能量的结局，就是由“正”变“负”。
【写作步骤】
一 恶劣环境来铺垫
The water was deep and running fast frm a big rainstrm the night befre.
前天晚上下了一场大暴雨，水又深又急。
The water twisted and turned him, scraping him against the rcks as he was carried alng. Water gushed int his muth and up his nse.
水流不停地扭动着他，旋转着他，把他蹭在岩石上。水灌进他的嘴里，没过了他的鼻子。
3. What's wrse, he didn't have any fd r water with him, let alne his cell phne r ther supplies.
更糟糕的是，他没有任何食物和水，更不要说他的手机和其他日用品。
4. The sky is vercast, darkened with glmy cluds.
天空阴沉，乌云密布。
5.The icy wind started hwling, stinging my face.
寒风开始咆哮，刺痛了我的脸。
6.The wind was hwling and the waves smacked repeatedly against her face.
风在呼啸着，海浪不停地拍打着她的脸。
7.But then, as I lked in the distance, I discvered a series f three r fur big waves heading twards the shre.
但后来，当我往远处看时，我发现有三四个大浪正在冲向海岸。
8.It swayed vilently in a strng wind. Its radway was damaged by vehicles. Its access was blcked by many peple.
它在强风中剧烈摇晃。车辆损坏了道路。许多人堵住了通道。
9.The angry waves crashed against the side f the bat, with water splashing here and there.
愤怒的海浪拍打向船的一侧，水到处飞溅。
二 心理感受来烘托
An minus thught crssed his mind: I’m ging t die up here.
一个不祥的念头掠过他的脑海：我要死在这了。
Lking at the vast sea, I felt a sense f fear surging thrugh my whle bdy.
看着浩瀚的大海，我感到一种恐惧感掠过我的全身。
Salt stinging my eyes, I culd hardly tell hw lng I culd hld n.
盐刺痛了我的眼睛，我几乎不知道我能坚持多久。
4.Grief cmes in waves.
悲伤如潮水一般涌来。
5. With a punding heart and cld, mist palms, I felt faint.
最后一句话像一颗子弹击中了我的心。
6.Afraid and merely desperate, she rushed twards him.
她害怕而绝望，向他冲去。
三 外貌神态来烘托
Hearing the bad news, Mary frze with shck, as if rted n the grund.
听到这个坏消息，玛丽吓得愣住了，好像长在了地上。
2.Tears blurred her eyes.
泪水模糊了她的双眼。
3. I sbbed bitterly, tasting the salt frm the tears that streamed dwn my face.
我痛苦地抽泣着，尝到脸上流下泪水咸咸的味道。
4.She calmed dwn t keep the rhyme f breathing s that she culd breathe evenly.
她平静下来，保持呼吸的韵律，以便能够均匀地呼吸。
5.I glanced back ver my shulder t make sure that n ne was fllwing me.
我回头瞟了一眼以确保没有人跟踪我。
四 谋篇布局有起伏
Ultimately, we were back, safe and sund.
最终，我们又回来了，安然无恙。
We jumped int the warm vehicle and the frester drve us t the ranger statin, where we were given clthes and were able t call ur parents.
我们跳上了温暖的车，森林管理员开车把我们送到护林员站，在那里我们得到了衣服，并可以打电话给我们的父母。
Suddenly it ccurred t us that we culd keep t the track t guide us back.But it was getting darker and darker, thus making it increasingly difficult fr us t make ut the rad.
突然我们想到我们可以坚持小路引导我们回去。但天色越来越暗，使我们走道路越来越困难。
五 万能升华来点睛
脱险类的文章有一个万能的表达“这是一次难忘的经历”。
万能升华1：
That day was s unfrgettable that it wuld stay in my memry frever.
句意：那天是如此难忘，它将永远留在我的记忆。
遇到危险并且最终成功脱险的经历，想必对我们每个人来说一定是一生中难忘的经历。
本句中使用了的句式结构：如此以至于。unfrgettable是一个形容词，表示“无法忘记的”。
万能升华2：
It was this unique experience that made me understand whatever difficulty we are faced with, we mustn’t give up ur hpe.
句意：正是这种独特的经历让我明白了我们所面临的任何困难，我们都不能放弃希望。
本句为复合句，运用强调句it 、定语从句that...、宾语从句whatever...，属于高级句式。
万能升华3：
As lng as we dn’t give up hpe and make every effrt t vercme all the difficulties, we will surely make a success sner r later.
句意：只要我们不放弃希望，不尽一切努力克服一切困难，我们迟早一定会取得成功的。
本句是复合句。As lng as引导状语从句，且句子运用较多短语如make a success, sn r later等。
万能升华4：
Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can cnquer whatever difficulty came in the way.
句意：直到那时，我才意识到，正是勇敢才能克服一切困难。
遇到危险后，勇敢面对，才能解决问题。这个句子突出了“勇敢”这个核心，这在“脱险型”的故事里，是非常恰当的。这句话使用了倒装的结构和强调结构结合的方式，也属于高分亮点句。
【最新模拟】
（2023年湖南长沙一中校考阶段练习）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A Fthld in Life
A dzen children ran arund laughing and playing in my friend’s yard, while we parents sat chatting and sipping cl summer drinks. The barbecue had been cleared away when ur hst annunced a surprise. A huge mvable rck wall was laded in, which was abut twelve feet wide, made f gray mlded plastic with indented fthlds that stretched straight up fr what lked like at least a hundred feet. The enthusiastic kids swiftly lined up t give it a try, and with the cmplete fearlessness mst children pssess, scrambled t the tp and rang the bell that hung at the highest pint. There wasn’t really anything t be afraid f since they were belted int place. Three peple culd climb side by side and talk t each ther, s gradually the adults tried it, t.
“Cme n; let’s g get in line,” my husband Neil urged. “N, yu g ahead withut me.” I had all srts f gd excuses: I dn’t have the right shes; I frgt my sunglasses; I have t help the hstess. I have a unique talent fr seeing unthinkable danger in almst every situatin, and this scene seemed dangerus t me. I watched everyne else having fun, thugh, and finally cnvinced myself t try it.
With all the nerve I culd gather, I started the climb. The belt wrapped arund me like a diaper s there was n way t fall. Yes, I thught, this is fun and safe! Cncentrating n each fthld, I slwly made my way up. I avided lking dwn t prevent any sudden panic, and within a few minutes I made it t the tp and prudly rang the bell.
“W h!” my daughters called up t me. “Way t g, Cl!” Neil yelled.
I enjyed my success and the enjyable view f fields and farmland until I realized there was a line belw me waiting fr a turn. It was time t g dwn.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
It was ne thing t lk ut at the wrld in the distance, but it was a whle ther thing t lk straight dwn.
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Finally, the tw f us reached the grund.
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【答案】
It was ne thing t lk ut at the wrld in the distance, but it was a whle ther thing t lk straight dwn. My legs were shaking uncntrllably and my grip n the handhlds was slipping. （细节描写）I culd hear my family calling up recmmendatins t me. Clsing my eyes and taking a deep breath, I tried t calm myself dwn.（心理描写，神态描写） And then, I felt a gentle hand n my back. “It’s kay,” a kind vice said. “I’m here t help yu dwn.” I turned t see a friendly face, smene I had nly met briefly befre, but wh had clearly seen my distress and cme t my aid. With her supprt, I was able t climb dwn, slwly but surely.
Finally, the tw f us reached the grund. I was verwhelmed with gratitude, and as I hugged my rescuer, I realized that smetimes it’s kay t admit when we need help.（情感描写） It’s kay t be afraid, and it’s kay t lean n thers when we’re feeling unsure. On my drive hme, I culdn’t stp thinking abut the rck wall. It had been a symbl f my wn self-dubt and fear, but I had cnquered it. （心理描写）I felt like I had a new fthld in life, a new sense f cnfidence that I culd take n whatever challenges came my way.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和家人去朋友家聚会，主人准备了可移动的岩石墙，大家都热情地排着队攀爬，但是作者找各种借口不去爬，最后在家人的鼓励下，终于鼓足勇气爬上去了，看到了远处的另一个世界，非常开心。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“从远处看世界是一回事，但向下看完全是另一回事。”可知，第一段可描写作者想下去的时候往下看非常害怕，最后在其他人的帮助下往下爬。
②由第二段首句内容“最后，我们两个到了地面。”可知，第二段可描写作者最后爬下来，感激救命恩人并对此事进行感悟。
续写线索：害怕下去——其他人帮助——稳稳下来——感激恩人——感悟
词汇激活
行为类
吸气：take a breath/breathe in
考虑：think abut/think ver/cnsider
情绪类
友好的：friendly / amicable/ kind
感激地：with gratitude / gratefully
[高分句型1] Clsing my eyes and taking a deep breath, I tried t calm myself dwn.
我闭上眼睛，深呼吸，试图让自己冷静下来（本句属于外貌神态描写，并且运用了现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2] I turned t see a friendly face, smene I had nly met briefly befre, but wh had clearly seen my distress and cme t my aid.
我转过身来，看到一张友好的脸，我以前只见过一次，但他清楚地看到了我的痛苦，并来帮助我。
（本句属于细节描写，并含有省略关系代词的限制性定语从句）
[高分句型3] I felt like I had a new fthld in life, a new sense f cnfidence that I culd take n whatever challenges came my way.
我觉得我在生活中有了一个新的立足点，一种新的信心，我可以接受我遇到的任何挑战。
（本句属于结尾升华句子，运用宾语从句和that连接的同位语从句）
【真题感悟】
（2020年浙江卷6月）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single gal: t phtgraph plar bears. We were staying at a research camp utside “the plar bear capital f the wrld”-the twn f Churchill in Manitba, Canada.
Taking pictures f plar bears is amazing but als dangerus. Plar bears-like all wild animals shuld be phtgraphed frm a safe distance. When I'm face t face with a plar bear, I like it t be thrugh a camera with a telepht lens. But smetimes，that is easier said than dne. This was ne f thse times.
As Elli and I cked dinner, a yung male plar bear wh was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled ur garlic bread.
The hungry bear fllwed his nse t ur camp, which was surrunded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He std n his back legs and pushed at the wden fence psts.
Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actins we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pts hard，and fired blank shtgun shells int the air. Smetimes lud nises like these will scare bears ff. Nt this plar bear thugh-he just kept trying t tear dwn the fence with his massive paws(爪子).
I radied the camp manager fr help. He tld me a helicpter was n its way, but it wuld be 30 minutes befre it arrived. Making the best f this clse encunter(相遇), I tk sme pictures f the bear.
Elli and I feared the fence wuldn’t last thrugh 30 mre minutes f the bear's punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but desn't hurt them. S I apprached ur uninvited guest slwly and，thrugh the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry rar(吼叫), the bear ran t the lake t wash his eyes.
注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph1:A few minutes later, the bear headed back t ur camp.________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph2:At that very mment, the helicpter arrived._______________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
A few minutes later, the bear headed back t ur camp, then we realized the spray had nly angered him even mre, fr he seemed much fiercer this time and vilently pushed the fence like mad. My heart raced wildly, nt knwing what t d. At this critical mment, Elli grabbed several pieces f garlic bread and threw them ver the fence. It wrked! The bear stpped the attack and ran t the bread. But it wasn’t lng befre he eat up all the bread and came back again.
At that very mment, the helicpter arrived. “Thank gdness we are saved!” Elli cried ut. Once the helicpter landed, we gt nt it in n time, excited and relieved. When we were safe n the helicpter up in the air, I was amazed t the spt that the bear had finally tre dwn the fence and ran twards the fd we left behind. I quickly tk ut the camera and phtgraphed the rare scene- we were rbbed by a plar bear.
【分析】本文以事件为线索展开，讲述了作者和妻子前往被称为“北极熊之都”的加拿大丘吉尔镇拍摄北极熊。夫妻二人做饭之时，一头饥饿的雄性幼熊跟着面包的蒜香味，靠近了营地，猛烈撞击营地边上的铁丝围栏。作者和妻子使出浑身解数，想吓退这头熊，不料它“不破篱笆誓不归”。无奈之下，作者求助营地管理员，被告知救援直升机要30分钟后才能赶到，只得先尝试用胡椒喷雾喷洒北极熊的眼睛，不料这使熊变得更加暴躁，在千钧一发之际直升机及时赶到，他们得救了的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
由第一段首句内容“几分钟后，熊返回了我们的营地。”可知，第一段可描写作者夫妻二人如何再次对付熊及两人在此过程中的紧张害怕。
由第二段首句内容“就在那时，直升机赶到了。”可知，第二段可描写作者夫妻二人获救时的心情。
续写线索：熊返回营地——紧张害怕——用面包攻击——直升机赶到——快速登上飞机——熊把篱笆推到——拍下熊“打劫”的画面
词汇激活
行为类
①激怒：anger/prvke / enrage
②抓起：grab/snatch up
③拿出：take ut/fetch ut
情绪类
①疯狂的：mad/crazy
②兴奋的：excited/thrilled
【点睛】[高分句型1] then we realized the spray had nly angered him even mre, fr he seemed much fiercer this time and vilently pushed the fence like mad. My heart raced wildly.（fr引导的原因状语从句）
[高分句型2] My heart raced wildly, nt knwing what t d. （现在分词作状语）
[高分句型3] Once the helicpter landed, we gt nt it in n time, excited and relieved. (nce引导时间状语从句和形容词作状语)
目标1
脱险类续写概述
目标2
恶劣环境来铺垫
目标3
心理感受来烘托
目标4
外貌神态来助力
目标5
谋篇布局有起伏
目标6
万能升华来点睛
目标7
最新模拟
目标8
真题感悟
2、抓课堂、重效率、要求学生紧跟老师的节奏。一轮复习是将重点知识提炼，容量大，速度快。所以，学生的思路必须时时刻刻跟随着老师的思路，要快速地用脑思，用心听、用嘴说，用手写，才能达到高效。
3、抓自习、重过程、增强得分的意识。学案都是在规定的时间内完成，重视规范的做题步骤，重视思考过程。更重要的是，做完题后要对做过的题目进行反思、整理。
4、抓阅读、重反思、全面提高成绩。得阅读者得天下。阅读是强化英语思维的最佳途径之一。一轮复习，重视基础知识的同时，要坚持阅读训练，促进英语成绩的整体提高。
5、抓时间，重效果，扎实做好每个复习环节。一轮复习时间紧，任务重，需要同学们充分抢抓时间，利用时间，紧跟复习进度。英语的进步并非一蹴而就，需要每天坚持把每件事情做扎实。做到这一点，成功只是早晚的事！
►第04讲 脱险类（讲义）
目录
_____________________________________________________________________
读后续写中会遇到描写森林迷路、地震、水灾、火灾等内容的故事，如果涉及到对生命造成一定威胁的情节，我们就把这类文章归为“脱险型”。在近年高考真题中，如2023年浙江卷1月蜂鸟脱困；2020年浙江卷1月遇到北极熊；2018年浙江卷6月森林遇险。
如何续写好此类文章呢？清代袁枚《随园诗话》中说过，“文似看山不喜平”，就提出过写文章好比观赏山峰那样，不喜欢平坦，喜欢起伏。而读后续写中，情节的跌宕起伏就是一种极好的提升文章整体水平的手法。这种转折即由“负”变“正”；或由“正”变“负”。最终体现正能量的结局，就是由“正”变“负”。
【写作步骤】
一 恶劣环境来铺垫
The water was deep and running fast frm a big rainstrm the night befre.
前天晚上下了一场大暴雨，水又深又急。
The water twisted and turned him, scraping him against the rcks as he was carried alng. Water gushed int his muth and up his nse.
水流不停地扭动着他，旋转着他，把他蹭在岩石上。水灌进他的嘴里，没过了他的鼻子。
3. What's wrse, he didn't have any fd r water with him, let alne his cell phne r ther supplies.
更糟糕的是，他没有任何食物和水，更不要说他的手机和其他日用品。
4. The sky is vercast, darkened with glmy cluds.
天空阴沉，乌云密布。
5.The icy wind started hwling, stinging my face.
寒风开始咆哮，刺痛了我的脸。
6.The wind was hwling and the waves smacked repeatedly against her face.
风在呼啸着，海浪不停地拍打着她的脸。
7.But then, as I lked in the distance, I discvered a series f three r fur big waves heading twards the shre.
但后来，当我往远处看时，我发现有三四个大浪正在冲向海岸。
8.It swayed vilently in a strng wind. Its radway was damaged by vehicles. Its access was blcked by many peple.
它在强风中剧烈摇晃。车辆损坏了道路。许多人堵住了通道。
9.The angry waves crashed against the side f the bat, with water splashing here and there.
愤怒的海浪拍打向船的一侧，水到处飞溅。
二 心理感受来烘托
An minus thught crssed his mind: I’m ging t die up here.
一个不祥的念头掠过他的脑海：我要死在这了。
Lking at the vast sea, I felt a sense f fear surging thrugh my whle bdy.
看着浩瀚的大海，我感到一种恐惧感掠过我的全身。
Salt stinging my eyes, I culd hardly tell hw lng I culd hld n.
盐刺痛了我的眼睛，我几乎不知道我能坚持多久。
4.Grief cmes in waves.
悲伤如潮水一般涌来。
5. With a punding heart and cld, mist palms, I felt faint.
最后一句话像一颗子弹击中了我的心。
6.Afraid and merely desperate, she rushed twards him.
她害怕而绝望，向他冲去。
三 外貌神态来烘托
Hearing the bad news, Mary frze with shck, as if rted n the grund.
听到这个坏消息，玛丽吓得愣住了，好像长在了地上。
2.Tears blurred her eyes.
泪水模糊了她的双眼。
3. I sbbed bitterly, tasting the salt frm the tears that streamed dwn my face.
我痛苦地抽泣着，尝到脸上流下泪水咸咸的味道。
4.She calmed dwn t keep the rhyme f breathing s that she culd breathe evenly.
她平静下来，保持呼吸的韵律，以便能够均匀地呼吸。
5.I glanced back ver my shulder t make sure that n ne was fllwing me.
我回头瞟了一眼以确保没有人跟踪我。
四 谋篇布局有起伏
Ultimately, we were back, safe and sund.
最终，我们又回来了，安然无恙。
We jumped int the warm vehicle and the frester drve us t the ranger statin, where we were given clthes and were able t call ur parents.
我们跳上了温暖的车，森林管理员开车把我们送到护林员站，在那里我们得到了衣服，并可以打电话给我们的父母。
Suddenly it ccurred t us that we culd keep t the track t guide us back.But it was getting darker and darker, thus making it increasingly difficult fr us t make ut the rad.
突然我们想到我们可以坚持小路引导我们回去。但天色越来越暗，使我们走道路越来越困难。
五 万能升华来点睛
脱险类的文章有一个万能的表达“这是一次难忘的经历”。
万能升华1：
That day was s unfrgettable that it wuld stay in my memry frever.
句意：那天是如此难忘，它将永远留在我的记忆。
遇到危险并且最终成功脱险的经历，想必对我们每个人来说一定是一生中难忘的经历。
本句中使用了的句式结构：如此以至于。unfrgettable是一个形容词，表示“无法忘记的”。
万能升华2：
It was this unique experience that made me understand whatever difficulty we are faced with, we mustn’t give up ur hpe.
句意：正是这种独特的经历让我明白了我们所面临的任何困难，我们都不能放弃希望。
本句为复合句，运用强调句it 、定语从句that...、宾语从句whatever...，属于高级句式。
万能升华3：
As lng as we dn’t give up hpe and make every effrt t vercme all the difficulties, we will surely make a success sner r later.
句意：只要我们不放弃希望，不尽一切努力克服一切困难，我们迟早一定会取得成功的。
本句是复合句。As lng as引导状语从句，且句子运用较多短语如make a success, sn r later等。
万能升华4：
Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can cnquer whatever difficulty came in the way.
句意：直到那时，我才意识到，正是勇敢才能克服一切困难。
遇到危险后，勇敢面对，才能解决问题。这个句子突出了“勇敢”这个核心，这在“脱险型”的故事里，是非常恰当的。这句话使用了倒装的结构和强调结构结合的方式，也属于高分亮点句。
【最新模拟】
（2023年湖南长沙一中校考阶段练习）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A Fthld in Life
A dzen children ran arund laughing and playing in my friend’s yard, while we parents sat chatting and sipping cl summer drinks. The barbecue had been cleared away when ur hst annunced a surprise. A huge mvable rck wall was laded in, which was abut twelve feet wide, made f gray mlded plastic with indented fthlds that stretched straight up fr what lked like at least a hundred feet. The enthusiastic kids swiftly lined up t give it a try, and with the cmplete fearlessness mst children pssess, scrambled t the tp and rang the bell that hung at the highest pint. There wasn’t really anything t be afraid f since they were belted int place. Three peple culd climb side by side and talk t each ther, s gradually the adults tried it, t.
“Cme n; let’s g get in line,” my husband Neil urged. “N, yu g ahead withut me.” I had all srts f gd excuses: I dn’t have the right shes; I frgt my sunglasses; I have t help the hstess. I have a unique talent fr seeing unthinkable danger in almst every situatin, and this scene seemed dangerus t me. I watched everyne else having fun, thugh, and finally cnvinced myself t try it.
With all the nerve I culd gather, I started the climb. The belt wrapped arund me like a diaper s there was n way t fall. Yes, I thught, this is fun and safe! Cncentrating n each fthld, I slwly made my way up. I avided lking dwn t prevent any sudden panic, and within a few minutes I made it t the tp and prudly rang the bell.
“W h!” my daughters called up t me. “Way t g, Cl!” Neil yelled.
I enjyed my success and the enjyable view f fields and farmland until I realized there was a line belw me waiting fr a turn. It was time t g dwn.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
It was ne thing t lk ut at the wrld in the distance, but it was a whle ther thing t lk straight dwn.
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Finally, the tw f us reached the grund.
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【答案】
It was ne thing t lk ut at the wrld in the distance, but it was a whle ther thing t lk straight dwn. My legs were shaking uncntrllably and my grip n the handhlds was slipping. （细节描写）I culd hear my family calling up recmmendatins t me. Clsing my eyes and taking a deep breath, I tried t calm myself dwn.（心理描写，神态描写） And then, I felt a gentle hand n my back. “It’s kay,” a kind vice said. “I’m here t help yu dwn.” I turned t see a friendly face, smene I had nly met briefly befre, but wh had clearly seen my distress and cme t my aid. With her supprt, I was able t climb dwn, slwly but surely.
Finally, the tw f us reached the grund. I was verwhelmed with gratitude, and as I hugged my rescuer, I realized that smetimes it’s kay t admit when we need help.（情感描写） It’s kay t be afraid, and it’s kay t lean n thers when we’re feeling unsure. On my drive hme, I culdn’t stp thinking abut the rck wall. It had been a symbl f my wn self-dubt and fear, but I had cnquered it. （心理描写）I felt like I had a new fthld in life, a new sense f cnfidence that I culd take n whatever challenges came my way.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和家人去朋友家聚会，主人准备了可移动的岩石墙，大家都热情地排着队攀爬，但是作者找各种借口不去爬，最后在家人的鼓励下，终于鼓足勇气爬上去了，看到了远处的另一个世界，非常开心。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“从远处看世界是一回事，但向下看完全是另一回事。”可知，第一段可描写作者想下去的时候往下看非常害怕，最后在其他人的帮助下往下爬。
②由第二段首句内容“最后，我们两个到了地面。”可知，第二段可描写作者最后爬下来，感激救命恩人并对此事进行感悟。
续写线索：害怕下去——其他人帮助——稳稳下来——感激恩人——感悟
词汇激活
行为类
吸气：take a breath/breathe in
考虑：think abut/think ver/cnsider
情绪类
友好的：friendly / amicable/ kind
感激地：with gratitude / gratefully
[高分句型1] Clsing my eyes and taking a deep breath, I tried t calm myself dwn.
我闭上眼睛，深呼吸，试图让自己冷静下来（本句属于外貌神态描写，并且运用了现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2] I turned t see a friendly face, smene I had nly met briefly befre, but wh had clearly seen my distress and cme t my aid.
我转过身来，看到一张友好的脸，我以前只见过一次，但他清楚地看到了我的痛苦，并来帮助我。
（本句属于细节描写，并含有省略关系代词的限制性定语从句）
[高分句型3] I felt like I had a new fthld in life, a new sense f cnfidence that I culd take n whatever challenges came my way.
我觉得我在生活中有了一个新的立足点，一种新的信心，我可以接受我遇到的任何挑战。
（本句属于结尾升华句子，运用宾语从句和that连接的同位语从句）
【真题感悟】
（2020年浙江卷6月）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single gal: t phtgraph plar bears. We were staying at a research camp utside “the plar bear capital f the wrld”-the twn f Churchill in Manitba, Canada.
Taking pictures f plar bears is amazing but als dangerus. Plar bears-like all wild animals shuld be phtgraphed frm a safe distance. When I'm face t face with a plar bear, I like it t be thrugh a camera with a telepht lens. But smetimes，that is easier said than dne. This was ne f thse times.
As Elli and I cked dinner, a yung male plar bear wh was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled ur garlic bread.
The hungry bear fllwed his nse t ur camp, which was surrunded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He std n his back legs and pushed at the wden fence psts.
Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actins we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pts hard，and fired blank shtgun shells int the air. Smetimes lud nises like these will scare bears ff. Nt this plar bear thugh-he just kept trying t tear dwn the fence with his massive paws(爪子).
I radied the camp manager fr help. He tld me a helicpter was n its way, but it wuld be 30 minutes befre it arrived. Making the best f this clse encunter(相遇), I tk sme pictures f the bear.
Elli and I feared the fence wuldn’t last thrugh 30 mre minutes f the bear's punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but desn't hurt them. S I apprached ur uninvited guest slwly and，thrugh the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry rar(吼叫), the bear ran t the lake t wash his eyes.
注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph1:A few minutes later, the bear headed back t ur camp.________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph2:At that very mment, the helicpter arrived._______________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
A few minutes later, the bear headed back t ur camp, then we realized the spray had nly angered him even mre, fr he seemed much fiercer this time and vilently pushed the fence like mad. My heart raced wildly, nt knwing what t d. At this critical mment, Elli grabbed several pieces f garlic bread and threw them ver the fence. It wrked! The bear stpped the attack and ran t the bread. But it wasn’t lng befre he eat up all the bread and came back again.
At that very mment, the helicpter arrived. “Thank gdness we are saved!” Elli cried ut. Once the helicpter landed, we gt nt it in n time, excited and relieved. When we were safe n the helicpter up in the air, I was amazed t the spt that the bear had finally tre dwn the fence and ran twards the fd we left behind. I quickly tk ut the camera and phtgraphed the rare scene- we were rbbed by a plar bear.
【分析】本文以事件为线索展开，讲述了作者和妻子前往被称为“北极熊之都”的加拿大丘吉尔镇拍摄北极熊。夫妻二人做饭之时，一头饥饿的雄性幼熊跟着面包的蒜香味，靠近了营地，猛烈撞击营地边上的铁丝围栏。作者和妻子使出浑身解数，想吓退这头熊，不料它“不破篱笆誓不归”。无奈之下，作者求助营地管理员，被告知救援直升机要30分钟后才能赶到，只得先尝试用胡椒喷雾喷洒北极熊的眼睛，不料这使熊变得更加暴躁，在千钧一发之际直升机及时赶到，他们得救了的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
由第一段首句内容“几分钟后，熊返回了我们的营地。”可知，第一段可描写作者夫妻二人如何再次对付熊及两人在此过程中的紧张害怕。
由第二段首句内容“就在那时，直升机赶到了。”可知，第二段可描写作者夫妻二人获救时的心情。
续写线索：熊返回营地——紧张害怕——用面包攻击——直升机赶到——快速登上飞机——熊把篱笆推到——拍下熊“打劫”的画面
词汇激活
行为类
①激怒：anger/prvke / enrage
②抓起：grab/snatch up
③拿出：take ut/fetch ut
情绪类
①疯狂的：mad/crazy
②兴奋的：excited/thrilled
【点睛】[高分句型1] then we realized the spray had nly angered him even mre, fr he seemed much fiercer this time and vilently pushed the fence like mad. My heart raced wildly.（fr引导的原因状语从句）
[高分句型2] My heart raced wildly, nt knwing what t d. （现在分词作状语）
[高分句型3] Once the helicpter landed, we gt nt it in n time, excited and relieved. (nce引导时间状语从句和形容词作状语)
目标1
脱险类续写概述
目标2
恶劣环境来铺垫
目标3
心理感受来烘托
目标4
外貌神态来助力
目标5
谋篇布局有起伏
目标6
万能升华来点睛
目标7
最新模拟
目标8
真题感悟
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