专题02-2023全国乙卷 2021-2024年高考英语小作文真题全解全析

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真题原文
学校英文报组织同学们分享自己在假期中学到的新技能，请你以此为主题写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：1.简要描述 2.体验和感受
注意：1.词数100左右 2.题目已为你写好。
Learning a New Skill
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真题解析
本篇书面表达是一篇记叙文，要求写作“自己在暑假中学到的新技能”，这一写作要求贴近学生生活实际的交际任务情境，符合新课标英语学习中对实用性的强调，具有较强的开放性和灵活性。考生可结合自身经历进行写作，选择自己熟悉的“技能”学习经历进行构思。
整体而言，这篇书面表达的话题选择很常规、很广泛，难度偏低，题目的关键词是“新技能”，写作重点是学习“新技能”的过程和感悟。具体看这一“新技能”可以是游泳、画画、跳舞等。叙述学习“新技能”过程时，可以说说学习过程中遇到哪些困难，或者介绍学习新技能的不同阶段的表现等等。总结感悟时可适当借助谚语、熟语等进行表述，增加文采。
建议采用以下三段式结构进行写作：
引出话题，即简要陈述假期中到的新技能是什么；
叙述体验，即叙述学习技能的过程，突出学的循序渐进，让内容更真实；
第三段，总结感受，强调获得感。
为了能更好地体现段落内容所构成的承接、递进或是转折关系，不妨段首加上表示相应关系的关联词。
写作小贴士：
审时态：以一般过去时为主。
审人称：以第一人称为主。
审要点：内容要点必须齐全，逻辑要清晰。
范文赏析1（摄影）
Learning A New Skill
Learning phtgraphy is a charming and fascinating jurney. Fr a lng time, I have been bsessed with phtgraphy. Last summer, when l develped deeper int this skill, l realized it wasn't just clicking n the shutter buttn.
Guided by my prfessinal phtgrapher brther, l started by chsing the right angle. The angle f the pht can significantly change the stry being tld. Cmpsitin is anther fundamental aspect that requires careful cnsideratin f the elements in a picture. In additin, gd lighting is essential in phtgraphy. Eventually, l successfully created a visually pleasing cmpsitin.
Thrugh this experience, l have learned t be patient with myself when learning smething new. Just as the saying ges, “Practice makes perfect.”
学习一项新技能
学习摄影是一段充满魅力而迷人的旅程。长期以来，我一直痴迷于摄影。去年夏天，当我深入研究这项技能，我才意识到摄影不仅仅是按下快门。
在我的哥哥---专业摄影师的指导下，我开始学着选择合适的拍摄角度。照片的角度可以显著地改变所讲述的故事。构图是另一个需要仔细考虑画面元素的基本方面。此外，良好的光线在摄影中必不可少。最终，我成功地创作了一个令人赏心悦目的作品。
通过这次经历，我懂得了在学习新东西时要对自己保持耐心。正如俗话所说:“熟能生巧。”
亮点词汇
fascinating adj. 迷人的
be bsessed with 沉迷于；痴迷于
significantly adv. 明显地
fundamental adj.基本的
essential adj.必要的
Eventually adv. 最终范文赏析2（游泳）
Learning A New Skill
Swimming is a very vital skill in life. l had a strng reslutin t master it and attended a swimming class last vacatin.
When l reached the pl, the first thing l learned was t breathe. The cach said,“Take a breath, and breathe thrugh yur nse." l succeeded after ding it several times. Then the cach taught me t slap water. l gripped n t the railing, slapped the water with my legs and feet, and sn felt tired. With the encuragement f the cach, l did mre practice and finally learned t swim.
Swimming makes me cnfident and psitive. As far as l am cncerned, nt nly can swimming be a jyful activity, but als it can save peple's lives when it cmes t a dangerus situatin.
学习一项新技能
游泳是生活中一项非常重要的技能。我下定决心要学会它，于是上一个假期我报名参加了游泳课程。
当我到达游泳池，要学的第一件事就是呼吸。教练说:“深呼吸，然后用鼻子呼吸。”我做了几次之后就成功了。接下来，教练教我拍水。我抓着栏杆，用腿和脚拍打着水，很快就感觉累了。在教练的鼓励下，我进行了更多的练习，最终学会了游泳。
游泳让我变得自信、乐观。就我个人而言，游泳不仅可以成为一项快乐的活动，而且在危急时还可以拯救人们的生命。亮点词块
vital adj. 至关重要的
reslutin n. 决心
slap v.拍打
grip v. 紧握
psitive adj. 积极的；乐观的
As far as l am cncerned 就我而言
范文赏析3（包饺子）
Learning A New Skill
Last winter, l learned hw t make dumplings and tasted the mst delicius meal with my family.
It was a reunin time and my family decided t make dumplings. Under my mther’s guidance, I mixed sme minced prk, cabbage and ther ingredients. Then I placed a small piece f filling in the
学习一项新技能
去年冬天，我学会了如何包饺子，和家人品尝了最美味的一顿佳肴。
那是一个团圆的日子，我们一家人决定包饺子。在妈妈的指导下，我把猪肉末、白菜和其他配料拌在一起。然后，我把一团馅放在
middle f a rund piece f dugh and flded it up. Unfrtunately, the filling spread. Seeing my frustratin, my mther encuraged me t try again. This time, l dipped sme water, squeezed the filling tgether and then succeeded. T my surprise, l ate a dumpling with a cin wrapped in it at dinner, which my mther had secretly put in.
The special dumpling nt nly invlves a happy family time, but als ignites my passin fr cking.
面皮中间、再把它折叠起来。糟糕的是，馅散开了。妈妈看到了我的沮丧，鼓励我再试一次。这一次，我蘸了一些水，把馅挤在一起，成功包好了饺子。令我惊讶的是，我在晚餐时吃到了一个包着硬币的饺子，那是我妈妈悄悄包进去的。
这个特别的饺子，不仅包含了幸福的家庭时光，也点燃了我对烹饪的热情。亮点词汇
reunin n. 团圆
guidance n. 指导
minced adj. 切碎的
fld up 折叠
frustratin n. 沮丧
ignite v. 点燃范文赏析4（骑自行车）
Learning A New Skill
The bicycle is such a cl vehicle that I've dreamed f riding it. Recently, l have learned t ride a bicycle.
At first, when l stepped n the pedal,I ttally lst cntrl f the bicycle. l fell t the grund, but l didn't lse heart. After a while, l knew hw t keep balance, but I still didn't knw hw t ride straight. l was afraid t mve and always used my feet t keep it standing. At last, l cnquered my fear and mastered the skill. | felt happy abut what l had dne.
Learning a new skill is a tugh but exciting and rewarding experience. Overall, l understand the value f persistence and the imprtance f taking n challenges.
学习一项新技能
自行车是一种很酷的交通工具，我一直梦想着能骑它。最近，我学会了骑自行车。
起初当我踩下踏板时，我完全无法控制自行车。我摔倒在地，但我没有灰心。过了一会，我懂得了如何保持平衡，但我仍然不知道如何笔直地骑行。我不敢移动，总是用脚撑着，让自行车直立着。最后，我克服了内心的恐惧，掌握了这项技能。我为自己所取得的成果感到高兴。
学习一项新技能是一次艰难但激动人心的、获益匪浅的经历。总的来说，我明白了坚持的价值和应对挑战的重要性。
亮点词汇
step n 踩上
lse cntrl f 失去控制
cnquer v. 征服
master v. 掌握
take n 承担

范文赏析5（书法）
Learning A New Skill
Last summer,l embarked n the jurney f learning calligraphy, which is an elegant art frm that I have lng admired.
T learn calligraphy, what a persn needs first is t have a peaceful mind. It was because f impatience that l had difficulty cntrlling the brush, as its strkes were either t thin r t thick . Next, yu require perseverance t achieve prgress With patience and cntinuus practice, my skills gradually imprved. During the prcess,l experienced setbacks and the jy f prgress. Nw l can appreciate the beauty and charm f calligraphy.
Calligraphy is a cmbinatin f spirit and strength. It is als an imprtant way f expressing neself and finding peace in the busy life.
学习一项新技能
去年夏天，我开始了学习书法的旅程，对于书法这种优雅的艺术形式，我向往已久。
学习书法，对于个人而言首先需要保持平和的心态。正是由于急躁，我难以控制好毛笔，写出的笔画要么太细，要么太粗。其次，你想要取得进步，就需要坚持不懈。通过耐心且不断的练习，我的技术逐渐提高了。在这个过程中，我经历了挫折，也经历了进步的喜悦。现在，我可以感受到书法艺术中蕴含的美感。
书法艺术是精神与力量的结合。它也是在忙碌的生活中表达自我和寻求平静的一种方式。亮点词汇
embark n 开始
elegant 优雅的
strke 一笔;一划
perseverance 毅力
setback 挫折
express neself表达自我
范文赏析6（包粽子）
Learning A New Skill
Last summer, l learned hw t make Zngzi(r rice dumplings) during the Dragn Bat Festival.
Under the guidance f my mther, I biled, cled bamb
学习一项新技能
去年夏天，我在端午节期间学会了如何包粽子。
在妈妈的指导下，我把竹叶煮熟、leaves and prepared sme fillings such as red jujube, bean paste and egg ylk. With three r fur bamb leaves n my palm, l flded the leaves int an inverted pyramid shape cntainer. Then I used a spn t fill it with the mixture f glutinus rice and fillings. After l finished wrapping it, l tied it up with a water-saked length f straw.
Wrds fail t express my happiness when l taste the Zngzi because it's highly delicius. Mst imprtantly, l learned t respect the cultural heritage f ur cuntry in mdern sciety.
冷却，准备好红枣、豆沙和蛋黄等馅料。我把三四片竹叶放在手心，把竹叶折成倒金字塔形的容器。然后，我用勺子把糯米和馅料填进去。包好后，我用浸泡过的稻草秆将粽子绑好。
当我吃到粽子的时候，那种极度美味所带来的快乐是无以言表的。最重要的是，我学会了在现代社会中尊重我们国家的文化遗产。亮点词汇
Under the guidance f 在的指导下
filling 馅
bean paste 豆沙
glutinus rice 糯米
straw 稻草秆
cultural heritage 文化遗产
范文赏析7（烘焙）
Learning A New Skill
Recently, l embarked n a jurney t learn hw t bake a cake, which remains a key cmpnent in celebratins.
T begin with, | preheated the ven and prepared the ingredients such as flur, baking pwder, eggs, sugar and butter in advance. l mixed the wet ingredients in a bwl and blended them well with a hand mixer. Then l added the wet mixture t the dry ingredients in a pan and beat them until the batter gt smthed. Finally, l put the dugh int the ven fr abut 30 minutes and cled it . Luckily, l made my first cake every successfully.
The prcess f baking a cake is a tiring yet fulfilling
学习一项新技能
最近，我开始了学习烘焙蛋糕之旅，它是庆祝活动中的关键组成部分。
首先，我预热了烤箱，提前备好原料，例如面粉、发酵粉、鸡蛋、糖和黄油。我在碗里把湿性材料混合好，然后用手动搅拌器拌匀。接着，我把湿性材料加到盘子里的干性材料中，不断揉面，直到面团变得光滑。最后，我把揉好的面团放进烤箱里烤30分钟左右，然后冷却。幸运的是，我的第一个蛋糕做得很成功。
做蛋糕是一个累人而又充实的过程。从我的烘焙经历中，我意识到只有满怀信ne. Frm my baking experience, I learned that nly with cnfidence and persistence can we achieve success.
心、坚持不懈，才能获得成功。亮点词块
cmpnent 组成部分
ingredient n. 原料
in advance 提前
blend v. 混合
fulfilling adj. 充实的
persistence n. 坚持