2024中考英语压轴专题训练-专题14书面表达-书信类专练（含解析）

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专题14 书面表达-书信类
训练题01【2023·黑龙江大庆·中考真题】
某国外中学生访问团将在暑假期间到访你的学校，参加文化交流活动。为顺利举办此次活动，做好接待工作，学校计划成立校园向导团。相关信息如下：
假设你是李华，想成为其中一员，请给学校相关工作负责人 Erie写一封邮件。
写作提示：
1. 表明意愿；
2. 阐述个人优势；
3. 说明此次接待活动的意义；
4. 表达你对此次活动的祝愿。
参考词汇： campus guide (校园向导)
写作要求：
1. 词数90 词左右 (开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数)；
2. 可适当添加细节，使行文连贯；
3. 不得泄露个人信息。
Dear Eric,
I have knwn that ur schl wants sme campus guides t receive the freign students.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
训练题02【2023·湖南永州·中考真题】
毕业在即，为了解同学们中考结束后两周内的计划，你校就此开展了一次问卷调查。假如你是李华，请根据下表中的信息，给你的外国笔友Tm写一封英文电子邮件，告诉他你的计划并期待他的假期分享。
要求: 1. 文中不得出现真实人名，校名和地名；2. 从表中列举的活动中任意选择1—2 项内容并陈述理由；3. 词数：80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Tm,
Hw are yu ging? Graduatin is cming. Our schl did a survey abut ur plans in tw weeks after high schl entrance examinatin. I’m writing t tell yu mine.
My plan is t... ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
训练题03【2023·河北·中考真题】
王梅的英国朋友Tny要来中国学习汉语，下面是Tny给她发来的电子邮件的部分内容。请你根据所给内容，以王梅的名义回复。
注意：（1）回复邮件须回答所给邮件内容中的两个问题，可适当发挥。
（2）回复邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名，所起名字只限于备选名字。
（3）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
备选名字：王健（Wang Jian）；李聪（Li Cng）；张友好（Zhang Yuha）
Hi Tny,
I’m very happy t knw that yu’ll cme t China t learn Chinese.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Lking frward t seeing yu.
Yurs,
Wang Mei
训练题04【2023·山东滨州·中考真题】
假如你是李华，近日你的英国笔友Amy发来邮件，向你诉说她最近的困扰；自己体型微胖，想通过节食减肥，以更美的面貌进入新的学校学习。请你根据邮件内容用英语给她回封邮件，谈一谈你对这问题的见解。
参考词汇: diet(v.节食), appearance (n.外貌), inner beauty (内在美)
Dear Li Hua,
I have been a bit larger than ther girls since I was little. Fr a lng time, this really trubled me. I feel mre wrried because I will start my senir high schl life sn! I am afraid that the students in the new schl will laugh at me because I am “big”. I decide t lk mre beautiful, s I want t lse weight by dieting. What d yu think f my plan? Can yu give me sme advice?
Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Amy
要求：1.要点齐全，并适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；
3.卷面整洁，书写美观，可适当加2—3分；
4.80词左右。开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Amy,
I have received and read yur letter, in which yu said yu wanted t lse weight by dieting.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yurs,
Li Hua
训练题05【2023·湖北襄阳·统考二模】
向世界传递中国文化，让世界倾听中国声音。近期，我市将面向全体中小学生举办“用英语讲好中国故事”的爱国主义主题展示活动。假如你是李华，你想参加此次活动，请根据下面的提示信息，向负责本次活动的英语老师Mr. Yang写一封90词左右的自荐信。
写作提示：
1. 个人信息：姓名、年龄、性格等；
2. 个人优势：
（1）读了很多关于中国历史的书，了解中国历史；
（2）知道很多历史故事，并且擅长用英语讲述它们；
（3）……
3. 个人感想：
（1）可以培养英语学习兴趣，提高口语表达能力；
（2）让更多的人了解中国历史和文化，并为之感到自豪。
写作要求：90词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入字数。行文连贯流畅，不得出现真实姓名校名。
Dear Mr. Yang,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely,
Li Hua
训练题06【2023·广东深圳·校考三模】
学校学生会正在招募志愿者，为外国来访学生展示传统手工制作（如剪纸、风筝、灯笼等），以弘扬中华传统文化。假如你是李华，请你用英语给校学生会写一封自荐信，在信中说明你申请成为志愿者的理由以及你的优势。
内容提示：
1．你申请志愿者的理由：（1）热爱中国文化；（2）有机会用英语交流；（3）……；
2．你的优势：（1）有过当志愿者的经验；（2）擅长英语；
3．你当选之后的打算：……
参考词汇：传统手工制作 traditinal Chinese handicrafts
要求：
1．结构完整，要点齐全，可适当发挥；
2．表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰；
3．文中不能出现任何真实的人名、校名等信息；
4．词数80左右。文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Learning that the Student Unin is lking fr vlunteers, I’m writing t apply t becme a vlunteer.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m lking frward t yur early reply!
Yurs,
Li Hua
训练题07【2023·江西上饶·联考一模】
假设你是某国际学校的学生李华，你们班将于近日举办汉语名著阅读分享活动 (Chinese Classics Sharing Activity)，请你根据表格要点提示及要求，给在你校学习的交换生Mike写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加，并告诉他时间、地点、目的、活动安排等。
要求：
1. 电子邮件应包括表格中的要点提示，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 电子邮件中不得出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数80~120；电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
Hw’s everything? I’m writing t invite yu t take part in the Chinese Classics Sharing Activity.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
训练题08【2022·湖南邵阳·中考真题】
“双减”政策实施后的第一个暑假即将来临，假如你是Zhang Wei，你的英国笔友Tm来信询问你今年的暑期计划，请你给他写一封回信，内容要点如下：
要求：1. 至少写四点暑期计划，可适当发挥；2.语言表达准确，语意通顺连贯；
3. 词数80左右。书信开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数;
4. 请勿在文中出现其实的姓名、校名及地名。
Dear Tm,
Hw is everything ging with yu? In yur letter, yu asked me abut my summer hliday reslutins. Nw I’m writing t tell yu sme details.
Firstly, _____________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
All in all, I hpe I’ll spend a meaningful and clrful summer hliday.
Yurs,
Zhang Wei
训练题09【2022·广西河池·中考真题】
今年4月，教育部颁发了《义务教育劳动课程标准（2022年版）》。从2022年秋季学期起，多种劳动技能将纳入中小学课程，引发同学们的热议和关注。假如你是李华，请根据下面内容对即将开设的劳动课（labr classes）写一封信给校长，提出你的想法及建议。
1.感觉非常高兴及兴奋。从中可以学到一些劳动技能，学会照顾自己（learn sme labr skills, lk after）。
2.希望学校能提供给每班劳动课的场地。每周开课两节。由生活经验丰富的老师教授同学们如何做饭、种菜……（补充两个内容）（prvide ... fr, with rich experience, teach）。
3.希望学校在期末举行各种劳动技能比赛；邀请家长们参观并分享劳动课成果（at the end f, hld, labr achievements）。
写作要求：
1.不得使用真实姓名和学校名；
2.内容需包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；
3.字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰；
4.词数100左右。（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。）
Dear headmaster,
My name is Li Hua. I’m in Class 6, Grade 8. It is said that we are ging t have labr classes next term. All my classmates are interested in it. I’m writing t yu t share my ideas abut the cming labr classes.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all my pinins. We’re lking frward t the classes. Thank yu!
Yurs,
Li Hua
训练题10【2022·浙江绍兴·中考真题】
假设你是刘军，在上周末的乡村旅游中，你发现了一些游客的不文明行为。请根据下表信息给某英文报VOICE栏目的编辑写一封邮件，反映这些问题并提出建议。
注意：
（1）邮件内容必须包括上表所有信息，可适当增加细节；
（2）你的建议至少两条；
（3）词数：80—100；
（4）邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：不文明行为uncivilized behavir；编辑editr
Dear editr,I was shcked t see sme uncivilized behavirs when I tk a trip t a village last weekend. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs sincerely,
Liu Jun
题型训练
Campus Guide WantedA grup f freign students are ging t take part in an intercultural exchange prject during the summer vacatin in ur schl. We are planning t fund a campus guide grup t help them have a better experience during their visit. Write an e-mail t us if yu want t jin us!
E-mail address: Eric123@100. cm
The Student Unin
Activities
Reasns
1. learn t make a dish 2. learn t sing a sng
3. learn t d a sprt 4. practise handwriting
5. travel with classmates 6. read a bk
7. learn paper cutting 8. stay with families
Yu knw, in English, given names (名字) cme first and family names (姓) cme last. Hw abut Chinese names? And can yu help me chse a Chinese name and tell me its meaning?
写作要点
具体内容
Time
Frm 8:00 pm t 10:00 pm n September 1
Place
Schl art center
Purpse
①Make mre peple read Chinese classics
②Learn mre abut Chinese traditinal culture
Participants (参与者)
Everyne interested
Activities
①Talk abut a Chinese classic they read
②Have a discussin and share ideas
Uncivilized behavirs
Suggestins
● threw rubbish everywhere
● picked flwers
● climbed trees
● put rubbish int bins
● …
答案&解析
训练题01【2023·黑龙江大庆·中考真题】
【答案】[例文]
Dear Eric,
I have knwn that ur schl wants sme campus guides t receive the freign students. I want t be a member f yu.
First f all, I’m easyging and utging, s I’m gd at cmmunicating with thers. What’s mre, I have a gd understanding f freign cultures. Therefre, I can help thse wh cme t ur schl better fit in with new envirnment as sn as pssible. Last but nt least, I can speak English well and it’s easy fr us t chat with each ther easily.
Frm my pint f view, this activity can nt nly imprve my ability t wrk with ther peple, but als make ur schl knwn t mre peple. At the same time, I sincerely hpe that the prject can be a success and the freign students will have a great time in ur schl.
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出本文主题，表达自己的意愿；
第二步，阐述个人优势；
第三步，说明此次接待活动的意义；
第四步，表达你对此次活动的祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①first f all首先
②be gd at擅长
③each ther彼此
[高分句型]
①I have knwn that ur schl wants sme campus guides t receive the freign students.（宾语从句）
②Therefre, I can help thse wh cme t ur schl better fit in with new envirnment as sn as pssible.（wh引导定语从句）
训练题02【2023·湖南永州·中考真题】
【答案】[例文]
Dear Tm,
Hw are yu ging? Graduatin is cming. Our schl did a survey abut ur plans in tw weeks after high schl entrance examinatin. I’m writing t tell yu mine.
My plan is t learn hw t make a dish. When my parents are nt at hme, I can ck by myself. At the same time, I can cultivate my independence well. By cking fd, I can als help myself and parents eat healthily.
I als want t learn t d a sprt. One f my favrite athletes is Malng, s I want t learn hw t play table tennis. On the ne hand, this sprt can exercise my bdy and is gd fr my eye health. On the ther hand, I can make mre friends.
I’m lking frward t yur vacatin plans.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头文章已给，介绍写邮件的背景；
第二步，具体阐述自己的两项计划，并详细陈述理由；
第三步，最后结尾，期待对方的分享。
[亮点词汇]
①At the same time同时
②On the ne the ther hand...一方面……另一方面……
③be gd fr对……有好处
[高分句型]
①My plan is t learn hw t make a dish.（动词不定式作表语）
②One f my favrite athletes is Malng, s I want t learn hw t play table tennis.（ne f+最高级+名词复数表示“……中最……之一”）
训练题03【2023·河北·中考真题】
【答案】[例文]
Hi Tny,
I’m very happy t knw that yu’ll cme t China t learn Chinese. There is n dubt that it is very imprtant and useful t learn Chinese well.
We always put ur family name first. They are frm ur family, and it’s surely ur Chinese traditin. Then given names cme last. Secndly, I prefer Li Cng as yur Chinese name. I think this name represents intelligence and cleverness. Just like yu! As far as I am cncerned, the names are the culture f a cuntry. A gd name stands fr a gd luck.
Lking frward t seeing yu.
Yurs,
Wang Mei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求针对邮件内容给出答复，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明学好中文的必要性；
第二步，介绍中国的姓名文化并为对方推荐一个名字；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①imprtant and useful重要的和有用的
②Chinese traditin中国传统
③stand fr代表
[高分句型]
①There is n dubt that it is very imprtant and useful t learn Chinese well.（There is n dubt that...句型）
②I think this name represents intelligence and cleverness. （省略that的宾语从句）
训练题04【2023·山东滨州·中考真题】
【答案】[例文]
Dear Amy,
I have received and read yur letter, in which yu said yu wanted t lse weight by dieting. As yu mentined in the letter, I have sme advice fr yu.
Firstly, there is n need t care abut what thers think f yu. The mst imprtant thing is t be cnfident and psitive, as it will help yu have curage t face and vercme yur truble. Inner beauty is mre imprtant than appearance. Secndly, keep a healthy diet. Stay away frm high-fat fd and eat mre fruit and vegetables instead. A balanced diet is very imprtant fr lsing weight. Thirdly, ding prper exercise is necessary. Yu’d better get up early in the mrning and d sme sprts regularly.
The mre yu exercise, the healthier yu’ll be. I hpe my advice will be helpful t yu.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据邮件内容提出建议，并适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，提出要给Amy的建议；
第二步，具体阐述给Amy同学的三个建议；
第三步，总结全文，表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①there is n need t d sth没必要做某事
②stay away frm…与……保持距离
③have curage t d sth有勇气做某事
[高分句型]
①I hpe my advice will be helpful t yu.（宾语从句）
②Stay away frm high-fat fd and eat mre fruit and vegetables instead.（祈使句）
训练题05【2023·湖北襄阳·统考二模】
【答案】[例文]
Dear Mr. Yang,
I am excited t hear that ur schl will hld the activity “telling Chinese stries in English”. I really want t take part in it.
My name is Li Hua. I am 15 years ld. I am utging and helpful. I read a lt f bks abut Chinese histry and learned abut it. I knw many histrical stries and am gd at telling them in English. My spken English is very gd and I can cmmunicate with freigners fluently. Thrugh this activity, I can cultivate my interest in learning English and imprve my ral expressin ability. Let mre peple knw abut Chinese histry and culture and be prud f it.
I expect that yu can give me this chance t shw myself and I am lking frward t yur reply.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为自荐信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的个人信息；
第二步，介绍自己的优势；
第三步，发表个人感想。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②be gd at擅长
③cmmunicate with与……沟通
[高分句型]
①Let mre peple knw abut Chinese histry and culture and be prud f it.（祈使句）
②I expect that yu can give me this chance t shw myself and I am lking frward t yur reply.（宾语从句）
训练题06【2023·广东深圳·校考三模】
【答案】[例文]
Dear Sir/Madam,
Learning that the Student Unin is lking fr vlunteers, I’m writing t apply t becme a vlunteer. And I am ging t shw the traditinal handicraft, such as paper cutting, kites, lanterns and s n t spread the traditinal Chinese culture.
I am Li Hua, a by frm Class 2, Grade 9. I lve Chinese culture very much and I want t spread Chinese culture. Besides, My English is very gd, s I can cmmunicate with them very easily. If I have the chance, I can make vides t tell internatinal students the histry f kites and teach them t make kites. I’m sure they will be very interested in it.
I’m lking frward t yur early reply!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示内容申请成为志愿者，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，表示自己想申请做志愿者；
第二步，介绍申请做志愿者的理由以及你的优势；
第三步，介绍你当选之后的打算。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②and s n等等
③be interested in对……感兴趣
[高分句型]
①I lve Chinese culture very much and I want t spread Chinese culture.(and连接的并列句)
②If I have the chance, I can make vides t tell internatinal students the histry f kites and teach them t make kites.(if引导的条件状语从句)
训练题07【2023·江西上饶·联考一模】
【答案】[例文]
Dear Mike,
Hw’s everything? I’m writing t invite yu t take part in the Chinese Classics Sharing Activity. It will be held in the schl art center frm 8:00 pm t 10:00 pm n September 1.
This activity, which faces everyne wh is interested, aims t make mre peple read Chinese classics as well as t give peple a way t learn mre abut Chinese traditinal culture. During the activity, each student will talk abut a Chinese classic they read first, and then we can have a discussin and share ur ideas abut it. I knw yu are interested in reading Chinese classics, s this will be a great chance fr yu t talk abut yur favrite Chinese classic.
I am sure yu will have much fun then if yu cme!
Lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：写作要点以及开头已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中的写作要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山说明要邀请Mike参加活动；
第二步，具体介绍活动时间、地点以及活动等信息；
第三步，书写结语，表达对Mike的祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①as well as以及
②learn abut了解
③talk abut讨论
④be interested in对……感兴趣
[高分句型]
①This activity, which faces everyne wh is interested, aims t make mre peple read Chinese classics as well as t give peple a way t learn mre abut Chinese traditinal culture. （定语从句）
②I am sure yu will have much fun then if yu cme!（宾语从句）
训练题08【2022·湖南邵阳·中考真题】
【答案】[例文]
Dear Tm,
Hw is everything ging with yu? In yur letter, yu asked me abut my summer hliday reslutins. Nw I’m writing t tell yu sme details.
Firstly, I want t have a gd rest and relax myself. I will listen t sme music r watch sme TV. Secndly, I will read sme bks. I like reading very much. S I read a bk every week t braden my hrizns. Thirdly, I will be a vlunteer t help thse in need. Finally, I will help my parents d sme husewrk at hme.
All in all, I hpe I’ll spend a meaningful and clrful summer hliday.
Yurs,
Zhang Wei
【详解】
题干解读：
本文是一篇书信作文。根据要点提示，给英国笔友Tm回一封关于你今年的暑期计划的信。
写作指导：
本文时态以一般将来时为主。人称以第一人称为主。写作时包含要点，且自己需要再加一点暑期计划，可使用过渡词Firstly，Secndly，Thirdly以及Finally使文章更通畅，最后确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
训练题09【2022·广西河池·中考真题】
【答案】[例文]
Dear headmaster,
My name is Li Hua. I’m in Class 6, Grade 8. It is said that we are ging t have labr classes next term. All my classmates are interested in it. I’m writing t yu t share my ideas abut the cming labr classes.
I feel very happy and excited. I think we can learn sme labr skills and learn t lk after urselves. I hpe the schl can prvide a place fr each class t wrk. The schl can have tw classes a week. The teachers with rich experience teach students hw t ck, grw vegetables, wash clthes, clean the huse and ther simple husewrk. I als hpe that the schl can hld all kinds f labr skills cmpetitin at the end f the term and invite parents t visit and share labr achievements.
That’s all my pinins. We’re lking frward t the classes. Thank yu!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于书信类写作。书信的第一段和第三段已给出，第二段则需要包含题目中所给的三个要点，缺一不可。
2.写作指导：本文应使用第一人称书写；时态采用一般现在时；在展开写第二段的时候需要用到括号中的所给内容，并在第二点中进行适当拓展。写作过程中需体现词汇及句式的多样性，同时保证叙述过程条理清晰。
训练题10【2022·浙江绍兴·中考真题】
【答案】[例文]
Dear editr,
I was shcked t see sme uncivilized behavirs when I tk a trip t a village last weekend. Sme visitrs threw rubbish everywhere and left plastic bags flying arund. Sme picked flwers withut permissin t take phts s that they culd shw ff nline. And sme climbed trees fr fun, which might result in serius accidents.
I think it wrng t enjy neself at the cst f thers. Visitrs are suppsed t prtect the envirnment, like putting rubbish int prper bins. And they shuld be careful nt t cause truble t the lcals and keep away frm danger. In this way, a greener, cleaner and mre civilized new village will be there fr us all t enjy.
Yurs sincerely
Liu Jun
【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要以题干表格中的内容讲述一些游客的不文明行为并提出相关的建议，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时和一般现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主。第一段主要描述自己发现的游客的一些不文明行为；第二段提出自己的建议。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。