高考英语一轮复习--应用文写作必备微技能道歉信(句式+模板+精练)
展开假如你是李华,你和你的外籍好友Andrew约好了本周末去图书馆,但是你因为临时要参加学校组织的“垃圾分类,全民行动”志愿活动而不能赴约。请根据以下要点给他写一份道歉信。内容要点:
1.表达歉意;2.简要介绍活动内容和意义;3.另约时间。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Andrew,
I have signed up fr a vluntary activity themed “Trash Srting, All Invlved” and wn’t be able t accmpany yu t the library this weekend as planned. I feel terribly srry and want t express my deepest aplgy.
As yu knw, we students shuld spare n effrts in implementing the plicy f garbage classificatin. S, I seized this pprtunity withut hesitatin. On that day, we will g t cmmunities t publicize the significance as well as methds f trash srting and direct the residents t accurately distinguish different kinds f rubbish, which will take a whle day. Cnsidering that, I’m afraid I can’t keep my wrd. Shall we put it ff till next Sunday?
I am srry fr any incnvenience caused and hpe yu can accept my heartfelt aplgy.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是道歉信。因参加学校组织的志愿者活动,而不能与好朋友Andrew周末一起去图书馆,要求考生为些给Andrew写一封道歉信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
计划:plan→schedule
表达:express→cvey
真诚地:heartfelt→sincere
希望:hpe→expect
2.句式拓展
句式升级
原句:I have signed up fr a vluntary activity themed “Trash Srting, All Invlved” and wn’t be able t accmpany yu t the library this weekend as planned.
拓展句:I have signed up fr a vluntary activity which is themed “Trash Srting, All Invlved” and wn’t be able t accmpany yu t the library this weekend as planned.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I am srry fr any incnvenience caused and hpe yu can accept my heartfelt aplgy.(运用了过去分词作后置定语和省略连词的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]On that day, we will g t cmmunities t publicize the significance as well as methds f trash srting and direct the residents t accurately distinguish different kinds f rubbish, which will take a whle day.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
1. 道歉信中开头段常用句式和套话
I am writing this letter t express my regret…
我写这封信是想表达我的遗憾……
I am writing t aplgize fr…
我写信是为……道歉。
I wuld like t give yu my aplgy fr…
我想……向你道歉。
I am very srry t say that…
我很抱歉……
I must aplgize abut (nt) ding sth…
对于做了/没做……,我必须道歉。
Please accept my sincere aplgy fr…
请接受我对于^的真诚道歉。
I am writing t say srry fr…
我写信是想对……说抱歉。
I am terribly srry, but…
我很抱歉,但是……
2.中间段:陈述理由+补救措施
陈述理由:
理由:I shuld have been able t attend yur lecture, but due t the fact that smething urgent happened, I'll have t take the place f my mther t pick my aunt up at the airprt, whse flight happens t arrive n Saturday night. And it's the first time that my aunt has returned t my hmetwn since she studied abrad several years ag. S I have n chice/ptin but t cancel the appintment with yu.
我本应该参加你的讲座,但由于发生了紧急的事情,我要代替母亲到机场接我阿姨,她的航班在周六晚抵达,这是阿姨自从几年前去留学第一次回国。我别无选择只好取消和你的约会。
补救措施:
1.I want yu t knw hw bad we feel abut it and t assure yu that it will happen again.
我想让你知道我们有多难过,我向你保证这不会再发生了。
2.I hpe that this des nt cause yu t much incnvenience.
我希望这不会给你带来太多的不便。
3.It wuld be very kind( cnsiderate)f yu t give me anther chance t d sth. I prmise it will never happen again.
你太好了,再给我一次机会做某事。我保证不会再发生这种事情。
4.If it is cnvenient fr yu, let's have anther appintment t d sth.
如果方便的话,我们再约去做某事。
5.Wuld yu mind if I change the appintment time?
你会介意我改变约会的时间吗?
6.By the way, can we have dinner tgether sme time next week?
顺便说一下,我们在下周的某个时间一起吃晚饭好吗?
7.ls it pssible that I make up fr the lss by ding sth.?
可能让我做某事来弥补损失吗?
3.道歉信中结尾段常用句式和套话
Once again, I am srry fr any incnvenience caused.
我对于所造成的任何不便再次道歉。
Please allw me t say srry again.
请允许我再一次说抱歉。
Hpe yu can accept my aplgies and understand my situatin.
希望你们能够接受我的道歉,理解我的处境。
I sincerely hpe that yu will be able t think in my psitin and accept my aplgies.
我真诚的希望你能够站在我的位置想一想,并且接受我的道歉。
I want t let yu knw hw regretful I am feeling nw.
我想让你知道我现在感觉多么的遗憾。
I am srry that I can’t… but trust that yu will be able t understand.
很抱歉我不能……,但我相信,你会理解的。
模板①
Dear ________(对象),
I am truly srry that ___________________________________(道歉的原因).
The reasn is that ______________________________________(介绍原因).
Once again, I am srry fr any incnvenience caused. Hpe yu can accept my applgies and understand my situatin.
Yurs Sincerely,
Li Ming
模板②
Dear ________,
I am excessively srry t say/tell yu that ①______________ (直接表达自己不能实现先前的愿望或约定). ②Nw, I am writing yu this letter f aplgy t shw my deep regret__________ (表达歉意). ③Please accept my sincere aplgy__________(诚恳希望对方能接受道歉). ④I fear yu are displeased at _________(表达出自己的心情,并请求对方原谅).⑤I hpe yu will understand me and excuse me fr__________(过渡句). ⑥Let me explain(开始介绍道歉的原因). ⑦The reasn fr my delay/absence was that _________(阐述自己当时的处境和情况). ⑧I had n way ut because ___________ (总结自己道歉的原因). ⑨Therefre it’s nt in my pwer t ___________(希望下次再次实现愿望). ⑩Naturally, I want t suggest ____________. I shall be glad if yu will kindly write and tell me when and where yu____________(约定下次约会的时间和地点)
We may meet again and I hpe t see yu sn.
Sincerely Yurs, Li Hua
道歉信的优化策略
日常生活中难免会出现一些差错,如失约、损坏东西等。遇到这种情形,应及时写信致歉,以消除不必要的误解,维系正常的关系。道歉信除应及时写之外,还必须写得诚恳,歉意应发自内心,决不可敷衍塞责。再则,事情的原委要解释清楚,措辞应当委婉。
写好道歉信的关键在于措辞要朴实、委婉,语气要诚恳、真挚,解释要详细明了。例如"I’m excessively srry"、"sincere aplgy"、"deep regret"等都是致歉之词,这就恰如其分地表达了写信人的真诚歉意。
道歉信通常包括三部分内容:
1.表示歉意,道歉的原由;
2.出现差错的原因,提出弥补措施;
3.请求原谅。语言要诚挚,解释的理由要真实。
4.补充说明。客套话。
好的道歉信不仅会取得对方的谅解,还会增进彼此的感情。
假如你是李华。你和外教Christina原定于本周六上午一起参加"中国传统文化日"活动。但因故你不能履约,请根据下面的写作提示,用英语给她发一封电子邮件。内容包括:
1.告诉她不能履约;
2.解释爽约的原因;
3.希望她谅解。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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1.假定你是李华,你的朋友Sarah曾邀请你参加她下个星期四的生日晚会,可是弟弟生病了,需要人照看,不能去参加。请根据以下要点给他写一封道歉信。
1.表达歉意;
2.解释原因;
3.提出弥补的办法。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sarah,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
2. 假设你是中学生李华,上周星期三由于个人原因未能参加学校外教Claire 的英语口语课考试,请你用英语写一篇道歉信,主要内容包括:
(1) 表示歉意并说明原因;
(2) 希望获得原谅和补考的机会。
注意:(1) 词数100左右;(2) 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:补考(make-up test)
Dear Claire,
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Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
3. 假设你是李华,你的美国笔友David来信向你求助。他最近在和妈妈闹矛盾,因为妈妈不让他过多上网,他对此很不理解。请你给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1. 建议向妈妈道歉;
2. 说明过多上网的危害;
3. 列举一些健康的休闲方式。
注意:1.文中不得出现真实的人名或地名;
2.语言通顺,条理清楚,书写规范;
3.要点齐全,内容可适当发挥;
4.词数:100字左右。
Dear David,
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
4. 假定你是李华,因故不能参加外教Mr.Green明天晚上开设的关于“中美文化差异”的讲座,请给他写一封信表示道歉,内容包括:
1.表达道歉;2.解释原因;3.询问是否愿意提供相关资料。
注意:1.词数80词左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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5. 假如你是交流生Jim,收到李华邀请你去听二胡音乐会的来信,你非常高兴,但是你因故不能同去。请你用英文给他写封道歉信,信中要点包括:
1.表示歉意;
2.说明原因;
3.另约时间。
注意:
1.词数100字左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Li Hua,
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Yurs,
Jim
参考答案
1.【答案】
Dear Sarah,
I’m indeed very srry that I wn’t attend t yur birthday party as I was planned befre.
As fr the sudden change, I have t admit it has an unavidable reasn. My little brther are being sick fr days. S it is necessary fr him t be cared. I am respnsible fr lking after him while my parents are wrking. Therefre, I have t stay t accmpany him that day. I hpe yu can understand my situatin and frgive my absence.
Is it pssible fr yu and me t have a private meeting at this weekend? I d lng fr a pleasant chat with yu and give the present t yu.
It is much t my regret that I miss the chance f such a happy get-tghther. Once again, please accept my aplgy.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生向朋友Sarah写一封道歉信。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
出席,参加:attend → take part in
承认:admit → cncede
原因:reasn → cause
必需的:necessary → essential
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I d lng fr a pleasant chat with yu and give the present t yu.
拓展句:I d lng fr a pleasant chat with yu and give the present t yu, which stands fr my best wish t yu.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
As fr the sudden change, I have t admit it has an unavidable reasn. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】
It is much t my regret that I miss the chance f such a happy get-tghther.(运用了it作形式主语)
2. 【答案】
Dear Taralah,
I’m terribly srry I culdn’t reply t yur email which yu sent me a week ag immediately , because I was s ccupied with the final exams.
As fr the cming winter hliday, l will first d a part-time jb in a fast-fd restaurant. Nt nly will I earn sme mney but I will als gain sme scial experience thrugh it. During the Spring Festival, I will visit my relatives with my parents and travel with my friends in the nearby scenic spts. This way, I can relax myself and appreciate the scenery f my hme city.
Hw abut yur plan? I sincerely invite yu t cme t Tianjin fr the New Year.
Yurs,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给泰国朋友Taralah写一封邮件,说明未及时回信的原因并介绍自己寒假里的打算以及邀请他来津过年。
【详解】1.词汇积累
非常:terribly→extremely
因为:because→since
附近的:nearby→surrunding
欣赏:appreciate→admire
2.句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句:During the Spring Festival, I will visit my relatives with my parents and travel with my friends in the nearby scenic spts.
拓展句: During the Spring Festival l will visit my relatives with my parents, after which I will travel with my friends in the nearby scenic spts.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I’m terribly srry I culdn’t reply t yur email which yu sent me a week ag immediately, because I was s ccupied with the final exams.(运用了which引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2]Nt nly will earn sme mney but I will als gain sme scial experience thrugh it.(运用了nt nly als...的并列结构)
3. 【答案】
Dear David,
I’m very srry t hear that a cnflict ccurred between yu and yur mther because f yur Internet addictin.
In my pinin, yu shuld aplgize t yur mther, as she has dne nthing wrng t prevent yu frm Internet addictin.Althugh the Internet plays an imprtant rle in mdern life, we can't ignre its harm t us.Many students spend mst f their time playing cmputer games r chatting aimlessly with thers, which may nt nly result in pr health and decline in study but als lss f cmmunicatin in the real wrld.
As students, we shuld devte ur energy t study. When available, yu may as well walk utside with yur friends r take sme exercise t keep fit instead f playing nline games. Only in this way can yu live and study happily and healthily.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给最近在和妈妈闹矛盾美国笔友David写一封回信,他很不理解他妈妈不让他过多上网。
【详解】1.词汇积累
冲突:cnflict→clash
而不是:rather than→instead f
在……中起重要作用:play an imprtant rle in→play an imprtant part in
导致:result in→lead t
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句:
In my pinin, yu shuld aplgize t yur mther, as she has dne nthing wrng t prevent yu frm Internet addictin.
拓展句:
In my pinin, yu shuld aplgize t yur mther, because she has dne nthing wrng t prevent yu frm Internet addictin.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
Many students spend mst f their time playing cmputer games r chatting aimlessly with thers, which may nt nly result in pr health and decline in study but als lss f cmmunicatin in the real wrld.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】
Only in this way can yu live and study happily and healthily. (运用了nly位于句首的倒装句)
4. 【答案】
Dear Mr. Green,
I’m Li Hua, ne f yur students. I’m writing t aplgize t yu fr failing t attend yur lecture this Friday evening, which is abut the difference between Chinese and English.
Because f a high fever catching me yesterday, I have been in hspital fr a timely treatment, which unfrtunately prevented me frm all schl activities. In fact, I have strng interest in what yu will share with us in the lecture. Therefre, it wuld be appreciated if yu culd prvide me with sme relevant materials.
I wuld deeply aplgize again and wish yur lecture a success.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外教Mr.Green写封道歉信,对不能参加讲座表示歉意。
【详解】1.词汇积累
道歉:say srry→aplgize
阻止:stp→prevent
感激:be grateful→appreciate
提供:ffer→prvide
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I wuld deeply aplgize again and wish yur lecture a success.
拓展句:I wuld deeply aplgize again fr what I did and sincerely wish yur lecture a success.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m writing t aplgize t yu fr failing t attend yur lecture this Friday evening, which is abut the difference between Chinese and English.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]In fact, I have strng interest in what yu will share with us in the lecture.(what引导的宾语从句)
5.【答案】
Dear Li Hua,
I'm pleased t receive yur invitatin t attend the Erhu cncert, fr I'm really fnd f Chinese traditinal music, especially played n the Erhu. T my regret, I can't g with yu. I have t express my aplgy t yu.
This Saturday evening,I have made an appintment with my Chinese teacher. As yu knw, I have sme difficulty with written Chinese. He prmised t cmmunicate with me, giving sme instructins n hw t learn it well. S I'm really srry fr that. Nevertheless, I hear there's anther similar Erhu perfrmance n Sunday. If it's cnvenient fr yu, can we make it n Sunday afternn?
I believe we' ll have anther chance. Have a nice day!
Yurs,
Jim
【分析】这是一篇应用文。假如考生是交流生Jim,收到李华邀请你去听二胡音乐会的来信,你非常高兴,但是你因故不能同去。请你用英文给他写封道歉信。
【详解】1.词汇积累(
高兴的:pleased→glad
说出席,参加:attend→take part in
在……上有困难:have sme difficulty with→have sme truble with
向某人道歉:express my aplgy t→aplgize t
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:He prmised t cmmunicate with me, giving sme instructins n hw t learn it well.
拓展句:He prmised t cmmunicate with me, giving sme instructins n hw we culd learn it well.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As yu knw, I have sme difficulty with written Chinese. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] He prmised t cmmunicate with me, giving sme instructins n hw t learn it well. (运用了现在分词作伴随状语)
【必背范文】
Dear Christina,
I am Li Hua. I’m writing t aplgize t yu fr nt being able t participate in the "Chinese Traditinal Culture Day" activity t be held n the Saturday mrning with yu as we planned last week.
T be hnest, I wish I culd jin in the activity, but I am afraid I will nt be available because I was infrmed yesterday that I wuld have t g t Beijing fr a cntest n the mrning f Saturday. That is why I can’t g with yu. I am awfully srry fr breaking my prmise and I aplgize fr any incnvenience it brings t yu. I hpe yu can understand me.
Wish yu a gd time there.
Yurs,
Li Hua
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