高考英语一轮复习应用文写作必备微技能--感谢信(句式+模板+精练)

这是一份高考英语一轮复习应用文写作必备微技能--感谢信(句式+模板+精练)，共16页。试卷主要包含了 表示感谢；， 外教的帮助；， 活动的反响等内容，欢迎下载使用。

（2023年湖南省部分名校联盟高三联考试题）假定你是学生会主席李华，学生会举办的首届生活技能云端展示活动(Wrk Creates a Better Life)得到了外教Patrick的大力支持。活动已经圆满结束，请你给他写一封感谢信。内容包括：
1. 表示感谢；
2. 外教的帮助；
3. 活动的反响。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Patrick,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Patrick,
I am writing t express my sincere gratitude fr yur kind help in the Wrk Creates a Better Life, which has turned ut t be an amazing success.
It is s nice f yu t have ffered us a variety f presentatin skills and creative suggestins n ur shw. It was under yur prfessinal guidance that the participants shwed their skills f cking, gardening, etc. Their impressive perfrmances definitely fueled their passin fr daily life skills. Mst imprtantly, this activity helped students receive wide admiratin and gain their tremendus cnfidence.
Many thanks fr yur time and supprt.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封感谢信，感谢外教Patrick对学生会举办的首届生活技能云端展示活动的大力支持。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
衷心的：sincere→heartfelt
感激：gratitude→appreciatin
惊人的：amazing→fascinating
提供：ffer→prvide
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Their impressive perfrmances definitely fueled their passin fr daily life skills.
拓展句：Their perfrmances which impressed prple definitely fueled their passin fr daily life skills.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I am writing t express my sincere gratitude fr yur kind help in the Wrk Creates a Better Life, which has turned ut t be an amazing success.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]It was under yur prfessinal guidance that the participants shwed their skills f cking, gardening, etc.(it 强调句型)
首段：表达真挚谢意
1. Thank yu s much fr yur generus help.
非常感谢您慷慨的帮助。
2.1 am sincerely grateful t yu fr yur timely help.
我真诚地感谢你及时的帮助。
3.1t was s kind f yu t treat me as yur wn sister.
谢谢你把我当作自己的妹妹。
4.1 am s grateful t yu fr what yu have dne fr me.
我很感谢你为我所做的一切。
5.1 wuld like t cnvey my thanks t yu fr yur kind help.
我想感谢你的帮助。
6. I’m writing t thank yu fr the few wnderful days in Lndn.
我写信感谢你帮我在伦敦度过的快乐日子。
7.1 am writing t express/shw/cnvey my sincere thanks t yu fr yur help.
我写信真诚地感谢你的帮助。
8. Fr this reasn, I am writing this letter t express my sincere thanks t yu.
为此，我写这封信是为了表达我对你真诚的感谢。
中间段：解释感谢的原因或对方的帮助给自己带来的好处
1.Thanks t yur help, I have made rapid prgress in my English.
多亏了你的帮助，我的英语有了飞速的进步。
2. Withut/But fr yur help(lf it were nt fr yur help) ,I wuld nt have made s much prgress in my English.
要是没有你的帮助，我的英语不会取得如此大的进步。
3.1 extend yu again a thusand thanks fr the great favr.
我太感谢你的帮助了。
结尾段：再次感谢
1.Thanks again fr helping me.
再次感谢你对我的帮助。
2.Thank yu again fr yur generus help.
再次感谢你的慷慨帮助。
3. 1 wuld appreciate it if yu culd accept my sincere thanks.
如果你能接受我诚挚的感谢，我将不胜感激。
4. Yur kindness and help will always be remembered.
我将永远铭记你的善意和帮助。
5.1 deeply/greatly appreciate yur hspitality（款待）．
我深深感谢你们的盛情款待。
模板①
Dear ________(对象),
I am writing t extend my sincere gratitude fr________________________________(感谢的原因). If it had nt been fr yur assistance in________________________________(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I wuld have been________________________________(没有对方帮助会产生的后果).
Everyne agrees that it was yu wh ________________________________(给出细节). Again, I wuld like t express my sincere thanks t yu. Please accept my sincere thanks.
Yurs Sincerely,
Li Hua
模板②
Dear ______,
Hw abut yur life/ study/ wrk? I’m writing t express my thanks fr yur _____(感谢的原因). If it had nt been yur assistance in _____(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I wuld have been_____ (没有对方帮助时的后果).
During the ______, yu gave me generus help and cntinuus guidance by _____. First, yu _____.What’s mre, yu ______. There is still ne thing that I can’t frget. That is _______. (原因)
Thanks a lt fr yur kindness again. (再次致谢)
Give my best regards t ______. (祝愿)
Yurs sincerely
_______
感谢信是用于致谢他人的馈赠、款待、帮助、以及对慰问信和祝贺信的回复。信件不适宜过长，只需写明感谢他人的理由，信文要感情真挚，措辞得体。
感谢信一般分为三个部分：
第一段：表达感谢之情并说明原因；
第二段：细述并赞赏对方给与的帮助；
第三段：再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望。
感谢信的写作指导
1.有序组织要点
首先，应当友善地对对方的生活表示关心；其次，应明确陈述写信的目的,即致谢；然后，应肯定对方的帮助恰当好处；最后，应对对方给予的帮助再次表示感谢并表示良好的祝愿。
2.灵活把握时态
感谢信的正文中的时态灵活多变。通常，在提到对方曾经所给予的帮助时，应用过去时态；在提到对方的帮助所产生的实际效果时，可以使用现在完成时态；在涉及到现状时，应用一般现在时；在表达祝愿或希望时，使用一般将来时态。
3.运用规范的语言
感谢信有其自身的特色语言，在行文的每一个环节也有一些常用句型。另外表示从对方的帮助中获益时，可以从多种句型表达，要让句式灵活多样，这样更能增强表达效果。
4.表达感激之情
感谢信的主要目的在于向对方致谢，因此语言要诚挚，友善；在信的开头和结尾部分一般会使用Thank yu very much fr yur kindness and deep cncern或 Thanks again and wish yu all the best之类的语言表达感激之情。
假如你是李华， 上周在英国参加了“中国学生文化交流周”活动，并住在 Kelly 家里。请你给在英国期间认识的新朋友 Kelly 写封感谢信，内容包括：
1.交流活动中的收获；
2.难忘在 Kelly 家的美好日子；
3.感谢她送你的英文词典。
注意：
1.词数 100 左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：文化交流周：Cultural Exchange Week
Dear Kelly,
I’ve been back hme safely frm England._______________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
1.假定你是李华，在生日来临之际你收到了美国网友Nancy寄来的礼物。请你用英语给她回一封电子邮件，要点如下：
1. 礼物已收到；
2. 表示谢意；
3. 回赠礼物
注意：1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头与结尾已给，不计入总词数。
Dear Nancy,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
2. 假定你是李华，在购买笔记本电脑的过程中，你的外国留学生朋友Jhn给了你很多的建议和帮助，请你给他写封 E-mail 表示感谢，内容包括：
1. 表示感谢；
2. 感谢的原因；
3. 请他去家里吃饭。
注意: 1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式作答。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
3. 假设你是李华，某国际学校校书画社主席，昨天下午外教Mr. Black应邀给书画社作题为“A Shrt Histry f Western Painting”的讲座。请你给外教写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1. 感谢对方作讲座；
2. 同学们的收获；
3. 希望有机会再次邀请。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Black,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
4. 假定你是学生会主席李华，学生会举办的英语演讲比赛（English Speech Cntest）得到了外教Pam的大力帮助。活动已圆满结束，请你给她写一封感谢信。内容包括：
1. 表达感谢；
2. 外教的帮助；
3. 同学的收获。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Pam,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
5. 毕业季也是感恩季，来自澳大利亚的Feinstein在她的网站上发起感谢信接力的活动。假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请写一封感谢信参加接力，内容包括：
1. 感谢的人或事物；
2. 感谢的原因；
3. 你的美好愿望。
注意：1.词数100左右 字。 2.不得透露个人信息及感谢人信息
Dear ___________,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
参考答案
1.【答案】
Dear Nancy,
I am s happy t receive yur gift. Thank yu s much fr such a great camera with which I can take many interesting phts t recrd my clrful life.
I knw yu are interested in Chinese culture, s I have chsen a cllectin f traditinal Chinese music recrds fr yu. Nw yu can enjy a lt f famus music played by different unique instruments f China such as the pipa, erhu and guzheng.
Thank yu again and I hpe yu will cme t China and experience wnderful traditinal Chinese music in persn with me.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是应用文。假定你是李华，在生日来临之际你收到了美国网友Nancy寄来的礼物。请你用英语给她回一封电子邮件，要点如下：1. 礼物已收到；2. 表示谢意；3. 回赠礼物。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：happy→pleased
对……感兴趣：be interested in→have an interest in
选择：chse→select
亲自：in persn→persnally
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Nw yu can enjy a lt f famus music played by different unique instruments f China such as the pipa, erhu and guzheng.
拓展句：Nw yu can enjy a lt f famus music which is played by different unique instruments f China such as the pipa, erhu and guzheng.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Thank yu s much fr such a great camera with which I can take many interesting phts t recrd my clrful life.(运用了介词+which引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Thank yu again and I hpe yu will cme t China and experience wnderful traditinal Chinese music in persn with me.(运用了省略that引导的宾语从句)
2.【答案】
Hi Jhn,
I wanted t take a mment t express my heartfelt gratitude fr all the help and advice yu prvided during my laptp purchase prcess.
Yur guidance was immensely valuable and played a significant rle in helping me make an infrmed decisin. Yur knwledge and expertise in electrnics truly impressed me, and I am extremely grateful fr the time and effrt yu put int assisting me.
T shw my appreciatin, I wuld like t invite yu t my huse fr a meal. It wuld be an excellent pprtunity fr us t catch up, enjy gd fd, and further strengthen ur friendship.
Once again, thank yu s much fr yur invaluable supprt. I’m truly frtunate t have a friend like yu!
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生给外国留学生朋友Jhn写封 E-mail， 感谢他在购买笔记本电脑的过程中给以建议和帮助。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
表达：express→shw
明智的：infrmed→wise
感激：grateful→appreciative
加强：strengthen→prmte
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Yur guidance was immensely valuable and played a significant rle in helping me make an infrmed decisin.
拓展句：Yur guidance played a significant rle in helping me make an infrmed decisin, which was immensely valuable.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I wanted t take a mment t express my heartfelt gratitude fr all the help and advice yu prvided during my laptp purchase prcess.(运用省略that的定语从句)
[高分句型2] Yur knwledge and expertise in electrnics truly impressed me, and I am extremely grateful fr the time and effrt yu put int assisting me.(省略that的定语从句)
3. 【答案】
Dear Mr. Black,
First f all, I wuld like t thank yu fr yur lecture entitled “A Shrt Histry f Western Painting”.
The lecture was very infrmative, thrugh which the students have a deeper understanding f the histry f Western painting. The students’ interest and enthusiasm fr western painting have been greatly imprved, and sme students even make up their minds t g abrad t learn Western painting.
All the students hpe that we can invite yu t give us mre lectures.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Mr. Black写封感谢信，感谢对方作讲座，描述同学们的收获，表示希望有机会再次邀请。
【详解】1.词汇积累
热情：enthusiasm→passin
提高：imprve→enhance
首先：first f all→in the first place
决定做某事：make up ne’s mind t d→be determined t d
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：First f all, I wuld like t thank yu fr yur lecture entitled “A Shrt Histry f Western Painting”.
拓展句：First f all, I wuld like t thank yu fr yur lecture which was entitled “A Shrt Histry f Western Painting”.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The lecture was very infrmative, thrugh which the students have a deeper understanding f the histry f Western painting. (运用了“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] All the students hpe that we can invite yu t give us mre lectures. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
4. 【答案】
Dear Pam,
I am writing this letter t express my heartfelt gratitude fr yur invaluable supprt and guidance during the English speech cntest. Yur unwavering cmmitment and encuragement have helped us achieve a lt in the cmpetitin.
Yu have invested s much time and effrt in preparing us fr the cntest that we all have learned a lt mre abut English speech. Yur excellent teaching skills, patience, and dedicatin have been instrumental in imprving ur English language skills. What’s mre, yur cnstructive feedback and suggestins have helped us refine ur prnunciatin, style and presentatin, which were crucial in delivering an impressive speech.
We all feel blessed t have had such a precius pprtunity t learn frm yu. Yur cntributin has greatly enriched ur English learning experience, and we will always cherish the memries f the time spent with yu.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生给外教写一封感谢信，对她在英语演讲比赛中的帮助表达感谢，回忆她提供的帮助，并分享同学们的收获。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
真诚的：heartfelt→genuine, sincere, unfeigned, earnest
宝贵的：invaluable→precius, priceless, inestimable
坚定的：unwavering→steady, unhesitating, tireless
投入：invest→spend, devte, cntribute
有助于：be instrumental in→be helpful in, be useful in
提高：imprve→sharpen, refine, better
此外：what’s mre→in additin, additinally, mrever, furthermre, besides
重要的：crucial→essential, crucial, significant, vital
好运的：blessed→favred, frtunate, lucky, privileged, blissful
珍爱：cherish→treasure, value highly
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I am writing this letter t express my heartfelt gratitude fr yur invaluable supprt and guidance during the English speech cntest. Yur unwavering cmmitment and encuragement have helped us achieve a lt in the cmpetitin.
拓展句：I am writing this letter t express my heartfelt gratitude fr yur invaluable supprt and guidance during the English speech cntest because yur unwavering cmmitment and encuragement have helped us achieve a lt in the cmpetitin.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Yu have invested s much time and effrt in preparing us fr the cntest that we all have learned a lt mre abut English speech.（运用了s… that…引导的结果状语从句）
【高分句型2】What’s mre, yur cnstructive feedback and suggestins have helped us refine ur prnunciatin, style and presentatin, which were crucial in delivering an impressive speech.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
5. 【答案】
Dear Samantha,
I am writing t yu t let yu knw hw lucky I am t have yu as a teacher. Frm day ne, I enjyed each and every class f yurs. Yu culd always make yur lessns infrmative, educatinal and enjyable all at the same time. Every day I lked frward t yur class, which was a surprise frm a student wh hated and dreaded English. It was yu wh awakened my interest in English and restred my cnfidence in myself. I enjyed everything yu taught us, frm the English language t American culture. The smell f the pancakes we made tgether in yur class is still clear in ur minds, and it simply makes my muth water.
Yu are a special teacher whm I will always remember with fnd memries. Yu are a great inspiratin t us all!
A big and warm “Thank yu!” frm yur belved student! May yu cntinue t inspire greatness in all f yur students!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生写一封感谢信参加来自澳大利亚的Feinstei在她的网站上发起感谢信接力的活动。
【解析】1.词汇积累
提供有用消息的；增长见闻的：infrmative→infrmatry
有教育意义的：educatinal→instructive
害怕：dread→fear/be afraid f
唤醒：awaken→aruse
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Yu culd always make yur lessns infrmative, educatinal and enjyable all at the same time.
拓展句：Nt nly culd yu always make yur lessns infrmative, educatinal but als enjyable all at the same time.
【亮点表达】【高分句型1】It was yu wh awakened my interest in English and restred my cnfidence in myself.(使用了强调句型)
【高分句型2】Yu are a special teacher whm I will always remember with fnd memries.(使用了whm引导的定语从句)
【范文】
Dear Kelly,
I’ve been back hme safely frm England. Thank yu fr the warm help during my stay in England.Last week, I participated in the Cultural Exchange Week fr Chinese students. I enjyed myself in yur cuntry. We visited the city museum and sme places f interest, which made me have a better understanding f the English sciety, culture and histry. Of curse, I als made many new friends.
What’s mre, I was lucky enugh t stay at yur hme. And I’ll never frget the days we spent tgether. Here I especially thank yu fr the dictinary yu ffered me as a gift. It’s a great help fr me t learn English well. I will treasure and make full use f it.
Welcme t China when it’s cnvenient fr yu!
Yurs sincerely
Li Hua