人教版 (2019)Unit 4 Natural disasters优秀学案

这是一份人教版 (2019)Unit 4 Natural disasters优秀学案，共9页。学案主要包含了常用句型，佳作展示，范文亮点等内容，欢迎下载使用。

如何写安慰信？
Dear___________,
I read frm tday’s newspaper abut recent_________and I am writing t extend my deepest regret.
It brke my heart t__________. I culd nt believe my eyes when_________, and I am really wrried abut yu and yur_________I am crssing my fingers fr yu nw in hpe that________.
I can imagine hw difficult it must be fr yu , and I want t let yu knw that yu have my full supprt. We are dnating mney and necessities t______. Please let me knw if I can help yu with anything else.
I feel extremely srry fr the tragedy,and I am cnvinced that yu will vercme the difficulty and embrace a better life.
Yurs,
Li Hua

【常用句型】
1. I was shcked at the news abut the earthquake in …
听闻……地震的消息我很震惊。
2. I just can’t tell yu hw srry I was t learn f yur accident.
我无法告知你当你听到你发生事故我是多么难过。
3. I hpe yu are getting sme relief frm the pain.
我真心希望能减轻你的痛苦。
4. We are hping fr yur quick return t health/early recvery/rapid recvery.
我们真心/祈祷你能很快完全康复。
5. Only we have the perseverance can we defeat the natural disaster.
我们只有不屈不挠才能战胜自然灾难。
6. Please extend ur deep sympathy t yur family.
请向你的家人转达我们最深切的同情。
7. If there is anything I can d t help yu, please let me knw.
如果需要我的帮助，请告知。
In rder t encurage the students t get clse t nature, ur schl rganized a muntain­climbing activity.
为了鼓励学生们亲近大自然，我们学校组织了一次登山活动。
They said it was such a beautiful day that they wuld remember it frever.
他们说这是多么美好的一天，他们会永远铭记。
What they did has brught jy t thers and enriched their wn lives.
他们所做的给他们带来快乐，而且丰富了他们自己的生活。
Apart frm knwledge, we als learned t cperate with each ther and came t realize the imprtance f teamwrk.
除了知识，我们也学会了和他人合作，也逐渐意识到合作的重要性。
【典例】
假定你是李华，最近获悉你的美国网友Peter家乡受到飓风(hurricane)侵袭，损失惨重。请你用英语给Peter写一封慰问信。信的内容包括：
1. 得知情况及感受；
2. 表达安慰和鼓励；
3. 打算提供的帮助。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.
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【佳作展示】
Dear Peter,
I’m awfully srry t hear that a hrrible and severe hurricane unexpectedly hit yur hmetwn and caused a great lss. Shcked t learn the terrible news, I feel upset abut yur suffering.
Thugh srrwful, yu have t be tugh t stand up t any bad cnditins. I think yu, as a strng-willed persn, can get thrugh this difficult perid. Yu will definitely gather all yur curage t face and handle the mess that the hurricane brught abut.
Thinking abut yur present situatin, I feel sincere pity fr yu, and I’ll be there fr yu whenever yu need any help! If necessary, I will call n my classmates t make a dnatin t yu t help yu g thrugh the difficultly.
Never give up hpe and be strng! Lnging fr gd news frm yu!
Yurs Sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封慰问信，表达对朋友的关心和帮助。
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：I’m awfully srry t hear that a hrrible and severe hurricane unexpectedly hit yur hmetwn and caused a great lss.这句话运用了宾语从句。Shcked t learn the terrible news, I feel upset abut yur suffering.和Thinking abut yur present situatin, I feel sincere pity fr yu,运用了非谓语动词作状语；Thugh srrwful, yu have t be tugh t stand up t any bad cnditins.和If necessary, I will call n my classmates t make a dnatin t yu t help yu g thrugh the difficultly.运用了状语从句的省略。使用了一些固定词组，如get thrugh, bring abut等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
话题：自然灾害
一、话题词汇
____________ n. 环境
pwerful adj. ____________
____________ vt.保护
____________ vt 防止
____________ v. 减少
damage n. ____________
7. destry vt ____________
8. ____________ vt 拯救
9. spil vt ____________
10.cnstruct vt ____________
11. beautify vt. ______
12. ____________ n.地震
13.typhn n. ____________
14. ____________ vt. 爆发
15.eruptin n. ____________
16.vlcan n. ____________
17.drught n. ____________
二、话题句子
1. A terrible ____________ hit/struck ... , killing ..
一个可怕的地震发生在….杀死了….
2. It was a cl autumn night when the ____________ happened. A large number f buildings ____________ and rads were ____________, leaving a great many peple hmeless.
地震发生在一个凉爽的秋夜。大量的建筑物倒塌，道路被毁,许多人无家可归。
3. With the help f the ____________team, peple wh were the trapped in the fld were saved.
在救援队的帮助下，困在洪水中的人们得救了。
4. Clearly/Obviusly/In my pinin/It seemed that peple were ____________.
显然/在我看来/似乎人们震惊了。
6.The whle city was ____________ after the earthquake. 地震后整个城市成了一片废墟。
7. Human activity is an indispensable factr causing ____________ disasters.
人类自身的活动是造成自然灾害的一个不可或缺的因素。
8. In the past hundred years, there have been frequent natural disasters, such as flds, ____________, earthquakes, and new deserts.
在过去的几百年里，自然灾难不断，例如洪水，干旱，地震和沙漠化。
9. The disasters have killed millins upn millins f peple, ____________ cuntless hmes, and ____________ numerus pieces f fertile land.
灾难杀死了无数人，损毁了很多房子，破坏了很多肥沃的土地。
10. Nw mre and mre peple becme aware that thse ____________ have much t d with what we have dne t the earth. 现在越来越多的人意识到了灾难在很大程度上与我们人类的行为有关。
三、话题写作
假定你是李华，最近获悉你的美国网友Peter家乡受到地震侵袭，损失惨重。请你用英语给Peter写一封慰问信。信的内容包括：
1. 得知情况及感受；
2. 表达安慰和鼓励；
3. 打算提供的帮助。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结语已为你写好，但不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
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Never give up hpe and be strng! Lnging fr gd news frm yu!
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
答案
一、话题词汇
Envirnment n. 环境
pwerful adj.强大的
prtect vt.保护
prevent vt 防止
decrease v. 减少
damage n. 损害
7. destry vt 毁灭
8. rescue vt 拯救
9. spil vt 破坏
10.cnstruct vt 建设
11. beautify vt. 美化
12.earthquake n.地震
13.typhn n.台风
14.erupt vt. 爆发
15.eruptin n.爆发
16.vlcan n.火山
17.drught n.干旱
二、话题句式
1. A terrible strm hit/struck ... , killing ..
一个可怕的地震发生在….杀死了….
2. It was a cl autumn night when the earthquake happened. A large number f buildings fell dwn and rads were destryed, leaving a great many peple hmeless.
地震发生在一个凉爽的秋夜。大量的建筑物倒塌，道路被毁,许多人无家可归。
3. With the help f the rescue team, peple wh were the trapped in the fld were saved.
在救援队的帮助下，困在洪水中的人们得救了。
4. Clearly/Obviusly/In my pinin/It seemed that peple were shcked. 显然/在我看来/似乎人们震惊了。
6.The whle city was in ruins after the earthquake. 地震后整个城市成了一片废墟。
7. Human activity is an indispensable factr causing natural disasters.
人类自身的活动是造成自然灾害的一个不可或缺的因素。
8. In the past hundred years, there have been frequent natural disasters, such as flds, drughts, earthquakes, and new deserts.
在过去的几百年里，自然灾难不断，例如洪水，干旱，地震和沙漠化。
9. The disasters have killed millins upn millins f peple, destryed cuntless hmes, and wiped ut numerus pieces f fertile land.
灾难杀死了无数人，损毁了很多房子，破坏了很多肥沃的土地。
10. Nw mre and mre peple becme aware that thse disasters have much t d with what we have dne t the earth. 现在越来越多的人意识到了灾难在很大程度上与我们人类的行为有关。
三、话题写作
Dear Peter,
I’m awfully srry t hear that a hrrible and severe earthquake unexpectedly hit yur hmetwn and caused a great lss. I am writing t express my deepest sympathy fr yu.
Yu must feel srrwful nw. Hwever, life isn’t s bad. As lng as yu remain ptimistic, yu will get thrugh this difficult perid. As a strng-willed man, yu will definitely gather all yur curage t face and handle the mess that the earthquake brught abut. If I can be f any help, please dn’t hesitate t let me knw. If necessary, I will call n my classmates t make a dnatin t yu t help yu g thrugh the difficultly.
Never give up hpe and be strng! Lnging fr gd news frm yu!
Yurs Sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】
这是一篇提纲式作文，要求同学们给美国遭遇地震的好友写一封慰问信。文章主要包括得知情况与感受，表达安慰与鼓励，打算提供的帮助三个部分。一方面朋友刚受到地震的伤害，同学们要注意语气与情感，另一方面在打算提供的帮助部分一定要写出具体的行动是什么不要泛泛而谈。
在行文过程中，要注意长短句结合，避免句式单一。将平时积累的短语和优秀的句型用到文章中来，使文章更加出彩。
【范文亮点】优秀词汇和短语：awfully非常地，糟糕地；As lng as 只要；hesitate 犹豫；If necessary如果必要。
优秀句式和行文脉络：
1.I’m awfully srry t hear that a hrrible and severe earthquake unexpectedly hit yur hmetwn and caused a great lss. I am writing t express my deepest sympathy fr yu.
这里用了I’m awfully srry t hear that ……和I am writing t ……交代了写信的原因和目的，引出正文。
2.文章运用 Hwever、As lng as、and 等词是行文更流畅，而且全文逻辑清晰，观点鲜明，最后还表明自己愿意给予帮助并期待来信。
（目前高考英语中慰问信还没有考过，以下是今年针对新冠肺炎的作文预测。）
第一篇 假定你是李华, 最近获悉你的笔友Peter的家乡武汉新冠病毒性肺炎爆发，处于焦虑中。请你根据以上信息给Peter写一封英文慰问信。要点如下：
1. 对其表示关心和同情。
2. 对其表示安慰并提供帮助。
3. 表达愿望和祝福。
参考词汇：流行病 epidemic 新型冠状病毒 nvel crnavirus
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
Hearing the news that the nvel crnavirus utbreak unexpectedly struck yur hmetwn and caused a great lss, I feel awfully srry and upset abut yur suffering.
Thugh srrwful and nervus, yu have t be tugh t stand up t any bad cnditins. Being a strng-willed persn, I believe yu can get thrugh this difficult perid. Yu will definitely gather all yur curage t face and handle the mess that the hurricane brught abut.
Is there anything I can d fr yu? Feel free t cntact me. If necessary, I will call n my classmates t make a dnatin t yu t help yu g thrugh the difficulty right away.
Never give up hpe and be strng! Lnging fr gd news frm yu!
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua