中考英语二轮复习之小题必刷+大题突破大题突破09 书面表达之话题作文（含解析）

这是一份中考英语二轮复习之小题必刷+大题突破大题突破09 书面表达之话题作文（含解析），共24页。

【大题突破】
(一)（2022·山东青岛·统考中考真题）
科技改变生活，发明无处不在，如cmputers，cars，smart phnes，e-bks，rbts，Internet…请结合自身经历，谈谈哪一项发明对你的影响最大以及它是如何改变你的生活的。
要求:
1. 词数80—100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息。
Technlgy changes ur life and inventins are arund us. In my daily life, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(二)（2022·江苏盐城·统考中考真题）
学校英语俱乐部将组织题为“One Thing I will D fr ________”的征文比赛。请根据提示，写一篇短文参赛，分享你将为朋友、家人、学校或社会做的一件事。
注意事项：
（1）补全题目，如“my friend, my parents, ur schl”等；
（2）文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
（3）词数：100左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（4）文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
One Thing I will D fr ________
I have made great prgress in the past three years. Nw I want t d ne thing fr__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（三）（2022·内蒙古通辽·统考中考真题）
最近你班召开了“学生是否应该上网”为主题的班会，同学们就此话题进行了热烈的讨论。
下表为讨论结果，请根据下表写一篇短文，表述讨论结果并阐述你的观点。
要求： 1. 语言通顺，逻辑清晰，字迹工整。
2. 必须包括表格中所给的提示信息，可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
4. 词数：不少于80词。
Whether Students Shuld Surf the Internet
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(四)（2022·四川内江·统考中考真题）
近年来中学生身体健康越来越受到重视。假定你是李华，你校英语校报正在开展主题为“我运动，我健康”的征文比赛。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，向校报投稿。
内容包括：
1.你的运动方式（两种）：
2.你对运动的看法：
(1)增强体质；(2)缓解压力；(3)……。
注意：
1.所写内容应包括以上要点，内容连贯，并进行合理拓展；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3.词数100左右。
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(五)（2022·辽宁朝阳·统考中考真题）
自从“双减”政策实施以来，我们学生有更多的空闲时间参与文娱、体育、艺术等方面的课外活动，这些活动为我们的生活增添了生机和活力。请以“After-schl Activities Make My Life Clrful”为题，写一篇英语短文来介绍你参与的课外活动。
内容：1. 介绍你所参与的1至2项关于文娱、体育或艺术方面的课外活动；
2.谈一谈课外活动给你带来的收获及感受。
要求：1.文中不得出现真实姓名校名或地名；
2.语言通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.词数在80词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
After- schl Activities Make My Life Clrful
Nwadays, we have mre free time t take part in after -schl activities._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(六)（2022·内蒙古赤峰·统考中考真题）
近年来中国发生了翻天覆地的变化，取得了很多世界瞩目的成就，例如航空航天技术的一步步突破、杂交水稻的成功培育、两届奥运会的成功举办……
某英文网站正在开展以“厉害了，我的国！” 为主题的征文活动。请你以“China makes me feel surprised”为题目，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文投稿。
要求：
1. 选择中国发展中一个让你感到惊讶的事件进行简单叙述，并写出你的感受；
2. 书写规范，要点齐全，条理清晰，可合理发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名、地名，否则不予赋分。
参考词汇：aerspace industry 航空航天工业；spaceship 宇宙飞船；develp hybrid rice 培育杂交水稻；Beijing 2008 Olympics 北京2008奥运会；Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics 北京2022冬奥会
China makes me feel surprised
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(七)（2022·黑龙江·统考中考真题）
转眼间，你已经是一名九年级学生了。你还记得刚升入初中时的自己是什么样子吗？这两年在你身上发生了哪些变化？请以“My changes”为题写一篇英语作文，请你根据下面的要求完成这篇作文。
要求:
1. 写你三个方面的变化，用上used t结构；
2. 紧扣作文题目、语言表达准确、语意通顺连贯；
3. 词数90词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
My changes
I’m in Grade 9 and I have changed a lt. First, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(八)（2022·新疆·统考中考真题）
初中生活即将结束，静坐在考场中的你，回想三年的学习和生活，一定有许多事情给你留下美好的记忆，请选择一件你最难忘的事情写一篇短文。
例如：1.一次难忘的旅行2.一次难忘的比赛3.一次难忘的志愿服务……
要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，内容详实，语法正确，书写规范；
2.文中不得出现真实人名、校名：
3.词数：80-120，开头已给出，开头及标点符号不计入总词数。
Lking back at these past three years, I had a lt f sweet memries…
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(九)（2023·河南郑州·河南省实验中学校考二模）
为一名中学生，除了周末，你每天会在学校度过你大部分时光。因此，校园生活对于你的成长尤为重要。为了解目前学生对校园生活的看法，《英语论坛》现邀请你针对“Are yu happy with yur schl life?”这个问题发表意见。如果回答是，你的理由是什么？如果回答不是，你理想的校园生活该是什么样的？请围绕该问题写一篇100词左右的文章。文中不要出现真实的校名和姓名。
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(十)（2023·河南信阳·统考一模）
我们总是在意错过太多，却不注意自己拥有多少。同学们，在你们的生活中一定有什么让你们觉得拥有它/他很幸福。请以“I am happy with what I have”为题，并根据以下要点和要求，写一篇短文。
要点：
1.你拥有的是什么？
2.为什么觉得拥有他/它让你感到幸福？
3.这对你的人生有什么启示？
要求
1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2.词数100左右。
I am happy with what I have
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(十一)（2023·上海奉贤·统考一模）
Write at least 60 wrds accrding t the given situatin（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
The Magic Pwer f______
生活中总有一些不经意的小举动，在我们/他们失落、失望的时候，带给我们/他们出乎意料的力量和感动，一抹浅浅的微笑、一个暖暖的拥抱、一封短短的邮件……请分享一个你经历过的带有神奇魔力的举动。
注意：1）写作中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2）照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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(十二)（2023·山西·校联考一模）
刚刚过去的一年给我们留下了难以磨灭的记忆，大到冬奥会成功举办、中国空间站顺利建成；小到居家学习、与好友重逢……总有一些瞬间值得记忆，它们能够触动人心，使人备受鼓舞，倍感温暖。
某英语报社开展了以“The Mst Unfrgettable Mment”为主题的征文比赛，请你写一篇英语短文，分享你最难忘的瞬间。
内容包括：
·the mst unfrgettable mment fr yu
·what yu have learned frm it
要求：
1. 词数不少于80词；2. 参考词汇仅供参考；3. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
Wrd Bank
inspire v. 鼓舞 the Winter Olympics 冬奥会
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(十三)（2022·云南曲靖·统考一模）
The First Time I ________
提示：人生中有很多第一次，如第一次学游泳，第一次跟家人外出旅行，第一次做家务，第一次赢得比赛等，一定有一次让你记忆深刻。请以“The First Time I________”为题，用英语写一篇短文说说你的某个第一次经历及感受。
要求：1.补充题目，用英语写一篇不少于60词的短文；
2.要点全面，语言流畅，内容连贯，书写规范，卷面整洁；
3.文中不能使用你的真实姓名和校名，否则以零分计；
4.短文必须写在答题卡上，如在试题卷上作答，一律不得分。
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(十四)（2022·重庆九龙坡·重庆市育才中学校考模拟预测）
“世上无难事， 只怕有心人”。我们在学习或生活中都会遇到一些困难或挫折， 但是只要怀有积极的心态去面对它们， 就一定能够守得云开见月明。某英语报正在开展以“Hw t face the difficulty”为题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿， 描述你曾经遇遭遇的一次挫折， 谈谈你是如何度过难关的， 并分享你的收获。
要求:
1. 80-120词；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息:
1. 描述你曾经遇到过的一次挫折
2. 谈谈你是如何度过难关的
3. 分享这次挫折带给你的收获
4. ……
Everyne is bund t face difficulties
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(十五)（2023·上海虹口·统考一模）
Write at least 60 wrds accrding t the given situatin（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
下列是学校征集的模范学生的其中四条标准，你最认同哪一条？为什么？请举例说明。
注意：1. 文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
3. 请选择一条填在横线上作为标题。
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____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________1. What will yu d?
2. Hw will yu d it?
3. Why d yu chse t d it?
…
Opinins
Reasns
68%赞成
1. 可以从网上得到各种信息并且有利于学习。2. 可以网上购物、聊天、交朋友……
32%反对
1. 网上的信息并非都是真实的。2. 学生们沉迷于网络游戏……
你的观点
……
参考答案：
1． Technlgy changes ur life and inventins are arund us. In my daily life, the cmputer has becme an imprtant part . And it changed me a lt. With the help f the cmputer, I can search fr sme useful infrmatin and read different kinds f bks. By receiving and sending emails, I can cmmunicate with my friends freely. If I have sme prblems with my study, I can discuss them with my classmates n the Internet. If I feel stressed frm time t time, I can listen t music nline t relax myself. I can als buy all kinds f things nline.
But if I meet sme difficult prblems in my hmewrk, I ften lk fr answers n the Internet. This makes me lazy and t much cmputer wrk is bad fr my eyes. S I think everyne shuld use the cmputer wisely.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文。
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：从题干所给的科技中选择一种，谈谈这个发明对自己的影响以及是如何改变自己的生活的。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，是哪一个发明改变了自己；
第二步，介绍这项发明是如何改变自己的生活的；
第三步，介绍自己的感受总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①with the help f在……的帮助下
②search fr寻找
③frm time t time不时
[高分句型]
①If I have sme prblems with my study, I can discuss them with my classmates n the Internet.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②S I think everyne shuld use the cmputer wisely.（省略that的宾语从句）
2．例文：
One Thing I will D fr My Parents
I have made great prgress in the past three years. Nw I want t d ne thing fr my parents.
I want t make a breakfast fr my parents. I’m ging t the supermarket n Saturday afternn t buy what I need fr breakfast. Then, the next mrning I will get up early s as nt t wake my parents. I will make my mther’s favrite sandwiches and cffee. My father likes t eat tmat beef ndles fr breakfast, I will learn hw t ck n my phne. Make sure they can have a delicius breakfast after getting up.
I have had this idea in my heart fr many years, but I never get the chance t d it. In the past few years, my parents always gt up early t prepare breakfast fr me. It is their lve and supprt that make me better, s I want t return them with the same lve. I lve them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：根据情景综合运用各种时态，注意主谓保持一致性；
③提示：文章写作要点已给出，注意将作文标题补充完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先介绍自己想为谁做一件事；
第二步，具体阐述自己想做什么事，以及怎样做这件事；
第三步，阐述自己为什么想做这件事。
[亮点词汇]
①want t d sth.想要做某事
②get up起床
③make sure确保
④prepare sth. fr sb.为某人准备某物
[高分句型]
①I’m ging t the supermarket n Saturday afternn t buy what I need fr breakfast. （what引导的宾语从句）
②It is their lve and supprt that make me better（It is+被强调部分+that+其他）
3．例文：
Whether Students Shuld Surf the Internet
Recently, we held a discussin abut whether students shuld surf the Internet. 68% f the students said that students can surf the Internet. First, we can get all kinds f infrmatin frm the Internet and it is gd fr ur study. Secndly, we can shp, chat and make friends nline.
Hwever, 32 percent f the students are against surfing the Internet. On ne hand, they think nt all the infrmatin n the Internet is true. On the ther hand, students may be addicted t nline games.
In my pinin, we shuld make use f the Internet t study well and get rid f the disadvantages f the Internet.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，要求就表格内容写一篇关于“学生是否应该上网”的文章。要点包括：讨论结果、赞成和反对两方的原因以及个人观点。
2.写作指导：文章应以第一、三人称，一般现在时为主，注意主谓一致问题；写作时注意按照要点分段叙述，第一段点题并介绍赞成方观点；第二段介绍反对方的观点；最后一段介绍个人观点。在写作时还要注意使用连接词来增强文章条理性。
4．例文
As students, we can d different kinds f sprts after class. As fr me, I think highly f jgging because it’s gd fr health. I ften jg in the playgrund fr half an hur. Anther sprts that I like is playing ftball. I ften play it with my friends after schl. It is very interesting.
There is n dubt that ding sprts is helpful t us. We can nt nly build up ur bdy and keep us healthy and strng. What’s mre, when we feel stressed, we can d sme sprts t relax urselves. The mst imprtant is that we can make friends when we d sprts. I met my best friend when I nce played ftball in the playgrund.
Let’s d mre sprts. In this way, we can be healthy and happy every day.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要是根据题干中的提示要点介绍自己的运动方式以及对运动的看法，可适当增加细节。
2.写作要点：本文以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段主要介绍自己的运动方式；第二段讲述对运动的看法；第三段号召大家多运动。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
5． After-schl Activities Make My Life Clrful
Nwadays, we have mre free time t take part in after -schl activities. There are many different kinds f activities, fr example, arts and sprts. I jined a vlleyball club last year. I am used t playing vlleyball after schl. In the vlleyball club, I’ve made lts f friends. We ften play vlleyball after schl. Whether it is ht r cld, we never stp playing it. I feel happy while playing vlleyball. And it is als a gd way t relax myself. I think I will cntinue t play vlleyball after schl in the future.
All in all, after-schl activities make my life mre clrful and meaningful.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。以“After-schl Activities Make My Life Clrful”为题，写一篇作文来介绍你参与的课外活动。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主；人称以第一人称为主。写作时需介绍你所参与的1至2项关于文娱、体育或艺术方面的课外活动，同时还需要谈论课外活动给你带来的收获及感受，同时注意写作过程不要出现单词拼写和语法错误，保证语句通顺，逻辑清晰。
6．例文
China makes me feel surprised
In recent years, great changes have taken place in China and many achievements have attracted the attentin f the wrld. Fr example, tw Olympic Games were held successfully. It really surprised me. China successfully hsted the 2008 Summer Olympic Games and nce again intrduced China t the wrld. China has develped rapidly since then. The Winter Olympic Games were successfully held this year. And many Chinese athletes wn gld medals. As a Chinese, I am very prud. Als I feel excited fr the strength f the mtherland.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。以“China makes me feel surprised”为题目，选择中国发展中一个让你感到惊讶的事件进行简单叙述，并写出你的感受。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，一般过去时为辅。人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。写作时选择一个中国取得的成就进行简单叙述，并写出你的感受。注意语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
7．例文
My changes
I’m in Grade 9 and I have changed a lt. First, I used t be thin, but nw I am a little fatter. I used t have curly hair, but nw I have shrt straight hair, because I am busy with my study. Secnd, I have made much prgress in English, I used t be weak in it. But with my English teacher’s help, nw I ften get gd scres n my English exams. What’s mre, I’m mre utging than I used t be. I used t be afraid f speaking in frnt f peple. But nw I can give a speech in public. I’ve als made many friends.
These are my changes. What abut yurs?
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“我的改变”写一篇短文，要求从三个方面描写自己的变化。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般过去时和一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。本文分为两段式：第一段从身形，英语学习以及性格方面介绍自己的变化；最后一段总结概括。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
8．例文
Lking back at these past three years, I had a lt f sweet memries.
Last summer vacatin, I decided t learn t swim. At first, I was afraid f swimming in the water. I didn’t feel gd in the water. But the cach said he wuld prtect me. Then I started swimming, but I culdn’t swim frward at all. With the cach’s help, I knew hw t mve and swim with my hands and legs. A few days later, I culd swim by myself. I was very excited and prud f myself.
What I learn frm this experience is that nthing is impssible if I put my heart int it and try t d it bravely.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要讲述一件令你最难忘的事情，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段主要讲述令你难忘的事情是什么；最后一段讲述自己的感受。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
9．例文
As a middle schl student, I spend mst f my time at schl every day except weekends. S schl life is very imprtant t me. And I am happy with my schl life. The reasns are as fllws.
First f all, I have many friends in schl, s I dn’t feel lnely. We help each ther in study and life. I als learn a lt frm them. Besides, althugh the teachers at schl are very strict with me, I have learned a lt f useful knwledge. This will be very useful fr my future develpment. Finally, there are all kinds f activities in schl. I can get a lt f happiness frm them.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”为主；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你自己是否对学校生活满意；
第二步，具体阐述你的理由。
[亮点词汇]
①first f all首先
②help each ther互相帮忙
③all kinds f各种各样的
[高分句型]
althugh the teachers at schl are very strict with me, I have learned a lt f useful knwledge.（althugh引导的让步状语从句）
10．One pssible versin:
I am happy with what I have
I am a girl. My English name is Mary. I live in Yunnan China. I am thirteen years ld. I have a very happy family. I’m very happy. I lve my family. And they all lve me.
My father likes playing with me. He always has a lt f interesting games. My mther likes reading with me. She always prepares a lt f bks, fd and almst everything I like.
When I am happy, they’re happy with me. When I am sad, they will be tgether with me. Maybe just stay there with me. N matter what they d, I will be happy sn. Because I lve them, I lve my family, I lve what I have in my life.
S I am really happy with what I have.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述自己拥有什么；
第二步，阐述感到幸福的原因；
第三步，阐述自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①like ding sth喜欢做某事
②a lt f许多
③n matter what无论什么
[高分句型]
①She always prepares a lt f bks, fd and almst everything I like.（定语从句）
②When I am happy, they’re happy with me.（时间状语从句）
11．例文：
The Magic Pwer f Encuragement
Everyne has a magic mment in ur lives. Life is like a jurney with many fantastic stps. There are s many interesting things and wnderful peple in my life.
I had a very unfrgettable mment. Last summer hliday, I wanted t learn t swim. I went t the swimming pl with my father. He taught me hw t swim. At first, I was afraid f diving in the water. And I felt uncmfrtable in the water. But my father always encuraged me. He said he wuld prtect me. When I began t swim, but I culdn’t swim frward at all, which made me upset. Then my father tld me hw t mve and hw t stretch ut my arms and legs. Slwly, I culd mve a little. It tk me tw hurs t learn t swim. I felt s prud at that mment.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文，为记叙文；
②时态：主要是一般过去时；
③提示：须先补全题目，注意大写，并表达与题目相关的一次经历；经历部分强调“鼓励”的神奇魔力；全文会有出现一般现在时与一般过去时。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单表达生活中会出现许多有趣精彩的人和事；
第二步，具体描述自己一次难忘经历，即：在学习游泳过程中父亲如何鼓励自己；
第三步，简单表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be afraid f ding 害怕做某事
②can’t swim frward at all 根本不能向前游
③tell me hw t... 告诉我如何……
[高分句型]
①When I began t swim, but I culdn’t swim frward at all, which made me upset.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②It tk me tw hurs t learn t swim.（it固定句型，it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正主语）
12．例文
Life is full f unfrgettable mments. These mments always tuch us and bring us senses f warmth, pride and even achievement.
When it cmes t the mst unfrgettable mment, a stry enters my mind. One day, I visited the art museum. After listening t the stry f Chinese embridery art, I began t learn t make embridery wrks. The artist taught me carefully and I practiced many times. T my jy, the patterns I made in embridery were simple but beautiful. The mment I saw my wrk, a sense f achievement rse frm the bttm f my heart.
Frm this experience, I have realized that nly when yu make an effrt t d smething can yu bring ut the best in yu and then yu will enjy mre unfrgettable mments.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：一般现在时和一般过去时；
③ 提示：写作内容要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引入话题；
第二步，具体叙述“难忘的瞬间”；
第三步，表达自己的感受和从经历中学到的内容。
[亮点词汇]
① be full f 充满，装满
② t ne’s jy 让某人高兴的是
③ rise frm 升起
[高分句型]
① When it cmes t the mst unfrgettable mment, a stry enters my mind. （when引导的时间状语从句）
② Frm this experience, I have realized that nly when yu make an effrt t d smething can yu bring ut the best in yu and then yu will enjy mre unfrgettable mments. （倒装句）
13．[例文]
The First Time I Learn t Swim
As we all knw, everyne has his unfrgettable memries. I still remember the first time t learn t swim.
Last summer vacatin, my father tk me t the swimming pl in ur neighbrhd and taught me t swim. It was the first fr me t swim. At first, I culd nt swim at all. My father was very patient. He encuraged me and taught me hw t swim. He taught me hw t breathe in the water first. Then, he threw me int the deepest part f the swimming pl. I was s frightened that I culdn’t mve. But I never gave up. I felt safe with my dad arund. Three hurs later, with the help f my father, I culd swim by myself. Althugh I culdn’t swim very well, I was very happy.
I will never frget this experience, because I nt nly learned hw t swim, but als learned t be brave!
【详解】[整体分析]
①题材：这是一篇话题作文；
②时态：本文采用一般过去时；
③提示：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开门见山，介绍自己的第一次活动是什么；
第二步：详细介绍第一次活动的整个过程；
第三步：最后谈一谈自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①at first起初
②give up放弃
③hw t swim如何游泳
[高分句型]
①I was s frightened that I culdn’t mve.（引导结果状语从句）
②Althugh I culdn’t swim very well, I was very happy.（让步状语从句）
14．例文
Hw t face the difficulty
Everyne is bund t face difficulties. I used t have sme truble making friends with thers.
I was s quiet and fund cmmunicating with thers really difficult. As a result, I ften felt lnely. But things have changed since my head teacher Ms.Zhang had a lng talk with me. She encuraged me t be pen and ffer my hand t thers. I tried and it really wrked. Nw I have made a few friends and becme mre cnfident.
I find making friends isn’t that difficult nw. I will nt be a clsed bk any mre.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：描述过去的挫折注意用一般过去时，重点描述如何度过难关的。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述自己遇到的困难；
第二步，详细描述如何渡过难关的；
第三步，概述这次挫折带来的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①have truble ding做某事有麻烦
②find sth. difficult发现做某事是困难的
[高分句型]
I was s quiet and fund cmmunicating with thers really difficult. （形容词作宾补）
15．例文
Be hnest
As we knw, hnesty is very imprtant. It is ne f peple’s gd qualities. Peple need hnesty and I hpe everyne is hnest and trusting. Last term, my best friend wanted t cpy my hmewrk because he played cmputer games until midnight and had n time t d his hmewrk. But I thught it was against hnesty, s I tld him nt t cpy my hmewrk and I wuld help him next time.
Hnesty is quite an imprtant quality t a persn. S I think as a mdel student, he must be hnest.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：本文首先要选择其中一条标准，并通过举例说明，可适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，表示诚实是很重要的，并讲述为什么诚实很重要；
第二步，通过举例说明诚实的重要性；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①ne f……之一
②play cmputer games玩电脑游戏
[高分句型]
①Peple need hnesty and I hpe everyne is hnest and trusting.(and连接的并列句)
②Last term, my best friend wanted t cpy my hmewrk because he played cmputer games until midnight and had n time t d his hmewrk.(because引导原因状语从句)