中考英语一轮复习 考点详解+真题练习专项突破54 书面表达之观点看法类(含解析)
展开一般来说,观点看法类文章的内在逻辑关系十分清晰,它除了考查考生的英文基础,还考查考生的逻辑能力。具体来说就是上下文的衔接过渡和文章层次的体现。文章段落之间的逻辑关系主要由过渡性的词和短语来完成,在修辞中称为"启、承、转、合"。"启"就是开头,"承"就是承接,"转"是转折,"合"是综合或总结。
1. 用于表示"启"的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落或文章的开头。此类过渡性的词和短语有first, first f all, at first, in the first place, firstly, t begin with, t start with, recently, nw, at present, in recent years, in general, generally speaking, lately等。
2. 用于表示"承"的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落中的第一个扩展句中。此类过渡性的词和短语有secnd, in additin, besides, then, mrever, what’s mre, what’s wrse, fr example, certainly, bviusly, in ther wrds, still, at the same time, n dubt等。
3. 用于表示"转"的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落中的第二个扩展句中。此类过渡性的词和短语有but, hwever, n the ther hand, n the cntrary, therwise, while, despite, in spite f等。
4. 用于"合"的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落的结论句或文章的结论段中。过渡性词和短语有in a wrd, in shrt, abve all, after all, finally, therefre, as a result, n the whle, in summary等。
总之,要做好书面表达,需要大家把握以下几个原则:细读提示,抓要点:选择句型,准表达;确定线索,巧组合;适当发挥,保完整;规范书写,争高分;细查全文,除笔误。
一、写作方法——十句作文法
第一段为开头,包括两句。第一句为主题句,提出问题并通过问题点明全文主题;第二句为扩展句,进一步说明和支持主题句。另外,也可调整两句的顺序,由第一句说明情况,第二句提出问题。
第二段为正文,共七句。第一句为主题句,提出本段的主题,它应与第一段的主题相一致。第二句至第七句为扩展句,说明和支持本段的主题。句与句之间要注意运用好过渡词,以使行文流畅。
第三段为结尾,简化为一句,是对全文的总结,并说明作者自己的观点。
三段之间的衔接要灵活运用"启、承、转、合"的过渡手段。
二、应急百宝箱
遇到要点不会表达怎么办?词数不达标怎么办?不要急,"一代,五加,一扩"帮你轻松解决问题。"一代,五加,一扩"具体说来就是:
1. 以实代虚——写实
2. 增加限定语——定语、状语等
3. 增加例子——fr example, such as
4. 增加原因——进一步说明
5. 加套语(词块)
6. 加格言、谚语等——进一步说明
7. 扩充建议——自主发挥,点到即可
三、注意事项
1. 观点鲜明,文章一定有一个明确的中心论点——主题。
2. 层次分明,一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持,层次要分明,过渡要自然。
3. 最后一段一般要总结全文,得出一个符合逻辑的结论,突出中心思想。
4. 通常采用一般现在时。
5. 语言简洁有力,一般不采用口语。
一、开头句型
As far as cncerned
It ges withut saying that...
It can be said with certainty that...
As the prverb says ...
It has t be nticed that...
It’s generally recgnized that...
It’s likely that ...
It’s hardly t much t say that...
What calls fr special attentin is that... 需要特别注意的是
There’s n denying the fact that... 毫无疑问,无可否认
Nthing is mre imprtant than the fact that...
What’s far mre imprtant is that...
二、衔接句型
A case in pint is ... As is ften the case...
As stated in the previus paragraph 如前段所述
But the prblem is nt s simple. Therefre... 然而问题并非如此简单,所以……
But it’s a pity that...
Fr all spite f the fact that... Further, we hld pinin that...
Hwever, the difficulties in...
Similarly, we shuld pay attentin t... nt (that) (that)... 不是……而是……
In view f the present statin... 鉴于目前形势
As has been mentined abve... 综上所述
In this respect, we many as well (say)... 从这个角度上我们可以说……
Hwever, we have t lk at the ther side f the cin, that is... 然而我们还得看到事物的另一方面,即……
三、结尾句型
I will cnclude by saying... Therefre, we have the reasn t believe that... All things cnsidered 总而言之
It may be safely said that...
Therefre, in my pinin, it’s mre advisable...
It can be cncluded frm the discussin that... 从中我们可以得出这样的结论
Frm my pint f view, it wuld be better if... 在我看来……也许更好
四、万能句型
Let’s illustrate this. 试举例以兹证明
Let’s take the abve chart as an example t illustrate this.
It remains t be further studied... There’s questin is hw...
观点看法类作文的整体结构有一定的模式可循,可以先写对比的一方面,再写另外一方面;也可以将对比的两个方面的不同点——比较着写。
对比观点看法类作文的写作摸板
The tpic f 主题 is becming mre and mre ppular recently. There are tw sides f pinins abut it. Sme peple say A is their favurite. They hld their view fr the reasn f 理由一 . What’s mre, 理由二 . Mrever, 理由三 . While thers think that B is a better chice in the fllwing three reasns. First, 理由一 . Secnd(Besides), 理由二 . Third(Finally), 理由三 .
Frm my pint f view, I think 我的观点 . The reasn is that 原因 . As a matter f fact, there are sme ther reasns t explain my chice. Fr me, the frmer (later) is surely a wise chice.
A
(2022·四川·巴中市教育科学研究所中考真题)
2022年4月21日,国家发布《义务教育课程方案(2022年版)》,将劳动课程列入国家课程,让学生要学会家务劳动,参与社会实践劳动,志愿服务劳动等。作为一名中学生,请你结合实际,以“Hw Can We Develp Wrking Spirit?”为题,写一篇短文,谈谈你的看法。
参考词汇:wrking class living skill scial activity
要求:1. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、学校等个人信息。
2. 词数:100词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Hw Can We Develp Wrking Spirit?
It’s pretty imprtant fr teenagers t develp wrking spirit. As a middle schl student,________________
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【答案】
Hw Can We Develp Wrking Spirit?
It’s pretty imprtant fr teenagers t develp wrking spirit. As a middle schl student, I welcme it warmly.
First, we shuld have wrking classes t learn sme basic life skills at schl every week. Secndly, we can take part in ut-f-class activities such as planting tress r grwing vegetables t enrich ur real-wrld wrk experience. Als, we need try t d sme chres at hme, like tidying rms, washing clthes r ding sme dishes. Abve all, we culd frm gd wrking habits and value the imprtance f wrking hard thrugh ur experience.
In a wrd, the hardwrking spirit educatins is necessary and it helps t build us up.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文。
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:以“Hw Can We Develp Wrking Spirit”为题介绍如何培养劳动精神的方法。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头已给出,并表达自己的看法。
第二步,介绍培养劳动精神的方法。
第三步,总结概括。
[亮点词汇]
① take part in 参加
② such as 例如
③ in a wrd 总之
[高分句型]
① It’s pretty imprtant fr teenagers t develp wrking spirit(“it’s+形容词+fr sb+t d sth”的句型)
② Als, we need try t d sme chres at hme, like tidying rms, washing clthes r ding sme dishes.(动词不定式作宾语)
B
(2022·四川雅安·中考真题)
“读万卷书,行万里路。”阅读已成为我们生活必不可少的一部分。你校英语社团将举办以“热爱阅读”为主题的征文活动。请根据以下提示,以“Enjy Reading, Enjy Life”为题写篇短文,分享你对阅读的看法,并提出建议。
内容要点:
1. 阅读给你和同学们带来了什么好处,如:开阔视野……;
2. 同学们在阅读中还存在什么问题,如:一些人不愿意阅读,一些人没时间阅读……;
3. 针对存在的问题,提出你的建议(至少2条)。
提示词:开阔视野pen up ne’s mind
注意:
1. 词数80—100,已经给出的部分不计入总词数;
2. 短文必须包括所有要点,可以适当发挥,使其连贯、通顺;
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名等相关信息。
Enjy Reading, Enjy Life
Reading has becme part f ur life___________________________________________________________
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【答案】
Enjy Reading, Enjy Life
Reading has becme part f ur life. It can nt nly pen ur minds, but als make us relaxed and mre knwledgeable. Our study can be imprved if we read mre gd bks.
Many students have difficulty in reading. Sme students dn’t like reading, because they think it is bring. Sme students have n time t read. They think reading is a waste f time. In my pinin, we can learn a lt f interesting things frm bks as lng as we keep reading. We can read anywhere, such as taking a bus, taking a plane and s n.
Bks are ur friends, s let’s read them frm nw n.
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。结合要点提示,以“热爱阅读,享受生活”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导:本文采用一般现在时,人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。分为三段式:第一段介绍阅读的重要性;第二段介绍学生们在阅读上的问题,并就此提出自己的建议;最后一段呼吁人们开始阅读。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
C
(2022·湖南娄底·中考真题)
俗话说:“技多不压身,功到自然成”。假如你是李华,中考即将结束,某英语网站委托你做一项关于你校初三学生暑期技能学习计划的问卷调查。请根据下列图表中的数据,用英语写一篇调查报告,并谈谈你的计划及看法。
要点:
参考词汇:做传统手工make traditinal handicrafts
An English website invited me t d a survey abut what skills students f Grade 9 in ur schl will learn in the cming summer vacatin. Here are the results.____________________________________________________
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【答案】
An English website invited me t d a survey abut what skills students f Grade 9 in ur schl will learn in the cming summer vacatin. Here are the results. Thirty-five percent f the students plan t learn hw t ck. Twenty-five percent f the students are ging t learn hw t make traditinal handicrafts. Twenty percent f them plan t learn swimming. Fifteen percent f them plan t learn a musical instrument. Ten percent f them plan t d ther things. I’m ging t be a vlunteer t teach the children English in the cuntryside. I think we shuld d what we can t help peple in need.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇看图作文,以“介绍你校初三学生暑期技能学习计划的问卷调查”为话题参照图表中要点信息进行分析。写作时需包括图表中五项要点,并适当拓展。
2.写作指导:本文以第一、三人称为主,时态为一般将来时;写作时注意分层叙述,第一层开门见山,表达各个部分的占比情况;第二层介绍自己的观点及原因,保证文章条理清晰,语句通顺。
D
(2022·江西景德镇·二模)
现在越来越多的学生使用 “作业帮”这个APP来搜查他们不会做的题目。对此,不同的人有不同的看法。请根据以下文字的提示,并结合你自己的做法和观点,写一篇英语短文。
写作要求:
1. 短文应包括提示中所有要点,条理清晰,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其他相关信息,不予评分;
3. 80-100词.(开头的首句已给出,不计算在词数内);
参考词汇:cnvenient方便的,便利的 pretend t d…假装做 think independently独立思考
Tday, mre and mre students are using the App Zuyebang. Hwever, different peple have different ideas abut it. _____________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
Tday, mre and mre students are using the App Zuyebang. Hwever, different peple have different ideas abut it. Sme peple think it’s useful. The App Zuyebang can help students t slve difficulties in their studying in time. It is cnvenient. What’s mre, they can have a better cmmand f knwledge by watching teacher’s vide ver and ver again.
Hwever, thers dn’t think s. They think sme students just pretend t study. In fact they play games. They dn’t want t think independently, but nly cpy the answers. They dn’t care abut their studying at all. It’s a waste f time.
As far as I’m cncerned, this App is gd fr students wh are hard-wrking. They can study better. But fr students wh dn’t want t study, it’s very bad.
【详解】
1.题干解读:该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时应承接短文开头;要求我们对介绍不同人对“作业帮”这个应用软件的看法,并联系实际,发表自己的观点。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第三人称和第一人称来叙述;时态采用一般现在时为主;首先要将题目中要求的所有内容都包括在作文中,不能遗漏要点;可以根据表达需要适当发挥,使文章内容更加充实、完整,但需要注意合理性,要紧贴题目要求和文章主旨;其次应从句子的整体结构出发,以简单句结构为基础,穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复合结构的使用,提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使行文连贯、自然。
E
(2022·河北邯郸·三模)
教育部双减政策的实施是为了减轻中小学生的课业负担,要求合理规划作业总量,布置不同类型的作业。为此,Ms. Liu上周在班上组织了一次英语辩论赛(debate cmpetitin),想要了解学生们对于传统作业(traditinal hmewrk such as cpying wrds and phrases, ding sme exercises, reciting...)与创新作业(creative hmewrk such as drawing a mind map, singing an English sng, acting an English play...)的看法。下面是两个同学的辩论观点,请根据提示,表述你的观点。
提示:
1.Wh d yu agree with?
2.Why d yu think s?
3.Share yur experience.
要求:
1.要点齐全,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实的地名,校名和人名;
3.词数80个左右开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Ms. Liu rganized a debate cmpetitin last week. Different peple have different pinins, I agree with____
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【答案】
Ms. Liu rganized a debate cmpetitin last week. Different peple have different pinins. I agree with Zhang Ta, because I think the traditinal hmewrk is practical fr us, such as cpying wrds and phrases, ding sme exercises, reciting and s n. I think cpying wrds every day is a gd way t remember. Althugh the creative hmewrk is innvative, I dn’t think it is practical. Thugh it takes us much time and it is pretty hard, I like t d it. Yu knw I jined the basketball club last term. I spent mst f my time playing basketball and didn’t have time t recite wrds. As a result, I didn’t d well in the English exam at the end f last term. I was sad, s I spent half an hur n wrds every day. I believe I can d well in the next exam.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题型:本文是一篇议论文;
②时态:多时态混合使用;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意描述的全面性,尽量将提示的内容利用上;结合材料内容,表明自己支持哪种作业,写出原因,共享经历。本文主要是第一人称,语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词,做到上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明自己同意谁的观点。
第二步,表述自己的观点及自己这么想的原因。
第三步,分享自己的经历。
[亮点词汇]
①a debate cmpetitin一场辩论比赛
②agree with同意
③and s n等等
④spend time ding sth.花费时间做某事
[高分句型]
①I think cpying wrds every day is a gd way t remember.(动名词作主语;动词不定式作后置定语。省略that的宾语从句)
②Thugh it takes us much time and it is pretty hard, I like t d it.(thugh引导的让步状语从句)
学做美食
学做手工
学会游泳
学一门乐器
其他
35%
25%
20%
15%
10%
优点
1.能够及时帮助学生解决在学习中遇到的困难,很方便;
2.可以反复观看老师的讲解视频,更好地掌握知识;
缺点
1.有的学生假装学习,事实上在用手机玩游戏;
2.有的学生为了应付作业,直接照抄答案,放弃了独立思考;
你的做法和观点
联系实际,说说你是怎么做怎么想的。
Traditinal
Creative
Li Hua
dull, nt helpful t ur thinking
many kinds, interesting, pen ur mind, imprve ur…
Zhang Ta
easy, practical, be used t it
take us much time, pretty hard
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