教案08 读后续写高频语法：综合演练（高分情绪描写）

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\l _Tc31911 一、情绪描写之笑 PAGEREF _Tc31911 \h 1
\l _Tc7751 二、情绪描写之高兴激动 PAGEREF _Tc7751 \h 2
\l _Tc15144 三、情绪描写之生气 PAGEREF _Tc15144 \h 2
\l _Tc15030 四、情绪描写之伤心痛苦 PAGEREF _Tc15030 \h 3
\l _Tc26413 五、情绪描写之哭 PAGEREF _Tc26413 \h 3
\l _Tc5973 六、情绪描写之害怕: PAGEREF _Tc5973 \h 4
\l _Tc358 Part 2 实战演练及参考答案 PAGEREF _Tc358 \h 4
Part 1 知识讲解
本节将把前面所学是技巧应用到情绪心理描写中，帮助我们理解这些高频语法如何让句子从“骨干”变得“丰满”。
一、情绪描写之笑
学一学：
beam: smile very happily
例： 获胜者满意地笑了。
译法一：The winner beamed/smiled with satisfactin.
译法二：The winner wre a satisfied smile n his face.
light up: if smene’s face r eyes light up, they shw pleasure, excitement etc
light up with：His eyes lit up with laughter.
Her face lit up with pleasure.
light sth up: t make smene’s face r eyes shw pleasure r excitement
Suddenly a bright smile lit up her face/eyes.
试一试：
看到直升飞机，Jane 高兴地笑了起来。
【答案一】：At the sight f the helicpter, Jane beamed with wild jy.
【答案二】：Seeing the helicpter, Jane beamed with wild jy.
【答案三】：The mment she caught sight f the helicpter, Jane’s eyes/ face lit up with delight.
【答案四】：The mment she caught sight f the helicpter, a bright smile lit up Jane’s face/eyes.
判断正误：Seeing the helicpter, a bright smile lit up her face.
【答案】：错 seeing 和a bright smile 逻辑不一致。
牛刀小试：当妈妈亲吻他时，小baby开心极了。
1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思表达清楚。

2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。
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【答案】
1.When his mther kissed him n the cheek, the baby was happy/delighted/full f jy.
2.1) When his mther kissed him n the cheek, it seemed as if the baby were n tp f the wrld. (非常开心)
2) When the mther kissed the baby n the cheek, his face beamed and his bright smile lit up the rm. (眉开眼笑；笑容照亮房间)
3) When the mther kissed the baby n the cheek, his eyes danced with jy and sweetness. (欢欣雀跃)
二、情绪描写之高兴激动
试一试：
当她知道考试结果时，她兴奋极了。
【答案一】：When she knew the result f the test, she felt excited/ thrilled.
【答案二】：When she knew the result f the test, her eyes twinkled with excitement.
【答案三】：When she knew the result f the test, her heart was punding with wild jy.
【答案四】：When she knew the result f the test, a wild excitement tk hld f her.
【答案五】：Knwing the result f the test, she felt a surge f excitement.
【答案六】：Knwing the result f the test, she was vercme with excitement.
牛刀小试：
当主持人宣布她获奖时，她兴奋极了
1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思表达清楚。

2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。
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【答案】
1.When the hst annunced that she wn the prize, she felt thrilled.
2. 1) When the hst annunced that she wn the prize, her eyes twinkled with excitement.（激动得两眼放光）
2) When the hst annunced that she wn the prize, her heart was thumping with excitement. (激动得心砰砰跳)
3) When the hst annunced that she wn the prize, a wide excitement tk hld f her. (兴奋不能自已)
三、情绪描写之生气
试一试：
Sam 感到非常生气。
【答案一】：Sam felt very angry.
【答案二】：Sam std rted t the spt, his eyes blazing with anger.
【答案三】：Sam felt s angry that he strmed ut f the rm, slamming the dr furiusly behind him.
【答案四】：Biling with rage, Sam shk his fist at me.
【答案五】：Filled with fury, Sam was unable t utter a single wrd.
牛刀小试：Sheldn感到非常生气。
1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思表达清楚。

2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。
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【答案】
Key 1: Sheldn felt very angry.
Key 2:
1) Sheldn felt s angry that he strmed ut f the rm, slamming the dr furiusly behind him. (冲出房间；狠狠摔门)
2) Biling with rage, Sheldn shk his fist at me.(怒火中烧；挥舞拳头)
3) Filled with fury, Sheldn was unable t utter a single wrd. (充满愤怒；说不出话)
四、情绪描写之伤心痛苦
试一试：
她伤心不已。
【答案一】：She felt extremely sad.
【答案二】：A sadness came ver her.
【答案三】：Her heart ached, tears streaming dwn her cheeks.
【答案四】：Numb with grief, she became speechless.
【答案五】：Feeling a surge f sadness, she culdn’t help crying bitterly.
【答案六】：Sadness surging within her, she burst int tears.
牛刀小试：
一听到那个坏消息，她悲伤不已
1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思表达清楚。

2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。
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【答案】
1. Upn hearing the bad news, she felt extremely sad.
2. 1）Upn hearing the bad news, her heart ached, tears streaming dwn her cheeks. (心痛，眼泪直流)
2）Upn hearing the bad news, she, numb with grief, had truble speaking. (悲伤到失去知觉，不能开口说话)
3）Upn hearing the bad news, she felt seized by a burst f sadness and culdn’t help crying bitterly.(被一股悲伤之感控制，忍不住哭泣)
五、情绪描写之哭
试一试：
他哽咽欲哭。
【答案】：A lump came t his thrat.
她的双眼哭得通红
【答案】：Her eyes were red frm crying.
她的眼里满含泪水。
【答案】：Her eyes brimmed with tears.
眼泪沿着她的面颊流下来.
【答案】：Tears cursed/trickled/streamed/ran dwn her cheeks.
Oliver 独自一人在房间里 流下了孤独伤心的泪水
【答案】：Alne in the rm, Oliver cried bitter, lnely tears．
Wilbur哭着直到睡着。
【答案】：Wilbur cried himself t sleep.
六、情绪描写之害怕
试一试：
我感到很害怕。
【答案一】：I felt very frightened/scared/panicked.
【答案二】：I was in (a) panic/ was full f fear.
【答案三】：I std rted t the spt, brimming with fear/filled with fear.
【答案四】：I felt s scared that my thrat tightened and my knees felt weak.
【答案五】：I frze with terrr, t scared t mve.
【答案六】：I was seized by a strng sense f hrrr; my palms sweating.
牛刀小试：当看到那只凶恶的狼时，我感到很害怕。
1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思表达清楚。

2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。
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【答案】
1.At the sight f the fercius wlf, I felt very scared.
2. 1）At the sight f the fercius wlf, I felt s scared that my thrat tightened and my knees felt weak. (嗓子发紧，膝盖发软)
2）At the sight f the fercius wlf, I frze with terrr, t scared t mve an inch.(吓呆了，不敢动弹)
3）At the sight f the fercius wlf, I was seized by a strng sense f hrrr and my palms were sweating. (被深深地恐惧感所控制，手心出汗)
Part 2 实战演练及参考答案
读后续写 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One mrning, Mlly handed me tw bags. One regular lunch paper bag, and the ne with staples(订书机) and paperclips(回形针). Why tw bags?” “The ther ne is smething else.” “What’s in it?” “Just sme stuff. Take it with yu.” I stuffed bth bags int my briefcase(公文包), kissed the child and rushed ff. At midday, while hurriedly swallwing dwn my real lunch, I tre pen Mlly’s bag and shk ut the cntents. Tw hair ribbns，three small stnes, a plastic dinsaur, a pencil,a tiny seashell, a marble, a used lipstick, a small dll, tw chclate bars and 13 pennies. I smiled. Hw charming! Rising t wrk, I swept the desk clean int the wastebasket---leftver lunch, Mlly’s junk and all. There wasn’t anything in there I needed.
That evening Mlly came t stand beside me while I was reading the paper. “Where’s my bag? “What bag?” “Yu knw，the ne I gave yu this mrning.” “I left it at the ffice, why?” “I frgt t put this nte in it.” She handed ver the nte. “Besides, I want it back.” “Why?” “Thse are my things in the bag, Daddy, the nes I really like. I thught yu might like t play with them, but nw I want them back. Yu didn’t lse the bag, did yu,Daddy?” Tears puddled in her eyes. “Oh，n, I just frgt t bring it hme,” I lied. “Bring it tmrrw, kay?” As she hugged my neck with relief, I unflded the nte that had nt gtten int the bag: “I lve yu, Daddy.” Oh. And uh-h. I lked lng at the face f my child. She had given me her treasures—all that a 7-year-ld held dear. Lve in a paper bag，and I had missed it—nt nly missed it, but had thrwn it away because “there wasn’t anything in there I needed.” It wasn’t the first r the last time I felt ashamed wearing the title f father.
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It was a lng trip back t the ffice.
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T my surprise, Mlly gave the bag t me nce again several days later.
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翻译小练习：
1. 我拿起废纸篓，把里面的东西倒在桌子上。
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2. 我在仔细地整理。
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3. 在清除污垢，喷上清新剂，以消除食物的气味,
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4. 我小心翼翼地把袋子弄平，把宝藏放进去。
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5. 我小心翼翼地把整个东西带回家，像只受伤的小猫。
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6. 那天晚上，我把它还给了莫莉。
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7. 晚饭后，我让莫莉告诉我包里的东西，于是她一次把包里的东西一块一块地拿出来，然后把东西排成一排放在餐桌上。
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8. 每件事都有一个故事，一段回忆，或是与梦想和想象中的朋友有关。
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9. 我很明智地说了几次“我明白了”。事实上，我确实看到了。
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10. 同样的袋子和里面的东西。我感到被原谅，信任和爱。
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11. 而且戴着父亲的头衔会舒服一点。
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12. 几个月来，我不时带着有那张纸条的袋子。
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13. 莫莉很快就把注意力转向了其他事情。
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14. 她发现了其他的宝藏，沉浸在新游戏中慢慢长大了。
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15. 我拿着包。一天早上她把它给了我，从未要求归还。所以我一直拥有它。
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参考答案：
1. 我拿起废纸篓，把里面的东西倒在桌子上。
I picked up the wastebasket and pured the cntents n my desk.
2. 我在仔细地整理。
I was carefully srting it all ut.
3.在清除污垢，喷上清新剂，以消除食物的气味，
After remving the dirt ff and spraying the whle thing with breath freshener t kill the smell f fd,
4. 我小心翼翼地把袋子弄平，把宝藏放进去。
I carefully smthed ut the bag and put the treasures inside.
5. 我小心翼翼地把整个东西带回家，像只受伤的小猫。
I carried the whle thing hme gingerly，like an injured kitten.
6. 那天晚上，我把它还给了莫莉。
That evening，I returned it t Mlly.
7. 晚饭后，我让莫莉告诉我包里的东西，于是她一次把包里的东西一块一块地拿出来，然后把东西排成一排放在餐桌上。
After dinner，I asked Mlly t tell me abut the stuff in the bag，and s she tk it all ut a piece at a time and placed the bjects in a rw n the dining rm table.
8. 每件事都有一个故事，一段回忆，或是与梦想和想象中的朋友有关。
Everything had a stry, a memry, r was attached t dreams and imaginary friends.
9. 我很明智地说了几次“我明白了”。事实上，我确实看到了。
I managed t say “I see” very wisely several times. And, as a matter f fact, I did see.
10. 同样的袋子和里面的东西。我感到被原谅，信任和爱。
The same bag and same stuff inside. I felt frgiven，and trusted and lved.
11. 而且戴着父亲的头衔会舒服一点。
And a little mre cmfrtable wearing the title f father.
12. 几个月来，我不时带着有那张纸条的袋子。
Over several mnths，the bag with the nte in went with me frm time t time.
13. 莫莉很快就把注意力转向了其他事情。
In time Mlly turned her attentin t ther things.
14. 她发现了其他的宝藏，沉浸在新游戏中慢慢长大了。
She fund ther treasures，lst in new games，and grew up.
15. 我拿着包。一天早上她把它给了我，从未要求归还。所以我一直拥有它。
I was left hlding the bag. She gave it t me ne mrning and never asked fr its return. And s I have it still.
参考范文：
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It was a lng trip back t the ffice. I picked up the wastebasket and pured the cntents n my desk. I was carefully srting it all ut. After remving the dirt ff and spraying the whle thing with breath freshener t kill the smell f fd, I carefully smthed ut the bag and put the treasures inside. I carried the whle thing hme gingerly，like an injured kitten. That evening，I returned it t Mlly. After dinner，I asked Mlly t tell me abut the stuff in the bag，and s she tk it all ut a piece at a time and placed the bjects in a rw n the dining rm table. Everything had a stry, a memry, r was attached t dreams and imaginary friends. I managed t say “I see” very wisely several times. And, as a matter f fact, I did see.
这是一次回到办公室的长途旅行。我拿起废纸篓，把这些东西倒在桌子上。我正在仔细地整理这一切。在清除污垢，喷上呼吸清新剂来消除食物的气味后，我小心地抚平袋子，把珍宝放在里面。我小心翼翼地把整件东西带回家，就像一只受伤的小猫。那天晚上，我把它还给了莫莉。晚饭后，我让莫莉告诉我包里的东西，所以她一次把它们都拿出来，然后一排放在餐厅的桌子上。每件事都有故事、记忆，或者是梦和想象中的朋友。我有好几次非常明智地说了“我看到了”。事实上，我确实看到了。
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T my surprise, Mlly gave the bag t me nce again several days later. The same bag and same stuff inside. I felt frgiven，and trusted and lved. And a little mre cmfrtable wearing the title f father. Over several mnths，the bag with the nte in went with me frm time t time. In time Mlly turned her attentin t ther things. She fund ther treasures，lst in new games，and grew up. I was left hlding the bag. She gave it t me ne mrning and never asked fr its return. And s I have it still.
令我吃惊的是，几天后莫莉又把包给了我。同样的袋子和同样的东西。我感到被原谅了，被信任和被爱了。穿上父亲的头衔会更舒服一些。几个月来，装着纸条的包不时地跟着我走。不久，莫莉把注意力转向了其他事情。她发现了其他的宝藏，在新游戏中丢失，然后长大了。我只拿着那个袋子。一天早上，她把它给了我，但从来没有要求它回来。所以我还在那里。