专题08 八年级下册期中书面表达话题作文必刷15篇 - 2023-2024学年八年级下册英语同步检测（外研版）

这是一份专题08 八年级下册期中书面表达话题作文必刷15篇 - 2023-2024学年八年级下册英语同步检测（外研版），共28页。

M1 谈论人或事物的相关感受和印象
M2 谈论个人的经历
M3 谈论宇宙太空星系等话题
M4 谈论相关疾病的表达以及健康的生活方式
M5 谈论卡通动画英雄人物以及喜欢他们的原因
1．根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在指定位置上。
假如你是Tm，你正在旅行中，你的笔友Mark是一个非常喜欢旅行的男孩。他写信询问你目前旅行的情况。根据下列要点提示，给Mark回一封信。
写作要点：
1. 描述你正在旅行的地方（时间、地点等）；
2. 游玩期间已经参加的活动（至少2个）；
3. 你的感受
答题要求：
1. 不得照抄原文，不得出现真实的学校名称和学生姓名；
2. 内容简洁明了，要点齐全，层次清晰，连贯流畅，书写规范；
3. 词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mark,
I am very happy t hear frm yu. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Tm
【范文】
Dear Mark,
I am very happy t hear frm yu. I am having a wnderful time in Beijing. Have yu ever been t Beijing? I have been here fr tw days. I’ve dne s many things. I have climbed the Great Wall and have taken many phts. I felt excited when I saw it. And I’ve visited the Palace Museum. I liked it very much. I’ve als seen the Beijing Opera. It was s interesting!
There’s nly ne thing I haven’t dne: I haven’t eaten Beijing Duck. Have yu ever tried it? I am ging t try it tmrrw. It must be delicius.
Beijing is such a wnderful place and I hpe t visit Beijing again. Wuld yu like t g with me?
Yurs,
Tm
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：根据实际情况灵活运用时态；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏任何要点，可适当添加细节，使作文内容意思完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接已给出的开头，介绍自己正在旅游的地方、时间、以及在此期间已经做了的事情；
第二步，讲述自己在旅行中还未做的事情；
第三步，表达关于这趟旅行的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① have a wnderful time 玩得非常开心
② take phts 拍照
③ very much 非常
[高分句型]
① I felt excited when I saw it. (when引导时间状语从句)
② There’s nly ne thing I haven’t dne: I haven’t eaten Beijing Duck. (there be句式)
2．假如上周末你和父母一起去了兄弟农场参观。在英语课上，老师想让你向大家讲述一下这次旅行经历。请根据表格里的内容提示，写一篇英语汇报稿。
要求：
1. 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 词数 70个左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
3. 文中不可出现真实学校名称及个人姓名。
Gd mrning, everyne!
Tday I wuld like t tell yu abut my trip t______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank yu fr yur listening!
【范文】
Gd mrning, everyne!
Tday I wuld like t tell yu abut my trip t Brther Farm with my parents last Saturday. We went there by car. When we gt there, we were surprised at the green trees and beautiful flwers. It’s s great. We als saw sme birds. They were flying and singing happily. In the mrning, we picked sme apples and strawberries. It was very interesting. We cked the lunch by urselves. I think it’s full f fun. After lunch, we caught sme fish in the river. During ur trip, we als tk many phts.
We all had a gd time n that day. I hpe t g there again.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容提示”中汇报稿的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍上周末去旅行的地点，交通方式，以及人物；
第二步，具体阐述具体活动内容；
第三步，表达旅游后的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be surprised at 对……感到惊喜
②by neself 依靠某人自己
③be full f 充满
④have a gd time 玩得开心
[高分句型]
①When we gt there, we were surprised at the green trees and beautiful flwers. (when引导时间状语从句)
3．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
我们的一生不过是无数习惯的总和。唯有养成好习惯，才能收获向上的力量，成就更好的人生。
学校英文报社就“青少年的生活习惯”对你校学生开展了调研，并将调查结果刊登在了刊物上，希望同学们能对此发表自己的看法。以下为你校国际部的交换生Peter的日常活动调查结果。假如你是李华，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈Peter的日常习惯，并针对他的不良习惯给出合理建议。
提示词语：find, relax, help, healthy, imprtant…
提示问题：
● What are Peter's habits?
● What advice can yu give him fr his bad habits?
Peter is 15-year-ld middle schl student. Our Schl Newspaper asked him abut his daily habits. Here are the results.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hpe everyne can be healthy!
【范文】
Peter is 15-year-ld middle schl student. Our Schl Newspaper asked him abut his daily habits. Here are the results.
We can find that Peter eats fruits and vegetables every day, but he hardly ever des exercise. He spends mre than tw hurs a day ging nline, but he never stays up late. In additin, he helps with husewrk twice a mnth and reads bk every day.
Exercise is imprtant. It is necessary fr him t d exercise every day. It nt nly helps him keep healthy, but als makes him relax. What’s mre, he shuld cntrl his time nline and help with mre husewrk.
Hpe everyne can be healthy!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍Peter的日常活动调查结果；
第二步，针对不良习惯提出合理的建议；
第三步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①stay up late 熬夜
②spend time ding sth. 花时间做某事
[高分句型]
①It is necessary fr him t d exercise every day.（it is+形容词+fr sb.+t d sth. 做某事是……的）
②It nt nly helps him keep healthy, but als makes him relax.（nt nly... but als 不仅……而且……）
4．科技进步和新冠疫情带来了旅行方式的变化。假如你是小明，参与某英语报社的关于两种旅行方式的讨论。请根据报纸上提供的信息，谈谈你喜欢的其中一种旅行方式并阐述其理由，同时对这种旅行方式提出你认为不足的地方。
注意：
1. 内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 词数 80 词左右 (已给文章开头，不计入总词数)；
3. 文章不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Nwadays, we can travel arund the wrld n the Internet with the develpment f technlgy.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【范文】
Nwadays, we can travel arund the wrld n the Internet with the develpment f technlgy. But I prefer t travel arund the real wrld fr myself.
First, traveling in the real wrld nt nly helps us gain knwledge f histry and gegraphy but als benefits ur mind and bdy. We can keep healthy by walking r climbing when we travel. Next, we can enjy the beautiful scenery with ur wn eyes and it can make us relaxed. Mrever, we can meet peple with different interests and have face-t-face cmmunicatin with them. We can experience the lcal culture and custms, taste different fds and lcal snacks if we like.
Hwever, as we knw, every cin has tw sides. We have t spend a lt f mney travelling frm ne place t anther and t many turists can als pllute and break the envirnmental balance f the lcal tur spts.
In all, I think if yu have enugh mney and time, it’s a gd chice t travel in the real wrld. And f curse, dn’t frget t behave plitely in ther places, just as the saying ges, “When in Rme, d as the Rmans d.”
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括喜欢的旅行方式、理由以及这种旅行方式的不足等三个方面内容，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你较喜欢的旅行方式；
第二步，谈谈你喜欢的这种旅行方式并陈述理由；
第三步，谈谈这种旅行方式的不足；
第四步，书写总结。
[亮点词汇]
①nt nly…but als…不但……而且……
②have face-t-face cmmunicatin with sb.与某人进行面对面交流
[高分句型]
①We can keep healthy by walking r climbing when we travel. (when引导时间状语从句)
②I think if yu have enugh mney and time, it’s a gd chice t travel in the real wrld. (宾语从句)
5．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris给你发来邮件，询问你最喜欢的电影。请你用英语回复一封邮件，介绍你最喜欢的一部中国电影或者外国电影，并简要介绍这部电影的内容以及你最喜欢它的原因。
提示词语： favrite, abut, character, interesting, meaningful
提示问题：
● What is yur favrite mvie?
● What is the mvie abut?
● Why is it yur favrite?
Dear Chris,
Hw is it ging? I’m glad t hear frm yu. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Chris,
Hw is it ging? I’m glad t hear frm yu. Recently, I saw an impressive film named The Wandering Earth. Based n a science fictin nvel by Liu Cixin, the film is set in a future wrld where the earth is in danger f being destryed by the dying sun and humans plan t take the earth t find a new place t survive. The prcess is full f difficulties. Hwever, Liu Qi, the sn f an astrnaut, with the help f his family and his friends, vercmes the difficulties and eventually saves the earth.
The film is well wrth watching, nt nly because it is a science fictin film with Chinese elements, but als because it cnveys self-sacrifice, friendship and the lve between father and sn.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的电影；
第二步，详细阐述电影的内容；
第三步，介绍喜欢的理由。
[亮点词汇]
①base n以……为基础
②set in以……为背景
③be full f充满
[高分句型]
①Based n a science fictin nvel by Liu Cixin, the film is set in a future wrld where the earth is in danger f being destryed by the dying sun and humans plan t take the earth t find a new place t survive.（where引导定语从句）
②The film is well wrth watching, nt nly because it is a science fictin film with Chinese elements, but als because it cnveys self-sacrifice, friendship and the lve between father and sn.（because引导原因状语从句）
6．大家都知道保持好心情有利于身心健康，也有助于学习。假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Linda 最近心情不佳。请你用英语写一封邮件告诉她如何保持好心情。要点如下：
1. 积极参加体育活动。
2. 有健康的饮食习惯。
3. 与父母和老师多交流，与同学和睦相处。
4. 积极参加公益活动 (vlunteer activities) 。
注意：1. 可适当增加细节，条理清楚，行文连贯；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 字迹工整，卷面整洁。词数：80左右。（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
Dear Linda,
I heard yu were in bad md (心情) . Hw is it ging recently? As we knw, staying in a gd md is gd fr ur health and study. Here is sme advice fr yu.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I wish yu gd health. Hpe everything ges well!
Yurs
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Linda,
I heard yu were in bad md (心情) . Hw is it ging recently? As we knw, staying in a gd md is gd fr ur health and study. Here are sme advice fr yu.
First, yu can take an active part in sprts. Fr example, yu can g swimming and skating. When the vacatin is cming, yu can jin in all kinds f activities, such as dancing singing and the summer camp r winter camp. Next, yu shuld keep healthy eating habits. Usually yu can eat mre vegetables and fruit instead f junk fd. Only by eating prperly can yu keep yur bdy at a prper weight and stay healthy. Third, when yu have prblems, yu shuld cmmunicate mre with yur parents and teachers. Finally, yu shuld take an active part in vlunteer activities. Yu can help the ld men at the Old Peple’s Hme n weekends.
I wish yu gd health. Hpe everything ges well!
Yurs
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第二人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，建议对方积极参加体育活动和保持健康的饮食习惯；
第二步，建议对方与父母和老师多交流，与同学和睦相处；
第三步，最后建议对方积极参加公益活动。
[亮点词汇]
①fr example比如
②all kinds f各种各样的
③such as比如
④instead f而不是
⑤get n well with sb和某人和睦相处
[高分句型]
①When the vacatin is cming, yu can jin in all kinds f activities,（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Only by eating prperly can yu keep yur bdy at a prper weight and stay healthy.（by引导的方式状语）
7．上个月，你结交了一位新朋友，他叫Tm。他有许多的爱好，也有很多优良的品质。请你根据下列提示，以“My new friend”为题，写一篇80词左右的文章，向大家做个介绍。
要求：
1. 词数80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 所写内容必须包括所提示的信息，可以作适当的发挥。
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
My new friend
Last mnth, I made a new friend. His name is Tm. He studies at Sunshine Middle Schl. Tm has many hbbies.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
In the future, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【范文】
My new friend
Last mnth, I made a new friend. His name is Tm. He studies at Sunshine Middle Schl. Tm has many hbbies.
He likes reading bks. Nw he is interested in different kinds f bks because he can learn a lt frm bks. Reading makes him happy and relaxed.
He als likes travelling. Last year, he visited Shenzhen with his parents. There are many theme parks there, such as Windw f the Wrld. He likes this mdern city because he can enjy the beautiful sea arund Shenzhen, and it is great fun t swim in the sea.
In the future, he wuld like t d smething t prtect the envirnment. If the lcal gvernment stps factries frm putting the waste int rivers, and plants mre trees t make the air fresh, his hmetwn will be mre and mre beautiful.
He believes mre and mre peple will visit his hmetwn sn.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要是“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要漏写Tm喜欢阅读和喜爱深圳的原因，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，仔细阅读所给内容；
第二步，具体阐述Tm的爱好：阅读和旅游；
第三步，介绍Tm未来的计划。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②relaxed放松的
③wuld like t d sth.想要做某事
[高分句型]
①Nw he is interested in different kinds f bks because he can learn a lt frm bks.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②If the lcal gvernment stps factries frm putting the waste int rivers, and plants mre trees t make the air fresh, his hmetwn will be mre and mre beautiful.（if引导的条件状语从句）
③He believes mre and mre peple will visit his hmetwn sn.（省略that的宾语从句）
8．假如你是Mary，你在某网站上看到有一家宠物医院在招聘志愿者。你对这份工作很感兴趣，请你根据下面的提示，写一封邮件申请这个职位。
提示：
1. Which vlunteer jb d yu want t d?
2. What are yur interests and hbbies?
3. Why d yu want t d the vlunteer jb?
要求：
1. 语言通顺、流畅，条理清晰，包含所给提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 70词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Sir r Madam,
I’d like t vlunteer as a nurse in yur pet hspital. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs truly,
Mary
【范文】
Dear Sir r Madam,
I’d like t vlunteer as a nurse in yur pet hspital. In my free time, I like t play with pets and take care f them, s I think I can d the jb well. I have a dg in my hme. When he was yung, he gt sick ne day. After I lked after him carefully, he gt better. Every day, I prepare clean and healthy fd fr him. Nw he is fur years ld and is strng and healthy. I hpe t make mre pets healthy and happy like him. I’m free t help n weekends.
Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs truly,
Mary
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求根据提示写一封邮件申请志愿者的职位。不要遗漏题目中的提示要点，可适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己想做的志愿者工作；
第二步，介绍自己的兴趣爱好；
第三步，介绍自己想做志愿者的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①in ne’s free time在某人空闲时间
②play with…与……玩
③take care f照顾
④lk after照顾
[高分句型]
①When he was yung, he gt sick ne day.（时间状语从句）
9．健康的生活方式对于成长中的我们来说非常重要。你认为健康的生活习惯应该是什么样子的？请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下健康的生活习惯。
提示：1.健康饮食；
2．早睡早起，不熬夜；
3．参加运动，强身健体。
要求：1.要点齐全，适当发挥；
2．词数：80词左右。文章开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
I think healthy habits are very imprtant t us.
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【范文】
I think healthy habits are very imprtant t us. Gd habits can help us keep in gd health. If we want t be healthier, we shuld eat mre healthy fd and less junk fd. Fruit and vegetables are gd fr us, s we shuld try t eat lts f them. And we shuld drink milk every day. T keep healthy, we shuld g t bed early and get up early. Dn’t stay up. Besides, we’d better take mre exercise. Exercise can help us be active and strng. Health is the mst imprtant thing in ur life, s let’s lk after urselves well.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，内容提示的要点要全部表达到位，不要漏掉，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直接叙述我认为健康的习惯对我们来说非常重要，好习惯可以帮助我们保持健康。（已给出）；
第二步，根据所给要点给出具体措施；
第三步，总结“健康是我们生命中最重要的事情，所以让我们好好照顾自己。”。
[亮点词汇]
①keep in gd health保持健康
②be gd fr sb.有益于，对……好处
③stay up熬夜，深夜不睡
④lk after照顾，照料
[高分句型]
①I think healthy habits are very imprtant t us.（宾语从句）
②If we want t be healthier, we shuld eat mre healthy fd and less junk fd.（If引导的条件状语从句）
③Fruit and vegetables are gd fr us, s we shuld try t eat lts f them.（s连接的并列句）
④T keep healthy, we shuld g t bed early and get up early.（shuld建议性句型）
⑤Besides, we’d better take mre exercise.（had better句型）
10．五月踏青，草长莺飞，漫山遍野都是翠色盈盈，风景如画。假如你是李明，今年“五一”节 (May Day) 期间你打算和父母去青岛旅游。请根据以下提示，给你的好朋友Ple写一封100词左右的英语邮件，告诉他你的旅游计划。
Dear Ple,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Ming
【范文】
Dear Ple,
Hw are yu? Yu knw that May Day is cming. I feel excited that I am ging t Qingda with my parents. Since taking a plane can save a lt f time, we will g there by air. During the hliday, we are ging t stay there fr three days. Visiting, swimming and having seafd will be the main parts f ur traveling. It will be a great time fr us all. Besides, we are ging t buy sme suvenirs.
D yu have May Day in yur cuntry? What’s yur plan? I am lking frward t hearing frm yu.
Yurs,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：信件须包括图片材料所给内容，不得遗漏，注意时态切换。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍五一节的到来和自己的旅行计划，引出下文；
第二步，阐述旅行计划的细节内容；
第三步，询问对方的节日计划，并期望收到回信。
[亮点词汇]
①by air乘飞机
②main parts主要部分
③lk frward t ding sth.期望做某事
[高分句型]
①Yu knw that May Day is cming.（宾语从句）
②Since taking a plane can save a lt f time, we will g there by air.（since引导的原因状语从句）
11．中国有一句俗话：“读万卷书，行万里路。”你的英国笔友Jack不太理解这句话，写信向你询问。假如你是李华，请根据来信内容给他写一封回信：
Dear Li Hua,
Recently I have read a bk abut China. In the bk, there is an ld Chinese saying “Read 10,000 bks and travel 10,000 miles.” What des it mean? Wuld yu tell me abut it?
I knw Chinese students are ften busy with their hmewrk. When d yu usually d sme reading? D yu like reading? Why d yu like it r nt? D yu als enjy travelling in yur free time? Culd yu tell me smething abut yur favurite trip?
I hpe t hear frm yu sn.
Yurs,
Jack
要求：
1. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并适当发挥；
2. 词数80词左右，文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不能出现真实校名、人名等信息。
Dear Jack,
Thanks fr yur letter. I’m very glad t tell yu smething abut the Chinese saying “Read 10,000 bks and travel 10,000 miles.”
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Jack,
Thanks fr yur letter. I’m very glad t tell yu smething abut the Chinese saying “Read 10,000 bks and travel 10,000 miles.”
It means that it is imprtant t read ten thusand bks and walk ten thusand miles. It tells us that reading and travelling can make us learn mre knwledge. I like reading, because I have learned a lt frm bks. I usually read after I finish my hmewrk r befre I g t bed. I als like travelling. The visit t Beijing last year is my favurite trip. I visited the places f interest in Beijing. I have learned abut its traditinal culture. I really understand the meaning f “He wh des nt reach the Great Wall is nt a true man.”
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示中的关键信息，告诉杰克“读万卷书，行万里路”的含义，并讲讲自己是否喜欢读书、什么时候读书、是否喜欢旅行，并介绍自己最喜欢的一次旅行。可适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍“读万卷书，行万里路。”的含义；
第二步，讲自己是否爱读书、读书习惯，是否爱旅行、最喜欢的旅行；
第三步，表达美好祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①make sb. d sth.使某人做某事
②like ding sth.喜欢做某事
③the places f interest名胜古迹
④learn abut了解
[高分句型]
①It means that it is imprtant t read ten thusand bks and walk ten thusand miles. (it固定句型)
②I like reading, because I have learned a lt frm bks. (because引导原因状语从句)
③I really understand the meaning f “He wh des nt reach the Great Wall is nt a true man.” (名言警句)
12．假如你是李华，你的留学生好友Alice的剪纸作品荣获本市青少年剪纸大赛一等奖。请你给她写一封邮件表示祝贺，内容包括：
1. 通过努力，终于成功；
2. 继续努力，创作出更多剪纸作品；
3. 感谢她为传播中国传统文化的付出；
4. 希望和她一起参观剪纸获奖作品展。
要求：
1. 80词左右(格式已给出，不计入总词数)；
2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；
3. 条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；
4. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
参考词汇：cngratulate (v. ) 祝贺
Dear Alice,
I heard that yu have wn first prize in the Yuth Paper-Cutting Wrk Cmpetitin held by the city. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Alice,
I heard that yu have wn first prize in the Yuth Paper-Cutting Wrk Cmpetitin held by the city. I’m writing t express my sincere cngratulatins.
I knw yu’ve spent much time learning and practicing paper cutting. And nw yur hard wrk has paid ff. I’m truly happy fr yu and quite grateful t yu fr spreading traditinal Chinese culture. As we all knw, a gd paper-cut wrk takes talent. Yu certainly have prved that bth wrking hard and being creative play an imprtant rle in winning a big prize. I hpe yu can cntinue wrking hard t create mre paper-cutting wrks.
I’d als like t tell yu that I am lking frward t attending the award-winning paper-cut wrk shw with yu.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写信目的：对她获奖表示祝贺；
第二步，期待她的更多作品以及表达感谢；
第三步，表达期望：和她一起参加作品展。
[亮点词汇]
①pay ff取得成功
②play an imprtant rle发挥重要的作用
③lk frward t期待
[高分句型 ]
Yu certainly have prved that bth wrking hard and being creative play an imprtant rle in winning a big prize.（宾语从句）
13．假如你是李华，今天收到加拿大笔友Andrew发来的一封电子邮件，在邮件中Andrew说他最近总感冒，而且时常感到疲劳。请你根据下面的图示给他回复一封电子邮件，针对他的身体状况给出几点建议。
要求：
（1）语句通顺、意思连贯、语法正确；
（2）包含所有图示内容，可适当发挥；
（3）80词左右（电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Andrew,
I’m srry t hear that yu are nt feeling well these days. Yu tld me in yur last email that yu always caught a cld and ften felt tired. Here’s sme advice fr yu.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hpe my advice can wrk well fr yu and wish yu get better sn.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Andrew,
I’m srry t hear that yu are nt feeling well these days. Yu tld me in yur last email that yu always caught a cld and ften felt tired. Here’s sme advice fr yu.
First, it’s gd fr yu t eat mre fruit and vegetables. They have vitamins in them and vitamins can help prtect yu frm a bad cld. Secnd, make sure yu get enugh sleep. Sleep is pretty imprtant fr yu especially when yu have a cld. Third, if yu begin t feel à little better, yu can take sme exercise, such as ging fr a run r riding a bike. Last but nt least, remember t put n mre clthes t help yu keep warm when the weather becmes cld. This will stp the cld frm getting wrse.
I hpe my advice can wrk well fr yu and wish yu get better sn.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，对Andrew的身体不好表示遗憾，并将给出一些建议；
第二步，结合要点提示，具体介绍该如何保持身体健康；
第三步，书写结语，希望建议有帮助，并祝愿对方尽快好起来。
[亮点词汇]
①make sure 确保
②such as 例如
③put n 穿上
[高分句型]
①They have vitamins in them and vitamins can help prtect yu frm a bad cld.（and连接的并列句）
②Sleep is pretty imprtant fr yu especially when yu have a cld.（when引导的时间状语从句）
③Third, if yu begin t feel à little better, yu can take sme exercise, such as ging fr a run r riding a bike.（if引导的条件状语从句）
14．为了开拓国际视野，融入全球化教育，我校积极参与国际青少年交流项目，我校的学生代表将通过远程视频连线的方式向新西兰伯纳汉姆学校的学生介绍我校丰富多彩的拓展课程(extended curse)，有知识文化类的，有体育健身类的，有兴趣爱好类的。假设你是我校学生代表，请你选择以下一种拓展课，写一篇100词左右的短文，向外国朋友分享我们的课后生活吧！
注意：1)文中不得出现真实姓名，学校等个人身份信息。
2)词数：100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Our schl has a lt f after-schl activities. Amng all f these, I’d like t jin
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【范文】
Our schl has a lt f after-schl activities. Amng all f these, I’d like t jin the basketball club.
Our basketball club has a lt f activities. We can get a lt f basketball training at least three times a week. What’s mre, we can play fr the schl team s that we can imprve ur skills. The mst imprtant is that ur schl ften invites sme famus basketball players t train us.
Playing basketball has lts f advantages. First, bth bys and girls can take part in it. Secnd, it helps develp team spirit. What’s mre, playing basketball is gd fr ur health. We can keep healthy if we ften play basketball.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍学校的一种拓展课，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍篮球俱乐部的活动；
第三步，介绍篮球的优点。
[亮点词汇]
①a lt f很多
②at least至少
③invite sb. t d sth.邀请某人做某事
④take part in参加
[高分句型]
①What’s mre, we can play fr the schl team s that we can imprve ur skills. (s that引导的目的状语从句)
②We can keep healthy if we ften play basketball. (if引导的条件状语从句)
15．假如你是托尼，请你用英文写一封信给你的朋友汤姆，告诉他去年你在中国的经历。
（1）去年你跟随父母来到天津学习；
（2）同学们很友好，你交了许多朋友；
（3）游览了天津的许多名胜，如：天津眼；
（4）开始学习汉语，了解了中国的历史；
（5）你认为……
要求：
（1）词数：70词左右。
（2）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
（3）信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：了解learn abut；天津眼the Tianjin Eye
Dear Tm,
I had a gd time in China.
Last year, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m lking frward t hearing frm yu.
Yurs,
Tny
【范文】
Dear Tm,
I had a gd time in China. Last year, I went t Tianjin with my parents t study. I was glad that I made a lt f friends and my classmates were all friendly t me. Fllwing my parents, I visited many places f interests f Tianjin, such as Tianjin Eye, which is the mst famus place there. Mst imprtantly, I started t learn Chinese, which attracted me since I was a pupil. And thanks t this special experience, I learned abut the histry f China. Deeped in 5,000 years, China is very charming and attractive. If yu have a chance t g t China, yu will like it.
I’m lking frward t hearing frm yu.
Yurs,
Tny
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章给予的要点记得描写完整，提示词也注意使用，切勿遗漏。另外需注意行文连贯，无语法和标点错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己跟父母来到中国；
第二步，介绍自己在中国的经历；
第三步，表达自己对中国的看法，并且邀请好友来中国。
[亮点词汇]
①places f interest名胜古迹
②have a chance t d sth有机会做某事
[高分句型]
①Fllwing my parents, I visited many places f interests f Tianjin, such as Tianjin Eye, which is the mst famus place there.（定语从句）
②If yu have a chance t g t China, yu will like it.（条件状语从句）When
Last Saturday
Wh
My parents and I
Where
Brther Farm
Hw
By car
What
1. Enjy the flwers and birds
2. Ck fd by urselves
3. Pick apples and strawberries
4. …
Name
Activities
Hw ften
Peter
Eat fruit and vegetables
Every day
Exercise
Hardly ever
G nline
Mre than 2 hurs a day
Stay up late
Never
Help with husewrk
Twice a mnth
Read bks
Every day
姓名
Tm
学校
阳光中学
爱好
读书
他喜欢看书。
他对各种各样的书感兴趣，因为……
旅游
他也喜欢旅游。
●去年他和他父母一起参观了深圳(Shenzhen)。在深圳有很多主题公园(theme park)，如世界之窗(Windw f the Wrld)。他喜欢这座城市，因为……
未来计划
●他想为保护环境做点事情。如果……家乡将会变得越来越美丽。
●他相信不久越来越多的人也会来参观他的家乡。
Let’s play basketball!
Activities: 1. get a lt f training
2. play fr the schl team...
Advantages: keep healthy...
Practice English!
Activities: 1. watch English mvies
2. learn English cultures...
Advantages: imprve yur English...
D yu like drawing?
Activities: 1. knw famus artists
2. take part in utdr drawing...
Advantages: develp yur interests...