2024年高考英语读后续写提分技巧ppt课件 专题9 对话描写技巧

这是一份2024年高考英语读后续写提分技巧ppt课件 专题9 对话描写技巧，共17页。PPT课件主要包含了对话描写三原则，对话描写三方法，I told her，called，back，smiled Mom，Mary added，when，kept ，his word等内容，欢迎下载使用。
让故事的角色“说”起来，借此来丰富描写手段，增添画面感，给文章注入更多的活力，这无疑会为我们的续写助力！怎样“说”？“说”多少？请认真学习以下三方面的内容：
1. 控制好数量。对话促进情节的发展，但不能代替故事情节！每段话以最多两处 (对话的一个回合，或独白两句) 直接引语为宜。请务必记住：地道+准确+适量。2. 对话内容要符合人物性格特点，什么身份的人说什么样的话，对话要得体。3. 对话内容要紧扣原文主题和中心，对话是为发展情节和突出主题服务的，不能写无关的话语。
1. 对话标签在前Mrs Meredith said t the children,“Yu may send him the ppcrn every Saturday mrning, if yu will pp the crn fr him. Jhn, will yu agree t take charge f the wrk?” (2020年新高考全国Ⅰ卷)
2. 对话标签在后“I'm ging t miss yu s much, Pppy,” said the tall, thin teenager. (2020年1月浙江卷) 3. 对话标签在句中 “I wish we culd help Bernard t earn mney,” said Clara. “His family is suffering s much.” (2020年新高考全国Ⅰ卷)
第一招：变着动词“说”。1. “What shuld we d, Dad?” I asked nervusly. (问道)2. Elli shuted at me with her vilently shaking vice, “Why did yu need t get clse-up pictures f a plar bear?” (喊叫)3. The by's mther turned t the dg, “Okay, Pppy, time t g back hme.” (转向……说道)
三、两招把话“说”漂亮
我们不妨记住一些不同的“说”。大喊/大叫/尖叫：shut, yell, scream, cry ut, call ut；询问/问道：ask, questin, inquire；回答/答复：reply, answer, respnd；提议/建议：prpse, suggest, advise；告诉/告知：tell, infrm；继续说/补充说：cntinue, add；解释道：explain；同意：agree；不同意/反抗：disagree, prtest；请求：beg, request；哭诉：cry, sb；安慰：cmfrt；承诺/保证：prmise, assure, ensure；坚持：insist；细语/嘟囔：whisper, murmur, grumble；结巴: stammer；叹气：sigh；责骂：scld；打断：interrupt；转身说：turn t sb；笑着说：smile等。
第二招：增加与“说”并列的谓语动词，还可加上分词或状语从句来修饰。1. The father picked up the dg, knelt dwn and said in a sft vice, “It's yurs nw.” (picked, knelt与said是并列谓语动词，三动词连用，有效增强画面感。)
2. “I want that ne,” the by said, pinting t the little dg. (现在分词短语作伴随状语，修饰动词said。)3. “Well, let me think,” said the farmer, as he rubbed the sweat f the back f his neck. (时间状语从句修饰动词said。)
1. “Surely, I will!” ________________________ (Jhn用很坚定的声音回答道). 2. “We culd stay t take mre pictures nw,” Elli said. “N!” _________(我告诉她). “Let's pack up ur things and leave here. We have already taken a lt f amazing pictures.”
Jhn replied in a firm vice
3. “Dn't be late fr supper,” ______________ (Paul叔叔大喊道). “And keep t the track s that yu dn't get lst!” “OK!” my dad ______ ______(大喊着回答). 4. “What shuld we d t cheer Pppy up?” _________________________ (爸爸有些担心地问道). “We've tried everything.”
Uncle Paul cried
asked Dad a bit anxiusly
5. “I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy,” ____________ (妈妈笑着说道). “Let's get a little dg fr Pppy.” 6. After a slight pause, ____________ (Mary补充说道), “Thank yu!”7. __________________(James安慰她说道), “Dn't wrry abut yur sn.”
James cmfrted
8. “Yu perfrmed s well, my sn!” Mr Smith _____________________________(大声表扬儿子). 9. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was s angry that she said t Tm, “I'm ging t find a better spt fr us t camp.” and ____________(走开了).
praised his sn in a lud vice
walked away
10. “Tm must have called fr thse helicpters,” Jane reminded herself cnstantly, ___________________________________________________ (心想着Tm会很努力找到她的). 11. “I dn't have t be lnely any mre!” thught Pppy t herself with satisfactin _________________________________________________________________ (当她意识到那小东西很喜欢与她在一起).
thinking that
Tm wuld d everything he culd t find her
she realized that the little thing was extremely pleased t be with her
12. “Indeed, I will!” replied Jhn and he _____________ (遵守了诺言). 13. “Hney, I miss yu! I shuldn't have left yu!” Jane aplgized sincerely and _________________________________________________ (答应今后努力控制脾气).
t try her best t cntrl her temper in the future
14. Jhn said nthing, but, suddenly, he sprang t his feet and ______ (喊道), “I have a great idea! I have a slutin that we can all help accmplish(完成).”15. “Why is she lking at me like that?” He ________ (心想着). “The suitcase! She thinks I'm the bank thief!”