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Examples frm literary wrks…
Mary felt her spirits sink even lwer. 玛丽觉得她的情绪更低落了。Mary felt a wave f anger sweep ver her.  玛丽感到一阵愤怒。
Mary felt her cheeks flush. 玛丽感到面颊发红。When he saw the light frm Mary’s candle, his eyes widened even further, but the crying stpped. 当他看到玛丽的蜡烛发出的光时，他的眼睛睁得更大了，但是哭声停止了。
He scwled (怒视),  slamming the dr behind him. 他怒气冲冲，摔门而去。She fumbled (摸索) fr the key, [her heart beating faster than a gallping hrse]. 她摸索着找钥匙，心跳得比一匹疾驰的马还快。Taking a deep breath, Mary pushed pen the dr and stepped inside. 玛丽深吸了一口气，推开门走了进去。She swallwed hard and stepped int a huge rm. 她使劲咽了一下口水，走进一个大房间。
The rain began again that night. It beat against the windw, [waking Mary up]. She listened as the wind hwled arund the huse and dwn the chimney. She tried but culd nt get back t sleep. “Stupid wind!” she thught. 那天晚上又开始下雨了。雨拍打着窗户，把玛丽吵醒了。她听着风在房子周围呼啸，从烟囱里呼啸而下。她想睡，但还是睡不着。“愚蠢的风！”她想。
普通版：He was happy.进阶版:动作描写：Tears f happiness ________ _______ Susan’s ________. (沿着脸颊奔流而下) She ________ _______ ______ ________. (落下开心的泪水)I beamed at (笑容满面) him, “Welcme back, ...” He grinned with delight (咧嘴开心地笑) when he saw us.神态描写：Her eyes _______________________________________. (闪烁着快乐的光芒)Her face _______ _______ with pleasure.（容光焕发）Her smile _______ _______ the whle rm. （她的笑容照亮了整个房间。）The smile n her face ________ _______ _____ _________. (像钻石一样闪耀)He cast us a glance, with his face wearing a brad/wide/radiant/warm smile.（她看向我们，面带灿烂/温暖的笑容。）Her eyes brimmed ver (溢满) with warm excited tears. （热泪盈眶）
pured dwn
shed tears f jy
shne/glittered/sparkled /twinkled with jy
lit up
shne like a diamnd
心理描写：A wild jy ________ _______ ______ him. (极度的开心控制／占据了他)Jy _______ ______ inside her. (她心中涌起喜悦。)Hearing this, everybdy ______ ________ _______ _______. (欣喜若狂)Her heart was punding/beating with excitement. （砰砰直跳）When his mther kissed him n the cheek, it seemed as if the baby were n the tp f the wrld. (小婴儿开心极了。)A ripple f excitement ran thrugh them. (一阵阵激动声穿过他们。)
tk hld f
welled up
was wild with jy
普通版：He was sad.进阶版：动作描写：She ________, hiding her face in her hands. (她掩面啜泣。)He _______ ______ _____________. (失望地叹了口气。)He struggled t _____________________________________________ his tears. (抑制泪水)He std silently, tears rlling dwn his cheeks. Her hands were trembling. She was n the verge f tears. (快要哭了)When he embraced me with his arms pen wide, I felt my thrat chke with sb/tightened. (当他张开双臂拥抱我时，我觉得自己喉头哽咽。)
sighed with disappintment
fight back/swallw against/hld back/chke back
神态描写：The news ________ a clud f glm ver his face. (蒙上了一层忧郁的阴影)They sat there with glmy lks n their faces.   (带着一脸忧郁。)His eyes brimmed with tears f srrw. (他的眼里噙满了悲伤的泪水。) 心理描写：My heart seemed t ____________ (tear). (心都要撕碎了) Upn hearing the bad news, she ______________________________________ __________________ (感到被一股悲伤控制／淹没／压倒) and culdn’t help crying bitterly. Grief cmes in waves. (悲伤如潮水一般涌来。)A ripple/wave f sadness welled up inside him. (涌起阵阵悲伤)
felt seized/engulfed/verwhelmed/vercme
by a burst f sadness
普通版：He was nervus.进阶版：动作+神态描写：At the sight f the fierce wlf, I felt s scared that ____ ________ _________ and _____ ________ _______ ________. (喉咙发紧，膝盖发软)I said nervusly, my vice ___________ (tremble) a bit. With ____ ________ ______ (砰砰跳的心脏) and _______, _______ ________ (冰冷潮湿的手掌), I felt faint.I _______ ______ _______ (因害怕而僵住), t scared t mve an inch.Her face turned ________ (苍白的) and std there ___________(舌头打结的). She was chked by fear. 她因恐惧而窒息。Her heart beat s vilently that she felt nearly suffcated (窒息). 她的心跳得厉害，几乎窒息而死。
my thrat tightened
my knees felt weak
a punding heart
cld mist palms
frze with terrr
【tngue-tied】
心理+神态描写：Her face turned pale, feeling like sitting ____ _______ _____ ________. (如坐针毡。)Fear slwly crept upn her. 恐惧慢慢地爬上她的心头。A fld f fear welled up in him. / Fear flded ver (淹没) him. I felt that the bld in my bdy frze rapidly because f the terrible sight.I was seized by a sudden impulse (冲动) t run.Standing in the classrm, I became increasingly nervus and culd feel my heart beating wildly. (感到心跳加速)
n pins and needles
普通版：He was angry.进阶版：动作描写：He stamped his ft in anger (气得直跺脚) and ran ut f the rm in a burst f anger.He was breathing fire and fury. His vice trembled with anger/rage.Filled with anger/fury, Tm was unable t utter a single wrd.He clenched his fists. He glared at me with burning eyes.My vice sunds like a grwling, angry bear.She threw the invitatin n the table with annyance, murmuring...
气得说不出话我的声音听起来像一只怒吼的熊。怒气冲冲地跑出房间声音因生气而颤抖满腔怒火恼怒地把…扔开握紧拳头怒气冲冲地瞪着我
神态描写：His face cluded with anger. 他气得脸色阴沉。 心理描写：He culd hardly/scarcely cntain his rage. 他几乎控制不住怒火。Anger engulfed/swallwed (吞噬) him like a wild beast.
神态、心理描写：Tears __________ her eyes (热泪盈眶), she ffered her heartfelt gratitude.All thse present t listen t her sad stry ____ ________ t tears. (感动得流泪)Tuched deeply/immensely, we… 被深深感动, 我们…With tears streaming dwn her face, she...  泪水顺着她的脸颊流了下来, …
N.1 使用生动的形容词 （积极&消极）
【关于风的形容词】积极形容词：gentle/sft 轻柔的, warm 温暖的, pleasant 令人愉悦的消极形容词：icy/freezing 冰冷的, strng/vilent 猛烈的, dreadful可怕的, hwling 呼啸的, biting 刺骨的, bne-chilling/ bne-piercing 刺骨的e.g. a gentle warm breeze 温和的暖风 an icy hwling wind 刺骨的狂风 【关于雨的形容词】积极形容词：gentle/light 小的, pleasant 令人愉悦的 消极形容词：icy/freezing 冰冷的, heavy, dreadful 可怕的【关于雪的形容词】积极形容词：feathery 鹅毛般的, tiny 极小的, pure/clean干净的纯洁的消极形容词：icy/freezing 冰冷的, heavy, dreadful可怕的e.g. the pure feathery snwflakes 鹅毛般纯洁的雪花
【关于星星的形容词】积极形容词：lvely, little, sparkling/shining/glwing/twinkling 亮闪闪的消极形容词：pale/faint 暗淡的, starless没有星星的e.g. the few pale stars 零零散散的暗淡的星星 dark starless night 昏暗的没有星星的夜晚【关于太阳/阳光的形容词】积极的形容词：warm, amber-like 像琥珀一样的, dazzling 耀眼的消极的形容词：burning/scrching火辣辣的, scalding炙热的e.g. the warm amber-like sunshine 温暖的琥珀色的阳光
Tip1：使用两个或者三个并列的形容词来描写自然景物，效果会更好。
N.2 使用恰当的动词 （积极&消极）
关于风的动词：hwl 嚎叫, blw 吹, whip 鞭打, sting 刺痛, kiss 亲吻关于雨的动词：beat against…拍打, crash against…击打, pur dwn倾盆关于雪的动词：dance 跳舞, flat/fall/drift 飘落, melt away 融化, blanket 裹住, cver 覆盖关于星星的动词：shine/sparkle/twinkle闪耀, wink/blink眨眼睛, hide躲藏, decrate装饰, dt点缀关于太阳、阳光的动词：cme ut出来, rise升起, set落下, kiss亲吻, fld in 照射进来, be bathed in沐浴在
举个例子～积极环境描写：The pure feathery snwflakes were dancing gracefully in the air.Mrning sunshine flded in thrugh the pen curtains.The scenery alng the jurney is just like a breath-taking landscape painting. Clusters (群，簇) f stars decrated the vast sky like sparkling jewels.Stars winked at me in a darkening sky. The breeze (微风) gently kissed her cheeks. The beach was bathed in the amber-like sunshine. The sky was dtted with sparkling stars. 消极环境描写：The icy wind started hwling, cutting my face like a sharp knife/ stinging my face.The dreadful rain was beating wildly against the windws.Wind and rain nw whipped the huse.A heavy silence blanketed the rm.
Tip2：可以添加相应的修饰语来修饰动词，如副词、介词短语或非谓语动词。
Tip3：巧用修辞手法—明喻、暗喻、拟人
结语：人物心理综合刻画技巧
Techniques:刻画人物动作、语言、神态、心理活动；描写积极、消极环境。Tips:多用两个以上并列形容词；多用修饰语来修饰动词，如副词、介词、非谓语动词；巧用修辞手法，如明喻、暗喻、拟人、反衬等。Ntice:人物情绪、客观环境勿着墨过多，不可宣兵夺主，妨碍情节发展
Mac was leisurely jgging in the muntains n a Saturday mrning when he accidentally entered the territry f a female lin and irritated her…
Describe his emtins!
As the fierce beast grwled furiusly at him, Mac’s heart beat s vilently that he felt nearly suffcated (窒息的). 1) 被一种想要逃跑的冲动所支配，他加快了步伐，想要甩掉狮子，却是徒劳。2) 哦天哪！我肯定是要死在这儿了！”他想道。视线所及，除了道路旁繁茂的 (lush) 枫树，空无一人，但他现在毫无心情欣赏风景。3) Mac鼓起勇气，开始向狮子猛烈地吼叫，但是这只狮子似乎太锲而不舍了。4) 他每退后一步，就感到膝盖又软了一点。
1) Seized by a sudden impulse t run, he accelerated his pace in an attempt t get rid f the lin but in vain.2) “Oh gsh! I must die here!” he thught. There was n ne in sight except lush (茂盛的) maple trees alng the path, but he had n md fr that nw. 3) Plucking up his curage, Mac started t rar at the lin vilently, but the lin seemed t persistent. 4) With every step he tk back, he culd feel his knees weakened a bit.
1) 被一种想要逃跑的冲动所支配，他加快了步伐，想要甩掉狮子，却是徒劳。2) 哦天哪！我肯定是要死在这儿了！”他想道。视线所及，除了道路旁繁茂的 (lush) 枫树，空无一人，但他现在毫无心情欣赏风景。3) Mac鼓起勇气，开始向狮子猛烈地吼叫，但是这只狮子似乎太锲而不舍了。4) 他每退后一步，就感到膝盖又软了一点。