专题03 “三招式”完成动作描写-备考2024年新高考英语读后续写六大招式

这是一份专题03 “三招式”完成动作描写-备考2024年新高考英语读后续写六大招式，共7页。试卷主要包含了 她看了一眼， 贝利紧盯着他， 我把他的名字忘记了， 小男孩对他妈妈说对不起等内容，欢迎下载使用。

招式一：精致措辞 ------ 具体替代笼统
技法示例：
1. 她看了一眼。
She glanced at him.
升级：She sht her a meaningful lk. 她向他意味深长地看了一眼。
2. 贝利紧盯着他。
Belli lked at him clsely.
升级：Belli’s diamnd eyes lcked n t her. 贝利钻石般的眼睛紧盯着她。
3. 我把他的名字忘记了。
I frgt his name.
升级：His name had cmpletely slipped frm my memry. 他的名字，我竟忘得一干二净。
4. 小男孩对他妈妈说对不起。
The little by said srry t his mther.
The little by hung his head and mumbled an aplgy t his mther. 小男孩垂着头，咕哝着向他母亲道歉。
常见动词升级示例：
“说”：低语whisper / mumble / murmur，结巴：stutter，宣布annunce / declare，保证prmise / assure，建议prpse / suggest，喊叫：cry ut / shut / scream / yell / exclaim / hwl（因疼痛、愤怒、开心等）大声叫喊，rar咆哮，吼叫，sign叹息 bast 自夸
“看”： catch a glance f / cast a glimpse f / stare at / gaze at / glare at / peep at / raise ne’s eyes
walk - tipte 蹑手蹑脚地走，slip, steal int，wind ne’s way;
“抓”：seize / grasp / grab / clutch / take hld f / catch hld f / hld n t
“跑”：rush/dash/race猛冲, 急速移动；rise t ne’s feet站起来；spring / jump t ne’s feet 一跃而起, 跳起；slide / slip int溜进；flee away 逃跑
“哭”：weep, sb (啜泣)
“吃”：bite (咬) chew（咀嚼) swallw (吞下)
技法体验：
1. Mary felt her heart race.玛丽感到她的心跳加速。
2. A great silence surrunded them. 周围一片寂静。
3. He strmed ut and slammed the dr shut.他怒气冲冲地跑了出去，把门重重地关上。
4. She chked and her eyes brimmed with tears.她喉咙哽咽，眼里满是泪水。
5. Abel slammed his ft n the gas and sht up nt the grass and straight tward the bttm f the tree. Able在汽油上用力踩了一下，然后飞快的踏上草坪直直地朝树底下走去。
6. Her pulses beat fast, and the bld warmed and relaxed every inch f her bdy.她的心跳加快，热血温暖了身体的每个部位，使她感觉到身心完全地放松了
招式二：动作过程：一帧变三帧 （分解---合并---美化）
Step1分解动作Divide the actin int several steps；
Step2合并动作Cmbine a chain f actins tgether；
Step3美化动作Mdify and beautify the actin；
示例：
1. He jumped ff the bus, dashed int the shp, and yelled at the crwd t leave. 他跳下公共汽车，冲进商店，大喊大叫让人群离开。
2. He reached deep int his pcket, pulled ut a handful f change, and held it up t the farmer. 他在兜里掏了半天，掏出一把零钱，递给那个农民。
3. He sprang t his feet, grabbed the bag, and rushed ut f the living rm. 他一跃而起，抓起书包，冲出起居室。
4. Mac遇到狼上车的动作：
分解：jump ff the bicycle — dash int the back seat f the car — slam the dr — lean against the seat
合成美化：Mac jumped ff the bicycle, dashed int the back seat f the car and slammed the dr heavily, leaning against the seat, breathless.
技法示例：
1. 她抱住女儿。
She hugged her daughter.
分解：dash frward --- knee dwn --- gather
合并：She dashed frward, knelt dwn and gathered her daughter int her arms.
美化：With a giant smile n her face, she dashed frward, knelt dwn and gathered her daughter int her arms tightly.
2. 她去捉蝴蝶。
She went t catch the butterfly.
分解：creep爬, bend弯腰, cup（使成杯型）
合并：She crept alng the path, bent ver and cupped her hands arund the butterfly.
美化：She crept alng the path, bent ver swiftly and cupped her hands arund the butterfly gently. 她蹑手蹑脚地走着小路，迅速弯下腰，轻轻地绕着蝴蝶。
3. 朝狼扔石块。
分解：Pick up --- aim at --- thrw
合并：Having picked up a stne, he aimed at the wlf and threw it t the wlf.
美化：Having picked up a stne firmly, he aimed at the fierce wlf carefully and threw it straight t the wlf with all his strength.
4. 我早上匆忙去上学。
分解：Put n my cat --- grabbed my schlbag --- rushed t schl
合并：I put n my cat, grabbed my schlbag and rushed t the schl.
美化：Putting n my cat hurriedly, I grabbed my schlbag and rushed t the schl like an arrw.
5. 这个歌手在台上唱歌。
分解：Glanced at the audience --- tk a deep breath --- began t sing
合并：The singer glanced at the audience, tk a deep breath and began t sing.
美化：Anxiusly glancing at the audience, the singer tk a deep breath and began t sing with emtin.
美化手段：
With + 情感名词的搭配：
with delight / excitement / pleasure/ happiness / jy / satisfactin / anger / rage / patience / fear / terrr / embarrassment / pride / cautin / care / patience / certainty
② with+身体部位：
with its hungry red eyes / its sharp teeth / her shaky hand / her pale lips…
in+名词：
in surprise / amazement / shck / srrw伤心
in a high / lw / sweet / lud / sft / weak vice 用..的嗓音
In a tne f surprise / curisity / impatience / regret /cmmand命令 用...的语气
副词 suddenly / immediately / instantly / rapidly / firmly / slwly / angrily / happily / excitedly
示例：
1. Jane murmured, sprang up and dashed t the center f an pen area, waving her yellw bluse desperately and yelling at the helicpter with excitement.
2. Sailrs came acrss pirates n an island.
--- A few days later, a passing ship came int view at sme distance. We were thrilled and dashed t the shre, waving ur arms in the air with excitement. Unfrtunately, it was a pirate ship. “Quick, back t the hut”. I yelled in terrr. We spang t ur feet and fled. But it was t late, we were sptted by the pirates.
用法体验：
1. 这个天真的被妈妈抱着的女孩心疯狂地跳动着，兴奋地尖叫着，打开她一直期待着的精致的礼盒。
With her heart beating wildly, the inncent girl, held by her mm and screaming with excitement, unwrapped her delicate gift bx which she had been lking frward t withut any hesitatin.
2. 我们车上的每个人都在一旁看着，疯狂地笑着。Ryan挣扎着站起来，掸了掸夹克上的灰尘，走到一个空座位前。
Every ne f us n the bus lked n and laughed crazily, Ryan struggled t his feet, dusted the jacket and made his way t an empty seat.
3. She felt cld.
--- She pulled her cllar up, tightened her scarf, stuck her hands deep int her pckets and turned her face away frm the biting wind.
招式三：动作美化：多角度摄像
技法示例：
1. 面部--- 睁大眼睛惊恐万分
肢体 --- 逃走
语言/心理 --- 大喊妈妈
Widening his eyes in extreme hrrr, Sheldn fled away, screaming, “Mm, help!”
2. 心理 --- 受老师鼓舞
肢体 --- 举起手
语言 --- 小声说“我来”
Encuraged by the teacher's wrds, he raised his hand, whispering “I vlunteer.” 受到老师的鼓舞，他举起手，小声说道： “我来” (whisper小声说)
技法体验：
1. Lking straight int my eyes, Mike strke my hair, whispering,“Yu are the mst beautiful girl I've ever seen.”
2. At the sight f the sudden appearance f Ne Zha, these villagers were s scared that they shuted alud with terrr.
3. Burning with anger, he glared at me with his big frightening eyes, yelling, “Yu’re such an idit.”
4. As night was beginning t fall, Jane sat n the grass, staring at the vast sky, frightened and starved.
A yung man came t the plice statin, surrunded by a grup f jurnalists, declaring that he had sptted the murderer.
5. That starry night, admiring the mn rising abve the distant muntain and accmpanied by the amusing stries f naughty David, we felt we’d had the mst enjyable camping trip. 在那个繁星满天的夜晚，我们欣赏着月亮从远处的山上升起，伴随着顽皮的大卫的有趣故事，我们感到我们进行了一次最愉快的野营旅行。
综合体验：
1. In the mrning, as scheduled, 1. the twins gt up early, tipted t the kitchen and scped sme flur ut f the bag.（双胞胎早早起床，踞着脚走进厨房，从袋子里舀出面粉）Once they set abut making bread，they felt cnfused. At that time，2. their father slid int the kitchen，patting the twins’ shulders and cmfrting them in a sft vice，（他们的爸爸溜进厨房，轻拍双胞胎的肩膀，柔声安慰道）“Dn’t quit. Yu can vercme the challenge.” The twins made the bread smthly. Then，3. they carried the breakfast，advanced upstairs and wke up their mther. （他们端着早餐，向楼上走去，喊醒他们的妈妈）.With her eyes glittering with excitement, the mther was s cntent that she gathered her children int her arms.
2. 患有脑疾的小男孩David参加越野比赛，赛前他信心动摇想要放弃，“我“鼓励他积极面对困难，战胜自我，David接受了我的建议，尽管困难重重他依然勇敢地完成了比赛，赢得其了同学们的喝彩。(选自2022年高考全国1卷)
I watched as David mved t the starting line with the ther runners. He turned his head arund t lk at me and I signaled t him with a thumbs up, feeling prud f him. He smiled, tk a deep breath and gt ready fr the race，eyes brimming with determinatin. With a bang, every runner (跑得像箭一样快) sht like an arrw. He ran with all his strength, in spite f his abnrmal steps. Eventually, he finished the running. As David, the last ne, made it t the finishing line, (时间像静止了一样) time seemed t stand still. Thunderus applause brke ut, with the name David eching again and again.