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这是一份读后续写微技能突破 专题3：如何捕捉和照应可续写点课件PPT，共15页。PPT课件主要包含了学一学，练一练，品读首段，提炼原文主题，关注特定情节，留意细节描写，关注高频词，留意原文结尾，解读所给首句，语言动作心理等内容，欢迎下载使用。
通过本课学习，你将会：为了达到目标，你需要：达到这个目标，你能够：
运用捕捉可续写点的7种微技能
品读首段、提炼原文主题、关注特定情节、留意细节描写、关注高频词、留意原文结尾或解读续写所给首句（或综合）
写出“言之有物”，“言之有理”的续作
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tm, had driven three hurs t camp vernight by a lake in the frest. Unfrtunately, n the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started t quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was s angry that she said t Tm, “I’m ging t find a better spt fr us t camp” and walked away. With n path t fllw, Jane just walked n fr quite a lng time. After she had climbed t a high place, she turned arund, hping t see the lake. T her surprise, she saw nthing but frest and, far beynd, a snwcapped muntain tp. She suddenly realized that she was lst.“Tm!” she cried. “Help!” N reply. If nly she had nt left her mbile phne in that bag with Tm. Jane kept mving, but the farther she walked, the mre cnfused she became. As night was beginning t fall, Jane was s tired that she had t stp fr the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much t be with Tm and her family. She wanted t hld him and tell him hw much she lved him.Jane rse at the break f day, hungry and thirsty. She culd hear water trickling (滴落) smewhere at a distance. Quickly she fllwed the sund t a stream. T her great jy, she als saw sme berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling strnger nw, Jane began t walk alng the stream and hpe it wuld lead her t the lake.As she picked her way carefully alng the stream, Jane heard a helicpter. Is that fr me? Unfrtunately, the trees made it impssible fr peple t see her frm abve. A few minutes later, anther helicpter flew verhead. Jane tk ff her yellw bluse, thinking that she shuld g t an pen area and flag them if they came back again.But n mre helicpters came and it was dark. ______________________________________________________________________________It was daybreak when Jane wke up. _________________________________________________________________________________________
【2016.10真题】阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tm, had driven three hurs t camp vernight by a lake in the frest. Unfrtunately, n the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started t quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was s angry that she said t Tm, “I’m ging t find a better spt fr us t camp” and walked away. With n path t fllw, Jane just walked n fr quite a lng time. After she had climbed t a high place, she turned arund, hping t see the lake. T her surprise, she saw nthing but frest and, far beynd, a snwcapped muntain tp. She suddenly realized that she was lst.①背景续写点：②照应方式：
仔细品读原文首段，你能捕捉到哪些背景续写点，续写时你会如何照应你所捕捉的续写点。
July, Jane, Tm, by a lake in the frest.
第一段可写天黑后Jane的感受Althugh it was already July, Jane still felt very cld in the frest, feeling extremely regretful fr leaving Tm, and the gurgle f the stream added her cldness and lneliness.
①原文主题：②照应主题方式：
仔细品读原文，提炼原文主题，续写时你会如何照应原文主题。
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband Tm had an unpleasant but unfrgettable jurney.
第二段结尾可写Frtunately, Jane was ultimately rescued and she and her husband cntinued their exciting and unfrgettable jurney.
①特定情节可续写点：②照应方式：
仔细品读原文，关注特定情节，捕捉可续写点，续写时你会如何照应该特定情节。
Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much t be with Tm and her family.
第一段天黑后可写Jane独自一人，感到后悔，想念Tm的感受Again Jane lay awake lnely in the dark, missing Tm and her family desperately and wanting t being with him immediately.
①细节描写可续写点：②照应方式：
仔细品读原文，留意细节描写，捕捉可续写点，续写时你会如何照应该细节描写。
“I’m ging t find a better spt fr us t camp.”They started t quarrel;Jane was s angry; As night was beginning t fall, Jane was s tired that she had t stp fr the night.
The best spt t camp is the place where yu are.”Hw she wished she had never quarreled with Tm. If she had never quarreled with Tm, she wuldn’t have gt lst.Her anger and tiredness were swept away the instant she saw Tm. Her anger and tiredness was vertaken by the lve she felt fr Tm.
①高频词可续写点：②照应方式：
仔细品读原文，关注高频词，捕捉可续写点，续写时你会如何照应该高频词。
Helicpter; yellw bluse
续写第二段可写Tm sptted her yellw bluse frm in the helicpter. 或Jane waved her yellw bluse n hearing the helicpter.
①原文结尾续写点：②照应方式：
仔细品读原文结尾，你能捕捉那些可续写点，续写时你会如何照应该续写点。
Jane tk ff her yellw bluse, thinking that she shuld g t an pen area and flag them if they came back again.
Jane gathered her strength t walk t an pen area, waving her yellw bluse. T her great jy, the helicpter didn’t fly away this time.
But n mre helicpters came and it was dark. ________________________________It was daybreak when Jane wke up. ____________________________________________①所给首句可续写点：②照应方式：
仔细解读所给首句，你能捕捉那些可续写点，续写时你会如何照应该续写点。
第二段续写可写She was safe with Tm. T her relief, she needn’t stay in the frest fr anther night.
But n mre helicpters came and it was dark. _________________________________ It was daybreak when Jane wke up. ____________________________________________
请根据可续写点，续写150词左右的短文。
But n mre helicpters came and it was getting dark again. It was even harder fr Jane t find the lake. She stpped and rested against a tree by the stream. “I shuldn’t have quarreled with Tm abut the tiny things.” she regretted, “If I hadn’t walked away angrily, I wuldn’t have gt lst.” Again Jane lay awake in the dark, missing Tm and her family. Her anger was vertaken by the lve she felt fr Tm. She knew he was cncerned abut her safety and was searching fr her. Gradually, she calmed dwn and fell asleep. It was daybreak when Jane wke up. She became energetic after a night’s sleep. After eating sme berries, she mved n t find the lake. Walking alng the stream, Jane was waving her yellw bluse and praying that Tm wuld find her sn. Her prayer was really heard! Tm sptted her yellw bluse frm in the helicpter. Tm dashed t hug her as sn as the helicpter landed. They aplgized t each ther, frgave each ther with tears in their eyes and went hme happily, planning the next camp in the frest again.
捕捉可续写点的7种微技能
通过本课学习，你将会：为了达到目标，你需要：达到这个目标，你能够：
运用捕捉可续写点的7种微技能
品读首段、提炼原文主题、关注特定情节、留意细节描写、关注高频词、留意原文结尾或解读续写所给首句（或综合）
写出“言之有物”，“言之有理”的续作
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tm, had driven three hurs t camp vernight by a lake in the frest. Unfrtunately, n the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started t quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was s angry that she said t Tm, “I’m ging t find a better spt fr us t camp” and walked away. With n path t fllw, Jane just walked n fr quite a lng time. After she had climbed t a high place, she turned arund, hping t see the lake. T her surprise, she saw nthing but frest and, far beynd, a snwcapped muntain tp. She suddenly realized that she was lst.“Tm!” she cried. “Help!” N reply. If nly she had nt left her mbile phne in that bag with Tm. Jane kept mving, but the farther she walked, the mre cnfused she became. As night was beginning t fall, Jane was s tired that she had t stp fr the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much t be with Tm and her family. She wanted t hld him and tell him hw much she lved him.Jane rse at the break f day, hungry and thirsty. She culd hear water trickling (滴落) smewhere at a distance. Quickly she fllwed the sund t a stream. T her great jy, she als saw sme berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling strnger nw, Jane began t walk alng the stream and hpe it wuld lead her t the lake.As she picked her way carefully alng the stream, Jane heard a helicpter. Is that fr me? Unfrtunately, the trees made it impssible fr peple t see her frm abve. A few minutes later, anther helicpter flew verhead. Jane tk ff her yellw bluse, thinking that she shuld g t an pen area and flag them if they came back again.But n mre helicpters came and it was dark. ______________________________________________________________________________It was daybreak when Jane wke up. _________________________________________________________________________________________
【2016.10真题】阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tm, had driven three hurs t camp vernight by a lake in the frest. Unfrtunately, n the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started t quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was s angry that she said t Tm, “I’m ging t find a better spt fr us t camp” and walked away. With n path t fllw, Jane just walked n fr quite a lng time. After she had climbed t a high place, she turned arund, hping t see the lake. T her surprise, she saw nthing but frest and, far beynd, a snwcapped muntain tp. She suddenly realized that she was lst.①背景续写点：②照应方式：
仔细品读原文首段，你能捕捉到哪些背景续写点，续写时你会如何照应你所捕捉的续写点。
July, Jane, Tm, by a lake in the frest.
第一段可写天黑后Jane的感受Althugh it was already July, Jane still felt very cld in the frest, feeling extremely regretful fr leaving Tm, and the gurgle f the stream added her cldness and lneliness.
①原文主题：②照应主题方式：
仔细品读原文，提炼原文主题，续写时你会如何照应原文主题。
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband Tm had an unpleasant but unfrgettable jurney.
第二段结尾可写Frtunately, Jane was ultimately rescued and she and her husband cntinued their exciting and unfrgettable jurney.
①特定情节可续写点：②照应方式：
仔细品读原文，关注特定情节，捕捉可续写点，续写时你会如何照应该特定情节。
Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much t be with Tm and her family.
第一段天黑后可写Jane独自一人，感到后悔，想念Tm的感受Again Jane lay awake lnely in the dark, missing Tm and her family desperately and wanting t being with him immediately.
①细节描写可续写点：②照应方式：
仔细品读原文，留意细节描写，捕捉可续写点，续写时你会如何照应该细节描写。
“I’m ging t find a better spt fr us t camp.”They started t quarrel;Jane was s angry; As night was beginning t fall, Jane was s tired that she had t stp fr the night.
The best spt t camp is the place where yu are.”Hw she wished she had never quarreled with Tm. If she had never quarreled with Tm, she wuldn’t have gt lst.Her anger and tiredness were swept away the instant she saw Tm. Her anger and tiredness was vertaken by the lve she felt fr Tm.
①高频词可续写点：②照应方式：
仔细品读原文，关注高频词，捕捉可续写点，续写时你会如何照应该高频词。
Helicpter; yellw bluse
续写第二段可写Tm sptted her yellw bluse frm in the helicpter. 或Jane waved her yellw bluse n hearing the helicpter.
①原文结尾续写点：②照应方式：
仔细品读原文结尾，你能捕捉那些可续写点，续写时你会如何照应该续写点。
Jane tk ff her yellw bluse, thinking that she shuld g t an pen area and flag them if they came back again.
Jane gathered her strength t walk t an pen area, waving her yellw bluse. T her great jy, the helicpter didn’t fly away this time.
But n mre helicpters came and it was dark. ________________________________It was daybreak when Jane wke up. ____________________________________________①所给首句可续写点：②照应方式：
仔细解读所给首句，你能捕捉那些可续写点，续写时你会如何照应该续写点。
第二段续写可写She was safe with Tm. T her relief, she needn’t stay in the frest fr anther night.
But n mre helicpters came and it was dark. _________________________________ It was daybreak when Jane wke up. ____________________________________________
请根据可续写点，续写150词左右的短文。
But n mre helicpters came and it was getting dark again. It was even harder fr Jane t find the lake. She stpped and rested against a tree by the stream. “I shuldn’t have quarreled with Tm abut the tiny things.” she regretted, “If I hadn’t walked away angrily, I wuldn’t have gt lst.” Again Jane lay awake in the dark, missing Tm and her family. Her anger was vertaken by the lve she felt fr Tm. She knew he was cncerned abut her safety and was searching fr her. Gradually, she calmed dwn and fell asleep. It was daybreak when Jane wke up. She became energetic after a night’s sleep. After eating sme berries, she mved n t find the lake. Walking alng the stream, Jane was waving her yellw bluse and praying that Tm wuld find her sn. Her prayer was really heard! Tm sptted her yellw bluse frm in the helicpter. Tm dashed t hug her as sn as the helicpter landed. They aplgized t each ther, frgave each ther with tears in their eyes and went hme happily, planning the next camp in the frest again.
捕捉可续写点的7种微技能
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