读后续写微技能突破专题1：如何梳理情节与情感课件PPT

这是一份读后续写微技能突破专题1：如何梳理情节与情感课件PPT，共14页。PPT课件主要包含了想一想，情节概要，学一学，练一练，时空顺序，叙述结构，文本线索，范文赏析等内容，欢迎下载使用。

通过本课学习，你将会：为了达到目标，你需要：达到这个目标，你能够：
运用时空顺序、叙述结构或文本线索梳理故事的情节和情感
了解完整叙述思维模板或主人物角度叙述思维模板
情节是由于主要冲突而发生的一切事件。
梳理情节的3种方式1.时空顺序2.叙述结构3.文本线索
概括情节或主旨的2种思维1.完整叙述的思维模板何时何地何人做了何事“何事” 有时包括“原因、经过、结果”2.主人物角度叙述的思维模板主人物开始做了什么？然后做了什么？接着做了什么？最后做了什么？
读后续写的情感表达方式叙述、描写、说明、抒情、议论方法叙述抒情、描写抒情、托物借景抒情、语言抒情、修辞抒情
It was summer, and my dad wanted t treat me t a vacatin like never befre. He decided t take me n a trip t the Wild West. We tk a plane t Albuquerque, a big city in the state f New Mexic. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternn. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up frm the airprt and drve us up t his farm in Pecs. His wife cked us a delicius dinner and we gt t knw his sns Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestrm f the farm huse listening t the frgs and water rlling dwn the river nearby. Very early in the mrning, Uncle Paul wke us up t have breakfast. “ The day starts at dawn n my farm,” he said. After breakfast, I went t help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul t take the sheep ut t graze(吃草). I was impressed t see my dad and Uncle Paul riding hrse. They lked really cl.In the afternn, I asked Uncle Paul if I culd take a hrse ride, and he said yes, as lng as my dad went with me. I wasn’t ging t take a hrse ride by myself anyway. S, my dad and I put n ur new cwby hats, gt n ur hrses, and headed slwly twards the muntains. “Dn’t be late fr supper.” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep t the track s that yu dn’t get lst!” “Ok!” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm huse were ut f sight. It was s peaceful and quiet and the clrs f the brwn rcks, the deep green pipe trees, and the late afternn sun mixed t create a magic scene. It lked like a beautiful wven(编织的) blanket spread ut upn the grund just fr us. Paragraph ne: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse. ____________________________. Paragraph tw: We had n idea where we were and it gt dark.____________________________________.
One summer, far away frm Uncle Paul’s farm huse, my dad and I went n a vacatin, riding hrses in the wild and gt lst.
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse. _____________________ We had n idea where we were and it gt dark. _______________________________
请根据情节和情感，续写150词左右的短文。
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse. It was s cute like a spirit in the frest, that I cannt help chasing it. Dad fllwed me clse. My heart was swelled with excitement when I apprached the rabbit, clser and clser. But we neglected that we’d already left away frm the track. What’s wrse, the rabbit disappeared, all f a sudden. When we realized that we culdn’t g back t the farmhuse fr supper, everything was t late.We had n idea where we were and it gt dark. I sbbed: “Dad, what shall we d nw?” He smiled bitterly: “Uncle Paul wuld try t find us.” Time passed like a leaking tap. Hungry and tired, I had a terrible desire fr a steaming cup f tea and a piece f pizza. Then dad said: “D yu hear the river nearby? We can back alng it.” Luckily, we reached the farmhuse safe and sund. Hw wise my dad was! Keep calm n matter what happened, then yu can vercme everything, that’s what I learned frm during the special summer vacatin.