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写作方法指导
图表一般是对某个具体问题的调查统计，往往能反映出一个普遍的问题，同学们在描述完内容时需要过渡到普遍现象。
写图表作文需要介绍图表中讲了什么，数据有什么变动，反映了哪些问题和趋势，并分析问题背后的原因，结合自身谈谈解决措施或给出观点。
图表作文写作可以细分为三个部分：
第一部分：引出话题并介绍图表内容。
第二部分：分析造成这一问题的原因。
第三部分：给出自己观点，提出相应的解决方案。
每一篇作文的要求会有所差异，部分作文不需要分析原因，给出自己的观点和理由即可，同学们在写作之前需要仔细阅读题干及要求，明确要点，避免遗漏。
写作模板
As is shwn in the chart, ___% f the ______, and ____% _______. Anther _____% ______. The rest＿_____.(描述图表信息)As we all knw, _____d much harm t_____, even causing peple t ________. At the same time, ________. But t ur sadness, _________.（分析图表所反映现象带来的危害）Hw d we prtect urselves frm_________？I think we shuld________. In additin, it's very imprtant fr us t_______. D remember that_____________. (提出具体建议，以避免上述现象带来的危害)
Recently I have cnducted a survey n指出一种现象，while同时有别的情况发生.Hpefully, the result f my survey can draw the attentin f ________. Firstly, 第一个原因. Secndly, 第二个原因. Apart frm the abve reasns, 第三个原因.By ding上文涉及之事, 将带来什么样的好处或者坏处.What's mre, 介绍另一个好处或者坏处.
常用表达
写作方法指导
【素材之单词和短语】
1.上升：rise, increase, g up
2.下降：fall, drp, decrease, decline, reduce, lessen
3.平稳：stable, steady, remain/maintain/keep/be the same as/similar t
4.占：ccupy, take up, accunt fr
5.而：while, hwever, whereas, n the ther hand
6.相比：by cntract, n the cntrary, likewise, cmpared with
7.图表：chart、graph、table
8.饼状图：pie chart/graph
【素材之句式】
★说明图表的内容
The chart gives us an verall picture f the 图表主题. The first thing we ntice is that 图表最大特点 . This means that (进一步说明).
We can see frm the statistics given that 图表细节一 . After 动词-ing 细节一中的第一个变化， the动词-ed+幅度+时间(紧跟着的变化) . The figures als tell us that图表细节二 . In the clumn, we can see that accunts fr (进一步描述).
It can be seen that/We can see/It is clear frm the figures/statistics that 图表细节.
It is apparent frm the figures/statistics/table/chart/diagram/graph that 图表细节.
★常用总结句型
1. The data/statistics/figures lead us t the cnclusin that (结论)
2. As can be seen frm the diagram, great changes have taken place in...
3. Judging frm these figures, we can draw the cnclusin that (结论). The reasn fr this, as far as I am cncerned is that (给出原因). / It is high time that we (发出倡议).
段落中衔接句的句式
As we all knw, is knwn t all, is well knwn my pinin, far as I am cncerned, sight reminds me f smething in my daily life.
中考真题精讲
（2023·山东菏泽·统考中考真题）
假如你是李华，某英语报正在开展以“My Favrite English Hmewrk”为题的征文活动，请你根据图表中的调查结果，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
要点如下：
1.描述调查结果；
2.介绍你最喜欢的作业形式并陈述理由。
学生最喜欢的英语作业调查结果(人数百分比)
要求：
1.字数：100词左右；
2.可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文
My Favrite English Hmewrk
There is a survey abut yur favrite English hmewrk. Here is the result.
15% f students like cpying English wrds and sentences, because they think it is very easy. 25% f students prefer t read English bks frm which they can learn a lt. 35% f students like t watch English mvies s that they can learn a lt abut freign culture. Other students like t listen t English sngs.
As fr me, I like watching mvies. It can nly bring me happiness and fun, but als it can braden my hrizn.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干中的调查结构介绍自己最喜欢的英语作业。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，描述调查结果；
第三步，介绍自己最喜欢的作业形式并陈述理由。
[亮点词汇]
①prefer t d sth.更喜欢做某事
②as fr至于
③nt als不但……而且
[高分句型]
①15% f students like cpying English wrds and sentences, because they think it is very easy.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②25% f students prefer t read English bks frm which they can learn a lt.(which引导的定语从句)
（2023·山西·统考中考真题）
青春期对于每个人来说都是最能彰显生命本色的特殊时期。为了引导同学们正确地认识自我，某校“阳光心理驿站”的老师们以“我发现自己真的很好”为主题，对1127名学生进行了问卷调查，下图是部分项目的统计结果。
假如你是该校的学生，请结合以上图表信息以“I Find Myself Really Gd”为主题，用两段话写一篇短文。内容包括：
1. 简要说明图表内容；
2. 从图表中任选一项，结合自己的经历，谈谈它对你的生活产生了什么积极的影响。
要求：
1. 词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2·文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
I Find Myself Really Gd
Our schl did a survey amng 1,127 students n the tpic f “I Find Myself Really Gd”. Here are the results. ______________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文
I Find Myself Really Gd
Our schl did a survey amng 1,127 students n the tpic f “I Find Myself Really Gd”. Here are the results. 86 percent f the students believe they can see the wrld with kind eyes, while 53 percent cnsider themselves psitive. 47 percent think they dn’t like t cmplain.
As fr me, I find myself really psitive. Last mnth, I was chsen t play a rle in an English shw. It was difficult fr me t memrize the lines in a shrt time. Hwever, I regarded it as a challenge, which was als a gd chance t imprve my English. S I made an effrt t practice. Finally, I made it and received high praise. In fact, it is my psitive attitude that brings ut the best in me all the time.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为图表作文；
②时态：时态综合使用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：要求以“I Find Myself Really Gd”为主题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍调查结果；
第二步，结合自己的经历，谈谈它对你的生活产生了什么积极的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①As fr至于
②play a rle in扮演角色
③made an effrt t尽力去做某事
④all the time一直
[高分句型]
①I regarded it as a challenge, which was als a gd chance t imprve my English.（which引导的定语从句）
②In fact, it is my psitive attitude that brings ut the best in me all the time.（强调句）
（2023·山东济南·统考中考真题）
新时代英语课堂的语言实践活动丰富多彩。学校英语社团开展了以Students’ Favrite English Class Activities为主题的调查，请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇英语短文向学校英文报投稿。
内容包括：
1.描述并评价调查结果；
2.陈述你的选择并说明理由。
注意：
1.词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
There are many practical learning activities in English class. _______________________________________
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【答案】例文：
There are many practical learning activities in English class. Recently, ur schl club has made a survey n students’ favrite English class activities. Here are the results.
Of the fur activities mentined, abut ne third f the students say presentatin is their favrite. The number f students wh chse discussin and creative writing is almst the same, taking up 25% and 27% each. Only 17% f the students cnsider debate their favrite as they think it is challenging.
As far as I am cncerned, presentatin is the mst useful. On the ne hand, I am able t learn a lt while preparing fr it. On the ther hand, it helps t imprve my English speaking ability as well as cmmunicatin skills.
English class activities are imprtant, s we had better make full use f them t make English learning mre interesting and clrful.
【详解】
[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山介绍以下是关于学生最喜欢的英语课堂活动的调查结果；
第二步，描述并评价调查结果；
第三步，陈述你的选择并说明理由；
第四步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①the number f……的数量
②as far as就……而言
③had better d sth.最好做某事
④make full use f充分利用
[高分句型]
①Here are the results.(倒装句)
②The number f students wh chse discussin and creative writing is almst the same, taking up 25% and 27% each.(定语从句)
（2022·山西·统考中考真题）
有效的课后作业能激发学生的学习兴趣，丰富学习经历，提升综合素养，并在知识与生活之间搭起一座桥梁。某校为减轻学生的负担，改进作业布置的方式，针对“你最喜欢的一种英语课后作业类型”对 1267 名学生进行了问卷调查，下图是相关的统计结果。
假如你是该校的学生，请你根据以上图表信息，用两段话写一篇短文。内容包括：
1.简要说明图表内容；
2.从图表中选出一种你最喜欢的作业类型，结合自己的经历，谈谈这种作业的好处。
要求：
1.词数不少于 80词，首句已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名；
3. 参考词汇仅供参考。
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【答案】例文：
A schl did a survey amng 1,267 students abut their favrite kinds f English hmewrk. Here are the results. 42% f the students like listening and speaking hmewrk best, and 29% enjy reading and writing. The percentage f the students wh like the hands-n prject is 22% and 7% chse ther kinds f hmewrk.
As fr me, I like the hands-n prject best because it cnnects what I've learnt with real life in an interesting way. Three weeks ag, we were asked t make an English pster abut Dragn Bat Festival. Then I cllected lts f infrmatin n the festival. Finally, nt nly did I finish the task perfectly, but als I gt a deeper understanding f ur clrful culture. In my pinin, it's the hands-n prject that aruses my interest in English and enriches my experiences.
（2022·湖南娄底·中考真题）
俗话说：“技多不压身，功到自然成”。假如你是李华，中考即将结束，某英语网站委托你做一项关于你校初三学生暑期技能学习计划的问卷调查。请根据下列图表中的数据，用英语写一篇调查报告，并谈谈你的计划及看法。
要点：
参考词汇：做传统手工make traditinal handicrafts
An English website invited me t d a survey abut what skills students f Grade 9 in ur schl will learn in the cming summer vacatin. Here are the results.____________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文
An English website invited me t d a survey abut what skills students f Grade 9 in ur schl will learn in the cming summer vacatin. Here are the results. Thirty-five percent f the students plan t learn hw t ck. Twenty-five percent f the students are ging t learn hw t make traditinal handicrafts. Twenty percent f them plan t learn swimming. Fifteen percent f them plan t learn a musical instrument. Ten percent f them plan t d ther things. I’m ging t be a vlunteer t teach the children English in the cuntryside. I think we shuld d what we can t help peple in need.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文，以“介绍你校初三学生暑期技能学习计划的问卷调查”为话题参照图表中要点信息进行分析。写作时需包括图表中五项要点，并适当拓展。
2.写作指导：本文以第一、三人称为主，时态为一般将来时；写作时注意分层叙述，第一层开门见山，表达各个部分的占比情况；第二层介绍自己的观点及原因，保证文章条理清晰，语句通顺。
（2021·福建中考真题）
假定你是学校英语报小记者李华，上周学校开展了“English Day”活动，请你根据下面的海报和学生参加活动的数据写一篇报道，介绍活动情况以及同学们的感受。词数80左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Our Schl English Day
Our schl English Day was a great success.____________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Our Schl English Day
Our schl English Day was a great success. It tk place in the schl hall frm 2: 00 p. m. t 4: 30 p. m. n June 18th.
Three activities were included. Half f us students tk part in the singing cmpetitin. 30% f us went t the cking shw. And the rest f us enjyed urselves in the strytelling.
We spke highly f the English Day. We learnt a lt thrugh practice. It als made us cme t realize the imprtance f teamwrk. We hpe there will be mre clrful activities in ur schl.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍上周开展的英语日的活动情况。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般过去时。分为三段式：第一段介绍活动的地点和时间；第二段介绍学生参加活动的情况；最后一段介绍这个活动给同学们带来的感受。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。
名校模拟题提升练
写作方法指导
（2023·福建厦门·九上期末）
根据China Daily对全球外国友人的调查数据显示, 外国友人认为中医、武术、美食、传统节日、民间艺术最能代表中国文化, 那么在你心中最能代表中国文化的是什么呢? 请你向China Daily的专栏“Amazing China”投稿, 推介中国文化。词数100词左右。
内容要求：
1. 介绍这一中国元素的基本信息；
2. 说明理由, 至少2点。
Amazing China
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【答案】例文
Amazing China
The Spring Festival is a traditinal Chinese festival with a lng histry. As the largest celebratin fr Chinese peple t welcme the new year, it stands fr Chinese culture best. Here are my reasns.
First f all, peple visit relatives and express their best wishes t ne anther. Kids usually receive red pckets filled with lucky mney which shws the lve and care frm the elder. What’s mre, peple ften putacin indumplings. The persn wh gets the cin will be the lucky dg. Yu can’t miss the delicius fd that carries the best wishes and wealth.
Cme and experience the traditinal festival with us.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，根据提示内容适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写出春节是中国的传统节日；
第二步，写出作者认为春节最能代表中国文化的原因；
第三步，欢迎大家来和我们一起体验传统文化。
[亮点词汇]
①stand fr代表
② be filled with充满
[高分句型]
①Kids usually receive red pckets filled with lucky mney which shws the lve and care frm the elder.（which引导的定语从句）
②The persn wh gets the cin will be the lucky dg.（wh引导的定语从句）
③Yu can’t miss the delicius fd that carries the best wishes and wealth.（that引导的定语从句）
（2023·山西大同·模拟预测）
阅读可以使人更充实、丰富，可以滋润心灵，开启心智。N.1 Middle Schl针对学生在英语阅读方面存在的问题，对全校2, 300名学生进行了一次调查，下面是相关的统计结果。
假如你是该校的学生，请你根据以上图表信息，用两段话写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1. 简要说明图表内容；
2. 结合自身经历，谈谈你在英语阅读方面的困难和你是如何克服的。
要求：
1. 词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
N.1 Middle Schl did a survey amng 2, 300 students abut the prblems f their English reading. Here are the results.
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【答案】One pssible versin:
N.1 Middle Schl did a survey amng 2, 300 students abut the prblems f their English reading. Here are the results. 23% f the students aren’t interested in English reading. 25% f them say they hardly have time t d English reading because f t much hmewrk. 35% f them have difficulty in English reading and dn’t knw hw t d English reading in right ways. Besides, 17% say they dn’t have prper reading materials.
As fr me, I am fnd f English reading. In the beginning, I had difficulty in understanding the meaning f the materials because f t many new wrds. I wanted t give up but my English teacher Miss Yan, tld me I culd find a wnderful wrld if I insisted. Therefre, I tried t guess the wrds’ meaning by reading the sentences befre and after them. At the same time, I als lked them up in the dictinary. Little by little, I culd read mre articles. As my teacher said, my life becmes mre clrful because f reading. What’s mre, I find it easier t study English.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”。
③提示：文章为第一人称和第三人称，介绍学校关于英语阅读方面存在的问题的调查结果和自己在英语阅读方面的困难和怎么克服的，内容描述完整，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍表格里面的信息；
第二步，介绍自己在英语阅读方面遇到的困难；
第三步，介绍自己怎么克服困难的。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②because f因为
③have difficulty in ding sth.在……方面有困难
④As fr me对我来说
⑤In the beginning开始
⑥What’s mre另外
⑦lk up查找
[高分句型]
①25% f them say they hardly have time t d English reading because f t much hmewrk.（宾语从句）
②I wanted t give up but my English teacher Miss Yan, tld me I culd find a wnderful wrld if I insisted.（条件状语从句）
③As my teacher said, my life becmes mre clrful because f reading.（定语从句）
④What’s mre, I find it easier t study English.（it固定句型）
（2023·河北张家口·三模）
某校进行了题为“有压力向谁说”的问卷调查（结果如图），请根据下面的提示写一篇短文谈一谈你对这次调查的感受。
提示：
1）简要描述调查结果。
2）你喜欢向谁倾诉压力？为什么？
3）提出2条缓解压力的建议。
注意：
1）短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。
2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
3）词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
When teens have stress, they will talk abut their stress t different peple. Here are the results abut ur survey.
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When teens have stress, they will talk abut their stress t different peple. Here are the results abut ur survey. Thirty-five percent f students will talk abut their tress t their teachers. And frty percent f students will talk t their friends. Only fifteen percent f students talk t their parents but nly ten percent f students talk t nbdy. Fr me I like t tell my friends abut the pressure, because we are all the same age. They smetimes feel the same as us. But as a students, we shuld learn t relieve stress.
First f all, we shuld prperly face the pressure. Stress is everywhere in ur daily life, s we can’t be afraid f it and try ur best t deal with it. Secndly, we can listen t light music r d sme sprts, which can let us relax. Finally, believe in yurself. We can deal with any truble with the help f urselves r thers.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇图表作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求包含所有要点提示，不要遗漏题目所给的要点，可适当添加细节，注意突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述调查结果；
第二步，具体阐述自己会向谁倾诉压力，并说明理由；
第三步，提出缓解压力的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①the same as和……一样
②relieve stress缓解压力
③deal with处理
[高分句型]
①Stress is everywhere in ur daily life, s we can’t be afraid f it and try ur best t deal with it.（and连接并列句）
②Secndly, we can listen t light music r d sme sprts, which can let us relax.（定语从句）
（2023·福建漳州·二模）
为了丰富校园课余生活, 学校开展了多姿多彩的社团活动。假定你是学校英语报小记者, 请根据以下图示写一篇报道, 介绍你校社团活动情况。词数80左右。
注意事项：
1.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数；
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范；
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Our schl has set up many kinds f clubs t enrich students’ schl life. All students shw great interest in the activities f the clubs.
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Our schl has set up many kinds f clubs t enrich students’ schl life. All students shw great interest in the activities f the clubs. They can learn a lt abut Chinese traditinal culture thrugh cutting ut different shapes. Abut a quarter f the students chse the gardening club t get sme labr skills, such as grwing vegetables and caring fr flwers. The number f the students in the drama club is ver ne tenth. Ten percent f the students take part in Paper-cutting club. Acting and rle playing are the mst exciting things they expect. The rest f the students jin ther clubs they like.
As fr me, jining the table tennis club builds me up. Hw clrful ur schl life is!
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为新闻报道；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：注意审题，尤其是图片内容，考生应该注意不要遗漏任何信息，进而做出适当补充，添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头部分，总体介绍学校俱乐部的创建目的，并且受到所有同学们的青睐（题目中已给出）。
第二步，依据饼图中喜欢不同俱乐部的学生占比，进行介绍，包括介绍加入某一俱乐部的原因或好处以及可以进行的活动。
第三步，总结陈述个人所喜欢的俱乐部，并且感叹学校生活丰富多彩。
[亮点词汇]
①shw great interest in... 对……表现得非常感兴趣
②labr skills 劳动技能
③the rest f... 其余的……
④build sb up 增强某人体质
[高分句型]
①Acting and rle playing are the mst exciting things they expect.（省略关系词that的定语从句）
②As fr me, jining the table tennis club builds me up.（动名词作主语）
③Hw clrful ur schl life is!（hw引导的感叹句）
（2022·广东深圳·九下单元测试）
近期，你们学校针对学生利用电子设备(device)上网的情况做了一次调查，具体结果如下表。请你用英语写一份调查报告，以便刊登在校刊上。要求不少于80词，并简要分析产生这种情况的原因。
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The graph shws the results f a survey in which students were asked abut their preferred devices fr ging nline. There are fur main devices in their answers: a smartphne, a laptp, a tablet and a desktp cmputer.
Frm the chart it is clear that mst students prefer t use smartphnes and laptps. Nearly a third f students prefer t g nline with a smartphne. Thirty percent like t use a laptp. A desktp cmputer accunts fr furteen percent f users’ preferred devices. Only few students prefer a device ther than these main fur.
In cnclusin, since mbile and prtable devices are the mst ppular chices, it is clear that many students like t take them arund. The desktp is t heavy t carry and hard t use, s it is the least ppular.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为图表作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体介绍学生利用电子设备上网的情况；
第二步，具体阐述每一项电子设备的占比；
第三步，最后分析移动和便携式设备最受欢迎的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①prefer t d宁愿做
②ther than除了……以外
③In cnclusin总而言之
[高分句型]
①In cnclusin, since mbile and prtable devices are the mst ppular chices, it is clear that many students like t take them arund.（since引导原因状语从句）
②The desktp is t heavy t carry and hard t use, s it is the least ppular.（最高级）
（2023·上海松江·二模）
Write at least 60 wrds accrding t the given situatin（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）。
为了解初中生的周末活动安排，玫瑰花园学校（ Rse Garden schl）采访了150名学生并汇总了部分活动的平均用时（见下图）。从柱状图中，你发现了什么问题？请提出建议并陈述理由。
注意:
1.文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文
T find ut the students’ weekend activities, Rse Garden schl interviewed 150 students. Mst students spend mre time n smartphnes and cmputer games. Students spend the least time n husewrk. I think students shuld study hard and play smartphnes less. It’s bad fr their eyes t play cmputer games fr a lng time. Besides, they help their parents with husewrk. It can cultivate their independence and learn hw t take care f themselves.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出本文主题；
第二步，分析图表中出现的问题；
第三步，给出合理的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①find ut找出
②spend time n sth在某事上花费时间
③be bad fr对……有害
④take care f照顾
[高分句型]
①T find ut the students’ weekend activities, Rse Garden schl interviewed 150 students. （动词不定式作目的状语）
②I think students shuld study hard and play smartphnes less.（宾语从句）
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