05 开放作文之观点看法类-2024年中考英语写作常考话题技巧和范文
展开写作方法指导
1、认真审题把握信息。
经过审题,我们要知道,这篇文章要写几个要点?用哪些词语句型?用哪种时态,语态比较好?并且要注意使用哪些过渡词或者是过渡句。
2、明确主题,列提纲。
我们在列提纲的时候,要认真的思考题目要求,理清脉络,思路清晰,把握文章所需要的全部要点。
3、组织语言。
大家在写文章的时候一定要注意,要用自己熟悉的英语词汇和句型,对于没有把握的句子或者单词,我们要灵活,可以变一种说法。同时要注意句式要多样,简单句和复合句结合使用。句子和句子之间要使用过渡词,段落与段落之间要使用恰当的过渡句,一定要用英语思维。
4、认真检查。
我们要检查语法是否正确,还有标点符号,单词拼写是否正确。
写作模板
(开头)
Nwadays, there is a ht debate / discussin / argument abut _______ (要讨论的话题或问题). Sme peple think / believe / say that _______ (正方观点). Hwever, thers think / believe / say that _______ (反方观点). As fr me, I agree with the frmer / latter pinin.
(中间)
There are several reasns fr my pint f view.
①First f all, _______ (正方论点一). Fr example, _______ (正方论据一).
②Secndly, _______ (正方论点二). Fr instance, _______ (正方论据二).
③Thirdly, _______ (正方论点三). Fr ne thing, _______ (正方论据三一). Fr anther, _______ (正方论据三二).
On the cntrary, the ppsite pinin is nt reasnable / cnvincing / acceptable.
①T begin with, _______ (反方论点一). Hwever, _______ (反方驳斥一).
②In additin, _______ (反方论点二). But, _______ (反方驳斥二).
③Furthermre, _______ (反方论点三). Nevertheless, _______ (反方驳斥三).
(结尾)
In cnclusin, I firmly supprt the view that _______ (重申自己的观点或态度). I hpe that _______ (给出自己的建议或期待).
常用表达
写作方法指导
【开头句】
1.As fr it , different students have different thughts. Sme students stand by it, thers are against it. As far as I'm cncerned, I think study trip is gd fr students, and here are my reasns.
2. D yu agree that yur parents have a secnd child?Different students have different pinins abut it.
3. Last week, wehad a discussin abut the ht tpic “T change r nt”. I think different peple have different chices t deal with prblems.
【中间句】
1.As fr me, I'd lve t have a brther r sister as cmpany, s that I can share my happiness and srrw with him r her anytime.
2.There is n dubt that junk fd is delicius and attractive, but it surely des harm t ur bdy.
3.What's mre, d mre utdr activities. As lng as yu are busy with smething interesting, yu will mre prbablyget away frm junk fd.
【结尾句】
1.In a wrd, bth the cck and the hen are useful. It is wrng fr them t see their wn use instead f seeing thers' use.
2. If everynemakes a cntributin t building a green city, Ezhu will becme a better place t live in.
3. I'm sure a gd balance between learning and playing canmake a great cntributin t kids' grwth.
中考真题精讲
(2023·湖南株洲·统考中考真题)
学校英语角即将开展一次以“朋友”为主题的演讲活动,请你写一篇演讲稿参加活动,包括以下内容:
1.你最好的朋友是什么样的?
2.你的朋友曾给予过你什么?
3.你准备为你的朋友做什么?
词数90左右;可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;文中不能透露考生身份的任何信息。
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【答案】例文
What’s the meaning f a friend t yu? Maybe yu think that a friend is smene wh will listen t yu when yu’re sad. Maybe yu think that a friend is smene wh will give yu a gift n yur birthday. But t me, a friend is smene I can depend n and I lve.
When I was eight years ld, I met my best friend, Li Mei. Her persnality was different frm mine. She’s very active and brave. When I was sad, she wuld sit next t me and cmfrt me. When I was happy, she culd share my jy. What’s mre, she always encurages me. She tld me nt t give up when I met any difficulty. She advised me t have anther try if I wanted t give up halfway.
S far, we have been friends fr eight years. Althugh we were nt classmates anymre, I believe that we’ll still be gd friends frever. What’s mre, I will prepare a birthday party fr her t give her a surprise.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲稿;
②时态:时态综合使用“一般现在时”,“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求以“朋友”为主题,根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍朋友是什么;
第二步,介绍最好的朋友是什么样的以及朋友曾给予过你什么;
第三步,介绍准备为你的朋友做什么。
[亮点词汇]
①depend n依靠
②be different frm不同于
③give up放弃
[高分句型]
①She tld me nt t give up when I met any difficulty.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②She advised me t have anther try if I wanted t give up halfway.(if引导的条件状语从句)
(2023·山东枣庄·统考中考真题)
为了响应国家全民阅读的号召,你校将举办读书节。假如你是李华,请你以“My favurite bk”为主题,写一篇英语发言稿,在读书分享会中介绍自己最喜欢的一本书,
内容包括:
1.书名、书的类型和主要内容;
2.你喜欢这本书的理由。
注意:1.词数80—100(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Ladies and gentlemen,
I’m Li Hua. I’m very glad t share my favurite bk with yu.
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That’s all. Thank yu fr yur attentin.
【答案】例文
Ladies and gentlemen,
I’m Li Hua. I’m very glad t share my favurite bk with yu.
My favrite bk is Jurney t the West. It is ne f the Fur Great Classical Nvels in China. It was written by Wu Cheng’en, a great writer in ancient China. The stry tells us abut fur main characters. They are Tang Mnk, the Mnkey King , Piggie and Mnk Sha. They get ver many difficulties n the way t the West. Finally, they make it. The Mnkey King is my favrite character. He is s smart and brave that he can prtect his master and brthers well. He never gives up when he faces difficulties and challenges.
The bk is s interesting that I lse myself in it. It tells me that as lng as I never give up, I can achieve everything.
That’s all. Thank yu fr yur attentin.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为演讲稿;
②时态:主要时态是“一般现在时”;
③提示:本文主要是介绍自己最喜欢的一本书,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题。
第二步,介绍自己最喜欢的书的书名、书的类型以及主要内容;
第三步,介绍自己为什么喜欢这本书。
[亮点词汇]
①get ver difficulties克服困难
②n the way t在去往某地的路上
③give up放弃
[高分句型]
①He is s smart and brave that he can prtect his master and brthers well.(引导的结果状语从句)
②He never gives up when he faces difficulties and challenges.(when引导的时间状语从句)
(2022·湖北十堰·中考真题)
假设你叫李华,即将从初中毕业。请你根据下面表格中的信息给校长写一封信,谈谈你对学校的一些看法。
提示词:schlyard校园
要求:1.短文应涵盖上述所有内容,可适当发挥。
2.行文连贯,条理清楚,语句通顺,书写规范。
3.不得在文中出现学校名称和人名。
4.词数80-100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总数。
Dear Mr./Ms. Headmaster,
I am writing t shw my sincere gratitude t yu fr the prgress I have made in the past three years. _______
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Best wishes.
Sincerely yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mr./Ms. Headmaster,
I am writing t shw my sincere gratitude t yu fr the prgress I have made in the past three years. I am writing t tell yu sme things that have affected ur schl life.
There are many advantages in ur schl. We have excellent teachers and friendly classmates. Our schlyard is beautiful and big. But there are still sme prblems. First f all, we are faced with endless hmewrk every day. Sme students have t stay up very late t deal with it, which makes us have less rest time. Secndly, as we all knw, clrful ut-f-class activities are f great imprtance t ur healthy grwth, but we can hardly spare time t participate in them.
In my pinin, we shuld have mre free time t balance ur study and life. We shuld have mre clrful and meaningful activities.
Best wishes.
Sincerely yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇书信作文。要求根据提示内容,写信给校长谈谈学校的优点与不足,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文,时态用一般现在时。作文可分为四段,首尾两端已给出;第二段介绍学校的优点与不足;第三段给出建议。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
(2022·湖南怀化·中考真题)
国家提出将“劳动教育(labr educatin)”纳入中小学国家课程方案,请结合自身的劳动经历,谈谈你对劳动教育的看法。内容包括:
要求:
1. 文中请勿使用真实人名、校名和地名;
2. 包含以上表格内所有信息,可适当发挥;
3. 词数:80词左右;文章开头已给出,但不计入总词数。
It’s reprted that labr educatin will be included in the educatin f middle schls and primary schls in China. I think_________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】例文
It’s reprted that labr educatin will be included in the educatin f middle schls and primary schls in China. I think it’s necessary. Because it is gd fr ur health. We can relax frm the hard study by ding labr.
I usually d labr at hme such as ding the dishes, sweeping the flr and taking ut the rubbish. At schl I ften clean the classrm and water flwers. I can nt nly keep healthy, but als develp gd habits frm it.
As fr hw t run the curse in ur schl. I have sme ideas. The schl can ffer different kinds f labr classes t teach us hw t d the cleaning and grw plants. What’s mre, the schl can als hld cmpetitins abut the labr skills t see wh is the best. Such activities make ur schl life mre clrful and meaningful.
I am lking frward t taking the curse in the new term. I believe I will d well in it.
【解析】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“劳动教育”写一篇短文。
2.写作指导:本文采用一般现在时,人称以第一人称为主。分为三段式:第一段介绍劳动对我们的好处;第二段介绍自己在家里和在学校的劳动经历;最后一段提出对劳动教育课程的建议。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
(2022·四川广元·中考真题)
理想(ideal)是人生导航的灯塔,它指引我们成为对祖国和社会有用的人。近来,某英文报刊将举行以“如何做一名有理想的时代新人”为主题的征文活动。请你结合以下提示要点和自己的认识,写一篇英文稿件。
写作要点:
1. 你的理想是什么?
2. 为什么有这样的理想?(不少于两点理由)
3. 你打算怎样实现自己的理想?(不少于两点做法)
写作要求:
1. 文中须包含以上要点:
2. 文中不能提及本人的真实姓名、地名和校名:
3. 词数80左右,标题和开头语已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:ideal adj. & n. 理想的:理想
My Ideal
In the new times it’s very imprtant fr us t be a middle schl student with an ideal.
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【答案】
My Ideal
In the new times it’s very imprtant fr us t be a middle schl student with an ideal.
I wish t be an English teacher when I grw up. First, I like English. I want t use it ften in my daily life. Secndly, I like wrking with students and enjy being asked questins and answering them. Thirdly, I’m gd at English. Nw what I shuld d is t study hard and get high marks in English test, and try t practice speaking English as much as pssible. Only in this way can I realize my dream f being an English teacher ne day.
【解析】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文,根据写作要点提示,写一篇作文关于如何做一名有理想的时代新人。
2.写作指导:本文时态采用一般现在时行文;人称以第一人称为主。写作时从三个方面,先介绍自己的理想,其次介绍原因,最后介绍如何实现自己的理想。文章要保持语句通顺,无单词语法错误。
(2021·湖北中考真题)
“禾下乘凉”是我国“杂交水稻之父”袁隆平院士的梦想。他孜孜不倦地探究和实践,解决了人民的温饱问题。在物质充沛的今天,我们更应该珍惜粮食,节约资源,杜绝浪费。作为中学生,我们应该怎么做?近日,你班就此话题展开了热烈的讨论。请根据下面的提示,写一篇英语短文谈谈自己的看法。
参考词汇:resurce 资源;be particular abut fd 挑食; tap 水龙头
要点:
1. 就餐时,按需点餐,不挑食,光盘行动。
2. 节水、节电。如:随手关灯,关水龙头等。
3. 节约纸张。如:双面用纸等。
4. ……
要求:
1. 必须包含所给的全部要点及内容,可适当发挥。
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名。
3. 词数 80-100。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Recently, ur class had a heated discussin n hw t save resurces in ur daily life. Here are sme f my views.
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【答案】
Recently, ur class had a heated discussin n hw t save resurces in ur daily life. Here are sme f my views.
First f all, we shuld never rder mre fd than we can eat. Eat up everything in yur plate and dn’t be particular abut fd. Besides, we are expected t save water and electricity. Fr example, turn ff the light r water tap after using it. What’s mre, we are suggested t save every piece f paper and make full use f bth sides f it. Last but nt the least, lw-carbn life is als a gd chice such as taking a bus r walking t schl if pssible.
In a wrd, everyne can d smething t save resurces and make a difference.
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求以为珍惜粮食、节约资源、杜绝浪费主题,结合提示内容进行写作。注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时主要以第一人称来行文,时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段,第一段引出话题;第二段介绍作为中学生我们应该怎么做;第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
(2021·山东中考真题)
生活中, 我们常会遇到这样的情况:当有人向你提出请求时, 答应他(say “yes”), 违背 自己的意愿;拒绝他(say “n”), 又担心伤害感情, 左右为难。你是如何处理这种情况的? 结合一次自身经历, 谈谈你的经验教训。请先补全题目, 然后写一篇100词左右的短文。
要求:
1. 短文中不得出现考生姓名、学校及其他相关信息。
2 . 照抄试卷内容不得分。
I said “___________”
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【答案】
I said “n”
Last mnth, we had a math test. While I was wrking carefully, my friend Tny wanted t cpy my answers. Thugh it was difficult t refuse him, I said "n". This made him angry.
After the test, I explained the reasns t him. We shuld get what we want by wrking hard, nt by cheating. And als, getting gd grades this way desn't mean yu have gt the knwledge. I prmised t help him with his study. He was very thankful. Nw, he is ding better and better with my help.
I am happy with what I did. Saying "n" may be difficult but it can lead t a better slutin.
【详解】
1.题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应根据题目要求自身的经历,并讲述自己的感受。
2.写作指导:本文用第一人称来写作;时态采用一般过去时为主;讲述自己拒绝他人的经历叙述完整,条理清晰。
名校模拟题提升练
(2023·上海杨浦·统考三模)
随着校园里出现的流浪猫(stray cat) 越来越多,有同学提议要在学校建立一个“流浪猫小屋(stray cat hut)”,为这些小动物提供安全的进食、休息的场所。你是否同意这样的建议呢?请写一篇不少于60个词的短文,发表你的看法。
写作要求:
1)阐明你是否同意这个建议;
2)从“流浪猫”和“学生”这两个角度陈述理由;
3)写作内容中不得出现真实姓名与校名。
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There are mre and mre stray cats in ur schl nw. Sme students advise t build a stray cat hut t prvide fd and restrm fr them. In my pinin, I disagree with that.
Firstly, we had better send the stray cats t specific places, like animal shelters. Because they culd be better taken care f in such places. Secndly, stray cats may carry sme bacteria r germs, which may d harm t students’ health. Thirdly, sme students are allergic t cat hair, a stray cat hut may attract mre cats there, it prbably causes healthy prblem.
All in all, I dn’t think it is a gd idea.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文,围绕“流浪猫”展开;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点提示已经给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,并适当补充发挥,注意语句的通顺,使用正确的词汇和句型,使得行文连贯有逻辑。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍背景,表明自己的观点是同意抑或反对;
第二步,按照要点提示,从“流浪猫”和“学生”的角度展开理由,说明自己同意或者不同意的观点,如健康,环境,学习,爱心,品质等方面的理由展开;
第三步,结尾总结,强调自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①mre and mre越来越多
②advise t d sth建议做某事
③be allergic t sth对某事过敏
④all in all总的来说
[高分句型]
① Secndly, stray cats may carry sme bacteria r germs, which may d harm t students’ health.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②Firstly, we had better send the stray cats t specific places, like animal shelters.(had better d sth表示“最好做某事”)年份
地区
话题
命题形式
2023年
湖南株洲
以“朋友”为主题
开放作文
山东枣庄
以“My favurite bk”为主题
开放作文
2022年
湖北十堰
谈谈你对学校的一些看法
开放作文
湖南怀化
谈谈你对劳动教育的看法
开放作文
四川广元
以“如何做一名有理想的时代新人”为主题
开放作文
2021年
湖北
谈谈对“珍惜粮食,节约资源,杜绝浪费”的看法
开放作文
山东
I said “___________”
开放作文
优点
不足
优秀的老师
课外活动少
友好的同学
休息时间短
美丽的校园
……
你的建议……
1. 你对劳动教育的看法
be gd fr health;
relax frm the hard study…
2. 你自身的劳动经历及感受
at hme: d the dishes; sweep the flr…
at schl: clean the classrm; water flwers…
3. 你对劳动教育课程的建议
ffer different kinds f labr classes;
hld cmpetitins abut labr skills…
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